[Easyl]
Not bad at all!
[Normal]
A real minor thing: try to space objects evenly out. For exmaple, 00:09:899 (4,5,6), (6) is somehow sticking with (4). Although the spacing is absolutely correct, if I were you I would try to leave some space between (4) and (6). If you get what I mean, you may choose to fix all these type of occurrences in the diff.
01:54:661 (1) - finish at start?
02:21:169 (1) - remove finish?
02:27:995 (x) - add a note?
02:32:757 (1) - finish at start?
02:56:883 (1,2) - it's clear that you are following the vocal, but it plays out awkward. IMO stick with the beat.
02:58:788 (1,2) - ^
03:05:376 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Hard]
00:43:233 (x) - add a note?
00:44:185 (3) - i discourage this kind of crumpled slider because player can easily misjudge this for a shorter one.
00:58:788 (3,4,5,6) - (3,4) is x1.0 spacing, (4,5) is not. Fix?
01:00:375 (x) - add a note?
01:10:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a hard one 0.0
01:12:122 (9) - new combo
01:40:693 (5) - ^
02:21:169 (1) - remove finish?
02:56:883 (1,2) - same problem with [Normal]. Again i'd stick to the beat. Your call though.
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Very nicely done for a first-timer!
I should leave a star.
Good luck!
Not bad at all!
[Normal]
A real minor thing: try to space objects evenly out. For exmaple, 00:09:899 (4,5,6), (6) is somehow sticking with (4). Although the spacing is absolutely correct, if I were you I would try to leave some space between (4) and (6). If you get what I mean, you may choose to fix all these type of occurrences in the diff.
01:54:661 (1) - finish at start?
02:21:169 (1) - remove finish?
02:27:995 (x) - add a note?
02:32:757 (1) - finish at start?
02:56:883 (1,2) - it's clear that you are following the vocal, but it plays out awkward. IMO stick with the beat.
02:58:788 (1,2) - ^
03:05:376 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Hard]
00:43:233 (x) - add a note?
00:44:185 (3) - i discourage this kind of crumpled slider because player can easily misjudge this for a shorter one.
00:58:788 (3,4,5,6) - (3,4) is x1.0 spacing, (4,5) is not. Fix?
01:00:375 (x) - add a note?
01:10:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a hard one 0.0
01:12:122 (9) - new combo
01:40:693 (5) - ^
02:21:169 (1) - remove finish?
02:56:883 (1,2) - same problem with [Normal]. Again i'd stick to the beat. Your call though.
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Very nicely done for a first-timer!
I should leave a star.
Good luck!