1. Ikura Onigiri "SC" - 4Key (4.5 stars, 2238 notes)
2. Plain Onigiri "NM" - 4Key (1.99 stars, 837 notes)
3. Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD" - 4Key (2.81 stars, 1353 notes)
4. Salmon Onigiri "SHD" - 4Key (5.14 stars, 2768 notes)
5. Umeboshi Onigiri "MX" - 4Key (3.6 stars, 1768 notes)
6. Unagi Onigiri "UHD" - 4Key (5.2 stars, 2265 notes)

Garalulu Arzenvald Arzenvald Garalulu
Protastic101 Garalulu Arzenvald
Asherz007 Garalulu Arzenvald

Plain Onigiri "NM": Some juicy 1/2 stream and cute pattern...

Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD": Simple rolls and streams, all in one.

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX": Feel sick? Sour streams are here to make you feel better.

Ikura Onigiri "SC": Not challenging enough? Short LN streams are here to kill the ill-prepared.

Salmon Onigiri "SHD": Generic handstream shitfile with some more weird-but-tasty stuff inside!

Unagi Onigiri "UHD": Counterpart of Salmon Onigiri. Looooooong eel is served and superior LN skill is required.

Density Chart

Plain Onigiri "NM"
Average NPS: 6.35
Max NPS: 11
LN-Percent: 27.75%

Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD"
Average NPS: 9.59
Max NPS: 16
LN-Percent: 37.62%

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"
Average NPS: 12.58
Max NPS: 19
LN-Percent: 27.43%

Ikura Onigiri "SC"
Average NPS: 15.8
Max NPS: 23
LN-Percent: 39.47%

Salmon Onigiri "SHD"
Average NPS: 19.32
Max NPS: 28
LN-Percent: 26.05%

Unagi Onigiri "UHD"
Average NPS: 15.45
Max NPS: 27
LN-Percent: 70.29%

newbandpro wrote:

From some random modding queue

NM

00:00:084 (84|0) - 00:01:226 (1226|1) - 00:02:369 (2369|2) and so on - I think a double would be better at these parts I think only single LN here is enough
00:05:798 - You missed a note here,you could either put a double note or a LN if you rejected the previous suggestion ^
00:06:941 - You could put a note at 3 here since there's a different sound at that part as well ^
00:13:369 (13369|0) - 00:22:512 (22512|0) - The drum beats go faster at this part so a LN could be better ok
00:20:369 - 00:24:941 - There's a drum beat at that part,you could add a note I map all of that part using only single note.
00:49:655 (49655|3) - The note here is longer,you should make this a LN just like in HD ok
00:58:798 (58798|3) - End this LN at 00:59:084 ok
01:25:512 (85512|0) - End this LN at 01:25:655 ok
01:29:226 (89226|0) - Extend this one to 01:29:512 (Not going to mention these anymore,if you want to take a look at the LN's,just preview the HD diff. Most of them should be correct) ok
01:31:369 (91369|2) - If you are following the drums between 01:31:084 - 01:31:369 ,that note is a ghost noteI follow the melody there

(I forgot to add that I usually mod a single diff to the rules,sorry about that :p)
Good luck

_Stan wrote:

HD

1. 00:29:655 - Maybe you miss a LN here ( check your other hard diffs ) Oops, forgot to put that there fixed and thanks for reminder
2. 00:58:798 (58798|2) - This LN should be stop 00:59:226 - , you can play as 0.25x to check it checked, fixed
3. 01:26:155 (86155|0) - Suggest you delete it, 1) this part ( 01:24:655 - to 01:26:512 - focus on FX sound that LN means mainly, this note will be odd), 2) you did not make this like that before, inconsistent thought it was weird too... fixed
4. 01:30:084 - This LN should stop at 01:30:226 - also applied
5. 01:30:726 (90726|3) - same applied as above
6. 02:48:512 - If this LN stop at 02:48:798 - , when LN stop and hit this 02:48:798 (168798|3) - , then hit another 02:48:941 (168941|0) - you will feel the tone shift or something like that, it's cool tried out, it does give a more meticulous feel to those notes (?), also fixed!

other diff it's fine or I can not pass it sorry short mod, but it's really great, shoot a star
/o/

_Stan wrote:

Hello menthol~ From my queue

|1|2|3|4| Here we go

MX

1. 00:12:441 - It's no reason to ignore it
2. 00:21:584 - ^
3. 00:27:226 - add a note, here it's beat
4. 00:30:369 - ^

all applied owo

other diff it's fine or I can not pass it sorry short mod, but it's really great, shoot a star thanks owo

puxtu wrote:

<incoming mod>
-NM-
00:58:798 (58798|3) - is this supposed to be this long? I think it should be longer than that. Maybe put the ln tail right here 00:59:512 - something like you did here 01:03:512 (63512|2) - and here 01:07:941 (67941|3) - change the length but tail at 00:59:226 - instead, im following the synth so it should end here.
-HD-
00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too)
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right?
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) -
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here
-MX-
00:05:798 (5798|0) - why the1/2 lns stopped here? change
00:22:512 (22512|2,22655|0) - missed 1/4 ok
00:25:226 (25226|3) - same problem as HD ok
00:38:941 - don't you tink HD has more complex/difficult pattern than MX? http://puu.sh/xVuUa/f879bf726d.jpg
00:55:155 (55155|2,55298|2) - I choked on this part lolz. maybe ctrl+h this? 00:55:298 (55298|2,55369|1) - aa ok
00:56:298 (56298|1,56441|1) - *double choked* :angry:
01:35:512 (95512|0) - I think this ln is misplaced no? should start at the red line woops
02:16:869 (136869|2,137012|2) - pls do something about this ;W; fix
02:46:941 - add something to hold oki
-SC-
00:00:084 (84|0) - no 1/2 ln really? hmm
00:27:226 (27226|1,27369|2) - ignoring 1/4 beat (not to mention the sound is quite obvious) in high diff is a crime, sir >_>
01:38:084 (98084|1,98226|2) - again here sir <_<
02:46:941 (166941|3) - same issue like previous diffs ok
--

qqqant wrote:

what happened to 6k D:

Damaree wrote:

2nd modded map for my reopening of the queue
Good thing I haven't modded the last diff since its not ready. . . u should have put some notice/caution lol

SHC *SHD :^)*

1. 00:16:084 - to 00:17:941 - should use double in every red lines to highlight the main sound? dunno what sound is this lol if i add double every red line here it would be too dense so change to something else
2. 00:18:369 - this should be cybols if not mistaken. Maybe just a note here or sacrifice a note 00:18:298 - and add 00:18:369 - ok
3. 00:27:512 - ^ ok
4. 01:17:798 - 01:20:084 - cybol? keep it to make it easy to read, triple after 1/8 stream cause a minijack
5. 01:27:226 - to 01:27:655 - hmmm, miss in col4 thats fine

SC

1. 00:41:226 - till the end of 1st kiai - lemme get a grasp at this mapping style, i can seem to understand u map only double for crash in the intro and triple for kiai, but also a cybol/cyambal double? while the crash are triple? is this intentional/ur style? yes
2. 00:49:369 - actually a cybol(if not mistaken), and u actually do triple in this, but not in other parts? i do in other part too ? except some part where the note get dense i put cymbal as double only
3. 02:01:226 - till the end of 2nd kiai - same as my 1st
4. 02:18:798 (138798|2) - much better to move to col1 to represent the sound and match w/02:18:441 (138441|3,138584|3,138726|3,138869|3) - and move 02:18:941 (138941|0) - somewherefix to smth else

Only that short since the structure seems fine, its just I dont get ur style so I didnt press anything. . . Well GLthanks owo)b

tailsdk wrote:

heyo M4M from your que

My first mod on LN map think it went well

UHD

you can make this one OD 8.8 if you change the other one then they will be a challenge in their own ways OD 8.8 is too much, maybe i can raise it up to like 8.2,but more than that is pure evil. ok this is suppose to be for SHD well OD 8.8 with some short LN stream is still too hard imo, will see more opinion from other first.
maybe lower the HP a little to 8.8
00:15:941 (15941|3) - this note extend to 00:16:084 - ok
00:32:369 (32369|1,32798|2,33226|0,33655|3) - i dont know if these 3 LN's have a sound maybe add single notes for the sound instead change to single notes
if you want to keep them then this one should be an LN aswell 00:35:941 (35941|1) -
00:43:084 (43084|1,43369|2,43655|1) - what sound is there? some sound i cant describe >_>, i put it there to fill the gap
00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend this one? ok
01:03:369 - add an LN here missing sound woops
01:19:369 (79369|1) - extend
01:42:369 (102369|2) - move to 01:42:387 - ??
i question these as i did last time 01:43:226 (103226|1,103655|2,104084|0,104512|3) -
these 2 notes if not removed above should be ln's 01:45:512 (105512|1,106798|1) -
02:14:226 - add LN here
02:32:512 - add LN here

SHD

00:13:441 - add note here i dont want to add minijack there so i will keep this
00:22:584 - add note here ^
00:28:226 - add note here
00:33:941 - add note here
00:36:655 (36655|0,36655|1) - why is this a double
00:49:655 - maybe add and LN here or map the background sounds
01:38:084 - make double the sound is different here to i want to make it different than other
01:47:512 (107512|1,107512|0) - again why is this a double

riunosk wrote:

helo
from mod queue
1234
modding only those per requested

ESS SEE // yummy onigiri

00:12:798 (12798|2,12941|2) - seems rather high pitched, maybe move to col 4?
00:28:941 - this sound sounds continued, rather than stopped so i suggest adding an LN here to emphasize it
00:30:512 - suggested pattern to reduce focus on col 1
00:37:084 (37084|3,37226|3,37512|2,37655|2,37941|1,38084|1) - sounds increasing in pitch, probably better to flip
00:52:155 - missing note? the sound there is the background synth, which i didn't map it
00:53:298 - ^ ^
00:57:226 (57226|2,57369|2) - seems rather awkward
01:41:512 - same as before
01:47:941 - ^
01:59:512 - suggested pattern for pr
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:18:941 (138941|2,138941|0) - pretty awkward to start off this jumpstream with a 13 it's fine imo
Pretty good LN chart, but second kiai seems very similar to the first, try varying it slightly

SUPUR HURD DUFFUCULTY // salmonella

(unrelated) 00:17:941 - oh no i can't imagine UHD now
00:41:226 (41226|0,41369|0,41512|0) - unnecessary stack
(unrelated) 00:45:226 - seems pretty fun to play
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:36:655 (156655|0,156798|0,156941|0,157084|0,157226|0,157369|0,157512|0,157655|0,157798|0) - quite the long anchor you got there
oishii chart

im hungry for sushi onigiri dammit both of them now

ULTERA HARDEU DIFFUCOLTY // unagi usagi

(unrelated) next ranked map to have inverse inc
(unrelated) 00:25:226 - INVERSE O BOI
01:18:941 (78941|0,79084|0,79226|0,79369|0,79512|0) - this anchor seems unnecessary
also the sv seems a bit awkward, can't really give any suggestions since im trash at svs
02:16:726 - col 4 seems to have more notes than the rest i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:19:655 - ^col 1 i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:26:834 (146834|2) - this note seems rather squished between the two LNs, some skins will make this extremely hard to read so consider changing this a little, not really sure how myself
02:43:726 - col 2 feels very empty compared to the others
LNhellholyshit

great song choice and noodles
gud luk for renk

Acnos wrote:

From my queue

0|1|2|3

General :

1. Check Aimod u.u

o about hitsound ? , i will fix them when i can find sample qwq
 Salmon Onigiri "SHD" :

1. 00:20:226 (20226|1) - I think that maybe you can change it for LN by the sound
2. 01:22:369 - where is the double? D:

 Unagi Onigiri "UHD":

1. 00:16:441 (16441|3,16584|0) - shouldn't these be like these 00:16:155 (16155|2,16298|2) - ?
2. 01:52:655 (112655|1) - double pls
3. 02:01:226 (121226|1,121226|2) - triplet? in SHD, you put triplet

wow, your map is perfect for practice LNs, I love it e.e
If my mod don't help, don't give me kudosu u.u

Good Luck and Take a star!

[B A D] wrote:

oo nice song
0|1|2|3

Salmon Curry

<_< I thought this is for salmon shd diff and like "wtf there nothing there"
00:06:941 (6941|3,7084|1,7226|2) - Change to 1,2,3 ok
00:39:798 (39798|3,39941|3) - These two are different sound moved
01:04:869 (64869|3,64941|0) - Suggest pattern: ctrl+h

ctrl-H make it kinda right heavy because it will create minitrill

Nato Makizushi

00:20:369 (20369|3) - Turn into normal note? change to LN with longer length instead
00:24:941 (24941|3) - End at 00:25:226 ok
01:33:226 (93226|0) - Move it to 2 or 3 to fit with the pitch ok
02:41:512 (161512|2,161512|3) - Since you map this sound previously as a single, make this a single tooi map this with double all the kiai ?

Hope this help and gl for ranking

zawz wrote:

NM from my queue
sorry for the delay

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|

MX

00:08:084 (8084|2) - LN here
00:08:655 - Why didn't you express the "Huh?!" here ? It goes together with the ringing at 00:05:798 (5798|0) - so you should either express both or none. Same goes for other difficulties i don't want to put the LN for vocal here. the "huh" sound isn't that important to map imo and the sound din't snap perfectly also.
00:15:798 (15798|1,15941|2) - Flip for pitch
00:39:084 (39084|0,39155|1,39226|2,39369|0,39512|3,39584|2,39655|1,39798|3,39941|0,40012|1,40084|2,40226|0,40369|3,40441|2,40512|1,40655|3,40798|2,40869|1,40941|0) - Flip these. They're opposite to panning. ummm, it is on the right side for me, idk, maybe i use the wrong side of headphone or smth lol.
00:42:655 (42655|3,42941|3,43226|3,43512|3,43798|3,44084|3,44369|3,44655|3,44941|3,45226|3,45512|3) - that's tapping the beat way too many times
01:06:941 - LNs here should be like this
01:07:512 (67512|3,67584|0,67655|2,67726|0,67798|3) - That's too hard to read compared to the rest. Move 01:07:584 (67584|0) to 2
01:32:584 (92584|3,92655|0,92726|3) - Feels weird placed offbeat. Move 01:32:726 (92726|3) - to 3
02:00:798 (120798|0) - Make this double or remove one of these 02:01:084 (121084|3,121084|2)
02:17:798 - same deal as 01:06:941
02:18:441 (138441|0) - move to 2
02:28:369 - Since you've expressed previous drum rolls, express this one too
02:36:084 - again 01:06:941

Quite fun and unusual

Edit: HP 9 and 9.2 are too high for the amount of LNs SHD and UHD have. ok nerf down the HP a bit, i set the high HP to prevent people mashing it /or/ pretend the LN is a normal js.

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

greatest feature artist map ever played

MX

the first is also in 02:05:226 (125226|0)

1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 -
5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) -
7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song
11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 -
12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick

AlisceaSparku wrote:

sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[SC]

1. 00:01:084 (1084|2) - I would really prefer this note to be in a different column with 00:00:798 (798|2) - as both follows a different sound in terms of pitch. However, I don't really see this as a clean solution. A lot of rearranging would be required so, it's up to you whether you want to rearrange notes or not. gonna keep as it is for now, since i don't find its really a problem
2. 00:09:941 - you can make the kick and the snare follow the pitch of that "arcade-y" sound (sorry not sure what its called D:). Here's an example, however I would prefer the doubles to be a [2][4] and [1][3] (which will require a lot of rearranging as well.) ok
3. 00:19:655 (19655|2,19798|2) - I'd prefer these to be placed at col. 2 (along with a few rearrangements.) because from 00:18:512 - until 00:22:084 - , all jacks were in the same column. (basically, for variation) ok
4. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - these notes can be placed to a different column, for example at 4. The sound these notes are following are higher in pitch than what was played in 00:20:798 - and 00:20:941 - , 00:19:655 - and 00:19:798 - , etc. ok
5. 00:25:869 - add note? delete other 1/4 instead
6. 00:44:941 (44941|2,45084|3) - I think these sliders should change columns? so that they follow pitch relevancy. ok
7. 00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend to 00:49:941 - ? seems better this way ok
8. 01:07:512 - compared to 02:18:369 - , personally I find the first one a difficulty spike so... up to you change the first pattern

[MX]

1. 00:03:369 - This should follow pitch relevancy as well as to stick to your previous patterns. ok
2. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - same suggestion stated in SC ok
   didn't really find anything else tbh, seems like a solid difficulty

[HD]

1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible.
2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
   on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples

[NM]

1. 00:51:512 (51512|0,51726|1,51941|2) - i recommend to make these ones sliders so that players can be clearly informed that theres the possibility of transitioning to a new snap. too lazy to state each one of these xd ok
   nothing else to state. only a NM diff anyway

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff

Syadow- wrote:

mark for mod sorry for delay :"""0

[NM]

1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 - change to shorter LN
5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) - it didn't have drum there
7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song would keep since it follow the background sound
11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 - add note at 02:27:798 - instead
12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick

deadbill wrote:

Hello

Umeboshi Onigiri MX

00:12:226 - pattern suggestion, imo in order to make the pattern comfortable you can make the stairs in one direction .-.



00:13:369 - same sound with 00:22:512 - , considering either to add a note or delete a note on 00:22:512 -
OR, make 00:22:512 - consistents with 00:27:084 - by adding a note on 00:22:655 - but the problem is you are using two notes for kicks in this section
while on the latter you are using two notes for snares. This is also a consistency matter that might have to be considered.
Because a player might end up not knowing which note for which sound, that could affect enjoyment in their playthrough (and now im exaggerating )

add a note at 00:13:441 - , i miss that, btw in the first part, i try to use single for all sound there except the jump every big(?) white line.

00:43:512 - might want to check its consistency. please compare it with 00:41:226 - i do the same thing tho, jump for both kick and snare,
single for the rest and LN for the melody.
00:48:084 - why stop using LN so sudden for main melody with 1/2 length? :C , u can add an LN here 00:48:084 - (please) ok
also 00:46:369 (46369|3,46655|3,46941|3,47226|3,47512|3,47798|3) - might want to shuffle ok


welp the reason is as i mentioned above,
add a note for each
00:57:226 - 00:57:655 - 00:58:084 - because you are using 2 notes for kicks and snares in the previous section and the next section

as the same for this section 01:15:512 -


umm you might want to use different pattern..
compare this 01:22:369 - with this 01:31:512 -
8 different tones and 6 different tones for the latter. and length of those notes is different for each section.
that kind of pattern cannot represent those differences >.> kinda changes(?0 for now, hope it works now

for this section 01:38:369 - through 01:42:369 -
as mentioned above, be consistent with how many note for each snare and kick ok fixed

the rest is fine, goodluck o/




ps. are you sure for using kiai that much? .-.

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM Request from my modding queue.

4K:1|2|3|4

[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]

1. 00:33:941 - You need one more note here for the drum sound, so you can try this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435588 change to something instead for pr but add the double
2. 00:34:798 - And also here too,so if you apply my previous mod, add a note on col4 then. uhh i think you mean 00:34:941 -
3. 00:53:798 - to 00:54:369 - If you want to fully represent the pitch relevancy, try this way to rearrange your LNs then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435593 ok
4. 01:44:798 - Here is the same problem as 00:33:941 - How about trying a different way to rework the patterns? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435599 ^
5. 01:45:655 - Here is the same as 00:34:798 -, and also add a note on col4 for the drum sound. ^
6. 02:27:512 - to 02:28:655 - In this bar you are suddenly raising the difficulty in my opinion because you are using 1/8 patterns for nearly the whole bar. However, for most 1/8 sounds before you are just ignoreing them to catch some easier 1/4 or 1/2 melodic sounds. I think this way should also be applied here. My solution is, 02:27:512 - to 02:28:084 - for the first half of this bar, try to avoid using 1/8 patterns but just catch those 1/2 melodic sounds. The second half you can just keep them as it is now. Here is a way to rearrange them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435613 change to something else to make it *a bit* harder than your but not as hard as the old one
7. This is a very decent chart. I can't see any big problems inside it.

[Salmon Onigiri "SHD"]

1. 00:25:298 (25298|1,26441|2) - I don't really think there are actually sounds there. You may slow down to check if I am right but I prefer you to delete them sicne there are no sounds for me. o yeah i miss that >w>
2. As what you did in 00:33:798 - , triple note for heavier snare, I do think on these lines with heavier snares: 00:34:512 - 00:34:941 - 00:36:084 - you will still need triple notes. oki
3. I would really prefer you to delete this 00:48:155 (48155|2) - even if there are sounds here because you have been catching a more obvious melody line around these bars with short 1/4 LNs, and here indeed has no such obvious melody sound but only the previous weaker one. With this note your focus here may be broken in my opinion, and what's more, why not giving players a small rest from 1/4 handstreams that continue for many bars? ummm. okii
4. 00:50:084 - Here is another heavier snare you used to make triple note with, so how about moving 00:50:155 (50155|1) - this to col3 and add one on 00:50:084 - in col2? oki
5. 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - I still don't like these notes mixing with all 1/4 LNs. The reasons go with 00:48:155 (48155|2) - this note, and deleting them will definitely make your patterns neater. ^
6. 01:06:441 (66441|1) - The same idea as 00:48:155 (48155|2) - , deleting it for clearer focus. ^
7. 01:13:298 (73298|3,73726|1,74155|1,74441|2,74869|3) - The same idea as 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - ^
8. 01:21:941 - 01:22:084 - Add one more note on each line to keep your pattern of catching drum sounds consistent.I prefer this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435680 woops forgot
9. 01:23:512 (83512|1) - Moving this to col3 will relieve a pressure caused by 01:23:512 (83512|1,83655|1,83726|1) - this 3-note stack. ok
10. 01:32:655 (92655|3) - Moving this to col3 will do the same thing as above 01:23:512 (83512|1) - ok
11. 01:37:941 - to 01:38:369 - I think this way can represent the music better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435697, as 01:38:084 - a triple here for heavier drum really keeps your pattern consistent and the double notes for weaker drums are still necessary for me. ok and also add a note to the last before the LN for the crash
12. 01:42:369 - Here you may also need a triple note for the heavier snare. ok
13. 01:45:369 - 01:45:798 - 01:46:941 - Still need triple notes on these lines for heavy snares. ^
14. 02:05:869 (125869|0,126298|2,126726|2,127012|1,127441|0) - Deleting them as the reasons for 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -, clearer focus in short. ^
15. 02:17:298 (137298|1) - The same idea as above, deleting for better focus. ^
16. 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) - Still the same idea, deleting for better focus. ^
17. 02:27:798 (147798|2) - I know this LN is for melody, but don't you think that this LN pattern is broken too much? I mean, for a single LN standing here between 1/8, it makes players feel weird at first glance. It is even better to just delete it and leave that inteval empty for some while, which may also give players a short rest for preparation of next wave of 1/8 patterns.
18. 02:35:584 (155584|2) - The same idea as 02:17:298 (137298|1) -, deleting for better focus. ^
19. 02:42:441 (162441|3,163298|1,163584|2,164012|3) - The same idea as 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) -, deleting for better focus. ^
20. Well, you have really decent LN use in this difficulty. I appreciate your effort!

That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!

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00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play alright owo)b
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on also accepted
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd didn't notice this - nub mapper here owo
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too) I considered before but didnt use LN as I was following up with the MX difficulty... it didnt have LN in the same place
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player rejected because i tried mapping the melody only for that part
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right? didnt notice before, added!
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg taken
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) - didnt notice that either =w= applied
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here alright
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column also accepted
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg changed to be the same
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash same as above
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here HAHAHA i was being inconsistent, fixed
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