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Mentholzzz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 มีนาคม 2561 at 20:37:17

Artist: OISHII
Title: ONIGIRI FREEWAY
Source: osu!
Tags: Chiptune 8 bit Creamcore Polytetral Featured Artist
BPM: 210
Filesize: 20197kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ikura Onigiri "SC" - 4Key (4.5 stars, 2238 notes)
  2. Plain Onigiri "NM" - 4Key (1.99 stars, 837 notes)
  3. Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD" - 4Key (2.81 stars, 1353 notes)
  4. Salmon Onigiri "SHD" - 4Key (5.14 stars, 2768 notes)
  5. Umeboshi Onigiri "MX" - 4Key (3.6 stars, 1768 notes)
  6. Unagi Onigiri "UHD" - 4Key (5.2 stars, 2265 notes)
Download: OISHII - ONIGIRI FREEWAY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLAY THIS WITH HITSOUNDS PLEASE

KEYSOUND SAMPLE BY 1164530434

POLY'S KONBU ONIGIRI "HD" BY Polytetral




Plain Onigiri "NM": Some juicy 1/2 stream and cute pattern...

Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD": Simple rolls and streams, all in one.

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX": Feel sick? Sour streams are here to make you feel better.

Ikura Onigiri "SC": Not challenging enough? Short LN streams are here to kill the ill-prepared.

Salmon Onigiri "SHD": Generic handstream shitfile with some more weird-but-tasty stuff inside!

Unagi Onigiri "UHD": Counterpart of Salmon Onigiri. Looooooong eel is served and superior LN skill is required.

Density Chart
Plain Onigiri "NM"
Average NPS: 6.35
Max NPS: 11
LN-Percent: 27.75%

Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD"
Average NPS: 9.59
Max NPS: 16
LN-Percent: 37.62%

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"
Average NPS: 12.58
Max NPS: 19
LN-Percent: 27.43%

Ikura Onigiri "SC"
Average NPS: 15.8
Max NPS: 23
LN-Percent: 39.47%

Salmon Onigiri "SHD"
Average NPS: 19.32
Max NPS: 28
LN-Percent: 26.05%

Unagi Onigiri "UHD"
Average NPS: 15.45
Max NPS: 27
LN-Percent: 70.29%

Modder
newbandpro
_Stan
puxtu
Damaree
tailsdk
riunosk
Acnos
B A D
zawz
SyShawn
Syadow-
AlisceaSparku
deadbill
Tofu1222
Eldergleam
Garalulu
Blaze
OscarRickyH02
ExNeko
Lenfried-
chouyaa
Mage
eyes
genkicho
TheNewBungping
Antalf
Noxus
CoffeeLatte-
Unpredictable
FAMoss
Arzenvald
Murumoo


good practice map
newbandpro
From some random modding queue

NM
00:00:084 (84|0) - 00:01:226 (1226|1) - 00:02:369 (2369|2) and so on - I think a double would be better at these parts
00:05:798 - You missed a note here,you could either put a double note or a LN if you rejected the previous suggestion
00:06:941 - You could put a note at 3 here since there's a different sound at that part as well
00:13:369 (13369|0) - 00:22:512 (22512|0) - The drum beats go faster at this part so a LN could be better
00:20:369 - 00:24:941 - There's a drum beat at that part,you could add a note
00:49:655 (49655|3) - The note here is longer,you should make this a LN just like in HD
00:58:798 (58798|3) - End this LN at 00:59:084
01:25:512 (85512|0) - End this LN at 01:25:655
01:29:226 (89226|0) - Extend this one to 01:29:512 (Not going to mention these anymore,if you want to take a look at the LN's,just preview the HD diff. Most of them should be correct)
01:31:369 (91369|2) - If you are following the drums between 01:31:084 - 01:31:369 ,that note is a ghost note
(I forgot to add that I usually mod a single diff to the rules,sorry about that :p)
Good luck
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

newbandpro wrote:

From some random modding queue

NM
00:00:084 (84|0) - 00:01:226 (1226|1) - 00:02:369 (2369|2) and so on - I think a double would be better at these parts I think only single LN here is enough
00:05:798 - You missed a note here,you could either put a double note or a LN if you rejected the previous suggestion ^
00:06:941 - You could put a note at 3 here since there's a different sound at that part as well ^
00:13:369 (13369|0) - 00:22:512 (22512|0) - The drum beats go faster at this part so a LN could be better ok
00:20:369 - 00:24:941 - There's a drum beat at that part,you could add a note I map all of that part using only single note.
00:49:655 (49655|3) - The note here is longer,you should make this a LN just like in HD ok
00:58:798 (58798|3) - End this LN at 00:59:084 ok
01:25:512 (85512|0) - End this LN at 01:25:655 ok
01:29:226 (89226|0) - Extend this one to 01:29:512 (Not going to mention these anymore,if you want to take a look at the LN's,just preview the HD diff. Most of them should be correct) ok
01:31:369 (91369|2) - If you are following the drums between 01:31:084 - 01:31:369 ,that note is a ghost noteI follow the melody there
(I forgot to add that I usually mod a single diff to the rules,sorry about that :p)
Good luck
_Stan
Hello menthol~ From my queue

|1|2|3|4| Here we go

HD
  1. 00:29:655 - Maybe you miss a LN here ( check your other hard diffs )
  2. 00:58:798 (58798|2) - This LN should be stop 00:59:226 - , you can play as 0.25x to check it
  3. 01:26:155 (86155|0) - Suggest you delete it, 1) this part ( 01:24:655 - to 01:26:512 - focus on FX sound that LN means mainly, this note will be odd), 2) you did not make this like that before, inconsistent
  4. 01:30:084 - This LN should stop at 01:30:226 -
  5. 01:30:726 (90726|3) - same
  6. 02:48:512 - If this LN stop at 02:48:798 - , when LN stop and hit this 02:48:798 (168798|3) - , then hit another 02:48:941 (168941|0) - you will feel the tone shift or something like that, it's cool

MX
  1. 00:12:441 - It's no reason to ignore it
  2. 00:21:584 - ^
  3. 00:27:226 - add a note, here it's beat
  4. 00:30:369 - ^

other diff it's fine or I can not pass it :o sorry short mod, but it's really great, shoot a star
Polytetral

_Stan wrote:

HD
  1. 00:29:655 - Maybe you miss a LN here ( check your other hard diffs ) Oops, forgot to put that there :? fixed and thanks for reminder
  2. 00:58:798 (58798|2) - This LN should be stop 00:59:226 - , you can play as 0.25x to check it checked, fixed :D
  3. 01:26:155 (86155|0) - Suggest you delete it, 1) this part ( 01:24:655 - to 01:26:512 - focus on FX sound that LN means mainly, this note will be odd), 2) you did not make this like that before, inconsistent thought it was weird too... fixed
  4. 01:30:084 - This LN should stop at 01:30:226 - also applied
  5. 01:30:726 (90726|3) - same applied as above
  6. 02:48:512 - If this LN stop at 02:48:798 - , when LN stop and hit this 02:48:798 (168798|3) - , then hit another 02:48:941 (168941|0) - you will feel the tone shift or something like that, it's cool tried out, it does give a more meticulous feel to those notes (?), also fixed!

other diff it's fine or I can not pass it :o sorry short mod, but it's really great, shoot a star
/o/
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

_Stan wrote:

Hello menthol~ From my queue

|1|2|3|4| Here we go

MX
  1. 00:12:441 - It's no reason to ignore it
  2. 00:21:584 - ^
  3. 00:27:226 - add a note, here it's beat
  4. 00:30:369 - ^

all applied owo

other diff it's fine or I can not pass it :o sorry short mod, but it's really great, shoot a star thanks owo
Oscyy
good job, fun spread
puxtu
<incoming mod>
-NM-
00:58:798 (58798|3) - is this supposed to be this long? I think it should be longer than that. Maybe put the ln tail right here 00:59:512 - something like you did here 01:03:512 (63512|2) - and here 01:07:941 (67941|3) -
-HD-
00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too)
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right?
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) -
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here :(
-MX-
00:05:798 (5798|0) - why the1/2 lns stopped here?
00:22:512 (22512|2,22655|0) - missed 1/4
00:25:226 (25226|3) - same problem as HD
00:38:941 - don't you tink HD has more complex/difficult pattern than MX? http://puu.sh/xVuUa/f879bf726d.jpg
00:55:155 (55155|2,55298|2) - I choked on this part lolz. maybe ctrl+h this? 00:55:298 (55298|2,55369|1) -
00:56:298 (56298|1,56441|1) - *double choked* :angry:
01:35:512 (95512|0) - I think this ln is misplaced no? should start at the red line
02:16:869 (136869|2,137012|2) - pls do something about this ;W;
02:46:941 - add something to hold
-SC-
00:00:084 (84|0) - no 1/2 ln really? hmm
00:27:226 (27226|1,27369|2) - ignoring 1/4 beat (not to mention the sound is quite obvious) in high diff is a crime, sir
01:38:084 (98084|1,98226|2) - again here sir
02:46:941 (166941|3) - same issue like previous diffs
--
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

puxtu wrote:

<incoming mod>
-NM-
00:58:798 (58798|3) - is this supposed to be this long? I think it should be longer than that. Maybe put the ln tail right here 00:59:512 - something like you did here 01:03:512 (63512|2) - and here 01:07:941 (67941|3) - change the length but tail at 00:59:226 - instead, im following the synth so it should end here.
-HD-
00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too)
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right?
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) -
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here :(
-MX-
00:05:798 (5798|0) - why the1/2 lns stopped here? change
00:22:512 (22512|2,22655|0) - missed 1/4 ok
00:25:226 (25226|3) - same problem as HD ok
00:38:941 - don't you tink HD has more complex/difficult pattern than MX? http://puu.sh/xVuUa/f879bf726d.jpg
00:55:155 (55155|2,55298|2) - I choked on this part lolz. maybe ctrl+h this? 00:55:298 (55298|2,55369|1) - aa ok
00:56:298 (56298|1,56441|1) - *double choked* :angry:
01:35:512 (95512|0) - I think this ln is misplaced no? should start at the red line woops
02:16:869 (136869|2,137012|2) - pls do something about this ;W; fix
02:46:941 - add something to hold oki
-SC-
00:00:084 (84|0) - no 1/2 ln really? hmm
00:27:226 (27226|1,27369|2) - ignoring 1/4 beat (not to mention the sound is quite obvious) in high diff is a crime, sir >_>
01:38:084 (98084|1,98226|2) - again here sir <_<
02:46:941 (166941|3) - same issue like previous diffs ok
--
Thanks a lot for a mod updated!
-mint-
what happened to 6k D:
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

qqqant wrote:

what happened to 6k D:
6k is still saved in my computer but i decide to not upload them until i find a way to map UHD diff, it is a mess rn.
Damaree
2nd modded map for my reopening of the queue
Good thing I haven't modded the last diff since its not ready. . . u should have put some notice/caution lol

SHC
  1. 00:16:084 - to 00:17:941 - should use double in every red lines to highlight the main sound? dunno what sound is this lol
  2. 00:18:369 - this should be cybols if not mistaken. Maybe just a note here or sacrifice a note 00:18:298 - and add 00:18:369 -
  3. 00:27:512 - ^
  4. 01:17:798 - 01:20:084 - cybol?
  5. 01:27:226 - to 01:27:655 - hmmm, miss in col4
SC
  1. 00:41:226 - till the end of 1st kiai - lemme get a grasp at this mapping style, i can seem to understand u map only double for crash in the intro and triple for kiai, but also a cybol/cyambal double? while the crash are triple? is this intentional/ur style?
  2. 00:49:369 - actually a cybol(if not mistaken), and u actually do triple in this, but not in other parts?
  3. 02:01:226 - till the end of 2nd kiai - same as my 1st
  4. 02:18:798 (138798|2) - much better to move to col1 to represent the sound and match w/02:18:441 (138441|3,138584|3,138726|3,138869|3) - and move 02:18:941 (138941|0) - somewhere

Only that short since the structure seems fine, its just I dont get ur style so I didnt press anything. . . Well GL
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

Damaree wrote:

2nd modded map for my reopening of the queue
Good thing I haven't modded the last diff since its not ready. . . u should have put some notice/caution lol

SHC *SHD :^)*
  1. 00:16:084 - to 00:17:941 - should use double in every red lines to highlight the main sound? dunno what sound is this lol if i add double every red line here it would be too dense so change to something else
  2. 00:18:369 - this should be cybols if not mistaken. Maybe just a note here or sacrifice a note 00:18:298 - and add 00:18:369 - ok
  3. 00:27:512 - ^ ok
  4. 01:17:798 - 01:20:084 - cybol? keep it to make it easy to read, triple after 1/8 stream cause a minijack
  5. 01:27:226 - to 01:27:655 - hmmm, miss in col4 thats fine
SC
  1. 00:41:226 - till the end of 1st kiai - lemme get a grasp at this mapping style, i can seem to understand u map only double for crash in the intro and triple for kiai, but also a cybol/cyambal double? while the crash are triple? is this intentional/ur style? yes
  2. 00:49:369 - actually a cybol(if not mistaken), and u actually do triple in this, but not in other parts? i do in other part too ? except some part where the note get dense i put cymbal as double only
  3. 02:01:226 - till the end of 2nd kiai - same as my 1st
  4. 02:18:798 (138798|2) - much better to move to col1 to represent the sound and match w/02:18:441 (138441|3,138584|3,138726|3,138869|3) - and move 02:18:941 (138941|0) - somewherefix to smth else

Only that short since the structure seems fine, its just I dont get ur style so I didnt press anything. . . Well GLthanks owo)b
Tailsdk
heyo M4M from your que :P

My first mod on LN map think it went well :P
UHD
you can make this one OD 8.8 if you change the other one then they will be a challenge in their own ways
maybe lower the HP a little to 8.8
00:15:941 (15941|3) - this note extend to 00:16:084 -
00:32:369 (32369|1,32798|2,33226|0,33655|3) - i dont know if these 3 LN's have a sound maybe add single notes for the sound insteadt
if you want to keep them then this one should be an LN aswell 00:35:941 (35941|1) -
00:43:084 (43084|1,43369|2,43655|1) - what sound is there?
00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend this one?
01:03:369 - add an LN here missing sound
01:19:369 (79369|1) - extend
01:42:369 (102369|2) - move to 01:42:387 -
i question these as i did last time 01:43:226 (103226|1,103655|2,104084|0,104512|3) -
these 2 notes if not removed above should be ln's 01:45:512 (105512|1,106798|1) -
02:14:226 - add LN here
02:32:512 - add LN here
SHD
00:13:441 - add note here
00:22:584 - add note here
00:28:226 - add note here
00:33:941 - add note here
00:36:655 (36655|0,36655|1) - why is this a double
00:49:655 - maybe add and LN here or map the background sounds
01:38:084 - make double
01:47:512 (107512|1,107512|0) - again why is this a double
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

tailsdk wrote:

heyo M4M from your que :P

My first mod on LN map think it went well :P
UHD
you can make this one OD 8.8 if you change the other one then they will be a challenge in their own ways OD 8.8 is too much, maybe i can raise it up to like 8.2,but more than that is pure evil. ok this is suppose to be for SHD well OD 8.8 with some short LN stream is still too hard imo, will see more opinion from other first.
maybe lower the HP a little to 8.8
00:15:941 (15941|3) - this note extend to 00:16:084 - ok
00:32:369 (32369|1,32798|2,33226|0,33655|3) - i dont know if these 3 LN's have a sound maybe add single notes for the sound instead change to single notes
if you want to keep them then this one should be an LN aswell 00:35:941 (35941|1) -
00:43:084 (43084|1,43369|2,43655|1) - what sound is there? some sound i cant describe >_>, i put it there to fill the gap
00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend this one? ok
01:03:369 - add an LN here missing sound woops
01:19:369 (79369|1) - extend
01:42:369 (102369|2) - move to 01:42:387 - ??
i question these as i did last time 01:43:226 (103226|1,103655|2,104084|0,104512|3) -
these 2 notes if not removed above should be ln's 01:45:512 (105512|1,106798|1) -
02:14:226 - add LN here
02:32:512 - add LN here

SHD
00:13:441 - add note here i dont want to add minijack there so i will keep this
00:22:584 - add note here ^
00:28:226 - add note here
00:33:941 - add note here
00:36:655 (36655|0,36655|1) - why is this a double
00:49:655 - maybe add and LN here or map the background sounds
01:38:084 - make double the sound is different here to i want to make it different than other
01:47:512 (107512|1,107512|0) - again why is this a double
thanks a lot, will post my mod soon (prob today / tmr)
riunosk
helo
from mod queue
1234
modding only those per requested
ESS SEE // yummy onigiri
00:12:798 (12798|2,12941|2) - seems rather high pitched, maybe move to col 4?
00:28:941 - this sound sounds continued, rather than stopped so i suggest adding an LN here to emphasize it
00:30:512 - suggested pattern to reduce focus on col 1
00:37:084 (37084|3,37226|3,37512|2,37655|2,37941|1,38084|1) - sounds increasing in pitch, probably better to flip
00:52:155 - missing note?
00:53:298 - ^
00:57:226 (57226|2,57369|2) - seems rather awkward
01:41:512 - same as before
01:47:941 - ^
01:59:512 - suggested pattern for pr
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:18:941 (138941|2,138941|0) - pretty awkward to start off this jumpstream with a 13
Pretty good LN chart, but second kiai seems very similar to the first, try varying it slightly
SUPUR HURD DUFFUCULTY // salmonella
(unrelated) 00:17:941 - oh no i can't imagine UHD now
00:41:226 (41226|0,41369|0,41512|0) - unnecessary stack
(unrelated) 00:45:226 - seems pretty fun to play
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:36:655 (156655|0,156798|0,156941|0,157084|0,157226|0,157369|0,157512|0,157655|0,157798|0) - quite the long anchor you got there
oishii chart
im hungry for sushi onigiri dammit both of them now
ULTERA HARDEU DIFFUCOLTY // unagi usagi
(unrelated) next ranked map to have inverse inc
(unrelated) 00:25:226 - INVERSE O BOI
01:18:941 (78941|0,79084|0,79226|0,79369|0,79512|0) - this anchor seems unnecessary
also the sv seems a bit awkward, can't really give any suggestions since im trash at svs
02:16:726 - col 4 seems to have more notes than the rest
02:19:655 - ^col 1
02:26:834 (146834|2) - this note seems rather squished between the two LNs, some skins will make this extremely hard to read so consider changing this a little, not really sure how myself
02:43:726 - col 2 feels very empty compared to the others
LNhellholyshit
great song choice and noodles
gud luk for renk
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

riunosk wrote:

helo
from mod queue
1234
modding only those per requested
ESS SEE // yummy onigiri
00:12:798 (12798|2,12941|2) - seems rather high pitched, maybe move to col 4?
00:28:941 - this sound sounds continued, rather than stopped so i suggest adding an LN here to emphasize it
00:30:512 - suggested pattern to reduce focus on col 1
00:37:084 (37084|3,37226|3,37512|2,37655|2,37941|1,38084|1) - sounds increasing in pitch, probably better to flip
00:52:155 - missing note? the sound there is the background synth, which i didn't map it
00:53:298 - ^ ^
00:57:226 (57226|2,57369|2) - seems rather awkward
01:41:512 - same as before
01:47:941 - ^
01:59:512 - suggested pattern for pr
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:18:941 (138941|2,138941|0) - pretty awkward to start off this jumpstream with a 13 it's fine imo
Pretty good LN chart, but second kiai seems very similar to the first, try varying it slightly
SUPUR HURD DUFFUCULTY // salmonella
(unrelated) 00:17:941 - oh no i can't imagine UHD now
00:41:226 (41226|0,41369|0,41512|0) - unnecessary stack
(unrelated) 00:45:226 - seems pretty fun to play
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:36:655 (156655|0,156798|0,156941|0,157084|0,157226|0,157369|0,157512|0,157655|0,157798|0) - quite the long anchor you got there
oishii chart
im hungry for sushi onigiri dammit both of them now
ULTERA HARDEU DIFFUCOLTY // unagi usagi
(unrelated) next ranked map to have inverse inc
(unrelated) 00:25:226 - INVERSE O BOI
01:18:941 (78941|0,79084|0,79226|0,79369|0,79512|0) - this anchor seems unnecessary
also the sv seems a bit awkward, can't really give any suggestions since im trash at svs
02:16:726 - col 4 seems to have more notes than the rest i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:19:655 - ^col 1 i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:26:834 (146834|2) - this note seems rather squished between the two LNs, some skins will make this extremely hard to read so consider changing this a little, not really sure how myself
02:43:726 - col 2 feels very empty compared to the others
LNhellholyshit
great song choice and noodles
gud luk for renk
no reply= accepted thaanks a lot :D
Akunosu
From my queue


0|1|2|3

General :
  1. Check Aimod u.u
 Salmon Onigiri "SHD" :
  1. 00:20:226 (20226|1) - I think that maybe you can change it for LN by the sound
  2. 01:22:369 - where is the double? D:
 Unagi Onigiri "UHD":
  1. 00:16:441 (16441|3,16584|0) - shouldn't these be like these 00:16:155 (16155|2,16298|2) - ?
  2. 01:52:655 (112655|1) - double pls
  3. 02:01:226 (121226|1,121226|2) - triplet? in SHD, you put triplet

wow, your map is perfect for practice LNs, I love it e.e
If my mod don't help, don't give me kudosu u.u

Good Luck and Take a star!
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

Acnos wrote:

From my queue


0|1|2|3

General :
  1. Check Aimod u.u
o about hitsound ? , i will fix them when i can find sample qwq
 Salmon Onigiri "SHD" :
  1. 00:20:226 (20226|1) - I think that maybe you can change it for LN by the sound
  2. 01:22:369 - where is the double? D:
 Unagi Onigiri "UHD":
  1. 00:16:441 (16441|3,16584|0) - shouldn't these be like these 00:16:155 (16155|2,16298|2) - ?
  2. 01:52:655 (112655|1) - double pls
  3. 02:01:226 (121226|1,121226|2) - triplet? in SHD, you put triplet

wow, your map is perfect for practice LNs, I love it e.e
If my mod don't help, don't give me kudosu u.u

Good Luck and Take a star!
all applied thanks a lot owo
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
oo nice song
0|1|2|3
Salmon Curry
00:06:941 (6941|3,7084|1,7226|2) - Change to 1,2,3
00:39:798 (39798|3,39941|3) - These two are different sound
01:04:869 (64869|3,64941|0) - Suggest pattern: ctrl+h
Nato Makizushi
00:20:369 (20369|3) - Turn into normal note?
00:24:941 (24941|3) - End at 00:25:226
01:33:226 (93226|0) - Move it to 2 or 3 to fit with the pitch
02:41:512 (161512|2,161512|3) - Since you map this sound previously as a single, make this a single too
Hope this help and gl for ranking 8-)
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

[B A D] wrote:

oo nice song
0|1|2|3
Salmon Curry
<_< I thought this is for salmon shd diff and like "wtf there nothing there"
00:06:941 (6941|3,7084|1,7226|2) - Change to 1,2,3 ok
00:39:798 (39798|3,39941|3) - These two are different sound moved
01:04:869 (64869|3,64941|0) - Suggest pattern: ctrl+h
ctrl-H make it kinda right heavy because it will create minitrill
Nato Makizushi
00:20:369 (20369|3) - Turn into normal note? change to LN with longer length instead
00:24:941 (24941|3) - End at 00:25:226 ok
01:33:226 (93226|0) - Move it to 2 or 3 to fit with the pitch ok
02:41:512 (161512|2,161512|3) - Since you map this sound previously as a single, make this a single tooi map this with double all the kiai ?
Hope this help and gl for ranking 8-)
zawz
NM from my queue
sorry for the delay

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|

MX
00:08:084 (8084|2) - LN here
00:08:655 - Why didn't you express the "Huh?!" here ? It goes together with the ringing at 00:05:798 (5798|0) - so you should either express both or none. Same goes for other difficulties
00:15:798 (15798|1,15941|2) - Flip for pitch
00:39:084 (39084|0,39155|1,39226|2,39369|0,39512|3,39584|2,39655|1,39798|3,39941|0,40012|1,40084|2,40226|0,40369|3,40441|2,40512|1,40655|3,40798|2,40869|1,40941|0) - Flip these. They're opposite to panning.
00:42:655 (42655|3,42941|3,43226|3,43512|3,43798|3,44084|3,44369|3,44655|3,44941|3,45226|3,45512|3) - that's tapping the beat way too many times
01:06:941 - LNs here should be like this
01:07:512 (67512|3,67584|0,67655|2,67726|0,67798|3) - That's too hard to read compared to the rest. Move 01:07:584 (67584|0) to 2
01:32:584 (92584|3,92655|0,92726|3) - Feels weird placed offbeat. Move 01:32:726 (92726|3) - to 3
02:00:798 (120798|0) - Make this double or remove one of these 02:01:084 (121084|3,121084|2)
02:17:798 - same deal as 01:06:941
02:18:441 (138441|0) - move to 2
02:28:369 - Since you've expressed previous drum rolls, express this one too
02:36:084 - again 01:06:941

Quite fun and unusual

Edit: HP 9 and 9.2 are too high for the amount of LNs SHD and UHD have.
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

zawz wrote:

NM from my queue
sorry for the delay

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|

MX
00:08:084 (8084|2) - LN here
00:08:655 - Why didn't you express the "Huh?!" here ? It goes together with the ringing at 00:05:798 (5798|0) - so you should either express both or none. Same goes for other difficulties i don't want to put the LN for vocal here. the "huh" sound isn't that important to map imo and the sound din't snap perfectly also.
00:15:798 (15798|1,15941|2) - Flip for pitch
00:39:084 (39084|0,39155|1,39226|2,39369|0,39512|3,39584|2,39655|1,39798|3,39941|0,40012|1,40084|2,40226|0,40369|3,40441|2,40512|1,40655|3,40798|2,40869|1,40941|0) - Flip these. They're opposite to panning. ummm, it is on the right side for me, idk, maybe i use the wrong side of headphone or smth lol.
00:42:655 (42655|3,42941|3,43226|3,43512|3,43798|3,44084|3,44369|3,44655|3,44941|3,45226|3,45512|3) - that's tapping the beat way too many times
01:06:941 - LNs here should be like this
01:07:512 (67512|3,67584|0,67655|2,67726|0,67798|3) - That's too hard to read compared to the rest. Move 01:07:584 (67584|0) to 2
01:32:584 (92584|3,92655|0,92726|3) - Feels weird placed offbeat. Move 01:32:726 (92726|3) - to 3
02:00:798 (120798|0) - Make this double or remove one of these 02:01:084 (121084|3,121084|2)
02:17:798 - same deal as 01:06:941
02:18:441 (138441|0) - move to 2
02:28:369 - Since you've expressed previous drum rolls, express this one too
02:36:084 - again 01:06:941

Quite fun and unusual

Edit: HP 9 and 9.2 are too high for the amount of LNs SHD and UHD have. ok nerf down the HP a bit, i set the high HP to prevent people mashing it /or/ pretend the LN is a normal js.
no reply = applied thanks a lot for a mod :D
SyShawn
from my Q

greatest feature artist map ever played
MX

the first is also in 02:05:226 (125226|0)
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

greatest feature artist map ever played
MX

the first is also in 02:05:226 (125226|0)
the first one is keep, since i want the pattern to be quite simple as much as possible,
the pattern in the pic has a minitrill in it. About the second picture, as you can see, i dont use triple any where in the kiai, so i would keep this as double here.
Syadow-
mark for mod sorry for delay :"""0

[NM]
  1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
  2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
  3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
  4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 -
  5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
  6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) -
  7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
  8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
  9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
  10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song
  11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 -
  12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick
AlisceaSparku
sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[SC]
  1. 00:01:084 (1084|2) - I would really prefer this note to be in a different column with 00:00:798 (798|2) - as both follows a different sound in terms of pitch. However, I don't really see this as a clean solution. A lot of rearranging would be required so, it's up to you whether you want to rearrange notes or not.
  2. 00:09:941 - you can make the kick and the snare follow the pitch of that "arcade-y" sound (sorry not sure what its called D:). Here's an example, however I would prefer the doubles to be a [2][4] and [1][3] (which will require a lot of rearranging as well.)
  3. 00:19:655 (19655|2,19798|2) - I'd prefer these to be placed at col. 2 (along with a few rearrangements.) because from 00:18:512 - until 00:22:084 - , all jacks were in the same column. (basically, for variation)
  4. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - these notes can be placed to a different column, for example at 4. The sound these notes are following are higher in pitch than what was played in 00:20:798 - and 00:20:941 - , 00:19:655 - and 00:19:798 - , etc.
  5. 00:25:869 - add note?
  6. 00:44:941 (44941|2,45084|3) - I think these sliders should change columns? so that they follow pitch relevancy.
  7. 00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend to 00:49:941 - ? seems better this way
  8. 01:07:512 - compared to 02:18:369 - , personally I find the first one a difficulty spike so... up to you

[MX]
  1. 00:03:369 - This should follow pitch relevancy as well as to stick to your previous patterns.
  2. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - same suggestion stated in SC
    didn't really find anything else tbh, seems like a solid difficulty

[HD]
  1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible.
  2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
  3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
  4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
  5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
    on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples

[NM]
  1. 00:51:512 (51512|0,51726|1,51941|2) - i recommend to make these ones sliders so that players can be clearly informed that theres the possibility of transitioning to a new snap. too lazy to state each one of these xd
    nothing else to state. only a NM diff anyway

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

AlisceaSparku wrote:

sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[SC]
  1. 00:01:084 (1084|2) - I would really prefer this note to be in a different column with 00:00:798 (798|2) - as both follows a different sound in terms of pitch. However, I don't really see this as a clean solution. A lot of rearranging would be required so, it's up to you whether you want to rearrange notes or not. gonna keep as it is for now, since i don't find its really a problem
  2. 00:09:941 - you can make the kick and the snare follow the pitch of that "arcade-y" sound (sorry not sure what its called D:). Here's an example, however I would prefer the doubles to be a [2][4] and [1][3] (which will require a lot of rearranging as well.) ok
  3. 00:19:655 (19655|2,19798|2) - I'd prefer these to be placed at col. 2 (along with a few rearrangements.) because from 00:18:512 - until 00:22:084 - , all jacks were in the same column. (basically, for variation) ok
  4. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - these notes can be placed to a different column, for example at 4. The sound these notes are following are higher in pitch than what was played in 00:20:798 - and 00:20:941 - , 00:19:655 - and 00:19:798 - , etc. ok
  5. 00:25:869 - add note? delete other 1/4 instead
  6. 00:44:941 (44941|2,45084|3) - I think these sliders should change columns? so that they follow pitch relevancy. ok
  7. 00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend to 00:49:941 - ? seems better this way ok
  8. 01:07:512 - compared to 02:18:369 - , personally I find the first one a difficulty spike so... up to you change the first pattern

[MX]
  1. 00:03:369 - This should follow pitch relevancy as well as to stick to your previous patterns. ok
  2. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - same suggestion stated in SC ok
    didn't really find anything else tbh, seems like a solid difficulty

[HD]
  1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible.
  2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
  3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
  4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
  5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
    on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples

[NM]
  1. 00:51:512 (51512|0,51726|1,51941|2) - i recommend to make these ones sliders so that players can be clearly informed that theres the possibility of transitioning to a new snap. too lazy to state each one of these xd ok
    nothing else to state. only a NM diff anyway

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff

thanks a lot :D
genkicho
nicee >>
mod coming soon(tomorrow) =D


why i cant S
deadbill
Hello

Umeboshi Onigiri MX

00:12:226 - pattern suggestion, imo in order to make the pattern comfortable you can make the stairs in one direction .-.



00:13:369 - same sound with 00:22:512 - , considering either to add a note or delete a note on 00:22:512 -
OR, make 00:22:512 - consistents with 00:27:084 - by adding a note on 00:22:655 - but the problem is you are using two notes for kicks in this section
while on the latter you are using two notes for snares. This is also a consistency matter that might have to be considered.
Because a player might end up not knowing which note for which sound, that could affect enjoyment in their playthrough (and now im exaggerating :D )

00:43:512 - might want to check its consistency. please compare it with 00:41:226 -
00:48:084 - why stop using LN so sudden for main melody with 1/2 length? :C , u can add an LN here 00:48:084 - (please)
also 00:46:369 (46369|3,46655|3,46941|3,47226|3,47512|3,47798|3) - might want to shuffle :D


welp the reason is as i mentioned above,
add a note for each
00:57:226 - 00:57:655 - 00:58:084 - because you are using 2 notes for kicks and snares in the previous section and the next section

as the same for this section 01:15:512 -


umm you might want to use different pattern..
compare this 01:22:369 - with this 01:31:512 -
8 different tones and 6 different tones for the latter. and length of those notes is different for each section.
that kind of pattern cannot represent those differences >.>

for this section 01:38:369 - through 01:42:369 -
as mentioned above, be consistent with how many note for each snare and kick :D

the rest is fine, goodluck o/




ps. are you sure for using kiai that much? .-.
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

Syadow- wrote:

mark for mod sorry for delay :"""0

[NM]
  1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
  2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
  3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
  4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 - change to shorter LN
  5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
  6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) - it didn't have drum there
  7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
  8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
  9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
  10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song would keep since it follow the background sound
  11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 - add note at 02:27:798 - instead
  12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick

deadbill wrote:

Hello

Umeboshi Onigiri MX

00:12:226 - pattern suggestion, imo in order to make the pattern comfortable you can make the stairs in one direction .-.



00:13:369 - same sound with 00:22:512 - , considering either to add a note or delete a note on 00:22:512 -
OR, make 00:22:512 - consistents with 00:27:084 - by adding a note on 00:22:655 - but the problem is you are using two notes for kicks in this section
while on the latter you are using two notes for snares. This is also a consistency matter that might have to be considered.
Because a player might end up not knowing which note for which sound, that could affect enjoyment in their playthrough (and now im exaggerating :D )

add a note at 00:13:441 - , i miss that, btw in the first part, i try to use single for all sound there except the jump every big(?) white line.

00:43:512 - might want to check its consistency. please compare it with 00:41:226 - i do the same thing tho, jump for both kick and snare,
single for the rest and LN for the melody.

00:48:084 - why stop using LN so sudden for main melody with 1/2 length? :C , u can add an LN here 00:48:084 - (please) ok
also 00:46:369 (46369|3,46655|3,46941|3,47226|3,47512|3,47798|3) - might want to shuffle :D ok


welp the reason is as i mentioned above,
add a note for each
00:57:226 - 00:57:655 - 00:58:084 - because you are using 2 notes for kicks and snares in the previous section and the next section

as the same for this section 01:15:512 -


umm you might want to use different pattern..
compare this 01:22:369 - with this 01:31:512 -
8 different tones and 6 different tones for the latter. and length of those notes is different for each section.
that kind of pattern cannot represent those differences >.> kinda changes(?0 for now, hope it works now

for this section 01:38:369 - through 01:42:369 -
as mentioned above, be consistent with how many note for each snare and kick :D ok fixed

the rest is fine, goodluck o/




ps. are you sure for using kiai that much? .-.
Shima Rin
Hi, NM Request from my modding queue.

4K:1|2|3|4


[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
  1. 00:33:941 - You need one more note here for the drum sound, so you can try this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435588
  2. 00:34:798 - And also here too,so if you apply my previous mod, add a note on col4 then.
  3. 00:53:798 - to 00:54:369 - If you want to fully represent the pitch relevancy, try this way to rearrange your LNs then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435593
  4. 01:44:798 - Here is the same problem as 00:33:941 - How about trying a different way to rework the patterns? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435599
  5. 01:45:655 - Here is the same as 00:34:798 -, and also add a note on col4 for the drum sound.
  6. 02:27:512 - to 02:28:655 - In this bar you are suddenly raising the difficulty in my opinion because you are using 1/8 patterns for nearly the whole bar. However, for most 1/8 sounds before you are just ignoreing them to catch some easier 1/4 or 1/2 melodic sounds. I think this way should also be applied here. My solution is, 02:27:512 - to 02:28:084 - for the first half of this bar, try to avoid using 1/8 patterns but just catch those 1/2 melodic sounds. The second half you can just keep them as it is now. Here is a way to rearrange them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435613
  7. This is a very decent chart. I can't see any big problems inside it.
[Salmon Onigiri "SHD"]
  1. 00:25:298 (25298|1,26441|2) - I don't really think there are actually sounds there. You may slow down to check if I am right but I prefer you to delete them sicne there are no sounds for me.
  2. As what you did in 00:33:798 - , triple note for heavier snare, I do think on these lines with heavier snares: 00:34:512 - 00:34:941 - 00:36:084 - you will still need triple notes.
  3. I would really prefer you to delete this 00:48:155 (48155|2) - even if there are sounds here because you have been catching a more obvious melody line around these bars with short 1/4 LNs, and here indeed has no such obvious melody sound but only the previous weaker one. With this note your focus here may be broken in my opinion, and what's more, why not giving players a small rest from 1/4 handstreams that continue for many bars?
  4. 00:50:084 - Here is another heavier snare you used to make triple note with, so how about moving 00:50:155 (50155|1) - this to col3 and add one on 00:50:084 - in col2?
  5. 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - I still don't like these notes mixing with all 1/4 LNs. The reasons go with 00:48:155 (48155|2) - this note, and deleting them will definitely make your patterns neater.
  6. 01:06:441 (66441|1) - The same idea as 00:48:155 (48155|2) - , deleting it for clearer focus.
  7. 01:13:298 (73298|3,73726|1,74155|1,74441|2,74869|3) - The same idea as 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -
  8. 01:21:941 - 01:22:084 - Add one more note on each line to keep your pattern of catching drum sounds consistent.I prefer this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435680
  9. 01:23:512 (83512|1) - Moving this to col3 will relieve a pressure caused by 01:23:512 (83512|1,83655|1,83726|1) - this 3-note stack.
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|3) - Moving this to col3 will do the same thing as above 01:23:512 (83512|1) -
  11. 01:37:941 - to 01:38:369 - I think this way can represent the music better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435697, as 01:38:084 - a triple here for heavier drum really keeps your pattern consistent and the double notes for weaker drums are still necessary for me.
  12. 01:42:369 - Here you may also need a triple note for the heavier snare.
  13. 01:45:369 - 01:45:798 - 01:46:941 - Still need triple notes on these lines for heavy snares.
  14. 02:05:869 (125869|0,126298|2,126726|2,127012|1,127441|0) - Deleting them as the reasons for 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -, clearer focus in short.
  15. 02:17:298 (137298|1) - The same idea as above, deleting for better focus.
  16. 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) - Still the same idea, deleting for better focus.
  17. 02:27:798 (147798|2) - I know this LN is for melody, but don't you think that this LN pattern is broken too much? I mean, for a single LN standing here between 1/8, it makes players feel weird at first glance. It is even better to just delete it and leave that inteval empty for some while, which may also give players a short rest for preparation of next wave of 1/8 patterns.
  18. 02:35:584 (155584|2) - The same idea as 02:17:298 (137298|1) -, deleting for better focus.
  19. 02:42:441 (162441|3,163298|1,163584|2,164012|3) - The same idea as 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) -, deleting for better focus.
  20. Well, you have really decent LN use in this difficulty. I appreciate your effort!

That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM Request from my modding queue.

4K:1|2|3|4


[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
  1. 00:33:941 - You need one more note here for the drum sound, so you can try this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435588 change to something instead for pr but add the double
  2. 00:34:798 - And also here too,so if you apply my previous mod, add a note on col4 then. uhh i think you mean 00:34:941 -
  3. 00:53:798 - to 00:54:369 - If you want to fully represent the pitch relevancy, try this way to rearrange your LNs then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435593 ok
  4. 01:44:798 - Here is the same problem as 00:33:941 - How about trying a different way to rework the patterns? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435599 ^
  5. 01:45:655 - Here is the same as 00:34:798 -, and also add a note on col4 for the drum sound. ^
  6. 02:27:512 - to 02:28:655 - In this bar you are suddenly raising the difficulty in my opinion because you are using 1/8 patterns for nearly the whole bar. However, for most 1/8 sounds before you are just ignoreing them to catch some easier 1/4 or 1/2 melodic sounds. I think this way should also be applied here. My solution is, 02:27:512 - to 02:28:084 - for the first half of this bar, try to avoid using 1/8 patterns but just catch those 1/2 melodic sounds. The second half you can just keep them as it is now. Here is a way to rearrange them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435613 change to something else to make it *a bit* harder than your but not as hard as the old one
  7. This is a very decent chart. I can't see any big problems inside it.
[Salmon Onigiri "SHD"]
  1. 00:25:298 (25298|1,26441|2) - I don't really think there are actually sounds there. You may slow down to check if I am right but I prefer you to delete them sicne there are no sounds for me. o yeah i miss that >w>
  2. As what you did in 00:33:798 - , triple note for heavier snare, I do think on these lines with heavier snares: 00:34:512 - 00:34:941 - 00:36:084 - you will still need triple notes. oki
  3. I would really prefer you to delete this 00:48:155 (48155|2) - even if there are sounds here because you have been catching a more obvious melody line around these bars with short 1/4 LNs, and here indeed has no such obvious melody sound but only the previous weaker one. With this note your focus here may be broken in my opinion, and what's more, why not giving players a small rest from 1/4 handstreams that continue for many bars? ummm. okii
  4. 00:50:084 - Here is another heavier snare you used to make triple note with, so how about moving 00:50:155 (50155|1) - this to col3 and add one on 00:50:084 - in col2? oki
  5. 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - I still don't like these notes mixing with all 1/4 LNs. The reasons go with 00:48:155 (48155|2) - this note, and deleting them will definitely make your patterns neater. ^
  6. 01:06:441 (66441|1) - The same idea as 00:48:155 (48155|2) - , deleting it for clearer focus. ^
  7. 01:13:298 (73298|3,73726|1,74155|1,74441|2,74869|3) - The same idea as 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - ^
  8. 01:21:941 - 01:22:084 - Add one more note on each line to keep your pattern of catching drum sounds consistent.I prefer this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435680 woops forgot
  9. 01:23:512 (83512|1) - Moving this to col3 will relieve a pressure caused by 01:23:512 (83512|1,83655|1,83726|1) - this 3-note stack. ok
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|3) - Moving this to col3 will do the same thing as above 01:23:512 (83512|1) - ok
  11. 01:37:941 - to 01:38:369 - I think this way can represent the music better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435697, as 01:38:084 - a triple here for heavier drum really keeps your pattern consistent and the double notes for weaker drums are still necessary for me. ok and also add a note to the last before the LN for the crash
  12. 01:42:369 - Here you may also need a triple note for the heavier snare. ok
  13. 01:45:369 - 01:45:798 - 01:46:941 - Still need triple notes on these lines for heavy snares. ^
  14. 02:05:869 (125869|0,126298|2,126726|2,127012|1,127441|0) - Deleting them as the reasons for 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -, clearer focus in short. ^
  15. 02:17:298 (137298|1) - The same idea as above, deleting for better focus. ^
  16. 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) - Still the same idea, deleting for better focus. ^
  17. 02:27:798 (147798|2) - I know this LN is for melody, but don't you think that this LN pattern is broken too much? I mean, for a single LN standing here between 1/8, it makes players feel weird at first glance. It is even better to just delete it and leave that inteval empty for some while, which may also give players a short rest for preparation of next wave of 1/8 patterns.
  18. 02:35:584 (155584|2) - The same idea as 02:17:298 (137298|1) -, deleting for better focus. ^
  19. 02:42:441 (162441|3,163298|1,163584|2,164012|3) - The same idea as 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) -, deleting for better focus. ^
  20. Well, you have really decent LN use in this difficulty. I appreciate your effort!

That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!
Thanks a lot tofu, your mod help a lot. UPDATED!
Polytetral
Applying Mods!
Green for accepted, blue for 'not sure but we can discuss', red for rejected (with justification, dm if there's a strong opinion against the rejection)


puxtu wrote:

<incoming mod>

-HD-
00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play alright owo)b
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on also accepted
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd didn't notice this - nub mapper here owo
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too) I considered before but didnt use LN as I was following up with the MX difficulty... it didnt have LN in the same place
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player rejected because i tried mapping the melody only for that part :?
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right? didnt notice before, added!
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg taken
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) - didnt notice that either =w= applied
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here alright
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column also accepted
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg changed to be the same
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash same as above
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here :( HAHAHA i was being inconsistent, fixed
--
thanks for mod owo)b
Eldergleam
Hello from LucianAWOOOOOOOO Queue

|1|2|3|4|

MX
00:04:941 (4941|2) - move this to col 4
00:08:084 (8084|2) - ^
00:23:941 (23941|1,24012|2,24084|0) - just my opinion, why not make same as 00:21:584 (21584|3,21655|2,21726|1,21798|0) - or 00:19:369 (19369|1,19441|2,19512|3) - cause same sound
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0) - just my opinion, this section can be change to single note with stairs cause this section i hear 2 instrument here, well up to you mentos it's your map :D xD
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0,88655|1,88798|0,88869|1,88941|2,89012|3) - put this LN to 1, and make stairs start from col 4
02:10:084 (130084|3,130155|2,130226|1,130298|0) - same as i mention above 01:08:084 -
02:18:941 (138941|3,139012|2,139084|1,139155|0,139226|3,139298|2,139369|1,139441|0) - ^
02:37:226 (157226|3,157298|2,157369|1,157441|0,157512|3,157584|2,157655|1,157726|0) - ^
02:46:655 (166655|3,166726|2,166798|1,166869|0) - ^


well your map freakin good for 8-bit song, go rank that. thanks xD
Garalulu
[Unagi Onigiri "UHD"]
  1. 00:26:155 (26155|1) - I'm not sure about this has sound actually.
    same issue with above - 00:26:441 (26441|1,26869|2) -
  2. 00:28:226 - 00:28:941 - compared with 00:29:369 - 00:29:941 - , they are same sound but length are different so I feel awkward, make same concept.
  3. 00:30:655 (30655|2) - delete the rice to make same with 00:30:798 -
  4. 00:31:798 - 00:32:084 - resize the 00:31:798 (31798|0,31869|1) - to 1/4 LN cause they are same length with 00:31:941 (31941|3,32012|2) - and add one note at 00:31:941 - for drum is more reasonable tho
  5. 00:35:226 (35226|0) - stretch this to 00:35:941 - to retain same concept with 00:34:798 (34798|3,35369|2) - 00:34:226 (34226|2,34941|0) -
  6. 00:57:012 (57012|3,57226|3) - delete this rice and stretch ln to 00:57:226 - so make same concept with 00:57:226 (57226|0,57369|1,57512|2) - 00:57:655 (57655|3,57798|2,57941|1) -
  7. 01:04:084 (64084|1) - compared with 00:45:798 (45798|1) - , it should be rice tho
    and 01:05:226 (65226|2) - 01:06:369 (66369|1) - 01:06:941 (66941|3) - 01:07:512 (67512|1) - many unnecessary 1/4 lns, maybe more
  8. 02:00:512 - you miss one note for melody

I'm sleepy so just quick view
[ Blaze ]


hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
it depends from you,feel free to reject my mod

column
l1l2l3l4l


plain onigiri "NM"
00:46:369 (46369|2,47084|2) - I choose this link for example,yeah I've look some of
part like this but I think shield pattern on normal diff was not exactly in
time,because maybe for newbie player playing shield pattern is hard imo.

01:59:512 (119512|2) - umm I wonder,are you accidentally putting this LN like this?yeah
different with other LN so you must change that or that pattern will be awkward

02:10:369 (130369|2) - add 1 note for cymbal

tbh I'm not good enough to mod low star rate diff,so just that my mod come from uwu

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"
01:49:441 (109441|3) - want to add 1 note from this?there is a sound so I think it will
better if you do my suggestion owo

02:24:941 (144941|3,145226|3,145512|3,145798|3,146084|3,146369|3) - link for example
again.just my suggestion from here,yeah some of part more or less like this,change the
position of the note cause there is a little stacks of note imo

well this diff probably need to be neated a bit again imo cause of little stacks


Ikura Onigiri "SC"
00:18:369 (18369|1) - remove 1 note?putting 4 notes for that part is awkward imo

00:27:084 (27084|3,27084|2,27155|1,27155|0,27226|3,27226|2,27298|1,27298|0,27369|2,27369|3,27441|0,27441|1,27512|3,27512|2) -
uhh why did you put double trill like that
since the sound is better??I need your reason or if you didn't have any reason then
rearrange it for sure owo

00:50:226 (50226|3) - move to col 3 to avoid stacks

01:37:941 (97941|3,97941|2,98012|0,98012|1,98084|2,98084|3,98155|1,98155|0,98226|3,98226|2,98298|1,98298|0,98369|2,98369|3) - same problem

nice LN map!

I'm so sorry for little mod since that map is good enough for me
but good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

Eldergleam wrote:

Hello from LucianAWOOOOOOOO Queue

|1|2|3|4|

MX
00:04:941 (4941|2) - move this to col 4 ok
00:08:084 (8084|2) - ^ ok
00:23:941 (23941|1,24012|2,24084|0) - just my opinion, why not make same as 00:21:584 (21584|3,21655|2,21726|1,21798|0) - or 00:19:369 (19369|1,19441|2,19512|3) - cause same sound ok
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0) - just my opinion, this section can be change to single note with stairs cause this section i hear 2 instrument here, well up to you mentos it's your map :D xD would keep it be 1/4 LN stream
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0,88655|1,88798|0,88869|1,88941|2,89012|3) - put this LN to 1, and make stairs start from col 4
02:10:084 (130084|3,130155|2,130226|1,130298|0) - same as i mention above 01:08:084 -
02:18:941 (138941|3,139012|2,139084|1,139155|0,139226|3,139298|2,139369|1,139441|0) - ^
02:37:226 (157226|3,157298|2,157369|1,157441|0,157512|3,157584|2,157655|1,157726|0) - ^
02:46:655 (166655|3,166726|2,166798|1,166869|0) - ^


well your map freakin good for 8-bit song, go rank that. thanks xD

Garalulu wrote:

[Unagi Onigiri "UHD"]
  1. 00:26:155 (26155|1) - I'm not sure about this has sound actually.
    same issue with above - 00:26:441 (26441|1,26869|2) -
  2. 00:28:226 - 00:28:941 - compared with 00:29:369 - 00:29:941 - , they are same sound but length are different so I feel awkward, make same concept.
  3. 00:30:655 (30655|2) - delete the rice to make same with 00:30:798 -
  4. 00:31:798 - 00:32:084 - resize the 00:31:798 (31798|0,31869|1) - to 1/4 LN cause they are same length with 00:31:941 (31941|3,32012|2) - and add one note at 00:31:941 - for drum is more reasonable tho
  5. 00:35:226 (35226|0) - stretch this to 00:35:941 - to retain same concept with 00:34:798 (34798|3,35369|2) - 00:34:226 (34226|2,34941|0) -
  6. 00:57:012 (57012|3,57226|3) - delete this rice and stretch ln to 00:57:226 - so make same concept with 00:57:226 (57226|0,57369|1,57512|2) - 00:57:655 (57655|3,57798|2,57941|1) -
  7. 01:04:084 (64084|1) - compared with 00:45:798 (45798|1) - , it should be rice tho
    and 01:05:226 (65226|2) - 01:06:369 (66369|1) - 01:06:941 (66941|3) - 01:07:512 (67512|1) - many unnecessary 1/4 lns, maybe more those are for the loud xylophone(?) sound.
  8. 02:00:512 - you miss one note for melody

I'm sleepy so just quick view

[ Blaze ] wrote:



hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
it depends from you,feel free to reject my mod

column
l1l2l3l4l


plain onigiri "NM"
00:46:369 (46369|2,47084|2) - I choose this link for example,yeah I've look some of
part like this but I think shield pattern on normal diff was not exactly in
time,because maybe for newbie player playing shield pattern is hard imo.

01:59:512 (119512|2) - umm I wonder,are you accidentally putting this LN like this?yeah
different with other LN so you must change that or that pattern will be awkward

02:10:369 (130369|2) - add 1 note for cymbal

tbh I'm not good enough to mod low star rate diff,so just that my mod come from uwu

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"
01:49:441 (109441|3) - want to add 1 note from this?there is a sound so I think it will
better if you do my suggestion owo i map only main melody there

02:24:941 (144941|3,145226|3,145512|3,145798|3,146084|3,146369|3) - link for example
again.just my suggestion from here,yeah some of part more or less like this,change the
position of the note cause there is a little stacks of note imo

well this diff probably need to be neated a bit again imo cause of little stacks


Ikura Onigiri "SC"
00:18:369 (18369|1) - remove 1 note?putting 4 notes for that part is awkward imo triple there for cymbal

00:27:084 (27084|3,27084|2,27155|1,27155|0,27226|3,27226|2,27298|1,27298|0,27369|2,27369|3,27441|0,27441|1,27512|3,27512|2) -
uhh why did you put double trill like that
since the sound is better??I need your reason or if you didn't have any reason then
rearrange it for sure owo since the sound is like WWCWWWW which i map both with jump

00:50:226 (50226|3) - move to col 3 to avoid stacks change there to something else

01:37:941 (97941|3,97941|2,98012|0,98012|1,98084|2,98084|3,98155|1,98155|0,98226|3,98226|2,98298|1,98298|0,98369|2,98369|3) - same problem ^

nice LN map!

I'm so sorry for little mod since that map is good enough for me
but good luck! :)
thansk a lot for a mod
Oscyy
chiptune <3

requested NM from my q
1234

SHD
00:25:726 (25726|2) - i feels like didn't here anything here
1/4 background sound stopped at 00:25:655 - and skipped 00:25:726 - then start again at white line, same goes with 00:26:869 (26869|1) -

00:28:941 - skipped ln?
the synth didn't stopped there, it just bends the sound so i suggest put another ln on another column and make 00:29:084 (29084|2) - to col 4 for pr

00:34:798 - add one more note
kicks, and consistency

00:39:084 - just a simple suggestion, make 00:39:084 (39084|3,39155|1,39226|3) - 434 trill pattern as its sounds only appear on right headset (or whtv) and make 00:39:512 (39512|2,39584|0,39655|2) - to 121 as its left, same goes to other sound that similar
you know the i dea is when you hear a sound only in right ear, make only your right hand plays it, same goes with left. I found this one interesting since i only found 2 column trill pattern on this part in this diff

01:24:655 - sounds 1/8 to me but nvm, would be bad if its 1/8 snapped

01:29:226 (89226|1,89655|0,90084|3,90369|0) - make them 1/4 ln?
bend sound is just 1/4 long i think

01:31:512 - if you're not against 3 note minijack, you can make this 3 notes minijack

01:33:798 - again, 1/8 to me

01:45:655 - kick, as mentioned before

01:49:941 - also mentioned before

01:52:084 - can you make this part exactly the same emphasized as on UHD diff?

can't find much thing tbh, this diff is good already
good luck
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

chiptune <3

requested NM from my q
1234

SHD
00:25:726 (25726|2) - i feels like didn't here anything here
1/4 background sound stopped at 00:25:655 - and skipped 00:25:726 - then start again at white line, same goes with 00:26:869 (26869|1) - i hear the first one but didnt hear the one at 00:26:869 (26869|1) -

00:28:941 - skipped ln?
the synth didn't stopped there, it just bends the sound so i suggest put another ln on another column and make 00:29:084 (29084|2) - to col 4 for pr

00:34:798 - add one more note
kicks, and consistency

00:39:084 - just a simple suggestion, make 00:39:084 (39084|3,39155|1,39226|3) - 434 trill pattern as its sounds only appear on right headset (or whtv) and make 00:39:512 (39512|2,39584|0,39655|2) - to 121 as its left, same goes to other sound that similar
you know the i dea is when you hear a sound only in right ear, make only your right hand plays it, same goes with left. I found this one interesting since i only found 2 column trill pattern on this part in this diff

01:24:655 - sounds 1/8 to me but nvm, would be bad if its 1/8 snapped yeah 1/8 would be ??:D??

01:29:226 (89226|1,89655|0,90084|3,90369|0) - make them 1/4 ln?
bend sound is just 1/4 long i think

01:31:512 - if you're not against 3 note minijack, you can make this 3 notes minijack 3 minijack is too hard imo, even this minijack is hard enough imo.

01:33:798 - again, 1/8 to me

01:45:655 - kick, as mentioned before

01:49:941 - also mentioned before

01:52:084 - can you make this part exactly the same emphasized as on UHD diff? oki and change UHD diff a bit

can't find much thing tbh, this diff is good already
good luck
Oscyy
also UHD's LNs are cool
Polytetral
Fixing Mods
Green for accepted, Blue for 'open for discussion', Red for rejected (dm if there is a strong opinion against the rejected point + justification)


AlisceaSparku wrote:

sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[HD]
  1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible. taken
  2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
  3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
  4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
  5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
    edited it to 232 and 323 alternatively for all 4 suggestions, wonder if it's ok now?
    on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples
    that was for the layering of harder difficulties. glad you thought it was nice :D

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff
sorryyyyy i was late to fix the mod D: all good owo)b
ExNeko
Hi

1|2|3|4
[Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"]
00:09:512 (9512|2) - This clap sound inappropriate, I suggest you replace it
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make a LN
00:15:655 (15655|2,15941|2) - ^
00:45:369 (45369|1,45441|0) - col12, look more neater
00:49:655 (49655|0) - make a LN
00:54:941 (54941|1) - col1
00:57:369 (57369|0,57369|1) - exchange
02:01:226 (121226|0) - add a note for cymbals
[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
00:42:941 (42941|0) - to col2, Because col1 is already full 00:42:369 (42369|0,42512|0,42798|0) -
01:01:512 (61512|2,61655|1) - exchange
01:04:012 (64012|1,64084|2) - ^Easier to read
01:08:084 (68084|0,68084|3,68155|2) - I'm not recommend to use LNs here
01:12:869 (72869|1,72941|2) - exchange
02:02:655 (122655|2,122726|3) - ^
02:10:084 (130084|3,130119|2,130155|1,130191|0,130226|3,130262|2,130298|1,130334|0) -
02:13:798 (133798|2,133941|3) - exchange
nice song
Good luck!
lenpai
hey this map sucks cause no 6k pls nuke

nm
00:08:084 - should be the same as 00:03:512 - so that the density would be used twice
00:09:941 (9941|1,10084|3,11084|1,11226|3) - consider this so 00:12:226 - should look like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589638
00:13:512 (13512|3,13655|1,14512|3,14655|1) - consider this again so 00:15:655 (15655|1,15798|3) - should have the same flow
00:16:798 (16798|1,16941|3) - likewise
00:17:226 - the trilly sound demends trills to be used so do that here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589650
00:24:941 - do not forget that this is an nm diff so you would actually want to minimize ln release difficulty. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589666 check this. The LNs are indeed overextended but this is an nm diff as such ln usages are actually encouraged so that they wont be too hard to pull off.
00:28:655 (28655|3) - 1/2 longer same reasoning
00:32:084 - ^ so yeah just do the same for the rest of the map
00:36:512 (36512|0) - extend to 00:38:084 - to decrease dead air
00:38:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589684 considering how hard the first kiai will turn out to be. You might as well buff this super simple section to something like this
00:48:655 - the disconnect the differentiate the sounds is kinda important to do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589691
00:50:369 - MAJOR SUGGESTION: hold off from the weird lns for now. Just keep the mostly rice nature of the structure this 1/4 LN thing contrasts too much from the previous bit. that also applies to 01:08:655 - . Just catch up with the weird lns on the second kiai. Progresses better imo
01:06:941 - fuk ur copypasta apply the same as previous
01:18:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589716 dood keep the difficulty
01:20:084 - the fact that you dropped the difficulty here despite the intensity of the song not changing is unsettling please buff.
01:24:655 - like previous
01:35:798 (95798|0) - ln-ify cause synth + 1/4
01:36:084 - needs buffing too
01:38:369 - same thing with the lns also since this section is a second repeat you might as well start sneaking in a few doubles. Climax theory dont argue with it.
01:47:369 (107369|0) - same extension as previous
01:49:798 - fuk your copypasta smh
01:52:084 - very odd choice of layering. Stick with the lead lns but this time make the releases accurate
02:05:798 - to 02:07:798 - buff. youre cutting too much slack with the difficulty
02:05:512 - btw because of climax theory u should add a note here. add 2 ALTERNATIVELY, YOU CAN START DOING THIS STARTING IN THE SECOND HALF OF THE KIAI THAT IS 02:28:655 -
02:09:655 (129655|0) - extend by 1/1 to cover the 1/4 drums
02:14:655 - add 2 like the second suggestion above
02:15:798 - add 3 ^
02:16:941 - add 4 ^
02:17:512 - add 2 ^
02:18:798 - double up the lns cause you can add a similar ln at 1

too much copypasta apply what is done in the first half of the kiai to the second half

02:47:226 - add a 1/1 pedal at col 1
02:48:084 - this is how you end a map http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589747

god i never expected modding nm this long ill do the other diffs soon (tm)
Mirea
NM request as requested in Modding Qu'eue'

NM
00:28:655 (28655|3) - extend to 00:29:084 - ? the sound is getting slow from 00:28:941 -

01:39:512 (99512|3) - extend to 01:39:941 - same reason as above


so here im actually felt bored to hear the song after mod the MX one lol

MX
00:15:655 (15655|2,15798|1,15941|2) - replace them to LNs? since its different melodies and has long pitch

00:19:226 (19226|0) - replace to LN? the same sound as 00:19:084 (19084|3) -

00:23:798 (23798|2) - ^

00:25:512 - should be 1 note only for consistency, u didnt map 2 notes for those snare sound since beginning

00:26:084 - ^

00:47:369 (47369|0,47584|0) - i dont think its a good idea to put them stacks, check > 00:46:226 (46226|1,46441|2) - 00:45:084 (45084|1,45298|2) -
00:47:512 - suggestion > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590473

00:48:441 (48441|3,48512|2,48584|1) - move them one column to left? more balance imo

00:54:941 (54941|1) - move to col 1 for hand balance

00:58:369 (58369|1) - move to col 1? its obviously has a huge difference pitch with 00:58:369 (58369|1) - the pitch here is getting loud
also check > 00:58:084 (58084|1,58369|1,58655|1,58798|1) -

01:01:512 (61512|2,61798|3) - i prefer to put them at the same column, its slightly different, i heard

01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) - move to another column? to avoid 01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) -

01:39:798 - put a LN? i heard a sound here

02:01:655 (121655|1,121941|1) - better if u separate them

02:05:084 (125084|3,125298|3) - ^

02:30:655 (150655|2,150941|3) - arrange in the same column, same as the one above

02:33:012 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590512
similar with 02:34:155 -

Goodluck <3
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz

ExNeko wrote:

Hi

1|2|3|4
[Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"]
00:09:512 (9512|2) - This clap sound inappropriate, I suggest you replace it wat i put it there for the main sound.
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make a LN I want to keep it all rice there to emphasize LN at 00:18:369 - and later
00:15:655 (15655|2,15941|2) - ^ ^
00:45:369 (45369|1,45441|0) - col12, look more neater ok
00:49:655 (49655|0) - make a LN ok
00:54:941 (54941|1) - col1 change the pattern there instead
00:57:369 (57369|0,57369|1) - exchange ok
02:01:226 (121226|0) - add a note for cymbals ok
[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
00:42:941 (42941|0) - to col2, Because col1 is already full 00:42:369 (42369|0,42512|0,42798|0) - swap 00:43:512 (43512|2,43512|0) - column instead to follow pr
01:01:512 (61512|2,61655|1) - exchange ok
01:04:012 (64012|1,64084|2) - ^Easier to read ok
01:08:084 (68084|0,68084|3,68155|2) - I'm not recommend to use LNs here i use LN here to match the continuous woop sound and burst.
01:12:869 (72869|1,72941|2) - exchange
02:02:655 (122655|2,122726|3) - ^
02:10:084 (130084|3,130119|2,130155|1,130191|0,130226|3,130262|2,130298|1,130334|0) - ??
02:13:798 (133798|2,133941|3) - exchange following pr
nice song
Good luck! Thanks

Lenfried- wrote:

hey this map sucks cause no 6k pls nuke

nm
00:08:084 - should be the same as 00:03:512 - so that the density would be used twice ok
00:09:941 (9941|1,10084|3,11084|1,11226|3) - consider this so 00:12:226 - should look like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589638 ok
00:13:512 (13512|3,13655|1,14512|3,14655|1) - consider this again so 00:15:655 (15655|1,15798|3) - should have the same flow ^
00:16:798 (16798|1,16941|3) - likewise ^
00:17:226 - the trilly sound demends trills to be used so do that here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589650 ok
00:24:941 - do not forget that this is an nm diff so you would actually want to minimize ln release difficulty. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589666 check this. The LNs are indeed overextended but this is an nm diff as such ln usages are actually encouraged so that they wont be too hard to pull off. I'm not quite sure it's allow to do that :thinking: oki kinda fix rn
00:28:655 (28655|3) - 1/2 longer same reasoning
00:32:084 - ^ so yeah just do the same for the rest of the map ok, hope i dont miss some >_>
00:36:512 (36512|0) - extend to 00:38:084 - to decrease dead air oki
00:38:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589684 considering how hard the first kiai will turn out to be. You might as well buff this super simple section to something like this tfw you say this but the link is actually not at your 'this' ok
00:48:655 - the disconnect the differentiate the sounds is kinda important to do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589691
00:50:369 - MAJOR SUGGESTION: hold off from the weird lns for now. Just keep the mostly rice nature of the structure this 1/4 LN thing contrasts too much from the previous bit. that also applies to 01:08:655 - . Just catch up with the weird lns on the second kiai. Progresses better imo OWO:
a bit more discussion in RRM and fixed now

01:06:941 - fuk ur copypasta apply the same as previous ^
01:18:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589716 dood keep the difficulty ok
01:20:084 - the fact that you dropped the difficulty here despite the intensity of the song not changing is unsettling please buff.
01:24:655 - like previous
01:35:798 (95798|0) - ln-ify cause synth + 1/4 oki
01:36:084 - needs buffing too
01:38:369 - same thing with the lns also since this section is a second repeat you might as well start sneaking in a few doubles. Climax theory dont argue with it.
01:47:369 (107369|0) - same extension as previous
01:49:798 - fuk your copypasta smh smh
01:52:084 - very odd choice of layering. Stick with the lead lns but this time make the releases accurate i still kinda want to keep it to make this part here continuously harder in each diff tho, might fix later, let me think
02:05:798 - to 02:07:798 - buff. youre cutting too much slack with the difficulty
02:05:512 - btw because of climax theory u should add a note here. add 2 ALTERNATIVELY, YOU CAN START DOING THIS STARTING IN THE SECOND HALF OF THE KIAI THAT IS 02:28:655 - umm k taking the first solution
02:09:655 (129655|0) - extend by 1/1 to cover the 1/4 drums ok
02:14:655 - add 2 like the second suggestion above ^
02:15:798 - add 3 ^
02:16:941 - add 4 ^
02:17:512 - add 2 ^
02:18:798 - double up the lns cause you can add a similar ln at 1 ok

too much copypasta apply what is done in the first half of the kiai to the second half

02:47:226 - add a 1/1 pedal at col 1
02:48:084 - this is how you end a map http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589747
uggh too lazy to reply "ok" to every mod there but well basically i accept all >_>
god i never expected modding nm this long ill do the other diffs soon (tm) owo i'm waiting for more nuke owo

chouyaa wrote:

NM request as requested in Modding Qu'eue'

NM
00:28:655 (28655|3) - extend to 00:29:084 - ? the sound is getting slow from 00:28:941 - already fix in len's mod

01:39:512 (99512|3) - extend to 01:39:941 - same reason as above ^


so here im actually felt bored to hear the song after mod the MX one lol

MX
00:15:655 (15655|2,15798|1,15941|2) - replace them to LNs? since its different melodies and has long pitch I want to keep it all rice there to emphasize LN at 00:18:369 - and later
00:19:226 (19226|0) - replace to LN? the same sound as 00:19:084 (19084|3) - i map LN there for the kinda-heavy-chordy(?) back sound there

00:23:798 (23798|2) - ^ ^

00:25:512 - should be 1 note only for consistency, u didnt map 2 notes for those snare sound since beginning ok

00:26:084 - ^ ok

00:47:369 (47369|0,47584|0) - i dont think its a good idea to put them stacks, check > 00:46:226 (46226|1,46441|2) - 00:45:084 (45084|1,45298|2) -
00:47:512 - suggestion > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590473 changed

00:48:441 (48441|3,48512|2,48584|1) - move them one column to left? more balance imo ok

00:54:941 (54941|1) - move to col 1 for hand balance changed already

00:58:369 (58369|1) - move to col 1? its obviously has a huge difference pitch with 00:58:369 (58369|1) - the pitch here is getting loud
also check > 00:58:084 (58084|1,58369|1,58655|1,58798|1) - ok

01:01:512 (61512|2,61798|3) - i prefer to put them at the same column, its slightly different, i heard its pretty different imo

01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) - move to another column? to avoid 01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) - ok

01:39:798 - put a LN? i heard a sound here ok

02:01:655 (121655|1,121941|1) - better if u separate them ok

02:05:084 (125084|3,125298|3) - ^ ok

02:30:655 (150655|2,150941|3) - arrange in the same column, same as the one above same as above

02:33:012 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590512 ok
similar with 02:34:155 -

Goodluck <3 thanks owo)b
Meiju
Yo

Modsu
[UHD]
00:08:084 (8084|3) - move to another column because sound isn't same as 00:06:941 (6941|3)
00:22:512 - reppatern notes here, so it doesn't look like previous same one (00:13:369 - )
00:34:084 - looks like it should be triple
00:38:941 - woah, looks too brutal for this part, maybe smth like https://puu.sh/yqGqa/194b287ed6.png
01:05:226 (65226|2) - what is this 1/4 LN for? Make simple note
01:06:369 (66369|1,66941|3) - same
01:08:084 - damn, why noodles, make 1/8 burst! https://puu.sh/yqGKo/9296305667.png - beautiful, isn't it?
01:10:941 - double for kick
01:13:226 (73226|2) - make simple note
01:16:941 (76941|1) - i guess it should be 1/4 LN for the same sound as 01:16:655 (76655|3,76798|0,77084|3)
01:29:941 - it should be double instead of 01:29:655
01:31:512 - instead of 01:30:798 - ^
01:38:941 - here should be 1/2 LN as you did before (00:28:084 - )
01:39:798 - also here should be the same thing as 00:28:941
btw, these two part looks like Ctrl+C Ctrl+V, can you do Ctrl+H at least xd
02:18:941 - make burst OwO
02:37:226 - OwO
02:46:084 - make 1/4 LN

[SHD]
01:07:512 - Ehh, just make here 12 34 chord trill
01:15:512 - looks the same as 00:57:226 - make mirror please
02:08:084 - 02:44:655 - are you serious
01:37:941 - chord trill

[SC]
00:00:084 - 00:01:226 - 00:02:369 - would be nice if these chords will stay at same columns
00:06:941 - double
01:09:226 - 01:10:369 - 01:11:512 - and etc. - add doubles for kicks
01:15:512 - uhh.. it copy of 00:57:226 , make smth difference
01:24:655 - use double LNs to highlight this "grrrgrrg" sound https://puu.sh/yqIU9/4202fb6b03.jpg - like this owo
02:20:798 (140798|2,141012|0) - they should be on same column
02:21:941 (141941|1,142155|3) - 02:37:941 (157941|1,158155|2) - 02:39:084 (159084|3,159298|2) - same

[MX]
00:18:512 - 00:19:655 - 00:20:798 - wow you used 3 times in a row the same column for jacks, move some of them
00:38:369 - https://puu.sh/yqJl3/22bd8cf685.jpg - feels better
01:28:512 (88512|2) - this LN should be extended to 01:28:798 - and then 01:28:655 (88655|1) - remove
01:29:584 - 01:30:012 - 01:30:226 - 01:30:298 - 01:30:726 - 01:31:155 - why don't you map here main melody as you did before :thinking:
01:47:512 - add note?

[HD]
00:03:512 (3512|0) - move to column 4, because different sounds
00:11:655 - 00:12:798 - 00:13:941 - 00:15:084 - why did you mapped jacks on the same column 4 times in a row, move the second pair (00:13:941 - ) on another column
00:18:512 - same here with 4th column, why did you do this xd
00:50:369 - new part starts, make double
00:59:512 - same here
01:08:655 - same
01:33:798 - https://puu.sh/yqKJB/a9af5217cb.png
01:36:798 - bg sound interrupt, 01:36:512 (96512|0) - end this LN here
01:37:226 (97226|1) - extend to 01:37:655 -
01:52:084 - damn it's so confusing. Please map in this part main melody
02:10:369 - 02:19:512 - 02:28:655 - 02:37:798 - doubles

[NM]
00:26:798 - https://puu.sh/yqL3L/516d4d883b.png - better fits to the music
00:28:655 (28655|3) - end this LN 00:28:941 - here
00:32:084 - ugh i don't understand why need you to extend these LNs so much, they ends 00:32:369 -00:32:798 - 00:33:226 - 00:33:655 - and etc. here, and don't even say that it will be too hard for newbies, it will not be owo
00:47:512 (47512|2) - move this LN to another column to avoid repeat with 00:46:369
00:51:512 - ehh why you need to make everything harder, https://puu.sh/yqLji/5e69765929.jpg - make this and in another same places the same (00:52:655 - 00:53:798 - and etc.)
01:24:655 (84655|1) - end this LN 01:24:941 - here (and do same with other same LNs)
01:34:084 - 01:34:512 - end LNs and start new 1/2 LNs
01:39:798 - end LN here
01:43:226 - you know what to do owo
01:43:226 - https://puu.sh/yqLxb/f02760d4be.png - much better

Really good map! Last diff is so fun to play owo. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Mentholzzz
owo

Mage wrote:

Yo

Modsu
[UHD]
00:08:084 (8084|3) - move to another column because sound isn't same as 00:06:941 (6941|3) move the first one instead
00:22:512 - repatern notes here, so it doesn't look like previous same one (00:13:369 - ) ok
00:34:084 - looks like it should be triple I cant hear any cymbal/clap there tho
00:38:941 - woah, looks too brutal for this part, maybe smth like https://puu.sh/yqGqa/194b287ed6.png It's fine for me tbh, and i use LN here for woops sound and make it inverse since it is suppose to be dense part. (and to make map Ln-y)
01:05:226 (65226|2) - what is this 1/4 LN for? Make simple note the sharp bell sound
01:06:369 (66369|1,66941|3) - same ^
01:08:084 - damn, why noodles, make 1/8 burst! https://puu.sh/yqGKo/9296305667.png - beautiful, isn't it?
01:10:941 - double for kick woops
01:13:226 (73226|2) - make simple note ^
01:16:941 (76941|1) - i guess it should be 1/4 LN for the same sound as 01:16:655 (76655|3,76798|0,77084|3) ok
01:29:941 - it should be double instead of 01:29:655 double here is for synth
01:31:512 - instead of 01:30:798 - ^ ^
01:38:941 - here should be 1/2 LN as you did before (00:28:084 - ) ok
01:39:798 - also here should be the same thing as 00:28:941
btw, these two part looks like Ctrl+C Ctrl+V, can you do Ctrl+H at least xd its the exact sound tho xd
02:18:941 - make burst OwO
02:37:226 - OwO
02:46:084 - make 1/4 LN

[SHD]
01:07:512 - Ehh, just make here 12 34 chord trill uhhh o--ok gonna do that first and lets see how it go
01:15:512 - looks the same as 00:57:226 - make mirror please ok
02:08:084 - 02:44:655 - are you serious ok
01:37:941 - chord trill keep to emphasize 01:38:084 - and 01:38:369 -

[SC]
00:00:084 - 00:01:226 - 00:02:369 - would be nice if these chords will stay at same columns the chord are different because i change the column for doing 123 pattern
00:06:941 - double I only do double for lead sounds and/or clap , also double there make it a bit too dense imo
01:09:226 - 01:10:369 - 01:11:512 - and etc. - add doubles for kicks ^
01:15:512 - uhh.. it copy of 00:57:226 , make smth difference ok
01:24:655 - use double LNs to highlight this "grrrgrrg" sound https://puu.sh/yqIU9/4202fb6b03.jpg - like this owo nice suggestion owo)b
02:20:798 (140798|2,141012|0) - they should be on same column ok
02:21:941 (141941|1,142155|3) - 02:37:941 (157941|1,158155|2) - 02:39:084 (159084|3,159298|2) - same

[MX]
00:18:512 - 00:19:655 - 00:20:798 - wow you used 3 times in a row the same column for jacks, move some of them It's the same pitch so i put them in same place
00:38:369 - https://puu.sh/yqJl3/22bd8cf685.jpg - feels better ctrl-H your suggestion and edit a bit for pr
01:28:512 (88512|2) - this LN should be extended to 01:28:798 - and then 01:28:655 (88655|1) - remove ok
01:29:584 - 01:30:012 - 01:30:226 - 01:30:298 - 01:30:726 - 01:31:155 - why don't you map here main melody as you did before :thinking: woops
01:47:512 - add note? ok

[NM]
00:26:798 - https://puu.sh/yqL3L/516d4d883b.png - better fits to the music oki
00:28:655 (28655|3) - end this LN 00:28:941 - here those LN I extend them to make them easier
00:32:084 - ugh i don't understand why need you to extend these LNs so much, they ends 00:32:369 -00:32:798 - 00:33:226 - 00:33:655 - and etc. here, and don't even say that it will be too hard for newbies, it will not be owo I'm pretty sure im used to LN releeasing when like i can do 3.5* so i think it would be too hard here.
00:47:512 (47512|2) - move this LN to another column to avoid repeat with 00:46:369 ok
00:51:512 - ehh why you need to make everything harder, https://puu.sh/yqLji/5e69765929.jpg - make this and in another same places the same (00:52:655 - 00:53:798 - and etc.)
01:24:655 (84655|1) - end this LN 01:24:941 - here (and do same with other same LNs)
01:34:084 - 01:34:512 - end LNs and start new 1/2 LNs
01:39:798 - end LN here
01:43:226 - you know what to do owo
01:43:226 - https://puu.sh/yqLxb/f02760d4be.png - much better fixed

Really good map! Last diff is so fun to play owo. Good luck!
Polytetral
Applying Mods
Green for accepted, Blue for 'open for discussion', Red for rejected (dm if there is any strong objection with reasoning)



Mage wrote:

Yo

[HD]
00:03:512 (3512|0) - move to column 4, because different sounds fixed along with some column adjustments to make pattern more comfy for its difficulty.
00:11:655 - 00:12:798 - 00:13:941 - 00:15:084 - why did you mapped jacks on the same column 4 times in a row, move the second pair (00:13:941 - ) on another column oof, fixed
00:18:512 - same here with 4th column, why did you do this xd fixed as well, along with some column changes to fit the difficulty. Also applied this to other similar jacks in the map
00:50:369 - new part starts, make double ok
00:59:512 - same here added
01:08:655 - same also applied
01:33:798 - https://puu.sh/yqKJB/a9af5217cb.png im a bit uncertain about this as i mapped the LNs according to MX. I'm trying out your suggestion to see how it goes first, thanks for the suggestion :)
01:36:798 - bg sound interrupt, 01:36:512 (96512|0) - end this LN here unsure for same reason^ but I'll apply it for now
01:37:226 (97226|1) - extend to 01:37:655 - Missed that out whoops =w=. Fixed!
01:52:084 - damn it's so confusing. Please map in this part main melody I thought it was pretty inconsistent too since i was mostly mapping the melody throughout the diff. Remapped with consideration for column bias and PR
02:10:369 - 02:19:512 - 02:28:655 - 02:37:798 - doubles Added too
Thanks for the mod c:
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