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Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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BinJip
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BinJip
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 10월 15일 월요일 at 오후 12:45:08

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Source: Renai 0 Kilometer
Tags: merchat7 ASa Project KDS galgame opening
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13472kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 310 notes)
  3. Insane (4.8 stars, 388 notes)
  4. merchat7's Normal (4.34 stars, 152 notes)
  5. Taiko DS (4.83 stars, 669 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC Game 「恋愛０キロメートル」
Easy- Done
merchat7's Normal - Done ( By merchat7 )
Insane - Done
Taiko DS - Done ( By KDS )
Hard - Done
Last edited by BinJip , edited 73 times in total.
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
hello
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
oh this is too fast before game release ( It's release yesterday haha )

NokiaChan Petanko! 8-)
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
Beatmap changed

Chata - Kozakai San Chi Wa Bobu No Ie -> Sakakibara Yui - Ren'ai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Modded in IRC
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
There are many mistakes in this Beatmap
You need to remap Easy and Normal'srhythm
let rhythm like Insane diff
and you can Post my queue again when you remap
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

bossandy wrote:

There are many mistakes in this Beatmap
You need to remap Easy and Normal'srhythm
let rhythm like Insane diff
and you can Post my queue again when you remap

mistakes : hit sound?
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
Complete hitsounds easy and hard diff and forum pm or ingame pm

when you complete

but hitsound to quite in insane diff suggest to increase it. plz
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:04:816(1) - make this the same as the 1st slider if u ignore this do the opposite.
00:55:640(1) - this spinner is too sudden. beginners wont be able to react in time.
01:24:051(1) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point and 1 grid yp for the end point
01:32:169(1) - move 2 ticks up

Hard:
01:25:640(5) - NC

Insane:
00:06:757(5) - NC
00:21:757(5) - ^
01:03:581(5) - ^
01:36:757(1,2) - can u put a warning sign that this is gonna speed up?
01:48:404(5) - NC

This is the best i can do. i wish i can help with timing but i cant point it out. anyways GL :D
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
Hi
This is modder form thai mapper modding team.
regenz 'll mod your map

General

add ASa-Project to tags because it's company that make this game.

You should use software to edit your custom hit sound more lounder
and lounder all timing point at least 5-10 percent.

and i think normal hitsound are more fit for this map but if you want soft so... let it soft. haha
and where 's normal diff?


Easy

00:01:992 (1) - fin (fininsh hitsoud )
00:03:757 (3) - remove whistle
00:03:713 (3) - snap 1/8 in easy ?
00:03:757 (3,1) - intention wrong ds ?
00:36:228 (2,3) - remove fin
00:35:522 (1) - fin tail (fin at end of slider )
00:37:993 (2) - remove fin tail add at 00:38:698 (3) - head instead
01:41:037 (1) - intention 1/8 snap ?

Hard

vocal base map ?
highly suggest AR 7 AR 6 is too hard for this cluster diff
more than three unique slider speed adjust use in this diff 0.5 1.0 1.3 1.5 it's unrankable.
00:54:316 (5) - this is hidden under hit burst while playing
01:40:992 (1) - whistle head
01:42:228 (6) - whistle
01:49:463 (8) - fin

Insane

8-) you have more than 3 unique slider speed adjust 3 is maximum you have 0.5 1.0 1.2 1.5 2.0
00:37:816 (3) - remove clap
00:54:316 (5,7) - remove whistle


Please vote regenz If this mod helpful.

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks! Loli Nokiachan Banzai
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue~ :)


SPOILER
my mod is all suggestion :)


[overall]
hmm...I think that this offset doesn't suit.
try 215?

* This mod is before change offset.
If it accept for you to change offset, please change after fixed this mod.(ah,and all resnap note)


[General]
･BG is too large. 800x600 or 1024x768 is good.
･unchecked "Letterbox during breaks"


[Insane]
00:00:316 (1) - start change to 00:00:228
00:11:522 (4,5,6) - spacing?
00:25:110 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:698 (1) - add new combo
00:38:875 (8) - this note stack on 00:38:345 (7)
00:39:228~00:52:551 - hmm..? These are very oddly sound. were these put by 1/8? please put a note on white line or red line.
00:56:522 (8) - add new combo
00:58:463 (3) - ^
00:58:992 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:757 (1) - ^
01:24:978 (1) - mistake? please put on white line.
01:43:463 (7) - add new combo
01:48:404 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:640 (1) - end change to 01:51:581
01:51:669 (1,2,3,4,5) - choose all and (1) with 01:51:757 (put on white line).


[Hard]
AR,OD -1
00:07:287 (5,1) - It is from here that the sound of the song changed. makes you place 00:07:816(1) here.
In connection with it, let you shorten the kick slider of (5) to 00:07:463.
00:39:581~00:52:816 - It is the same of "insane", and has a very oddly sound.

put a note on white line or red line.
01:05:345 (6) - add new combo
01:06:228 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:757 (2) - add new combo
01:07:640 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:640 (1,1,2,3) - It is the same of "insane".


[Easy]
OD +1
you have to make diff's title continue. would you change the title of this diff into a "Normal"?
00:20:345 (2,3) - (2) and (3) are moved to 00:20:522.
00:39:404~00:52:816 - It is the same of "insane" and "Hard".
01:01:507 (1,2,3,4) - put a note on white line or red line.
01:20:169 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:463 (1) - put end to 01:52:287
cute song <3
fight~~
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
I think

1st offset:1988
2nd offset:52988

to adjust the metronome and +10 from current one.
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
brikel
메모장 열어서 타이밍 포인트 부분에
SPOILER
1988,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
35870,-200,4,2,1,55,0,0
36399,-200,4,1,1,55,0,0
37105,-200,4,2,1,55,0,0
38737,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
41604,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
44471,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
46987,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
52984,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
56517,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,55,0,0
57223,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
58635,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,1
58675,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,1
96752,-50,4,2,1,55,0,1
97458,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,1
109635,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
넣으면 됨
00:52:544 (7,8) - 이 두개는 1/8에 놓이니까 주의 요망
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Neko mod Go ~

[Overall]
- Your Kiai Time is pretty long. I would suggest you to end it a bit earlier.
- I would suggest you to add an Normal diff since the difficulty jump from Easy to Hard is very high.

[Easy]
00:16:105 (1) - This slider looks pretty f*cked up. Looks better if you make the last slider-point parallel to the second-last one. Like this.
00:19:282 (1) - Move to 00:19:458. sounds a lot better.
00:28:811 (4) - Make this a Slider from 00:28:811 to 00:29:164 and a circle at 00:29:517. Like this.
00:32:870 (1) - End at 00:33:752
00:34:282 (2) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:34:105 to 00:34:282
00:34:811 (3) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:34:635 to 00:34:811
- The slow part looks pretty bad and it can also get confusing with such less spacing -
- Maybe use x0.75 BPM instead of x0.5 -
00:52:147 (1) - Move this to the red tick!
00:52:984 (2) - Replace with spinner that ends at 00:54:042
00:54:042 (1) - If ^ remove this
00:54:395 (2,3) - Replace these with a short slider from 00:54:572 to 00:54:748
00:55:101 (4) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:55:101 to 00:55:278
00:57:219 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a repeating slider since blue ticks are very confusing for beginners.
01:04:322 (1) - Boring! I think you can find something more fun and better fitting for this part.
01:14:733 - Add a Slider from 01:14:733 to 01:14:910
01:15:439 (1) - Replace this with a slider from 01:15:263 to 01:15:439
01:16:145 (3) - Replace with a 1 time repeating slider from 01:15:792 to 01:16:498. Like this.
01:33:969 (2) - end at 01:34:851
01:35:204 - if ^ add slider from 01:35:204 to 01:35:380
01:35:910 (1) - Replace with a slider from 01:35:733 to 01:35:910

[Hard]
HP Drain - 1
00:52:809 (3,4) - This 2 notes are pretty weird, i would suggest you to make a slider there.

[Insane]
I like this a lot!

Looks like the only big problem in this map is the Easy.
Good luck with this!
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
I can make Normal if you want?
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

merchat7 wrote:

I can make Normal if you want?

OK, PLZ~
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Mod Request :P

General:
Sample Volume: 65%
Audio Lead-In: 0 because you don't start to map in the intro
Maybe the kiai has to end in 01:40:851 because is too long

Easy:
This Easy is quite difficult to be an Easy.
00:06:576 (x): For consistency add a note here.
Spacing
00:34:547 (2,3): Too Far
00:38:539 (2,3): too close
You have to fix this
01:14:733 (5): New Combo
01:15:263 (1): Remove New Combo

Hard:
00:20:870 (6,7,8): A slider sound better than notes
00:26:164 (x): Add a Note
00:34:811 (8): replace the note to slider. Starts: In (8) Ends: 00:35:164

Insane:
Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
00:25:105 (2): For consistency with Hard, you have to add a New Combo here or maybe Remove New Combo in Hard

Well, That's all. Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
This is rankable. But you may only use it if it fits to the song.
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
BPM / Offset
170.000 / -825
168.500 / 35880
170.000 / 58669

I couldn't mod due to timing was incorrect.
Call me again after fix the timing.


Lunatic Neko wrote:

Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
This is rankable. But you may only use it if it fits to the song.
Yeah, as Lunatic Neko told, it's rankable if it makes sense.
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
All right, timing seems good now, full mod in this time. >w<


[General]
01:49:492 - Add offset : BPM 166.000


[Insane]
00:01:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1칸 오른쪽
00:30:057 (5) - 피니시 제거
00:46:206 (4,5) - 1칸 왼쪽
00:52:971 (9) - 1칸 아래?
00:53:951 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 스페이싱 이상합니다. 일정하게 되도록 고쳐보세요.
예시
00:59:727 (5) - 겹치는거 피하도록 2칸 내려보세요
01:05:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 정오각형 모양에 가깝게 위치 조정해주세요. 스페이싱 때문에 정오각형은 잘 안되는군요. =.=
SPOILER
256,64,65374,5,8
256,64,65551,2,0,B|256:192,1,108.000002574921,0|8
160,128,65904,1,0
192,232,66080,1,8
320,232,66257,1,4
352,128,66433,1,8
01:11:904 (1) - 구부림 없이 일직선으로 올려서 대칭하는게 나아보입니다.
01:23:021 (7,8) - 1칸 오른쪽
01:33:786 (1) - 01:33:963 부터 시작해야 보컬에 맞습니다


[Hard]
00:00:322 (1) - 00:00:233 부터 시작
00:11:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - 얘네들 위치가 조금 어색한데 아래처럼 바꿔보세요
SPOILER
00:12:233 (2) - x:128 y:64
00:12:586 (3) - x:0 y:192
00:12:939 (4) - x:128 y:320
00:51:725 (5) - Ctrl+R
01:05:727 (2,3) - 스택 부정확합니다.
01:10:669 (3) - 끝 점을 왼쪽으로 한 칸 옮기고
01:11:021 (4) - 이건 끝 점을 오른쪽으로 한 칸 옮기면 끝이 정확하게 겹쳐집니다.
01:47:904 (4) - 뉴콤보


[Easy]
00:36:592 (3) - 1번 슬라이더 끝이랑 안겹치게 옮겨주세요
01:17:551 (2) - 길이를 01:18:433 까지 늘이세요
01:23:021 (3,4) - 이지 박자를 거의 보컬에 맞추셨던데요, 각각 01:23:198, 01:23:551 로 옮기는게 나을것 같네요
01:29:551 (3) - 리듬이 어색합니다. 리버스 없애고 01:29:727 부터 시작. http://puu.sh/7VCM
01:41:021 (1) - 끝 스냅 에러
01:46:669 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거하는게 대칭면에서 더 나아보이네요.


화이팅이요~ ;)
저번에 오스플이랑 비슷하다고 한 이야기는
대칭패턴 느낌이 비슷하다는거지 단순히 대칭 썼기때문에는 아닙니다. ㅎ
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