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theramdans

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2014-08-26T09:10:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 28, 2015 at 11:15:00 AM

Artist: nano x yuyoyuppe
Title: Beautiful ground
Tags: nanoir A_Mystery
BPM: 182
Filesize: 5302kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:

A Mystery's Insane (4.96 stars, 775 notes)
Easy (1.55 stars, 178 notes)
Hard (3.5 stars, 481 notes)
Insane (4.72 stars, 676 notes)
Normal (2.13 stars, 264 notes)

Download: nano x yuyoyuppe - Beautiful ground
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let's Go!

Difficulties:

Easy made by me

Normal made by me

Hard made by me

Insane made by me

A Mystery's Insane made by A Mystery

Bubbled by monstrata 2015-09-27
Qualified by BeatofIke 2015-09-29

Previous Icon(s) History

Bubbled by Gray Veyron 2015/04/08
Popped Bubble by Secretpipe 2015/04/10
Rebubbled by Secretpipe 2015/04/11
Qualified by HabiHolic 2015/04/11
DQ by Desperate-kun

Thanks to Shiro for timing check

Modders

wendao
No Dap
AlpacaCokelat
CelsiusLK
ByBy_ChAn
Arphimigon
- aLine -
Yales
Gray Veyron
Desperate-kun
LGV894
Garven
Xexxar
Ipas
Bearizm
Firmatorenio
Side
diraimur
monstrata

Testplayers (poke me if you are not here!)

KDN
Akali
Arphimigon
Tess
Fort
Asphyxia
Doomsday
FrostxE
guineaQ
Lolieasy
Xexxar
lit120
Lordgeezer
FrostXe
Sonnyc

Bonus \o/

ursa's Rain and Arcubin's Taiko - <- Click me!

Last edited by theramdans 2019-01-07T10:57:43+00:00, edited 92 times in total.

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2014-10-02T10:06:25+00:00

GD ctb diff done

*Link

Arcubin

689 posts

Joined September 2013

Arcubin 2014-10-21T14:23:11+00:00

Download my taiko diff

as requested

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2014-11-06T09:01:01+00:00

You did it much better this time \:D/

[General]

gw ga ngerti kenapa ada tags Remember your color. di tags, meanwhile lagu ini ga ada di album tsb.
pls note that I can't mod CtB neither Taiko

[Insane]

sayang sekali, Kiainya ga dimanfaatin sempurna, although this is hardest diff...

00:41:059 (4) - node terakhir pindahin ke 280,152
00:48:477 (1) - remove whistle, add clap (on tail)
01:03:972 (2,3,4) - pindahin ke 352,60 looks better
01:05:455 (4) - you can improve this slider so it'll be more blanket against (3)
01:50:125 (3) - remove Finish on tail, annoying
02:37:268 (3) - stack tail to 02:35:950 (1) - ? note kebelakangnya bisa ngikutin

[Hard]

Hard diff looked more neat than Insane

00:27:378 (1,2,3) - hitsoundnya weird disini
01:01:499 (7) - I better add soft-finish on head

[Normal]

all fine

[Easy]

entahlah, overall bagus, cuman... rasanya banyak note di tick merah di Kiai section

sorry modnya pendek, tapi emang overall udah bagus kok, need much improvement di Slider >:D

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2014-11-09T00:02:38+00:00

wendao wrote:
You did it much better this time \:D/

[General]
gw ga ngerti kenapa ada tags Remember your color. di tags, meanwhile lagu ini ga ada di album tsb.
pls note that I can't mod CtB neither Taiko
OH CRAP

[Insane]

sayang sekali, Kiainya ga dimanfaatin sempurna, although this is hardest diff... ~gw bingung dan kurang yakin sama kiainya ;w;
00:41:059 (4) - node terakhir pindahin ke 280,152 ~blanket better, tapi DSnya....
00:48:477 (1) - remove whistle, add clap (on tail) ~okay
01:03:972 (2,3,4) - pindahin ke 352,60 looks better moved somwehere else nearby
01:05:455 (4) - you can improve this slider so it'll be more blanket against (3) ~working on it
01:50:125 (3) - remove Finish on tail, annoying ~replaced by whistle
02:37:268 (3) - stack tail to 02:35:950 (1) - ? note kebelakangnya bisa ngikutin~nice

[Hard]

Hard diff looked more neat than Insane
00:27:378 (1,2,3) - hitsoundnya weird disini ~diseragamkan
01:01:499 (7) - I better add soft-finish on head~added

[Normal]

all finerly? lol

[Easy]

entahlah, overall bagus, cuman... rasanya banyak note di tick merah di Kiai section~karena gw sangat ngikutin lirik ngemap ini

sorry modnya pendek, tapi emang overall udah bagus kok, need much improvement di Slider >:D
~thanks :3

WENDAO SO PRO
thanks~

Tari

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-12-20T19:33:37+00:00

Will mod this, But ungrave it first!

theramdans

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-02-25T20:54:04+00:00

Tari wrote:
Will mod this, But ungrave it first!

Ungraved :p
Check first post

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2015-03-02T17:17:54+00:00

helped with timing and etc

SPOILER

11:58 theramdans: psst psst
11:59 No Dap: psst psst
11:59 No Dap: pssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst
11:59 theramdans: busy?
11:59 *No Dap lips explodes
11:59 No Dap: depends on ><
11:59 theramdans: rip hue
11:59 theramdans: just need a testplay
12:00 theramdans: http:/osu.ppy.sh/s/106737
12:00 theramdans: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/206737
12:01 No Dap: wow
12:01 No Dap: how do you make
12:01 No Dap: 4.23 
12:01 No Dap: with 182 bpm
12:01 theramdans: idk
12:02 theramdans: first submitted was 4.21
12:02 theramdans: remap v1 was 4.14
12:02 theramdans: remap v2 (now) is 4.23
12:02 *No Dap is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/510754 nano x yuyoyuppe - Beautiful ground [Insane]]
12:03 theramdans: it might be that my maps are just easy
12:03 theramdans: in general
12:06 No Dap: nice map
12:06 No Dap: but some of the spacings
12:06 No Dap: can be confusing :/
12:06 theramdans: maybe it is because the 0.9x sv part
12:06 No Dap: also
12:06 theramdans: yeah spacing, I have torubles with them
12:07 No Dap: offset is wrong
12:07 theramdans: rlly?
12:07 theramdans: I havent check the timing in a long tim
12:07 theramdans: so it might be wrong
12:08 theramdans: damn it is early when I check it just now
12:08 No Dap: nvm
12:08 No Dap: this is typical
12:08 No Dap: wierd song
12:08 No Dap: where bass are delayed
12:08 No Dap: and snares are fine
12:08 No Dap: lol
12:08 theramdans: or is it just me
12:09 theramdans: yeah the song is kinda weird ::<
12:09 theramdans: so it might be tricky to map it
12:09 No Dap: bbut
12:09 No Dap: try 999
12:09 No Dap: sounds much better
12:10 theramdans: -6 lol
12:10 theramdans: ah I used 2 different sv in kiai
12:11 No Dap: also
12:11 No Dap: 01:54:081 (1) - 
12:11 No Dap: this isnt really needed
12:11 No Dap: just confuses people
12:11 No Dap: like me
12:11 No Dap: lol
12:11 theramdans: but the kiai feels like separated into 2
12:11 theramdans: oh
12:11 No Dap: the NC
12:12 No Dap: also nc should start here 00:53:092 (4) - 
12:12 No Dap: 02:35:950 (1,2) - like this
12:13 theramdans: oh yeah that's right
12:14 No Dap: also
12:14 No Dap: this spacing
12:14 No Dap: 00:52:598 (2,3,4) - 
12:14 No Dap: makes it hard
12:14 No Dap: to read this SV change 00:53:257 (1) - 
12:15 No Dap: also you should stack these two 01:26:719 (6,1) - 
12:15 No Dap: 01:26:554 (5,6) - feels wierd
12:16 No Dap: 02:15:180 (1) - this nc also isn't needed
12:16 No Dap: thats about it iguess

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-03-06T08:19:22+00:00

ayyyyyy

[General]

idk seems neat. i'd suggest to use silenced sliderslide tho, since the sound of it kinda disturbs me a bit at the quiet part
also having the title appear here 00:11:884 - is nice

[Easy]

00:06:939 (2) - just personal preference. would be better if this slider is also curved a bit like the next slider http://puu.sh/gopCl/d941686233.jpg
00:08:917 (1,2) - usually this rhythm is not newbie-friendly lmao i suggest you to change the rhythm into simpler one, like 00:06:939 (2,3) - is nice http://puu.sh/goqaT/235b1279a7.jpg
01:09:246 (3) - clap?
01:43:862 (1) - finish at slider's head? to accent the new verse
01:51:774 (1,2,3,4) - i think this rhythm can be really hard for beginners, since you followed the vocal here 01:51:774 (1,2) - while these suddenly follow the drum 01:53:257 (3,4,1) - even though they're in the same verse, so yeah idk just pointing it out

[Normal]

00:03:642 (1) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can still hear the loud drum there
00:28:202 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since 00:28:202 (2) - follows the vocal and the you suddenly follow the drum after that. imo the rhythm change is too sudden http://puu.sh/govNC/124c23ed7a.jpg
00:43:367 (1) - add finish? idk seems cool /runs
00:57:048 (2) - add clap? i can hear the drums
00:57:213 (3) - ^ at reverse arrow
01:07:763 (2,3) - lmao lame nazi blanket mod you can do better than this. i'd move the slider to 480|316 http://puu.sh/gowaW/61fc552ec4.jpg
01:09:246 (5,1) - ^ move the slider up a bit http://puu.sh/gowgv/08d8240ba8.jpg
02:15:510 (1) - add soft-finish at slider's head?
02:33:642 (7) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can hear the drums which you accented by claps like 02:31:994 (2) -
02:45:180 (7) - add clap, same drums like 02:45:510 (1) -
02:55:070 (1) - whats with the normal-whistle here o.o

[Hard]

00:21:774 (1) - did you use the normal-clap at slider's head on purpose? idk it seems random
00:49:466 (3) - i'd add a finish at slider's tail because you added two finishes here 00:48:477 (1) -
00:52:928 - add a note here? it can make the rhythm flow better
01:01:334 (7,8) - more lame nazi blanket mod bcs im lame http://puu.sh/goywl/63eb34894d.jpg also i think you can improve the blanket here 00:58:862 (8,1) -
01:11:884 - add a note here. the rhythm currently is kinda idk derp because 01:11:059 (3,4,5) - follows the vocal and there's still the vocal here 01:11:884 -
01:22:598 (1) - does the normal-whistle at slider's head is also intentional? idk it seems out of place
02:41:059 - add a note here? makes the rhythm flow better
02:44:521 - ^ i really suggest this one, because this one has a strong beat

[Insane]

00:03:807 - this part here has a strong beat so it's kinda a pity not to make this clickable ):
00:30:510 (2,3) - rhythm is kinda boring for insane. i suggest to add something clickable between them. but that'll require some huge change so yeah idk up to you http://puu.sh/gozLP/fa06b42e7f.jpg http://puu.sh/gozY3/8790d4ffb4.jpg
01:28:037 (1) - only suggestion. ctrl+< this slider makes the flow better. but you have to adjust the next pattern tho. i relocated 01:28:532 (2) - and ctrl+G 01:28:697 (3) - so the jump wont be really far after the change http://puu.sh/goAkU/52bb98e850.jpg
01:36:609 (3,4,1,2,3) - dayummmmmmmmm
01:43:202 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finishes here? idk it fits the song
02:30:345 (2,3) - i think you can emphasize this part by adding an anti-jump stack like this http://puu.sh/goAxI/870b17ba66.jpg but you have to relocate the sliders afterwards
02:40:812 - add a note here to make triplet? kinda fits the song http://puu.sh/goADd/94e9700783.jpg
02:56:224 (6) - i think soft-finish at slider's head is better than clap. to balance the finishes here 02:55:070 - 02:54:081 (1) -

ghgghhgghghghghgh lame mod im sorry ;w; the flow is already neat so idk what to mod aside from small things lmao sorry if its not really helpful

anyway goodluck kak!!

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-03-07T11:14:57+00:00

tfw when you lose mods post because you accidently direct to some websites to check something on mods post tab

[General]
looks fine for me

[Insane]

00:03:477 (5,1) - It think unstack and then spacing them like this 00:01:005 (1,2) - play a bit better here
00:34:301 (6) - Try this ? maybe it make the flow here 00:34:136 (5,6,7) - better imo
SPOILER
00:40:565 (3,4) - This overlap can be a bit better imo , try move (3)'s tail a little bit there
SPOILER
00:42:708 (2,4) - These finish sound weird imo
00:45:840 (1,2) - looks weird imo , why not blanket (1)'s tail with (2)'s curve , I think it okay to make jumps here
SPOILER
01:28:037 (1,2) - uhh..I know you try to emphasis (2) here but upward jumps is not a great idea here imo , when it come to feeling I think downward jumps have a lots of impact more than upward jumps when playing it (Example:01:30:675 (1,2) - ) but it's up to you to rework jumps here or not
01:36:939 (4) - Should curve this to make the pattern here 01:35:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - consistent (straight > curve > straight > curve > ...)
01:43:367 (2,3) - Theses finish sound weird imo
01:47:488 (3,4,1) - Should make spacing a bit consistent here so it make the feeling when playing this a bit better like 02:40:070 (3,4,1) - imo , make spacing inconsistent with the straight pattern like this here really feel a bit awkward imo
02:37:268 (3,5) - Aesthetic- stack can be improved

[Hard]

00:01:499 - Why you skip most of 1/2 beat in the beginning part ? I think it make the flow between each 1/1 notes a bit awkward there so it sound better to map those 1/2 beat imo
00:09:246 (3,4) - Make spacing consistent with 00:08:917 (1,2,3) - ?
00:32:488 (7) - This note feel a bit redundant , I'd delete this and give player a small break here
00:33:147 (3,4) - I'd focus on vocal here since it sound a bit better imo
SPOILER
00:53:092 (6,1) - This jumps is a bit too sudden for hard imo so I suggest you lower spacing a bit here
00:57:213 (3,4,5) - Why use 1.1x ds here? should make the ds here consistent with previous notes (1.2x ds)

[Normal]

01:30:675 (1,2,3) - Try this ?
SPOILER

[Easy]

00:09:741 (2,3) - This sound a bit better imo
SPOILER
01:27:048 (2) - S:C1 Clap at tail ?
02:46:829 - Clap ?
02:55:070 (1) - Finish instead?
idk but some hitsound here is a bit different from normal , hard , insane

Good luck

ื

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-07T16:08:13+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
ayyyyyy

[General]

idk seems neat. i'd suggest to use silenced sliderslide tho, since the sound of it kinda disturbs me a bit at the quiet part ~I never use anything that sounds inaudible
also having the title appear here 00:11:884 - is nice ~iirc only BN/QAT can adjust this
[Easy]

00:06:939 (2) - just personal preference. would be better if this slider is also curved a bit like the next slider http://puu.sh/gopCl/d941686233.jpg ~curved more
00:08:917 (1,2) - usually this rhythm is not newbie-friendly lmao i suggest you to change the rhythm into simpler one, like 00:06:939 (2,3) - is nice http://puu.sh/goqaT/235b1279a7.jpg ~simplified
01:09:246 (3) - clap? ~ok
01:43:862 (1) - finish at slider's head? to accent the new verse ~missed this one
01:51:774 (1,2,3,4) - i think this rhythm can be really hard for beginners, since you followed the vocal here 01:51:774 (1,2) - while these suddenly follow the drum 01:53:257 (3,4,1) - even though they're in the same verse, so yeah idk just pointing it out ~followed the vocal more
[Normal]

00:03:642 (1) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can still hear the loud drum there ~My ear was high
00:28:202 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since 00:28:202 (2) - follows the vocal and the you suddenly follow the drum after that. imo the rhythm change is too sudden http://puu.sh/govNC/124c23ed7a.jpg ~fixed my way
00:43:367 (1) - add finish? idk seems cool /runs ~My ear was high again ;w;
00:57:048 (2) - add clap? i can hear the drums ~^
00:57:213 (3) - ^ at reverse arrow ~^
01:07:763 (2,3) - lmao lame nazi blanket mod you can do better than this. i'd move the slider to 480|316 http://puu.sh/gowaW/61fc552ec4.jpg ~gud
02:15:510 (1) - add soft-finish at slider's head? ~normal-finish is cooler imo
02:33:642 (7) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can hear the drums which you accented by claps like 02:31:994 (2) - ~My ear was high
02:45:180 (7) - add clap, same drums like 02:45:510 (1) - ~^
02:55:070 (1) - whats with the normal-whistle here o.o ~add a finish instead
[Hard]

00:21:774 (1) - did you use the normal-clap at slider's head on purpose? idk it seems random ~Yes it is on purpose, maybe now it is your ear that is high lol
00:49:466 (3) - i'd add a finish at slider's tail because you added two finishes here 00:48:477 (1) - ~added
00:52:928 - add a note here? it can make the rhythm flow better ~00:52:763 - is now a 1/2 slider instead
01:01:334 (7,8) - more lame nazi blanket mod bcs im lame http://puu.sh/goywl/63eb34894d.jpg ~fuk, so thin also i think you can improve the blanket here 00:58:862 (8,1) - ~ I decided not to make these a blanket
01:11:884 - add a note here. the rhythm currently is kinda idk derp because 01:11:059 (3,4,5) - follows the vocal and there's still the vocal here 01:11:884 - ~I missed that '"-ful"
01:22:598 (1) - does the normal-whistle at slider's head is also intentional? idk it seems out of place ~My bad, I was exaggerating
02:41:059 - add a note here? makes the rhythm flow better ~Nah , I will keep this to maintain the pre and post 1/4 triplet a pure 1 beat of delay
02:44:521 - ^ i really suggest this one, because this one has a strong beat ~added note and rearranged the notes around there myself
[Insane]

00:03:807 - this part here has a strong beat so it's kinda a pity not to make this clickable ): ~Fixed
00:30:510 (2,3) - rhythm is kinda boring for insane. i suggest to add something clickable between them. but that'll require some huge change so yeah idk up to you http://puu.sh/gozLP/fa06b42e7f.jpg http://puu.sh/gozY3/8790d4ffb4.jpg ~I made more 1/2 notes instead
01:28:037 (1) - only suggestion. ctrl+< this slider makes the flow better. but you have to adjust the next pattern tho. i relocated 01:28:532 (2) - and ctrl+G 01:28:697 (3) - so the jump wont be really far after the change http://puu.sh/goAkU/52bb98e850.jpg ~kewl
01:36:609 (3,4,1,2,3) - dayummmmmmmmm ~All the vocals here are just 1/2 so I dont know what to do more hue
01:43:202 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finishes here? idk it fits the song ~I think the current one is ok
02:30:345 (2,3) - i think you can emphasize this part by adding an anti-jump stack like this http://puu.sh/goAxI/870b17ba66.jpg but you have to relocate the sliders afterwards ~great
02:40:812 - add a note here to make triplet? kinda fits the song http://puu.sh/goADd/94e9700783.jpg ~ok
02:56:224 (6) - i think soft-finish at slider's head is better than clap. to balance the finishes here 02:55:070 - 02:54:081 (1) - ~used normal finish instead, idk it just sounds more epic

ghgghhgghghghghgh lame mod im sorry ;w; the flow is already neat so idk what to mod aside from small things lmao sorry if its not really helpful

anyway goodluck kak!! ~Nah you so pro o3o

Thanks alpaca!!

CelsiusLK wrote:
tfw when you lose mods post because you accidently direct to some websites to check something on mods post tab

[General]
looks fine for me

[Insane]
00:03:477 (5,1) - It think unstack and then spacing them like this 00:01:005 (1,2) - play a bit better here ~Fixed flow and stack my own way
00:34:301 (6) - Try this ? maybe it make the flow here 00:34:136 (5,6,7) - better imo
SPOILER
~cool
00:40:565 (3,4) - This overlap can be a bit better imo , try move (3)'s tail a little bit there
SPOILER
I tried, lol
00:42:708 (2,4) - These finish sound weird imo ~Nah, Im just making my own sounds
00:45:840 (1,2) - looks weird imo , why not blanket (1)'s tail with (2)'s curve , I think it okay to make jumps here
SPOILER
~Blanket incoming
01:28:037 (1,2) - uhh..I know you try to emphasis (2) here but upward jumps is not a great idea here imo , when it come to feeling I think downward jumps have a lots of impact more than upward jumps when playing it (Example:01:30:675 (1,2) - ) but it's up to you to rework jumps here or not ~Fixed someway
01:36:939 (4) - Should curve this to make the pattern here 01:35:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - consistent (straight > curve > straight > curve > ...) ~done
01:43:367 (2,3) - Theses finish sound weird imo ~ ))
01:47:488 (3,4,1) - Should make spacing a bit consistent here so it make the feeling when playing this a bit better like 02:40:070 (3,4,1) - imo , make spacing inconsistent with the straight pattern like this here really feel a bit awkward imo ~done
02:37:268 (3,5) - Aesthetic- stack can be improved ~Very Minor indeed
[Hard]
00:01:499 - Why you skip most of 1/2 beat in the beginning part ? I think it make the flow between each 1/1 notes a bit awkward there so it sound better to map those 1/2 beat imo I agree, but those 1/2s are guitar sounds, while I am following the drum percussion here, which is all 1/1
00:09:246 (3,4) - Make spacing consistent with 00:08:917 (1,2,3) - ? ~ fixed, rearranged
00:32:488 (7) - This note feel a bit redundant , I'd delete this and give player a small break here ~There is the vocal line here,cant ignore that
00:33:147 (3,4) - I'd focus on vocal here since it sound a bit better imo
SPOILER
~My bad
00:53:092 (6,1) - This jumps is a bit too sudden for hard imo so I suggest you lower spacing a bit here ~Fixed already
00:57:213 (3,4,5) - Why use 1.1x ds here? should make the ds here consistent with previous notes (1.2x ds) ~I have no idea why this happens
[Normal]
01:30:675 (1,2,3) - Try this ?
SPOILER
~Looks good!

[Easy]
00:09:741 (2,3) - This sound a bit better imo
SPOILER
I found this too hard and too confusing
01:27:048 (2) - S:C1 Clap at tail ? ~Missed it
02:46:829 - Clap ? ~ ok
02:55:070 (1) - Finish instead? ~yes
idk but some hitsound here is a bit different from normal , hard , insane
Good luck
ื

Thanks :O

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-03-07T18:51:15+00:00

We made an IRC not big deal cuz the mapper wasn't so ''online'' D:

IRC log

19:02 ByBy_ChAn: hey
19:02 theramdans: hmm?
19:02 ByBy_ChAn: IRC ?
19:02 *ByBy_ChAn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/495782 nano x yuyoyuppe - Beautiful ground]
19:03 theramdans: ahh
19:03 theramdans: ok
19:10 ByBy_ChAn: at general why you not add at tags you know rock ? I feel this song sounds like a rock music
19:10 theramdans: I think genre is not in the tag
19:10 theramdans: it has its own place, right?
19:11 ByBy_ChAn: well it is 
19:11 ByBy_ChAn: look at the other maps
19:11 ByBy_ChAn: I saw some maps which have at tags drum and bass and also take a look at Saut's map
19:21 ByBy_ChAn: ahh ello ?
19:29 theramdans: sorry :c
19:29 ByBy_ChAn: np
19:29 theramdans: I was still arranging my map
19:29 ByBy_ChAn: ahh yea
19:29 ByBy_ChAn: np ~
19:48 ByBy_ChAn: normal-hitclap and soft-hitclap have 2 ms delay : https://puu.sh/gqpfh/9e72809958.png
19:49 theramdans: fix it for me ? 8)
19:49 ByBy_ChAn: yea
19:49 ByBy_ChAn: I'll post on thread the fixed hitsounds
19:50 theramdans: neat!
19:50 ByBy_ChAn: ok
19:50 ByBy_ChAn: easy
19:53 ByBy_ChAn: 00:31:334 (2)- Why you added finish on slider's head ? There's no cymbal sound , there's a increase of the beat so remove finish and keep whistle
19:56 theramdans: it might be me just doing something out of place again
19:56 theramdans: lemme check lol
19:57 theramdans: hey there is cymbal sound there
19:57 theramdans: *listen
19:57 ByBy_ChAn: I listened already lol
19:57 ByBy_ChAn: is a increase of the beat
19:58 theramdans: what do you mean "increas of the beat"
19:58 theramdans: it is definitely a cymbal sound there
19:58 ByBy_ChAn: listen with attention
19:58 ByBy_ChAn: pls
19:58 theramdans: whistle just wont cover it
19:59 ByBy_ChAn: meeh if this is your opinion ok
19:59 theramdans: it is loud enough to notice it
19:59 ByBy_ChAn: ok

In IRC the mapper decided to cut the delays from hitsounds

Here are the undelayed hitsounds : soft-hitclap normal-hitclap

Good Luck ~

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-08T08:41:50+00:00

Thanks for hitsoound, ByBy!
Updated

meii18

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Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-03-09T15:46:24+00:00

and some suggestions in hard

Hard

00:21:774(1)- I think a 1/1 slider doesn't fit better the rhythm D: I think 2 notes and a 1/2 slider will works perfectly with the instruments : http://puu.sh/gt6jC/cd6c7660a2.jpg
00:27:873(2)- ~ 00:32:488(7)- Imo here you begin to use claps but I feel there's only guitar.Ty to use in this part whistle for consistency with 00:22:268(2)- ~ 00:27:378(1)- since there's no drums
00:43:367(1)- Why you added here a spinner ? I think it doesn't fit well the vocal D: The better way is to try maybe this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg it will follow the vocal and guitar much better and also with the spinner you ignored the beat from 00:44:191()- to 00:44:686()- but before that , you should remove the note from 00:43:202()-
00:45:840(2,3)- Here just nazi the blanket looks weird to me D: Look at this picture : http://puu.sh/gt8s0/fa2d467aa3.jpg I moved (3)- some grids down and then I curved it
00:46:829(4)- This slider's tail makes an bad overlap with 00:47:653(6)- and also is visible in gameplay.Try to move it to 329|214 to avoid the overlap.It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gt8Hl/e4ca33971d.jpg after 00:46:334(3)- was curved
00:54:906(3,5)- Why you don't want to make the sliders smoother for a smoother flow ? The cursor movement will be much better
01:39:906()- Why you not add a note here ? I clearly hear the vocal and the guitar here and it's so sad to ignore here the beat ;w;
01:44:026(1)- As I said 00:43:367(1)- it will be much better if you try this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg to not ignore the vocal and guitar from 01:44:851()- to 01:45:345()- but you should remove the repeat from 01:43:202(7)- and adding a note instead
01:52:928(4)- I think it's better to make this slider smoother for a smoother flow for a better cursor movement

That's all for now

Good Luck ~

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-09T19:02:06+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
and some suggestions in hard

Hard
00:21:774(1)- I think a 1/1 slider doesn't fit better the rhythm D: I think 2 notes and a 1/2 slider will works perfectly with the instruments : http://puu.sh/gt6jC/cd6c7660a2.jpg ~fixed my own way, I just realised something
00:27:873(2)- ~ 00:32:488(7)- Imo here you begin to use claps but I feel there's only guitar.Ty to use in this part whistle for consistency with 00:22:268(2)- ~ 00:27:378(1)- since there's no drums ~no drums? really? listen here 00:28:367 - , here 00:29:521 - , 00:29:851 - , here 00:30:345 - , here 00:31:005, here 00:31:664 - , here 00:32:323 - , they are all drum sounds
00:43:367(1)- Why you added here a spinner ? I think it doesn't fit well the vocal D: The better way is to try maybe this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg it will follow the vocal and guitar much better and also with the spinner you ignored the beat from 00:44:191()- to 00:44:686()- but before that , you should remove the note from 00:43:202()- ~why? Because it follows the vocal very well,a long held vocal like that is good to be covered by a spinner, and I want a spinner there-note that I am a very fanatic to vocal-following
00:45:840(2,3)- Here just nazi the blanket looks weird to me D: Look at this picture : http://puu.sh/gt8s0/fa2d467aa3.jpg I moved (3)- some grids down and then I curved it ~asdfasdf it is pretty pretty and pretty thin OTL
00:46:829(4)- This slider's tail makes a bad overlap with 00:47:653(6)- and also is visible in gameplay.Try to move it to 329|214 to avoid the overlap.It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gt8Hl/e4ca33971d.jpg after 00:46:334(3)- was curved ~I tried fixing it lol
00:54:906(3,5)- Why you don't want to make the sliders smoother for a smoother flow ? The cursor movement will be much better ~I like these sliders, so I am keeping it
01:39:906()- Why you not add a note here ? I clearly hear the vocal and the guitar here and it's so sad to ignore here the beat ;w; I tried listening it with 50% speed, the vocal disappears here 01:39:906 - and then re-appears here 01:40:070 - ,anyway I added them
01:44:026(1)- As I said 00:43:367(1)- it will be much better if you try this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg to not ignore the vocal and guitar from 01:44:851()- to 01:45:345()- but you should remove the repeat from 01:43:202(7)- and adding a note instead ~same reason with the previous
01:52:928(4)- I think it's better to make this slider smoother for a smoother flow for a better cursor movement ~same reason with the previous,I like this kind of sliders personally

That's all for now

Good Luck ~

Thanks, sorry if this feels unsatisfactory

Arphimigon

1,651 posts

Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2015-03-13T10:39:48+00:00

Overall design is quite nice. Not really any awkward -visible- off putting points.
(warning #nazimod (not in an offensive way k))

[Insane]
00:08:257 (3,4) - Being a person who extremely hard maps, this point really doesn't make and sense flow-wise.
00:23:422 (5) - Middle point feels too far from the longer Combo 3 slider.
00:23:752 (6) - (4) - To x:377 y:15 for nicer blanket?
00:28:532 (4) - Your choice here, but the end of this slider doesn't look like a nice curve. Its understandable if you want to keep it like that. (middle node needs to be higher some points for a normal curve)
00:41:059 (4) - Not a perfect blanket again (;-;)

Non- fix and Fix

to

00:53:917 (2) - Not equal first and second halves. I'm sure this has been pointed out loads of times...

Slider before and after

to

00:45:180 (3,4,1) - I can see the line made here, but I think making 00:45:840 (1) - a couple of pixels lower suits the flow of the "curve".
01:00:840 (7) - Another not same first and second half

Before and after

to http://puu.sh/gykVd/4cbae8e5ec.jpg

01:08:092 (1) - Move whole curve to x:295 y:97 for a better blanket? Old one wasn't nice
01:10:235 (3) - Not same halves, but it shouldn't matter here. Just a point to bring up.

Admittedly, the second half of the map was really hard to mod since I couldn't
02:12:708 (1) - Second half has a weird curve compared to start. Not a major thing either.
(02:18:972 (3,4,5,1) - I'm not sure if I like playing these anti-jumps.)
02:47:158 (1) - Halves not equal again.

Equality

to

Also that required tweaks of the curve nodes more.

02:53:092 (3,4,5) - I personally don't like the way these flow together. I would put 02:53:092 (3) - further down and rotate it up to 02:53:422 (4) - so it can curve nicely to the next slider.

[Hard]
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - DS is close, but the difference in the side notes is still "visible", atleast for me, in play.
00:07:433 (3,4,5) - Curve more if possible? Notes and slider start feel too straight.
00:39:081 (3) - Halves aren't equal

Old vs new

to http://puu.sh/gylp6/a032a06560.jpg

00:41:059 (2) - Gets too close to the previous slider at the end, up the curve a little?
00:43:202 (3) - I would prefer to see this in a straight line from the last slider (x:238 y:145 worked for me)
01:33:312 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket

Blanket

http://puu.sh/gylvc/b06e94ebc2.jpg to http://puu.sh/gylx9/d1a1d8bc6e.jpg

02:10:895 (4,5) - I would give a reasonable change, but I can't. All I can say is this bit seems random compared to the maps (really nice) structure.
02:25:235 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this note curve please!

Reference if you want

to

02:48:807 (4) - This slider is ugly compared to any other version you made of it, and it doesn't blanket the previous note. Fix please!

I can't mod normals/easies ;-;
Hope this gets ranked, it's really neat and structured well.

#kindnessofyourheartmodding2k15

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-13T12:09:57+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
Overall design is quite nice. Not really any awkward -visible- off putting points.
(warning #nazimod (not in an offensive way k))

[Insane]
00:08:257 (3,4) - Being a person who extremely hard maps, this point really doesn't make and sense flow-wise. ~moved somewhere else
00:23:422 (5) - Middle point feels too far from the longer Combo 3 slider. ~fixed somehow
00:23:752 (6) - (4) - To x:377 y:15 for nicer blanket? ~yeah
00:28:532 (4) - Your choice here, but the end of this slider doesn't look like a nice curve. Its understandable if you want to keep it like that. (middle node needs to be higher some points for a normal curve) ~make the curve better
00:41:059 (4) - Not a perfect blanket again (;-;) It's pretty thin, looks fine personally
Non- fix and Fix
to
00:53:917 (2) - Not equal first and second halves. I'm sure this has been pointed out loads of times... ~this is the first time I was told to fix this, I tried anyway
Slider before and after
to
00:45:180 (3,4,1) - I can see the line made here, but I think making 00:45:840 (1) - a couple of pixels lower suits the flow of the "curve". ~moved 7 pixels down
01:00:840 (7) - Another not same first and second half ~I tried lol
Before and after
to http://puu.sh/gykVd/4cbae8e5ec.jpg
01:08:092 (1) - Move whole curve to x:295 y:97 for a better blanket? Old one wasn't nice ~295 | 98 you mean? lol
01:10:235 (3) - Not same halves, but it shouldn't matter here. Just a point to bring up.

Admittedly, the second half of the map was really hard to mod since I couldn't
02:12:708 (1) - Second half has a weird curve compared to start. Not a major thing either. ~fixed a little
(02:18:972 (3,4,5,1) - I'm not sure if I like playing these anti-jumps.) ~made 3-4-5 a triangle
02:47:158 (1) - Halves not equal again. ~yeah I realised the first half is more linear than the second one
Equality
to Also that required tweaks of the curve nodes more.
02:53:092 (3,4,5) - I personally don't like the way these flow together. I would put 02:53:092 (3) - further down and rotate it up to 02:53:422 (4) - so it can curve nicely to the next slider. ~put 3 further down

[Hard]
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - DS is close, but the difference in the side notes is still "visible", atleast for me, in play. ~upscaled them 3 a bit
00:07:433 (3,4,5) - Curve more if possible? Notes and slider start feel too straight. ~yeah right
00:39:081 (3) - Halves aren't equal ~I tried fixing it
Old vs new
to http://puu.sh/gylp6/a032a06560.jpg
00:41:059 (2) - Gets too close to the previous slider at the end, up the curve a little? ~ok
00:43:202 (3) - I would prefer to see this in a straight line from the last slider (x:238 y:145 worked for me) ~cool
01:33:312 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket ~perfected
Blanket
http://puu.sh/gylvc/b06e94ebc2.jpg to http://puu.sh/gylx9/d1a1d8bc6e.jpg
02:10:895 (4,5) - I would give a reasonable change, but I can't. All I can say is this bit seems random compared to the maps (really nice) structure. ~random??? really? This follows the guitar melody man
02:25:235 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this note curve please! ~improved a bit, I guess
Reference if you want
to
02:48:807 (4) - This slider is ugly compared to any other version you made of it, and it doesn't blanket the previous note. Fix please! ~changed patterns and flows

I can't mod normals/easies ;-; please, learn to ;w;
Hope this gets ranked, it's really neat and structured well. ~I hope so

#kindnessofyourheartmodding2k15

Thanks for your nazi (even more nazi than mine) mod

Frim4503

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Joined July 2013

Frim4503 2015-03-24T00:58:47+00:00

ga bisa modding std

bantu star aja

semoga cpt rank (y)

- aLine -

- aLine - 2015-03-28T09:02:10+00:00

Halo.. ＼(＾▽＾*)
I think you requesting me to mod this before ? lol
Noob mod , i hope this helping a bit

[General]

I think Insane is too hard , can you reduce the star a bit? 4,42★ - 3,21★
add tag : Vocaloid (you can add tag character name in BG too )

[Easy]

00:51:114 (1,2) - very confusing here , i keep get 100 when i test play this.
try this
01:49:136 (1) - tried following 01:46:499 (1) - ( sound better )
try this
01:52:598 (2,3) - I think it's too hard for newbie like me .. can you change to single not ? not a slider. It's still following vocal
02:20:125 (3,1) - more blanked ?
02:34:136 - 02:35:867 - I prefer to add spinner than a break. Same as other difficult ..
all good! ♥

[Hit Sound]

00:30:015 (1) - whistle (tail) additional to 'drum'
01:11:224 (3) - missing clap (tail) - Check 'Normal' difficult
all good! ♥

[Normal]

01:06:939 (1) - fix this slider ? more curve I think ..
01:11:884 (5,1) - changing DS? why?
01:51:444 (5) - 272 , 104
01:53:752 (1) - 256 , 39
02:17:653 (3,1) - blanked
02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:867 - ?
02:44:356 (6) - New Combo here , delete New Combo : 02:45:510 (1)

[Hit Sound]

01:28:532 (2) - change to whistle? (tail)
all good! ♥

[Hard]

00:46:829 (4) - more space here? I think : 340 , 199
00:48:312 (8,1) - blanked
00:53:257 (7) - I prefer to give a jump here .. maybe rotate 40°
00:56:224 (1) - remove New Combo here , you can start New Combo : 00:56:719 (2)
01:31:829 (1) - remove New Combo?
01:43:120 (6) - remove maybe .. overmapped here
02:23:752 (2) - 109 , 353
02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:290
02:44:521 (6,1) - swap New Combo?

[Hit Sound]

01:11:884 (6) - clap
all good! ♥

[Insane]

00:08:917 (1) - 351 , 176
00:09:906 (6,1) - swap New Combo?
00:39:741 (6) - fix this slider? more curve maybe ..
try this
00:49:961 (4) - New Combo?
00:50:125 (5) - I found a better flow on this slider ..
click!
00:52:268 (1) - remove New Combo?
02:12:708 (1) - fix this slider? more curve maybe ..
02:32:818 (6,1) - swap New Combo?
02:38:092 (5) - New Combo?
02:43:037 (4) - New Combo?

[Hit Sound]

all good! ♥

Nice All! Good Luck senpai theramdans ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ♥

theramdans

1,251 posts

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-28T14:49:09+00:00

- aLine - wrote:
Halo.. ＼(＾▽＾*)
I think you requesting me to mod this before ? lol
Noob mod , i hope this helping a bit

[General]
I think Insane is too hard , can you reduce the star a bit? 4,42★ - 3,21★ ~no, the gap is fine. Even the insane is 95% 1/2 spam with long sliders and only a few of 1/4s
add tag : Vocaloid (you can add tag character name in BG too )
~dude this is not even close to a thing named vocaloid. This song is original work from the both artist (or an utaite x composer collab work). And the bg itself is only a fanart of nano
[Easy]
00:51:114 (1,2) - very confusing here , i keep get 100 when i test play this. ~it follows the drums after the vocal which is not a clickable note
try this
01:49:136 (1) - tried following 01:46:499 (1) - ( sound better )
try this
~which notes are you pointing out again??
01:52:598 (2,3) - I think it's too hard for newbie like me .. can you change to single not ? not a slider. It's still following vocal ~do this and ignore the note at 01:52:763 - ?? no. Adding circle at this tick while the previous is circle? no - no 1/2 circle on easy for me,so I am keeping this
02:20:125 (3,1) - more blanked ? ~fixed
02:34:136 - 02:35:867 - I prefer to add spinner than a break. Same as other difficult ..~added
all good! ♥
[Hit Sound]
00:30:015 (1) - whistle (tail) additional to 'drum' added
01:11:224 (3) - missing clap (tail) - Check 'Normal' difficult ~I made the normal one with no sound instead. Actually , there is no instruments audible here so I leave it empty
all good! ♥
[Normal]
01:06:939 (1) - fix this slider ? more curve I think ..~tweaked a bit
01:11:884 (5,1) - changing DS? why? prev 1.00 next 1.01 - it didnt change
01:51:444 (5) - 272 , 104 ~why?
01:53:752 (1) - 256 , 39 ^
02:17:653 (3,1) - blanked It's fine
02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:867 - ? no, not enough recovery time, instead I ended it at 02:35:290 - for consistency with easy diff
02:44:356 (6) - New Combo here , delete New Combo : 02:45:510 (1)
ok
[Hit Sound]
01:28:532 (2) - change to whistle? (tail) ok
all good! ♥
[Hard]
00:46:829 (4) - more space here? I think : 340 , 199 ~ok
00:48:312 (8,1) - blanked ~fixed
00:53:257 (7) - I prefer to give a jump here .. maybe rotate 40° ~this was a jump before, but I think about it again and a 'stop' like this is more fitting
00:56:224 (1) - remove New Combo here , you can start New Combo : 00:56:719 (2) "KIM-iga kieru...." this verse and how the vocal sounds is perfect for NC
01:31:829 (1) - remove New Combo? ~listen to the lyrics, it is the perfect tick to add NC
01:43:120 (6) - remove maybe .. overmapped here ~ listen here 01:43:120 - carefully with 25% playback. The 1/4 drum roll/kick bass is audible, I dont even overmap or anything I just follow what I heard
02:23:752 (2) - 109 , 353 ~why?
02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:290 ok
02:44:521 (6,1) - swap New Combo?~ok
[Hit Sound]
01:11:884 (6) - clap ~no, same reason with easy
all good! ♥
[Insane]
00:08:917 (1) - 351 , 176 ~no, why anyway? you didnt explain
00:09:906 (6,1) - swap New Combo? ~Ok
00:39:741 (6) - fix this slider? more curve maybe ..~ It is curvy already
try this
00:49:961 (4) - New Combo? ~no, the right one is the next (1) which is alreeady NC'd
00:50:125 (5) - I found a better flow on this slider .. ~added
click!
00:52:268 (1) - remove New Combo? ~no, listen to the slight finish sound in the BGM and the vocal obviously
02:12:708 (1) - fix this slider? more curve maybe .. ~it is curvy already, and it has 2 lol
02:32:818 (6,1) - swap New Combo? ~no, "BEAU-tiful..." - listen to this phrase
02:38:092 (5) - New Combo? ~no, the right one is the next (1), which is already NC'd
02:43:037 (4) - New Combo? no
[Hit Sound]
all good! ♥
Nice All! Good Luck senpai theramdans ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ♥

Thanks
sorry if this feels unsatisfactory

Yales

827 posts

Joined February 2013

Yales 2015-03-31T00:03:41+00:00

o/
From my queue.
Thanks to post a detailed reply about what and if possible why you didn't change something.

[Easy]

00:37:928 (1) - I would reduce the slider to be a 1/1... It really doesn't sound really catchy right now.
00:40:565 (1) - ^
00:52:598 (2) - Same here, I would place it this way on the timeline, in a way that it feels catchy. http://puu.sh/gVLjz/06d14cd5e4.jpg
01:02:983 (3) - Might look better if you place the last point around x464 y88 to straighten up a bit.
01:05:620 (2) - Add a clap on the beginning ?
01:08:257 (2) - ^
01:12:378 (1) - It should finish on the next white tick.
01:52:598 (2) - Honnestly, I really don't like it in an Easy diff. It's a hard technique for an insane diff, not to mention that you start it on a red tick which might feel a bit akward to play. You could, maybe, add a reverse on 01:51:774 (1) -
02:34:136 (1) - Extend it until 02:35:950 ? 2/1 is allowed.
02:54:411 (4,1) - Just a suggestion, but why wouldn't you a pattern like this http://puu.sh/gVMiO/1d26bc495e.jpg to improve the flow a bit?

Nice diff.

[Normal]

00:39:411 (3) - You could make a blanket with 00:38:422 (2) - to make it look nicer
00:52:268 (4) - Ctrl+h? There's a real problem of flow between this slider and this one 00:53:752 (1) -
01:02:983 (2) - You could slightly improve blanket
01:09:576 (1) - ^
01:10:730 (3) - ^
01:12:378 (1) - ^ Same as I suggested in easy, I think it should finish on the next white tick
02:24:081 (5) - I would remove this note to make this part a bit lighter by focusing on the vocal here
02:34:136 (1) - Same as I suggested in easy, you could extend it until 02:35:950

[Hard]

00:02:983 (3) - Ctrl+J for better flow?
00:07:763 (5) - Ahh, remove whistle at the end, it really doesn't sound good to me ><
00:11:224 (4) - Maybe you could add a NC here to give more impact to the sound this slider is representing.
00:25:400 (2) - Would be nice if you would copy/paste this slider 00:24:741 (1) - they're not symmetric right now, and I can see it.
00:27:378 (1) - Curve it a bit more for a better looking
00:29:191 (6) - ^
00:31:005 (3,4,5) - Try to put them lower, because right now the flow between those 2 notes 00:31:169 (4,5) - is not really good.
00:32:488 (7,1,2) - Inconsistant spacing (I found it fine while playing, but might be brutal for a hard diff).
00:49:466 (3) - I don't really like the shape honnestly.. http://puu.sh/gVNl9/6feec9f921.jpg
00:56:224 (1) - ^
01:40:235 (5) - ^
02:14:026 (4) - ^
02:42:543 (2) - ^
02:55:400 (2) - ^
00:53:257 (7,1) - Stack them? it's pretty confusing right now.
01:12:378 (1) - Same as previous diffs, on the next tick~
01:49:136 (1,2,3) - I find a bit odd that you blanket one slider and not the other one.. Lower (3) maybe (in a way that it's not a blanket). And try to copy (1) for this, to add some symmetry...
01:54:081 (2) - Reduce by one tick (1/4) and add a single note at this place.
02:15:180 (2) - ^
02:57:378 (2) - ^
02:34:136 (1) - It's really supposed to last longer... (maybe until 02:35:785 - The best case would be at the place of 02:35:950 (1) - or on 02:35:867 - but well, sounds a bit extreme for a hard diff)

The diff is pretty cool, but might need some work for the aesthetic especially by improving your patterns that are supposed to be symmetric but they're not. By being more constant in the curve of your sliders too !!! And the flow might be improve at some points as well, but it's already pretty good. Try to avoid to start slider on a red tick btw, it's not natural

[Insane]

00:09:246 (3,4) - The slider doesn't make a really good flow with the previous note... Try to Ctrl+G+H+J
00:11:224 (5) - You could add a NC as I suggested in the hard diff, to accentuate that sound OR reduce the slider by 1 tick (1/4) and add a single note (with finish, don't forget) http://puu.sh/gVO6a/482aa74dd0.jpg
00:22:598 (1) - Slider not really catchy , we can feel the red tick :S
00:37:928 (1) - As you already know, I don't really like the shape of your wave. I think you know how to fix this now, if you want to fix this.
00:53:917 (2) - ^
01:00:840 (6) - ^
00:39:081 (4) - Ctrl+J for better flow.
00:43:202 (5) - You could add a NC (it won't really break your pattern)
00:53:752 (1,2,3,4) - Really good rythme/flow/pattern (except, for me, the wave but still)
00:53:092 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:53:257 (2) - to prevent the new SV
00:53:257 (2) - Invrease lenght until the next blue tick!
00:55:565 (6) - Not really catchy, once more, we can feel the red tick..
01:01:499 (1,2) - Improve blanket ><
01:01:994 (2,3) - Not really good flow between those 2.. But it's still ok. If you have any idea to fix it, go ahead, if not, it's fine.
01:11:719 (5) - Extend until blue tick? OR put 01:12:213 (1) - far. Like around x128y328
01:12:378 (1) - As other diffs, next white tick ~
01:26:224 (4) - Avoid slider on red tick i.i
01:35:290 (5) - Make it just an horizontal (or almost) straight slider, to improve flow (especially after a square)
01:40:235 (4) - Why you don't map on red tick when you should? xD Well.. I think you're missing a note here.
01:43:862 (5) - NC?
02:04:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just letting you know, that, as a mapper, there's no problem, but as a player, it's really annoying, to start again with a stream especially with a pretty much high DS... A slider reverse might be better
02:15:510 (1) - Place it at x284 y244 for a better catch (and the last point at x452y168 to not break your pattern)
02:32:818 (6) - Stack with (5) instead of (1) it's a bit confusing right now..
02:34:136 (1) - This is insane, place it on the previous blue tick, it's totally fine, especially after a square (since your hand is doing a circle with the square you stay in the flow)
02:34:136 (1) - AND extend it to02:35:867 - You can now.
02:36:609 (1,2) - dfjhfodhdh... Slider here 02:36:609 (1) - instead pls... (I mean, reverse both notes in the timeline)
02:40:812 (2) - Ahh avoid this spacing, it really doesn't fit here I think. If you still want some spacing, try something like this http://puu.sh/gVP9J/b7a046bd73.jpg
02:44:356 (1,2) - Blanket~
02:45:345 (3) - Ctrl+j for better flow

Same as Hard diff. Avoid sliders on red tick, slightly improve flow, and pattern/shapes. About slider shapes, I really love your custom ones. Like 02:53:587 (5) - and 00:54:411 (3) - !!
It's a nice diff in general though !

Nice hitsounds overall!

Good luck!!

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-03-31T07:05:28+00:00

Yales wrote:
o/
From my queue.
Thanks to post a detailed reply about what and if possible why you didn't change something.

[Easy]
00:37:928 (1) - I would reduce the slider to be a 1/1... It really doesn't sound really catchy right now.
00:40:565 (1) - ^
00:52:598 (2) - Same here, I would place it this way on the timeline, in a way that it feels catchy. http://puu.sh/gVLjz/06d14cd5e4.jpg
01:02:983 (3) - Might look better if you place the last point around x464 y88 to straighten up a bit.
01:05:620 (2) - Add a clap on the beginning ?
01:08:257 (2) - ^
01:12:378 (1) - It should finish on the next white tick.
01:52:598 (2) - Honnestly, I really don't like it in an Easy diff. It's a hard technique for an insane diff, not to mention that you start it on a red tick which might feel a bit akward to play. You could, maybe, add a reverse on 01:51:774 (1) -
02:34:136 (1) - Extend it until 02:35:950 ? 2/1 is allowed.
02:54:411 (4,1) - Just a suggestion, but why wouldn't you a pattern like this http://puu.sh/gVMiO/1d26bc495e.jpg to improve the flow a bit?
Nice diff.

[Normal]
00:39:411 (3) - You could make a blanket with 00:38:422 (2) - to make it look nicer
00:52:268 (4) - Ctrl+h? There's a real problem of flow between this slider and this one 00:53:752 (1) -
01:02:983 (2) - You could slightly improve blanket
01:09:576 (1) - ^
01:10:730 (3) - ^
01:12:378 (1) - ^ Same as I suggested in easy, I think it should finish on the next white tick
02:24:081 (5) - I would remove this note to make this part a bit lighter by focusing on the vocal here
02:34:136 (1) - Same as I suggested in easy, you could extend it until 02:35:950
[Hard]
00:02:983 (3) - Ctrl+J for better flow?
00:07:763 (5) - Ahh, remove whistle at the end, it really doesn't sound good to me ><
00:11:224 (4) - Maybe you could add a NC here to give more impact to the sound this slider is representing.
00:25:400 (2) - Would be nice if you would copy/paste this slider 00:24:741 (1) - they're not symmetric right now, and I can see it.
00:27:378 (1) - Curve it a bit more for a better looking
00:29:191 (6) - ^
00:31:005 (3,4,5) - Try to put them lower, because right now the flow between those 2 notes 00:31:169 (4,5) - is not really good.
00:32:488 (7,1,2) - Inconsistant spacing (I found it fine while playing, but might be brutal for a hard diff).
00:49:466 (3) - I don't really like the shape honnestly.. http://puu.sh/gVNl9/6feec9f921.jpg
00:56:224 (1) - ^
01:40:235 (5) - ^
02:14:026 (4) - ^
02:42:543 (2) - ^
02:55:400 (2) - ^
00:53:257 (7,1) - Stack them? it's pretty confusing right now.
01:12:378 (1) - Same as previous diffs, on the next tick~
01:49:136 (1,2,3) - I find a bit odd that you blanket one slider and not the other one.. Lower (3) maybe (in a way that it's not a blanket). And try to copy (1) for this, to add some symmetry...
01:54:081 (2) - Reduce by one tick (1/4) and add a single note at this place.
02:15:180 (2) - ^
02:57:378 (2) - ^
02:34:136 (1) - It's really supposed to last longer... (maybe until 02:35:785 - The best case would be at the place of 02:35:950 (1) - or on 02:35:867 - but well, sounds a bit extreme for a hard diff)
The diff is pretty cool, but might need some work for the aesthetic especially by improving your patterns that are supposed to be symmetric but they're not. By being more constant in the curve of your sliders too !!! And the flow might be improve at some points as well, but it's already pretty good. Try to avoid to start slider on a red tick btw, it's not natural

[Insane]
00:09:246 (3,4) - The slider doesn't make a really good flow with the previous note... Try to Ctrl+G+H+J
00:11:224 (5) - You could add a NC as I suggested in the hard diff, to accentuate that sound OR reduce the slider by 1 tick (1/4) and add a single note (with finish, don't forget) http://puu.sh/gVO6a/482aa74dd0.jpg
00:22:598 (1) - Slider not really catchy , we can feel the red tick :S
00:37:928 (1) - As you already know, I don't really like the shape of your wave. I think you know how to fix this now, if you want to fix this.
00:53:917 (2) - ^
01:00:840 (6) - ^
00:39:081 (4) - Ctrl+J for better flow.
00:43:202 (5) - You could add a NC (it won't really break your pattern)
00:53:752 (1,2,3,4) - Really good rythme/flow/pattern (except, for me, the wave but still)
00:53:092 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:53:257 (2) - to prevent the new SV
00:53:257 (2) - Invrease lenght until the next blue tick!
00:55:565 (6) - Not really catchy, once more, we can feel the red tick..
01:01:499 (1,2) - Improve blanket ><
01:01:994 (2,3) - Not really good flow between those 2.. But it's still ok. If you have any idea to fix it, go ahead, if not, it's fine.
01:11:719 (5) - Extend until blue tick? OR put 01:12:213 (1) - far. Like around x128y328
01:12:378 (1) - As other diffs, next white tick ~
01:26:224 (4) - Avoid slider on red tick i.i
01:35:290 (5) - Make it just an horizontal (or almost) straight slider, to improve flow (especially after a square)
01:40:235 (4) - Why you don't map on red tick when you should? xD Well.. I think you're missing a note here.
01:43:862 (5) - NC?
02:04:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just letting you know, that, as a mapper, there's no problem, but as a player, it's really annoying, to start again with a stream especially with a pretty much high DS... A slider reverse might be better
02:15:510 (1) - Place it at x284 y244 for a better catch (and the last point at x452y168 to not break your pattern)
02:32:818 (6) - Stack with (5) instead of (1) it's a bit confusing right now..
02:34:136 (1) - This is insane, place it on the previous blue tick, it's totally fine, especially after a square (since your hand is doing a circle with the square you stay in the flow)
02:34:136 (1) - AND extend it to02:35:867 - You can now.
02:36:609 (1,2) - dfjhfodhdh... Slider here 02:36:609 (1) - instead pls... (I mean, reverse both notes in the timeline)
02:40:812 (2) - Ahh avoid this spacing, it really doesn't fit here I think. If you still want some spacing, try something like this http://puu.sh/gVP9J/b7a046bd73.jpg
02:44:356 (1,2) - Blanket~
02:45:345 (3) - Ctrl+j for better flow
Same as Hard diff. Avoid sliders on red tick, slightly improve flow, and pattern/shapes. About slider shapes, I really love your custom ones. Like 02:53:587 (5) - and 00:54:411 (3) - !!
It's a nice diff in general though !

Nice hitsounds overall!

Good luck!!

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Btw thanks, I accept most of it , you can hate me for not replying your mod, I dont wanna do it all over again , because this random google chrome thing happens out of the blue for no reason. Please PM me instead if you want explanation for your mod...
Sorry, really sorry for the stupid inconvenience OTL

wtf google chrome wtf

Arphimigon

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Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2015-04-05T21:35:25+00:00

>one month later

[Easy]
Some rhythms were weird but nothing worth pointing out. Difficulty's charm there.
00:01:005 (1) - Pls make to x:378 y:170
00:01:664 (2,3,1) - Bad placement here, make 00:03:642 (1) - point more down
00:11:224 (1) - Cool sound in music = Cool slider here pls
00:40:235 (3,1) - Easy = No harsh angles please!
00:53:092 (3) - Too hard to understand for a normal? Change to a note?
00:54:906 (2) - Raise end a tad flow pls
01:27:048 (2) - I always go against start and end of slider overlaps.
01:38:257 (3) - Feels better slightly more left
01:53:257 (3) - Stated before
01:51:774 (1,2,3) - Placement here could be more even.
02:28:697 (1) - Raise pls to follow curve
02:35:950 - Why u no add note here

[Normal]
Nice, liked it.
00:04:301 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like the darty motion created here, and the angle made from the last note and slider is meh anyway (next times like this aren't too bad)
00:46:829 (3,4,5) - I know you like vocal but this feels weird after the break, at least fill in the break before such an awkward spike here
01:51:774 (1,2) - Make more straight into next curve pls?
02:31:334 (1,2,3) - Fix note placement, make notes lower in contrast to slider
02:36:609 (1,3) - Not a nice sliderblanket here

[Hard]
Nazimod crap here
Increase of tick rate sounds bad imo
00:01:169 (2,3) - Fix unequal DS
00:08:917 (1,2,3,4) - Make notes into a curve pls
00:22:103 (3) - NC this to separate it in the music from the last 2 notes
01:43:037 (5,6,7) - Triplet + this angle is nono only do one, make the slider a less of a harsh angle pls
02:10:895 (4,5) - Blanket possibly? (slider needs more curve for this)

[Insane]
00:21:609 (1,2,3,4) - Idc if the SV change is here make these all equally spaced
01:27:378 (3,4,5,6) - Make note 3 as spaced from the slider as the notes are, helps playability
02:06:114 (5) - Raise 3 pixels and move right 1 nazisliderblanket
02:24:741 (4,2) - Fix stack
02:31:829 (2,3,4,5) - Equalise spacing?

I like dis

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-04-06T18:16:53+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
>one month later ~ggwp

[Easy]
Some rhythms were weird but nothing worth pointing out. Difficulty's charm there.
00:01:005 (1) - Pls make to x:378 y:170 Done
00:01:664 (2,3,1) - Bad placement here, make 00:03:642 (1) - point more down Ok
00:11:224 (1) - Cool sound in music = Cool slider here pls Made a wubbb
00:40:235 (3,1) - Easy = No harsh angles please! fixed
00:53:092 (3) - Too hard to understand for a normal? Change to a note? I dont think so
00:54:906 (2) - Raise end a tad flow pls raised
01:27:048 (2) - I always go against start and end of slider overlaps. I dont get this
01:38:257 (3) - Feels better slightly more left Moved
01:53:257 (3) - Stated before simplified
01:51:774 (1,2,3) - Placement here could be more even.
02:28:697 (1) - Raise pls to follow curve Raised
02:35:950 - Why u no add note here Not enough recovery time If I do

[Normal]
Nice, liked it.
00:04:301 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like the darty motion created here, and the angle made from the last note and slider is meh anyway (next times like this aren't too bad) merger 3-4 into one slider
00:46:829 (3,4,5) - I know you like vocal but this feels weird after the break, at least fill in the break before such an awkward spike here changed patterns
01:51:774 (1,2) - Make more straight into next curve pls? straightened
02:31:334 (1,2,3) - Fix note placement, make notes lower in contrast to slider Lowered
02:36:609 (1,3) - Not a nice sliderblanket here I did my best

[Hard]
Nazimod crap here
Increase of tick rate sounds bad imo Huh I think it is ok
00:01:169 (2,3) - Fix unequal DS fixed
00:08:917 (1,2,3,4) - Make notes into a curve pls I tried
00:22:103 (3) - NC this to separate it in the music from the last 2 notes ok
01:43:037 (5,6,7) - Triplet + this angle is nono only do one, make the slider a less of a harsh angle pls The triplet fits the music (there is actually a 1/4 kick bass there) , and the slider blankets the note before triplets
02:10:895 (4,5) - Blanket possibly? (slider needs more curve for this) not blanketing them, but changed patterns

[Insane]
00:21:609 (1,2,3,4) - Idc if the SV change is here make these all equally spaced fixed spacing
01:27:378 (3,4,5,6) - Make note 3 as spaced from the slider as the notes are, helps playability fixed
02:06:114 (5) - Raise 3 pixels and move right 1 nazisliderblanket nazi >w<
02:24:741 (4,2) - Fix stack I have fixed this stack like thousand times already, maybe it is a fault from the editor itself
02:31:829 (2,3,4,5) - Equalise spacing? My bad

I like dis me2

Thanks Arphigimon!

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-07T12:57:35+00:00

Hi, i was bored, so i can finally mod this.

Worth your wait..... WORTH A STAR

Great map btw!

[> General <]

- I think the first offset should be 1,000... or i may say 1k, Just suggestion.
- Oww, a 15-seconds break on first two diffs... Would that actually be okay?
- Didn't find anything wrong :3/

[> Easy <]

00:09:576 (2,3,1) - Check your spacing here, looks a bit different to me.
00:34:961 (4,2) - I wonder why would you overlap these, i prefer splitting them for visibility for beginners.
00:40:235 (3,2) - Almost the same reason as above, but it's kinda minor.
00:40:565 (1) - Hey, this slider tail just touched the healthbar, you'd really better should move it down grid.
01:43:202 (3,1) - Idk, but recorrect this blanket on slider tail.
01:47:488 (2,3) - ^, isdk
02:16:664 (2,3,1) - Spacing~
02:21:939 (2) - Why out of grid? Maybe you should get it in.
02:26:059 (1) - Same reason as 00:40:565 (1) -
02:27:378 (2) - I guess you should change a bit of rhythm here, since where the beat on 02:28:037 - is quite intense, there should be a circle there or either a downbeat.
02:44:356 (1,2,3) - Spacing~
- The rest are fine, good diff.

[> Normal <]

00:23:422 (3) - This slider sounds off beat. Since the vocal track is much heard mainly here, i prefer following it.
00:43:367 (1) - I think this spinner is quite too fast for normal players to spin, which had a short period of time. I may tell you should remove it and map this part, or make it a little longer.
00:46:994 (3) - Move this circle to x:364|y:228 or nearby it. Might improve flow.
01:02:653 (3,4) - Idk, but recorrect blanket.
01:09:246 (5,1) - ^
01:34:631 (3) - Almost the same as 0:23:422 (3) -
01:44:026 (1) - Same as 00:43:367 (1) -
02:20:125 (3,1) - What is this spacing?! I thought you were using 1.0x all the way.
02:40:895 (4,1) - Was this tiny little overlap on purpose?
- Nice

[> Hard <]

00:02:983 (3,4) - WTH this jump, you haven't done this on the other parts that's similar to this. Reduce spacing.
00:10:235 (1,2) - Idk, recorrect blanket.
00:40:565 (1,2) - ^
01:01:499 (8,1) - Swap NC? The vocal sounds like it went to it's new line.
01:09:576 (1,2) - Maybe you could make a bit of symmetry here? 'ight? Might look better imo.
01:33:147 (6,1,2) - You could possibly make a few little jumps here, since the song track sounds really intense, maybe you could stack circle (1) on slider (2).
01:42:873 (4,7) - Idk, recorrect blanket.
01:51:774 (1,2) - ^
02:14:851 (1,2,3) - I've seen this notes' spacings are quite unbalance, so redo it?
02:37:763 (3,1) - Is this big overlap on purpose? Can you try planning to split them?
02:57:048 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:14:851 (1,2,3) -
- Quite okay, but with little bit of spacing issues.

[> Insane <]

00:25:895 (1,2) - Swap NC? The vocals sounded just went on a new line.
00:47:653 (2,3) - I don't this a jump like this fits, i guess you should still keep using DS or sth.
00:52:103 (5,1) - Idk recorrect blanket.
01:25:318 (5) - I don't hear any beat at this rate of song track, i think you should delete this circle for avoiding overmap.
01:32:653 (3) - I prefer moving this circle to x:168|y:208, it's kinda near. So i think it's minor.
02:08:257 (4,1) - Recorrect slider (4)'s curve to blanket a little.
02:32:818 (6,1) - Planning to make a blanket, or not?
- Waow... Impressive diff!

Great map, get me back when you're done prepared. So i can bubble this nano :3/

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-04-07T19:06:01+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Hi, i was bored, so i can finally mod this.

Worth your wait..... WORTH A STAR Great map btw! worth the wait and low priority though
[> General <]
- I think the first offset should be 1,000... or i may say 1k, Just suggestion.
- Oww, a 15-seconds break on first two diffs... Would that actually be okay? it is ok tbh
- Didn't find anything wrong :3/
[> Easy <]
00:09:576 (2,3,1) - Check your spacing here, looks a bit different to me. my bad, fixed
00:34:961 (4,2) - I wonder why would you overlap these, i prefer splitting them for visibility for beginners.stacked instead
00:40:235 (3,2) - Almost the same reason as above, but it's kinda minor. not overlapping anymore
00:40:565 (1) - Hey, this slider tail just touched the healthbar, you'd really better should move it down grid. reshaped a bit so it is not overlapping anymore
01:43:202 (3,1) - Idk, but recorrect this blanket on slider tail. I hope it is better now
01:47:488 (2,3) - ^, isdk fixed
02:16:664 (2,3,1) - Spacing~ 1.11x qq
02:21:939 (2) - Why out of grid? Maybe you should get it in. didnt check off-screen objects
02:26:059 (1) - Same reason as 00:40:565 (1) - ok
02:27:378 (2) - I guess you should change a bit of rhythm here, since where the beat on 02:28:037 - is quite intense, there should be a circle there or either a downbeat.
02:44:356 (1,2,3) - Spacing~ is getting off by 0.01 spacing really breaks the rule of constant spacing? qq
- The rest are fine, good diff.
[> Normal <]
00:23:422 (3) - This slider sounds off beat. Since the vocal track is much heard mainly here, i prefer following it. this still follows the vocal by a simple 2/1 downbeat rhythm and the vocal line covers for it, so no change
00:43:367 (1) - I think this spinner is quite too fast for normal players to spin, which had a short period of time. I may tell you should remove it and map this part, or make it a little longer. Mkaing this spinner longer doesnt make any sense, because it will ignore the symbal sound on 00:44:191 - . I think the spinner is not really short/fast
00:46:994 (3) - Move this circle to x:364|y:228 or nearby it. Might improve flow. Moved
01:02:653 (3,4) - Idk, but recorrect blanket. removed blanket instead 8)
01:09:246 (5,1) - ^ done
01:34:631 (3) - Almost the same as 0:23:422 (3) - same reason as before
01:44:026 (1) - Same as 00:43:367 (1) - same reason as before too
02:20:125 (3,1) - What is this spacing?! I thought you were using 1.0x all the way. My bad, sorry
02:40:895 (4,1) - Was this tiny little overlap on purpose? put the tail lower, so it wont overlapp anymore
- Nice
[> Hard <]
00:02:983 (3,4) - WTH this jump, you haven't done this on the other parts that's similar to this. Reduce spacing. reduced to 1.6x
00:10:235 (1,2) - Idk, recorrect blanket. Hope it is fixed
00:40:565 (1,2) - ^fixed and DS'd
01:01:499 (8,1) - Swap NC? The vocal sounds like it went to it's new line. yes
01:09:576 (1,2) - Maybe you could make a bit of symmetry here? 'ight? Might look better imo. used the same slider
01:33:147 (6,1,2) - You could possibly make a few little jumps here, since the song track sounds really intense, maybe you could stack circle (1) on slider (2). Looking good
01:42:873 (4,7) - Idk, recorrect blanket. I hope it is fine
01:51:774 (1,2) - ^ It is not supposed to be a blanket lol
02:14:851 (1,2,3) - I've seen this notes' spacings are quite unbalance, so redo it? I dont know how to balance them, prevviously they are just 2 kick sliders without the last circle
02:37:763 (3,1) - Is this big overlap on purpose? Can you try planning to split them? reshaped them a bit, no overlaps
02:57:048 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:14:851 (1,2,3) - same reason then
- Quite okay, but with little bit of spacing issues.
[> Insane <]
00:25:895 (1,2) - Swap NC? The vocals sounded just went on a new line. swapped
00:47:653 (2,3) - I don't this a jump like this fits, i guess you should still keep using DS or sth. DS'd
00:52:103 (5,1) - Idk recorrect blanket. removed the curve on the slider 8)
01:25:318 (5) - I don't hear any beat at this rate of song track, i think you should delete this circle for avoiding overmap. rip
01:32:653 (3) - I prefer moving this circle to x:168|y:208, it's kinda near. So i think it's minor. I want that 2x jump tho, so no change
02:08:257 (4,1) - Recorrect slider (4)'s curve to blanket a little. I hope it is fine
02:32:818 (6,1) - Planning to make a blanket, or not? not anymore 8)
- Waow... Impressive diff! Waow

Great map, get me back when you're done prepared. So i can bubble this nano :3/ on my way

Thanks Gray , nice star !~

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-08T12:00:52+00:00

Okay, checked everything, and goes is fine. Probably this recheck have few minor things in Normal, no kudos ofc.

All are just suggestions

00:33:972 (3,4) - Try to move these two sliders to x:304|y:116 or nearby. Might look better to me imo. Watch the spacing on the next notes too.
01:10:400 (2,3) - Recorrect blanket, lol maybe not important.
02:44:356 (1) - Ctrl + J?

Tell me when you're done :v /

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-08T12:07:04+00:00

fixed all

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-08T12:10:19+00:00

Surely fixed all! Bobble taim!

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-08T12:12:23+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Surely fixed all! Bobble taim!

~yeay~
<3

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2015-04-09T18:57:21+00:00

According to Cherry Blossom , there is actually an unrankable issue with the map !

02:33:972 (1) - 's hitsound is clearly inaudible. There's acutally none reason to use a 5% timing section with that kind of hitsound (soft hitwhistles / finishes).

Alright , gonna pop this for now. I'll try to give you some further suggestions tomorrow and then , call me back afterwards for the rebubble!

meii18

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meii18 2015-04-09T18:58:04+00:00

~~Why is a bubble and it's not a bubble pop ? :/~~ Never mind

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-09T19:02:10+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
According to Cherry Blossom , there is actually an unrankable issue with the map !

02:33:972 (1) - 's hitsound is clearly inaudible. There's acutally none reason to use a 5% timing section with that kind of hitsound (soft hitwhistles / finishes).

Alright , gonna pop this for now. I'll try to give you some further suggestions tomorrow and then , call me back afterwards for the rebubble!

Good thing this little thing got detected, messed up that part myself a little lol, fixed though,
The note before the spinner is now audible, the spinnerspin is the one with 5% volume

Updated, minorly changed some hitsounds

Last edited by theramdans 2015-04-09T19:20:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-09T19:11:01+00:00

IMO, that note can be heard even during the play. Why would you expect too much of it? Did you increase your music volume on your client option to 100%, and the effect volume to 50%? Are your headphones dying?

lol wut, i guess that was a negligible way to pop a bubble. Omfg why am i attacking? /me runs

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-09T19:22:42+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
IMO, that note can be heard even during the play. Why would you expect too much of it? Did you increase your music volume on your client option to 100%, and the effect volume to 50%? Are your headphones dying?

lol wut, i guess that was a negligible way to pop a bubble. Omfg why am i attacking? /me runs

I understand what's happening, and I deeply concerned about hitsounds ,so it is not against my way of viewing map, changed anyways
Now you can hear the soft finish sound!

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-04-10T06:44:11+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
IMO, that note can be heard even during the play. Why would you expect too much of it? Did you increase your music volume on your client option to 100%, and the effect volume to 50%? Are your headphones dying?

lol wut, i guess that was a negligible way to pop a bubble. Omfg why am i attacking? /me runs

It does not make sense when you add a 5% volume timeline on an object which has custom hitsounds (whistle+finish).
And according to the ranking criteria, when it does not make sense, this is clearly unrankable.

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2015-04-10T16:22:45+00:00

Alright , it seems that you really want to rush this so I wont be able to mod that.

Doing a rebubble as requested.

Wishing u the best for this o/

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-04-10T16:48:36+00:00

random check

try offset +10 seems much better

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-10T17:19:47+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
Alright , it seems that you really want to rush this so I wont be able to mod that.

Doing a rebubble as requested.

Wishing u the best for this o/

I hope! Thanks <3

Sieg wrote:
random check

try offset +10 seems much better

The current offset is OK , I asked Shiro for confirmation, Thanks for checking!

2015-04-11 00:09 theramdans: Shiro
2015-04-11 00:09 Shiro: hi
2015-04-11 00:10 theramdans: Can you check offset ?
2015-04-11 00:10 Shiro: ._.
2015-04-11 00:10 Shiro: quickly
2015-04-11 00:10 theramdans: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/206737
2015-04-11 00:12 Shiro: offset is good
2015-04-11 00:12 Shiro: like, actually good
2015-04-11 00:12 theramdans: Sieg said +10
2015-04-11 00:13 Shiro: idk who did it but they did a very good job on it
2015-04-11 00:13 Shiro: they have my thumb up
2015-04-11 00:13 theramdans: so , the current is Ok??
2015-04-11 00:13 Shiro: yes
2015-04-11 00:13 theramdans: phew, what a relieve~
2015-04-11 00:14 theramdans: thanks for checking
2015-04-11 00:14 Shiro: relief
2015-04-11 00:14 Shiro: np
2015-04-11 00:14 theramdans: I mean, that one lol
2015-04-11 00:14 theramdans: ok

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-04-11T01:17:16+00:00

Ranked

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2015-04-11T01:21:51+00:00

Gratz bro

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2015-04-11T04:20:28+00:00

ramdan im coming <3

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-04-11T04:32:00+00:00

gratz :3

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-11T05:43:54+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Ranked

hype #3 \o/

really??? no irc check with BN???

10nya

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10nya 2015-04-11T15:03:41+00:00

gratsu desu

Arphimigon

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Arphimigon 2015-04-12T11:39:48+00:00

Took long enough!
/me runs

Gratz though haha.

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-04-16T15:58:12+00:00

Reason for Disqualification

In the Normal, 00:43:367 (1) - this spinner is too short for this difficulty level. A solution would be to replace it with a slider.
In the Easy, 02:15:510 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - The rhythm in this section feels too complex compared to how other sections in the song were mapped. Keep in mind that this is a very calm section, but you are using a lot of 3/2 gaps and objects on red ticks, which makes it harder to play than the rest of this difficulty. Consider to remap this section without following the vocals, so you are able to create a less dense and more simple rhythm.
In the Easy, 02:49:796 (1,2) is confusing rhythm. The drum at 02:50:950 sticks out because it is offbeat and should be followed therefore, otherwise it has a bad effect when playing the map. Consider following the vocals here (which you also did in the rest of this chorus) to fix the issue at the same time: http://puu.sh/hg3dJ/d1d8aa64ec.jpg

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding

[

Easy]

00:53:092 (3) - It would be nice if you could replace this slider by a single circle, to avoid non-repeat 1/2-sliders, as they are a bit short for an Easy difficulty and can cause problems when playing.

[

Insane]

00:29:521 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern feels very forced, both the transition from the previous pattern as well as the transition between circles and the straight-down slider here. Consider to replace it with something that flows better, fitting more to the rest of this map.
01:11:719 (5) - This rhythm feels weird.. 01:11:884 shouldn't be ignored as the guitar from 01:11:719 sounds stops there. Maybe you could use a rhythm like this one? http://puu.sh/hg3Cd/758a26b37a.jpg

Nice mapset, I especially like the Hard difficulty. Good luck with requalifying it!

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-16T18:44:28+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Reason for Disqualification

In the Normal, 00:43:367 (1) - this spinner is too short for this difficulty level. A solution would be to replace it with a slider. come to think of it more, I agree!, will replace this,sorry, my bad
In the Easy, 02:15:510 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - The rhythm in this section feels too complex compared to how other sections in the song were mapped. Keep in mind that this is a very calm section, but you are using a lot of 3/2 gaps and objects on red ticks, which makes it harder to play than the rest of this difficulty. Consider to remap this section without following the vocals, so you are able to create a less dense and more simple rhythm. No, it is not, It follows the main obvious vocal perfectly, just like I always do when vocal line comes clear like this compared to the other instruments played in the song, so what I am gonna do is reducing the notes density whilst keeping the original ryhthms
In the Easy, 02:49:796 (1,2) is confusing rhythm. The drum at 02:50:950 sticks out because it is offbeat and should be followed therefore, otherwise it has a bad effect when playing the map. I dont get it why this is confusing, am I too dumb? Well I might try something different Consider following the vocals here (which you also did in the rest of this chorus) to fix the issue at the same time: http://puu.sh/hg3dJ/d1d8aa64ec.jpg
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding

[ Easy]
00:53:092 (3) - It would be nice if you could replace this slider by a single circle, to avoid non-repeat 1/2-sliders, as they are a bit short for an Easy difficulty and can cause problems when playing.To be honest, this was only a circle previously, but I changed it for some reason. Reverting it back to its previous state
[ Insane]
00:29:521 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern feels very forced, both the transition from the previous pattern as well as the transition between circles and the straight-down slider here. Consider to replace it with something that flows better, fitting more to the rest of this map. Changed with triangles and a bit rotated
01:11:719 (5) - This rhythm feels weird.. 01:11:884 shouldn't be ignored as the guitar from 01:11:719 sounds stops there. ChangedMaybe you could use a rhythm like this one? http://puu.sh/hg3Cd/758a26b37a.jpg
Nice mapset, I especially like the Hard difficulty. Good luck with requalifying it! I know it has good quality

Thanks why so late though, only a day to go, I expect this DQ sooner, If I do think it is DQ-worth , that is

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-04-16T19:31:40+00:00

It's late because the QAT needed to discuss about this before disqualifying, just like with any other map.

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-16T20:13:31+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
It's late because the QAT needed to discuss about this before disqualifying, just like with any other map.

mmmkay
Now let's see if we can get this thing up again

EDIT

HabiHolic wrote:
Ranked

Please Habi check your Forum PM Inbox

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2015-04-17T22:44:36+00:00

quick comment:

Insane:

02:15:510 (1) -

the space between here and the previous note is kind of ugly, and I would recommend keeping it consistent with the rest of the stream by doing something like this:

http://puu.sh/hhzY3/926a39adb9.jpg

I did this by changing the SV of that slider to .5 and moved it down so that it was consistent with the rest of the stream.

That's all I wanted to comment on; Nice map!

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-04-17T23:16:29+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
quick comment:

Insane:

02:15:510 (1) -

the space between here and the previous note is kind of ugly, and I would recommend keeping it consistent with the rest of the stream by doing something like this:

http://puu.sh/hhzY3/926a39adb9.jpg

I did this by changing the SV of that slider to .5 and moved it down so that it was consistent with the rest of the stream.

That's all I wanted to comment on; Nice map!

Fixed like a boss enjoy your first kudosu

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-18T06:08:33+00:00

...Do you even need me?

pkk

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pkk 2015-05-26T21:46:59+00:00

gogogo

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-08-06T04:21:24+00:00

insand gd incoming

A Mystery

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A Mystery 2015-08-16T23:21:40+00:00

Im here bitches

If you know a custom diff name plssss tell me. And if not, A Mystery's Insane or Extra?

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Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2015-08-19T12:35:10+00:00

Slap me! Sorry for not mod all of the diffs available here, feel tired =w=

[Easy]

00:45:840 (1,2) - Ah, I don't like how they works, the gap between them is really awkward for me . Please, leave the vocals and extend this slider 00:45:840 (1) - by 1/2 . I feel like drums on 00:46:499 - must be clearly emphasized, and vocals on this sections isn't support how the rhythm works, like this 01:46:499 (1,2) -
02:18:972 (2) - Okay, this slider is very support the vocal here, but it's the calmest part of this song, so keeping the rhythm still easy (don't use 1/2 or any complex rhythm) is more recommended than this 1/2 for me

[Normal]

00:10:235 (3) - For me, using 1/1 rhythm is nice here . I will throw 1/2 just for the similar drum sound in entire section, to make it even more nicer to be playable, like the other 1/2 in entire sequences
00:57:048 (2,3) - Better to stack, to keep 1/2 rhythm more unified this section, because you stack this 1/2 00:54:741 (2,3) - and this 01:00:015 (2,3) -
01:01:499 (1) - How about this rhythm? Well, I just think that more emphasis at vocals on this section is nice . Also, you can use the same rhythm here 01:06:939 (1) -
SPOILER
02:30:675 (5) - Moving this circle at the downside is more intuitive to play for me . It'll makes the flow becomes smooth and nice . 02:30:675 (5) - 344|152, 02:31:005 (6) - 416|68 . Also, if you're intend to follow this suggestion, you can make this slider 02:31:334 (1) - blanket with (5)
SPOILER
02:38:752 (5) - Movement to this circle is rigid for me . Maybe place it on 312|168 for more intuitive flow
02:39:906 (2,3) - See third point, about stacking
02:55:070 (1) - Just a minor, avoid overlap here could be done to making a neater placement here
03:01:664 (3,4) - Nazi, center please >w<

[Hard]

00:03:477 (4) - Maybe new combo here should help to more accentuate those rhythm 00:03:477 (4,1) - . Switching the new combo placement is nice here
01:40:070 (4,5) - I don't see what you're trying to follow here, but I guess it'll more suitable to your style if you're following vocals here . Try to delete this circle 01:40:070 (4) - , then replace it with 01:40:235 (5) - and add a reverse on it . After that, delete this circle 01:40:730 (6) -
01:53:752 (1,2,3) - They looks forced in terms of placement . Make it more flexible is more nice to follow here, maybe like this
SPOILER
02:14:686 - Adding a circle here is nice for build up rhythm here, as the guitar sound rather loud and almost similar with 02:14:521 (5) -

[]
Good Luck!

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-08-19T13:19:47+00:00

Ipas wrote:
Slap me! Sorry for not mod all of the diffs available here, feel tired =w=

[Easy]
00:45:840 (1,2) - Ah, I don't like how they works, the gap between them is really awkward for me . Please, leave the vocals and extend this slider 00:45:840 (1) - by 1/2 . I feel like drums on 00:46:499 - must be clearly emphasized, and vocals on this sections isn't support how the rhythm works, like this 01:46:499 (1,2) - Extended that slider and the other one too
02:18:972 (2) - Okay, this slider is very support the vocal here, but it's the calmest part of this song, so keeping the rhythm still easy (don't use 1/2 or any complex rhythm) is more recommended than this 1/2 for me[ removed repeat slider/*:m:1337]
[Normal]
00:10:235 (3) - For me, using 1/1 rhythm is nice here . I will throw 1/2 just for the similar drum sound in entire section, to make it even more nicer to be playable, like the other 1/2 in entire sequencesWait, I did this to prevent the ugly 1/2 overlapping notes, so I left that red tick 00:10:070 - empty
00:57:048 (2,3) - Better to stack, to keep 1/2 rhythm more unified this section, because you stack this 1/2 00:54:741 (2,3) - and this 01:00:015 (2,3) - You know, stacking on a 1/2 repeat slider is confusing, keeping this
01:01:499 (1) - How about this rhythm? Well, I just think that more emphasis at vocals on this section is nice . Also, you can use the same rhythm here 01:06:939 (1) -
SPOILER
that will work too, but I prefer this one
02:30:675 (5) - Moving this circle at the downside is more intuitive to play for me . It'll makes the flow becomes smooth and nice . 02:30:675 (5) - 344|152, 02:31:005 (6) - 416|68 . Also, if you're intend to follow this suggestion, you can make this slider 02:31:334 (1) - blanket with (5)
SPOILER
fixed such
02:38:752 (5) - Movement to this circle is rigid for me . Maybe place it on 312|168 for more intuitive flow Moved
02:39:906 (2,3) - See third point, about stacking same reason
02:55:070 (1) - Just a minor, avoid overlap here could be done to making a neater placement here overlap gone
03:01:664 (3,4) - Nazi, center please >w< naaah it's alright
[Hard]
00:03:477 (4) - Maybe new combo here should help to more accentuate those rhythm 00:03:477 (4,1) - . Switching the new combo placement is nice here NC'd
01:40:070 (4,5) - I don't see what you're trying to follow here, but I guess it'll more suitable to your style if you're following vocals here . Try to delete this circle 01:40:070 (4) - , then replace it with 01:40:235 (5) - and add a reverse on it . After that, delete this circle 01:40:730 (6) - I am following both the vocal and the percussion/drums here, it is just the transition thing that maybe made you feel awkward, keeping this
01:53:752 (1,2,3) - They looks forced in terms of placement . Make it more flexible is more nice to follow here, maybe like this
SPOILER
PURRRRRRFECT
02:14:686 - Adding a circle here is nice for build up rhythm here, as the guitar sound rather loud and almost similar with 02:14:521 (5) - added jump as abonus :p
[]
Good Luck! Thanks :3

Why you no mod the insanes

Have a kudosu

Bearizm

1,213 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2015-08-22T05:25:59+00:00

Mod 4 Ticket >:)

Hard

00:03:477 (1) - ini jumpnya di object ini? nggak di 00:03:642 (2) - aja?

02:10:235 (1) - ini gk susah di baca apa ya?

02:14:686 (6,1,2) - questionable stack menurut gw. kalau bisa taro 1 di tempat lain aja..

Insane

00:03:477 (1) - gk dibuat 2 circles aja? kalau di apply, make sure buat jumpnya di 00:03:642 -

00:47:158 (1) - ctrl+j terus taro di x172y52

01:09:082 (7) - gk mau di blanket sama 01:09:576 (1) - aja?

02:19:466 (1) - kalau bisa jangan di stack, it's counter-intuitive imo karena object sebelum ini, lo ngikut vocal dan ini ngikut bg sound

02:32:158 (3) - ganti slider aja kah? biar ngikut vocal? 02:32:323 (4) - cuma background sound

03:02:241 (2,3) - ketinggian spacingnya imo..

03:10:895 (1,2) - potential bgt buat bikin jump. mungkin taro 03:10:895 (1) - di x100y263 dan taro 03:10:730 (5) - di x20y136

A Mystery

hi

00:48:477 (1) - stack this with 00:48:642 (2) - ?

00:49:136 (3) - i don't think this is good lol move it to x245y372

00:59:356 (3) - isn't this supposed to be 00:59:191 - here? the 1/1 is off by +1/2 lol

01:10:235 (4) - why not blanket this with 01:10:730 (1) - ?

01:16:664 (3,4,5) - why not stack with 01:15:510 (3) - or is this intentional?

01:31:829 (1) - blanket nowhere near perfect lol

02:10:070 (6) - hmm... but not overlap this instead of stacking it?

02:42:213 (3) - same problem with the ones on the previous kiai

Good luck!

your profile picture doesn't match with what you said lol

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-08-22T06:38:55+00:00

Bearizm wrote:
Mod 4 Ticket >:)
A Mystery
hi

00:48:477 (1) - stack this with 00:48:642 (2) - ? - I wanted to make an anti-jump pattern here, (but yeah I understand that downbeats usually get a jump and stuff)

00:49:136 (3) - i don't think this is good lol move it to x245y372 - What's wrong with it?

00:59:356 (3) - isn't this supposed to be 00:59:191 - here? the 1/1 is off by +1/2 lol - Uhmm good point, I actually changed the first parts of the kiais. The reason is the guitar+the vocals (guitar plays the chord again and the vocals kinda "repeat" with its tone, not sure how to explain this)

01:10:235 (4) - why not blanket this with 01:10:730 (1) - ? - Changed this pattern completely after realizing it plays like shit

01:16:664 (3,4,5) - why not stack with 01:15:510 (3) - or is this intentional? - If you enable stacking in the options, you can see that the triple is perfectly stacked. I moved it on purpose so the first circle of the triple will look stacked

01:31:829 (1) - blanket nowhere near perfect lol - Fixed

02:10:070 (6) - hmm... but not overlap this instead of stacking it? - Changed overlaps a little, but basically applied your suggestion

02:42:213 (3) - same problem with the ones on the previous kiai

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 04. Beautiful ground192.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1495
PreviewTime: 155867
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.740001

[Metadata]
Title:Beautiful ground
TitleUnicode:Beautiful ground
Artist:nano x yuyoyuppe
ArtistUnicode:ナノ×ゆよゆっぺ
Creator:theramdans
Version:A Mystery's Insane
Source:
Tags:nanoir A_Mystery
BeatmapID:764839
BeatmapSetID:206737

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.85
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
2,135710,144665
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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115,306,188257,6,0,P|113:237|134:202,1,92.5,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,175,188587,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,377,188752,1,4,3:0:0:0:
190,209,188917,1,4,3:0:0:0:
258,300,189081,1,4,3:0:0:0:
110,110,189246,5,12,0:0:0:0:
265,41,189411,2,0,P|201:18|143:35,1,92.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,175,189741,1,12,0:0:0:0:
394,26,189906,1,12,0:0:0:0:
294,107,190070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
474,50,190235,2,0,P|486:104|474:164,1,92.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,244,190565,2,0,P|315:311|379:360,1,138.75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,291,190895,5,6,0:0:0:0:
173,345,191059,1,6,0:0:0:0:

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-08-22T07:25:15+00:00

Bearizm wrote:
Mod 4 Ticket >:)

Hard
00:03:477 (1) - ini jumpnya di object ini? nggak di 00:03:642 (2) - aja? gw putukan untuk remap intro dikit

02:10:235 (1) - ini gk susah di baca apa ya? stack di slider 7

02:14:686 (6,1,2) - questionable stack menurut gw. kalau bisa taro 1 di tempat lain aja..gak stack + rearrange dikit

Insane
00:03:477 (1) - gk dibuat 2 circles aja? kalau di apply, make sure buat jumpnya di 00:03:642 - done

00:47:158 (1) - ctrl+j terus taro di x172y52 done + reshaped dikit

01:09:082 (7) - gk mau di blanket sama 01:09:576 (1) - aja? done

02:19:466 (1) - kalau bisa jangan di stack, it's counter-intuitive imo karena object sebelum ini, lo ngikut vocal dan ini ngikut bg sound unstacekd + moved

02:32:158 (3) - ganti slider aja kah? biar ngikut vocal? 02:32:323 (4) - cuma background sound Enakan gini tbh

03:02:241 (2,3) - ketinggian spacingnya imo..reduced to 1.99x

03:10:895 (1,2) - potential bgt buat bikin jump. mungkin taro 03:10:895 (1) - di x100y263 dan taro 03:10:730 (5) - di x20y136 cool

Thanks Madoka-Bear

theramdans

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2015-08-22T07:26:27+00:00

Bearizm wrote:
Mod 4 Ticket >:)

Hard
00:03:477 (1) - ini jumpnya di object ini? nggak di 00:03:642 (2) - aja? gw putukan untuk remap intro dikit

02:10:235 (1) - ini gk susah di baca apa ya? stack di slider 7

02:14:686 (6,1,2) - questionable stack menurut gw. kalau bisa taro 1 di tempat lain aja..gak stack + rearrange dikit

Insane
00:03:477 (1) - gk dibuat 2 circles aja? kalau di apply, make sure buat jumpnya di 00:03:642 - done

00:47:158 (1) - ctrl+j terus taro di x172y52 done + reshaped dikit

01:09:082 (7) - gk mau di blanket sama 01:09:576 (1) - aja? done

02:19:466 (1) - kalau bisa jangan di stack, it's counter-intuitive imo karena object sebelum ini, lo ngikut vocal dan ini ngikut bg sound unstacekd + moved

02:32:158 (3) - ganti slider aja kah? biar ngikut vocal? 02:32:323 (4) - cuma background sound Enakan gini tbh

03:02:241 (2,3) - ketinggian spacingnya imo..reduced to 1.99x

03:10:895 (1,2) - potential bgt buat bikin jump. mungkin taro 03:10:895 (1) - di x100y263 dan taro 03:10:730 (5) - di x20y136 cool

Thanks Madoka-Bear

dopost cuz crap connection

Firmatorenio

120 posts

Joined September 2014

Firmatorenio 2015-08-22T10:03:44+00:00

Random thingy~

I'm sorry i didn't read the previous mods, 5 pages is a bit much for me

[Easy]
00:04:301 (2) - imo it'll be better if this slider was 1/1 longer, the following one starting 1/1 later and be 1/2 shorter.
00:47:158 (3) - dat vocal mapping, really... maybe 1/1 shorter? sounds more accentuated
02:16:664 (2) - i know you're mapping vocals, but this slider ends awkward imo
03:10:235 (3) - uh please make this 1/2 shorter, that's where song accentuates the beat

[Normal]
I really dislike some rhythms in this diff, which are there because of vocals, lmao:
00:27:378 (1) - awkward sliderend
00:47:158 (4,5) - just weird since the drums really accentuate the beat in the middle of the second slider
01:24:081 (3,4) - the end of the first slider just pleads to be a press, not a release

Also,
02:15:510 - this section's SV seems fast

[Hard]
Uh maybe lower hp a bit? This hard is quite a bit harder than average hard imo.

00:24:741 (1,2) - looks and feels like a jump
00:53:092 (6,7) - maybe stack?
02:10:400 (2) - oh Luna, yes you did unstack it, but now it's even less readable! i suggest x:469 y:61, but that's still pretty hard, maybe try to shape that pattern differently?
03:04:631 (2,3) - maybe stack them on (2)?

[Insane]
00:57:955 (6) - i strongly suggest to manually flowstack this
02:40:812 (2) - ^
03:02:241 (2) - ^
03:10:070 (3) - imo x:167 y:159 flows better

[A Mystery's Insane]
You can call VINXIS in and tell me that i can't pass this diff all day long. yea there was a bunch of 3px jump corrections i replaced with this line
Imo soft hitsounds don't fit all the way here.

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Uh 4 lines a diff not that bad, right?..

Side

1,127 posts

Joined October 2013

Side 2015-08-22T10:21:46+00:00

Hi from sleep-deprived #modhelp Insane test :v

SPOILER

04:55 theramdans: I need testplay, anyone?
04:56 Side: I wil :v
04:57 *theramdans is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/495782 nano x yuyoyuppe - Beautiful ground]
04:57 theramdans:

04:57 Side: too hard
04:58 RebellioNlol: i wanna test play
05:00 theramdans: normal was too hard lol
05:00 theramdans: ar5 op
05:01 theramdans: rip dat ending
05:03 Side: 01:16:005 (6) - could blanket better
05:03 theramdans: is it minor
05:03 Side: yeh
05:03 theramdans: low priority hue
05:03 theramdans: btw noted
05:04 Side: 01:31:829 (1,2) - I didn't really like how 1 looked especially considering it could have blanketted 01:30:180 (2) -
05:04 Side: then 2 also looks a little meh
05:05 Side: 01:41:719 (2) - also could use clean up
05:06 Side: 01:49:136 (1) - bring this down 2 ctrl down ticks so it looks more even throughout
05:06 theramdans: ok those blankets and positions are like a little degrees of
05:06 Side: 02:07:268 (8) - also could use cleanup
05:06 theramdans: huh, that slider blankets both objects after it
05:06 Side: 02:08:752 (1) - definitely needs cleanup
05:06 theramdans: crap minor
05:06 Side: either that one or 4
05:07 theramdans: aaaa too close, I just noticed
05:07 theramdans: yeah will work on that!
05:07 Side: 02:14:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - while you're at it might as well use slider to stream to make it a more even circle
05:08 theramdans: it was made by converting slider to stream
05:08 Firmatorenio: we need
05:08 Firmatorenio: convert stream to slider
05:09 Side: 02:32:158 (3) - move this to 120 168 02:32:323 (4) - to 216 136 and 02:32:488 (5,6) - to 308 180
05:09 Reditum: we need
05:09 Reditum: convert my ex-wife into someone that loves me
05:10 Side: 02:56:719 (8) - clean up slider end
05:10 Side: 02:59:686 (2) - use the spacing you had for 02:59:356 (1) - and 5
05:11 Side: k
05:11 theramdans: sorry I gtg away from my laptop hue
05:11 theramdans: throw your suggestion via pm
05:11 Side: nah that was just a quickie mod
05:11 Side: hence the cleanup focus
05:11 Side: also I'm tired x_x
05:12 theramdans: so
05:12 theramdans: it is basically fine
05:12 Side: no weird patterns map is pretty standard and fits the SD
05:12 theramdans: but only a few little minor stuff?
05:12 Side: just cleanup plz
05:12 Side: >v
05:12 Firmatorenio: SR?
05:12 Side: :v
05:12 theramdans: SD?
05:12 Side: star difficulty idk whatever
05:12 theramdans: wtf is that lol
05:13 theramdans: nah it is just how I map
05:13 Firmatorenio: star rating eh
05:13 theramdans: inb4 ezpz map
05:13 Side: might seem minor but it stood out and I wasn't looking for that stuff
05:14 theramdans: well I should look at the map thoroughly and at the smaller scald
05:14 theramdans: e
05:14 theramdans: yeah thanks for mentioning that

diraimur

547 posts

Joined December 2013

diraimur 2015-08-22T19:49:37+00:00

osss needs more nano maps

ez

00:03:642 (1,1) - 01:52:598 (2) - 02:40:070 (2) - weird for ez imo, but I guess *could* work (1/2 repeat sliders on somewhat high bpm, most new players try to completely follow sliders and it would create an awkward position, but then again, I don't know how easies work)
02:40:895 (3) - remove dis? (3/2 gap then 1/1 gap seems weird to play, especially considering its made for people who just started playing osss, but idk.)

nm

00:30:015 (1) - reduce to 1/1 and add a note after 1/2? sounds better like that imo
00:46:334 (2) - I am kinda going overboard for this but w/e:

for clarity?

00:53:092 - this should be clickable, either reduce slider by 1/1 and add note to 00:53:092 - , or reduce slider by 1/2, both works I think but I prefer 1/1.
03:07:928 (4) - remove this and 03:07:763 - put a 1/2 repeat slider and move 03:08:257 (1) - (though you shall keep current version if you want it to be easier which is up to you)

hd

00:03:477 - make it clickable please
00:03:807 - ^ (or make them 1/2 repeat slider)
00:31:829 - note?
01:53:752 (1,2,3) - place closer to eachother, gap is only 1/4 (even though slider leniency is there, don't forget that this is only hard difficulty.)
02:14:851 (1,2) - ^
02:57:048 (1,2,1) - ^

in

00:15:840 (3,4,5,6) - uhhh... 3>4-5-6 is weird, I'd consider some re-placements
00:30:015 (1,3) - imperfect stack
02:07:268 (8) - why is this close to 7's end? you haven't done that on other sliders. Could be misreaded as 1/4 gap

A Mystery's in

00:31:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow that spacing and shape
00:49:136 (3) - 2ninja4me consider placing somewhere else
00:52:268 (1,2) - kinda too close to eachother compared to what spacing you had on 1/4's
01:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - I personally find those awkward to snap
01:53:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow that spacing and shape 2
02:56:884 (3,4,1,2) - what

gl

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