Nanananaaa nanaaana nanananaaa nana ♪♫
General:AudioLeadIn: There's an inconsistency between your diffs, please fix it:
- Easy, Normal: 1000.
- Hard: 1015.
Timing sections: I'd use these ones, which are the best for this song imo. The volume you use for each one is up to you:
SPOILER- 00:00:376 - N (Red)
- 00:30:852 - S
- 00:32:756 - N, low volume. You can add more uninherited lines before the Kiai to raise the volume gradually
- 00:34:662 - N, Kiai #1
- 01:05:375 - N, end of Kiai #1 (this line is different from the one you have now)
- 01:27:995 - S
- 01:29:900 - N, low volume. You can add more uninherited lines before the Kiai to raise the volume gradually
- 01:31:805 - N, Kiai #2
- 02:02:280 - N, low-medium volume, end of Kiai #2
- 02:24:185 - N, medium volume
- 02:25:137 - N, Kiai #3
- 02:55:614 - N, End of Kiai #3
- 03:26:090 - N, lower volume
- 03:29:899 - S or N, low volume
Easy:Hearing the music, there's a clap in every 2nd and 4th while line of the TimeLine (e.g.: claps should be in 00:04:661, 00:05:614, 00:06:566, 00:07:518, and so on).
While testing the song, I've missed some of them, as 00:06:090 (4) in the repetition of the slider, 00:17:519 (4) in the repetition of the slider, 00:21:328 (2) at the end of the slider, etc. Please, check all the claps of this diff.
00:23:233 (1) - If you end this spinner in 00:26:090, you'll be able to add a note in 00:27:042 (1), to follow better the lyrics/rhythm.
00:30:375 (4,1) - I feel this part a bit empty... Can you add some notes there?
00:47:995 (4) - You've done a sweet slider, but I think it'll fit better this way:
01:03:233 (1) - It's better to end this spinner in 01:05:375.
01:52:281 (1) - To be honest, this spinner doesn't fit here, plus it's too short for an Easy... so I suggest mapping that part. Or you could've done something similar like the previous Kiai Time (spinner at 00:55:614), which works better.
02:06:328 (x) - How about beginning this Break Time here?02:21:328 (1) - I'd like this spinner would be from 02:21:090 to 02:23:471, so you could add a note in 02:24:661.
03:24:185 (3,4) - I wish those sliders were symmetrical.
Normal:I would've tried to avoid sliders like 00:04:185 (1) or 00:21:328 (5) in a Normal diff, due to the huge number of repetitions trying to follow the lyrics. That's prolly the main cause of the high star rating (4.14). But well, they might work fine here.
01:00:693 (1,2,3,4) - The 1st pair of notes are stacked, while the 2nd pair isn't. Can you make those patterns symilar?
01:22:122 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:19:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:04:661 (4) - That slider must end in 01:05:137 (without the repetition).
01:07:518 (x) - Any reason why this break time should end here?
02:02:281 (1) - This slider would fit better in the Hard, and the spinner you have in Hard is better in this diff.
02:21:328 (1) - As in Easy, this spinner should begin in 02:21:090.
02:43:233 (1) - Remove New Combo, these slider must be in groups of 4.
02:43:709 (2) - New Combo.
02:44:661 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:45:614 (3) - New Combo.
03:01:328 (1) - Too long imo. It should end in 03:03:233.
03:24:185 (6) - It can be confusing for new players... why don't you halve the repetitions and make it twice longer? (start and end of this slider must be the same).
03:27:677 (1) - It may end in 03:29:899.
Hard:The only issue I've found is the inconsistency while applying New Combos. Vocal songs tend to be easier to map in this point (every NC should be placed in a new verse/phrase/stanza). There can be exceptions of course (jumps, speed changes, etc), this doesn't have to be "perfect" :p
00:21:328 (5) - New Combo.
00:22:122 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:23:233 (3) - New combo.
00:39:741 (5) - ^
00:49:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Instead of placing 2 pairs of oposite sliders, I'd like to see them pointing "North-East-South-West" (now you have N-S-W-E).
00:57:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I personally liked this pattern :3
01:47:042 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - They were better in groups of 4 sliders.
02:21:328 (1) - Again this spinner. Do the same as previous diffs.
03:00:852 (1,2,3) - Nice pattern, but those notes are close to each other =(
03:05:375 (1,2) - ^
03:26:090 (5) - New Combo.
I wish you good luck with it :3