This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 9 de outubro de 2013 at 16:25:35

Artist: encounter+
Title: Endless Know
Source: Queen of Darkness: The Second Reproduction
Tags: Visual Novel DakeDekaane Momori Ruka
BPM: 152
Filesize: 6798kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Dekaane's Hard (4,81 stars, 135 notes)
2. Easy (2,73 stars, 78 notes)
3. Normal (3,68 stars, 87 notes)
4. Second Reproduction (5 stars, 213 notes)

Download: encounter+ - Endless Know
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th Beatmap and 2nd rank!
First complete Insane difficult

Hard difficult by DakeDekaane
SB by sherrie__fay

Thank you, Dekaane and sherrie~!

Redownload as from 10/08/13 due to changes on creator name!

Lovely beatmap! Plus, I really like the background!

Hi~ from queue
[General]
tag "Dekaane" should be added to all diffs

[Easy]
Seems good

[Normal]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Normal
00:30:363 (2) - Move node #1 to {x:340 y:284}, move node #2 to {x:256 y:328}, move node #3 to {x:172 y:284}.
00:50:889 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:196 y:272}, move node #3 to {x:276 y:224}.

00:41:218 (2) - consider adding a cricle at the white tick right before this

[Hard]
I believe AR7 will be better
00:31:942 (1) - ummm.....I guess you can draw a better one
01:03:126 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:179 y:311}.
01:24:047 (1) - add a finish at the end?


quite a good mapset , good luck~

Hi! From my queue~

[Normal]
00:45:363 (2) - Curve?
00:54:442 (4) - Line with 00:54:047 (3)
00:54:837 (5) - Put it straight and line with 00:53:653 (2)
01:00:363 (4) - Remove the circle and but 01:00:758 (5) at his place

Good Luck and star!
Plus, you submitted at my birthday.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Lovely beatmap! Plus, I really like the background! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

quantum-rose wrote:

Hi~ from queue Hello!
[General]
tag "Dekaane" should be added to all diffs Done

[Easy]
Seems good Yay!

[Normal]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Normal
00:30:363 (2) - Move node #1 to {x:340 y:284}, move node #2 to {x:256 y:328}, move node #3 to {x:172 y:284}. Done
00:50:889 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:196 y:272}, move node #3 to {x:276 y:224}. Done

00:41:218 (2) - consider adding a cricle at the white tick right before this Done

quite a good mapset , good luck~ Thank you for mod~!

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~ Hi!

[Normal]
00:45:363 (2) - Curve? Done! It improved the flow, I see xD
00:54:442 (4) - Line with 00:54:047 (3) Done(?) I think it looks better now
00:54:837 (5) - Put it straight and line with 00:53:653 (2) Done
01:00:363 (4) - Remove the circle and but 01:00:758 (5) at his place Hmm, I guess it looks good the way it is

Good Luck and star! Thank you for mod and star!!
Plus, you submitted at my birthday. Happy late birthday o3o/!

Update when Dekaane check the mod c:

quantum-rose wrote:

Hi~ from queue

[Hard]
I believe AR7 will be better /*Oh noes, how did I put AR6 there >-< fixed
00:31:942 (1) - ummm.....I guess you can draw a better one /*I'll be polishing with later mods if they complain, changed a bit
01:03:126 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:179 y:311}. /*Moved very near.
01:24:047 (1) - add a finish at the end? /*There's no high impact in the music to justify it as in 01:22:468 (1), no change here.

quite a good mapset , good luck~

Nice catch with the AR, thanks for modding.
My update :3
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

Alright!

Updated the mapset!

Edit: 03/08 - Moved to Pending, finished Mapset! Missing SB only

Desculpa, mas eu tive que fazer isso.

Vi seu mapa la no grupo do fb. Já que não tem nenhum mod aqui faz um tempinho, decidi dar uma olhada.
Enfim, se você realmente for fazer o SB, isso aqui ainda deveria ficar em Wip.

General

• Acho que não deveria ter kiai entre 01:05:100 - até 01:11:416 - (onde começa denovo). Não consigo ouvir como uma parte "tema" da música, mas isso é minha opinião. Fora isso, parece tudo em ordem.

Easy

1. 00:34:508 (1) - Fica meio difícil de acertar isso principalmente porque o slider começa um tick vermelho, e considerando que o spin começa/termina em um tick branco, isso pode ser meio estranho pra jogadores inexperientes. Também acho que não combina muito com as vozes, seria muito melhor na minha opinião se o slider começasse em 00:34:311 - (e terminasse em 00:35:100 - ).

1. 00:39:837 (3) - Meio nazi, mas eu preferiria que o NC fosse aqui, fica melhor pra dar ênfase junto às vozes.

1. 00:44:179 (2,3) - Flow ficou meio forçado, seria melhor se tivesse um blanket aqui.
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:58:784 (2) Tem que clicar no botão de NC aqui. Ele tá superficial.
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 01:20:889 (1) - Poderia ter feito ele um pouco mais "fechado", assim dava pra melhorar o blanket entre 01:22:468 (3) - .
   
   Exemplo

   Eu também mexi no 01:22:074 (2) - pra melhorar a movimentação dos sliders e pra consertar o spacing.

Normal

1. 01:16:153 (3,4,5) - Outra passagem forçada. Ficaria legal se você trocasse a posição de (3) por (4) e de (4) por (3), assim ainda dava pra continuar com o blanket de 01:16:942 (5) - e melhorar o flow.
   
   Exemplo

   

Dekaane's Hard

Sup.
Better end the "first" kiai at 01:11:021 - for consistency with other diffs.

1. 01:26:811 (1) - Better increase the spacing from previous slider here. This doesn't play good.

Second Reproduction

1. 00:30:363 (3,4) - Seria uma pena deixar isso aqui sem um blanket. Basicamente você só precisa mover o (4) um pouco mais pra esquerda.
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:41:218 (4,5,6) - Dava pra fazer uma variação de posições melhor. O "triplet" mais encurvado ficaria legal.
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:52:468 (4) - Deveria ter um NC aqui. É só checar as outras diffs pra ver inconsistência de combos.

1. 01:23:850 - Melhor colocar um circle aqui, acho que combina com a "puxada" de ar das vozes. Sem contar que fica meio estranho nada entre 01:23:455 (4,1) - .

É isso.
Boa sorte!

Wolf wrote:

Desculpa, mas eu tive que fazer isso.

Eu ri o3o...

Vi seu mapa la no grupo do fb. Já que não tem nenhum mod aqui faz um tempinho, decidi dar uma olhada.
Enfim, se você realmente for fazer o SB, isso aqui ainda deveria ficar em Wip.

Certo, vou mover para WIP xD! Obrigada mesmo!!! Não imaginei que alguém iria modar !!

General

• Acho que não deveria ter kiai entre 01:05:100 - até 01:11:416 - (onde começa denovo). Não consigo ouvir como uma parte "tema" da música, mas isso é minha opinião. Fora isso, parece tudo em ordem. Tem razão! Eu estava pensando nisso, mas não tinha muita certa... Já que você falou, vou fazer mesmo xD

Easy

1. 00:34:508 (1) - Fica meio difícil de acertar isso principalmente porque o slider começa um tick vermelho, e considerando que o spin começa/termina em um tick branco, isso pode ser meio estranho pra jogadores inexperientes. Também acho que não combina muito com as vozes, seria muito melhor na minha opinião se o slider começasse em 00:34:311 - (e terminasse em 00:35:100 - ). Okay, feito!

1. 00:39:837 (3) - Meio nazi, mas eu preferiria que o NC fosse aqui, fica melhor pra dar ênfase junto às vozes. Ha, ha! Okay xD

1. 00:44:179 (2,3) - Flow ficou meio forçado, seria melhor se tivesse um blanket aqui.Feito!
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:58:784 (2) Tem que clicar no botão de NC aqui. Ele tá superficial. Epa, esqueci o.o
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 01:20:889 (1) - Poderia ter feito ele um pouco mais "fechado", assim dava pra melhorar o blanket entre 01:22:468 (3) - . Okay, feito!
   
   Exemplo

   Eu também mexi no 01:22:074 (2) - pra melhorar a movimentação dos sliders e pra consertar o spacing.

Normal

1. 01:16:153 (3,4,5) - Outra passagem forçada. Ficaria legal se você trocasse a posição de (3) por (4) e de (4) por (3), assim ainda dava pra continuar com o blanket de 01:16:942 (5) - e melhorar o flow. Não sei se entendi direito, mas eu tentei c:
   
   Exemplo

   

Second Reproduction

1. 00:30:363 (3,4) - Seria uma pena deixar isso aqui sem um blanket. Basicamente você só precisa mover o (4) um puco mais pra esquerda. Okay! Acho que na hora eu nem vi o.o
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:41:218 (4,5,6) - Dava pra fazer uma variação de posições melhor. O "triplet" mais encurvado ficaria legal. Uhum, prontinho!
   
   Exemplo

   

1. 00:52:468 (4) - Deveria ter um NC aqui. É só checar as outras diffs pra ver inconsistência de combos. Verdade, vou checar tudo direitinho O.O

1. 01:23:850 - Melhor colocar um circle aqui, acho que combina com a "puxada" de ar das vozes. Sem contar que fica meio estranho nada entre 01:23:455 (4,1) - . Colocado! Ficou muito bom!

É isso.
Boa sorte! Muito obrigada pelo mod e star!

Moved to WIP due to SB (dumb me o3o)

Thanks Wolf, fixed the kiai and the last note (also made some volume changes that I think forgot previously orz) <:
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

Updated Dake's changes~! (Difficult to read, ha, ha!)

I asked sherrie__fay to make the SB but I don't know whether she will accept or not. Let's just wait for now

Hello! Modding for potential M4M.

[Dekaane's Hard]
00:27:600 (1) - The second hit of this slider doesn't actually match the vocals here; there's a slight delay in the lyrics. Not really an issue though, unless you absolutely need it to be on time.

00:57:995 (1,2) - Maybe space these sliders out a bit more, to emphasize the fact that they don't actually follow one after the other with no delay.

01:06:087 (3,4) - The timing is tricky here. You could try changing the hitcircles to a slider instead, or space it out to make it a jump.

Overall, the flow is nice, and I really like your choice of rhythm in the Kiai sections. I feel like the map could really benefit from a few jumps, though. The hitcircles at 01:06:087 might be a good place to start.

[Normal]
00:41:218 (3) - This slider hits its repeat at a very awkward point in time. As far as I can tell, nothing in the music indicates that anything should be happening on that specific blue tick.

01:06:482 (3) - Space this out a bit more. The music here suggests that a jump would be appropriate. You've been pretty much using a single distance snapping throughout the entire map here, but a few jumps can really make things more exciting for the player. But the rhythm that you've chosen to work with here is nice, and is a unique break from the otherwise monotoneity of dominant white ticks. There are numerous other opportunities to repeat this rhythm, since the song repeats this particular melodic phrase throughout the chorus, such as at 01:17:732.

[Easy]
00:41:218 (2) - Again, same issue as with the slider in Normal. In fact, this is the only time you've ever landed anything on a blue tick in the entire difficulty. There's gotta be a better way to achieve what you want to achieve without using a repeat slider that hits an empty void in the music.

01:08:258 (2,3,4) - Nice shape. Easy difficulties pretty much just seem to be steady marches of white ticks, so really the biggest opportunity you have to get creative is in slider shapes and arrangements. This one's odd, but it looks nice, so good job!

[Second Reproduction]
Drain Rate: To me, DR8 is too unforgiving. By turning autoplay on after a few mistakes it seemed to take an extremely long time to recover, especially near the beginning. Maybe try DR7?

00:50:889 (1,1) - I think you should add another hitcircle in between these two, to match the second cymbal hit.

No other issues that I'm aware of. The Kiai section of this map is exciting to play through, well done!

[General]
Great maps overall! I especially enjoyed the SR and Hard difficulties. Good luck with ranking!

11t wrote:

Hello! Modding for potential M4M. Hi! Thank you for M4M!

[Normal]
00:41:218 (3) - This slider hits its repeat at a very awkward point in time. As far as I can tell, nothing in the music indicates that anything should be happening on that specific blue tick. Well, I wasn't thinking of anything when putting the reverse arrow there, it's just that I wanted the slider to end on 00:42:995 xD I tried doing somehting else, hopefuly it's fixed. I'm just not too sure if it's suitable for a Normal difficult now...

01:06:482 (3) - Space this out a bit more. The music here suggests that a jump would be appropriate. You've been pretty much using a single distance snapping throughout the entire map here, but a few jumps can really make things more exciting for the player. But the rhythm that you've chosen to work with here is nice, and is a unique break from the otherwise monotoneity of dominant white ticks. There are numerous other opportunities to repeat this rhythm, since the song repeats this particular melodic phrase throughout the chorus, such as at 01:17:732. I fixed the spacing and made a small jump for 01:06:482 (3) As for 01:17:732 (1) I don't think the same pattern would be suitable because this part doesn't have the guitar's assist as the other one, making it more difficult to follow. Even so, I added a small jump to this part too

[Easy]
00:41:218 (2) - Again, same issue as with the slider in Normal. In fact, this is the only time you've ever landed anything on a blue tick in the entire difficulty. There's gotta be a better way to achieve what you want to achieve without using a repeat slider that hits an empty void in the music. It took me some time to figure out what to do. In the end I used some symmetry and made a funny slider. Hopefuly, it looks better now.

01:08:258 (2,3,4) - Nice shape. Easy difficulties pretty much just seem to be steady marches of white ticks, so really the biggest opportunity you have to get creative is in slider shapes and arrangements. This one's odd, but it looks nice, so good job! Ha, ha! Thank you!

[Second Reproduction]
Drain Rate: To me, DR8 is too unforgiving. By turning autoplay on after a few mistakes it seemed to take an extremely long time to recover, especially near the beginning. Maybe try DR7? You're right. Thanks for the nice suggestion!

00:50:889 (1,1) - I think you should add another hitcircle in between these two, to match the second cymbal hit. Hmm, I think it's good the way it's now. I wanted to give emphasis only to the sound plates here.

No other issues that I'm aware of. The Kiai section of this map is exciting to play through, well done! Thank you!

[General]
Great maps overall! I especially enjoyed the SR and Hard difficulties. Good luck with ranking! Thank you very much for modding! I'll mod yours as soon as I can.

Waiting for Dake's changes before updating.

Request from ~splorg~ modding queue.






Good luck!

11t wrote:

Hello! Modding for potential M4M.

[Dekaane's Hard]
00:27:600 (1) - The second hit of this slider doesn't actually match the vocals here; there's a slight delay in the lyrics. Not really an issue though, unless you absolutely need it to be on time. /*I'll left it as this for now, I have another alternative ready in case this is really needed, there's no need to be too strict on vocals imo :p

00:57:995 (1,2) - Maybe space these sliders out a bit more, to emphasize the fact that they don't actually follow one after the other with no delay. /*Why not~

01:06:087 (3,4) - The timing is tricky here. You could try changing the hitcircles to a slider instead, or space it out to make it a jump. /*Well, I can't see why it's tricky :c

Overall, the flow is nice, and I really like your choice of rhythm in the Kiai sections. I feel like the map could really benefit from a few jumps, though. The hitcircles at 01:06:087 might be a good place to start. /*My mapping style for Hard diffs isn't too jumpy, I think the few jumps I put are enough to not break the difficulty spread (Some of them are already big but they fit.).

Ayu wrote:

Request from ~splorg~ modding queue.

Dekaane's Hard

• 00:31:942 (1) - The sharp bendings here are placed at the right moment, but the slider itself looks like slider art gone wrong. /*Oh well, improved the shape, I think it's a lot better now.
  
  Difficulty is pretty solid, it's easy and nice looking. I'm proud of you, Dekaane. \o/ /*Thank you >.<

Thanks Ayu and 11t for modding :3
Update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

http://www.mediafire.com/download/dz2cp62jy23dny9
done.

Ayu wrote:

Request from ~splorg~ modding queue. Thank you for modding!

General

• The first 20,2% are completely unmapped. Rules say you should start before 20%, so technically you're 0,2% too late. Although that'd be extremely nazi, I suppose you should still cut a piece of the mp3. There's no sound until 8%, so you should cut this out.
  
  

  Ranking Criteria wrote:

  You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.

  I don't think I'm breaking any rules here. The 20% I didn't map is the Intro. I would only be breaking the rule if it was the outro. As for the outro, there's less than 20% unmapped, so I guess it's okay as it is now.
  
  

  Ranking Criteria wrote:

  However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.

  Then there's this part. I do have legitimate reasons to keep the full mp3. The first one is the original video. As you can see, the silence at the beginning of the song is part of it. The second is that I will be having a Story Board at that part. I hope everything I said is correct. If not, please say so >.<

Easy

• 00:21:482 (2) - You should NEVER put a downbeat slider like this in an easy difficulty. The rythm is way too tricky. Oh, okay! Fixed
  00:24:047 (2) - The red point looks way too sharp to fit well with the music, would be better if curved or straight.Hmm... Okay done.
  00:30:363 (2) - Could be a nice blanket around (1), like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/910426 I thought I already had this as a blanket. Oh wells, I guess I just have to improve it. Hopefuly fixed.
  00:43:587 (1) - The mainly important beats of the music are on the white ticks, so I suggest to remove this circle and use the white ticks instead. Done! I changed things a bit
  01:08:258 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure what you tried to do here, but it looks like you tried to coat the sliders around (3). (2) in the other hand does not really do his job. I don't think this looks bad... The flow looks good and it follows the song nicely, in my opinion. I'll just leave it as it is.
  01:12:995 (3) - Make a blanket of this. Blanket improved

Normal

• 00:25:626 (1) - The dent here is unnecessary for the same reason in Easy, the music goes rather smooth. Okay, fixed!
  00:39:047 (6) - The slider form looks weird, 'pointy' sliders like this don't go well with surved sliders like (3). Okay fixed!
  00:50:889 (5) - Slider start is just a little to far away, put it a little closer and fix the blanket.Done!
  01:05:100 (1) - Same goes for this slider. Alright! Done!
  01:08:258 (1) - Would look better if coated around (4)'s slider end. I like this way better because I think the flow looks a bit more smoothy this way.

Second Reproduction

• The beginning of this difficulty is a total mess. It looks like you didn't know what you were doing, to be quite honest. Hence modding.
  
  Well, while that's true, I suppose I really didn't know what I was doing. This is my first Insane difficult afterall xD. Thanks for the honesty, though. I will try to improve.
  
  00:21:482 (2,3,4) - Can be placed like this so (1) coats nicely around (4). Why not? Done
  00:24:639 (4) - Slider form looks ugly because of (3)'s form. Something like this would be better. I don't think it's ugly at all. I'll keep it like this
  00:30:363 (3) - Should be a blanket around (4). Done!
  00:38:258 (5) - This just asks for a new combo. Right, done!
  00:41:317 (5) - This note is completely unnecessary, remove it. I'm following the piano here. So I think I'll leave it.
  00:43:784 - This beat here feels rather important, don't neglect it. I was following the piano only, but even so, it plays nicely. Done!
  00:42:995 (3,4,5,6) - Just create stacks here like you did with 00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - , it looks better, it plays better and it's more consistent. Hmm, I wanted to do something consistent with 00:41:416 (6,7,8) and also have stacks just on 00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) to indicate the "change of pace" here
  00:51:482 (1,1) - Remove these new combo's, they're unnecessary. They may be unnecessary for gameplay, but they are here for the sole purpose of emphasizing the plate sounds. Many maps out there do this kind of things, so I wanted to try it too xD

Good luck! Thank you! And sorry for answering your mod so late!

sherrie__fay wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/download/dz2cp62jy23dny9
done.

Thank you sherrie!!!!!!! This SB is just awesome!! I really love your work, thank you!

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

General

EpilepsyWarning: 1

Story board

File missing: sb\cg\cg1.jpg
File missing: sb\cg\cg2.jpg

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Easy].osu

Perfect!

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Normal].osu

Well done.
00:21:482 (2) - It is suggested to use a slider here because red line confused.
00:25:626 (4) - no new combo.

line 96
208,80,28784,2,0,L|400:140,1,195,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
208,80,28784,2,0,P|300:80|400:140,1,195,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

line 101
364,264,35100,2,0,L|232:304,1,130
-->
364,264,35100,2,0,P|298:265|232:304,1,130

line 108
444,200,39047,2,0,B|448:132|416:72,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
444,200,39047,2,0,B|416:72,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

line 138-139
308,188,61942,6,0,L|276:56,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,62732,2,0,L|410:206,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
308,188,61942,6,0,P|276:128|276:56,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,62732,2,0,P|409:148|410:206,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

line 143
260,64,65692,2,0,L|352:168,1,130
-->
260,64,65692,2,0,P|294:118|352:168,1,130

line 145
296,272,67468,2,0,L|148:284,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
296,272,67468,2,0,P|224:268|148:284,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

line 160
220,112,77732,6,0,L|328:36,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
220,112,77732,6,0,P|276:88|328:36,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Dekaane's Hard].osu

00:55:626 (1,2,3) - use a spinner here?

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Second Reproduction].osu

00:21:482 (2,3) - use a slider instead?
00:46:153 (1) - ugly
01:03:817 (7) - this blue line object can be hard to read, use slider instead.


Resnap all Notes!

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

General

EpilepsyWarning: 1 Yeah, I forgot.

Story board

File missing: sb\cg\cg1.jpg
File missing: sb\cg\cg2.jpg This is really weird, they aren't missing on the Song Folder, but AiMod says so.

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Easy].osu

Perfect!

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Normal].osu

Well done.
00:21:482 (2) - It is suggested to use a slider here because red line confused. I guess you're right. Done!
00:25:626 (4) - no new combo. Okay

line 96
208,80,28784,2,0,L|400:140,1,195,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
208,80,28784,2,0,P|300:80|400:140,1,195,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: I don't see the need to use a curved slider. I'll keep the straight slider

line 101
364,264,35100,2,0,L|232:304,1,130
-->
364,264,35100,2,0,P|298:265|232:304,1,130 This would break the flow, in my opinion. But I agree with you that this slider would look better with a curve, so I added one.

line 108
444,200,39047,2,0,B|448:132|416:72,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
444,200,39047,2,0,B|416:72,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: I would like to keep the blanket with 00:37:271 (3,6)

line 138-139
308,188,61942,6,0,L|276:56,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,62732,2,0,L|410:206,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
308,188,61942,6,0,P|276:128|276:56,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,62732,2,0,P|409:148|410:206,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: Hmm, the flow here feels better with straight sliders, in my opinion.

line 143
260,64,65692,2,0,L|352:168,1,130
-->
260,64,65692,2,0,P|294:118|352:168,1,130 Same as previous item

line 145
296,272,67468,2,0,L|148:284,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
296,272,67468,2,0,P|224:268|148:284,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: Alright. A light curve on this slider is nice.

line 160
220,112,77732,6,0,L|328:36,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
220,112,77732,6,0,P|276:88|328:36,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: Okay, but I prefer something with a light curve

encounter+ - Endless Know (Kitagami) [Second Reproduction].osu

00:21:482 (2,3) - use a slider instead? I know these double notes are really tricky, but using a slider instead would just make the flow worse, I think... I already tried this before.
00:46:153 (1) - ugly Okay, it might be "prettier" now xD
01:03:817 (7) - this blue line object can be hard to read, use slider instead. Kay


Resnap all Notes! Why resnap? O.O I don't think they are unsnaped

Thank you for mod!

For Dekaane: I updated all with the general settings (Epilepsy Warning and AudioLeadIn). I added 2000 of AudioLeadIn because the Epilepsy Warning would overlap the SB >.< If you decide to make any changes, I'll update the map again.

YOU CALLED FOR THE QAT
AND WE HAVE ANSWERED YOUR CALL
IS YOUR BODY READY? we'll be coming at you in a huge wave~

Second Reproduction

00:30:166 (2) - how about moving this higher up and to the left a bit so it doesn't overlap with 00:30:363 (3) ?
00:31:942 (1) - i just want to praise you for making this perfectly symmetrical somehow, i can never do that, you have my respect
00:35:889 (7,1,2,3,4) - because of the direction of the slider from 7, it doesn't flow very well to the stream, consider changing the curve or something
00:37:074 (2,3,4) - just an idea, how about ctrl+G all these sliders individually for a more circular flow? It would be a really nice way to transition from the circular stream pattern 00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) (AR lowered to show all relevant objects)
00:41:218 (4,5,6) - yo nazi here, but to improve flow a bit, try adjusting the slider and circles' positions slightly:
00:49:311 (4) - the vocals here have some interesting rhythms going on, why not reflect that in your sliders by shortening this slider by 1/4 and adding a 1/1 slider after?
00:55:626 (1,2) - same here, a 3/4 slider would represent the vocals well, I think
00:57:995 (1) - why not start the stream here instead? having a 1/4 slider then the stream doesn't play well imo
01:03:521 (6,7) - that's what i mean by those 3/4 sliders matching the vocals It'd be great if you could apply this rhythm to other places~
01:04:113 (7,8) - sorta breaks the flow here, the direction of the slider makes me expect 8 to be on the other side of 7 lol. Make 7 a straight slider pointing directly at 8?
01:08:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way the vocals are presents a great opportunity for 1/4 rhythms! try this:
01:13:784 - sudden pause is awkward, add a note?
01:16:153 (7,8) - same comment on vocals
01:20:692 (9,1) - consider switching these on timeline, theh strong beat lies on the huge white tick, and it feels better to play that on the head of the slider, rather on tail, also same comment on vocals
01:25:922 (2) - add finish

HI DEKAANE

the subtle speedups here might be confusing
00:38:258 (3) - ctrl + G? to continue the previous slider pattern
really nice solid diff yay \:D/

Normal

01:06:482 (3) - too far from previous object, violates your established distance snap of 0.8x
00:31:547 (1) - this spinner... i think it'd sound better to move it to 00:31:942 and end it at original spot, while adding a circle at 00:31:547
not much to say here, nice job. The 3/2 rhythms might be confusing for newbies, but oh well ╮(─▽─)╭

Easy

Why does your distance snap change from 0.9x to 1.0x? D:
01:02:732 (2) - probably be better to move this up while still keeping it in the middle

gooooooodluck! ^___^

Thanks for modding Raose~ <3
Changed that pattern a bit. I'll keep my speed changes, I may make the last a bit lower if people keeps pointing it out >->
Here's my update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

@ax_pokl: Sorry for late reply, but I really don't feel a spinner there, as I'm following mostly the instrumental before the kiai.

Hai..second check here ~






Good Luck ~
Be ready for other member :p

Ohai~ from the QAT's queue

[General]
This is really a high-quality mapset. Well done!

But, an Easy with 3 stars? Kind of high. Also the settings are quite high for an Easy, either lower the settings (HP -1, OD -1) or rename the diff to Easy+ (even if it is not a beautiful name, but you already have a Normal).

[Easy]
High settings, please lower as described above.

00:39:047 - Kind of strange time to slightly accelerate spacing. It may be very subtle, but still, nothing has changed in the song. Indeed, the spacing even changed in the middle of a combo. Not saying it must be fixed, just wondering why it is there.

Cool Easy actually, but really, it is darn hard for its tier!

[Normal]
Actually, I'd also lower HP and OD by -1. These settings are really hard for a Normal.

This is also a marvellous diff, also a little hard, but OK.

[Dekaane's Hard]
00:31:942 (1) - I am not saying I don't like this shape, but really, this seems too abstract and random, maybe try a simpler pattern? (can't think of a more suitable shape, though. meh)
01:26:811 (1) - I don't think that this snare hitsound is necessary here, there's only a deep bass drum. But a snare.... isn't a suitable sound to emphasize this with.

Awesome diff, I fell in love with it!

[Second Reproduction]
00:41:218 (4,5,6) - I find this pattern a little crooked. Moving (5) to x:80 y:216 would match my taste a little more.
00:51:482 (1) - This NC counts as NC spam, the previous NC is enough to emphasize the instrumental hit in the background.

TBH, the diff is objectively well constructed, but I didn't really feel... "the kick" in it, you know. It was nothing really special. At least, for my taste.

Even if the easier diffs aren't really easy, this mapset's got quite some potential to be ranked in the near future. more mainstream japanese stuff, meh

Good luck!

PS: this post is not to be kudosu'd, it isn't kd-worthy

Kay, so... Oh my God, so many mods! Thank you QAT, love ya :')!

Alright, I'm going to start improving this thing!!

Raose wrote:

YOU CALLED FOR THE QAT
AND WE HAVE ANSWERED YOUR CALL
IS YOUR BODY READY? we'll be coming at you in a huge wave~ Bring it on! xD He, he~!

Second Reproduction

00:30:166 (2) - how about moving this higher up and to the left a bit so it doesn't overlap with 00:30:363 (3) ? Done!
00:31:942 (1) - i just want to praise you for making this perfectly symmetrical somehow, i can never do that, you have my respect Dose skills! Just kidding, I don't know how I did it myself! Thank you for praising me >u<
00:35:889 (7,1,2,3,4) - because of the direction of the slider from 7, it doesn't flow very well to the stream, consider changing the curve or something Hmm, okay. It is hopefuly fixed!
00:37:074 (2,3,4) - just an idea, how about ctrl+G all these sliders individually for a more circular flow? It would be a really nice way to transition from the circular stream pattern 00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) (AR lowered to show all relevant objects) That's actually pretty cool! Done!

SPOILER

00:41:218 (4,5,6) - yo nazi here, but to improve flow a bit, try adjusting the slider and circles' positions slightly: Done!

SPOILER

00:49:311 (4) - the vocals here have some interesting rhythms going on, why not reflect that in your sliders by shortening this slider by 1/4 and adding a 1/1 slider after? I wouldn't ever think of this pattern, but it looks great! Done

SPOILER

00:55:626 (1,2) - same here, a 3/4 slider would represent the vocals well, I think Done! I just hope the flow is still alright here! QAQ
00:57:995 (1) - why not start the stream here instead? having a 1/4 slider then the stream doesn't play well imo Okay~! Done

not sure an image is necessary but oh whale

01:03:521 (6,7) - that's what i mean by those 3/4 sliders matching the vocals It'd be great if you could apply this rhythm to other places~ Ohh! So I did it unconsciously! Okay, I also added this 3/4 pattern on 01:16:153 I find keeping a good flow very difficult, but I did my best!
01:04:113 (7,8) - sorta breaks the flow here, the direction of the slider makes me expect 8 to be on the other side of 7 lol. Make 7 a straight slider pointing directly at 8? Alright!
01:08:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way the vocals are presents a great opportunity for 1/4 rhythms! try this: Okay!

SPOILER

01:13:784 - sudden pause is awkward, add a note? Done!
01:16:153 (7,8) - same comment on vocals Apllied the 1/3 pattern!
01:20:692 (9,1) - consider switching these on timeline, theh strong beat lies on the huge white tick, and it feels better to play that on the head of the slider, rather on tail, also same comment on vocals Agreed!
01:25:922 (2) - add finish Done

Normal

01:06:482 (3) - too far from previous object, violates your established distance snap of 0.8x Fixed~!
00:31:547 (1) - this spinner... i think it'd sound better to move it to 00:31:942 and end it at original spot, while adding a circle at 00:31:547 Kay, nice idea c:
not much to say here, nice job. The 3/2 rhythms might be confusing for newbies, but oh well ╮(─▽─)╭ I couldn't find any other better way to follow the music ;~; I'll take a look and try to remove some of them if possible.

Easy

Why does your distance snap change from 0.9x to 1.0x? D: Wooops! That's my mistake =w=
01:02:732 (2) - probably be better to move this up while still keeping it in the middle Kaay!

gooooooodluck! ^___^ Thank you for modding! It was REALLY helpful! ;u;

Waa! I'm already tired! It's so late here... I'm going to post this for now and I'll edit this with the rest as I finish checking them.

I will mod this soon~ leave post here for memory.

Hi there, it's my turn, from QAT-Queue!


Probably all of this will be suggestions. Feel free to deny them, if you don't like it.
[General]

Everything seems fine, but something bothers me : sb\lrc\l-7.png seems unused, remove it.

[Easy]

00:38:258 (3) - Try to get a nicer pattern here? Let me show you: http://puu.sh/4cch4.jpg
00:39:837 - Well, imo this rhythm could fit the lyrics a bit better, if you put it like this: http://puu.sh/4ccjv.jpg
00:47:732 (3,4) - The rhythm again, try to click on both, and press CTRL + G, I think it would fit the rhythm better.
01:02:732 (2,3) - Lol, same here. You don't need to change these, yet it would be a better rhythm imo. It's also more consistent with 01:14:968 (2,3) - .

Solid Easy, just those minor rhythm things which bothers me.

[Normal]

The settings are rather high for a normal, aren't they? Try reducing OR and HP by 1 tick each.

00:37:271 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion as in easy, try to get a better triangle pattern. 00:38:653 (5) - would be at 408 304.
00:50:100 (3) - You used quite a lot 1/2 circles, after a slider. Why not here? It plays better, since currently the rhythm sounds a bit too late. My suggestion: 00:49:903 - move it to this spot.
01:03:521 (4) - This rhythm fits better if you add a circle 01:03:324 - . It's because it feels very empty, if you leave out that vocal.
01:03:521 (4) - Also, did you miss a hitsound on the slider tail?

Not much to say, although I would use more 1/2, but that's up to you completely. Mentioned some above, if you didn't notice.

[Dekaane's Hard]

00:31:942 (1) - Nice slider, but I suggest ending it 00:33:126 - , since you can hear a beat there, whereas you can't where it currently ends.
00:53:258 (2,3) - Compare these sliders to 00:54:837 (2,3) - these ones please. As you can see, the gap between them isn't the same, please fix that in order to let the map look more polished.
...and puush is offline -_-
00:57:995 (1,2,3) - Try that code once, it looks a bit better imo, because the spacing now.. increases, for actually no reason. I also made a triangle pattern there, I hope you like ~

The diff is cool, but I feel like missing hitsounds in the kiai. Although it's consistent, there could be some more claps, imo. But yeah, i'm a hitsound noob xDD

[Second Reproduction]

Wtf. Just realised that this is an SB, and not a video, wtf good job!!! How comes that it doesn't lag? Since if i make a single picture SB in my maps, my computer nearly crashes, well w/e. ~

Going to be a little nazi, since there are some not-really-nice circles/sliders.

00:21:482 (2,3) - Move this a little up, to get an increased flow between these and the slider before.
00:22:468 (7,8,3,4) - Well, tbh, I don't really like this slider placement, in the whole map it is quite nice, but here it looks stacked, and it's not a really good pattern. The rhythm is nice, but maybe a rearrangement would help? If you like it, you can keep it of course. But it would be nice if you could 00:22:468 (7,8) - place these others, because the stacking is meh. What about a similar pattern like 00:24:047 (3,4) - to make it consistent at least?
00:27:797 (2,3) - Move them to 232 188, same reason as the first suggestion.
00:42:008 (8,9) - If I were you, I'd replace them with a big slider. Fits this .. slight bgm really nice, and makes it a little more consistent with 00:40:429 (2) - those.
00:43:784 - I can't hear a sound here, you should work with a slider, passing through it, if you want something there. But currently, you should delete it for sure.
00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't get this, since this is a really.. created rhythm. Please space them with a 1/2 rhythm, since the current one doesn't fit at all.
00:45:758 (6,7,8,9,1) - Try to get a better 'path' here. Let me show you what i mean. (Didn't make any big changes, just rearranging the placement.)
00:46:942 (3,4) - Spacing looks messed up, just for aesthetitcs, move 00:47:337 (4) - to 204 308?
00:47:732 (5) - Don't forget to move this a bit upwards, if you applied ^.
00:58:784 (1) - Move to 192 184. Same as above, just this time only the slider. You should really do that.
01:19:311 (6) - Not REALLY sure about that, but Ctrl + G 01:19:113 (5) - with this one. Because I think 'shi' is quite a strong vocal, even if it's on the red tick.

Well that's it already o: Tari will mod it further, and then we'll look further Hope I was able to help you a bit.

Momochikun wrote:

Hai..second check here ~ Hello c:

[General]
Seems fine.. maybe Kecco or Irre will check this, btw great SB *-* Yay! I know right, sherrie's SBs are just awesome >.<!

[Easy]
Mind to add clap slidertick ? :>

1. 00:22:468 (2) - Mind to extend this slider to white tick ? so you can add whistle to embalance your rhytm I extended it, but I prefer not to add a whistle because the hitsound pattern would be wrong c:
2. 00:24:047 (2) - IMO it looks ugly and don't match for the next slider, try to reduce the curved point of this slider ? Instead, I just added a symmetry pattern to 00:24:047 (2,3)
3. 00:27:205 (1) - End point use 224,160 to be linear with (2), i think it will be make a better flow Okay~!
4. 00:33:916 - Mind to add a note here ? the vocal is start here and i think it will make beginner easier to understand instead of slider here 00:34:311 (1) Hmm, 00:33:916 would be too close to the spinner, I think
5. 00:35:495 (2) - Wrong spacing man.. try to fix it as soon as possible >.< Woops, my mistake! Fixed!
6. 00:39:837 (1) - Try 1 - 2 grid left ? it match better with (4) and (5) IMO Alright, moved 1 grid to the left~!
7. 00:44:574 (4) - Nazi IMO, it's just a little weird for a straight slider here because the other is curved, try to use curved slider instead ? Okay, I added one with a light curve
8. 00:50:495 (2) - Replace to 220,240 so it vertical with (1), better flow for me Okay! Done!
9. 01:02:732 (2) - Don't extend spacing please.. 1-2 grid up to fix the spacing I had moved it to x:256 y:20 on the previous mod, so I don't think it's need now xD
10. 01:17:732 (1,3) - Flows bad for me.. try make it symmetrical ? Hmm, symmetrical? I didn't get what you meant by symmetrical, but I tried to fix the flow.
11. 01:20:889 (1) - Middle point use 128,120 to be perfect blanket with the reverse slider Done!

[Normal]
Is it just me or the beat snap is 1/1 here ? o.O When you open the map for edition that may occur sometimes. I used 1/4 c:

1. 00:33:916 - Add note here ? same reason as before Won't add for the same reason on Easy~
2. 00:41:218 (3) - Remove reverse instead ? i think it's just too long. you can make other rhytm instead of long reverse slider like that Okay, tried something else.
3. 00:44:179 (6) - Maybe try 2 grid up to be a perfect 90 degree triangle ? :3 I may have moved the other notes, so the triangle isn't there anymore, but done either way D:
4. 01:19:311 (3) - Copy paste this slider from (4) and make symmetrical ? this flow ugly IMO Alright!
5. 01:20:889 (1) - Second point 316 116 to be perfect blanket with slider before Done!

[Second Reproduction]
I feel uncomfortable when playing this diff, sometimes you use same spacing but different time line, it will just make player confused. Trying to use further spacing for a 1/4 distance so player can see the different between jump and blank space. This need more work IMO, i'll pointed nazi things that catch my attention. Ohh, I understand. Maybe if I use less spacing for streams and such it will improve a little?

1. 00:23:061 (8,3) - Bad overlapping, be sure to fix this better.. >.< Alright, fixed!
2. 00:24:047 (3) - Try -25 degrees flip ? IMO it will make it more beautiful Done! I just hope I flipped it to the right side? O.O
3. 00:26:218 (2,3) - This spacing really confused me at the first play, if you want to follow the piano sound, it's better to use all note instead of slider. and for the blank space, IMO stack is better than a jump like this. Okay, so huh... I don't know if I got things right... The stack part made me really confused. Stack what? I hope I did right...
4. 00:28:192 (4) - Try 352 120, it linear with (5) and make the pattern better instead of before Done
5. 00:28:784 (7) - Use curved slider instead ? IMO bad flow because the other slider is curved and pointing down Okay
6. 00:30:166 (2) - It's sit on the next slider and it's looks bad, Try other place ? recommend 124,352 Been already moved on previous mod
7. 00:30:363 (3) - Fix the blanket, middle point 64,200 to be perfect with before and after slider Since I had to move these sliders a bit because of the changes of the other items, I don't know where I shohuld place the middle point now ._.
8. 00:35:100 (4) - Flip 15 degrees ? feel better pattern to fit (3) Fixed, I think.
9. 00:41:317 (5) - Remove this please.. the music is not asked you for triplet and use triplet here is bad since the music is calming down Second person to say it, so yeah, removed.
10. 00:42:797 (2) - Try 440 220 ? flow better for me, so it'll not behind the (9) slidertrack Moved it somewhere else.
11. 00:45:758 (7,8,9,10) - Use clap in this note to emphasizing the music better.. it sounds boring without hitsounds right ? Oh, my mistake
12. 00:47:337 (4) - Really bad flow.. make it symmetrical with (3) will much better Improved flow, but in another way
13. 00:55:626 (1,2) - Switch the place of this slider on the TIMELINE, so it will much following the vocal, and ofc add finish here 00:55:626 Changed things a bit on previous mod, so I think there's no need to switch them now. But I added the finish
14. 00:56:416 - Add note here ? feel blank for me Made changes on previous mod. So yeah, no need to do this either c:
15. 01:03:521 (6) - 1 grid down to be perfect straight with (5) Done
16. 01:04:113 (7) - Move this slider here 01:03:916 and add note here 01:04:508 will be much better rhytm so it'll not confused players Should be better now
17. 01:06:087 (4) - Add finish here.. to emphasizing the music ofc Done
18. 01:09:837 (8,1) - Swap NC's cuz downbeat, Long white tick will be better for the start of NC though Done
19. 01:15:758 (6,7) - Rearrange this pattern ? flow bad @.@ Okay xD
20. 01:17:534 (3,4) - Add clap hitsound here, since the drum of the music asked you for a triplet, clap here will be fit~ Done
21. 01:21:087 (1) - Remove NC from here.. since you used 2 long whiteticks for NC rhytm, this will break consistency you have Since I changed things a bit at this part, I think this NC is not here anymore, but I noticed that I placed it in a wrong place. Fixed anyways xD
22. 01:25:922 (2) - Finish here.. the vocal is loud here and i think finish hitsound will be fit good here Yeah, earlier mod said the same thing ^^
23. 01:26:811 - I just want to click a single note here before starting the spinner.. mind to add it ? xD Alright ^^

Good Luck ~ Thank you for mod!!
Be ready for other member :p yeah, they just come too fast for me to keep up xD

You guys are just too fast ! But it's okay, I'll check all other mods during weekend/friday because I'm really busy during weekdays~!

ok.

[Easy]

• 
  
  [Normal]
  
  
  1. 1. 00:41:021 (2,3) - Honestly, I'd like it if you stacked this note, just personal preferance here.
     2. 01:03:521 (3) - Create a better blanket, bleh just do anything to make this better
     3. 01:05:692 (2) - Same thing as in easy, finish end
     4. 01:07:468 (4) - Same thing as in easy.
     5. 01:24:837 (3) - Whistle to the start I guess?
     6. 01:22:863 (4) - I feel that there can be something in the middle, and if you put some kind of beat or note in the middle you can add a finish with that too, but its your choice.
  • 
    
    [Hard]
    
    
    1. 1. 00:29:376 (4) - Move the slider end down more?
       2. 00:38:850 - Can you at least add a note here? It won't ruin your patterns, but you can add it to fit the clap in I suppose
       3. 00:42:008 - ^
       4. 00:35:692 - ^
       5. 00:57:995 (1,2) - Feels great if you can turn this into kick sliders, the pause between the sliders feel kinda weird
       6. 01:25:626 (1) - The spacing here feels harsh, can you reduce it?
    [Second Reproduction]
    
    
  1. 00:28:389 (5) - Please move this spacing equivalent to 00:22:074 (5) - or the other way around, they both should have the same spacing
  2. 00:51:876 (1) - Whistle?
  3. 00:54:047 (5) - ^ to start
  4. 01:01:153 - This pause, meh, your choice but I think a note to the middle of this sym pattern would be better
  5. 01:07:074 (6) - Whistle to the end sounds nice
  6. 01:20:297 (8) - ^ but to the start

That's all I got map is pretty nice

Look at all these mods x,x





Thanks a bunch for the mods guys, really helpful :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

Yay, weekend! I finally have time to check the mods ;u;!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Ohai~ from the QAT's queue Hello!

[General]
This is really a high-quality mapset. Well done! Omg, thank you! >.<

But, an Easy with 3 stars? Kind of high. Also the settings are quite high for an Easy, either lower the settings (HP -1, OD -1) or rename the diff to Easy+ (even if it is not a beautiful name, but you already have a Normal). Yeah, I'm not very used to making Easy difficults, that's why I always get my friend's GD for it :'D

[Easy]
High settings, please lower as described above. Yup, done!

00:39:047 - Kind of strange time to slightly accelerate spacing. It may be very subtle, but still, nothing has changed in the song. Indeed, the spacing even changed in the middle of a combo. Not saying it must be fixed, just wondering why it is there. Hmm, I fixed it anyways~

Cool Easy actually, but really, it is darn hard for its tier! Thank you! And yup, I really need to fix it ;-;

[Normal]
Actually, I'd also lower HP and OD by -1. These settings are really hard for a Normal. Yeah, I fixed it

This is also a marvellous diff, also a little hard, but OK. Yay, thank you!

[Second Reproduction]
00:41:218 (4,5,6) - I find this pattern a little crooked. Moving (5) to x:80 y:216 would match my taste a little more. Since I think what you mentioned isn't there anymore, I'll keep it >.<
00:51:482 (1) - This NC counts as NC spam, the previous NC is enough to emphasize the instrumental hit in the background. Oh, alright! Fixed

TBH, the diff is objectively well constructed, but I didn't really feel... "the kick" in it, you know. It was nothing really special. At least, for my taste. Yeah, I still need to improve a lot on Insanes. There are lots of things I still den't fully get it~

Even if the easier diffs aren't really easy, this mapset's got quite some potential to be ranked in the near future. more mainstream japanese stuff, meh Thank you for mod!!! I'm glad to know that ;u;! And yeah, I'm a fan of japanese stuff, hahaha!

Good luck!

PS: this post is not to be kudosu'd, it isn't kd-worthy Ohh, alright! It was short, but really helpful, though!

Irreversible wrote:

Hi there, it's my turn, from QAT-Queue! Hello!


Probably all of this will be suggestions. Feel free to deny them, if you don't like it.
[General]

Everything seems fine, but something bothers me : sb\lrc\l-7.png seems unused, remove it. Ohh, didn't notice it. Fixed

[Easy]

00:38:258 (3) - Try to get a nicer pattern here? Let me show you: http://puu.sh/4cch4.jpg I think I understood. Fixed!
00:39:837 - Well, imo this rhythm could fit the lyrics a bit better, if you put it like this: http://puu.sh/4ccjv.jpg Nice! Done!
00:47:732 (3,4) - The rhythm again, try to click on both, and press CTRL + G, I think it would fit the rhythm better. You are right!
01:02:732 (2,3) - Lol, same here. You don't need to change these, yet it would be a better rhythm imo. It's also more consistent with 01:14:968 (2,3) - . I see, but I'll keep it this way

Solid Easy, just those minor rhythm things which bothers me. I'm glad it's solid >.<

[Normal]

The settings are rather high for a normal, aren't they? Try reducing OR and HP by 1 tick each. Yeah, fixed xD

00:37:271 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion as in easy, try to get a better triangle pattern. 00:38:653 (5) - would be at 408 304. Should be better now
00:50:100 (3) - You used quite a lot 1/2 circles, after a slider. Why not here? It plays better, since currently the rhythm sounds a bit too late. My suggestion: 00:49:903 - move it to this spot. Looks nice! Done
01:03:521 (4) - This rhythm fits better if you add a circle 01:03:324 - . It's because it feels very empty, if you leave out that vocal. Hmm, yeah, indeed. But I'd better not add so many circles because it's a Normal
01:03:521 (4) - Also, did you miss a hitsound on the slider tail? Hmm, I guess not? Checked it and it seems all okay.

Not much to say, although I would use more 1/2, but that's up to you completely. Mentioned some above, if you didn't notice. Yeah, thank you! I added one, but I'll keep the others like that because too many 1/2 would be bad for Normal diff

[Second Reproduction]

Wtf. Just realised that this is an SB, and not a video, wtf good job!!! How comes that it doesn't lag? Since if i make a single picture SB in my maps, my computer nearly crashes, well w/e. ~ Ha, ha! That's sherrie's SB! The file size isn't so heavy, so I think that's why ^^

Going to be a little nazi, since there are some not-really-nice circles/sliders. Okay!

00:21:482 (2,3) - Move this a little up, to get an increased flow between these and the slider before. Done!
00:22:468 (7,8,3,4) - Well, tbh, I don't really like this slider placement, in the whole map it is quite nice, but here it looks stacked, and it's not a really good pattern. The rhythm is nice, but maybe a rearrangement would help? If you like it, you can keep it of course. But it would be nice if you could 00:22:468 (7,8) - place these others, because the stacking is meh. What about a similar pattern like 00:24:047 (3,4) - to make it consistent at least? Yeah, I got these comments about these sliders before. I think it would be better for 00:22:468 (7,8) to be consistent with 00:28:784 (7,8) instead because at those parts, there aren't any drums like 00:24:047 (3,4) I already fixed this on the other mods
00:27:797 (2,3) - Move them to 232 188, same reason as the first suggestion. Since I moved things here a bit on the other mods, I think it's fine now
00:42:008 (8,9) - If I were you, I'd replace them with a big slider. Fits this .. slight bgm really nice, and makes it a little more consistent with 00:40:429 (2) - those. Hmm, I started following the drums here, so I'll leave it like that for now c:
00:43:784 - I can't hear a sound here, you should work with a slider, passing through it, if you want something there. But currently, you should delete it for sure. Actually, there is a sound here. If you hear it carefuly, you'll hear a sound similar to soft-whistles. That's why I added it here. But I'll think about it
00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't get this, since this is a really.. created rhythm. Please space them with a 1/2 rhythm, since the current one doesn't fit at all. Hmm, it's not that created... If you hear the song with 25% of playback rate, you'll notice why I put those 1/4 notes there. If someone else complains about it, I'll remove it >.<
00:45:758 (6,7,8,9,1) - Try to get a better 'path' here. Let me show you what i mean. (Didn't make any big changes, just rearranging the placement.) Yeah, it feels much better!

Puush still down

132,192,45758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,45857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,112,45955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,46054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,80,46153,6,0,P|328:88|316:172,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:942 (3,4) - Spacing looks messed up, just for aesthetitcs, move 00:47:337 (4) - to 204 308? I made changes on these and they aren't there anymore ^^
00:47:732 (5) - Don't forget to move this a bit upwards, if you applied ^. ^
00:58:784 (1) - Move to 192 184. Same as above, just this time only the slider. You should really do that. Done!
01:19:311 (6) - Not REALLY sure about that, but Ctrl + G 01:19:113 (5) - with this one. Because I think 'shi' is quite a strong vocal, even if it's on the red tick. You're quite right there. But if I did that, I wouldn't get the plate sounds on 01:19:311

Well that's it already o: Tari will mod it further, and then we'll look further Hope I was able to help you a bit. Thank you very much for modding! It was really helpful ^^

Tari wrote:

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ok.

[Easy]

1. 00:55:232 (4) - Not big issue, but I'd like you to make this note stack with 00:52:468 (1) - sldier end's here. It will require you rearrange some of previous notes. Okay!
2. 01:05:495 (1) - Add finish to the end here? its to follow the same finish pattern as of here : 01:09:837 (4) - for the most part, since you add two finishes there too. Oh, I added it on 01:09:837 (4) because the song asks for it. But putting finish here follows the same pattern on my TSR diff, so okay
3. 01:07:468 (3) - Whistle here? it doesn't hit exactly at the piano sound, but It still fits to me. You're right
4. 01:18:916 (3) - Ehh, I think finish fits better than whistle at the end of the slider, the impact sound is much greater to me. Yeah, that was my mistake xD
5. 01:24:837 (2,3,4) - Kinda overlaps previous pattern, can you move it to better spot? Like this : http://puu.sh/4degS.jpg I don't know if I got this right, but I think you meant to make a stack with 01:25:232 (3) and the tail of 01:22:468 (3) - ?

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  [Normal]
  
  
  1. 1. 00:41:021 (2,3) - Honestly, I'd like it if you stacked this note, just personal preferance here. I thought that not stacking them would be easier to read, but I think stacking them is easier to execute it, right? xD
     2. 01:03:521 (3) - Create a better blanket, bleh just do anything to make this better I guess you meant the flow? I tried to do something
     3. 01:05:692 (2) - Same thing as in easy, finish end Yup, added it
     4. 01:07:468 (4) - Same thing as in easy. Done!
     5. 01:24:837 (3) - Whistle to the start I guess? Okay
     6. 01:22:863 (4) - I feel that there can be something in the middle, and if you put some kind of beat or note in the middle you can add a finish with that too, but its your choice. Hmm, I think it's okay this way c:
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    [Second Reproduction]
    
    
    1. 1. 00:28:389 (5) - Please move this spacing equivalent to 00:22:074 (5) - or the other way around, they both should have the same spacing Done!
       2. 00:51:876 (1) - Whistle? Kay!
       3. 00:54:047 (5) - ^ to start ^
       4. 01:01:153 - This pause, meh, your choice but I think a note to the middle of this sym pattern would be better Hmm, okay xD
       5. 01:07:074 (6) - Whistle to the end sounds nice Okay
       6. 01:20:297 (8) - ^ but to the start Follows the vocal nicely!
  That's all I got map is pretty nice

Thank you for modding!

Okay, now I'm SO tired! But thank you, guys! Now I feel that my map improved a lot! >.<

Updated mapset!

Hello, I missed some things which actually still bother me, no kd please

[Second Reproduction]

00:23:850 (2) - Can you move this to 152 128? It makes a nicer left right flow with 00:24:047 (3) - , and it's not so close to 00:23:061 (8) - , which actually looks better.

196,164,24639,2,0,P|203:238|135:308,1,180
80,196,25232,2,0,L|240:284,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,25824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,26021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,26218,1,2,0:0:0:0:

I made it for you since ^ it just too much text

00:45:758 (7,8,9,10,1) - This still doesn't look really good, I fixed the curve up for you

132,192,45758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,148,45857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,112,45955,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,92,46054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,80,46153,6,0,P|328:88|316:172,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,256,46745,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:56:218 (2) - Somehow i feel this CTRL + G? Not something important though.

01:05:495 (2,3,4) - Wouldn't it look neater to align them in a line instead of 2 grids next to it?

01:10:626 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think some drum hitsounds fitting to the background would be quite cool!

ok, that's all, sorry! Good luck :3