MasterKirin wrote:

Hi from my queue

I didn't find something to correct in your beatmap. Sorry

By the way you did a good job with this beatmap.

Good luck for ranking

Teara wrote:

From the QAT Queue.

Nice. Just a few suggestions. I'll recheck it later this week. Yay! Okay

[Easy]

00:37:074 (2) - Consider giving the slider a slight curve? At the moment it feels a little out of place imo. Fixed!

[Normal]

00:53:653 (2) - Delete this and repeat the previous slider once (with a clap on the last repeat ofc). (Then fix spacing of the remaining notes before spinner.) This feels more correct in terms of general flow and it flows better with the lyrics, and sounds a lot better in my opinion since the lyrics are more dominate here then the other parts that are similar to this. Done!

[Second Reproduction]

00:26:613 (1,2,3) - This combo is black, while the background is black aswell. Please fix this as this makes it really hard to see. Oh, I see. Fixed!

00:34:705 (3,4) - Consider copying (1,2) and making it mirror. if done right, it could make it look a bit better then it currently is

SPOILER

Huh... I'm not sure if what I did is okay, but I hope it is. I tried to do what you said

Ofcouse, you will have to fix the following notes, but like I said, if done right, it will be much more fun to play. If you don't understand what I mean, just ask me ingame and I'll give you a few examples.

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Easy:
00:25:626 (3) - Might wanna add clap hitsound here
01:05:495 (1) - Turn this into a curve slider maybe
01:16:547 (4) - ^
01:18:916 (3) - Delete and copy paste 01:20:100 (5)
00:28:389 (2) - Clap hitsound Nevermind lol
01:00:363 (3) - Curve maybe? Hmm..
01:14:968 (2,3,4) - Love this
01:18:916 (3) - Delete this and copy paste 01:17:732 (1)

Normal:
00:25:626 (4) - Clap hitsound please
00:39:047 (6) - ^
01:00:758 (5) - Reduce the curve a bit.
00:29:376 (4) - Looks weird. Move down a bit ^^'

Hard:
00:36:679 (1,2,3) - Cooool
01:11:416 (1) - Curve maybe~
Not much to say. My favorite diff

Shinchaechae wrote:

From my Queue~

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

*General things
sb is awesome doe Yesh! sherrie__fay's SB are awesome :3

Easy:
00:25:626 (3) - Might wanna add clap hitsound here Hmm, I only add Clap hitsounds to the parts that the song asks for it. For example, on 00:24:047 if you remove the Clap, you can understand what I'm talking about.
01:05:495 (1) - Turn this into a curve slider maybe Okay, done.
01:16:547 (4) - ^ Hmm, I won't add a curve here because I want this slider to match 01:14:968 (2,3)
01:18:916 (3) - Delete and copy paste 01:20:100 (5) Hmm, on the other item you told me to copy paste 01:17:732 (1) and on this one you are telling me to copy paste 01:20:100 (5) xD I'll just copy paste 01:17:732 (1)
00:28:389 (2) - Clap hitsound Nevermind lol
01:00:363 (3) - Curve maybe? Hmm.. I won't add a curve because the flow will become bad with 01:01:547 (4)
01:14:968 (2,3,4) - Love this xD
01:18:916 (3) - Delete this and copy paste 01:17:732 (1) Done

Normal:
00:25:626 (4) - Clap hitsound please Same thing said on Easy
00:39:047 (6) - ^ ^
01:00:758 (5) - Reduce the curve a bit. Okay, done.
00:29:376 (4) - Looks weird. Move down a bit ^^' I didn't really understand what you meant here... The image is difficult to understand because I don't know from what part those (3) and (4) are and what exactly looks weird :c

Second Reproduction
00:31:942 (1) - Love this. Yay
I dont't mod insanes so i'll just leave comments and the like ^^
Sexy streams are sexy Haha, sexy streams

• 
  [General]

1. None
   [Second]
2. AR-1 OD-1
   this song isn't very quick.
3. 00:46:942 (3,4,5) - try this kind of arrangement http://puu.sh/4IN1N.jpg
4. 00:49:705 add a note?
5. 00:55:232 (7) - ctrl+g?
   
   [Hard]
6. 00:40:429 add a note and stack with 00:40:626 (2)'s head?
7. 00:41:218 add a note and stack with 00:41:416 (3)'s head?
8. 01:25:626 (1) - move to x238y248
9. 01:26:811 ~ 01:27:008 make a three stream.
   then 01:27:205 make the spinner start here
   
   [Normal & Easy]
10. None

Awaken wrote:

m4m from your queue

• 
  [General]

1. None
   [Second]
2. AR-1 OD-1
   this song isn't very quick. Oh, okay.
3. 00:46:942 (3,4,5) - try this kind of arrangement http://puu.sh/4IN1N.jpg 00:47:337 (4,5) would flow bad, imo.
4. 00:49:705 add a note? Hmm, I'll think about it. For now I'll keep it as it is.
5. 00:55:232 (7) - ctrl+g? Oh, cool!
   
   [Normal & Easy]
6. None

Good Luck~

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:34:311 (1) Whistle Hmm, sorry, I just add whistles to the white ticks before the big white ones.
00:34:705 (2) ^ Just to the head
00:35:889 (3) ^ Already explained xD
00:37:074 (2) ^ I will keep the one on the tail.
00:38:258 (3) ^ Nope
00:39:047 (4,5) ^ Added it just to (5)
00:47:732 (3) Move the middle Sliderpoint to 288 348 looks better. Okay.

Normal

00:34:311 - 00:39:047 Same like in Easy. Why are there no whistles? Adding whistles to every note would be spammy, imo.
01:03:521 (3) Move the Last Sliederpoint to 480232 looks better Okay

Second Reproduction
Funny diff name xD

00:28:389 (5) Move it to 360 284 Alright
01:10:626 I think Drums and Finisher would perfectly fit. I don't really like to use drums. And having them like it is now is more audible, imo.

Xinely wrote:

Hi~

• 
  General
  ~ add widescreen support since this map use SB? This SB wasn't made for widescreen support. If I added it, all the image edges would be seen >.<
  ~ no need "Dekaane" in tags, already have in "DakeDekaane" and name of diff Alright
  ~ 01:17:732 - kiai off due same as 01:05:100 - ? Hmm, in this second Kiai time, I feel that the song isnt calming down yet, even after 01:17:732
  ~ change name creator become Yumih /runs <3 LOL, done~! xD

• 
  Easy
  00:25:626 (3) - clap in repeat for consistency? also for follow piano I only add Clap to the places the music asks for it. The Clap alone without the support of the sound on the background is a bit weird, imo.
  00:28:784 (3) - clap in tail? music sound here is loud, also consistency with previous ^
  00:34:705 (2) - hmm maybe you will reject this but , 00:35:100 - vocal in here is loud, you can't skip this imo, try http://puu.sh/4ISJ5.jpg ? Why not? c: Done
  00:41:021 (2) - whistle? consistency with 00:39:442 (5) - Yup, I forgot xD
  00:55:232 (4) - inconsistency spacing here, i know you want this circle stacked in (1)'s tail but it's unrankable when spacing is not consisten
  my advice : if you want to keep (4)'s stacked , make 00:54:047 (3) - like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021525 Oh whops! I didn't see that, it was my mistake
  01:05:495 (1) - in tail, yap this sound is loud but it's too much loud if you use finish imo, try use clap instead? Instead, I reduced the volume a little
  01:22:468 (3,4) - for this, in (3) , 01:23:061 - have cymbal here, can't skip to map this imo so delete (4) and make like http://puu.sh/4ITac.jpg (head and repeat use finish, tail use clap) Ooh, neat! I wouldn't have noticed that
  01:28:784 - from here 01:30:363 - , volume increase in 01:28:784 - and still loud sound in 01:30:363 - , 5% here really not fit, try 20-25% instead (if you follow, apply in all diffs except dekaane's) I fix the volume increase on 01:28:784 but I prefer 5% at the end since I don't want the spinner sound to be so audible.

• 
  Normal
  00:28:784 (3) - same as easy, clap in tail for consistency? Same as said on Easy
  00:42:600 (4,5) - try make smooth flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021560 Oh, okay!
  00:48:521 (1) - nazi, 280,248 for symmetrical with (2) and blanket with (3)? Lol, okay :3
  01:05:692 (2) - same as easy, try clap in tail instead, due cymbal is more loud more hard in 01:06:482 - than 01:06:087 - , oh or you can try make Okay!01:06:087 - volume lower here
  01:08:850 (2) - try for follow vocal since this is normal which played by newbie too. try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/4ITyq.jpg ? Hmm, there are too much notes on red lines, there >.<
  01:16:153 (3) - based my taste in flow, try 236,360 for better flow? Hmm, the flow would be a little rough on 01:15:363 (2,3) imo
  01:21:679 (2) - whistle in head to follow violin sound? Why not? c:
  01:24:837 (3) - this flow is bad due straight slider and then curved, try http://puu.sh/4ITDI.jpg ? Hmm, I tried something else.

• 
  Insane
  OD-1 for better spread with others Done!
  00:39:837 (1) - cymbal so loud here, change to finish Oh, okay. Added Finish
  00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - actually you can make stream from 00:44:475 - until 00:45:067 - Hmm, I'd like to follow the song here c:
  00:45:758 (7) - NC due stream? you did it in previous like 00:36:284 (1) - , for consistency yeah yeah yeah Oh, right.
  00:55:232 (7) - try ctrl+G , it's really fit with music imo <3 Yup! <3
  01:06:087 (4) - same as other Yup Yup!

Nice SB as usual Sherri ~
also nice song too here
take my star and Good Luck ~

Awaken wrote:

• [Hard]

1. 00:40:429 add a note and stack with 00:40:626 (2)'s head? /*I'm following the light percusions for this part, adding that beats would be quite intrusive imo
2. 00:41:218 add a note and stack with 00:41:416 (3)'s head? /*^
3. 01:25:626 (1) - move to x238y248 /*That'd ruin the momentum I've built for that jump (and there will be no jump, which should be there).
4. 01:26:811 ~ 01:27:008 make a three stream.
   then 01:27:205 make the spinner start here /*A triple feels a bit weird there as the "tension" has already faded away in the previous slider, so it shouldn't be too loaded.

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Dekaane's Hard
00:26:613 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021593 Like this Maybe? /*I'm following the guitar there and the sliderticks fill the piano hits :p

Xinely wrote:

• 
  Dekaane'sHard
  00:26:021 (2) - feel free to reject, based piano here, try ctrl+G? xP /*I liked how it flows, though I made a tiny adjust to make it look less sloppy.
  00:39:639 (7) - try in 440,228 for better flow? /*Moved very near of there, I hope people doesn't complain about the irregular spacing there
  00:53:653 (3) - ctrl+G to make it harder? /runs /*This was suggested before, a jump could fit there, but I'm saving them up for the kiai.
  01:06:087 - same as other diff, try lower volume or change clap? /*I feel a finish should be there, but did something interesting here, added a whistle in the other note with finish, so it have more emphasis than the previous, thanks for noticing the difference in the music :p
  fun ~ /*

DakeDekaane wrote:

Thanks everyone for modding <:
My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=Z7s3Wk6b

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Le random mod! Hi!!

[Easy]
00:25:626 (3) - Add a clap on the tail, using the same clap hitsound from 00:23:653 (1) - for consistency. The Clap hitsounds as on 00:23:653 (1) are used just 1 time every 4 big white ticks
00:39:442 (5) - ^ Add clap with the same custom hitsound from 00:23:653 (1) ^
01:25:626 (4) - I think you should add a finish no the entire slider to match the cymbal crashes heard in the music. Indeed! Done

[Normal]
00:25:626 (4) - Add S:C2 on this slider's tail. Same reason as on Easy
00:39:047 (6) - ^ ^
00:44:574 (1) - Change clap on the tail to S:C1 I feel this part needs more impact, so SC2 would be better, imo.
01:25:626 (4) - As previously suggested in Easy, I suggest putting finish no this entire slider. Yup! Done

[Insane]
00:39:541 and 00:39:738 should also have a note, for consistency with 00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) - . Hmm, I wanted to "slow down" a bit at this part because the music is getting calmer. But I'll think about it!

Wowies, you had me tricked xD The SB almost looks like a video itself so thumbs up for that! (This visual novel reminds me of Amnesia somehow OvO)
Have 2 stars~★★ Omg, thank you for the stars!!

Loved the map first time I saw it. Now I love it even more Awww, thank you! <3

Hope this helps! ^^

Pokie wrote:

Request from Forum PM

_(:3 」∠)_ otome! Yay! I love Otome <3

　General

1. Momori and Ruka to tags, they're the member of encounter+ Waa! I couldn't find so much info about encounter, actually! Okay, done!
2. Overall offset +7ms (20897) Ohhh, indeed. Sounds a lot better. It was just a bit painful to snap the storyboard again from the OSB file, lol xD

　Normal

• 00:42:995 (5) - Try to add a new combo here for noticeable contrast about the rhythm changes? Oh, I forgot to put it, I guess! Thank you, done.

　Dekaane's Hard

• 01:27:008 (1) - It's better to end this spinner at down beat here: 01:30:363 - , like what the mapper did I fixed it for him~!

　Second Reproduction

• 01:23:455 (4) - Kind of emptiness on hitsoundings, what about adding a whistle on slider's head? Oh, alright!
  01:24:639 (3) - Same reason as above, add a clap on slider's tail to put up a tightly paced rhythm Done~!

Please get me back to here when you're ready!

Yumih wrote:

Ohhh, indeed. Sounds a lot better. It was just a bit painful to snap the storyboard again from the OSB file, lol xD