Hey, modding as requested
Generaltitle should be Hatsune Miku - World is Mine (Live Ver.), as mentioned before
asd bg's quality is kinda poor >< look for some other miku's bg?
using timing points (red sections) to change slider's velocity is unrankable.. and the song's bpm is the same for all song, so yeah.. remove those timing sections
kiai times aren't the same in all diffs. first kiai should start at 01:09:754 and finish at 01:35:936 and second should start at 02:05:027 and finish at either 02:28:299
[rookie]shouldn't the diff's name be Rookie?
00:12:716 (1,1,1,1) - use distance snap >< jumps/antijumps can't be used in the easiest diff
00:27:390 (4) - add new combo to keep the combos patterns consistant
00:59:572 (1) - unecessary new combo
01:01:027 (1,2) - make them symmetrical? (just make it like this
http://puu.sh/cXCS and copy-paste it for (2)) oh, and use distance snap
01:25:754 (1) - place it like this
http://puu.sh/cXD7? looks better imo
also, the following timelines are unsnapped:
- 00:06:140
- 00:15:350
- 01:09:732
- 01:35:914
- 02:05:005
[Wonder]00:41:209 (2) - this slider's shape makes it kinda hard to read. use some other instead?
01:33:027 - this slowdown is unexpected D: i suggest you to either add some warning or make it less "intense"
02:15:209 (6) - you can't really make only a part of the slider slower ._. i don't see why slowing down on this slider, so i suggest making it all on x1,0
the following timelines are unsnapped:
- 00:03:595
- 01:14:459
- 01:14:823
- 01:15:187
- 01:33:005
- 01:35:915
- 01:46:096
- 02:15:187
- 02:15:732
- 02:31:187
[Miku]00:15:580 (1) - this spinner is unsnapped D: snap it and finish it at the red tick as you did on the other diffs
00:25:390 (8) - unexpected slider speed change ><
02:20:663 (4) - this slider is hidden under the previous ones (unrankable)
00:56:663 (5) - since you're adding slowdowns on the sliders here, i don't see why using x1,0 speed in this one D: the rhythm/vocals doesn't change much in relation to 00:55:572 (1) and 00:57:027 (1)
the following timelines are unsnapped:
- 00:03:595
- 00:06:140
- 00:06:504
- 00:07:959
- 00:08:322
- 00:08:685
- 00:09:413
- 00:15:350
- 00:21:005
- 00:32:278
- 00:55:550
- 00:56:278
- 00:57:005
- 00:57:733
- 01:00:642
- 01:03:551
- 01:07:187
- 01:09:369
- 01:14:459
- 01:14:823
- 01:15:187
- 01:18:823
- 01:33:005
- 01:35:915
- 01:46:096
- 02:15:187
- 02:15:732
- 02:28:278
being honest, i wasn't a big fan of the slider speed chances all the time D: they're unecessary and end up being really confusing to players, since there isn't really a way to predict them. and the difference from x0,50 to x1,0 is really big D: if you wanna keep the slider speed changes, i suggest you to use something like x0,75 instead so it isn't so confusing to players (i know it makes sense for you, but you need to understand that not all players have already heard the song before, so for them it's totally unpredictable XD
that's all~ good luck