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Nekomata Master+ - Kung-fu Empire

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Damnae
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 17 mai 2015 at 17:10:33

Artist: Nekomata Master+
Title: Kung-fu Empire
Source: beatmania IIDX
Tags: 飛燕流舞 naoyuki sato hien ryuubu backdrops asian jangle jungle empress
BPM: 177
Filesize: 19138kb
Play Time: 05:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Backdrop (4,78 stars, 1394 notes)
Download: Nekomata Master+ - Kung-fu Empire
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Remember you can watch the storyboard alone with cinema mod.
Last edited by Damnae , edited 76 times in total.
Nemis
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:D
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00:12:982 (1) - try finish at the slider's end
00:13:490 (2) - same
00:13:999 (3) - also here
00:14:338 (1) - and normal finish at head
00:16:880 (2) - whats about adding your drum sample at the head?
01:03:151 (1) - normalfinish at head
01:19:253 (9) - finish sounds nice here
02:12:982 (6) - circle with softfinish plz
03:09:253 (1) - try drumfinish here
03:11:965 (1) - same
03:53:321 (6) - circle with softfinish plz(2)

as i said earlier OMGSOCULHAVEMYBABIESAGAIN awesome map!
Kyubey
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Hi, mod because why not?
00:39:592 (4) - how about move it few grids right and up? When i played this part, this looked bad a little
01:07:473 (3) - maybe add spacing? this was played bad
01:42:727 (3) - here too
02:19:762 (5) - maybe add a little more spacing for custom stack? ~2 grids
03:17:897 (1,2,1,2,3) - how about make flow counterclockwise?
03:23:067 (3) - already asked about these sliders but looks like you won't change it
04:00:101 (5) - as with 02:19:762 (5)
04:32:473 (2,3,4,5) - it's really hard to notice that stack is 1/6 because hp bar is here, move it lower

Great map :з

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Damnae
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Thanks for the mods, Elvis and Kyubey!



Kyubey wrote:

03:23:067 (3) - already asked about these sliders but looks like you won't change it
I did change them :D
Kiiwa
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great hitsounds
Nemis
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Nemis
[Backdrop]
  1. 00:05:355 (1) - Change this slider in the one below to obtain a blanket? Then move 00:07:219 (5) - this slider under its tail.
    SPOILER
  2. 03:50:609 (3,1) - What about reversing theirs potisions and then CTRL+G each one? I'd prefer this flow instead on the actual one!
    SPOILER
  3. 03:55:694 (1,1) - After playing these two objects I'd like to follow the same direction, so, I'd suggest to CTRL+G 03:56:541 (3,4) - these two notes.
  4. 03:56:796 (1) - Consider ending this spinner 1/2 before and then adding a note on its old end (03:58:067 (1) - ).
  5. 04:57:220 (3) - CTRL+G and then move 04:56:881 (2,3) - these sliders at x:178 y:306? 04:56:372 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - would become a special pattern you know, in a different way :D
This map is already perfect, there is not much to say. Just a few suggestions :>
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omg i love you
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-kevincela- wrote:

omg i love you

Kyubey wrote:

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Kiiwa
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[Backdrop]
  1. 00:32:864 (3,1) - This spacing and rhythm will cause many to 100 on first slider. I suggest to make it more like at 00:22:130 (5,6) -
  2. 01:29:587 (3,4,5) - Expected this:
    SPOILER
  3. 02:15:689 (1,2) - All patters like this; I think you should increase the spacing for easier understanding?
  4. 02:45:180 (2,3) - Not sure about these placements playability, but they look awesome.
  5. 03:21:197 - Should be a sound at here (does it matter to you?)
  6. 03:56:028 (1,2) - Same as before.
  7. 04:25:519 (3,4) - Same as before.
  8. 04:46:423 (3,4,5) - This really doesn't suit here. Suggest to change to 1/4.
  9. 05:17:229 (3) - New combo would be good here because of sudden rhythm change. It would also suite your patterns well!
damnae sama
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i came even before downloading
oops no storyboard yet lol i was blind
can't imagine what will it be!
Damnae
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Amamiya Yuko wrote:

i came even before downloading
oops no storyboard yet lol i was blind
can't imagine what will it be!
that's what you get for coming too soon :D
Akiyama Mizuki
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S O O N
Kiiwa
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WHERES THE SB!
JESUS!
Kurokotei
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I was thinking of this music with one of your SB.
omg hype
you failed at uploading this btw
mintong89
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Can I make Taiko? ahh I guess it's late to request a Taiko. ;w;
Damnae
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mintong89 wrote:

Can I make Taiko? ahh I guess it's late to request a Taiko. ;w;
Sorry but I'd rather have just the osu! diff.
Stefan
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mintong89 wrote:

Can I make Taiko? ahh I guess it's late to request a Taiko. ;w;
I tried my chance already. :P
Hellgert
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gud wurk out ther :D
Damnae
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Storyboard finished :>
Skystar
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first
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Charles445
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Butterflies are meant to go offscreen then disappear right? I think you might want to increase the distance they move by times 2 or 3, as ones that start on one end of the screen don't make it off the screen and just kinda hang out
Damnae
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Charles445 wrote:

Butterflies are meant to go offscreen then disappear right? I think you might want to increase the distance they move by times 2 or 3, as ones that start on one end of the screen don't make it off the screen and just kinda hang out
It's intentional that some land on the screen and stop moving.
Stefan
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oh my god ;__;

That's beautiful ;___;

cry ;______;
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Kyubey
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You won "The Best Map 2014" award.
Beige
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I want to seeeeeee it ;w;
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god!
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nice sb！
Xinely
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inb4 highest user rating because the SB <3

i totally like this one <3
Beige
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Beige
omg, kung-fu SB really awesome ;w;
And awesome Mapset ;w;
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Hey Elite Storyboarder!
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I love you
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Stefan wrote:

oh my god ;__;

That's beautiful ;___;

cry ;______;
Nemis
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Nemis
There are so many words that the human created to communicate own sensations to others... the problem is that I just can't find one to describe the awesomeness of this storyboard.

now instarank thx
Lally
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dat storyboard *-* omg omg <3
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I'm just a potato now

and its really sad ;u;
those
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those
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1882144

This would properly hitsound the section you want to bring out, since at the moment, you're using what's intended to be a continuous sound as a sound that plays once. It serves the same effect since you hold for the duration, but this allows a hitsound to be played at the time you want it to.

Pretty solid map.
Secretpipe
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This is just amazing !
Keep the good work man :)
[Mahua]
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Regou
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[Mahua] wrote:

amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fanzhen0019
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K finally done
Tari
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just wonderful. tell me to mod if you want <3
Damnae
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Tari wrote:

just wonderful. tell me to mod if you want <3
Yes please :)
Tari
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KUNG FU PANDAAAAA




Backdrop



  1. HP Drain increase of about 1 would really go well with this map heck 6.5 would do well too, I find the HP way too forgiving because of the speed of the song with the AR and also those streams, This song isn't really slow its pretty fast , so you should give it a little challenge and you don't have any really slow parts that fit well with HP 6
  2. 00:03:485 (3) - I think this is suppose to have the same sampleset as 00:01:960 (1) - they have the same instrument sound and I see you put whistles for both, but they sound really the same tbh but people might mistaken it for different hitsounds, however It would make much more sense if you hitsounded these the same way.
  3. 00:08:909 (1) - ^
  4. 00:05:011 (6) - I would move this note a little bit higher, many people will be concerned on how awkwardly the blanket this is because it looks like you wanted to blanket it and moving this up seems to be the best solution because moving the blanketed slider 00:05:350 (1) - itself would cause alot of unneeded overlap issues which could make the more look less clean.
  5. 00:07:214 (5) - Change the sampleset to drum to start of this?
  6. 00:09:587 (1) - The whistle is misplaced I think, It would sound better if you added it to the start of this slider here rather than the reverse of the slider lol
  7. 00:11:282 (4) - I would expect this part to be a little bit more streamier? because of the music but I guess it's intentionally done so you can ignore this one
  8. 00:17:384 (2) - I don't think the jump to 3 is necessary, I would equalize the spacing here so it forms a good triangle , instead of a jump to 3 here's how it would look like http://puu.sh/aEz52.jpg
  9. 00:21:791 (4) - Since you put a jump here for emphasis, I would say you can put a whistle too at the start to show it even more, and plus I think it sounds quite good with the instruments.
  10. 00:22:355 (6) - In my opinion, It would make more sense if these sliders don't touch , would match way better with the current AR (AR9) and give that slider kick effect
  11. 00:33:824 (3) - I would add a whistle somewhere around here too to keep the whistles flowing across the map , a long time without whistle usage when you used whistles periodically throughout the map.
  12. 00:34:842 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is intentional too? because you could of added a bit more notes there, no problem though~ this pattern here is good transition for upcoming notes.
  13. 00:39:248 (3) - I would just remove the finish and make the sampleset normal imo~ too much finish and only should be used to show emphasis and I think normal hit-finish sounds better too.
  14. 00:36:536 (4) - ^ for consistency.
  15. 00:41:960 (2) - ^
  16. 00:44:672 (2) - ^
  17. 00:47:384 (3) - Add a whistle to the end of the slider? it sounds great.
  18. 00:48:740 (3) - ^
  19. 00:50:096 (3) - ^
  20. 00:54:672 (2) - Add a whistle with the soft sampleset to the start of the slider
  21. 00:47:723 (4) - I would prefer you curve this slider just a bit, looking at the way you design/and construct sliders, you tend to use soft curves / curve them just a little bit now and then on every 1/2 slider, and I think personally curving this would be nice and fitting for your style of creating sliders, here's an image http://puu.sh/aEAc6.jpg
  22. 00:55:519 (3) - Parts like these could use more whistles
  23. 00:58:231 (7) - A new combo should be here , this combo is a bit too long and plus you'll need to remain consistency with 00:59:926 (1) - well more to remain consistent with 01:02:468 (1) -
  24. 01:09:079 (7) - ^ only if you do above.
  25. 01:10:604 (4,5) - It would follow the music better if you removed 5 and left an anti-jump like you did at 01:05:858 (5) - and it'll also give some time for people to react to the new rhythms that are coming up in the next combo. but your going remove the drum sounds, but you already ignored it at 01:06:706 - so I don't see the problem.
  26. 01:16:367 (1) - Musically the new combo shouldn't be here, but pattern wise it's not just compare it to 01:05:519 (4) - you didn't add one there so I'm confused.
  27. 01:23:824 (3) - Shouldn't a whistle be added here if you added it at 01:21:113 (3) - it breaks the consistency.
  28. 01:30:265 - There should deifnitenly be a break there o.O the hp just went down the drain with this big gap here.
  29. 01:44:333 (7) - New combo as same reason as 00:58:231 (7) -
  30. 01:48:739 (7) - ^
  31. 01:51:622 (1) - Same as before, you need to double check this combo. or add one at 01:05:519 (4) -
  32. 01:58:740 (7) - Just saying that this combo is inconsistent to what you put at 01:56:028 (1) - I think the new combo should start here instead, to fit with that just make sure you remove the next combo or else this would be a two note combo.
  33. 02:07:214 (2) - The end could use a normal sampleset.
  34. 02:21:621 (5) - Currently I think the movement here is way too restricted, your constantly doing strong curves and I think it's best to do something flows more lucid, probably try to form a triangle and make it look like something like this : http://puu.sh/aEINw.jpg that flow seems much more natural to my eyes.
  35. 02:32:638 (1) - The beat in the start of the slider is loud, I'd add a finish to show that.
  36. 02:41:791 (4,5) - The circular movement is broken here and so the circular flow is now reversed, a simple ctrl+g to both these notes would fix that, this back and forth movement is way too forced imo, it's best you try this if you want better flow, it'll be slightly easier to read too if you do this, and I like triangles better :>
  37. 04:22:130 (4,5) - ^ Same as above.
  38. 02:43:146 (5,6,7) - I would add 1 more note in this part to complete the stream these doubles are pretty rare in the map , and not used occasionally and the note added here will fit with the music.
  39. 02:58:909 (1) - Any reason why a new combo should be added, seems rather short and unecessary considering all your combo's seem to last more than 4 notes unless you do special pattern which isn't the case here.
  40. 03:04:333 (3) - The flow would match better if there was only 1 jump and that would be the jump from here to the next note, but a jump towards here isn't good and ruins the polarity of the map. so i'd say ctrl+g this one also
  41. 03:13:316 - Same I think a break needs to be added here.
  42. 03:21:113 (4) - New combo here for consistency , that I mentioned in previous part already its to match with add one at 01:05:519 (4) - if you don't do add one at 01:05:519 (4) - don't do this.
  43. 03:24:673 (7) - New combo, already know why.
  44. 04:11:791 (4) - Enlarged jumps + triplet should definitely have a new combo to them , to make them a bit easier to read and to be less harsh on the drain
  45. 04:25:773 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would say you could improve the design of this stream a bit , the end of the stream is what looks bad , it's a slightly uneven curve.
  46. 04:34:333 (3) - Since this slider is easier to hit and play , I would suggest you increase the spacing on this one, since they're really close and the sudden fallback might halt the flow.
  47. 04:39:079 (3) - ^ just a bit
  48. 04:39:757 (3) - ^ just a bit
  49. 04:36:367 (2) - strangely enough, I find this to flow much better than how you currently placed it, try this? : http://puu.sh/aENp7.jpg there's way too much left and right movement here.
  50. 05:09:079 (5) - I believe the new combo should be here instead, because you add it when the harp sound starts to play usually and it starts to play around here.

Ignore the long mod, the mapset is great so I did a thorough job on modding it.

you get a star from me.
Damnae
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Tari
  1. HP Drain increase of about 1 would really go well with this map heck 6.5 would do well too, I find the HP way too forgiving because of the speed of the song with the AR and also those streams, This song isn't really slow its pretty fast , so you should give it a little challenge and you don't have any really slow parts that fit well with HP 6 ok
  2. 00:03:485 (3) - I think this is suppose to have the same sampleset as 00:01:960 (1) - they have the same instrument sound and I see you put whistles for both, but they sound really the same tbh but people might mistaken it for different hitsounds, however It would make much more sense if you hitsounded these the same way.
  3. 00:08:909 (1) - ^ the normal sampleset here are used to follow that subtle similar sound in the song
  4. 00:05:011 (6) - I would move this note a little bit higher, many people will be concerned on how awkwardly the blanket this is because it looks like you wanted to blanket it and moving this up seems to be the best solution because moving the blanketed slider 00:05:350 (1) - itself would cause alot of unneeded overlap issues which could make the more look less clean. blanketed them
  5. 00:07:214 (5) - Change the sampleset to drum to start of this? these are hitsounded after the song, and there isn't such sound here
  6. 00:09:587 (1) - The whistle is misplaced I think, It would sound better if you added it to the start of this slider here rather than the reverse of the slider lol pitch is the same on start and repeat for this slider but not for the next one which has higher pitch on repeat, I like having them follow the same "soft whistle soft" sound that emphasizes the 1/3
  7. 00:11:282 (4) - I would expect this part to be a little bit more streamier? because of the music but I guess it's intentionally done so you can ignore this one yeah I want to avoid having such a long stream in a calm part at the beginning
  8. 00:17:384 (2) - I don't think the jump to 3 is necessary, I would equalize the spacing here so it forms a good triangle , instead of a jump to 3 here's how it would look like http://puu.sh/aEz52.jpg okay
  9. 00:21:791 (4) - Since you put a jump here for emphasis, I would say you can put a whistle too at the start to show it even more, and plus I think it sounds quite good with the instruments. okay
  10. 00:22:355 (6) - In my opinion, It would make more sense if these sliders don't touch , would match way better with the current AR (AR9) and give that slider kick effect intended to look weird to show that something weird is happening in the song (the 1/3)
  11. 00:33:824 (3) - I would add a whistle somewhere around here too to keep the whistles flowing across the map , a long time without whistle usage when you used whistles periodically throughout the map. I don't think it's neccesary
  12. 00:34:842 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is intentional too? because you could of added a bit more notes there, no problem though~ this pattern here is good transition for upcoming notes. yeah still no stream but something more spaced
  13. 00:39:248 (3) - I would just remove the finish and make the sampleset normal imo~ too much finish and only should be used to show emphasis and I think normal hit-finish sounds better too. these are following the cymbals in the song
  14. 00:36:536 (4) - ^ for consistency.
  15. 00:41:960 (2) - ^
  16. 00:44:672 (2) - ^
  17. 00:47:384 (3) - Add a whistle to the end of the slider? it sounds great. ok
  18. 00:48:740 (3) - ^ I'd rather keep what I have there
  19. 00:50:096 (3) - ^ ok
  20. 00:54:672 (2) - Add a whistle with the soft sampleset to the start of the slider
  21. 00:47:723 (4) - I would prefer you curve this slider just a bit, looking at the way you design/and construct sliders, you tend to use soft curves / curve them just a little bit now and then on every 1/2 slider, and I think personally curving this would be nice and fitting for your style of creating sliders, here's an image http://puu.sh/aEAc6.jpg this part is kind of about linear sliders
  22. 00:55:519 (3) - Parts like these could use more whistles I like them going away before they are used for 00:57:553 - triples there
  23. 00:58:231 (7) - A new combo should be here , this combo is a bit too long and plus you'll need to remain consistency with 00:59:926 (1) - well more to remain consistent with 01:02:468 (1) -
  24. 01:09:079 (7) - ^ only if you do above.
  25. 01:10:604 (4,5) - It would follow the music better if you removed 5 and left an anti-jump like you did at 01:05:858 (5) - and it'll also give some time for people to react to the new rhythms that are coming up in the next combo. but your going remove the drum sounds, but you already ignored it at 01:06:706 - so I don't see the problem.
  26. 01:16:367 (1) - Musically the new combo shouldn't be here, but pattern wise it's not just compare it to 01:05:519 (4) - you didn't add one there so I'm confused. should be more consistent now
  27. 01:23:824 (3) - Shouldn't a whistle be added here if you added it at 01:21:113 (3) - it breaks the consistency. I don't see how, the song is different at these two points
  28. 01:30:265 - There should deifnitenly be a break there o.O the hp just went down the drain with this big gap here. I removed these because there's some "optimization" related to breaks that make the sb bug after them... I guess I'll add them back now
  29. 01:44:333 (7) - New combo as same reason as 00:58:231 (7) -
  30. 01:48:739 (7) - ^
  31. 01:51:622 (1) - Same as before, you need to double check this combo. or add one at 01:05:519 (4) -
  32. 01:58:740 (7) - Just saying that this combo is inconsistent to what you put at 01:56:028 (1) - I think the new combo should start here instead, to fit with that just make sure you remove the next combo or else this would be a two note combo.
  33. 02:07:214 (2) - The end could use a normal sampleset. it has one but the editor was bugged until recently
  34. 02:21:621 (5) - Currently I think the movement here is way too restricted, your constantly doing strong curves and I think it's best to do something flows more lucid, probably try to form a triangle and make it look like something like this : http://puu.sh/aEINw.jpg that flow seems much more natural to my eyes. sure
  35. 02:32:638 (1) - The beat in the start of the slider is loud, I'd add a finish to show that.
  36. 02:41:791 (4,5) - The circular movement is broken here and so the circular flow is now reversed, a simple ctrl+g to both these notes would fix that, this back and forth movement is way too forced imo, it's best you try this if you want better flow, it'll be slightly easier to read too if you do this, and I like triangles better :>
  37. 04:22:130 (4,5) - ^ Same as above.
  38. 02:43:146 (5,6,7) - I would add 1 more note in this part to complete the stream these doubles are pretty rare in the map , and not used occasionally and the note added here will fit with the music.
  39. 02:58:909 (1) - Any reason why a new combo should be added, seems rather short and unecessary considering all your combo's seem to last more than 4 notes unless you do special pattern which isn't the case here. yeah removed it
  40. 03:04:333 (3) - The flow would match better if there was only 1 jump and that would be the jump from here to the next note, but a jump towards here isn't good and ruins the polarity of the map. so i'd say ctrl+g this one also okay
  41. 03:13:316 - Same I think a break needs to be added here.
  42. 03:21:113 (4) - New combo here for consistency , that I mentioned in previous part already its to match with add one at 01:05:519 (4) - if you don't do add one at 01:05:519 (4) - don't do this.
  43. 03:24:673 (7) - New combo, already know why.
  44. 04:11:791 (4) - Enlarged jumps + triplet should definitely have a new combo to them , to make them a bit easier to read and to be less harsh on the drain I don't think it'll help readability and more combo = more overall drain actually
  45. 04:25:773 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would say you could improve the design of this stream a bit , the end of the stream is what looks bad , it's a slightly uneven curve. it's made from converting a slider, so I don't see how it could be uneven.. and looks fine to me
  46. 04:34:333 (3) - Since this slider is easier to hit and play , I would suggest you increase the spacing on this one, since they're really close and the sudden fallback might halt the flow.
  47. 04:39:079 (3) - ^ just a bit
  48. 04:39:757 (3) - ^ just a bit
  49. 04:36:367 (2) - strangely enough, I find this to flow much better than how you currently placed it, try this? : http://puu.sh/aENp7.jpg there's way too much left and right movement here. nice
  50. 05:09:079 (5) - I believe the new combo should be here instead, because you add it when the harp sound starts to play usually and it starts to play around here.it would make the previous combo quite long
as for the things I didn't answer directly, I didn't change them mostly because I prefer the way they are
nice mod, thanks!

I added back the breaks, so expect some bugs in the storyboard t/232035 :/
Tari
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oh I didn't know adding breaks could affect the SB (since I'm only modding the actual mapping not the SB)

sorry :c
Kinshara
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Wow this storyboard is amazing >w<

You are so creative and talented!
Azer
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Would you like a mod on this? This is really good.
RLC
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this new shift-tab thing is perfect for playing your maps haha
beautiful work as always \o/
Damnae
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Azer wrote:

Would you like a mod on this? This is really good.
I'm late, but yeah, please mod it =)
Azer
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I had to remove the osb because the editor was running at 30fps LOL

  1. 00:05:011 (6) - flows and looks a bit better if you angle this a bit downwards
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:062 (4) - consider curving it like this for better flow
    SPOILER
  3. 00:16:028 (3,4,1) - these are a bit close to eachother, it makes this part boring to play and easier than the rest of this section. Consider making these more distant. (if you apply this, make these more distant too for emphasis 00:17:045 (3,1) - )
  4. 00:21:452 (3,4) - this is a pretty big jump compared to the rest of the section and I don't think there's anything to emphasise that much in the song, consider reducing distance
  5. 00:28:231 (2) - move around x439 y187 for more consistant distance/difficulty
  6. 00:47:384 (3,4) - this is inconsistant with the type of patterns youve mapped so far, consider changing this to something like
    SPOILER

    youd probably have to change the following objects but i think its worth it
  7. 01:10:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - honestly this doesnt play good at all. Killed every single one of my HR plays.
  8. 01:38:401 (1,2) - this isnt really important but this jump is pretty big compared to everything else, consider making it closer
  9. 01:43:994 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g? these too 01:44:333 (7,8,9) -
  10. 01:46:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same thing
  11. 01:48:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+g?
  12. 01:55:689 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g
  13. 01:55:689 (5,6,1) - consider flipping so it starts on top
  14. 02:06:028 (4) - what is this mapped to?
  15. 02:07:553 (3) - what is this mapped to?
  16. 02:10:604 (2) - again pretty huge jump for a spot in the song with nothing to emphasize, consider making this more consistant
  17. 02:26:197 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is a bit boring and uninspired, nothing really wrong with it but this section could be a lot better. There's a nice tone change on the white tick if you want to move the second part of the pattern away or something like what you did at 04:06:875 (4,1,2,3) -
  18. 03:26:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - again aaaaaaaaa
  19. 03:46:367 (4,3) - again what is this mapped to, it doesnt follow the song very well
  20. 04:11:791 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - hitsounding isnt really right
  21. 04:16:367 (3,1) - too close to eachother, needs more emphasis/distance
  22. 04:32:864 (3,4) - this REALLY takes you by surprise as its the first triplet of the map, and since its stacked its extremely hard to sightread. I really recommend mapping this to a repeat slider so it doesnt take the player by surprise and lets the player know that there are potentially more triplets around this section.
  23. 05:09:079 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - you could really improve the wavy shape of this.
  24. 05:17:229 (1) - & 05:19:349 (1) - I don't really see a reason to have such drastic changes in distance
I guess that's it, could say a lot more but I think it's mostly my mapping style clashing with yours so they're not too important. Good luck!
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give you a kudosu~
Really a good map, hope this rank as fast as it could ^^
puxtu
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really, this is the most beautiful storyboard i've ever seen
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Astonishing storyboard.
Nemis
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I've modded it already, I'm gonna check it.

[Backdrop]
  1. This map really needs the epilepsy warning on, especially for all those butterfly explosions at the end.
  2. 00:46:197 (3,4) - I think these 1/8 sliders should end 1/4 before 'cause I cant really hear any 1/8 sound at 00:46:409 (4) - and 00:46:748 (6) - . Here is a screen (just the rhythm, 'cause it'd be really hard playable this way...)
  3. 04:32:468 (2,3,4,5) - I've just noticed that these should be 1/8, not 1/6! Same thing for 04:37:892 (2,3,4,5) - , 04:43:316 (2,3,4,5) - and 04:48:740 (2,3,4,5) - . I'd suggest to keep only the 1/4 notes as you did in the others choruses.
These are the major issues, I have nothing pattern-related to say... but after this I won't be able to bubble it until the bug at the breaks will get fixed.
Damnae
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Fixed them all, rip 1/6 :D
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I have no words; only love.
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https://gist.github.com/peppy/99e6959772083cdfde8a

;_;
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fml
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Derekku wrote:

I have no words; only tears.
Fixed :( :( :(
Damnae
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... do they actually own the full version of the songs?
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rip osu
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rip in peace in peace
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God....
Chewin
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noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

this world is so cruel with cool mappers c.c

rip damnae sorry for it
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Damnae wrote:

... do they actually own the full version of the songs?
Sadly yep
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/backdrops/id490537542

"℗ 2009 Konami Digital Entertainment"
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... No comment
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Azer
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why ;_;
whyyyyyyyyyyyy
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R.I.P awesome work - 2014.8.27
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WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHY ??

If this continues, soon osu! will close because no more maps to download......................

EDIT : Guys go download this fast as for now the mp3 is still on the map.
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#BlameKONAMI2014
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choose one :P
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#blameobamacatforbgchangethathashtagthingiswaytoolong2015
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Naitoshi wrote:

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ohh... ;w; i love the old BG tbh ;w;
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D:
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IRC modded;

  1. Adjusted hitsound volume (they're not inaudible anymore)
  2. Changed some patterns to follow the song better
  3. Small adjustments, such as little spacing errors
Hitsounds have been checked, they don't contain any unneccessary delays.
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I know it's an abuse of power but Yolobubble #2!
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