• 
  [General]

1. None
   [Second]
2. AR-1 OD-1
   this song isn't very quick.
3. 00:46:942 (3,4,5) - try this kind of arrangement http://puu.sh/4IN1N.jpg
4. 00:49:705 add a note?
5. 00:55:232 (7) - ctrl+g?
   
   [Hard]
6. 00:40:429 add a note and stack with 00:40:626 (2)'s head?
7. 00:41:218 add a note and stack with 00:41:416 (3)'s head?
8. 01:25:626 (1) - move to x238y248
9. 01:26:811 ~ 01:27:008 make a three stream.
   then 01:27:205 make the spinner start here
   
   [Normal & Easy]
10. None

Awaken wrote:

m4m from your queue

• 
  [General]

1. None
   [Second]
2. AR-1 OD-1
   this song isn't very quick. Oh, okay.
3. 00:46:942 (3,4,5) - try this kind of arrangement http://puu.sh/4IN1N.jpg 00:47:337 (4,5) would flow bad, imo.
4. 00:49:705 add a note? Hmm, I'll think about it. For now I'll keep it as it is.
5. 00:55:232 (7) - ctrl+g? Oh, cool!
   
   [Normal & Easy]
6. None

Good Luck~

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:34:311 (1) Whistle Hmm, sorry, I just add whistles to the white ticks before the big white ones.
00:34:705 (2) ^ Just to the head
00:35:889 (3) ^ Already explained xD
00:37:074 (2) ^ I will keep the one on the tail.
00:38:258 (3) ^ Nope
00:39:047 (4,5) ^ Added it just to (5)
00:47:732 (3) Move the middle Sliderpoint to 288 348 looks better. Okay.

Normal

00:34:311 - 00:39:047 Same like in Easy. Why are there no whistles? Adding whistles to every note would be spammy, imo.
01:03:521 (3) Move the Last Sliederpoint to 480232 looks better Okay

Second Reproduction
Funny diff name xD

00:28:389 (5) Move it to 360 284 Alright
01:10:626 I think Drums and Finisher would perfectly fit. I don't really like to use drums. And having them like it is now is more audible, imo.

Xinely wrote:

Hi~

• 
  General
  ~ add widescreen support since this map use SB? This SB wasn't made for widescreen support. If I added it, all the image edges would be seen >.<
  ~ no need "Dekaane" in tags, already have in "DakeDekaane" and name of diff Alright
  ~ 01:17:732 - kiai off due same as 01:05:100 - ? Hmm, in this second Kiai time, I feel that the song isnt calming down yet, even after 01:17:732
  ~ change name creator become Yumih /runs <3 LOL, done~! xD

• 
  Easy
  00:25:626 (3) - clap in repeat for consistency? also for follow piano I only add Clap to the places the music asks for it. The Clap alone without the support of the sound on the background is a bit weird, imo.
  00:28:784 (3) - clap in tail? music sound here is loud, also consistency with previous ^
  00:34:705 (2) - hmm maybe you will reject this but , 00:35:100 - vocal in here is loud, you can't skip this imo, try http://puu.sh/4ISJ5.jpg ? Why not? c: Done
  00:41:021 (2) - whistle? consistency with 00:39:442 (5) - Yup, I forgot xD
  00:55:232 (4) - inconsistency spacing here, i know you want this circle stacked in (1)'s tail but it's unrankable when spacing is not consisten
  my advice : if you want to keep (4)'s stacked , make 00:54:047 (3) - like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021525 Oh whops! I didn't see that, it was my mistake
  01:05:495 (1) - in tail, yap this sound is loud but it's too much loud if you use finish imo, try use clap instead? Instead, I reduced the volume a little
  01:22:468 (3,4) - for this, in (3) , 01:23:061 - have cymbal here, can't skip to map this imo so delete (4) and make like http://puu.sh/4ITac.jpg (head and repeat use finish, tail use clap) Ooh, neat! I wouldn't have noticed that
  01:28:784 - from here 01:30:363 - , volume increase in 01:28:784 - and still loud sound in 01:30:363 - , 5% here really not fit, try 20-25% instead (if you follow, apply in all diffs except dekaane's) I fix the volume increase on 01:28:784 but I prefer 5% at the end since I don't want the spinner sound to be so audible.

• 
  Normal
  00:28:784 (3) - same as easy, clap in tail for consistency? Same as said on Easy
  00:42:600 (4,5) - try make smooth flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021560 Oh, okay!
  00:48:521 (1) - nazi, 280,248 for symmetrical with (2) and blanket with (3)? Lol, okay :3
  01:05:692 (2) - same as easy, try clap in tail instead, due cymbal is more loud more hard in 01:06:482 - than 01:06:087 - , oh or you can try make Okay!01:06:087 - volume lower here
  01:08:850 (2) - try for follow vocal since this is normal which played by newbie too. try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/4ITyq.jpg ? Hmm, there are too much notes on red lines, there >.<
  01:16:153 (3) - based my taste in flow, try 236,360 for better flow? Hmm, the flow would be a little rough on 01:15:363 (2,3) imo
  01:21:679 (2) - whistle in head to follow violin sound? Why not? c:
  01:24:837 (3) - this flow is bad due straight slider and then curved, try http://puu.sh/4ITDI.jpg ? Hmm, I tried something else.

• 
  Insane
  OD-1 for better spread with others Done!
  00:39:837 (1) - cymbal so loud here, change to finish Oh, okay. Added Finish
  00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - actually you can make stream from 00:44:475 - until 00:45:067 - Hmm, I'd like to follow the song here c:
  00:45:758 (7) - NC due stream? you did it in previous like 00:36:284 (1) - , for consistency yeah yeah yeah Oh, right.
  00:55:232 (7) - try ctrl+G , it's really fit with music imo <3 Yup! <3
  01:06:087 (4) - same as other Yup Yup!

Nice SB as usual Sherri ~
also nice song too here
take my star and Good Luck ~

Awaken wrote:

• [Hard]

1. 00:40:429 add a note and stack with 00:40:626 (2)'s head? /*I'm following the light percusions for this part, adding that beats would be quite intrusive imo
2. 00:41:218 add a note and stack with 00:41:416 (3)'s head? /*^
3. 01:25:626 (1) - move to x238y248 /*That'd ruin the momentum I've built for that jump (and there will be no jump, which should be there).
4. 01:26:811 ~ 01:27:008 make a three stream.
   then 01:27:205 make the spinner start here /*A triple feels a bit weird there as the "tension" has already faded away in the previous slider, so it shouldn't be too loaded.

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Dekaane's Hard
00:26:613 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021593 Like this Maybe? /*I'm following the guitar there and the sliderticks fill the piano hits :p

Xinely wrote:

• 
  Dekaane'sHard
  00:26:021 (2) - feel free to reject, based piano here, try ctrl+G? xP /*I liked how it flows, though I made a tiny adjust to make it look less sloppy.
  00:39:639 (7) - try in 440,228 for better flow? /*Moved very near of there, I hope people doesn't complain about the irregular spacing there
  00:53:653 (3) - ctrl+G to make it harder? /runs /*This was suggested before, a jump could fit there, but I'm saving them up for the kiai.
  01:06:087 - same as other diff, try lower volume or change clap? /*I feel a finish should be there, but did something interesting here, added a whistle in the other note with finish, so it have more emphasis than the previous, thanks for noticing the difference in the music :p
  fun ~ /*

DakeDekaane wrote:

Thanks everyone for modding <:
My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Le random mod! Hi!!

[Easy]
00:25:626 (3) - Add a clap on the tail, using the same clap hitsound from 00:23:653 (1) - for consistency. The Clap hitsounds as on 00:23:653 (1) are used just 1 time every 4 big white ticks
00:39:442 (5) - ^ Add clap with the same custom hitsound from 00:23:653 (1) ^
01:25:626 (4) - I think you should add a finish no the entire slider to match the cymbal crashes heard in the music. Indeed! Done

[Normal]
00:25:626 (4) - Add S:C2 on this slider's tail. Same reason as on Easy
00:39:047 (6) - ^ ^
00:44:574 (1) - Change clap on the tail to S:C1 I feel this part needs more impact, so SC2 would be better, imo.
01:25:626 (4) - As previously suggested in Easy, I suggest putting finish no this entire slider. Yup! Done

[Insane]
00:39:541 and 00:39:738 should also have a note, for consistency with 00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) - . Hmm, I wanted to "slow down" a bit at this part because the music is getting calmer. But I'll think about it!

Wowies, you had me tricked xD The SB almost looks like a video itself so thumbs up for that! (This visual novel reminds me of Amnesia somehow OvO)
Have 2 stars~★★ Omg, thank you for the stars!!

Loved the map first time I saw it. Now I love it even more Awww, thank you! <3

Hope this helps! ^^

Pokie wrote:

Request from Forum PM

_(:3 」∠)_ otome! Yay! I love Otome <3

　General

1. Momori and Ruka to tags, they're the member of encounter+ Waa! I couldn't find so much info about encounter, actually! Okay, done!
2. Overall offset +7ms (20897) Ohhh, indeed. Sounds a lot better. It was just a bit painful to snap the storyboard again from the OSB file, lol xD

　Normal

• 00:42:995 (5) - Try to add a new combo here for noticeable contrast about the rhythm changes? Oh, I forgot to put it, I guess! Thank you, done.

　Dekaane's Hard

• 01:27:008 (1) - It's better to end this spinner at down beat here: 01:30:363 - , like what the mapper did I fixed it for him~!

　Second Reproduction

• 01:23:455 (4) - Kind of emptiness on hitsoundings, what about adding a whistle on slider's head? Oh, alright!
  01:24:639 (3) - Same reason as above, add a clap on slider's tail to put up a tightly paced rhythm Done~!

Please get me back to here when you're ready!

Yumih wrote:

Ohhh, indeed. Sounds a lot better. It was just a bit painful to snap the storyboard again from the OSB file, lol xD