Thanks for the mod =)
Kurai wrote:
General :Done
- The offset needs +10ms
Easy :Normal :
- 01:37:519 (1) - Making a well-shaped slider shouldn't make the pattern less readable, I mean at the moment :
- Its beginning is under 01:36:091 (3)'s end. Which is less readable because of the hitburst and isn't really aesthetic (which isn't what you're are trying to do here, right ? ).
- Its end hides 01:40:375 (3) which causes the same thing as above.
I suggest you to rearrange your pattern like this :SPOILERChanged it[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/273234[/img]- 03:06:090 (1) - The reverse arrow of this slider is hidden by by the hitburst of the previous spinner. Reverses must be visible otherwise they would surprise the player who may combobreak. Thus you have to redo this slider and make its reverse visible ! Flipped it horizontally and put it at the same place, so now the reverse arrow is out of the hitburst
Hard :
- 00:47:995 (3) - The first reverse arrow is hidden by 00:46:566 (5)'s hitburst. For the same reason as in easy, this needs to be visible Changed some patterns, now it's visible
- 02:21:169 (1,1) - I don't really like how this pattern sounds. I prefer it like this :
Fixed- 03:03:709 - I know you are only following the vocals here, however this feels really awkward not to have anything for more than 2 seconds (which is a lot!). That breaks the flow of the map. :/
Consider adding some notes please. Placed a 1/1 slider with reverse arrow in front of itThis map is great ! You did a good job :3
- 01:30:862 (7) - This isn't a good idea to put it at the center of 01:29:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) because it is hidden by all the hitburst that surround it which hide it completely. Moreover the combo color of this pattern is orange which is the same as the 300-hitburst color in the default skin (which is used by most of the regular player). That make it even less readable. So please don't pu it at the center. >w< Changed the pattern
- 01:31:814 (2) - Its reverse arrow is hidden by the previous circles' hitbursts. As I already said in easy it has to be visible. Fixed
- 01:37:528 (3) - She got a nice mustache here. Lol xD
- 02:21:179 (1,1) - Same as in normal. Changed
- 02:48:005 (1) - The reverse arrow is hidden here too. You know what you have to do Changed it's position a bit downwards, now it's clearly visible
- 03:18:481 (1) - ^ I changed the pattern, but I'm not sure whether it's visible enough now =/