1. Easy (3.09 stars, 111 notes)
2. Normal (4.23 stars, 117 notes)
3. Hyper (4.95 stars, 266 notes)
4. yf's Hard (4.95 stars, 266 notes)
5. Champion (5 stars, 360 notes)
6. wkyik's Insane (5 stars, 362 notes)

Thanks moders

BeatofIke Bubbled
Kawayi Rika Ranked
LZCSC
Sakaue Nachi
lightr
T_Terry_T
k1suke
-APXH
ids
ZZHBOY
P o M u T a
tellertheworld
FlawlessTea
Kibbleru
4 X
RandomEffect
liangv587
poddo
-Napoleon-
Narcissu
Fycho
Kawaiwkyik
Kamio Misuzu
examination
Winek
wcx19911123
m1223961117
Sweet Vanilla
No Dap
P A N
Neta
_AI

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Yui（Left） and her CP Kaori（Right）<3
Is that ok to put pictures here O.o ？

LZCSC wrote:

[Insane]
00:42:855 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一串有节奏相似加强的那种感觉，做成3连和单点距离依次增大的那种如何？好，已改
00:24:667 (1) - 和00:25:042 (2) - 这个滑条和note换一下如何，重音感觉在滑条开头更舒服 恩，的确是，已改
00:50:261 - 到00:51:011 - 加个转盘 这个转盘太快了...本来也想加后来想想还是不加了
01:09:855 (1) - 这个滑条换成两个note大跳和下一个note成个3角如何？ 已换，不过又加了个二连梗进去..
01:20:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串单点换成这样如何？

SPOILER

因为感觉单点那些note节奏有点难 ;w; 这个我摆出来怎么对不上节奏...你是不是开着1/2放的还是别的..这个我没改，单点觉得还可以
01:11:730 - 加个note吧，和前面2连一样，然后把01:11:355 (5,6) - 这两个note重叠，01:11:636 (7,8) - 这两个重叠[/box] 噗..你把我特意放的梗改了，以后再看看~

[Hard]
01:20:355 - 这个地方改成这样感觉更贴合节奏

SPOILER

已改，但我只改了那个滑条，那个单点应该就是转盘的开始，我觉得放单点不怎么妥
01:03:105 - 这改成这样试试呢，感觉不会再有一种突然地空虚寂寞感

SPOILER

已改，的确..虽然我知道你想说什么但你是不是又放错了note;w;，错位的感觉

[Normal]
00:14:355 (5) - 这个改成这样呢

SPOILER

已改

早知道昨晚就不表白了TT-->以后你表白的时候要先问问对方是不是女孩子才行啊111111

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Sakaue Nachi wrote:

[general]
加多几个tag吧_(:з」∠)_ 加什么好..
[Easy]
00:03:105 (4) - 156，100 Done
00:03:855 (5) - 移到x：156 y：200对齐点 Done
00:06:855 (1) - 滑条尾的点上一格 Done
[Normal]
00:11:355 (3) - 这个弄成和上面的对称好点？Done
00:23:355 (4) - 这个弄成轴对称的好看点吧 怎么轴对称..结尾的音是在1/8上的..
00:27:855 (1) - 这个ctrl+j再移回原位好点？Done
00:53:355 (4) - 可以包好点 Done
00:57:480 (7) - 没重合 现在把它们移开了..
01:10:417 (5) - 对齐点好点？Done
[Hard]
00:10:605 (3) - 和下个滑条间隔弄成和前面的一样，前面和最后的有几个同理 (⊙o⊙)我调了0.75X..看看以后能不能这样，不能调我再换成等间距的0.0
00:12:480 (2) - 和前后弄成等距吧 ^
00:38:355 (1,2) - 这两个都ctrl+g然后ds移下位置00:39:105 (3) - 然后这个ctrl+h移回原位 Done,好很多
00:39:855 (4) - 这个试下摆在3的尾巴？_(:з」∠)_ 摆在3的尾巴后面就放不好了..
00:43:792 (4) - ctrl+g和前后那两组的一样好点？Done
01:04:980 (7) - 这样会不会好点

SPOILER

好，已改
[Insane]
00:02:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉跳搞小一点好点？毕竟才开头 Done
00:19:886 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉四连不太好打起来，直接换成两个单点吧？我也觉得怪怪的..换成一个滑条了
00:33:855 (2) - ctrl+g? Done
00:52:886 (4) - 和前面三连的距离一样吧 间距是一样的啊..
01:02:917 (1) - 没重合 Done
01:05:355 (4) - ctrl+g ctrl+h移回去会不会好点？好，flow好多啦
01:06:480 (2) - 弄成对称的好点？一个梗..我通常不会弄对称，会歪一点
01:09:855 (1) - 二连怪怪的，弄成这样？

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呃..二连是个梗，我不怎么想改为单点;w;，以下两个也是
01:11:355 (3) - ^
01:17:355 (3) - ^
01:11:917 (6) - 接三连有点怪，建议这样，还有这里搞下nc

SPOILER

那里的三连声音很明显，只能改一下方式，不能只剩下一个单点;w;
01:15:105 (1) - 没对称好 那是我的摆法啦O.o.
01:19:511 (2) - 滑条尾摆上一格

yf_bmp wrote:

O.O
马克

lightr wrote:

Hi , irc mod here c:

irc

19:06 lightr: 00:00:667 - 滑条头加finish
19:07 lightr: 00:00:855 (3) - 这里
19:07 lightr: 上面复制错了
19:07 Sellenite: 上面不是加finish？
19:07 Sellenite: 噢知道了
19:07 Sellenite: done
19:08 lightr: 00:06:792 - 前面这个滑条到这里才结束
19:08 lightr: 00:06:792 - 这个滑条头也是要加finish的
19:08 lightr: 咦有复制错了;w;
19:09 lightr: 00:06:855 (1) - 这个滑条头finish
19:10 Sellenite: done
19:10 lightr: 00:12:105 - 这里跟人声不好
19:11 lightr: 应该跟鼓点摆个串
19:12 lightr: 00:12:855 (4) - 串到这里结束
19:12 Sellenite: 那个5应该怎么办？0.0
19:12 Sellenite: 我用了个短滑条，但要接串
19:12 lightr: 5保留不变 ， 串直接从5后面开始
19:12 Sellenite: 好的
19:13 lightr: 或者5去掉 和后面一起弄一个串也行
19:13 lightr: 这个你自己决定咯lol
19:14 lightr: 00:12:855 (4) - 滑条头finish
19:14 lightr: 并且NC
19:14 Sellenite: /o/我把5也改成串了
19:14 Sellenite: done
19:14 lightr: 都行
19:15 lightr: 00:14:917 (4) - remove finish
19:15 lightr: 如果你还想继续提高这图的质量我建议你找一个好点的clap音效
19:16 Sellenite: 是前面的clap吗0.0
19:16 Sellenite: done
19:17 lightr: 00:13:417 (5) - 00:14:917 (4) - 00:16:417 (1) - ..........这些地方都是明显要加clap的
19:17 lightr: 后面的地方以此类推
19:18 lightr: 你找的clap音效感觉不怎么合适，建议再找一个
19:19 lightr: 00:15:292 (1,2,3) - 这仨间距最好不要变，因为在音乐比较舒缓的时候放跳不怎么合适
19:20 Sellenite: 恩好的
19:21 lightr: 00:19:417 - remove finish
19:21 Sellenite: done
19:22 lightr: 我看你后面还有很多这样的地方都加了finish 我就不一一罗列了
19:23 Sellenite: 就remove它不用加个音效吗？0.0
19:23 lightr: 你加finish的这些地方都是应该加clap的地方
19:23 lightr: remove后加clap
19:24 lightr: 然后找一个更加合适clap自定义音效
19:24 lightr: 这是我的建议
19:24 Sellenite: 恩知道了
19:24 Sellenite: 那是个normal的hit..
19:24 Sellenite: 找不到有什么好的音效/w\
19:24 lightr: 可以去lks音效包找找/w\
19:25 lightr: 00:23:261 (6) - 这个滑条删掉
19:25 lightr: 00:23:355 - 滑条从这里开始
19:26 lightr: 00:23:636 - 结束
19:26 Sellenite: done
19:27 lightr: 00:24:667 (1) - remove NC
19:27 lightr: 00:24:667 (1) - NC从这里开始
19:28 lightr: 00:24:667 (1) - 滑条头finish
19:28 Sellenite: 两个一样的？0.0...
19:28 Sellenite: 是不是滑条头NC？
19:29 lightr: 滑条NC呀，这么明显的下一段音乐的开始
19:29 lightr: NC比较好
19:29 Sellenite: 恩，done
19:31 lightr: 00:30:105 (3,4) - 感觉3 4换一下位置Flow更顺?
19:32 Sellenite: 恩的确，已移
19:33 lightr: 00:34:886 (1) - 这里没必要NC把
19:34 Sellenite: 0.0 remove
19:34 lightr: 00:35:355 (1) - 加个finish感觉不错
19:35 Sellenite: done
19:36 lightr: 00:36:292 - 这里是1/6呀
19:36 lightr: 建议改下
19:36 lightr: 00:36:855 - 这里finish
19:37 Sellenite: 什么意思？
19:37 Sellenite: 1/6那个
19:37 lightr: http://puu.sh/7w5Kl.png
19:38 lightr: 知道了吗0.0
19:39 lightr: 00:00:667 - 其实这个地方也是1/6 ， 不过我觉得可以不用改
19:39 Sellenite: 恩我的意思是改为1/6的串吗o.o
19:40 Sellenite: 恩开头出个1/6好像不太好><
19:40 lightr: 串也行 折返也行 ， 前者难打后者简单 ， 看你怎么想咯
19:41 Sellenite: 那我00:36:292这里弄串是可以的吧0.0，1/6
19:42 lightr: 可以呀，00:36:480 - 到这里结束
19:43 lightr: 00:42:480 (3) - 加finish
19:43 Sellenite: 恩，已改，四连XD
19:43 lightr:
19:43 Sellenite: done
19:46 lightr: 00:45:105 (1,2,3) - 这三个，加normal的whistle会很不错
19:47 Sellenite: done
19:48 Sellenite: 吹哨子0.0
19:48 lightr: 嗯o.o
19:49 Sellenite: 全场就只有那里吹哨子怪怪的...
19:49 Sellenite: 看看以后怎样，先改辣
19:50 lightr: 嗯，等我看完后你再系统的看下
19:50 Sellenite: 好的
19:51 lightr: 00:47:167 - 其实这里你可以放个转盘的
19:52 Sellenite: 那里hard我放了..
19:52 Sellenite: insane打算多些节奏/w\
19:52 lightr: 00:48:855 (3) - 这个滑条头和尾巴，和00:49:417 (1,2,3) - 这仨个都可以normal whistle
19:54 lightr: 00:49:417 (1,2,3) - 头加finish
19:54 Sellenite: whistle都改了
19:54 Sellenite: 头？0.0
19:54 lightr: 滑条头呀
19:55 lightr: 00:54:292 - 建议这里不要空拍，kiai time打起来会觉得很空
19:56 lightr: 00:54:667 (4,5,6) - 这个3连柑橘overmap了
19:56 lightr: 试试删掉5？
19:57 Sellenite: 那里没滑条呀oo.o...
19:58 Sellenite: 空拍那里加个note可以吗？
19:58 lightr: 可以啊
19:58 Sellenite: 不好意思..什么是overmap;w;
19:58 lightr: 就是明显没有音的地方你下了个note
20:00 Sellenite: 那我取消那两个note了..
20:00 Sellenite: 但又空了一拍;w;
20:00 lightr: 你这个kiai部分明显是24clap的节奏啊，有些地方clap怎么美丽0.0
20:00 Sellenite: 恩我回头看看kiai的clap
20:00 lightr: 00:54:761 - 只需要把这里的note删掉就行了啊
20:01 Sellenite: done
20:01 Sellenite: 我发现我是特意少了一些clap的..
20:01 Sellenite: 0.0不好听吗？
20:01 Sellenite: 不好听的话我就排满它了..
20:03 lightr: 音效要有规律呀，不能有的地方少了有的地方又塞满
20:03 lightr: 你可以多听听rank图的音效
20:03 lightr: 00:57:292 (3,4) - 3 4 换下位置 ， flow更好
20:04 Sellenite: o.o这样啊..
20:04 Sellenite: done
20:04 lightr: 下音效要记住背景音乐是什么你就下什么
20:06 Sellenite: 喔..知道了
20:09 lightr: 01:02:542 - http://puu.sh/7w704.jpg试试这样的节奏？
20:10 lightr: 01:03:855 - 这里放个1/1滑条把
20:11 Sellenite: 图片看不明白/w\，我再看看
20:11 Sellenite: done
20:13 lightr: 01:07:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 哇这一坨，非常违和啊
20:13 lightr: 似乎overmap了
20:14 Sellenite: OvQ后来改的
20:14 lightr: O.O我建议remove
20:15 Sellenite: 好的o.o
20:15 Sellenite: 我也觉得改得怪怪的....
20:18 lightr: 01:14:355 - http://puu.sh/7w7pw.jpg试试这样的节奏
20:20 lightr: 01:18:105 - 这里也是1/6
20:22 Sellenite: 节奏已改
20:22 lightr: 01:23:355 (1) - 加finish
20:22 Sellenite: 咦那里原来是1/6o.o....
20:22 lightr: 用25%仔细听鼓点 0.0
20:23 lightr: 这歌有点鬼畜啊，1/6好多
20:24 Sellenite: 怎么改好呢...1/6后面又接了两个1/4..
20:24 Sellenite: 改成折返吧;w;
20:27 lightr: 01:28:323 - http://puu.sh/7w7KZ.png这里节奏建议这么改改
20:28 lightr: 01:28:605 - 这里转盘好短，建议干脆放个滑条好了
20:28 lightr: 01:29:167 - 滑条到这里结束
20:30 lightr: 啊没想到摸了这么久其它难度我改天再看吧;w;
20:31 Sellenite: 改为滑条吗o.o
20:31 Sellenite: 节奏已改
20:32 lightr: 我觉得改成滑条好点，因为转盘太短了，有些转盘苦手可能前面SS最后转盘转出个100然后直接怒删图 lol
20:32 lightr: 改不改看你咯lol
20:33 Sellenite: 前面现在是连续两个三连
20:33 Sellenite: 想了想还是不改好点/w\..
20:34 lightr: xD
20:35 Sellenite: 谢谢摸啦><，我再修改一下，要post上去先吗o.o
20:37 lightr: 好啊，我来post吧
20:38 Sellenite: 恩

Good luck c:

T_Terry_T wrote:

Hi! The noob modder is here. every modder is welcome><

In general, all the levels seem solid. Timing is perfect, composition is various and never boring... the background is good as well.
I would just suggest some minor changes. Thank you very much, your words encouraged me XD

[Easy]
00:10:605 - Circle instead of pause had plus a circle
00:39:480 - Same as before done
01:02:730 - Same as before, or transform (3) in a slider similar to the one in the image down here. [Unfortunatly, this solution is not distance snapped. I do same as before;D

SPOILER

01:03:105 (4) - New combo done

[Normal]00:04:605 (2) - I would made it long as (1), like so: Yes, it is the better! done

SPOILER

00:18:855 (4) - What about a new combo solo? done
01:09:105 (1,2) - They fit the song, but I think they could be too hard for a Normal. I would delete them and make (3) the new combo's starter. Yes..you are right，I delate them

[Hard]
00:06:855-00:09:855 - Just 3 circle? Peculiar choise. I like it! I don't know whether it is a good..but if you like it，I will keep them
00:52:417 (4) - New combo, like in 00:55:417 done
01:09:480 (4) - New combo here and not in 01:09:855 done
01:10:980 (3) - New combo here and not in 01:11:355 done
01:28:605 (1) - It's just me or this spinner is too short for a Complete score? ...no, it's just me. This is likely to change/w\,but I don't know how to instead of it..

[Insane]
Sorry: this is too hard for me to tried out. But it looks very cool! Thanks,your opinions are very useful！

In conclusion: great job! I hope to play this in "Ranked mod" soon, 'cause it's very good.

k1suke wrote:

那个.. 我是个新人mapper来着.. 所以提出的建议很多可能只是从一个player角度.. ></// 也可以的><

[Insane]
01:04:605 (3,4,5) - 这3个中间的间距似乎是有点大 可能会导致"4"被误读成2分拍的元件 收拢点可能会好点 呜..这是个读图梗;w;先不改
00:06:480 (6) - 这里的往返滑条缩短一点 容易导致滑条提早松手断尾 这个不能改了...音乐的节奏是到那里为止，不能改少><

[Hard]
00:06:855 (1,2,3) - 这个1和23之间的可以放几个元件或者放个breaktime又或者new combo 有个flowpoint慢慢飘过去总感觉挺奇怪 好的，已加了很多东西填充
00:20:355 (5) - 向下移动一点可能会更好 我水平移开了一点..移去下面后面要重新摆位了><
00:26:355 (4,5,6) - 如图 按照滑条应该是按箭头的样子移动光标 和下个元件的衔接会有点别扭的 已将那部分改了

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[Normal]
00:01:605 (2,3) - 这2个滑条的弯度不一样 个人认为同一种风格的滑条最好弯度一样吧 后同 好的，已改成相同的了
00:48:480 (1) - normal的话 转盘结束后的第一个circle不要放在正中间吧 对于新人挺难读的 好的，已移开
01:09:105 - kiaitime 不要空开一整拍 可以加个circle 不然整个就停顿了!! 恩，加了个note

[Easy]
00:27:855 (1,2) - 2可以反一反来着 感觉轨迹像画一个圈 恩，已反转
01:28:605 (1) - 转盘太快了点.. 后面已改成一个大转盘
00:36:292 (4) - easy的话 最好按照元件走势放下一个元件 比如这个 如图 紫色比红色更适合新手吧 恩..的确，已改

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yf_bmp wrote:

建议做的再简单点 持续大跳少一点
现在的连续大跳真的不适合此曲……
No KDs

1. 00:27:855 (1,2) - 这个难度只有这两个直角
2. 00:45:386 - 折一下怎么样？
3. 00:48:480 - 转盘拉到这个位置怎么样？取消一个滑条，因为这里的因不是很重
4. 01:26:917 - 这里前后感觉需要分开？因为是对称的
   easy的话cs-1吧

1. 00:33:855 - 这里分开会不会好点？
2. 00:48:480 - 转盘拉到这里，原因同easy
3. 01:02:542 - 这里01:14:542 - 感觉需要调整
4. 01:28:417 - 最后一个转盘太短，这是normal的话
   个人经验easy和normal着重压下重音舅差不多哩

1. 00:12:292 (1,2,3,4) - 是变距梗的话调整下距离好点
2. 00:27:667 (2) - 跳下前后距离？
3. 00:41:730 (7) - 没叠好
4. 00:42:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 重音部分，拉开距离做成跳感觉好？
5. 00:48:480 - 转盘到这里，原因同上

1. 00:04:417 - 这种短音有的地方连在一起有的拉开了距离，很柜橱
2. 00:06:480 (6) - 00:36:292 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:105 (1) - 建议统一下
3. 00:51:105 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这几个长音合成一个连打，会不会燃一点？
4. 01:18:105 (1,2) - 这里接蓝线真心不好打

-APXH wrote:

[General]
-Really good use of custom hitsounds. I rarely see anyone like this anymore. But one thing about the sliderticks, I recommend that you silence them if you're not using them for sounds. Thanks.but sliderslide and slidertick silence together will be unrankable..so sad

[Insane]
00:55:605 (3,4,5) - Usually for this kind of sequence of slider-circle-slider, I would try make both sliders parallel, or the second slider curve in the same direction. Yes,you are right!Fix
00:58:605 (3,5) - Possible switch the positions of 3 and 5 on the map? Better.Done
01:00:855 (7) - I don't usually see this anymore due to the confusion it can cause sometimes. Try moving 7 somewhere else or add another circle after 7. well.. just a pattern in insane，in hard I will fix it

[Hard]
00:21:855 (3) - Resnap this Done.
01:02:355 (1) - Kinda the same situation as the insane, where this kind of thing could cause a confusion, except this time, if you decide to, just move 1 somewhere else. Yes，fix.

[Normal]
00:23:355 (4) - I'm just pointing this out because I don't know how other people will react when they see this. I know this end it suppose to go with the guitar in the background, but just remember to keep this in mind. actually I am worried about it..I do not know how to do

[Easy]
00:27:855 (1,2) - Why are these two suddenly squared?I think it is fine..I do not know how to change it
00:48:855 (2) - Instead of just clicking the slider as a whole, click on the ends. Some player have a more audible "soft-sliderslide." This is not change ，but 3 changed
00:49:417 (3) - Same as above Fix

Good luck~

ids wrote:

来惹!我新人书的不好不要打我
我被吞回复了，不知道怎么回事，但是好凄惨。。。
easy 蜡烛

1. 00:27:855 (1,2) - 这个难度只有这两个直角 其实我不知道怎么做好..所以暂时保留
2. 00:45:386 - 折一下怎么样？好的，已改
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:480 - 转盘拉到这个位置怎么样？取消一个滑条，因为这里的因不是很重 好的，已改
4. 01:26:917 - 这里前后感觉需要分开？因为是对称的 这里改不了了...
   easy的话cs-1吧 3就好了

Normal

1. 00:33:855 - 这里分开会不会好点？好的，已改
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:48:480 - 转盘拉到这里，原因同easy 好的，已改
3. 01:02:542 - 这里01:14:542 - 感觉需要调整 觉得还可以...
4. 01:28:417 - 最后一个转盘太短，这是normal的话 暂时不改
   个人经验easy和normal着重压下重音舅差不多哩

Hard

1. 00:12:292 (1,2,3,4) - 是变距梗的话调整下距离好点 已经调了...
2. 00:27:667 (2) - 跳下前后距离？^
3. 00:41:730 (7) - 没叠好 已改
4. 00:42:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 重音部分，拉开距离做成跳感觉好？这个在这里做不了这样..怪怪的
5. 00:48:480 - 转盘到这里，原因同上 hard开始不变这样，easy和normal已改

Insane

1. 00:04:417 - 这种短音有的地方连在一起有的拉开了距离，很柜橱 梗
2. 00:06:480 (6) - 00:36:292 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:105 (1) - 建议统一下 ？？
3. 00:51:105 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这几个长音合成一个连打，会不会燃一点？那样overmap了...
4. 01:18:105 (1,2) - 这里接蓝线真心不好打 XD，缩小了一下位置

Narcissu wrote:

这是你做的？……和我看的那个GD的水平完全不一样啊……

easy和normal的节奏太密了，尤其是normal，完全是在用折返压星，我建议你用现在easy的节奏，normal的排版弄一个折返不多的3星normal，然后把那个直滑条easy删了重新弄个节奏稀的，combo不要超过200下

insane很不错，给你个星

嘘.....那首歌简直没多少爱在里面啊....有爱才能做好嘛/w\
第一次做easy和normal..我不喜欢全是1/1的节奏，这好像弄得整首歌的节奏没什么新意，像是为了多一个难度而机械作图。所以只能改细节，不能节省节奏
insane很不错吗O.o，谢射星

ZZHBOY wrote:

from bmt

[General]
你Normal的预览时间好像和其他难度不一样 把统一一下 已改
然后就是低难度的音效不是长白线加个clap就能完事的 建议音效方面去学习一下 比如24clap和重音finish之类的 低难度已加部分音效
为什么offset是负的... 为了保证第一个重音在大白线上..如果用下一个大白线会造成物体在红线前，觉得怪怪的

[Easy]00:12:855 (2,3) - 注意blanket 就是上一个滑条把下一个物件给包住 用缩圈来check 已完善
00:16:980 (2) - 这里就这个音最轻你偏偏要在这里下而把其他重得多的音给空了 zzzzz zz了，已改
00:26:355 (5,1) - blanket 已完善
00:27:855 (1,2) - 其实ez里这种滑条挺丑的...呜..好多人都吐槽这点，要改一改了...改为两个滑条折返
00:36:855 (1) - ez里最好统一ds 像这种前后差距0.1就比较明显了 建议这个问题注意一下 Normal难度也是 又zz了..都检查了一下
00:53:355 - 重音尽量别弄在滑条尾 减弱节奏感的 这个不知道怎么办了..一改的话后面都要改，暂时不改
01:04:605 (4,5) - blanket 已完善
01:07:605 (4,5) - ^ 已完善
01:19:980 (2,3) - ^ 已完善

[Normal]
00:27:855 (1,2,3) - blanket问题 已完善
00:12:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最好别搞这种一坨一坨的感觉可差了... 的确..已简化
KIAI部分还是有些地方ds是1.2 建议统一一下 zz了..都检查了一下
01:02:542 (5) - 这个虽然合曲但是低难度不建议放这个...没办法..不知道放啥，暂时不改
很多地方就算按1.3的ds摆但也会前后遮挡到一些 影响美观度 也许可以适当增加整体ds不过可能会有些麻烦...

[Hard]
00:00:667 (1,2) - 上来就把长白线放滑条尾 这里建议就是改成二连接一个半拍的滑条也许打起来会好一些 已改
后面类似的地方也是一样
00:05:917 (3,4,5,6) - 别这么放 不好 已改为五连打..
00:08:355 (6,7) - 试试ctrl+g然后改好排列 感觉会好些 已改
00:12:667 (3,4,5) - hard里也注意一下blanket问题吧 已完善
00:15:667 (2) - 前后都是间隔二分拍但是间距相差这么大没问题? 已改
00:23:261 (3,1,2,3,4) - 建议这种多个连续弧线单点放的时候关掉网格对正开ds保持间距一致去摆 那部分已经re了一遍..我也觉得怪怪的
然后这里绿线好多啊 个人认为没有太大意义 别打我啊 /w\增强音效而已..
00:48:480 (1) - 这里别乱nc cancel 已改
01:28:605 - 这种地方的建议是重音放note然后在1/4拍之后开始转盘 打起来也舒服些 这样做之后的转盘是不是太短了..暂时不改

[Insane]
00:36:292 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议放六分拍的连打啊...换成折返滑条代替也好啊 第一次玩就把这里读出来是比较难的吧..一个梗..后面有一个六分拍的折返，这里看看连打效果怎么样
00:55:886 (4,5) - 在I里这种地方就可以和上一个物件的间距更大些(建议 这个不行啊..因为前面也是这么摆的突然这么大距离会很怪的..
01:00:105 (4,5) - 这里有点overmap?感觉不是很合适 一个节奏的梗，想了挺久的
01:11:448 (4) - ^ 二连梗..
01:17:355 (3,4) - 不如在上一个滑条后面接个二连 也是二连梗../w\梗想了好久哇/w\，真的不想改..sorry

I的flow感觉还行 但还得多学学 谢谢，flow好就够了..;w;
音效 排列细节和节奏还需要增加一些经验.-. ;w;
美丽

IamKwaN wrote:

我也有做這歌的GD,然後發覺有兩個地方是1/6,但你放成1/4了(我只看了Hard 233 没所谓呀1111

Hard

• 00:00:667 (1) - 这个只能当作1/4的三连打了...跟音乐挺明显的，开头1/6就好坑了..
  00:36:292 (4) - 已改为1/6的折返

慘了,我看了一下自己的Hard,感覺我那個太難了,怎辦

1. Sourse:カンピオーネ! tag:Campione! switch better imo.
2. add tag 'ed'
3. 01:29:448 - not need green line imo. because already end song o.o

1. AR+1 bit low imo.
2. 00:00:855 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal sound part.
3. 00:06:855 (1) - ^
4. 00:12:480 (1) - add clap? continue drum sound.
5. 00:23:355 (2) - try make bit curve?
6. 00:39:480 (5) - add clap.
7. 00:45:105 (4) - add clap slider head and curve and end. more good hear.
8. 00:48:855 (1,2,3,4) - add finish.
9. 00:51:855 (3) - add finish.
10. 01:20:917 (1) - ^

1. 00:12:855 (1) - add finish slider head.
2. 00:24:855 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 00:39:292 (4) - add clap slider end.
4. 00:48:855 (1,2,3,4) - add finish.
5. 00:51:105 (1) - add clap slider end.
6. 00:51:855 (2) - add finsih slide head.
7. 00:57:855 (1) - add finish slider head.
8. 01:12:292 (3) - add clap slider end.
9. 01:12:855 (1) - add finish slider head.
10. 01:20:355 (1) - add finish.

1. 00:00:855 (3) - add finish slider head.
2. 00:06:855 (1) - ^
3. 00:12:855 (1) - ^
4. 00:33:480 (4) - overlaps this.
5. 00:45:105 (1,2,3) - addf finish.
6. 00:48:855 (3,4,5,6) - add finish.
7. 01:23:355 (1) - add finish slider head.

1. 00:51:292 (2) - add clap slider end.
2. 00:57:855 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 01:03:855 (1) - add finish slider head.

yf_bmp wrote:

建议做的再简单点 持续大跳少一点
现在的连续大跳真的不适合此曲……
No KDs

osu size bg

P o M u T a wrote:

m4m your queue

[General]

1. Sourse:カンピオーネ! tag:Campione! switch better imo. Yes，done
2. add tag 'ed' ^
3. 01:29:448 - not need green line imo. because already end song o.o /w\to reduce it‘s sounds

[Easy]

1. AR+1 bit low imo. better，done
2. 00:00:855 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal sound part. done.
3. 00:06:855 (1) - ^ ^
4. 00:12:480 (1) - add clap? continue drum sound. done.
5. 00:23:355 (2) - try make bit curve? curve a bit strange..
6. 00:39:480 (5) - add clap.done.
7. 00:45:105 (4) - add clap slider head and curve and end. more good hear.done.better
8. 00:48:855 (1,2,3,4) - add finish.done.
9. 00:51:855 (3) - add finish.done.
10. 01:20:917 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. 00:12:855 (1) - add finish slider head.done.
2. 00:24:855 (1) - add finish slider head.done.
3. 00:39:292 (4) - add clap slider end.done.
4. 00:48:855 (1,2,3,4) - add finish.done.
5. 00:51:105 (1) - add clap slider end.done.
6. 00:51:855 (2) - add finsih slide head.done.
7. 00:57:855 (1) - add finish slider head.done.
8. 01:12:292 (3) - add clap slider end.done.
9. 01:12:855 (1) - add finish slider head.done.
10. 01:20:355 (1) - add finish.done.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:855 (3) - add finish slider head.done.
2. 00:06:855 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:12:855 (1) - ^ ^
4. 00:33:480 (4) - overlaps this. a pattern
5. 00:45:105 (1,2,3) - add finish. done.
6. 00:48:855 (3,4,5,6) - add finish. done.
7. 01:23:355 (1) - add finish slider head. done.

[Insane]

1. 00:51:292 (2) - add clap slider end. done.
2. 00:57:855 (1) - add finish slider head. done.
3. 01:03:855 (1) - add finish slider head. done.

good luck!

tellertheworld wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

建议做的再简单点 持续大跳少一点
现在的连续大跳真的不适合此曲……
No KDs

[general]

osu size bg

恩..现在这个bg就好了/w\

[Insane]

1. 00:02:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是不管flow 但形狀可以更美觀, 圈與圈之間的距離一樣會比較好看(藍直線). 修正了一下，移动的三角跳
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:03:855 (2,3) - 這兩個是連接的 但分開比較遠 而且是切指flow 當我玩的時候,個人就感覺不到是連續. 而且這舍節奏與00:04:605 (4,5) - 相似 但排版兩個小部份不同. 已修正，后面的适应前面
3. 01:02:636 (1) - 太遠了 还可以啦...
4. 01:11:636 (5) - 為何要重疊 應該是不同的音吧. 二连梗;w;
5. 01:17:636 (5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:36:855 - 至00:42:480 - 這段節奏好像有點快 觉得挺好的，节奏不作修改

[Normal]

1. AIMOD說預視點不同 nomal的 已修正全部一样
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:06:480 (4) - normal好像不允許有jump(改變DS) 已修正
3. 00:27:480 (6) - ^ ^

[Easy]

1. 不錯呢~ Thanks

• considering decreasing the DS a bit for your streams and triplets, they look kinda bad (just imo) if they're spaced out too much
  00:06:198 (3) - move this down a grid for better curve (imo)
  00:07:605 (3,4) - DS (ur using 1.1 right)
  00:08:355 (1,2,3,4) - i think this jump could be arranged better
  
  try this?

  
  00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ this one could too
  00:11:917 (5) - the curve here doesn't really follow the stream well, curve this less basically
  00:12:855 (1,1) - stack better
  01:04:980 (5,1) - ^
  00:23:917 (7,8) - blanket?
  00:40:230 (1,2) - ^
  00:26:167 (2) - i don't recommend ending a slider on a stanza (long white tick)
  
  try this?

  
  00:30:667 (1,2) - DS a bit high imo
  01:15:105 (1,2) - ^
  00:31:230 (3,1) - stack this?
  00:36:667 (1,2) - how bout just 3 circles
  the map is good however, you can find places to blanket and stack things and that would make it look a lot neater ^o^
  00:40:417 (2,3) -
  new rhythm

  
  the idea is you want to put the long sounds on sliders and leave the short sounds on the circles
  look for some other rhythm problems yourself maybe.
  00:45:855 (4,6) - i don't think this overlap looks very nice.
  01:11:448 (4,5) - unstack like u did here? 01:09:948 (2,3) -
  01:15:105 (1,3) - make parallel?

• 
  00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce DS a bit for hard
  00:32:167 (1,2) - blanket?
  00:15:292 (7,1) - ^
  00:20:355 (5) -
  try this?

  
  00:27:292 (1) - for this slider, just take 00:26:730 (5) - and ctrl h j
  same with some others maybe
  00:28:605 (5,7) - don't overlap
  watch out for these unintentional overlaps btw, look through your map and try to fix them
  00:33:105 (3,4) - kinda confusing to read
  00:34:605 (3,2) - again, you can stack things like these
  01:03:480 (3,7) - ^
  00:51:855 (3) - wait why is this using the old slider algorithm? remake slider
  oh i noticed alot of your curves are using the old slider algorithm o-o, maybe remake them? the new one looks better

• 
  Consider just increasing the DS because alot of your object touch
  
  like this

  
  01:15:480 (1) - use a 1/2 slider?

• some parts a bit boxy lol, i think curves look better
  00:17:167 (2,3) - might be a little difficult for easy
  00:21:855 (1) - imo flows better if you ctrl g but you'll probably have to rearrange some objects
  00:38:355 (4,5) - blanket or something?
  01:07:605 (4,5) - fix blanket

FlawlessTea wrote:

[Easy]

00:20:355 (2,1) - Blanket Fix
00:23:355 (2) - Rhythm is accept，good sound

SPOILER

00:54:105 (1,5) - stack? I have changed this part rhythm
01:02:355 (3,4) - This rhythm is off too. I suggestaccept，good sound，too

SPOILER

01:07:605 (4,5) - this should blanket better too Fix
01:09:480 (1,5) - stack these too? not a problem too..

Also the hit sounds are kind of boring, especially at the kiai from 00:51:855 - 01:09:855. Yes，have fulled the rhythm
You should experiment with your hitsounds to make your map sound better have fix some hitsounds

[Normal]
Mostly contains blanket issues such as:
00:09:855 (1,2) Fix
00:30:855 (1,2) Fix
00:52:605 (3,4) Fix
00:58:605 (2,1) Fix

----

00:20:167 (1) - note should start at 00:19:980 not really..keep it
01:23:730 (1,2) - bad flow; the 2 slider should be more vertical: agree，fix

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:45:855 (1) - Slider ends 00:47:355. I suggest a loud finish for the slider

Unsnapped timing point at 00:36:861. should be at 00:36:855 not really..keep it
also one at 00:36:961. should be 00:36:948 ^

Also try to avoid bad overlap in the future. Your map has high approach rate to make up for this, but some are noticeable such as:
00:04:886 (4,3) Fix
00:28:605 (5,7) Fix
01:06:855 (3,3) Fix
etc.

Others seem ok.

[Insane]
Also in the future you should avoid bad overlap, as the map becomes really messy, such as:
00:09:105 (5,6,1,2,3,4) have re these
Also for example in 01:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), you don't stack the 4 and 5, which is fine, but then you stack 6 and 7.
it makes the map look messy agree，all fix


00:12:855 (1,1) - stack Fix
00:16:886 (4,5) - blanket Fix
00:33:855 (2,3) - ^ Fix
01:06:105 (1,2) - These should be the same slider rotated 180 degrees Fix，thank you for reminding me

some small issues with flow i think, but nothing major ;w;
patterns are ok

good luck

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue

[Insane]

• considering decreasing the DS a bit for your streams and triplets, they look kinda bad (just imo) if they're spaced out too much ;w;
  00:06:198 (3) - move this down a grid for better curve (imo) Fix
  00:07:605 (3,4) - DS (ur using 1.1 right) Done
  00:08:355 (1,2,3,4) - i think this jump could be arranged better can't see the picture...but change another style o.o
  
  try this?

  
  00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ this one could too ^
  00:11:917 (5) - the curve here doesn't really follow the stream well, curve this less basically Fix
  00:12:855 (1,1) - stack better Done
  01:04:980 (5,1) - ^ Done
  00:23:917 (7,8) - blanket? Fix
  00:40:230 (1,2) - ^ Fix
  00:26:167 (2) - i don't recommend ending a slider on a stanza (long white tick) agree,use this rhythm
  
  try this?

  
  00:30:667 (1,2) - DS a bit high imo I think it is ok..
  01:15:105 (1,2) - ^ ^
  00:31:230 (3,1) - stack this? Done
  00:36:667 (1,2) - how bout just 3 circles this I keep it but the stream I change it
  the map is good however, you can find places to blanket and stack things and that would make it look a lot neater ^o^
  00:40:417 (2,3) -
  new rhythm

  
  agree,change it
  the idea is you want to put the long sounds on sliders and leave the short sounds on the circles
  look for some other rhythm problems yourself maybe.
  00:45:855 (4,6) - i don't think this overlap looks very nice. change it,use another overlap
  01:11:448 (4,5) - unstack like u did here? 01:09:948 (2,3) - agree,done
  01:15:105 (1,3) - make parallel? perhaps no problem

[Hard]

• 
  00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce DS a bit for hard Done
  00:32:167 (1,2) - blanket? Fix
  00:15:292 (7,1) - ^ Fix
  00:20:355 (5) -
  try this?

  
  can't see the picture..but change it
  00:27:292 (1) - for this slider, just take 00:26:730 (5) - and ctrl h j Fix
  same with some others maybe
  00:28:605 (5,7) - don't overlap Fix
  watch out for these unintentional overlaps btw, look through your map and try to fix them
  00:33:105 (3,4) - kinda confusing to read a pattern o.o
  00:34:605 (3,2) - again, you can stack things like these Fix
  01:03:480 (3,7) - ^ Fix
  00:51:855 (3) - wait why is this using the old slider algorithm? remake slider
  oh i noticed alot of your curves are using the old slider algorithm o-o, maybe remake them? the new one looks better ;w;I notice now..

[Normal]

• 
  Consider just increasing the DS because alot of your object touch can't see the picture..
  
  like this

  
  01:15:480 (1) - use a 1/2 slider? Done

[Easy]

• some parts a bit boxy lol, i think curves look better /w\
  00:17:167 (2,3) - might be a little difficult for easy I choose to keep it..
  00:21:855 (1) - imo flows better if you ctrl g but you'll probably have to rearrange some objects /w\so many works to change..keep it
  00:38:355 (4,5) - blanket or something? change another rhythm
  01:07:605 (4,5) - fix blanket Fix

Thats all! hope i was helpful!

4 X wrote:

Hi~ M4M

I'm inexperienced in modding beatmap. but I'll try my best.


Easy

00:51:855 (3) - Remove clap , finish has enough for this note Done

00:54:855 (3) - Change to finish Done




Normal

00:52:605 - add clap here Done

00:54:105 - ^ Done

01:28:230 - ^ Done




Hard

00:36:292 (4) - I think 1/4 Is better than 1/6 is 1/2 o.o..




Insane

00:10:042 (2,3,4) - I suggest you to move like this Fix like this

SPOILER

00:36:292 (1,2,3,4) - I think 1/4 Is better than 1/6 you can change like this I change to 1/6 slider reentry

SPOILER

01:22:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think remove whistle are better sound. Agree.Done

01:24:386 (1) - I think it should move to 01:24:480 and make it end at 01:24:667 I think keep it is no problem o.o...

01:24:386 - after it moved you can add a note with clap ^

01:25:886 (1) - I think it should be move to 01:25:980 and make it end at 01:26:167 ^

01:25:886 - after it moved you can add a note with clap ^



Nice custom hitsounding. Thanks


Sorry for my bad Eng. /w\ I am bad,too..

I hope it help you

Good luck

1. 00:17:167 (2) - move to 00:16:980
2. 00:37:980 (3,4) - how about this for smoother cursor moving?
   
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3. 00:40:980 (3,4) - for easy diff, stack is not recommended
4. 01:23:730 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:20:917 (1,1) - very difficult. I suggest to move 01:23:730 (1) - near the center (x:256 y:192)
6. 01:27:855 (1) - end at 01:28:980? but it becomes too short spinner, I recommend to change the pattern without spinner
   (applied for other diffs)

1. 00:09:855 (1) - I prefer this (add clap at 00:10:230)
   
2. 00:26:355 (4,5,6) - DS 1.3x
3. 01:13:980 (3) - make symmetric slider with 01:13:417 (2) -

1. 00:11:355 (1,2,3,4) - how about square?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   372,228,11355,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   450,149,11542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   370,69,11730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   291,147,11917,2,0,L|235:147,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:43:042 (2) - Ctrl+G is better , imo
3. 00:43:792 (4) - ^
4. 00:44:542 (6) - ^

1. 00:06:011 (1) - delete
2. 00:12:761 (8,1) - DS 5.0x is too big...
3. 00:16:605 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:48:292 (5) - I suggest to rotate 180 degrees for smoother cursor moving
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can make symmetric star pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   181,61,56917,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   214,344,57105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   18,134,57292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   299,189,57480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   39,311,57667,1,2,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:02:355 (7,8) - I prefer to exchange their position
7. 01:26:636- add a note

RandomEffect wrote:

M4M XD

[Easy]

1. 00:17:167 (2) - move to 00:16:980 Fix
2. 00:37:980 (3,4) - how about this for smoother cursor moving? agree，done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:40:980 (3,4) - for easy diff, stack is not recommended Fix
4. 01:23:730 (1,2) - ^ Fix
5. 01:20:917 (1,1) - very difficult. I suggest to move 01:23:730 (1) - near the center (x:256 y:192) have something change but not this x,y o.o
6. 01:27:855 (1) - end at 01:28:980? but it becomes too short spinner, I recommend to change the pattern without spinner
   (applied for other diffs) too short..

[Normal]

1. 00:09:855 (1) - I prefer this (add clap at 00:10:230) a rhythm pattern，no change..
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:355 (4,5,6) - DS 1.3x 0.0？always 1.3X
3. 01:13:980 (3) - make symmetric slider with 01:13:417 (2) Fix

[Hard]

1. 00:11:355 (1,2,3,4) - how about square? better，Fix，thanks your code！
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   372,228,11355,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   450,149,11542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   370,69,11730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   291,147,11917,2,0,L|235:147,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:43:042 (2) - Ctrl+G is better , imo a pattern，no change..
3. 00:43:792 (4) - ^ ^
4. 00:44:542 (6) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. 00:06:011 (1) - delete this have rhythm..
2. 00:12:761 (8,1) - DS 5.0x is too big... Fix
3. 00:16:605 (3,4) - ^ Fix
4. 00:48:292 (5) - I suggest to rotate 180 degrees for smoother cursor moving Yes,better!Fix
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can make symmetric star pattern also better!thanks for code,I use it
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   181,61,56917,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   214,344,57105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   18,134,57292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   299,189,57480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   39,311,57667,1,2,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:02:355 (7,8) - I prefer to exchange their position agree,fix
7. 01:26:636- add a note Done

Ougra Yui is so cute <3 Yes,she is XD
~Good Luck~

liangv587 wrote:

hello，来自m4m
加了个好友居然直接粉了，西西 /w\以前加的

easy

节奏，密度略大，可以算作normal了
00:03:105 (4) - 上移一点，跟（3）对齐 已改
00:09:855 (3) - 移到【276,140】，跟（1）尾巴叠 已改
00:27:855 (1) - 做成2/1长滑条，也可以降低难度 已改
00:30:855 (1,2,3) - ↑ 已改
00:39:480 (6,1) - 做成1/1滑条 已改
01:12:292 - 写了又删，觉得还是应该加1/2滑条 这个以前我也是这么样，后来mod后很多人说只要一个note就好了

normal

01:19:980 (3,4) - 1/2滑条 已改

hard

很好，就是略难，hard是让人fc的
00:42:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 折返滑条改下方向顺一点吧 一个梗，保持

insane

00:12:855 (1) - 这间距太大了吧 已缩短
01:26:636 - 加个圈？已加

就找出了这些，祝你好运

poddo wrote:

Hello!! good luck on getting it ranked! Thanks>w<

general -
the background image is a bit NSFW(not safe for work, as in similar to adult material), a lot of players may be uncomfortable with it. many people also do not download maps because of r18+/r15+ backgrounds, so it is advised your background be changed to something safe and for all ages(keep it above 800x600 resolution!). just an opinion though! not an error oh..I change another BG with 1366*768,It look better

easy mode -
00:45:855 (1) - it's advised to use as LESS spinners as possible for easy modes, beginners tend to spin too fast and when the spinner has ended they cannot find their mouse cursor for a while, so adding less spinners will make it more easy and compatible for those who prefer easy mode.
maybe try to add sliders or something similar to match the song/beat and keep only 2 spinners. I think this is no problem...O.o

hard mode -
00:00:667 (1) to 00:06:480 (5) - the hit sounds very quiet! maybe use louder files? Very diff is like this,too.I think that is enough

hope i helped!

-Napoleon- wrote:

M4M Has taken from you modding queue.

I don't mod extremely well but I'll try to do my best.
I like to highlight, with bold, important parts to catch the mapper's eyes to those, as said before, useful parts. Just like I did in this sentence! YES,I understand

[General]
I think normal is a bit too hard but nothing that has to be remapped perhaps a bit..

[Easy]
00:09:855 (3,4,5,6) - Try shaping it like this, I think it makes this pattern look better and the best patterns are, the best the player will play. Fix

SPOILER

00:40:230 (1,2,3) - I didn't really understand what you wanted to do here, try one of these options: (Better triangle) or (Blanketed slider and an awesomely placed circle) I choose to use blanket

SPOILER

01:20:917 (1) - This starts a bit too early for a new player try this instead: Fix

SPOILER

01:26:355 (1) - Add hitsound clap at 01:26:636 - Done

[Normal]
00:06:855 (1,2) - That seems a bit nonsence try this:change a little but not a blanket

SPOILER

00:26:917 (5) - This isn't correctly snapped and also doesn't look that well try something else I don't konw what to change is good o.o..
01:24:105 (2,3) - Hmmm I preffer seeing this blanketed like this: Done

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - No streams on hard please, you have an insane diff to have streams. only one，keep it
00:18:667 (1,2,3) - Blanket it like this: Done

SPOILER

00:45:105 (1,2,3) - Make this a regular triangle (Use Create Polygon Circles tool if needed) Done
00:49:417 (4,5,6) - ^ (Create Polygon Circles can't do that shape though) Done
01:18:292 (1) - Add hitsound Whilste (Only at the start though) Done
01:19:511 (5) - Remove hitsound Whistle Done

[Insane]
00:24:292 (8) - Move this a bit right to keep consistency Fix
00:39:480 (1,2,3) - Make this a regular triangle (Use Create Polygon Circles tool if needed) Fix
01:00:855 (7) - Place this somewhere else, I don't like the way this stacks no place..
01:15:480 (3) - Try moving this a little bit right, I don't like the way that looks Done

Done! Hope you liked my mod!Yes，it help a lot！

Good Luck on Ranking!

Narcissu wrote:

先说NC，个人比较建议使用“无脑型长白NC”，你会发现大部分的曲子都是长白线开始下一段旋律的 NC会全面修一下

00:00:761 - 这里是1/3，因为是insane所以直接使用3连接滑条是可以的，但是我还是建议折返接滑条人性点 其实这里是1/6...

00:03:480 (3) - 我建议你删掉 当作三连

00:03:855 - finish 这超不好听啊...

00:04:886 (5,1) - 我建议换成滑条 已换

00:05:636 - 我建议你加note，感觉你前奏部分是按照主音轨的 这个没加

00:06:808 - 折返到这里，然后压在00:06:855 (1) - 上面 先看看怎么样，我觉得保持还可以

00:09:386 - note，00:09:480 - 00:09:667 - slider。这个曲子的节奏怎么好像1/3…… 一个滑条就可以了啊..还有这曲子是1/4和1/6的

00:10:230 (4,5) - 我建议换滑条，还有这里的音效很奇怪，我建议你删了whistle，然后00:10:230 (4) - 下一个和clap差不多的音效弄成XOX，直接换成normal底音比较方便 没有啊..这样音效超级吵的

00:10:980 (9,1) - ^ 超级不好听的啊.....

00:12:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8连打以上我建议距离降到0.8 这个我会降下来

00:20:917 (1,2) - 我建议弄折返 先看看

00:20:917 (1,2) - 这里开始有些没用的线，看上去是想得到音量差的效果……作为插线狂魔我只能说听是听不出来的233↓↓↓ 其实那时我是直接在timing加的，有些多了出来，已经删了，加绿线后直接听原歌会很明显的

surplus timing

00:27:948 - 00:28:136 -

00:29:448 - 00:29:636 -

00:31:698 - 00:31:886 -

00:32:636 -

00:33:198 - 00:33:386 -

00:34:136 -

00:34:698 -

00:36:573 - 00:36:667 -

00:37:042 - 00:37:136 -

00:24:855 (1,2,1) - 老图即视感……这一段排版风格不仅和前面差异太大而且不和歌曲而且很难看 会改一下，试试摆成什么样

00:24:855 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 节奏莫名……根据00:27:855 (3,1) - 来看应该是有人声就无视鼓点顺便填满1/2的做法？……我是建议00:29:542 - 和00:30:011 - 都加上note，该空的地方就空掉，有疏有密才顺耳，虽然我自己有个填满1/2的257鬼畜曲呢
这是原曲的节奏，但它的节奏不明显，所以我把它增强了

00:34:886 (5) - 这个note是打算跟随cymbal sound的话那它其实是在1/3线ahh……可以把00:34:605 (4,5) - 合并滑条 已合，那里也是1/4的，只不过小仓唯唱歌没压在线上...

00:56:355 (6) - 结束在00:56:636 - ，然后00:56:730 - 补个note 这样我大跳就放不好了

00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - 莫名其妙的whistle……不过听上去还不错 保留

01:07:980 - clap 是clap了啊...

01:09:855 (1) - delete whistle ， add finish 超不好听的..

01:09:948 (2) - 删了，或者01:10:230 - 01:10:511 - 也加note 二连梗短时间有一个就好了

01:10:136 (3) - finish 不好听..

01:10:980 (1,2) - delete finish 改为clap

01:11:355 (3) - delete whistle and add finish 不好听....

01:11:917 - delete clap and add finish 不好听........

01:15:855 (4) - 换成3/4的3个大跳note带finish 已改

01:17:448 (4) - 务必删掉，或者01:17:636 (5,6) - 后面也带个note，然后这3个可以弄3/4大跳 已改

01:26:355 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 混点滑条进去，还有这里的节奏和开头00:09:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 是一样的，所以我建议你要么00:11:636 - 加note，要么01:28:136 (4) - 删了，我建议前面加 这个节奏保持一样就行，不做变动，后面个note删了换成滑条

01:28:605 (8,1) - 摆个奇葩的长滑条结尾是我的习惯 转盘好了

我只会刷分图的排版，所以没写关于排列的问题……不过就我打图感觉而言挺不错的

剩下的diff我给你irc好了……

Fycho wrote:

嘛，当做M4M，其实主要不是mod，一些带有指导意义的废话，说的比较多不要打我

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. 需要以下空白音效soft-sliderslide2.wav，soft-sliderslide3.wav 好的
2. 设置audio-leadin到1500好的
   

[Insane]

1. 00:03:855 (2,3) -00:04:605 (4,5) –开头平稳处1/4别摆这么大，像这个间距一样，00:01:605 (5,6) -1/2就是1/2间距，1/4就是1/4间距 remap
2. 00:05:355 (3,4) –这俩音是同一类型的，所以保持滑条形状，轨迹的类似性很有必要remap
3. 00:05:730 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) –这种形状的flow很难大，打起来很反人体工学，00:11:917 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) –这个串子也是，太反人体工学。在有限的移动范围/半斤内，尽可能的拉开间距，打起来才爽。 remap，可能会改为短滑条
4. 00:07:230 (2,3,4) –这些头上可以加whistle Done
5. 00:08:730 (3) - 00:09:105 (5,6) –^ Done
6. 00:08:355 (1) –头上finish Done
7. 00:09:855 (1) –加finish Done
8. 00:12:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) –音乐里有鼓点，建议全加clap，然后用绿线降点音量 remap，音效加上去试试
9. 00:12:761 (8,1) –串子跳这种适合音游鬼畜图的放在TV里人性？而且和整个diff风格明显不符合，而且00:12:855 (1) –这里是开始是减速段，突然来个1/4跳喧宾夺主。。新mapper别乱玩玩脱了。remap
10. 00:09:855 (1,6) –这两个不合曲，6那个音高更高，位置也高点。00:09:855 (1,2,3,4) -00:10:605 (6,7,8,9) –这两组在音乐上是等价的，移动方向不要一个是左往右一个右往左，可以试试三角跳。 ] remap
11. 00:11:167 (1,2,3) –跳不合曲，3的位置有点乱跳，难打到。音乐里是00:11:355 –音比这个00:11:542 –音要重，所以间距上位置上也要注意。可以把00:11:542 (3) 移到（286,173）那，另00:11:917 (5) –往下摆点，减少串子的曲率半斤，或者做成S形/波浪形的。大曲率半斤还不如直线串子来的好。 好的
    
12. 00:13:417 (2,2) –碰一起了，避免不必要的overlap 好的
13. 00:14:355 (3,4) –可以间距大点加个跳，00:14:917 (4) –是个小重音 好的
14. 00:15:292 (1,2,3,4) –等间距？Fix
15. 00:15:855 (4) –头上clap去掉，这是个地鼓位，不是军鼓位。你听音乐里00:14:167 -00:14:355 -00:15:855 –这些位置，都是一个闷鼓，这就是地鼓，一般地鼓是用你S;C2的hitnormal或者S;C3的clap那个音来填的（你现在这样自定义音效就要加绿线了）。怕麻烦可以不加音效，但是clap一定得去。因为clap对应的是军鼓，00:13:417 -00:14:917 -00:16:417 –这些等等是军鼓位用了就可以。前面说的是一种改法，或者你可以把地鼓位军鼓位全加clap，就是00:14:167 (2,3) –这些 我再看看具体音效该怎么加，可能会remap
16. 00:16:886 (4,5) –尾巴和头全去掉clap，理由同上。后面还有一些类似。 好的
17. 00:19:886 (1) –这个一定是00:19:980 –起的，不是蓝线，放25%听。前面vocal有点送气音。 Fix
18. 00:24:855 (1) –尾巴去掉clap，这里是全白线clap（听音乐）Done
19. 00:25:792 (1) –头上clap去掉，换尾上去 Done
20. 00:25:230 (2,1) –overlap难看 Done
21. 00:26:355 (3) –头上漏clap Done
22. 00:27:855 (3,4,5,6) –突然间距大了，看起来散架了= =这里同样是音乐温和段，最好别乱跳，这些减少间距，紧缩下 已缩小
    SPOILER

    
23. 00:29:917 (2,3,4,5) –乱跳毫无根据，玩起来手感很差，这个跳没有跟到音乐里任何音。已缩小
24. 00:30:855 (2) –同理，放到（309，225）那里减少1/4的间距，后面3的位置可以稍微变动下。好的
25. 00:32:730 (3) -1/4别摆的像1/2的间距一样 好的
26. 00:34:230 (3) -^
27. 00:35:917 (3) –头上加finish比clap好的多 Done
28. 00:35:917 (3,4) –间距= .= Fix
29. 00:36:855 –从这里开始的一小段，你加clap，要么加2,4白线，要么跟着音乐里那个鼓音的位置加，也就是类似00:37:417 –00:37:792 -这种地方。下面几个音效算建议。
30. 00:37:230 (1) –折返箭头clap Done
31. 00:40:417 (2) –加clap Done
32. 00:41:730 (6) –头clap，像00:38:730 (5) -。 Done
33. 00:42:011 (1) –头上whistle，像00:39:011 (6) –一样。00:40:230 (1) –这一样，whistle Done
34. 00:41:355 (5) –头whistle还是clap，要和00:38:355 (4) –保持一致。保持整体感和统一性十分重要。 我只强调了2个clap的音，其他就选用whistle而不用clap了
35. 00:43:042 (1) –去掉NC，这里有点spam。Done
36. 00:43:605 (5,1) –可以交换NC Done
37. 00:45:105 (1,2,3) –这三个whistle听起来巨不合适啊，我建议全去掉，加上finish，然后Ctrl+E。参考其他diff 好的
38. 00:47:167 (1,2,3) –这节奏有点问题。00:47:167 –这个位置是个vocal长音，00:47:355 –而这里是没有任何音的，你这样就overmapped了。去掉(2)试试。这个是我唯一能满意的overmap了，不打算改
39. 00:51:855 (5,1) –NC应该加在大白线上。Done
40. 00:51:855 (5) –头上漏finish，这种很强的重音一般都需要 Done
41. 00:57:105 (2,4) –clap美丽 特意改为whistle的
42. 01:00:105 (4) –这里应该是一个circle，而不是1/4滑条。1/4滑条有点牵强。 就这样好了
43. 01:00:855 (7) –finish漏了 Done
44. 00:56:917 (1,2,3,4,5) –这里没什么强音，五角大跳没意义，缩小点间距吧。01:01:980 (5,6,7,8,1) –一般是这种鼓点很强的地方来跳 可能会remap一下
45. 01:00:855 (7,1,2,3) –这种stack不仅难读还break flow，我个人很不喜欢这类。
46. 01:01:230 (3) –头上加finish，音乐里有钹的声音 已加
47. 01:01:230 (3,4) –靠的太紧，间距太小，和周围的物件相比 好的，我注意一下
48. 01:01:605 (4,5) -^ 同注意
49. 01:03:105 (1,2) –这里明显可以放串子。不喜欢有人声的地方突然放串，暂时不改
    SPOILER

    ，
    ，这两种随便。1/4滑条要注意朝向。
50. 01:04:605 (3,4,5) –这种flow不好，很不好打，而这里又不是需要加难的地方。保留
51. 01:06:105 (1,2,3) -1/4别摆的像1/2一样，缺乏整体性系统性 保留
52. 01:07:417 (1,2) -^ 保留
53. 01:07:605 (2,3) –你之前1/4这间距，这1/2说不定也给读成1/4了 3的确要改一下
54. 01:09:105 (1,2,3,4) –这个跳的形状有点难看 暂时保留，不知道怎么改
55. 01:09:948 (2) –这个去掉吧，一般大跳后接续空拍是比较合理的，这样来个双连节奏还不如换成1/4滑条 保留
56. 01:11:355 (3,4) -^ 保留
57. 01:10:980 (1,2,3,4) –注意间距，合理的应该是01:10:980 (1,2) –间距小于01:11:167 (2,3) –，注意音强弱变化 好的
58. 01:12:292 (1,2,3,4,5,1) –这flow过来有点难受，还是之前说的那个移动半斤太大的问题从3到4移动半斤太大。你可以01:12:667 (4,5,1) –把这个往左上摆点（275,262）那个位置然后01:13:230 (2,3) –位置和形状也改下
59. 01:11:917 (6,1,2,3) –强烈建议改成已改
    SPOILER

    
    ， 现在3/4有点滥用。
60. 01:15:667 (1) –这里节奏不合曲，应该这样，这里是不是放错了..不过我进行了改动
    SPOILER

    
    ，1/4鼓点重音是在后面，而前面的乐器音根本不值得放1/4节奏。
61. 01:17:355 (3,4,5) –难读图，分开放可以使得01:17:355 (3,4,5,6) –呈三角形 好的
62. 01:20:355 (4) –clap Done
63. 01:20:636 (6) –尾clap Done
64. 01:20:636 (6) –特别难读，绝对要注意间距和NC的问题，NC这样排，
    SPOILER

    
    已改
    间距的话三个一组可以摆两个三角形，美观实用。和鼓点相比钢琴是弱音，从来没见谁钢琴音用散点跳的。保留散跳
65. 01:27:292 (1) –去NC，别spam 好的
66. 01:26:917 (1,2,1,2,3) –这里到三连flow不好，我推荐三连这个形状，已改
    SPOILER

    

关于NC，一般的做法是非特殊梗地方一根大白线或两根大白线换一次NC，在大白线/强拍处换，起引导作用，而不是跟着歌词。所有diff都一样（况且那种乱七八糟歌曲的歌词也没办法区分哪个开始哪个结束。。。）
另外物件位置太随机，完全有点满天飞乱跳的感觉，要做难也是要合曲的难，跳的位置和间距很有讲究，稍微错开一点就gg了。如果不会控制的话在有些地方还是开着DS做。一些音效建议其他diff不重复了。

[Hard]

1. 00:01:230 (4,6) –碰一起了 已移开
2. 00:04:605 (3,4) –这样？唔..一个flow，我觉得保持比较好
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:06:480 (5) –shift+w后音效更合适。 已改
4. 00:13:417 (2) - 00:14:917 (6) –为什么这些加的finish，insane你加的是clap，这段音效要和其他diff保持统一 已改
5. 00:25:792 (1,2,3,4) –hard间距还乱玩，123三个移动半斤大，不合适。00:26:167 (3) –放到(407,157) 已改
6. 00:27:292 (7,8,1) –间距不要突然增大，这里是鼓点全都是一样的强弱，建议保持一致的DS 已改
7. 00:31:980 (6,1) –没有任何跳的必要，00:32:167 (1) –这根本不是什么强音或者特殊音。 已改
8. 00:35:355 (1,2,3) –三角形摆左右对称了会更好看。（用左右翻转工具） 已对称
9. 00:36:292 (4) –hard用这略坑，建议一个1/2滑条带过，这个保持好了..没什么大问题
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:39:855 (4) –finish 已加
11. 00:49:417 (4,5,6) –同样左右对称会好看很多 已改
12. 00:51:105 (1) –移到00:51:292 –跟bass音，少拘泥下人声 已改
13. 00:51:855 (3) –头上finish，至于clap要不要加看你是不是和insane一样了 全部改为finish
14. 00:57:105 –为什么要消音到30%？我觉得没任何意义 这个..本来我是有些音效想改的，结果后来忘记怎么改了，绿线也忘记删..已删
15. 00:57:855 (2) –finish 已加
16. 00:59:355 (1) –头上finish 已加
17. 01:00:855 (1,2) –finish 已加
18. 01:04:980 (7,8) –形状有点难看，试试这样 难看吗..我挺喜欢的一个flow，暂时保留
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:06:855 (3) –用旋转工具逆时针旋转20°flow更好，现在都碰到01:07:605 (3) –滑条尾了 已改
20. 01:09:105 (3) –避免overlap 应该没什么大问题，保留
21. 01:27:855 (1,3) –加clap已改

老风格的滑条描点不好拉的话把滑条删了重拉

[Normal]

1. 00:02:355 (3,4,5) – 这种节奏是不是更好？好很多！已改
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:105 (4) –碰一起了，而且flow不是很好 碰什么..不是很明白
3. 00:26:917 (5) –这滑条没对上音，换成一个单点在00:27:105 – 已换
4. 00:42:105 (5) –这里没对上鼓音，音是在前面红线上的，这样试试 这样有点急了，保持
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:26:355 (1,3) –碰一起了 已移开
6. 01:28:417 (1) –这种滑条在normal diff 太短了，新手来不及转就miss了。试试这样已换成滑条
   SPOILER

   

1.30的间距可能偏大了点，没大问题。

[Easy]

1. 00:03:855 (5,2) –有点碰到 ......
2. 00:28:980 –有人声有鼓点的地方空拍没啥意义啊 其实一开始是没位放..已改
3. 00:45:855 (1,1) –这个转盘后预留时间不足，而且后面的1/2滑条距离转盘中心太远，建议换节奏，延长转盘 已改成这种节奏
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:51:855 (3) –滑条尾clap 用了另一种音效
5. 00:57:480 (1) –头clap 已加
6. 01:02:355 (3) –首尾折返全上clap 已加
7. 01:03:105 (1) –尾clap 已加
8. 01:06:105 (1) -^ 已加
9. 01:09:480 (1) –clap 已加
10. 01:15:480 (1) -^ 已加
11. 01:23:730 (1) –去掉，离转盘太近 已改
12. 01:27:105 (2) –这种节奏在easy太难，normal都难，万一bat的妹妹fail了怎么办。 妹妹fail了这可不行！已改

就这样吧，insane还很欠缺，need more work，建议多PM去求一些高级的modder（上百kds的）mod，新手的mod基本上用处不大。等多找点mod，当你觉得不能再提升的时候，打算找bat之前，可以再找我看一次。有不懂的游戏里问我。

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

BG尺寸不合 盡量1024x768 已换

[Insane]
00:39:011 (6) - 太遠吧 距離跟1/2的差不多 已缩小
00:51:115 (4) - UNSNAP 已调整
01:02:542 (4,1) - 這距離有點嚇人 唔..这个还是不会很远，保留
01:12:667 (4,5,1) - 怎都覺得是沒疊好 已叠好
Fix

[Hard]
00:17:917 (2) - 本來應該是1/2吧? 这个还是觉得有点争议..先保持
01:05:355 (1) - 尾部紅點? Fix
01:27:855 (1,3) - clap 已换
Fix

為何不找狗? 觉得还不够好..先找多些mod

1. Your BG must have the following dimensions: 1024x768

1. 00:00:855 (1,2) - to have a better start, it would be nice to have something like this: (then you would have to fix the spacing of (3))
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:855 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this could cause problems for a newbie as it looks hard to read, It would be better something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   183,90,42855,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   43,234,43605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   239,282,44355,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   183,90,45105,2,0,L|

3. 00:52:605 (4) - nc o3o because you have a combo a little long

1. 00:00:855 (1,2,3) - to have a better start, it would be nice to have something like this: (then you would have to fix the spacing of (4))
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:54:105 (5) - nc because you have a combo a little long
3. 01:28:417 - to maintain consistency with the other diff would be better to add a spiner here 01:28:417 - and end here 01:29:355 -

1. 00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream could be better:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:45:855 (1) - this spiner should end here: 00:48:105 - and do not forget to add finish
3. 00:51:105 (5) - I think a nc should be here because empienza a new sound
4. 00:53:355 (1) - remove nc and then you add nc here 00:54:105 - thus, the nc will follow the voice
5. 00:56:355 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:18:292 (4) - slightly diagonally would be better
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Check Aimod o3o

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

唯小仓萌=w= 怎么知道的../w\
[Insane]

00:03:292 (6,7,8) - 这个可以稍微移下去一点。4 5 6有个折角的感觉会好一些 没什么大问题，保留

00:11:730 (2) - 00:11:917 - 红线这里停了 00:12:011 - 补一个note 重鼓点开始stream，保留

00:25:605 (3,1) - 错位 已移好

00:27:011 - 补note？保留，因为我这段全是1/2的

00:46:980 (7,1) - 压着好点。读图或是美观方面都是。如果想突出00:47:542 (1) - 向右转的感觉，可以00:47:355 (9) - 再上一点我实际上挺喜欢不那么规则的三角形跳的 已移好，9也压在slider头上

00:51:115 (4) - 跑偏了。对准时间轴 Fix

00:51:115 (4,5) - 这里比较建议做个连打，毕竟接下来是kiai time。00:51:198 - 补note，和4一起压在5上 保留

00:50:730 (2,3) - 我倾向于朝下甩，比如这样 修了一下向下的flow

SPOILER

00:52:230 (2,4) - 0.0 没问题的

01:28:042 (2) - 试一下这里？保持原来的flow，我试这个不怎么顺...

SPOILER

[Hard & Easy]

good

[Normal]

00:20:167 (2) - 这里别跟这个小鼓点了，很难读。移到00:19:980 - 1/2单点吧 好的

00:20:355 (3,4) - 这种非1/2的就折返好些吧。。 好的

00:22:792 (2) - 改成小折返？好的

good luck~☆ Thanks~☆

[Yue] wrote:

Hi :3~
M4M Has taken from you modding queue.

General:

1. Your BG must have the following dimensions: 1024x768 Fix

Easy:

1. 00:00:855 (1,2) - to have a better start, it would be nice to have something like this: (then you would have to fix the spacing of (3))
   Yes，better，change this style
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:855 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this could cause problems for a newbie as it looks hard to read, It would be better something like this:
   thanks your code！change this
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   183,90,42855,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   43,234,43605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   239,282,44355,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   183,90,45105,2,0,L|

3. 00:52:605 (4) - nc o3o because you have a combo a little long 0.0 have DS..

Nice diff :3

Normal:

1. 00:00:855 (1,2,3) - to have a better start, it would be nice to have something like this: (then you would have to fix the spacing of (4)) a big work..the flow later is good..I don't want to change this,sorry/w\
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:54:105 (5) - nc because you have a combo a little long Fix
3. 01:28:417 - to maintain consistency with the other diff would be better to add a spiner here 01:28:417 - and end here 01:29:355 -somebody said the spinner is too short in normal o.o，ask me to use a short slider to instead it..

Nice diff too o.o

Hard:

1. 00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream could be better: Yes，better，change this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:45:855 (1) - this spiner should end here: 00:48:105 - and do not forget to add finish In hard I want to make more rhythm，so this have on change..o.o
3. 00:51:105 (5) - I think a nc should be here because empienza a new sound Fix
4. 00:53:355 (1) - remove nc and then you add nc here 00:54:105 - thus, the nc will follow the voice Fix
5. 00:56:355 (1,2) - ^ Fix
6. 01:18:292 (4) - slightly diagonally would be better Done
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane:

1. Check Aimod o3o /w\I know，Fix it

Nice song and mapset :3
Good luck! Star~ Thanks your encouragement！

examination wrote:

爷爷 我打完以后看了一眼BPM 只有160 做的好鬼畜 整体很好啦~ 不难的啊...我re完之后变简单了
新人modder 给的都是琐碎的没用的建议 看着改就行w 不想改的就不要改啦

[Easy]
00:11:355 (6) - 好像歪了 上移一个grid 唔..关于grid的问题，Easy和Normal都是全程DS的，不能左歪一个右移一个，而且没什么问题，所以暂时都不改
00:31:980 建议加个note 已加
00:40:230 (1) - 歪了 左移一个grid【再上移一个
00:49:417 (1,2) - 合成一个slider吧 毕竟easy 还是强调打击感好一点
00:59:355 (4) - 左移一个grid【随便

[Normal]
00:00:855 (1) - Slider好像本身就画歪了 再画下/w\ 这个没歪的，我按照缩圈来Blanket了
00:09:105 (4) - 歪了 上移一个grid
00:38:355 (3,4) - 打起来感觉有点不舒服
01:01:605 (6) - 右移一个grid
01:06:105 (6) - 感觉是放歪了 不知道是按什么放的QAQ

[Hard]
感觉有点像I了 I我根本打不动TUT 不难的啊...
00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 换个折返slider吧 保持放一个stream
00:53:261 - 加个note吧 反正已经这么鬼畜了 那几个部分hard和insane都不加的
00:55:980 (7) - 歪啦 已改
01:04:886 - 加个note 同2


I 我打不了就不看啦TUT /w\
大概只能书这么多
音效不错 不过好像有点问题 不过我还不会加音效就不提意见啦/w\ 以后可能会修一下whistle
祝早日rank~Thanks~

Winek wrote:

Hello! M4M, I hope my mod won't be unuseful Absolutely not, it gave me great help,Thanks you mod So in detail！！！Because my poor English I use more time to check and post，sorry for delay ;w;

General

1. I'm not sure if it's me ; Cause i'm always having internet problems. Is the offset currently -645? I belive not, but if yes, you need to change it at 855.
2. Even If it's a japanese anime ~ I highly suggest you to translate the tags to english as well. I'm not sure wheter you did or not. The osu! community is english, and i'm not sure anyone here is gonna reasearch the anime in japan, but who knoes. So be sure, if not done before to translate to english. If you can't you should ask someone experienced in both languages. I can't speak nor understand your language, so I am not sure if you transleted it. green line not able to put before the red line，and -645 just right the big drum，so I use -645 ，is able.And about the language，many TV size is able to use English and Japanese cuz there are so manyyy these song in osu，thanks your concern，but this is no problem XD

Easy

00:03:105 (4) - I was hoping for some 1/1 slider like you previously did at 00:00:855 (1,2,3) . The 1/2 reverse doesn't fit good at all.They are often used when mapping a part of vocals or when there is rapid 1/2 changes some position where I would clearly see a 1/2 reverse : 00:05:730 . We clearly here the beat comes in faster. Like I suggested, Change into a 1/1 slider. Orelse it breaks all the constanthingy. Of course, Changing it to a 1/1 slider would also break distance snap, so I decided to tweak in the play, and I crossed against some results that satisfy me. Here goes: About this ，I think this it is more better than mine！I use your code <3，thanks

Code

135,108,3105,2,0,P|122:170|140:215,1,99.9999999999999
216,148,3855,5,0,0:0:0:0:
291,333,4605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,347,5355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,247,5730,2,0,P|51:224|22:221,2,50

If you don't know how it works

If you don't know what to do with this code: First, open your .osu file with notepad, and try finding this in the "HitObject" section. ( That's the original ) Yes I know ;D

128,96,[b]3105[/b],2,0,L|68:96,2,50
128,196,[b]3855[/b],5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,[b]4605[/b],1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,[b]5355[/b],2,0,P|72:308|80:372,2,99.9999999999999

Delete this part, and instead add my version. Don't close notepad yet. Save, quit editor then enter in it again, the parts should have changed. If you like it, great. If you don't, then instead just Ctrl+Z in the notepad until it comes back to original, then save again. The bolded is the offset. It can help people see more clearly in it.

00:06:855 (1,3) - I know these are completely unimportant details, but you need them. I *think* you tried to stack them, right? SImple, the stack isn't correct. Either move 00:06:855 (1) at 244:136 or 00:09:855 (3) at 248:136. Both will create few distancs problem, but they're not major at all. I'd suggest to move 00:09:855 (3) sicne it will be really easy to move 00:10:605 (4,5) as they are regrouped and not lined. Distance is easily fixed that way. You should recheck yourself. Like 00:16:980 (4,2) where i can clearly see it's a stackfail.All stack them,details is good!00:09:855 (3) - For now you were giving a NC to every 2 santza or Downbeat. I totally knows that the Previous combo 00:06:855 (1,2) will be really short. But before clicking on combo lenght, we must think constanthingy first. You should think about giving an NC to this note. have NC！00:12:855 (1) - 00:24:105 (4) This part really lack constanthingy. I'd also review your NC. The first is of a lenght of 4, 2nd has only 2 notes and the 3rd has 4 notes.
The first note of this part 00:12:855 (1) is somehow left alone. The missing beat 00:13:980 is ignored while in the same combo 00:14:355 (2,3) doesn't have that little beat ignored. The same goes for 00:18:855 (2) , which an important constanthingy beat is ignored: 00:19:980 ; I'd suggest to simply add a note. For the NC problem ; I just understood that you weren't following a constant stanza here. Give an NC to 00:15:855 (3) and 00:23:355 (3) .Have given an NC to 00:15:855 (3) and 00:23:355 (3) but 00:19:980 haven't added a note cuz don't have good rhythm00:23:355 (3,4) - This part is too hard for begginers. Even if you can pass that easily, saying "AH! Boring." Some might panic seeing that. Begginers might think as well as it's a constant 1/1 notes. After tweaking and playing, I found out something interesting. I gave you a little tutorial upper there. I think all the easy diff is difficult than other's easy，but I want to have a better rhythm rather than more easy to play..this rhythm no change，NC changeFind Offset 26355 & 27855

Code

372,28,26355,6,0,P|304:0|230:33,2,150,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,27855,2,0,L|304:224,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

By the way, I liked the way you did, but it might be hard for begginers. I'd reserve this for Normal. While that, you can either accept or refuse my proposition.Ah, More NC problems. Make them be consistent! they musn't be random or when you say "oh, the combo is too long, NC." As take in at this part 00:24:855 (1) and following notes. First combo 00:24:855 (1,2,3) NC after 1 santza. 2nd combo 00:26:355 (1,2,3,4) NC after 2 stanza. It's not logic. It's the same part. Be sure to review yourself on this. For me a modder must show the way to the mapper, not following them all the way long, so be sure to review your mapset about this. Yes，I change this 4 combo NC one time to consistent! them！00:26:355 (1) - I'm not exactly sure how is this note constant. There are like, no 1/2 beat. It's somehow hard to explain, but eh... It doesn't fit at all. I don't know if you did it randomly or whatsoever. In this part most sliders are 1/1. Why is that one not an 1/1? It doesn't fit much the music at all... See 00:35:355 (3) where we clearly hear a note at the end of slider, which is a red tick. Nothing wrong here! I might see you are trying to follow a different little music at 00:26:355 (1) but sudden change from BGM to Effect sounds/vocals isn't good. You can keep it, but just remember this for your next mapsets. This I follow the piano not the drum..so I don't put one not an 1/1；3‘s drum is exactly on te red tick，so no change..00:42:855 (1,2,3) - This part is extremely confusing. You are completely ignoring important beat where they sounds off big finish sounds. Why? It's so confusing even I missed. ( Being an average normal-hard player. ) Suggest a remap and reconsideration of what you did here. There is only 4 noes, it shouldn't kill you. Also the same for 00:49:417 (1,2,3) where those notes start on red ticks, too confusing! How are they supposed to know? I'd suggest you to end the spinner 1/2 tick afterwards at 00:49:042. The player will still think he's following a 1/1, so no problemo! this really my mistake../w\I have changed the 1,2,3 to the drum，but the spinner is no change because in the red line it's too close to the next note！01:02:355 (3,4) - Refer to upper mod. This average thing for *maybe* you and me can look easy, but not for starter. Remember it's the easier diff. Those are generally a "tutorial" to help newbies out. I think you can apply same suggestion as upperwards.good rhythm rather than easy，thats what I think..;w;01:07:980 (4,1) - This part is definitively confusing for newbies. They might think "Oh, the note is just beside! I must click it right away!" Even if it Follow Distance Snap, Newbies are not robots and can totally be confused by pattern like this. After tweaking in again, decided to makes some less confusing changes by making the pattern more clear and adding a note where you leaved blank. My version should be a bit friendlier against noobz! Offset from 67980 to 69480. Yes，I think this flow is not good，too，I use your code，thanks！

Code

88,145,67980,2,0,P|141:187|152:232,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,55,69105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,69480,5,8,0:0:0:0:

01:14:355 (3) - If it was me, I'd simply ignore the vocals and continue mapping BGM on constant 1/1. The way it is, It sounds good for the reverse arrow but not at the ending point, after the reverse arrow. Also about the rhythm problem..

Normal

At the very beggining, I've remarked how 00:01:605 (2) was somehow random. There isn't music to support! Same goes for 00:03:105 (4) . Trying to "add" in music with hitsound isn't good. Place hitsound sample to 0 and listen carefully. Do you hear music where the notes touch? I doubt. Review those two notes. I'd suggest something simple.. as a 3/2 slider. I think this is no problem although I isn't follow the drum，the new rhythm is good00:03:855 (1) -and following combo - It's not very clear. At the beggining of the combo where you only get a BGM beat on 2/1 for 00:03:855 (1,2) but sadly for 00:05:355 (3) which has repetitive beats, Only have a 1/1 slider + reverse... So i decided to tweak in again! hue Offset start at 3855 up to 6480. the same with this，although 1/1 slider accord with the rhythm，I want to verious them，sorry for that

Code

216,284,3855,6,0,P|202:208|213:155,1,120
91,63,4605,2,0,P|175:87|225:62,1,120
358,88,5355,2,0,P|438:60|486:76,1,120
441,140,5917,2,0,P|403:173|379:179,1,60
320,200,6292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,188,6480,1,4,0:0:0:0:

00:06:855 (1,2,3,4) - That flow goes weird. Checking compability. 1 and 2, ok. 2 and 3, ok. 3 and 4, no. The flow start off as oval flow and suddenly turns to another "broken" flow at 00:08:355 (3,4) . Please consider this for your future maps, and if you can think of a solution, then go ahead! Not at all..just flow clockwise after anti-clockwise O.o00:11:917 - Add a note here, really. See how 00:09:855 (1,2) has no missed beats but then 00:11:355 (3,4) - has a big space in the middle? You should understand what i mean here not at all，too... I mean in front difficult so I later easy，Is such a thing O.o00:12:855 (1) - More incoherence with the New comboing here. Review while reffering to what i was saying in Easy difficulties. The santza you choose to NC aren't constant at all, as you go from 1 full beat to 2 full beat and etc. This should NC because it's turn to quiet rhythm00:26:167 - Adding a 1/2 just before a downbeat is a good idea, as most of the song, not all of them are having some rapid vocal shooting just before the downbeat. Also, More incoherent constanthingy. No note at 00:26:167 but clearly a note at 00:27:480 (7) . Review, baka. I am not a baka..;w;listen carefully， 00:26:167 just have one drum，but 00:27:480 (7)have two drums！00:41:355 (3) - I'm not sure wheter it was on purpose or not ; But review the clap here, it just doesn't fit. Maybe it was an error? Not a error..I want use two clap to emphasize the rhythm00:39:292 (4) - Ah.. Why is there a 1/2 here? It's one the calmer part of the song, so why? It's not constent either. 'd Rather make something more constant without this one. Just to go forward the song，not necessarily the whole song maintaining the same rhythm00:49:417 (2,4) - You should always recheck yourself for nazi details like these. Even if they don,t seem important at all, it avoid BATs a good bunch of works. (2) has y:188 while (4) has y:187 . I don't see reasons why. These thing are very important if you want your map ranked so much. Recheck your diffs! baka><,both 188!01:00:105 (4) - Again the constanthingy? There are clear vocals at 00:58:605 (2) where you followed vocals but here you just decided to go on and ignore vocals. I'd suggest for this one to be the same as 00:58:605 (2) adding a circle on the nextward downbeat.
I have try it ，but the rhythm in 00:58:605 (2) accord with 01:00:105 (4) 01:07:417 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure I understand those stack. Of course it's a preference choice. Like, I prefer stacking notes when making 1/4 triplets, or humongeous amount of 1/4. When there is a tune up on the music sometime i stack, or when two sounds repeat together. Just be sure about those stacks. If you think thye don't fit, I'd suggest you remap this little part. Yes，I remap this part ;D01:13:980 (3,4) - Even if we are on normal, this get a bit complicated. Review this part, and think to the players that get all confused because they get themselves stuck with a confusing note that start on a 1/4 tick, but them not knowing. Error! Oh..I remap this01:25:605 (4) - For the reason you should know, because I told it a good bunch of time already, you should do like 01:24:105 (2) . You're ignoring important beat on this note. Fix！

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Now for a new mod, I'll try rechecking Easy and Normal~

Easy recheck

I might have posted something you denied in the old mod, sorry if i do. Just tell me you already denied if I do ~00:11:355 (4) - You should make this a 1/1 slider instead of a 2/1. It would make a better clap chain, firstly, and secondly, there is a sound I can't describe on the backbeats, but we easily hear it, i'm sure you do hear it. Done00:16:980 (2) - This note is kinda random. On the other similar parts, you don't find this note again... Exept maybe 00:21:855 (2) . I'd be sure about making this part constant. You can either:
Adding notes: adding some note at 00:13:980 - The perfect spot for it would be right in the middle of 00:14:355 (3) , 229:113. If you do, ensure to reform a better blanket with 00:14:355 (3) . Also, you'll have to add a note at 00:19:980 - Since here it's a bit complicated, lemme give you a code~

Code

245,299,19980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,176,21855,2,0,P|40:252|84:320,2,150,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

I just added the note and played with the part here to make it prettier.
Removing notes: Delete this note: 00:16:980 (2) . It might cause fome distance problems. Thus rotating 00:15:855 (1) of 12* from the Selection center should make up spacing problem.
Ok for the 2nd one it's a bit complicated: Her's what i suggest: 00:20:355 (1,2,1,2,1) - Delete these note and add this code here:

Code

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60,176,21855,2,0,P|40:252|84:320,1,150
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174,100,24105,2,0,L|266:164,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,256,24855,6,0,P|299:268|359:252,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

It's rather hard to explain, so I just did a code here~ hmm,I delete and let it suit the DS00:24:855 (1) - I would really see this note as a 3/ and remove 00:25:605 (2) . it would sound nicer following the music. Also you palced some 3/2 at 00:26:355 (3) . What about it, it would also have more constanthingy Done00:37:230 (2) - For a better linear flow, I would recommend you to roatate this note from the seleciton center by 9 degree and move 00:37:980 (3) to 449:130 for distance snapping. I straight it00:45:105 (4) - Why is that note stand alone here being horizontal? while all the other 00:42:855 (1,2,3) are vertical? I'd really recommend you to place 00:45:105 (4) as a vertical as well, in the opposite side of the previous note like you said in combo (1,2,3). Here we have 00:44:355 (3) , so make it head to the upper. Fix00:45:855 (1) - Maybe have i said before, it's rather hard for an easy diff. I'd suggest you to put it one red tick foward. It might look hard ; But yours isn't really better. It's still hard for begginers. Players will think that the 1/2 rythm has changed to a 1/1, thus making it more more more friendly against begginers. hmm..I think this isn't a problem，keep it01:00:855 (1,2) - You're somehow ignoring the downbeat in certain way. You should probably start the downbeat with a slider. It would also cover the vocals it has. Hopefully, code for you... Delete 01:00:855 (1,2,3,4,1) and try the code to see if you like it!

Code

145,85,60855,6,0,P|197:76|249:87,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,175,61605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,176,61980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,177,62355,2,0,P|49:173|5:177,2,74.9999999999999,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,225,63105,2,0,P|129:269|181:289,1,99.9999999999999,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,315,63855,5,4,0:0:0:0:

At the same time i reorganized 01:03:855 (1,2,3) which was kinda in a messy position. I think this rhythm is fit..so I keep it01:01:230 (2) - Here we hear some passive hitsound at the reverse arrow: It's really faint but we hear it. It's a little drum. I'd suggest either a finish or clap on drum addition, preference finish since they seems to be a bit weaker than drum claps. finish better01:18:855 (1,2,3) - These are the 3 last note before last spinner ; I think you can arrange them in a prettier way.
Something like this or whatever you want. The original is kinda uncreative, and there are many possibilities~ You can try yourself. Fix

Normal Recheck

1. 00:00:855 (1,3) - These two notes could definitively be more visualy appealing if they were more curved. The actual points a bit random. Also curving them would create a far blanket with 00:01:605 (2).keep
2. 00:05:355 (3) - I'd suggest you to remove this reverse arrow and place notes at the empty spaces between this note and 00:06:480 (4) on 1/2. You are really skipping the beat here: especially inside the slider where we hear beats ; It should really be mapped out with simple circles. I'm talking about 00:05:917 and 00:06:292. I tried it myself, and it sounds much nicer .3. But maybe it'll make the difficulty harder, so be sure that if you accept this suggestion your diff spread isn't too affected.keep
3. 00:06:855 (1,2,3,4) - I talked about it on my old mod ; You said it was an anti-clockwise flow. But seriously it doesn't fit, and isn't much appealing. In my opinion, it should be constant since they are all in the same combo. 00:06:855 (1,2) are both on oval flow, but suddenly 00:08:355 (3,4) goes into a anti-clockwise flow who break all the constant here. Likely could i say, 00:06:855 (1,4) are the same shape while 00:07:605 (2,3) are opposed. I couldn't find really an appropriate code for this one, so if you can accept this suggestion, try maybe to find something..? Fix，remove them and straight 4
4. 00:10:605 (2) - Why is it a 1/2 while 00:09:855 (1) is a 3/4? It's the same part, really, there is maybe a tune down, but the music don't change at all. Really, 00:10:605 (2) should be a 3/4 as well. Would create spacing problems ofc. Delete 00:10:605 (2,3,4,1) - and try this code instead: keep
   
   Code

   348,236,10605,2,0,L|352:336,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,242,11355,2,0,P|210:254|134:230,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   225,102,12105,2,0,P|285:90|361:114,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   415,193,12855,6,0,P|434:132|418:60,1,135.000005149841,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   00:12:855 - You missed some beat here in this part. (Not this location.) Let me tell you what to do: 00:15:292 (4) - This part doesn't have 2 beats, only 1. Change into a 1/2 slider or a simple circle. This part is different from 00:13:792 (2) where we clearly hear 2 beats.
   00:17:167 Requires a note due to 1/2
   00:20:167 Requires a note due to 1/2 keep
5. 00:32:355 (3) - While this note doesn't follow any of the vocal the following notes at 00:33:855 (1,2) - directly follow the vocals. What about replacing this note by a 3/4 then adding a note at 00:33:105 ? It wouldn't cause much spacing problems, since this is just before a spinner. keep
6. 00:45:105 (4) - A bit like easy difficulty, why is this note different from it's combo 00:42:855 (1,2,3) ? I would clearly see it forming a little blanket with 00:44:355 (3) . keepremove it for no blanket
7. 00:56:917 (2) - This 1/1 slider starting on a red tick feel overmapped since there is no vocal to support it. I'd recommend you to to place a note at 00:57:105, ofc remove the slider.
8. 01:24:105 (2,1) - The music for these two notes are 1/1, not 3/4, really. keep

Hyper

My internet sucks, so it might be possible that something already suggested has been corrected. If yes, please notify it in the answer.
The difficulty itself is more like an Insane, or a Hard+. There are alot of jumps, more fited for insane, and settings are pretty high. If by any chance you would change the difficulty name...? I see streams, good bunch of triplet.. I'd rather see this as an Insane. I like the diffficulty but is somehow too hard to be called "Hard". change to hyper00:01:886 (6) - This slider points nowhere, while it could make a good oval flow with the note between it. I'd suggest a vertical flip of it, and mostly trying to make it the prettier possible with the previous note.keep00:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - Streams in hard already? Woof. It's BPM 160. If you want to keep it that much, I'd suggest you either to map the stream until 00:06:855 (1) , since the beats continue until this note, (Which i really don't suggest you to do.) Or simply map on 1/2 here. The most important beat are on 1/2 anyway, so replacing the stream by 1/2 notes won't affect much.keep，stream better00:11:917 (3,5) - Little stackfail here. fix01:14:355 (1,2) - Those two notes overlapping really doesn't look good. It's not like the other overlap, I'd suggest you to review this one.. likely 01:13:230 (2,3) looks good and pretty. But this one just look like pudding... I won't be your mind this time, so i'd really suggest you to review it.keep01:23:355 (1,2) - Why straight? It just doesn't fit this part, and it's like they're pointing nowhere. Curve, maybe? You even curved 01:24:855 (1,2) !keep，strrong voicechange pattern

Champion

The difficulty is nice, and doesn't show much stuff. Good job! But something that bugs me are the whistle that looks random and completely out, for exemple: 00:17:355 (1,2,3) . The whistle doesn't really fit, not only here, but at many places, such as 00:15:292 (1,2,3). I'd review them a bit. Maybe it was on purpose ; But they really don't fit well.keep00:02:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - I do conclude that you can make one prettier shape here ; The distance snap wasn't really sued, as it goes from 1,70 to 1,50. I'll try something: Maybe you'll like one of these: use code 2

Code

411,263,2355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
493,147,2542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,194,2730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,238,2917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,122,3105,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Code2

424,294,2355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,162,2542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,140,2730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,281,2917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,151,3105,1,0,0:0:0:0:

If you didn't like mine, but maybe you think the pattern can be improved, open your mind, and try to find something pretty!00:47:542 (1) - This note doesn't fit right at all. I think you tried to follow the vocal, but sincerely they start at 00:47:355. Most 1/1 slider, especially on TV sizes, doesn't match well starting on red tick, landing on another red tick. Maybe you like the sound, so you choose if you want to keep it. 00:45:855 (4) this sounds good, it follow correctly the vocal, for exemple. At the same time, I think you should swap the combo 00:47:355 (9,1) , since (9) is a downbeat, and this is also where the vocal start.keep01:06:105 (4,5,1) - Wow, such a jump! Are you sure about it? You have one high bpm, and all these notes are 1/4... I'm not saying "remove this" but i want you to be sure that this is correct for you. There is a similar jump at 01:03:105 (3,4,1) but this time these are 1/2. If it was me for clear, I would never make those impossible jumps..keep，on purpose01:13:230 (2,3) - You can clearly improve the overlap here. The two head just overlap eachother, it isn't pretty at all. Take for exemple 00:33:855 (1,2) who i really like. fix，change a lot01:17:355 (1,2,3) - Why are these simple circles while 01:16:136 (2,3) goes 1/4 slider? They can clearly be the same there. I tried making them 1/4 sliders, and they fits pretty well. So, your choice, like usual. Maybe you prefered them as circles? Since they also fits well with circles.keep，I don't want to be the same ww

Well, I'm done with my mod!
This mod contain 4216 Words.
It has 20920 Character.
I took around 6 horus to complete it.

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

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osu file format v12

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ArtistUnicode:小倉 唯
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Source:Campione!
Tags:カンピオーネ！ ～まつろわぬ神々と神殺しの魔王～ ending ed まりや ゆり mariya yuri
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