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HellDawn
Easy

00:36:090- 1 grid left
00:39:423- 1 grid down
00:43:709- ^
00:51:804- finish ?
02:21:090- start spinner

Normal

00:22:756- clap?
00:47:995- 1 grid down
01:22:756- move to 236 - 140 better.
01:52:756- 2 grid up
02:00:375- 1 grid up
02:27:042- finish ?
02:28:947- move to 376 - 220

Nice diff :oops:

Hard

00:16:566- 3 grid right
00:57:518- <3
01:09:899- 1 grid up
01:10:693- combos bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit?
01:15:614- 1 grid up

Star :)
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod :)

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

00:36:090- 1 grid left Done
00:39:423- 1 grid down Done
00:43:709- ^ Done
00:51:804- finish ? Done
02:21:090- start spinner Disaggree

Normal

00:22:756- clap? Done
00:47:995- 1 grid down Done
01:22:756- move to 236 - 140 better. Done, and fixed spacing afterwards
01:52:756- 2 grid up Done
02:00:375- 1 grid up Done
02:27:042- finish ? Disaggree
02:28:947- move to 376 - 220 Done, and fixed spacing

Nice diff :oops:

Hard

00:16:566- 3 grid right Done
00:57:518- <3 :3
01:09:899- 1 grid up Done
01:10:693- combos bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit? Removed some claps
01:15:614- 1 grid up Done
Kryptogram
Hi there Here is my mod (I apologize for late mod school is killing me :c)

General:

- Clean

Easy

00:15:614 (1) - Add finish
00:30:852 (1) - Add whistle :)
00:40:376 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the end
00:47:995 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the reverse arrow
01:12:280 (2) - Add whistle to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :D
01:27:995 (x) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-hitsounds
01:27:995 (1) - If u do this ^ add whistle at the begin of the slider
01:37:519 (1) - Add finish at the begin
01:45:138 (1) - Add finish at the begin and the end
01:52:756 (4) - Add finish at the begin
01:53:709 (5) - ^
01:56:090 (3) - Miss the clap at the begin add it
02:00:376 (4) - Add finish at the begin
02:01:329 (5) - ^
02:26:566 (4) - Remove clap at the end
02:30:852 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the reverse arrow
02:55:615 (2) - Add finish
03:16:566 (3) - Add finish in the begin, the reverse arrow and the end
03:24:185 (4) - Add finish at the begin
03:25:137 (5) - ^
03:26:089 (1) - Add finish
03:31:804 (1) - Its me or the spinner ends here 03:33:352 ?

Normal

More like Normal+ or Hard

00:47:995 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow
01:03:233 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the end
01:11:804 (4) - Add whistle at the end to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :D
02:00:376 (4) - Add finish at the begin
02:01:328 (5) - ^
02:38:471 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow
02:53:709 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the end
03:16:566 (4) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow
03:18:471 (1) - Add finish
03:24:185 (6) - Add finish at the begin
03:25:137 (7) - ^

Hard

00:15:455 (1) - Add finish at the end
00:23:233 (1) - Add finish
00:27:042 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:47:995 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow
01:03:233 (4) - Add finish at the begin
01:04:185 (5) - ^
01:12:280 (5) - Add whistle to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :D
01:39:899 (1) - Add NC
01:45:137 (6) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow
02:38:471 (3) - ^

Love this song Don't know why this still in pending Well :c

Good Luck ! And Star !
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi there Here is my mod (I apologize for late mod school is killing me :c)

General:

- Clean

Easy

00:15:614 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
00:30:852 (1) - Add whistle :)Done
00:40:376 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the end Done
00:47:995 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the reverse arrow Done
01:12:280 (2) - Add whistle to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :DDone
01:27:995 (x) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-hitsounds Done
01:27:995 (1) - If u do this ^ add whistle at the begin of the slider Done
01:37:519 (1) - Add finish at the begin Done
01:45:138 (1) - Add finish at the begin and the end Done
01:52:756 (4) - Add finish at the begin Done
01:53:709 (5) - ^ Disaggree
01:56:090 (3) - Miss the clap at the begin add it Ouh, thanks
02:00:376 (4) - Add finish at the begin Done
02:01:329 (5) - ^ Done
02:26:566 (4) - Remove clap at the end Done
02:30:852 (4) - Add finish in the begin and the reverse arrow Done
02:55:615 (2) - Add finish Done
03:16:566 (3) - Add finish in the begin, the reverse arrow and the end Done
03:24:185 (4) - Add finish at the begin Disaggree
03:25:137 (5) - ^ ^
03:26:089 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
03:31:804 (1) - Its me or the spinner ends here 03:33:352 ? It's you, it ends 03:33:233

Normal

More like Normal+ or Hard

00:47:995 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow Done
01:03:233 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the end Done
01:11:804 (4) - Add whistle at the end to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :DDone
02:00:376 (4) - Add finish at the begin Done
02:01:328 (5) - ^ ^
02:38:471 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow Done
02:53:709 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the end Done
03:16:566 (4) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow Done
03:18:471 (1) - Add finish Done
03:24:185 (6) - Add finish at the begin DIsaggree
03:25:137 (7) - ^ ^

Hard

00:15:455 (1) - Add finish at the end Disaggree
00:23:233 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
00:27:042 (1) - Add finish at the begin Disaggree
00:47:995 (3) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow Done
01:03:233 (4) - Add finish at the begin Done
01:04:185 (5) - ^ ^
01:12:280 (5) - Add whistle to mix the hitsounds whit the word Sh*t! :DDone
01:39:899 (1) - Add NC Now Done
01:45:137 (6) - Add finish at the begin and the second reverse arrow Done
02:38:471 (3) - ^ Done

Love this song Don't know why this still in pending Well :c

Good Luck ! And Star ! Thanks!
Kurai
General :
  1. The offset needs +10ms


Easy :
  1. 01:37:519 (1) - Making a well-shaped slider shouldn't make the pattern less readable, I mean at the moment :
    1. Its beginning is under 01:36:091 (3)'s end. Which is less readable because of the hitburst and isn't really aesthetic (which isn't what you're are trying to do here, right ? :P).
    2. Its end hides 01:40:375 (3) which causes the same thing as above.

    I suggest you to rearrange your pattern like this :
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/273234[/img]
  2. 03:06:090 (1) - The reverse arrow of this slider is hidden by by the hitburst of the previous spinner. Reverses must be visible otherwise they would surprise the player who may combobreak. Thus you have to redo this slider and make its reverse visible !


Normal :
  1. 00:47:995 (3) - The first reverse arrow is hidden by 00:46:566 (5)'s hitburst. For the same reason as in easy, this needs to be visible
  2. 02:21:169 (1,1) - I don't really like how this pattern sounds. I prefer it like this :
  3. 03:03:709 - I know you are only following the vocals here, however this feels really awkward not to have anything for more than 2 seconds (which is a lot!). That breaks the flow of the map. :/
    Consider adding some notes please.


Hard :
  1. 01:30:862 (7) - This isn't a good idea to put it at the center of 01:29:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) because it is hidden by all the hitburst that surround it which hide it completely. Moreover the combo color of this pattern is orange which is the same as the 300-hitburst color in the default skin (which is used by most of the regular player). That make it even less readable. So please don't pu it at the center. >w<
  2. 01:31:814 (2) - Its reverse arrow is hidden by the previous circles' hitbursts. As I already said in easy it has to be visible.
  3. 01:37:528 (3) - She got a nice mustache here. :D
  4. 02:21:179 (1,1) - Same as in normal.
  5. 02:48:005 (1) - The reverse arrow is hidden here too. You know what you have to do :D
  6. 03:18:481 (1) - ^


This map is great ! You did a good job :3
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

Kurai wrote:

General :
  1. The offset needs +10ms
Done

Easy :
  1. 01:37:519 (1) - Making a well-shaped slider shouldn't make the pattern less readable, I mean at the moment :
    1. Its beginning is under 01:36:091 (3)'s end. Which is less readable because of the hitburst and isn't really aesthetic (which isn't what you're are trying to do here, right ? :P).
    2. Its end hides 01:40:375 (3) which causes the same thing as above.

    I suggest you to rearrange your pattern like this :
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/273234[/img]
    Changed it
  2. 03:06:090 (1) - The reverse arrow of this slider is hidden by by the hitburst of the previous spinner. Reverses must be visible otherwise they would surprise the player who may combobreak. Thus you have to redo this slider and make its reverse visible ! Flipped it horizontally and put it at the same place, so now the reverse arrow is out of the hitburst


Normal :
  1. 00:47:995 (3) - The first reverse arrow is hidden by 00:46:566 (5)'s hitburst. For the same reason as in easy, this needs to be visible Changed some patterns, now it's visible
  2. 02:21:169 (1,1) - I don't really like how this pattern sounds. I prefer it like this :
    Fixed
  3. 03:03:709 - I know you are only following the vocals here, however this feels really awkward not to have anything for more than 2 seconds (which is a lot!). That breaks the flow of the map. :/
    Consider adding some notes please. Placed a 1/1 slider with reverse arrow in front of it


Hard :
  1. 01:30:862 (7) - This isn't a good idea to put it at the center of 01:29:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) because it is hidden by all the hitburst that surround it which hide it completely. Moreover the combo color of this pattern is orange which is the same as the 300-hitburst color in the default skin (which is used by most of the regular player). That make it even less readable. So please don't pu it at the center. >w< Changed the pattern
  2. 01:31:814 (2) - Its reverse arrow is hidden by the previous circles' hitbursts. As I already said in easy it has to be visible. Fixed
  3. 01:37:528 (3) - She got a nice mustache here. :DLol xD
  4. 02:21:179 (1,1) - Same as in normal. Changed
  5. 02:48:005 (1) - The reverse arrow is hidden here too. You know what you have to do :DChanged it's position a bit downwards, now it's clearly visible
  6. 03:18:481 (1) - ^ I changed the pattern, but I'm not sure whether it's visible enough now =/


This map is great ! You did a good job :3
Kurai
Here's your bubble. :3
As promised in our queue, IceBeam will mod it. :D
GamerX4life
Glückwunsch zur Bubble :)
mancuso_JM_
BUBBLE MAN!!! BUBBLE!!!!!!
CONGRATZ!!! AND GOOD LUCK IN RANK!!! ;)
Raimon
bubbleeee! *o*
IceBeam
hi

[Easy]
02:21:179 (1) - why would you try to snap this spinner with her lyrics? just start it from the next downbeat (02:21:338)
03:31:814 (1) - you might want to silence slider end

also,that's not required,but better avoid to map outro part in your next maps,especially when the music is fading out
finishing it at 03:26:099 could be better,but nvm,that's just a friendly suggestion for the future

[Normal]
02:21:179 (1) - well again
02:28:005 - it felt uncomfortable to play because of this gap,add a note here please
03:07:052 (4,1) - uh,why would you snap these notes with 1/6? there's nothing to take with the music honestly,even rhytm sounds okay,but I think you should fix it. If you don't want to make a 1/1 rhytm,then use something like this:


[Hard]
00:24:671 (6) - not a big deal but I wish it was placed somewhere between 00:24:195 (5) and 00:25:147 (1)
01:14:512 (1,2) - that's pretty big jump :o mostly because I didn't expected it here..so it doesn't really fit well with the rest of the map
02:21:179 (1) - um,you got it
02:35:941 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing is a bit incorrect here,02:37:052 (9) should be a bit farther,fix it please
03:03:084 (4) - I'd change this to a circle and started a slider from 03:03:243
03:05:385 (1,2,3) - again 1/6 snapping :s how about to making some rhytm instead?

03:32:608 (2,3) - move them a little farther,otherwise looks like a 1/3 spacing between them and 03:31:814 (1)

well,that's it
a damn good map for a newbie,especially for 1/3 song

call me back after fixes
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

IceBeam wrote:

hi Hi *wave*

[Easy]
02:21:179 (1) - why would you try to snap this spinner with her lyrics? just start it from the next downbeat (02:21:338) Okay, fixed
03:31:814 (1) - you might want to silence slider end You mean spinner? Done

also,that's not required,but better avoid to map outro part in your next maps,especially when the music is fading out
finishing it at 03:26:099 could be better,but nvm,that's just a friendly suggestion for the future In my ears it would have sounded strange finishing at 03:26:099. But I'll keep it in mind in future.

[Normal]
02:21:179 (1) - well again Again fixed
02:28:005 - it felt uncomfortable to play because of this gap,add a note here please Done
03:07:052 (4,1) - uh,why would you snap these notes with 1/6? there's nothing to take with the music honestly,even rhytm sounds okay,but I think you should fix it. If you don't want to make a 1/1 rhytm,then use something like this:
Used your suggestion and fixed that part (I hope it looks okay :S)

[Hard]
00:24:671 (6) - not a big deal but I wish it was placed somewhere between 00:24:195 (5) and 00:25:147 (1) Changed it's position, but I'm not sure, because it's on the sliderpath now
01:14:512 (1,2) - that's pretty big jump :o mostly because I didn't expected it here..so it doesn't really fit well with the rest of the map Flipped (2) horizontally, so the jump is smaller, and fixed the distance of the following notes
02:21:179 (1) - um,you got it Um yeah
02:35:941 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing is a bit incorrect here,02:37:052 (9) should be a bit farther,fix it please Not been sure about what "a bit farther" means, but I changed it. If it's still incorrect, tell me
03:03:084 (4) - I'd change this to a circle and started a slider from 03:03:243 Changed
03:05:385 (1,2,3) - again 1/6 snapping :s how about to making some rhytm instead?
Changed as you suggested (hope this looks okay, too)
03:32:608 (2,3) - move them a little farther,otherwise looks like a 1/3 spacing between them and 03:31:814 (1) Same as above with "a bit farther", but I changed it

well,that's it
a damn good map for a newbie,especially for 1/3 song

call me back after fixes
IceBeam
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DAI CAZZOOOOOOOOOOOOO
mancuso_JM_
YAY YLI!!! YAY!!!
CONGRATZ ON YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP
TIME TO PLAY THIS MAP AS A RANKED!!
Nitojgrem
Gratz Yl^^
Mercurial
Congratulations :)
Low
Congratulations! :D
GamerX4life
Congratz :)
Kei
Congratulations~
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