Xinely > thanks for super mod :0
Xinely wrote:
M4M from my Queue
pretty much fixed EVERYTHING, thanks for really good mod! remapped a lot of parts as well!
General
- i don't find source which written tv size on title, i found http://vgmdb.net/album/47130 and just use "rashisa" so remove tv size from title and move it to tags instead below
- if you don't fix above, at least write "らしさ ( TV Size) " to has consistency with Romanised title lol
- remove pjecoo from tags, since you removed his/her easy diff
- uh oh your normal diff higher than 2 stars. you should add Easy diff then here or make less 2 stars of Normal diff
Normal
- 00:00:736 (1,3) - those claps here imo not really emphasize the music. the music just a cymbal so finishes are enough, i mean just remove the claps lol
- 00:00:736 (1,3) - i'm sure there is still a way to make better blanket here, i can't give example since i'm bad at blanketing orz
- 00:03:593 (1) - usually stack makes newbie become confuse so unstack it with move to 180,32
- 00:04:843 - skipping cymbal here is bad since the cymbal is really loud :< , change the rhythm like http://puu.sh/aLRd8/a290c9cfdd.jpg instead
- 00:06:450 (1) - i hear a cymbal sound at slider's head so add finish to emphasize it
- 00:08:950 (5) - well just my taste but i kinda dislike how flow works here. i prefer to use circular flow instead by moving the circle to 436,176
- 00:10:021 (2) - nazi, inconsistency spacing (1,07x) so please placed the slider with 1,0x spacing
- 00:16:271 (4,5) - how about replace these circles with one slider instead since 00:16:450 - still has sound, imo slider fits the best here
- 00:17:878 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,26x) make sure use 1,0x o_o
- 00:21:450 (2) - inconsistency spacing (1,09x) here
- 00:24:843 (3) - the string sound is really loud here. use finish to emphasize it?
- 00:26:093 (1) - inconsistency spacing again, altho for blanket, you should use consistent spacing
- 00:26:450 (2) - finish here. cymbal
- 00:26:093 (1,2) - swap the NC. yeah nazi but the music has changed on the stanza
- 00:27:164 - the time has so loud drum sound here. add clap here and remove clap on 00:27:521 - . yeah making inconsistency but the music forces it
- 00:28:593 - same as above, remove clap on 00:28:950 - and add to 00:28:593 -
- 00:32:878 - and 00:34:307 - are you sure to skip map this time? have loud drum sounds here. i would say to map these times
- 00:37:878 - finish here, as usual cymbal appearing
- 00:37:878 (1) - hmm imo the slider can be neater here, hmm try blanketing instead http://puu.sh/aMdJX/77959708b8.jpg ?
- 00:44:307 (2) - both head and tail have inconsistency spacing. use 1,0x instead please
- 00:47:878 (4,5) - how about make a blanket pattern here? ofc the design will be neater and the flow will be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910682
- 00:51:450 (1) - give a little rest after spin at least 2/1 gap, so here i would suggest to remove 00:51:450 (1,2) - these circles
- 01:03:235 (6) - please avoid to stack pattern on Normal, it hard to read :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910693
- 01:04:307 (2) - avoid the stack too
- 01:13:235 (5) - ctrl+G to has better flow here, i mean more natural flow? lol
- 01:17:164 (1) - remove this note. please give 2/1 gap of rhythm for little rest after spin
- 01:19:664 (1) - avoid stack too. also has inconsistency spacing (1,06x) here
- 01:20:735 - finish because cymbal lol
- 01:21:093 (3) - oh 320,180 for better blanket with previous :<
- 01:21:807 (4) - if you agree with above, 220,120 and fix next inconsistency spacing lol
- 01:23:593 (4) - finish on head too since i heard cymbal
- 01:26:450 (1,3) - please avoid the stack
- 01:28:593 (5) - so nazi, 344|284 for better blanket
Hard
- would be better to have same HP and OD here for consistency. how about HP OD 5,5?
- 00:00:736 (1) - the flow from this slider to next slider is bad. just an easy solution, flip this slider with ctrl+J, should be as 00:00:736 (1) -
- 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - nazi, better blanket please :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910727
- 00:07:164 (3) - i guess this slider is too closer with next slider. move to 156,264 instead to make neater placement
- 00:08:771 (8) - please forget the normal spacing and move to 224,256. too closer again with previous and next objects
- 00:10:021 (3) - try to make the shape of this slider same with previous and next sliders so it would be look neater here? http://puu.sh/aMfij/19c51672b8.jpg
- 00:13:057 (2) - nazi, this slider would be better to play if has same spacing from previous to next. move to 288,268 instead o3o
- 00:16:450 (4,5,6) - oh you can make better blanket again here. i mean like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910948
- 00:18:235 (3) - the idea is good but too close pattern here, kinda messy. you can make it neater with move to 384,148
- 00:18:950 (5) - here too. 272,276 :>
- 00:24:843 (1) - finish on head please. that cymbal :<
- 00:26:450 - here too. finish because cymbal
- 00:43:593 - finish too :<
- 00:46:450 - the string sound on this map is really loud imo. i guess map this time please. just use circle from 00:46:271 - and 1/2 slider on 00:46:450 - would be fine
- 00:47:521 (4,5) - too close with previous too. 1 grid down :> , if you fix this one 00:48:235 (6,7) - 1 grid down too
- 00:49:307 (1) - finish again, cymbal
- 00:56:271 (4) - finish on head too, cymbal
- 00:56:271 (4) - also the flow is kinda bad here. try rotate -30 degree of clockwise and arrange like http://puu.sh/aMkhp/1c65726775.jpg
- 00:57:700 (6) - wrong rhythm here since 00:57:878 - has a cymbal. do this http://puu.sh/aMkmW/3ea8fd3c60.jpg instead
- 00:58:771 (3) - too close again. please make neater this design, try move to 468,148 and 00:59:128 (4) - 288,88
- 01:06:807 (2,3) - too close each other too. please increase the spacing slightly
- 01:09:843 (1) - too close, move to 104,272
- 01:14:396 (1) - aw too curvy, hard to read. try http://puu.sh/aMkA2/a5ff363d31.jpg would be fine
- Not bad but some patterns still can improved a lot here, i don't mention all hitsounds here so please fixed hitsound that you've fixed from Normal
Insane
- OD-1 so OD 7 instead. OD 8 too high here nope, keep!
- 00:03:771 (2) - oh overlapped with 00:04:128 (4) - :< , please avoid it. move the circle 00:03:771 (2) - 232,212 instead
- 00:09:128 (5) - stack feels too easy to play in this insane actually, i prefer to unstack by moving the circle to 228,344
- 00:12:164 (1) - i kinda disagree with no jump at the stanza(cymbal too) so i would suggest to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1911087 for jump and better flow to
- actually this diff is fine but still has some improvement that i guess i already say too much in Hard diff. so just try analyze more to make the diff become neater? i'm tired actually *fainted*
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sorry to give quick checking on 2 of last diffs. i'm totally tired orz
oh make sure you fix the diffs name http://puu.sh/aMkHe/40962b7035.png
Good Luck then
Xanandra > thanks for mod!
Xanandra wrote:
fixed most~
[Insane]
Minor hitsounds suggestions:
00:50:200 - Add clap
00:50:378 (9) - Take out clap
00:50:735 - Add clap
[Hard]
00:35:378 - Missing clap?
00:36:093 - Missing clap?
01:04:664 (4) - Slider should start at 01:04:843 - just like you did with 01:07:700 (5) -
01:13:235 - Missing clap?
01:13:950 - Missing clap?
[Normal]
00:19:307 (1) - The fact that youre using this slider this way, kinda shows that you tried to follow the vocals, but I think you did it wrong, since the vocals actually lands at 00:19:575 - and 00:19:843 - (basically extend slider by 1/4 tick, if you do so, dont forget to adjust hitsounds) remap
00:51:807 (2) - Id delete this beat, its a filler beat, and it can easily make players confused, so just delete it to avoid that. Actually, if you could end spinner at 00:51:450 - as well, would be perfect
01:27:521 - Missing clap?
01:27:878 - Take out clap?
01:28:593 - Take out clap too?
[Easy]
00:40:735 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish on all the slider starts? Seems like you half done these hitsounds since you put the finishes on your other diffs, except this one. Anyways, for next time theres an app that can help you with that: t/131540
00:49:307 (1) - Same comment about the spinner from normal diff. In the end should look like this: http://puu.sh/aNr93/9006dcb8a9.jpg