1. Another (5,43 stars, 488 notes)
2. Determination (5,8 stars, 584 notes)
3. Easy (1,45 stars, 110 notes)
4. Expert (4,77 stars, 470 notes)
5. Hard (3,1 stars, 312 notes)
6. Insane (4,14 stars, 407 notes)
7. Normal (2,08 stars, 179 notes)

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1. 00:03:570 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing
2. 00:08:939 (1,2) - is stronger than 00:08:623 (5,1) - yet has lower spacing
3. 00:09:570 (3) - with the sliderslide it's messy, either don't use a slider or silence sliderslide hitsound for this part
4. 00:13:991 (1,2,3,4) - spacing goes up, and goes down for no reason (same sounds / intensity here)
5. 00:18:728 (4,1,2,3) - ^
   
6. that's something that repeats a lot, so :
7. 00:21:570 (1,2) - here you leave the red tick blank ; you skip the sound you're actually mapping on 00:22:044 (3) - .
8. And it's really bad consistency since sometimes you map it, sometimes you don't
   
9. 00:25:044 (1,1) - this kind of sv change is kinda useless, and doesn't make any sense
10. 00:26:623 (1,2) - etc
11. 00:31:675 (1,2) - asdasd
12. 00:35:149 (1,1) -
    
13. 00:41:149 (3,4,5,6) - 380bpm singletap on a calm part lol
    it sounds good, so keep it with sliders like in 00:43:675 (3,4,3,4) -
    00:46:202 (3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6) - Same goes here, it's beautiful and all, but it's too fast for a calm part.
    (same until 00:58:202 (1) - )
    
14. 01:00:097 (2,3) - here you could have done a cool jump, but it's boring sliders
15. 01:43:675 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Make the hitsounds lower by 2% every 1/2 (use a keybind to place a green line if you don't already) and add it to all the diffs

1. 00:00:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Rework spacing, it's messy
2. 00:21:570 (1,2,3) - again missing some notes. (same for the rest of the map)
3. 00:23:149 (2,3,4,5) - do something more readable, average insane player will panic (i did when sightreading) (same for the rest of the map)
4. 00:25:044 (1,1) - this kind of sv change is kinda useless, and doesn't make any sense (again xd) (same for the rest of the map)
5. 00:56:307 (3,4,5,6,1) - again too much singletapping
6. 01:04:833 (1,2,1,2) - add a slider for stamina
7. 01:08:939 (1,2) - add a slider for stamina
8. 01:14:938 (1,2,1,2) - add a slider for stamina

Firis Mistlud wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

1. Same problem as Normal, the SV changes, but this time they don't effect much on the map itself yee, i think it's kinda ok here

[Normal]

1. The major problem on this diff are those SV changes, for normal, it's quite confusing yet make the DS quite consistent, but i am not sure is it rankable by now, and making some notes unreadable like 00:39:570 (4,1) - well here, i kind of fixed it by increasing the SV on that part by 0.25
2. 01:00:097 (5) - Please don't use too much repeats on 1 slider for lower diffs, players don't have enough time to read not sure yet about this, need more opinions
3. Other than that, the rhythm is nice :D

[Hard]

1. nothing that i can mention

[Insane]

1. 00:19:675 (3) - NC for SV change mhh ok
2. 01:09:570 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This looks very cramped which is quite unreadable on insane, i suggest spacing it out actually like that pattern a lot
3. 01:19:675 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^

[Determination]

1. 00:25:044 (1) - I would do something on the shape, since the SV slow down is quite large and sudden, so changing it a little bit could help on readability more it doesn't effect the gameplay in the slightest, that's why it's fitting, i think i'll leave it like this for now
2. 00:35:149 (1) - ^
3. 00:49:991 (3,4) - Should be 4 stacked circles just like 00:48:728 (3,4,5,6) - ,since in this part the pattern was played twice so you not doing the same here might be too sudden ugh, tried to bring variation in it, like circle - circle, slider - slider, circle - slider
   Although i prefer your old symmetric style, this map does have some image on it

Nice mapset

Good luck~

FruityEnLoops wrote:

pretty good mapset overall, i'll only be looking at insane / top

Determination

1. 01:43:675 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Make the hitsounds lower by 2% every 1/2 (use a keybind to place a green line if you don't already) oh hey, i will do that if i'm not too lazy since it's quite a bit of work lol

hope it helped, gl! also nice last goodbye map =D

1. Would be really nice if you could make the combo colors Red → Green → Red → Green instead of Green → Green → Red → Red. It might visually looks like the combo is really long and that's something that could be improved. Just exchange the colors.
2. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but you could add some decreasing volume there 01:43:691 - as the song is fading out. The hitsounds are way too loud there.

1. 00:58:218 (1) - I feel like this spinner is a bit too much for beginners, it's rather short and some new players might not react well to it as it's way too short. Would be better if you could map this short section.
2. 01:42:428 (3) - Not really nice to make this slider offbeat as you were always mapping the downbeats with circles or with a slider head. My suggestion would be to make it clickable. 01:44:955 (2) - It's fine here, though, as there's barely any sound.

1. I don't really like the idea of having a 1,25x SV in Kiai, specially in a Normal difficulty. It's way too fast. It's cool to do it in Hard but it just feels and plays too much for a Normal, make it 1,00x or if you REALLY want to increase it, make it 1,10x.
2. 00:34:534 (4,5) - Make these a circle → slide transition instead of the opposite, would feel much better if you could make 00:34:849 - clickable. You can ctrl + G to see the rhythm.

1. 00:49:376 (5) - NC here!
2. 01:00:113 (2,3) - Would be really cool if you could make these 4 circles, just like you did here 00:58:534 (2,3,4) - . Making these clickable really play nicely. Try something like this.

1. 01:00:113 (2,3) - Same thing I suggested in Hard, if you agreed to do there would be nice to do here as well.
2. 01:05:955 (2,3,4) - I really really liked this triplet you made here and would be really nice if you could do the same at 01:07:060 (1) - and 01:08:323 (1) - for consistency. Would also play really nicely.
3. 01:26:955 (2,1,2,3) - The way you arranged these isn't the best option to the flow there as it would be more convenient to click the 2 circles after clicking the first slider, but you organized it in a way that you have to go back the whole way and click the slider again. Moving 01:27:586 (2,3) - to x:312 y:261 would fix this.

1. 01:10:849 (1) - Spacing could be longer here as you were mapping a lot of jumps there + this is a strong beat. Doesn't make much sense to decrease the DS there. ctrl + G works pretty nice there~

1. 00:21:823 - Don't really like the idea of having a break there, specially when there's a sound and that you've mapped it later. Would be definitely better if you could add something there. Same would apply here 00:31:691 (1) - .
2. 01:15:902 (1) - Would be nicer if you could keep your back and forth jumps here like you were doing before. Stacking this to x:260 y:48 would solve this.
3. 01:28:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You're starting the star with high spacing then you lower it but I can hear that the song is actually getting stronger, not weaker. You can either do the opposite or keep the DS consistent. Same here 01:38:639 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - if you agreed with me.

1. 00:49:377 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I get that you're making this section increase its spacing and that's really cool, but why decrese it here while you could keep it as big as the previous one?
2. 01:29:323 (2,1) - Flow here would be much better if you ctrl + G these as it would keep the same jump structure you were following.
3. 01:45:903 (5,6,7,8,9) - Decrease the spacing a bit more as the song is really low there.

Kuron-kun wrote:

hi, just passing by to add this cute star icon to your map

[General]

1. Would be really nice if you could make the combo colors Red → Green → Red → Green instead of Green → Green → Red → Red. It might visually looks like the combo is really long and that's something that could be improved. Just exchange the colors. LOL this confused the shit out of me at first xD but i got what you mean eventually and switched the colors now
2. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but you could add some decreasing volume there 01:43:691 - as the song is fading out. The hitsounds are way too loud there. ofc, changed it in all difficulties

[Easy]

1. 00:58:218 (1) - I feel like this spinner is a bit too much for beginners, it's rather short and some new players might not react well to it as it's way too short. Would be better if you could map this short section. i actually mapped it out before, but added the spinner afterwards, because i felt like the SV change was a bit uncomfortable withou the spinner. i don't think it's that suprising for newer players though, i think they can react to it!
2. 01:42:428 (3) - Not really nice to make this slider offbeat as you were always mapping the downbeats with circles or with a slider head. My suggestion would be to make it clickable. 01:44:955 (2) - It's fine here, though, as there's barely any sound. alrighty, fixed :3

[Normal]

1. I don't really like the idea of having a 1,25x SV in Kiai, specially in a Normal difficulty. It's way too fast. It's cool to do it in Hard but it just feels and plays too much for a Normal, make it 1,00x or if you REALLY want to increase it, make it 1,10x. aaa, it does make sense spreadwise though, i increased SV by 0.2 after every difficulty and kept sv changes for different parts rather same, it's not really over the top
2. 00:34:534 (4,5) - Make these a circle → slide transition instead of the opposite, would feel much better if you could make 00:34:849 - clickable. You can ctrl + G to see the rhythm.oke, fixed c:

[Hard]

1. 00:49:376 (5) - NC here! good catch, thank you!
2. 01:00:113 (2,3) - Would be really cool if you could make these 4 circles, just like you did here 00:58:534 (2,3,4) - . Making these clickable really play nicely. Try something like this aaa sry, but i haven't used 4 circles in any difficulty, because i want to keep that part rather calm.

[Insane]

1. 01:00:113 (2,3) - Same thing I suggested in Hard, if you agreed to do there would be nice to do here as well. ^
2. 01:05:955 (2,3,4) - I really really liked this triplet you made here and would be really nice if you could do the same at 01:07:060 (1) - and 01:08:323 (1) - for consistency. Would also play really nicely. mhh, i think i wont add them, because imo that would make the rhythm too dense for a 4* diff which is not really what i want here
3. 01:26:955 (2,1,2,3) - The way you arranged these isn't the best option to the flow there as it would be more convenient to click the 2 circles after clicking the first slider, but you organized it in a way that you have to go back the whole way and click the slider again. Moving 01:27:586 (2,3) - to x:312 y:261 would fix this. yeah, you're right, fixed :3

[Expert]

1. 01:10:849 (1) - Spacing could be longer here as you were mapping a lot of jumps there + this is a strong beat. Doesn't make much sense to decrease the DS there. ctrl + G works pretty nice there~ ctrl+g wont really work for me with the antijump slider then i used antiemphasis here which makes this pattern as whole pretty good imo ;_; i'll leave it like this

[Another]

1. 00:21:823 - Don't really like the idea of having a break there, specially when there's a sound and that you've mapped it later. Would be definitely better if you could add something there. Same would apply here 00:31:691 (1) - . but it adds diversity rhythmwise and not makes everything monotone 1 - 2 - 1 - 2 if you know what i mean i know that i could've mapped this sound, but adding new rhyhtm elements keeps the map fresh :3
2. 01:15:902 (1) - Would be nicer if you could keep your back and forth jumps here like you were doing before. Stacking this to x:260 y:48 would solve this. oh, i want to make the patterns seperate, that's why im not continuing with the back and forth
3. 01:28:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You're starting the star with high spacing then you lower it but I can hear that the song is actually getting stronger, not weaker. You can either do the opposite or keep the DS consistent. Same here 01:38:639 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - if you agreed with me. oh yeah sure, changed

[Determination]

1. 00:49:377 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I get that you're making this section increase its spacing and that's really cool, but why decrese it here while you could keep it as big as the previous one? it makes sense to get to the lowest spacing again in a slow way, it goes from big spacing 00:48:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - to middle spacing 00:49:377 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - to small spacing again, so it feels more comfortable imo
2. 01:29:323 (2,1) - Flow here would be much better if you ctrl + G these as it would keep the same jump structure you were following. i very much like how these (kind of) squares play as i wanted to emphasise this special sound
3. 01:45:903 (5,6,7,8,9) - Decrease the spacing a bit more as the song is really low there. yeah, changed c:

[]

call me back after Namki's mod!i will \:D/

1. Insane, Expert and Another have a bit strange NCing in kiai section, like, I understand why did u use NC every upbeat in the top diff (bc of big amount of 1/4) but lower diffs do not have high intensity patterns, so isn't it better to make NC every new measure, instead?
2. You have 00:10:060 - / 00:20:165 - etc. - silenced in the top diff but they're not in Insane, Hard, Expert and Another. Consider silencing.
3. Hitsounding seems a bit weird to me. Like, there's only 00:41:797 (6) - soft whistle on it but here 00:41:166 (3) - normals sampleset soft whistle but 00:41:797 (6) - is more prominent. Literally every new measure tick except NCed ones has only soft whistle on it. I'd highly recommend you to place just a normal sampleset or a finish.

1. 00:09:586 (4,1) - you may want to move that circle like 2px futrher to avoid that tiny overlap. It just looks neater.

1. 01:26:639 (1,2) - newbies really can hit sliderend instead of a head. Here as well 01:30:428 (4,1) - , and 01:36:744 (1,2) - . Even if they go consistently they're not that obvious to the new players tbh. You can just lift to make them visually seem like 01:03:902 (1,2) - .

Namki wrote:

o/

[General]

1. Insane, Expert and Another have a bit strange NCing in kiai section, like, I understand why did u use NC every upbeat in the top diff (bc of big amount of 1/4) but lower diffs do not have high intensity patterns, so isn't it better to make NC every new measure, instead? uhh i kinda guess what you mean, but i think it works this way. i did reNC the first slow part of Hard though as the combo were only 2 notes long most of the time there and it looked weird with the SV change NC
2. You have 00:10:060 - / 00:20:165 - etc. - silenced in the top diff but they're not in Insane, Hard, Expert and Another. Consider silencing. oh yeah, fixed it everywhere :3
3. Hitsounding seems a bit weird to me. Like, there's only 00:41:797 (6) - soft whistle on it but here 00:41:166 (3) - normals sampleset soft whistle but 00:41:797 (6) - is more prominent. Literally every new measure tick except NCed ones has only soft whistle on it. I'd highly recommend you to place just a normal sampleset or a finish. added drum whistle

[Another]

1. 00:09:586 (4,1) - you may want to move that circle like 2px futrher to avoid that tiny overlap. It just looks neater.yeh fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:26:639 (1,2) - newbies really can hit sliderend instead of a head. Here as well 01:30:428 (4,1) - , and 01:36:744 (1,2) - . Even if they go consistently they're not that obvious to the new players tbh. You can just lift to make them visually seem like 01:03:902 (1,2) - .fixed, fixed and fixed

aaaaa, what a neat map, can't event find anything.
i think it doesn't really matter whom you call back first