Tari
nice mod, thanks!- HP Drain increase of about 1 would really go well with this map heck 6.5 would do well too, I find the HP way too forgiving because of the speed of the song with the AR and also those streams, This song isn't really slow its pretty fast , so you should give it a little challenge and you don't have any really slow parts that fit well with HP 6 ok
- 00:03:485 (3) - I think this is suppose to have the same sampleset as 00:01:960 (1) - they have the same instrument sound and I see you put whistles for both, but they sound really the same tbh but people might mistaken it for different hitsounds, however It would make much more sense if you hitsounded these the same way.
- 00:08:909 (1) - ^ the normal sampleset here are used to follow that subtle similar sound in the song
- 00:05:011 (6) - I would move this note a little bit higher, many people will be concerned on how awkwardly the blanket this is because it looks like you wanted to blanket it and moving this up seems to be the best solution because moving the blanketed slider 00:05:350 (1) - itself would cause alot of unneeded overlap issues which could make the more look less clean. blanketed them
- 00:07:214 (5) - Change the sampleset to drum to start of this? these are hitsounded after the song, and there isn't such sound here
- 00:09:587 (1) - The whistle is misplaced I think, It would sound better if you added it to the start of this slider here rather than the reverse of the slider lol pitch is the same on start and repeat for this slider but not for the next one which has higher pitch on repeat, I like having them follow the same "soft whistle soft" sound that emphasizes the 1/3
- 00:11:282 (4) - I would expect this part to be a little bit more streamier? because of the music but I guess it's intentionally done so you can ignore this one yeah I want to avoid having such a long stream in a calm part at the beginning
- 00:17:384 (2) - I don't think the jump to 3 is necessary, I would equalize the spacing here so it forms a good triangle , instead of a jump to 3 here's how it would look like http://puu.sh/aEz52.jpg okay
- 00:21:791 (4) - Since you put a jump here for emphasis, I would say you can put a whistle too at the start to show it even more, and plus I think it sounds quite good with the instruments. okay
- 00:22:355 (6) - In my opinion, It would make more sense if these sliders don't touch , would match way better with the current AR (AR9) and give that slider kick effect intended to look weird to show that something weird is happening in the song (the 1/3)
- 00:33:824 (3) - I would add a whistle somewhere around here too to keep the whistles flowing across the map , a long time without whistle usage when you used whistles periodically throughout the map. I don't think it's neccesary
- 00:34:842 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is intentional too? because you could of added a bit more notes there, no problem though~ this pattern here is good transition for upcoming notes. yeah still no stream but something more spaced
- 00:39:248 (3) - I would just remove the finish and make the sampleset normal imo~ too much finish and only should be used to show emphasis and I think normal hit-finish sounds better too. these are following the cymbals in the song
- 00:36:536 (4) - ^ for consistency.
- 00:41:960 (2) - ^
- 00:44:672 (2) - ^
- 00:47:384 (3) - Add a whistle to the end of the slider? it sounds great. ok
- 00:48:740 (3) - ^ I'd rather keep what I have there
- 00:50:096 (3) - ^ ok
- 00:54:672 (2) - Add a whistle with the soft sampleset to the start of the slider
- 00:47:723 (4) - I would prefer you curve this slider just a bit, looking at the way you design/and construct sliders, you tend to use soft curves / curve them just a little bit now and then on every 1/2 slider, and I think personally curving this would be nice and fitting for your style of creating sliders, here's an image http://puu.sh/aEAc6.jpg this part is kind of about linear sliders
- 00:55:519 (3) - Parts like these could use more whistles I like them going away before they are used for 00:57:553 - triples there
- 00:58:231 (7) - A new combo should be here , this combo is a bit too long and plus you'll need to remain consistency with 00:59:926 (1) - well more to remain consistent with 01:02:468 (1) -
- 01:09:079 (7) - ^ only if you do above.
- 01:10:604 (4,5) - It would follow the music better if you removed 5 and left an anti-jump like you did at 01:05:858 (5) - and it'll also give some time for people to react to the new rhythms that are coming up in the next combo. but your going remove the drum sounds, but you already ignored it at 01:06:706 - so I don't see the problem.
- 01:16:367 (1) - Musically the new combo shouldn't be here, but pattern wise it's not just compare it to 01:05:519 (4) - you didn't add one there so I'm confused. should be more consistent now
- 01:23:824 (3) - Shouldn't a whistle be added here if you added it at 01:21:113 (3) - it breaks the consistency. I don't see how, the song is different at these two points
- 01:30:265 - There should deifnitenly be a break there o.O the hp just went down the drain with this big gap here. I removed these because there's some "optimization" related to breaks that make the sb bug after them... I guess I'll add them back now
- 01:44:333 (7) - New combo as same reason as 00:58:231 (7) -
- 01:48:739 (7) - ^
- 01:51:622 (1) - Same as before, you need to double check this combo. or add one at 01:05:519 (4) -
- 01:58:740 (7) - Just saying that this combo is inconsistent to what you put at 01:56:028 (1) - I think the new combo should start here instead, to fit with that just make sure you remove the next combo or else this would be a two note combo.
- 02:07:214 (2) - The end could use a normal sampleset. it has one but the editor was bugged until recently
- 02:21:621 (5) - Currently I think the movement here is way too restricted, your constantly doing strong curves and I think it's best to do something flows more lucid, probably try to form a triangle and make it look like something like this : http://puu.sh/aEINw.jpg that flow seems much more natural to my eyes. sure
- 02:32:638 (1) - The beat in the start of the slider is loud, I'd add a finish to show that.
- 02:41:791 (4,5) - The circular movement is broken here and so the circular flow is now reversed, a simple ctrl+g to both these notes would fix that, this back and forth movement is way too forced imo, it's best you try this if you want better flow, it'll be slightly easier to read too if you do this, and I like triangles better :>
- 04:22:130 (4,5) - ^ Same as above.
- 02:43:146 (5,6,7) - I would add 1 more note in this part to complete the stream these doubles are pretty rare in the map , and not used occasionally and the note added here will fit with the music.
- 02:58:909 (1) - Any reason why a new combo should be added, seems rather short and unecessary considering all your combo's seem to last more than 4 notes unless you do special pattern which isn't the case here. yeah removed it
- 03:04:333 (3) - The flow would match better if there was only 1 jump and that would be the jump from here to the next note, but a jump towards here isn't good and ruins the polarity of the map. so i'd say ctrl+g this one also okay
- 03:13:316 - Same I think a break needs to be added here.
- 03:21:113 (4) - New combo here for consistency , that I mentioned in previous part already its to match with add one at 01:05:519 (4) - if you don't do add one at 01:05:519 (4) - don't do this.
- 03:24:673 (7) - New combo, already know why.
- 04:11:791 (4) - Enlarged jumps + triplet should definitely have a new combo to them , to make them a bit easier to read and to be less harsh on the drain I don't think it'll help readability and more combo = more overall drain actually
- 04:25:773 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would say you could improve the design of this stream a bit , the end of the stream is what looks bad , it's a slightly uneven curve. it's made from converting a slider, so I don't see how it could be uneven.. and looks fine to me
- 04:34:333 (3) - Since this slider is easier to hit and play , I would suggest you increase the spacing on this one, since they're really close and the sudden fallback might halt the flow.
- 04:39:079 (3) - ^ just a bit
- 04:39:757 (3) - ^ just a bit
- 04:36:367 (2) - strangely enough, I find this to flow much better than how you currently placed it, try this? : http://puu.sh/aENp7.jpg there's way too much left and right movement here. nice
- 05:09:079 (5) - I believe the new combo should be here instead, because you add it when the harp sound starts to play usually and it starts to play around here.it would make the previous combo quite long
I added back the breaks, so expect some bugs in the storyboard t/232035 :/