P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[Clyine's Extra]

1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish slider head. strong symbals part. fixed
2. 00:06:450 (4) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC. fixed
3. 01:28:950 (6) - why added finish slider head? this part calm vocal sound.. blast. fixed

good luck!

340 wrote:

you updated my map after i modded two extras, so some of suggestions can be already fixed -_-

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good.

[Clyine's Extra]
so many claps. -_- Claps best hitsounds

1. 00:07:878 (1) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times you may make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap02u/da72502322.jpg its perfectly readable and playablw now. doing it your way causes to player to hit on a red tick without much of a point
2. 00:20:557 (7,1) - this blanket isn't perfect http://puu.sh/ap09z/480359213a.jpg Fixed
3. 00:30:735 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap0bO/59ae83390b.jpg Fixed
4. 00:27:878 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:34:307 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:36:807 (2) - finish doesnt fits here Fixed
7. 00:39:307 (1,2) - that overlap looks crappy ;( Fixed
8. 01:17:878 (2) - the fuck? this is TOO suddenly and TOO confusing. perfectly intuitive to me
9. 01:28:949 (6) - that sound is longer than 2 ticks. extend it to big white tick.

I prefer the way it sounds now

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from this queues !!


[GENERAL]

Tags conflict with Clyine's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Hard diff.
Tags conflict with Insane diff.
Tags conflict with Pjecoo's Easy diff.
Tags conflict with TestApple's Extra diff.

[Insane]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:271
[Clyine's Extra]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:450
GOOD LUCK !! :D
AiMod best mod

_Stan wrote:

hi m4m
[Normal]
00:18:950 (4) - (248,204) fixed
00:23:593 (1,3) - a little weird relook
00:26:807 (3,1) - blanket fixed
00:29:307 (1,2,3) - different DS fixed
00:35:735 (3,4) - ^ fixed
00:42:521 (5,1) - according to your DS before, you can decrease the ds here like 00:47:164 (5,6) - fixed
00:58:593 (2,3) - IDK NM can jump or not fixed
01:21:807 (5,2) - overlap it perfect fixed

[Hard]
00:26:450 (1,2) - overlap it perfect fixed
00:32:878 (5,6,1) - DS fixed
00:51:093 (4,1) - you can blanket it fixed
00:53:235 (4,6) - ^ fixed
01:02:521 (3,5) - blanket it more nice fixed
01:05:914 (2,5) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:19:664 (3) - down the curve fixed
00:21:628 (8,1) - blanket fixed
00:43:593 (8) - weird ok
00:45:021 (5,6,7) - DS fixed
00:51:985 (4) - (384,152) fixed

two EXs is so hard for me so I cannot mod, sorry

and GOOD LUCK!

DavidEd wrote:

m4m ^.^

excuse me if i may be unclear sometimes (not really an experienced modder xD)
this modding is all based on my opinions

Normal

too many claps mate

00:00:736 (1,3) - make them symmetrical http://puu.sh/arWI3/0a7bc64093.jpg ?? nah, its ok
00:03:235 (4) - move to x:112 y:124 nah, ds 1.0 i wanna keep
00:03:593 (1,2,3) - move to x:64 y:192 ^
00:05:200 (4) - move to x:308 y:208 ^
00:13:593 (3) - really weird slider keep
00:17:521 (6) - ^ ^
00:43:057 (1) - ^ and you could move it down to x:288 y:156 i wanna keep ds, but changed
00:55:021 (1) - weird slider lol you should realise by now this things are intentional
01:05:378 - no new combo fixed
01:10:378 (6) - weird slider keep
01:28:414 (1) - delete note fixed
01:28:950 - replace slider with a single note keep

use only one distance snap for normal maps. and work on the visual issues and spacing (use aimod).

Hard

same here as in the normal difficulty. kind of abusing the clap

00:29:307 (1,1) - those sliders really confused me the first time i played the map keep!
00:43:503 (6) - if you listen closely to the song the last note in that stream is a little bit early. maybe make it look like this? this is harder to play

this difficulty also had alot of weird sliders like in the normal one. i had no other problems with it tho, good job!

good luck with your map!

regenz wrote:

Form my M4M Queue p/3264006

[General]

Why 4 BG instead of use 1 BG and made storyboard to reduce the file size. will do this!
some diff has last section kiai time you can remove it so it'll be same for the rest of mapset. its GD so i keep

[Normal]

00:00:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should remove all clap in this part it not go well with the song fix
00:06:450 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this part is ok with clap however it need to reduce volume 35 percent fix
00:15:021 This loud volume timing make your clap is worst 40 percent is decent for me fix
00:15:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Spam Clap every beat is really bad You should only use at 2nd beat and 4th beat of measure. fix
remove clap on 1 ( 1st beat of measure )
clap on 2 is fine ( 2nd beat of measure )
remove clap on 3's head (start of slider 3rd beat of measure)
clap on 3's tail is fine ( end of slider 4th beat of measure)
and go on remove unnecessary clap
some place you cannot put it 00:20:735 (1) - just remove it put the clap only 1st and 3rd beat this is very basic hitsound for mapper.

00:26:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is good but some part is missing clap fix
00:35:021 (1,3,6) - add clap fix
00:38:414 (4) - add clap at end of slider fix
00:38:236 (3) - remove clap fix

again 00:43:057 ear destroying part reduce volume to 40 percent plz check and remove unnecessary clap make sure do like a red bold text above

00:52:164 kiai time also 40 percent and do as red bold text again fix

01:17:164 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - again fix hitsound plz fix

01:28:414 again 40 percent fix

[Hard]

same problem as Normal hit sound volume and placement
compare to insane it's very close gap Try to reduce the clustering of the note try to use 1 beat slider and / or 1 beat return slider rather than rapid pure circle without blank some hitsound use soft some use normal plz made it same as normal because it's all your difficult well insane same too will try to redo!

[Insane]

01:26:271 remove kiai time . make it same as hard and normal okay, but i change hard and normal.
same hit sound problem like other diff

more other than that weird place of newcombo seem like you use a vocal base to judge when to newcombo but that's not constant
newcombo is determine when player got a bonus hitpoint when hit a note so you can keep it constant.

I highly suggest you to start Newcombo base on Measure not vocal.



there 's 4 beat of measure 1 Big white line and 3 small white line Just new combo every big whiteline (first beat of measure)
so It keep a player gain life constant what ever song type. for Normal Easy and Hard
it depending how "cluster" of the note had.

but for me it's easy and normal IS NC every 8 beats for Hard is 8 beats also harder than that is 4 beats

but current hard is clustering is equal insane diff. so it's 4 beats. thank you! will use it

Goodluck

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, for my modding queue

SUPER BEAVER - Rashisa (TV Size)

[Normal]
- 00:23:593 (1,3) - try to improve this placing ? fix
- 01:10:378 (6,1) - improve the alignment of the (6) slider fix
- 01:11:985 (3,4,5) - try to blanket here - or something to make this pattern symetrical fix
- 01:21:450 (4,5) - blanket ? no need
- 01:27:878 (4) - improve the curve fix
- 01:26:807 (2,3) - align them? no need

[Hard]
This diff is really hard for a Hard diff. Maybe reduce a little the AR ? drop to 7.5
- 00:02:164 (1,3) - try a little blanket ? no need
- 00:12:164 (7,2,3) - hard to read for a medium player. Really. fix
- 00:21:985 (7,8,9,10) - try to make this easier to read ? no need
- 00:22:878 (1,2,3) - blanket here fix
- 00:29:307 (1,1) - hard to follow no need
- 00:32:521 (3,5) - avoid stacking fix
- 00:41:271 (4,5) - ^ fix
- 00:51:093 (4,1) - improve this blanket ? no need
- 00:56:807 (1,2,3,4) - improve the pattern ? fix
- 01:02:521 (3,5) - improve the blanket ???
- 01:07:521 (9) - be careful when using these sliders. ok

[Insane]
- 00:01:628 (5) - make a better form ? no need
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - avoid stacking ???
- 00:26:807 (4,5,6) - the (5) isn't aligned fix
- 00:45:021 (5,6,7) - improve the distances no need
- 01:20:557 (7,8) - stacki it with the slider end? no need
- 01:21:450 (2,3,6) - make the slider centered no need


Good luck to get this ranked!

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi!
I'm here for mod~ Note that these are only suggestions, and my English is poor anyway
Arghhh I love your profile pic (out of topic lol)


[Normal]
00:01:985 (3) - WTH is there a fixed turning point there? (So rude, sry for that) standard wave slider.
00:07:521 (3) - Seems not placing it in the nicer position suggestion? see nothing wrong
00:11:093 (4,1) - A little crashing each other fixed
00:24:843 (3) - This slider seems strange for me standard blanket slider
00:26:807 (3) - Change fixed turning point x:264 y:364 to x:276 y:324 fixed
00:29:307 (5,6) - NOOOOO !!! Don't place them like that TT rethink
00:29:307 (5) - NC fixed
00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - OMG I definitely love this part ty!
00:46:093 (7) - NC fixed
00:57:700 - Add a circle here to satisfy the vocal? rethink
01:01:093 (3) - It's too over the grid it is fine lol
01:22:878 (5) - NC fixed
01:23:235 (1) - No NC fixed

OMG A lot of Hard, Insane and Extra diffs... And I don't find big problems in them so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon!
Oh, I gave a star for your mapset too thanks!

NoHitter wrote:

[Insane]
- In general, your combos which go back on themselves e.g. 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) and 00:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) look odd because you're not making them into perfect triangles. For 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - a better look would be http://puu.sh/aCMYZ/798dce1b8d.jpg. I would suggest adjusting these combos a bit to avoid overlaps and make them look nicer. redone majority of them. i feel that some don't have to be perfect, so i left out a few.
- 00:01:450 (4,9) - 4 overlaps 7 here which looks ugly. AR is not fast enough to prevent the overlap. fixed!
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - Blanket these two properly. fixed!
- 00:03:771 (2,4) - Blanket these two properly as well. fixed!
- 00:05:200 (7) - Comment about the flow here. Place it more upwards, so the flow from the previous slider will fit it. http://puu.sh/aCMFl/d378e9bb52.jpg fixed!
- 00:07:878 (7,2) - Again, the overlap fixed!
- 00:12:164 (1,2,3) - The flow here is odd yet again. The slider points to the upper right, but your next combo goes from the bottom right to the upper left. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1) - Make the notes perfectly go on the slidertrack. http://puu.sh/aCMNP/100a8b104b.jpg fixed!
- 00:34:664 (9) - I expected this to have a similar shape with (8). fixed!
- 00:37:253 (3) - There really is no music basis for this note here. Remove. fixed!
- 00:37:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow of this combo is odd. Try positioning the objects so that they lead into each other. fixed!
- 00:51:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - Either make this into a titled square and overlap the two (1)s or make it into a pentagon. The current one looks so ugly :/ fixed!
- 01:23:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of notes here is offputting a bit. fixed, i think.

[Hard]
- I've noticed that this diff has a lot of changes I've mentioned that can be applied for other parts of the diff (including flow). Please take the initiative to change them as well.
- 00:01:093 () - There's a heavy beat here. Place a note here instead of making it inside the slider. fixed!
- 00:02:075 () - Don't hear any heavy music here to warrant a note. fixed!
- 00:07:164 (3,4) - Generally speaking a good flowing slider to slider combo would usually involve either a similar shape but rotated or flipped. This plays oddly. http://puu.sh/aCNtS/dd18bcfcee.jpg Fix the others all well in this combo. gonna keep for now.
- 00:14:307 (3,4) - Same comment as earlier. Although this plays much better since (3) leads into (4). [Also make (4) lead into (1) of the next combo] ^
- 00:17:878 (2,3,4,5) - The overlaps look ugly IMO. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1,3,4) - You used a curved slider then switched to straight-edged ones... They look aesthetically unappealing. keeping, i think its cool
- 00:35:021 (2,3,4,5) - Slider are touching each other partly. Please move them further a bit. fixed!
- 01:14:128 (6,7) - Make the first one repeat once only and then extend the repeats of the second. fixed!

[Normal]
- 00:01:985 (3) - The red tick at the middle makes this slider look odd. fixed!
- 00:11:100 (4) - Unsnapped. fixed!
- 00:16:807 (6) - Rotate selection center by -20 to make this fit better. fixed!
- 00:26:807 (3,1) - Incorrect spacing. fixed!
- 00:55:021 (1) - This may confuse players. A short slider with more than 1 repeat. fixed!
- 00:56:271 (3,4) - Same comment regarding flow as other diffs. fixed!

[Overall]
- I'm sorry, but IMO this map isn't ready for ranking yet sorry!

kamisamaaa wrote:

add some suggestion on insane diff >.<
no KD for this post.
[insane]
00:02:075 (8) - overmapped and sound strange. i wanna keep!
00:03:057 (2) - change this to a note and slider. because you miss a strong drum on 00:03:235 fixed!
00:04:664 (6,7) - I have a good idea here. 00:04:664- here add a note and begin a 1/1 slider from 00:04:843- . and use 0.5x slider speed to this slider. a slow slider really fit the music here. good idea, looks fun!
00:13:414 (1,2,3) - strange rhythm. the music here is every two should be a group.thats means 00:13:414- here should be a note this is fix
and make same pattern with 00:12:521 (2,3,4,5,6) - . and begin these slider on white tick. keep jump
00:24:843 (5) - add finish. because of the music done
01:28:593 (2) - also suggest you change to a slow slider end at 01:28:860- okay, change sldier
01:26:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - the jump hear look casual and just up and down a little boring. fix

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, there's a mod in progress. Feel free to apply the suggestions for the diffs I've already checked. I will edit this post and finish the mod soon.

[box=an unfinished modpost]Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Make sure that Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This thing is used only for storyboads and you don't have one. fixed
2. Clyine's Extra has no video enabled, make sure that this will get fixed. fixed
3. Do you really need to place names of the mappers on the BG? It's not necessary at all and it makes your map ~1mb heavier. You could also use diff-specific storyboard elements and just ONE background image for this reason, which would be more reasonable. reduced, GD, should be fine now.

[Normal]

1. You can try to focus a bit more on improving you flow since it's the main issue I see with this diff. It is not bad even as it is, but it can be improved.
2. 00:16:807 (6,1) - minor - you can try to make a blanket-slider here to improve the appearance of this pattern and to make it look neater. fixed
3. 00:19:128 - please, place a circle here. There's a clearly audible sound in music which should be mapped in order to make the rhythm more logical and natural. fixed
4. 00:27:521 (1) - according to your pattern this new combo is extra. It is out of your pattern, feels irregular and is not really necessary here. Remove it, please. fixed
   Note: 00:38:950 (1) - same thing happens here. fixed
5. 01:28:950 (6) - the head of the slider is inaudible, which is unrankable. Make at least head of the slider audible (20%+ volume). fixed throughout
   
   Not bad, since so many modders have already checked it. It can be better, but for a first map it looks cool!

[Hard]

1. Setting AR to 7,5 might match better with your slider velocity and will also make the spread more balanced. fixed
2. 00:01:271 (2,3,4) - minor - please, check the spacing, it feels broken and does not play good, because there is no any reason to put a lower-DS pattern here. fixed
3. 00:26:807 - 00:27:521 - 00:28:235 - the vocals at these beats are completely ignored which makes the sliders feel off and 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4) - the whole pattern feels rather onfusing and maybe even a bit unpleasant while playing. fixed
4. 00:29:307 (1,2) - the second reverse on such sliders is really hard to notice and feels confusing. I highly suggest you to remove it and replace them with something else to make the diff more playable. Te song is relaxing, so, there should not be any tricky/confusing patterns, imo. fixed
5. 00:32:878 (5,6) - the repeats on the blue ticks sound overmapped and feel forced to play. Mind replacing these sliders with two circles? This would improve the playability and fit better with the rhythm. fixed
6. 00:41:360 (2,4) - these two are overmapped. They don't really make sense with the vocals and music and they seem out of your patterns. Also, note, that there are 3 harder diffs and having overmapped pattern in hard seems really weird. fixed
7. 00:45:200 (7,8,9,10,11) - the jumpy pattern seems to be off music, please, pay more attention to it and see if it is playable or not. I had no problems with reading it, but I didn't understand the logic here, so I'm leaving it up to you. i think it goes along, but it might just be my imagination, keeping for now.
8. 00:49:485 (2,3) - select them and press Ctrl+G. It will swap them on the timeline, it will prevent the overlap (00:48:950 (10,2)) and improve your flow slightly. fixed, and mirrored
9. 00:51:450 (7) - quite the same as 00:29:307 (1,2). If you listen closer, you can hear that the vocals kick in at 00:51:628 - not at 00:51:450. Which means that there should be a circle at 00:51:450. apparently her makes a sound at 00:51:450, so i feel that the 4 beats in a slider is warranted.
10. 01:00:735 (1) - I would not ignore the beat here. It feels empty and bugs me quite a bit + it ruins your consistent pattern a bit. fixed
11. 01:11:985 (4,5) - that would be a good idea to replace them with 1/2 slider in order to emphasize the beats on the white ticks. fixed
12. 01:14:396 (7) - it is realy hard to tell that the slider will have more repeats than the previous one. Place a new combo there, so players will be able to read it easier. fixed
    
    Flow and some rhythm mistakes are the things you should focus on. I think that you can actually make the diff much better.

[Insane]

1. The DS you've picked feels way too agressive. For a relaxing song with such a high Dlider Velocity I'd recommend to use a lower one. Please, consider re-arranging the notes with a lower DS(x1,0, maybe?). Please keep in mind that there're two extra diffs, so your Insane should not be a super-hard one. i tone down the beginning, but i'd like to keep the difficulty.
2. 00:05:200 - you can reduce volume on the tail of a slider to match better with the music. The music kinda fades here, so, reducing volume of the slider should be a nice idea. fixed.
3. 00:22:164 (8) - haven't you missed a new combo here? It feels like you did because the chain is much longer than the others and your combo-pattern seems to be broken here. yeap, fixed.
   
   There're a lot of patterns that bug me, but most of the issues I see are due to high Distance Spacing, so, reducing it might help you to improve the diff a greately.

You have a lot of things to improve, keep going!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue! Don't expect to much because im still a noob modder, but I'll try my best

[Insane]

00:58:772 (3) - Have this blanket 4 a little better fix

Well that's the end of the mod!
Sorry it's so short, but i dont really see anything wrong with the map
Hopefully this will help you a bit

GL Getting this ranked! the jumps are really fun

xxdeathx wrote:

rechecking no KD

easy is missing dont need, NHIX mapset.

map could still be a lot neater. i'll be talking about your hard diff but it can very well apply to the others.
some of your sliders of the same length are more curved than others and when they're next to each other it would look better for corresponding sliders to be congruent. also use copy/paste more often and rotate/flip the sliders so that they're the exact same shape. it'll be much neater that way.
also, using too many slider points or having red slider points can be great if they work out fine but really ugly and ruin the consistency of the map if they don't. that's the case with a lot of your sliders like 00:10:021 (3,4) - in your hard so i'd just stick with the simple 2 or 3 slider point sliders. this section 00:12:164 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - was really nice compared to the rest of your map because it followed the neatness things i just specified. but please try to stay away from 00:16:450 (4,5) until you're more familiar with these. even i've never used a slider with a single red point because i don't know where they're good for.
stuff like 00:07:521 (4,6) - 00:08:414 (7,8) - in your hard should be parallel (use copy/paste)
00:30:021 (3,4,5,6) - this part doesn't use time-distance spacing (distance snap) so it's extremely hard to play and misleading.
i was talking about consistency. you want to reuse patterns in corresponding parts of the music and keep your mapping style consistent throughout, so when you get creative like 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - it conflicts with the style you have in the rest of the map.
01:05:200 (5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are way too hard and the flow isn't good either
01:19:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - way too hard too

your normal is a little better than your hard in these regards but the same things still apply. patterns like 00:38:950 (3,4) - don't fit in as much as http://puu.sh/aGARt/f455ac2adf.png

let's have a look at your insane: i didn't mod it earlier but i'll point out things now
00:01:985 (7,8,9,2,3) - again, needs to be neater. you might as well fully stack them or place one of them at a different location to avoid this messy overlap
00:26:093 (1,2) - the consistency i mentioned before. you should see an opportunity to make this symmetrical
00:42:878 (4) - i understand what you're trying to do here but a 1/4 slider pointing the other way isn't good when there's a stream of circles following it
01:04:664 (6,1,2) - it's better and quite possible if you don't overlap them at all
01:26:271 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - way harder than the rest of your map. without these circles, this diff would be 4.47 stars compared to 4.78 earlier. having 13 2.xx distance 1/2 circles in a row is way too hard for a 4.5 star map. the end can be harder but if it boosts the star difficulty by over 0.3, that's too much.

well it's clear you've put a lot of effort into this and want this ranked, but it is your first and only map. you still need some more experience to make it up to ranking quality standards, which i don't feel it has met yet. i did give you some overall and specific issues, but nohitter (an ex-BAT) has a better understanding than i do and now that your map's up to 50 SP, you could try poking a BAT to give you more advice. star priority generally doesn't mean anything as far as i've seen, but having this much usually puts map relatively high on the pending list and shows your dedication so mention that to the BAT and it's likely you'll find one to go over this map with you.

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, From my queue!

Your map is 'handsome' :3

[> General <]

1. - Do you even need the mapper's name on the background? I don't know if this is against the criteria, but this is just my opinion. o_o i like it

[> Normal <]

1. 00:12:164 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better diamond flow? And watch the spacing. going for a triangle rather, the slider is a separate pattern.
2. 00:16:093 (3) - Add clap done
3. 00:19:307 (6,7,8,1) - A bit boring when staying on one place of grid, Try making a Tornado formation here. And add NC on slider (6), new track. changed
4. 00:22:878 (5,3) - Don't know if this overlap tail is intentional, I perfer a stack here, watch the spacing. Also, add clap on slider tail. keep
5. 00:28:235 (6,7) - A little ugly blanket, unsharp slider? keep
6. 00:33:593 (3,4,1) - Make a Triangle form here? keep
7. 00:38:950 (3,4) - You broke the flow here, make a blanket or a parallel here, it doesn't play well imo. keep
8. 00:42:878 (1,2) - Since there is a downbeat here, swap NC fixed
9. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - Overlap, remake as blanket. Also, remove clap on circle (2), I only hear vocal track, not the song track here. overlap is fine
10. 01:00:021 (1) - Make a blanket here? it might look better when you're make symmetry with the next notes on 01:00:735 (2,3) - keep
11. 01:22:521 (1) - Add clap fixed
12. 01:23:593 (4,8) - Same reason as 00:22:878 (5,3) - idk the combo you're linking to is weird
13. 01:25:378 (8,2) - You should've made a symmetry here... keep, not a fan of symmetry
14. - Some nazi issues, but nice diff!

[> Hard <]

1. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - Good pattern, but it's not complete, Can't you curve the last slider for a full one? keep, it goes with the vocals
2. 00:04:664 (4,5) - This doesn't consider a jump, it's just a weird spacing when you've used 1.4x/1.5x spacing all the way here. Could you fix that? fixed!
3. 00:13:057 (2) - Curve this to blanket the next slider or try to flow with the previous slider. changed
4. 00:25:021 (1,1) - Likely an Overlap, try stacking the slider tail. too far apart to be an issue
5. 00:29:307 (1,2) - Make a parallel or symmetry here. keep~
6. 00:32:164 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:35:021 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:45:200 (7) - Add NC fixed
9. 00:48:950 (9,3) - Same as 00:25:021 (1,1) - keep, too far to actually be an issue
10. 00:51:807 (7) - Same reason as normal diff, remove clap. fixed
11. 01:01:450 (3) - Remove clap fixed
12. 01:02:343 (5) - Add NC fixed
13. 01:05:200 (5,6,7,8) - Looks bad, remake it perfectly. fixed
14. 01:17:700 (1,1) - Remove NCs, still on the same track, omg.. i wanna keep the effect of this
15. - Add claps > 00:08:950 (8) - / 00:30:021 (2) - / 00:31:093 / 00:31:807 (4) - / 00:32:521 (1) - / 00:33:235 (2) - / 00:35:378 (1) - / 00:36:093 (2) - / 00:36:807 (4) - / 00:37:521 (1) - / 00:38:235 (2) - / 00:38:950 (3) - / 00:39:664 (4) - / 01:23:235 (7) - / That's all~ fixed some! thanks!
16. - Well, pretty much a great diff, GJ!

Insanes are fine, I can feel this map should be ready for a BAT-mod, Try getting one!
And.. Good Luck!

INSANE
7 needs NC because SV change that is not natural. may help with the hp drain during silent section too
why SV change to slwoer section like 1 beat early?
NCS during the vocals jumps - best one NC every 4 circles
the triangular pattern with sliders really weird cuz they dont flow into each other at all
before kiai teh "DAKARA" should be the emphasized thing. there is an extra circle before that may want to be unNC'd or moved or something
during kiai there's a reverse slider that ends on downbeat sounds crap
NCs after kiai wat inconsistent with 1 bar pattern
ending weird NCs too

there's also a gross slider somewhere

HARD

NCS are gross all over the place
1/2 stack in very first section out of place much
a bunch of passive sliders n stuff. on vocals and downebats (downbeats more importnat but yeah)
some weird triangle thing NC would make spacing more readable
rhythms before kiai way too extreme cuz of the triples under slidesr
t eh dakara thing again
rhythms in kiai are really odd
after the spinner what is that rhythm
right before end silenter part, there's a triple vocal thing, then another triple vocal thing after 1 beat, but he has triple patterns separated by 1/2 beat and it is really stupid

testplay 2:
around 1/4 into it there's a weird wave slider that is kidn fo gross
the 2 reverse slidesrs somewhere in kiai that are parallel i read reallywrong every time

flip dat last slider so mouse drops into the curve

NORMAL

le wave and blanket stuff of it
the circle jump tthen stack thing hard read.
some square stuff is that a jump or something?
distance snap is not here or my keyboard is broken
doubles eww
dat slider
SV change in normal umm no
he's like skipping thedownbeat for the slow SV part and i dont get it
triple? just make it a 1/2 slider

rhythm is confusing af
stacks are confusing af

pishifat wrote:

shitmodfromm4m4m4n4nm434 uighi

i forgot to enable your custom combo colors so everything is green/blue in screenshots. oops

general

1. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

   ...so get an easy fuark

insane

1. in general, you've got a lot of passive sliders throughout the map. i won't point them all out, but they're rather uncomfortable to play, so you should be able to find them yourself.
2. 00:04:843 (7) - needs a NC because of the unexpected SV change. would help with hp drain during silent section as well
3. 00:07:878 (7,1) - shoudl swap NCs for the sake of your 1 measure combo pattern. makes it so the emphasis on the guitar thing on 7 is more clear
4. 00:13:414 (7,1) - pretty sure this was meant to stack, and if not, the game is making it stack, so move it more to the left
5. 00:24:843 (5,1) - sounds like the slider should be in 5's current posit...
6. 00:26:093 (1) - this SV change is definitely too early. it should be moved to the large white tick, since that's when the instrumental stuff actually gets softer or wahtever. right now you've got a reeeeaally passive slider that plays very unnaturally have this thingy going on for 2 diffs, trying to keep
7. 00:30:021 (5) - shoudl NC for the sake of readability. you did so at 00:32:878 (1) - as well
8. 00:33:593 (5) - ^
9. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - i usually like these kinds of patterns, but these seem to not flow into each other at all. it's hard to say this, but hanzer does the same idea a whole lot better in miss you at 02:36:811 (1) - changed it up a little
10. 00:47:878 (6) - breaks your 1 NC every large white ticking comboing pattern. should have an NC
11. 00:51:450 (1,2) - you may want to even swap the NCs on these so the "dakara" vocals thing, which is obviously the focus there, is emphasized
12. 01:13:950 (1,9) - these should follow the same circular motion as the stream with their slider bodies. right now they're kind of... not
13. 01:21:985 (5) - breaks your about 1 NC every large white tick pattern. should have a NC
14. 01:26:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i know i'm mentioning NCs a lot, but i can't understand this very well. the circles are mapping the backbeat stuff, so it would make sense to NC according to that, which would mean 4 circles then NC instead of the 6 you have here for some reason. would look like this on the timeline with NCs following what you've mapped i have no idea what i was doing,

hard

1. passivesliderseverywhere
2. the NC pattern you're using is... uh... not a pattern. you're switching between one every downbeat to one every other downbeat so much that i can't interpret very well. it really should be consistent throughout the difficulty. redoing
3. 00:01:807 (3,4,1) - i honestly managed to misread this. it plays a lot better if you have the same spacing between each of them, meaning have all of it be jumps or all of it stacked. otherwise bleh
4. 00:24:485 (6) - passivesliderstuffs return.
5. 00:26:093 (1) - 00:37:521 (1) - same thing as insane keepo
6. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - shouldn't these be spaced equally? they're the same slider and meant to be symmetrical (sort of), so yeah
7. 00:42:878 (1) - quite the jump for this difficulty. should really just have this between 00:42:164 (3) - and 00:43:057 (2) - instead of a stack, since that would fix things
8. 00:45:735 (4) - really wouldn't have this kind of a jump thing from 2x distance to 1x distance in a hard difficulty, but if you're really reluctant to change it, it needs an NC to show how it's differently spaced than the jumps at 00:45:200 (1,2,3) - , yet the same rhythm.
9. 00:49:843 (4,5,6) - rather difficult for a hard diff. i would really consider cutting back on this by ignoring the triples like you did for 00:49:485 (2,3) -
10. 00:51:450 (7) - may make more sense to do something like...
11. 01:13:593 (3,4,5) - don't really see the need for at triple here when it sounds the same as the rest of the 1/2 stuff
12. 01:17:700 (1,1,1) - managed to misread this during two testplays since the passiveness of 01:17:700 (1) - is so extreme and the random NCs wat removed NCs but i wanna keep the pattern.
13. 01:24:128 (2,3,4,5) - these played pretty weirdly...

normal

1. passive sliders are an issue here as well, especially in the section before the kiai. in normal they're often unavoidable, but there's a lot of avoidable ones here nonetheless
2. 00:00:736 (1,3) - visually speaking, these are... not appealing. blankets and stuff
3. 00:01:807 (2,3) - & 00:03:593 (1,2) - it's rather confusing having...
4. 00:18:593 (3,4,5) - what is this spacing? it is not spacing. that is what it is. wtf i have no idea
5. 00:20:735 (1,2) - watwatwat. distance snap kind of important which you already know
6. 00:26:093 - "you're gonna hate me but" having SV changes as variable as this in a normal is unheard of. if you can find me a normal diff that does this, i'll say otherwise, but i've never seen one. redid everything
7. 00:29:307 (1,2) - #spacing
8. 00:37:521 (1) - super strong beat in hte middle of the slider wat
9. 00:44:307 (2,3,4) - triples like this (i know it's not on 1/4, but still) are rather "hard" and should just have the first two circles replaced with a 1/2 slider
10. 01:11:807 (2,3) - stack like this would be very easily misinterpreted as 01:04:307 (2,3) - 's rhythm, so you should just space out 2,3 with distance snap magic

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Xinely wrote:

M4M from my Queue



pretty much fixed EVERYTHING, thanks for really good mod! remapped a lot of parts as well!

• 
  General

1. i don't find source which written tv size on title, i found http://vgmdb.net/album/47130 and just use "rashisa" so remove tv size from title and move it to tags instead below
2. if you don't fix above, at least write "らしさ ( TV Size) " to has consistency with Romanised title lol
3. remove pjecoo from tags, since you removed his/her easy diff
4. uh oh your normal diff higher than 2 stars. you should add Easy diff then here or make less 2 stars of Normal diff

• 
  Normal

1. 00:00:736 (1,3) - those claps here imo not really emphasize the music. the music just a cymbal so finishes are enough, i mean just remove the claps lol
2. 00:00:736 (1,3) - i'm sure there is still a way to make better blanket here, i can't give example since i'm bad at blanketing orz
3. 00:03:593 (1) - usually stack makes newbie become confuse so unstack it with move to 180,32
4. 00:04:843 - skipping cymbal here is bad since the cymbal is really loud :< , change the rhythm like http://puu.sh/aLRd8/a290c9cfdd.jpg instead
5. 00:06:450 (1) - i hear a cymbal sound at slider's head so add finish to emphasize it
6. 00:08:950 (5) - well just my taste but i kinda dislike how flow works here. i prefer to use circular flow instead by moving the circle to 436,176
7. 00:10:021 (2) - nazi, inconsistency spacing (1,07x) so please placed the slider with 1,0x spacing
8. 00:16:271 (4,5) - how about replace these circles with one slider instead since 00:16:450 - still has sound, imo slider fits the best here
9. 00:17:878 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,26x) make sure use 1,0x o_o
10. 00:21:450 (2) - inconsistency spacing (1,09x) here
11. 00:24:843 (3) - the string sound is really loud here. use finish to emphasize it?
12. 00:26:093 (1) - inconsistency spacing again, altho for blanket, you should use consistent spacing
13. 00:26:450 (2) - finish here. cymbal
14. 00:26:093 (1,2) - swap the NC. yeah nazi but the music has changed on the stanza
15. 00:27:164 - the time has so loud drum sound here. add clap here and remove clap on 00:27:521 - . yeah making inconsistency but the music forces it
16. 00:28:593 - same as above, remove clap on 00:28:950 - and add to 00:28:593 -
17. 00:32:878 - and 00:34:307 - are you sure to skip map this time? have loud drum sounds here. i would say to map these times
18. 00:37:878 - finish here, as usual cymbal appearing
19. 00:37:878 (1) - hmm imo the slider can be neater here, hmm try blanketing instead http://puu.sh/aMdJX/77959708b8.jpg ?
20. 00:44:307 (2) - both head and tail have inconsistency spacing. use 1,0x instead please
21. 00:47:878 (4,5) - how about make a blanket pattern here? ofc the design will be neater and the flow will be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910682
22. 00:51:450 (1) - give a little rest after spin at least 2/1 gap, so here i would suggest to remove 00:51:450 (1,2) - these circles
23. 01:03:235 (6) - please avoid to stack pattern on Normal, it hard to read :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910693
24. 01:04:307 (2) - avoid the stack too
25. 01:13:235 (5) - ctrl+G to has better flow here, i mean more natural flow? lol
26. 01:17:164 (1) - remove this note. please give 2/1 gap of rhythm for little rest after spin
27. 01:19:664 (1) - avoid stack too. also has inconsistency spacing (1,06x) here
28. 01:20:735 - finish because cymbal lol
29. 01:21:093 (3) - oh 320,180 for better blanket with previous :<
30. 01:21:807 (4) - if you agree with above, 220,120 and fix next inconsistency spacing lol
31. 01:23:593 (4) - finish on head too since i heard cymbal
32. 01:26:450 (1,3) - please avoid the stack
33. 01:28:593 (5) - so nazi, 344|284 for better blanket

• 
  Hard

1. would be better to have same HP and OD here for consistency. how about HP OD 5,5?
2. 00:00:736 (1) - the flow from this slider to next slider is bad. just an easy solution, flip this slider with ctrl+J, should be as 00:00:736 (1) -
3. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - nazi, better blanket please :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910727
4. 00:07:164 (3) - i guess this slider is too closer with next slider. move to 156,264 instead to make neater placement
5. 00:08:771 (8) - please forget the normal spacing and move to 224,256. too closer again with previous and next objects
6. 00:10:021 (3) - try to make the shape of this slider same with previous and next sliders so it would be look neater here? http://puu.sh/aMfij/19c51672b8.jpg
7. 00:13:057 (2) - nazi, this slider would be better to play if has same spacing from previous to next. move to 288,268 instead o3o
8. 00:16:450 (4,5,6) - oh you can make better blanket again here. i mean like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910948
9. 00:18:235 (3) - the idea is good but too close pattern here, kinda messy. you can make it neater with move to 384,148
10. 00:18:950 (5) - here too. 272,276 :>
11. 00:24:843 (1) - finish on head please. that cymbal :<
12. 00:26:450 - here too. finish because cymbal
13. 00:43:593 - finish too :<
14. 00:46:450 - the string sound on this map is really loud imo. i guess map this time please. just use circle from 00:46:271 - and 1/2 slider on 00:46:450 - would be fine
15. 00:47:521 (4,5) - too close with previous too. 1 grid down :> , if you fix this one 00:48:235 (6,7) - 1 grid down too
16. 00:49:307 (1) - finish again, cymbal
17. 00:56:271 (4) - finish on head too, cymbal
18. 00:56:271 (4) - also the flow is kinda bad here. try rotate -30 degree of clockwise and arrange like http://puu.sh/aMkhp/1c65726775.jpg
19. 00:57:700 (6) - wrong rhythm here since 00:57:878 - has a cymbal. do this http://puu.sh/aMkmW/3ea8fd3c60.jpg instead
20. 00:58:771 (3) - too close again. please make neater this design, try move to 468,148 and 00:59:128 (4) - 288,88
21. 01:06:807 (2,3) - too close each other too. please increase the spacing slightly
22. 01:09:843 (1) - too close, move to 104,272
23. 01:14:396 (1) - aw too curvy, hard to read. try http://puu.sh/aMkA2/a5ff363d31.jpg would be fine
24. Not bad but some patterns still can improved a lot here, i don't mention all hitsounds here so please fixed hitsound that you've fixed from Normal

• 
  Insane

1. OD-1 so OD 7 instead. OD 8 too high here nope, keep!
2. 00:03:771 (2) - oh overlapped with 00:04:128 (4) - :< , please avoid it. move the circle 00:03:771 (2) - 232,212 instead
3. 00:09:128 (5) - stack feels too easy to play in this insane actually, i prefer to unstack by moving the circle to 228,344
4. 00:12:164 (1) - i kinda disagree with no jump at the stanza(cymbal too) so i would suggest to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1911087 for jump and better flow to
5. actually this diff is fine but still has some improvement that i guess i already say too much in Hard diff. so just try analyze more to make the diff become neater? i'm tired actually *fainted*

[/notice]

sorry to give quick checking on 2 of last diffs. i'm totally tired orz
oh make sure you fix the diffs name http://puu.sh/aMkHe/40962b7035.png

Good Luck then

Xanandra wrote:

fixed most~

[Insane]

Minor hitsounds suggestions:

00:50:200 - Add clap
00:50:378 (9) - Take out clap
00:50:735 - Add clap

[Hard]

00:35:378 - Missing clap?
00:36:093 - Missing clap?
01:04:664 (4) - Slider should start at 01:04:843 - just like you did with 01:07:700 (5) -
01:13:235 - Missing clap?
01:13:950 - Missing clap?

[Normal]

00:19:307 (1) - The fact that youre using this slider this way, kinda shows that you tried to follow the vocals, but I think you did it wrong, since the vocals actually lands at 00:19:575 - and 00:19:843 - (basically extend slider by 1/4 tick, if you do so, dont forget to adjust hitsounds) remap
00:51:807 (2) - Id delete this beat, its a filler beat, and it can easily make players confused, so just delete it to avoid that. Actually, if you could end spinner at 00:51:450 - as well, would be perfect
01:27:521 - Missing clap?
01:27:878 - Take out clap?
01:28:593 - Take out clap too?

[Easy]

00:40:735 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish on all the slider starts? Seems like you half done these hitsounds since you put the finishes on your other diffs, except this one. Anyways, for next time theres an app that can help you with that: t/131540
00:49:307 (1) - Same comment about the spinner from normal diff. In the end should look like this: http://puu.sh/aNr93/9006dcb8a9.jpg

Midge wrote:

here for the m4m

[Easy]

00:10:735 (3) - idk about this slider, it's very 2007-esque. a regular curve would be more recent (and cooler) but this is really just up to you. i think its fine, altho looking pretty old :I
00:17:521 (4) - this blanket can be improved (move to x:236 y:57) use approach circles when making blankets nazi
00:52:164 (1) - have this slider be at the same angle as 00:53:593 (1) eg: http://puu.sh/aQmzd/a88ceb97f6.jpg
01:23:235 (4,2) - wonky overlap :S move 1 over to the right, than adjust to mantain ds http://puu.sh/aQmI2/91cd19e9d7.jpg

[Normal]

00:23:593 (1) - this has to be moved down, as it overlaps the hp bar
00:24:843 (3) - don't do this, just use one anchor point http://puu.sh/aQn0V/9a020557a6.jpg keeping since there's nothing wrong with current slider
00:53:950 (4,5,6) - ds inconsistency here

[Hard]

00:16:628 (5) - i suggest ncing this
00:17:164 (7) - ^
01:05:378 (6,7,8) - space evenly to make a nicer triangle http://puu.sh/aQnna/be2d2ef089.jpg
01:14:128 (5,1) - confusing, just use 1 repeating slider, or two with the same amount of repeats

there's a large amount of ds inconstency. it's ok in hards in small doses, but there is a lot in this diff that leaves it looking kinda sloppy and hard to read.

[Insane]

(superficially) fine imo :S finally all the work i put into this diff shows LOL

Solid map, keep working on it.

Learning25 wrote:

[Insane]

1. ASDLKFJALKSD THIS MAP IS SO MUCH FUN!!!!! It's going to be hard to find bad things
2. 00:42:878 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Right now the steam looks like this nah!~
3. 01:14:218 (2) - should move up ~12 grids (y=80) so that it flows with the curve better.
4. 01:27:878 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think you should keep the same jump pattern you were using in the last two gonna keep~
5. I think that's it, really nice difficulty, really fun to play.

[Hard]

1. Great map as well.
2. HP feels a lot nicer at 5.5 a lot of NC, maybe change if more complains
3. I think this 00:11:985 (6) should be moved closer to 00:12:164 (1) , and have the 6 start the combo, because the vocal line is leading into that slider.
4. Really like the end slider at 01:28:950 (2). ds is fine, plus i'm following backbeat
5. Hitsounds sound great. Really nice use of the claps.
6. Your jumps are really fun to play, and easy to follow, great job!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:807 (2) - I'd put this away from the slider, like what you have at 00:04:664 (2,3).
2. 01:11:807 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:43:057 - I think 50% is too loud for the claps :S constant in diffs

[Easy]

1. 01:15:200 (1) - This spinner ends too quick for an easy map. it is fine

I feel like I hardly helped at all, but this is a really good mapset. You're a great mapper, hope to see it ranked~ thank you! thanks for the compliemtns

Inyuschan wrote:

Hi, from my queue o3o

General:

1. Disable Widescreen Support in Easy, you don't have SB.

Easy:

1. 00:52:164 (1) - Add finish o3o
2. 00:53:593 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:55:021 (2) - Then add NC~

Normal:

1. 00:23:593 (1) - Fix this: http://puu.sh/aW191/220110fb76.jpg Is touching scorebar ;_; so sad, i already change before. some people scorebar too big
2. 00:37:878 (1) - Better something like this? http://puu.sh/aW1dh/4e53552b35.jpg i like it str8
3. 01:19:664 (1, 2) - Add NC in (2) instead of (1).

Hard:

1. 00:17:164 (1) - Remove NC. i was afraid the spacing would be a problem, idk changing for now
2. 01:20:735 (7, 1) - Add NC in (7) instead of (1).

Insane:

1. 00:01:985 (7, 1) - NC in (7).
2. 00:42:164 (3) - NC. drain is not that bad

That's all, good luck.

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. It's only ideas!

Insane: 2.0 SV? Exra: 1.80 SV? Okay...

[Insane]

00:10:378 (5) - Delete slider, and add circle here: 00:10:378 - . Move 00:10:735 (1) - slider here: 00:10:557 - , and change slider end here: 00:10:914 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3nj/f2809319b6.jpg Sounds better. interesting idea, however percussion at 00:10:557 - is ignored, which i don't want.
00:11:807 (4,5) - CTRL + G not feeling it
00:12:164 (1) - CTRL + G nah~ prefer current pattern
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00:16:628 (1) - Remove circle.
00:16:271 (6) - Add once repeat.
00:16:807 (7) - Add NC
Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3sy/78f14b5b23.jpg sorry but the beat at 00:16:628 (1) is really important.
-----------
00:31:093 (2) - Two circle is better! vocals
00:38:235 (2,3) - Move here: 00:38:414 - and put circle here: 00:38:235 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3zP/8fc0b9a32b.jpg sliderend on 00:38:593 - which is bad, powerful drum
01:01:628 (4) - Move circle here: x: 392 y: 296 keeping pattern
01:10:378 (5) - Remove slider, put circle here: 01:10:378 -,and move 01:10:735 (1) - slider here: 01:10:557 - . Put circle here: 01:11:271 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3Hs/164a1dc343.jpg Sounds better! (Vocal) really good, thanks!
01:15:200 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! keeping unless its a really big issue

[Hard]
AR: 7!

00:08:236 (2) - Two circle is better! nope
00:13:057 (2) - Remove slider, and put circle here: 00:13:235 - not fitting
00:17:521 (3) - Two circle is better! why though
01:15:021 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! same as insane
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01:18:057 (2) - Remove circle, and move 01:17:700 (1) - slider here: 01:17:878 - Sounds better! vocals on blue tick, no change
01:18:235 (2,3) - Replace them.Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW417/17a1f42e2e.jpg nah
----
01:25:378 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! nothing to map to

[Normal]

00:22:164 (3) - add clap the slider end.
00:24:664 (2) - ^
01:13:235 (5) - Add clap, the slider head.
01:13:771 (6) - Add clap. SLider end.
01:24:307 (5) - ^
01:25:378 (7,1) - Hmm? 1.45 Distance? Unranked! Please, use 1.0x distance!

[Easy]

Good.


Good Luck. (And sorry, my english is horrible)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, from my queue, no kd please.

Here is a screenshot of my score, first play.

SPOILER

• 
  
  This looks fine for ranking anyway.
  I don't especially find it interesting, they are things which could be improved. i'll just leave few suggestions here.

1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - They are not the same slider, it could be better if you use the same slider for this kind of pattern, where the "rotate by"' tool is used. don't know how i skipped this..
2. 00:13:414 (7,1) - it could be better if you unstack these objects, for different reasons. a stack here looks out of place since you didnt stack here for patterns earlier and later. And Unstacking here will allow you to emphasize this strong note here 00:13:593 (1) -
3. 00:52:164 (1,2) - starting a kiai part with two 1/2 reversed slider is weird, because they are easy to handle and, they are not really difficult. You should try something else, which has more density and more suitable like circles instead as you did for you patterns before.
4. 01:12:343 - this tick is really audible, and when playing, i feel this is empty here, this tick should be played or followed.
   
   
   Rhythm could be improved in the calm part
5. For example, this tick 00:39:485 - which could be played because you hear a strong note.
   You could make an interresting rhythm here, and 1/2 sounds like spam.

I hope it was helpful. thanks!

rui wrote:

M4M

[Normal]

1. 01:09:307 (2) - add clap end of slider

[Hard]

1. 00:04:664 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/b00Jc.jpg nah, i want keep calm
2. 00:45:380 (3) - Unsnapped circle
3. 00:07:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel miscellaneous. It is a proposal of placement no thanks
   

   156,264,7164,2,0,P|168:304|220:340,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   316,240,7521,2,0,P|284:244|248:256,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   348,160,7878,2,0,P|380:156|416:144,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   272,140,8235,2,0,P|253:113|224:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,216,8593,2,0,P|278:245|270:282,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:13:057 (2) - (nazi) use 00:13:414 (3)'s AR as shown http://puu.sh/b01TJ.jpg keep straight
5. 00:13:950 (1,2,3,4) - I feel miscellaneous too. How about this? http://puu.sh/b01ZU.jpg don't like neat!
6. 01:21:271 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:20:735 (1,1) - 01:20:735 (1) move (316,284) 01:21:450 (2) - move (248,68) nah!
8. 01:24:307 (3) - end of the slider is next white line keep~

[Insane]

1. 00:01:450 (4) - (nazi) move (152,220) following 00:01:807 (6,1) -
2. 00:11:807 (4,5) - 00:11:807 (4) move (248,348) 00:11:985 (5) move (168,236) http://puu.sh/aZX9v.jpg actually i changed the whole thing, i don't like line pattern~
3. 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - keep distance is better imo. so move (380,68). How about this ? http://puu.sh/aZXxw.jpg
4. 00:34:307 (4) - remove NC ?
5. 00:34:664 (5) - (nazi) bending slider is better remapped
6. 00:43:503 (10) - keep distance 0.7
7. 00:50:735 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:50:914 (2) - add NC

Good luck

TT Mouse wrote:

Hi ！
from paper modding team

[nomarl＆easy]

good diff tyty


[hard]

00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard for this diff reduce the ds please no thanks, even hard must have a 'hard part'


[Insane]

00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - ↓ good for flow good flow but i don't think it fit vocal well~
00:06:628 (2,4) - ctrl+g is better , sorry, same as ^

00:13:057 (1) - NC ? no need, drain is also ok

00:15:378 (2,3) - ctrl+g ^ hmm, current one better.

00:26:271 (8) - 208 314 better ds

00:32:878 (1,2) - ctrl+g ^ applied this, change a little

00:57:343 (3,4) - ↓ good for flow
00:58:772 (3,4) - ^

\ rank please / ty!!

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue
Remember, all of these are just suggestions. You do not have to change them

[General]

1. Overall very nice mapset, I only have a few things to add.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:593 (3) - could make into more interesting shape kinky slider ftw
2. 01:07:878 (2,3,4) - I would make these 2 1/1 sliders loudest beat ever on 01:08:235 - on a sliderend? nty
3. 01:28:950 (3) - dunno if I would change this to a circle or not, but it sounds fine as a slider keeping constant with other difficulties

[Normal]

1. I would change SV to either 1.1 or 1.0, 1.2 feels a little fast for a normal for me. keeping~
2. would also change AR to 4 too cluttered
3. 00:31:450 (5) - I would make the curve of the slider go the other way, feels better flow-wise for a normal not my style!
4. 00:33:593 (3,4,5) - would change to this rhythm good use of first repeat, however second slider is too close to (5) and i wanna emphasize all the drum beats.
5. 00:47:878 (4,5) - did you mean to not blanket these? nazi but fixed, probably
6. 01:23:593 (4) - NC? following NC pattern. it might last a little song, but drain-wise it's also not that bad.

[Hard]

1. 00:21:985 (4,5,6) - I would move these to around here ds constraints, so no thanks
2. 00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - dunno if this pattern is too hard for a hard but I like it

[Insane]

1. 00:37:165 (3,4,5) - I would make this a jump combo, the strong bass made me think there should be one here ah true, but its a buildup to another slow part, and i'd think a jump would ruin the flow a little.
2. 00:42:878 (4) - would make into two circles, but eh it's good either way. Also would make NC so do i, the music dictates otherwise :p following NC pattern~
3. 01:03:146 - should be circle here reason? i see no reason to, honestly.

I can't mod extra's sorry ;; But very good mapset, good luck with ranking!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

1. Your preview time is unsnapped, snap it to 00:51:450. sure
2. Please add a silent sliderslide, coz it's quite noisy currently. And I have also found a clap for you, let's see if it fits! http://puu.sh/b2Q0E/ead95be3a6.rar

i'm also bad at hitsounds so thank you haha

Insane

1. It's quite odd to see setting of Insane the same as that of Extra. So to differentiate them, decrease OD by 1. 7.5!!
2. 00:03:593 (1) - Finish.
3. 00:15:021 (1) - Finish on head.
4. 00:25:914 (6,7,8) - Drum finish on (6) and drum claps on (7,8).
5. 00:26:807 (2,3) - Place the clap on (3) instead of slider head of (2). Same for 00:28:235 (5) . In fact, starting from 00:30:378 (3) till 00:36:450, the drum pattern in the music has changed, personally, claps should be placed on the third white tick instead of second and fourth.
6. 00:37:165 (3,4) - Drum finish on (3) and drum clap on (4).
7. 00:43:057 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Curvature here is unnatural provided that the slider at the back is a semi-circle. Try this: changed slider instead
8. 01:15:200 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:16:807 to fit the drum and as it's an Insane, we don't need any gap between the spinner and post-spinner slider.
9. 01:28:593 (5) - Remove this clap as there's only vocal on this timepoint, like you won't place a clap on head of 01:28:950 (6).

Hard

1. 00:14:664 (4) - Alter the angle and place it like this to improve the flow:
2. 00:20:735 (1,3) - Stack them perfectly by the built-in function of editor.
3. 00:22:075 (5) - Delete this as it's overmapped.
4. 00:22:164 (6) - Make it a 1/2 slider to match the drum at 00:22:343?
5. 00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are harsh in Hard, reduce the DS please. .

Normal

1. 00:37:878 (1,3,4) - Why are these 1/3? Keep track on the drum please. green line sv problem, fixed in easy also
2. 01:00:021 (1,2) - Swap NCs. Same for 01:08:593 (1,2) and 01:11:450 (1,3) and 01:19:664 (6,1).

Easy

1. OD and HP are a bit too high, compared to other diffs, consider reducing each of them by 1 so that the four dimensions complement more balance with those of other diffs.
2. 00:55:021 (1) - Distance snap.

I hope some of these help and good luck! thanks!!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:19:307 (3,4,1) - flow suggetion~
2. 01:03:235 (4) - move downward a little for good flow
3. 01:17:878 (1) - I recommend to move the slider's head near the center. a little hard for beginner

[Normal]

1. 00:10:735 (3,4,5,6) - not good flow, imo. how about diamond pattern? (and stack 00:11:093 (4) - on 00:13:235 (2) - ) nice!
2. 00:37:521 (4,2) - I recommend to avoid overlapping

[Hard]

1. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - reduce hitsound's volume? fix in easy and normal too
2. 00:21:271 (2,4) - avoid overlapping
3. 01:16:985 (1) - u~m, move near the center?
4. 01:19:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusing, imo. I suggest not to stack 01:20:200 (4) - keep, not that hard i think
5. 01:24:307 (3,4,5,1) - rhythm suggetion this is very nice, thank you!
   [Insane]
   
   1. 01:12:610 (3) - I prefer to delete

nah, fit vocal i think. i don't wanna use blue tick sldier

very very nice song!!! I like this song and anime
~☆
~Good Luck~

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[Hard]
00:16:807 (2) - move to 384,316
00:17:164 (3,4) - move (3) to 184,256 together with (4)
00:19:307 (1) - a bit hard to read nah!
00:40:735 (1,2,3) - put them nearer nope
00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - too hard for a hard diff nope
00:56:271 (4) - why not use the shape as 00:40:735 (1) - ? not used, but changed slider
00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put them a bit nearer its very close already
01:09:843 (1,3) - put them farther. they look uncomfortable:< remap
[Insane]
the kiai part is much harder than the part before:<
00:32:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a bit hard for this part hard but intended ^^
01:01:807 (5,1) - their tails nearly touch each other. put them a bit farthe
01:06:271 (7,1) - why stacked? put a note at 01:06:360 - ? pattern changed~
01:15:200 (1) - finish at 01:16:628 - for the suddenly appearing slider imo it is ok
01:22:343 (2,3) - why not use ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+g
01:28:235 (3) - 01:28:414 (4,5) - exchange positions intentional!
that's all

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kd

Insane

1. 00:08:593 (4) - ctrl+g? i think now flow better
2. 01:28:950 (6) - nc
3. same suggestion as what i mentioned in ex diff's mod to u will relook, thanks!

mod and map more, u can improve if u give a sight at what ranked maps' look like nowadays

good luck

ShiraKai wrote:

hi:3 from PM

[General]
Let's set the video to Clyine's Extra

[Easy]
good

[Normal]

1. 00:00:736 (1) - aligned clean the curve? copied but i see no diff orz
2. 00:16:271 (4) - a little curve?
3. 00:36:450 (3) - remove finish and add clap on slider end?
4. 00:56:807 (4) - this shape is ugly
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:04:664 (4) - why do you use same form as 00:03:593 (1,2,3)? vocal change, and emphasize the stop in instrument!
   2. 01:02:432 - add note? added note at another place and changed pattern!
   3. 01:17:700 (1) - this NC is not necessary imo fixed, i think?
   4. 01:28:414 (8,1) - swap NC?
   5. 01:20:557 (6) - stuck on 01:20:021 (3) ? flow will be better
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:33:414 (4,1) - ctrl + G ? flow better, but i wanna keep drum rhythm with the notes pattern
   2. 00:51:450 (3) - move to x:240, y:111? now is s little bad flow
   
   good luck

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

[ Insane]
Placement

1. 00:27:521 (4) - NC. and also maybe you can remove clap at the end?

random jumps are not always good ways to show the music and sometimes they are boring or confusing. but anyway this map is good enough for first one, hope you can do better in the future
that's all from me. good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there... sorry for delay

[Easy]
* AR +1? Your current AR seems bit slow its fine

00:13:593 (3) - Move 2nd slider anchor to 1 gird up for fix the better blanket combo? (nazi)
00:27:521 (2) - Why clap at 1st white tick? Shouldn't clap is at 3rd white tick for the current part? err 1-3-1-3 owo
00:36:807 (3) - Remove clap for better hitsounds sound

[Normal]
00:19:307 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
00:24:843 (3) - This slider is not good for blanket because the slider border isn't fit to approach circle. So, make the slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1965675
00:56:807 (4) - Why not use curve slider instead linear? It makes good looking btw (wwww)

[Hard]
00:19:307 (1) - Reverse this slider for making a better flow? follow vocal, but i wanna follow guitar strum pattern
00:21:985 (4,5,6) - Why this spacing is increased? Any reason? spacing is 1.5, normal.
01:25:200 (1) - Spinner here would difficult to spin for players because it's hard to spin with short spinner. Consider to change it to new pattern or extend it if possible its actually fine

Good luck~

Yasora wrote:

waa

Easy

1. 00:19:307 (2,3,4) - the flow in here seems a bit weird.. cuz (3)'s curve is feel into wrong direction (how I explain this :v) well, try this maybe? -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983395 | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983387 good suggestion, but keeping pattern~
2. 00:45:021 (3) - seems the tail out of stage in here, I guess this is better -> http://puu.sh/be1pI/ba0202c245.jpg totally overlooked, ty~
3. 00:52:164 (1) - maybe try to move 2nd point 1 grid down? seems more clean if not touching (2)
4. 00:53:593 (3) - ^ but 1 grid up
5. 01:15:200 (1) - how about end this spinner at 01:16:807 - then add a note at 01:17:521 - ? the note after spinner seems too early appear
6. 01:18:950 (2) - clap seems fit in the end of this slider, not in the next note. also more be consistent

Normal

1. 00:00:736 (1) - curve in here look too up based on (3)'s curve. move 2nd point 256|128 ; 3rd 344|124 perhaps?
2. 00:01:807 (2) - I guess it's better to just stack this on (3)'s start. more comfortable on movement and clicking it :3 this is applied in similar pattern with this (ex: 00:04:664 (2) - 00:01:807 (2) - etc.) need to make the diff harder owo
3. 00:01:985 (3) - 2 grid up on slider's end if you care blanket thing lol
4. 00:16:271 (4) - add clap at start? drum sound can heard in there
5. 00:23:593 (1) - It's better if just blanket slider (3)? 1st point 248|60 ; 2nd point 132|20
6. 00:31:450 (5) - the flow more smooth if the curve go to down -> http://puu.sh/be2sb/d22a72af23.jpg mirror pattern with 00:32:878 (2) -
7. 00:36:450 (3) - add clap at start for consistency with previous sliders
8. 00:37:521 (4,1,2,3,4) - it seems these pattern was being forced placing lol here my suggestions: good suggestion, i use my own pattern however
9. 00:52:164 (1,2,3) - sliders reverse placement seems a bit meh, here my suggestion -> http://puu.sh/be3fW/7e0f4afa31.jpg i like current~
10. 00:55:021 (1,2,3) - same here. but since the it's different position from prev, here -> http://puu.sh/be3nm/5c7d225699.jpg ^
11. 01:10:378 (3) - this slider can be improved like this I guess -> http://puu.sh/be3v5/73395e8362.jpg
12. 01:17:164 (1) - similar thing as in easy (about spinner). since this is still normal diff, It's better if more easier.. so delete this note keeping~
13. 01:19:664 (1) - clap here and delete clap in next note (slider start)
14. 01:24:307 (4) - I guess this slider more nice to look if it have similar shape with 01:25:378 (6) - i dont like to spam curve slider!
15. 01:28:950 (5) - slider's tail look too close with start. maybe, just make it straight like in easy? or the curve can more soft fixed curve

Hard

1. 00:04:664 (4) - since 00:03:593 (1,2,3) - have curve shape, why this slider isn't? it more look nice if it a bit curved too emphasizing the end of instrument. hard to explain but i think it should be different!
2. 00:21:985 (4) - clap here for obviously drum sound
3. 00:24:843 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - these sliders speed seems not really noticeable at first.. reducing spacing seems more make comfortable when click. the current is too far and not different with normal (1.0x speed) spacing 8(
5. 00:46:271 (2) - pls this slider curve is too rage up xD calm it with move 2nd point to 384|252
6. 00:46:807 (1) - 00:47:521 (1) - 00:48:235 (1) - I don't see the reason why this is should be nc.. it still play well without those nc. also maybe add some space like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983644 | http://puu.sh/be4Tq/9b86e1a457.jpg | after that stack 00:48:950 (3) - under slider 00:47:700 (1) - need nc to heal after missing jumps owo, also fixed spacing, but no stack (3), using DS
7. 00:57:878 (1) - clap at end
8. 01:00:021 (3) - mm skipped a bit fast vocal in here sounds not good imo. shorter this at 01:00:200 - and add a note at 01:00:378 - will follow vocal more accurate~
9. 01:03:593 (1) - add finish at start
10. 01:05:378 (1) - clap at start
11. 01:10:378 (2) - clap
12. 01:11:093 (1) - clap at start
13. 01:13:950 (4) - stack this at (6) more better to view I guess
14. 01:19:664 (3) - clap
15. 01:19:664 (3,1,2,3,4) - this pattern can be improved imo. between (1,2,3) seems a bit messy lol here i like messy!
16. 01:25:200 (1) - shorter this at 01:26:093 - will follow drum sound and more easier imo. 1/2 after spinner is just.. a bit difficult
17. 01:27:878 (5) - nc should be in here, not in 01:28:414 (1) - imo hmm want to follow stop in instrument with NC, so yeah~
18. fun hard diff ty ^^

Insane

1. 00:04:843 (1) - how about make this slider different a bit? wave shape seems fit with speed change and vocal :3
2. 00:16:628 (1) - del this note and make 00:16:271 (6) - more longer until here? it's fit with vocal (and I just remembered someone told me it's better to not end slider at long white tick lol). but if you don't want change, at last try to move this into 244|44 no sound at white tick, so it is okay. moved note.
3. 00:17:878 (1) - no need to nc this..
4. 00:19:129 (3) - clap
5. 00:21:985 (7) - ^
6. 00:22:164 (1) - why it end at blue tick? if you hear it more carefully, no sound in blue tick. also clap should in (2)'s start..
7. 00:23:235 (4) - clap
8. 00:26:093 (7) - move this to 88|244 for triangle?
9. 00:29:307 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um.. yeah how about make it triangle and square in here?
10. 00:30:735 (1) - seems clap should in slider end
11. 00:31:807 (4) - similar thing as I said in hard diff ( 00:04:664 (4) - ) but in here it's better to follow prev. slider's curve diff sound
12. 00:32:164 (1,3) - move (1) into 132|168 ; (3) to 136|56. having a balance with (2) and (4) uwu let it messy here!
13. 00:33:593 (1) - remove clap and add in next note (slider start)
14. 00:38:593 (3) - clap at start
15. 00:38:950 (1) - remove clap at end and add in next note
16. 00:42:878 (4) - nc here
17. 00:45:378 (3) - clap
18. 00:45:557 (4) - clap should in next note (slider start), not in here
19. 00:52:164 (1,3) - wait the curve omg 8( also I have a suggestion in here -> http://puu.sh/be7ev/b1a134ccdb.jpg | also move 00:53:057 (4) - to 84|88 need intense, but moved 4
20. 00:55:021 (1) - why suddenly the clap not consistent again orz add it at next note.. not really fit in red tick. better follow drum in white tick :''(
21. 00:55:914 (4) - ^
22. 01:00:735 (1) - ^
23. 01:03:235 (7) - I wonder why this is not stream o.o I can hear 1/4 drum sound here.. you can add if you want from here until 01:03:503 - hmm nah~
24. 01:13:593 (6,1) - swap nc
25. 01:17:878 (1) - finish at start
26. 01:19:128 (6,1) - swap nc after this should nc at 01:20:735 (7) -
27. not suggesting pattern anymore.. it seems will ruin your stuff if I do this more 8( the pattern in this diff can more be improved imo hmm okay! but i tk most are ok, i will relook~ok~

umm getting lazy to mod extra lol maybe I will mod it if my spirit come back hueheuhue sorry
nice song, good luck \:3/

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
lol-ed @ the modder .gif tehepero desu

First of all you might wanna put why it's not TV Sized in your "map description" alright

You may just post Lanturn's reply at p/3349214 or describe why it's not cuz not all modders going to look all the pages 1 by 1

[Easy]
Hmm...the DS is a close to make 2 notes touched together, I would use 1.2x DS if I were you nah, i put 1.1 cuz it touch
But seems it's Easy diff it should be pretty fine, and you may want think of avoiding any bigger DS
00:00:736 (1,2) - It's an arch shape, but imo it's a bit strange cuz you didn't make their placements mirrored at the middle line. Can try to make 00:00:736 (1) - a curve slider which slider tail point to 00:01:985 (2) - from above make neat only
00:04:664 (2) - Move a tiny grid up to X:176 Y:44 if you want to make a straight line with 00:03:593 (1) -
00:06:450 (1) - This one is a bit off the flow. I prefer to make the slider point up rather than left. But since there's a timing distance feel free to keep yeah keep
00:17:521 (3,1) – Not a perfect blanket here. You can see there’s some space between 00:17:521 (3) – and the slider tail of 00:17:878 (1) – (refer pic), try to fix it: its fine i think
00:19:307 (3) – Blanket for this one too, the slider tail is too close to 00:18:950 (2) –
00:27:164 – Clap at here to follow the music, and remove clap at 00:27:521 - , don’t strengthen the vocal here mistake
00:29:307 – Remove clap here, sounds extra keep
00:30:735 – Remove clap, you can’t fully follow the drum at here 00:30:914 - cuz it’s easy diff, just don’t mind it  i think can keep
00:32:164 (1,2) – Might want to work more on this blanket, I’ll show you an example after it’s improved:
00:32:164 – , 00:33:593 - , and 00:35:021 - Remove clap, if you really want to indicate vocal you can try to use whistles or something else keeping
00:36:450 (2,3) – Suggest to change it to a slider instead of 2 circles, some players might not be able to react after 3 long sliders at 00:32:164 (1, 2,1) - i think its fine
00:37:164 – Remove finish, it sounds a little extra here. Instead, add a clap
00:38:593 – Missing clap here to follow the song
00:45:378 – Missing clap here as well
00:46:093 (4) - ^
00:55:378 – Clap here and 00:56:093 – too, try to remain consistency of every 2 (1/1) beat
01:01:807 (2) – If possible try to avoid stacking 01:00:021 (4) - . Feel free to keep since the AR is okay with it nah~

Looks fine and rankable, just need to fill the empty hitsounds ty

[Normal]
00:06:450 (1) – Try not to put this note too close to 00:04:843 (3) – because of the timing distance. Suggest to put around X:456 Y:268 with the slider shape like this: keeping, the AR is fine
00:16:807 (5) – A little of consistent DS, try to snap it with DS function
^ Applies for 00:18:235 (2) – and 00:18:950 (4) – too. You can also try to use create polygon function which is (Ctrl+Shift+D). Put 1.0x DS and then 4 points with any angle you like.
00:26:093 (4) – Have to be aware of this cuz it’s a bit different DS altho you want to match the pattern of blanket and 00:23:593 (1) - . I personally prefer to DS this instead of force blanket. But in my view it should be fine yup
00:29:307 – Remove clap. As mentioned in Easy’s mods, if you want to follow vocal you can try to use whistles or custom hitsounds. Normally claps are usually used to indicate a hit in drum like a “snare”
00:30:735 (3) – 00:32:164 - 00:33:593 (3) - 00:35:021 - 00:36:450 - ^ Remove clap for these one too cuz it might sound extra without anything in the song there is drum sound?i can hear owo
00:37:164 – Remove finish to avoid annoying hitsounds. Instead, add a clap
00:38:593 (2) – Missing clap as mentioned, it’s usually used to sound the constant beat and snare hit
00:39:307 – Remove clap
00:45:378 – Missing clap
00:44:664 (3,4,1) – Among these 3 sliders I prefer the slider shape of 00:46:093 (1) – because it looks much neat than other 2 sliders. Try to copy and paste it and then rotate something around 45* anticlockwise for 00:44:664 (3,4) - . Snap them with DS
00:58:950 (3) – Nazi, try to make it same shape with 00:58:235 (2) – by copy paste and rotate 180* clockwise. You can see here the difference between them (top 1 is current slider, bottom 1 is new rotated slider):
01:10:378 (3) – Avoid touching the tail with 01:09:307 (1) – since the slider is a bit long, don’t wanna make strange stacks:
01:13:235 (3) – It’s a bit too close to 01:11:985 (1) - . New players might make a mistake and go to 01:13:235 (3) – first instead of 01:12:878 (2) – (I did that a lot ==) hmm, normal players should know
01:28:950 (5) – Make this slider curved to the side of 01:27:878 (3,4) – which looks like: purposely

Simple, good flow, looks fine

[Hard]
I would suggest 1.4x DS, but it’s okay since you finished mapping
00:02:878 (1) – Not sure if you’re out of space, stick to 1.5x DS? Can try to move 00:02:521 (2) – a little bit down
00:03:593 (1,2,3) – Just to remind pattern like this you can copy paste and then rotate to make it look neater. Don’t have to show your hard work here :p thats what i did o.o
00:17:164 (3) – NC this to help in reading hmm, i think too many nc
00:17:878 (1) – Try to blanket with 00:17:521 (5) – referring to the AR circle nah
00:17:878 (1,2,3,4) – A bit overmapped, don’t see anything really needed to be signaled. Just try to make it flow by going 00:17:878 (1) - > 00:18:593 (3) - > 00:18:235 (2) - > 00:18:950 (4) – its fun to play, square is boring
00:25:914 (4,5,6) – Remain 1.5x DS for this, it’s not the part to be slowed down yet. Or you can try NC it to signify small DS change and drum hits. Either is okay, feel free to keep too yup keep
00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) – Quite hard in a Hard diff. Suggest to minimize the DS if you want to keep the pattern DS is already very low, messy if even lwoer
01:03:593 (1) – Try not to slow down the flow by using smaller DS here, it’s still in KIAI
01:03:950 (2) – Avoid stacking 01:03:235 (6) - , looks a bit messy
01:14:128 (5,1) – Strongly suggest to make the reverse sliders to 2 hits each and add a hit here 01:14:843 – to exactly match the vocal. Refer the rhythm ( (5) indicates 01:14:128 (5) - ): good suggestion, but play to drum, not vocal here
01:15:021 – Might wanna make a “hit” end by putting a circle here, then let spinner starts at 01:15:110 – nah
01:16:807 – Too hard for a Hard diff, please reduce the spinner length to 01:16:628 –
01:19:843 (1,2,3,4,5) – Don’t suggest jumps like this in Hard, and placements are a bit too random. Just use maybe a slightly larger DS for this and do not stack something like 01:20:200 (3) – with 01:19:843 (1) – in jumps. fine..
^ If you insist a jump, please make sure this one jumps too 01:20:735 (1) – because you’re following vocal which you feel it’s a bit strong to notice there
01:28:950 (1) – Don’t have to NC here, there’s no any velocity change i like

Flow is okay but notes are quite crowded

[Insane]
Try AR 8.8 (hold Shift key and adjust) or something lower than 9, it’s a bit fast the jump cant read with 8.8 imo, i will think about it
00:00:736 (1) – Blanket with 00:01:450 (4) – like this looks better:
01:28:414 (4) – NC here cuz 01:28:593 (5) – is stacked to 01:28:235 (3)

Big jumps, a bit messy imo
Overall looks acceptable for an Insane diff, could be fun for jump lovers
No big problems are found in this diff