1. Another (5 stars, 392 notes)
2. Easy (1.71 stars, 84 notes)
3. Extra (5 stars, 438 notes)
4. Hyper (4.93 stars, 286 notes)
5. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 540 notes)
6. Normal (3.89 stars, 122 notes)

• [E&N]

1. fine.
   
   [Hyper]
2. 00:41:652 (1) - remove clap at start
3. 01:15:879 (5) - why soft-finish here?
4. 01:24:879 (2) - add clap at start
   
   [Another]
5. 00:43:366 (1,2) - hard to read.
6. 01:20:004 (6,7,8) - change their position plz/_\
   
   [Extra]
7. 00:14:052 (5) - +hitsound(?
8. 01:34:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - will this spacing be fine(?

sherrie__fay wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff that you must fix them
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

• [E&N]

1. fine.
   
   [Hyper]
2. 00:41:652 (1) - remove clap at start added
3. 01:15:879 (5) - why soft-finish here? keeping, see no problem ^^
4. 01:24:879 (2) - add clap at start ^
   
   [Another]
5. 00:43:366 (1,2) - hard to read. I think okay
6. 01:20:004 (6,7,8) - change their position plz/_\ fixed
   
   [Extra]
7. 00:14:052 (5) - +hitsound(? I think it sounds okay!
8. 01:34:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - will this spacing be fine(? I think so! It's distance snap!

*Edit: i love this song.baka moded.

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections Its okay, Taiko uses different timing.
2. normal-sliderslide.wav is only 0 bytes large. Please use the blank.wav which is 44 bytes large. dunno what this is xD Don't think its an issue I've always used this silent sliderslide
3. suggest remove letterbox~because your have video in your map~ done

[Easy]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   01:24:754 - fixed

mapping

1. 00:00:052 (1,1) - not symmetrical thats ok o.o
2. 01:09:516 (3) - up 1 grid. (I try to let 01:08:766 (1,3,1) - use same spacing!!)

[Normal]

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1. unused green line:
   01:24:754 -

mapping

1. 00:11:852 (4) - suggest use finish and whistle for reverse [IMO]
2. 00:24:452 (4) - suggest remove clap for reverse [IMO]
3. 01:21:504 (2,3) - too far spacing for Normal diff

[Hyper]

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1. unused green line:
   01:24:754 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:42:442 (3,4) -

mapping

1. 00:12:852 (1) - suggest add whistle hitsound~ only have finish I think It's not enough [IMO]
2. 00:29:652 (3,5) - not full cover now~stack it ? [nazi]
3. 01:20:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - uneven spacing

[Another]

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1. unused green line:
   01:24:754 -

mapping

1. 00:34:052 (2) - I will set clap at the slider tail, If I map this hitSound xD [IMO]

[Extra]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   01:24:754 -

mapping

1. 00:05:552 (1,6) - just suggest add clap [IMO]
2. 01:13:266 (3,6,9,13,15) - suggest add whistle and finish, then add finish at 01:14:754 (1) - slider head [IMO]

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

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1. suggest remove video in Taiko diff!
2. I think you need have a Taiko BG so I try to make one↓
   
   Taiko BG

   [attachment=0:b1755]Taiko BG[Sakura].JPG[/attachment:b1755]

mapping

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  suggest:

1. 00:29:252 (24,25,26,27,28,29) - I think kdk kdk It's better._. just suggest!!
2. 00:44:572 (33) - try to use D?

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

Nice map!!
I cant find some error. Just some suggest
star!! and good luck

Zelos wrote:

yay Sakura.

Folder:
Clean

General:
Sections are snapped.
Tick rate is different on the normal difficulty. Change the tick rate to 1 so it matches the rest of the set.
I believe for the search to work correctly, you have to include dance twice in the tags. so put the word dance in one more time so when people search for Dance Dance Revolution, they will actually get this song. That is incorrect
Which iidx did this come from also? 8th style, as says in tags

Easy:
00:16:852 (2) - remove the clap on the beginning of this slider. it sounds so bad with it on. dont see no real problem with how it is sorry o.o
00:17:652 (3) - remove the clap on the end of this slider. same reasoning as the above. ^
No real layout issues though \o/

Normal:
Reiteration: Change tick rate to 1 to match rest of set sir. fixed
Nothing really wrong here but I just wanna point out that the beginning of this difficulty is definitely harder than the rest of this map. eh I think its okay. its a bit hard yeah but thats cause of the rhytmn.

Hyper:
00:26:452 (5,6) - I know that its small but really? A 1/4th jump on a Hyper? not uncommon o.O
00:28:052 (5,6) - ^^
00:42:896 (4) - the slider is touching the HP bar, lower it a little along with the rest of the pattern so it remains consistent with its sliders? moved a bit
00:51:058 (6,7) - now that's a bit more harsh then the 1/4th jumps :I
00:54:858 (1) - grab this slider and move it to the right 1 or 2 grid points? it will round with the previous note in a nicer fashion.

Another:
Natteke diff is flawless <3

Extra:
00:22:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - this combo is just a bit long in my opinion. perhaps new combo somewhere in the pattern? combo is following the rhytmn/gallop in this part for the whole pattern, just like in the previosu one. the only difference is this uses more hit circles than sliders
00:35:252 (2,3) - stack perfectly under each other? they are just slightly off.
00:36:052 (4,5) - ^^^^

And that would be it.

Have a star yeahyeahyeahhh

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Okay, hi, m4m. :3

[GENERAL]

There's no video for the Normal Difficulty. :O Fixed

[Easy]

01:05:766 (1,2) - Eh, might want to re-do these, but they're okay, I guess. eh no need to really change

[Normal]

00:38:452 (1,2) - The normal hit on the end of both of these kinda ruins the soft part of this, IMO. If you don't change, I'd probably just lower the volume. lowered a bit
01:29:754 (1,2) - Maybe add a lap on the end of both of these? clap? noty

[Hyper]

00:52:858 (3,4) - Given the time distance between these two, I don't think you should stack 4 under 3. Maybe make a jump with 4.
01:18:879 (2) - You're missing one of those soft claps here.
01:24:879 (2) - ^

[Another]

00:06:452 (1) - Again, don't think you should stack. :<
00:49:924 (3) - There's probably a rhythm I'm missing here, but this slider sounds odd... don't think so, following the drums which play in 1/3 as does the slider

[Extra]

00:12:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole soft part sounds weird without any hitsounds. I dont think hitsounds sound well here so I just went soft not hitsounds.
00:31:452 (1,2,3) - These might look more centered if they're one pixel down. :3 eh ok
00:42:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel it would look better if distance spacing grew as the song slows.
01:26:754 (1) - This one is too close to the other hitcircle... its close, but its part of the pattern so I think its okay

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I'm sorry I didn't findmuch, great map!

00:29:252 (24,25,26,27,28,29) - I think kdk kdk It's better._. just suggest!!

00:44:572 (33) - try to use D?

SPOILER

xsrsbsns wrote:

Man, I couldn't mod this

[Easy]
00:11:252 (3) - Jw why isn't this spaced same as previous ones XD and maybe make the next (1) horizontally middle too

[Another]
00:31:252 (1) - Would prefer this note to be separated from the stack (2,3,4)
01:23:191 (6,7) - ^

[Extra]
00:51:524 (1) - I believe this is too far
01:14:016 (9) - New combo?

Good map, don't kudos and good luck!

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

[Easy]
nothing to say

[Normal]
so hard lol
01:05:203 (2) - add clap?

[Hypher]
00:05:552 (2) - add new combo or keep distance?
00:12:052 (4) - add new combo
00:12:052 (4,2) - ,00:23:552 (5) - this diff is hypher. It's too hard for hard player.
00:31:252 (7) - add new combo
00:44:572 (8) - 3gird right? (grid 4)
01:08:391 (1) - delete new combo?

[Another]
00:50:858 (4) - make more round? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243288
01:05:391 (1) - remove new combo

[Extra]
AR -1
OD -1
HR -1
this setting don't fit this BPM orz nah its okay. It's like the DDR Sakura which has really fast AR as well.
00:23:852 (11) - add new combo?

nice work