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R3 Music Box - Sugar Song to Bitter Step [Taiko]

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DDMythical
you're right

it's just my ego that is causing every chart of yours to be a mirror of someone elses difficulty on a set

first time i just passed it off as a co-incidence but this is like the 3rd/4th time now

seriously
Caput Mortuum
We're talking about this diff, and the part you claim I copied.
DDMythical
whoosh
Caput Mortuum
Cheers.
Jonarwhal
ding
Topic Starter
Poii
i tho it should be dong bcus its taiko, btw thanks jona, will call you back next time
Litharrale
Regarding the "plagiarism"

if you have multiple people calling you out for "copying" another diff, regardless if you actually did or not, the fact that it's similar enough to something else that people think you're plagiarizing is reason enough to change it.

It's not the intent that matters, it's the end result. I think you should alter it enough so that all parties are happy.
Caput Mortuum
Y'know, calling it plagiarism when it's just a flipping reverting stairs (it's even a different kind of stairs) kind of bothers me. But don't worry, I'll change it.
Topic Starter
Poii

Kyousukee wrote:

mania 1|2|3|4 (column)

Easy

00:09:430 (9430|0) - tak sesuai saya rasa , baik letaknya di 00:09:753 - . mungkin bunyi nya amat berbeza tetapi letak di 00:09:430 - sini amat tidak selesa untuk menekannya . ini buktinya 00:40:721 (40721|0) - . kenapa kamu tak letak di sini 00:40:398 - seperti sebelumnya :) ok

buat ln di sini 01:01:513 (61513|3) - hingga 01:02:924 - karna masih ada bunyi di situ no since the taiko diff are end at that point


good luck Poii !
CF's mod all fixed ty
Protastic101
eh, gonna jump on the copy pasta band wagon here. I mean, I've already seen this as a problem with your kano - paranoia map where you copy and pasted from yourself, so Im probably biased when I go into this but w/e, that's irrelevant here

[Eraser's Normal to Easy Comparison]
I already compared this to Muu's diff and while there are some similar parts, 00:00:076 (76|0,398|2,721|3,1366|0,1527|2,1850|2,2334|3,3301|2,10398|1,10721|2,11043|3,12656|3,13301|1,13624|2,14592|3,14753|3,15237|3,17979|3,18463|2,18785|1,18946|0,19269|0,20398|0,20721|0,32011|0,32334|1,32495|2,32817|2,33301|3,33946|1,34269|3,34592|1,34753|1,34914|3,41366|0,41688|1,42011|3,42334|2,42817|3,43140|3,43624|1,45559|3,45721|3,46205|3,47495|0,47656|0,48946|3,49430|2,49753|1,49914|0,50237|0,57495|0,57495|2,58140|1,58140|3,59766|1,59931|1,60096|2,60631|2,60984|2) - being all that I picked out (I tried to exclude stuff that was most likely for PR and just coincidental), a lot of it can simply be chalked up to coincidence due to it being a fairly slow 4k map, but there are still some jarring similarities I feel where it's the same same patterns but with less chords like at 00:32:011 - or 00:41:366 - which are pretty close mirrors of each other. I dunno, most of it is probs a fruitless accusation to be throwing around but eh.I believe the real issue is between the easy and normal instead since they appear closer in rhythm and chord size.

00:04:269 (4269|3,4914|3,5237|0) - P much same as easy, except normal just has an added 1/4 jack (more like 1/2 with the bpm as low as it is)

00:05:559 (5559|2,5882|1,6205|0,6527|3,6850|1,7172|2,7495|3) - I agree with CrumpetFiddler here in that this is just a mirror of the easy but without the 1/2 stack which is correct in terms of PR as the sounds aren't similar. But, this is more correct PR wise as it rolls in the direction of the pitch for most of the time whereas the easy is the opposite (ascending with pitch descends, vice versa). I don't know who did what first, but I would try to vary this just a little to be different from both diffs as even an accidental thing like this could still be a noticeable repetition to a player who goes between diffs. Maybe something like this would work instead, while still keeping to PR? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9626237

00:14:592 (14592|3,15237|3,15559|0) - Mirrors again.
00:19:753 (19753|3,20076|2,20398|0,20721|0) - ^
00:45:559 (45559|3,46205|3,46527|0) - ^ pretty much both you and Poi are guilty of using this same placement all over the map lol

00:47:495 (47495|0,48140|1,48463|2,48946|3,49430|2) - After the first note, these are also mirrored, the difference being that the normal has an extra note at 00:48:624 -


What I find more pressing though is the fact that you copy from yourself, like the transitional measures of 00:20:721 - , 00:51:688 - and 00:56:850 - which are the exact same despite one being in the first half of the song and the second being the last half. I mean, I get that this is pretty easy and meant for lower levelled players, but it's not like the players won't be able to tell they're playing the same thing in the same one minute period of time.

00:00:076 - and 00:31:043 - do have some differences, but also so there's pretty much only the 1/2 only measure that's arranged slightly differently, the 1-3/4-2 is just control H'd
00:10:721 (10721|2,11043|3,11688|1,11850|2,12172|2) - Suppose you could also compare this measure too with the first SS at 00:10:721 (10721|2,11043|3,11688|1,11850|2,12172|2) - since the only different note is the first note and two notes preceding the 1/4 hook

Even if you do argue that you can't really arrange it any differently cause of whatever reason, you should probs still be able to have a different note placement for the majority of both halves of your diff if only to avoid having the player play what is essentially a thirty second map looped twice cause then you're just not adding anything to the player's enjoyment if they just get the same thing rehashed only slightly differently.

Hope this helps in some way(?)


Edit:

Litharrale wrote:

Regarding the "plagiarism"

if you have multiple people calling you out for "copying" another diff, regardless if you actually did or not, the fact that it's similar enough to something else that people think you're plagiarizing is reason enough to change it.

It's not the intent that matters, it's the end result. I think you should alter it enough so that all parties are happy.
I disagree partially with your statement, specifically the fact that you think that if enough people say something, then it should be changed. This is true for a lot of cases, but not always. Intent is important here because with how little there is to map, following pitch is what most people are bound to do, and unless you've got a terrible sense of pitch, most people will hear it and arrange it in a way that looks the same but maybe shifted a column or so to the right, or control H'd to avoid having the map always rolling in the same direction, so it's totally plausible that that's what happened here even if the similarity between note placements suggests otherwise. In this case, maybe Eraser doesn't want to alter his pitch relevancy too much (assuming that's what he did for the majority of the chart), and calling him out as plagiarizing might be a tad bit too harsh given what little he has to work with. Yes, Im basically saying the song is partially to blame. Anyways, I do agree that it should be changed just to avoid any future accusations of plagiarism, but I just dislike the notion that it should be changed because x number of people said so even though it's probably the right thing in this situation.

Ugh, I need to stop posting late at night cause I can't even write coherently.
Topic Starter
Poii
according to prosheep's mod(suggestion)

yeah somepart have rly simillar pattern, like you mentioned above (also CF told me in discord)
i can say that the melody/flow just go that way, and thats why i mapped it like that, also it changed so many times bcus mod and suggestion i get
i mapped the sound that i feel important or dominant, maybe eraser do the same like i did, and then accidentally we have same pattern (imo)

i'll discuss about this with eraser and muu as well, bcus they have more knowledge about mania mapping etc2
DDMythical
Its not so much you guys its more that this is the 3rd/4th time 'Erasers' Chart has had a significant portion of it mirrored from someone elses chart

This is important as while i have checked a lot of files in my time its not normal for this many similarities to occur consistently throughout someones chart portfolio. also benefit of the doubt that each one of yhe charts 'mirrored' coincidentally has extremely similar layering and pr to a similar difficulty but yknow.

to eraser:
Come on now, something's up. This shouldn't be happening so much so you're obviously doing something. Playing the victim card helps nobody and makes you look like an idiot. Your recent post stating that this was only about your chart here is silly; One of the main reasons behind this shit is that this is a consistent theme within your guest diffs -- A slightly edited mirror of another diff.
Caput Mortuum
Since everyone seems to be convinced that I'm the bad guy here, I won't argue about it anymore, it's tiring.

Had a blackout when writing so I will only give my overall changes here.

@Prot
Don't worry, you probably has the most neutral argument here.

Changed most of the similar sections you provided. Had to sacrifice some pitch relevancy but I hope it's enough to make it a bit different.
I won't change the doubles because I feel making it different is unnecessary, as it won't change anything for the player. It won't be more memorable, it won't be more challenging, it won't be more unique. Thus, I prefer them being the same.

@Crumpet
00:10:076 - I only map the melodies, and 00:23:624 - using only 2 and 3 there is intentional.

Thanks.

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MrAntagonizer
Hello! NM osu! Mania mod from my queue.
Feel free to reject my mods! :)
|1|2|3|4

Easy
00:31:043 - Taking this pattern from left to right again complements the raising tone here 00:28:463 (28463|0,29108|1,29753|2,30398|3) - , just a suggestion, I can't think of much to mod here
Eraser's Normal
00:09:592 (9592|1) - Maybe add a jack on the white tick after this sound. There's a full measure between the two notes so it should be okay as far as density is concerned(?) (maybe)
^ perhaps moving this note to |1| instead of |2|? The sound here is sharp so a column jump like that may complement it well
00:40:559 (40559|1) - Same as first mod
00:48:463 (48463|2,48624|0) - Maybe utilize the same pattern direction as when this sound was last mapped? 00:17:495 (17495|1,17656|2) - (with different column placement of course)
Muu's Hard
00:32:334 (32334|2,32334|3,32495|1,32656|0,32817|1,32979|2) - These sounds form a stair here instead of a split stair like the other instances in the map with these sounds. Just wondering if this was for emphasis since this is near the beginning of the kiai.

Not much for me to point out here either, the patterning is good imo.

Thanks for the request and good luck with your map!
DDMythical

DDMythical wrote:

Playing the victim card helps nobody and makes you look like an idiot.

Eraser wrote:

Since everyone seems to be convinced that I'm the bad guy here, I won't argue about it anymore, it's tiring.
also

Eraser wrote:

Had a blackout when writing so I will only give my overall changes her.
dont let these things control you, they suck and can fuck you up.
source: also get blackouts
Topic Starter
Poii

MrAntagonizer wrote:

Hello! NM osu! Mania mod from my queue.
Feel free to reject my mods! :)
|1|2|3|4

Easy
00:31:043 - Taking this pattern from left to right again complements the raising tone here 00:28:463 (28463|0,29108|1,29753|2,30398|3) - , just a suggestion, I can't think of much to mod here i'll keep this for consistency with the first part



Thanks for the request and good luck with your map!
Muu-chan

Eraser wrote:

@Muu kayaknya maksud Slaerd itu note numpuk yang kayak gini 00:06:850 (6850|3,7172|3) - . Yang di 00:07:172 (7172|1,7495|0) - ga numpuk, jadi beda sendiri.
Oh gitu.. well itu karena yg sebelumnya pitchnya naik jd kubuat stair gitu sama kombinasi chordnya.. jadi ya begitu.. kalau yg atasnya udah beda pitch.

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

muu's Hard
00:09:430 (9430|1) - move to col 3
00:09:592 (9592|2) - move to col 2, helps with flow

00:17:495 (17495|0) - move to col 2
00:17:817 (17817|1) - move to col 1, this feels funner to play for me

00:32:817 (32817|2) - move to col 3

00:34:592 (34592|2,34592|0,34753|2) - you use this and it represents a low sound, thats fine, but you use this 00:35:237 (35237|2,35237|1,35398|1) - to represent a higher sound?? move these into cols 3/4

00:35:882 - I Understand not much can really be done to this section, and its objectively fine, i just feel that the patterns are a bit repetitive

00:40:559 (40559|1,40721|3) - in regards to pitch relevency, these are backwards, control + J fixes that, but look for other solutions to

This diff feels pretty good, no major faults that i could find

Overall the mania diffs seem pretty good, although i dont think theyre ready quite yet (see my comments at the end of each box)

Pm me any questions you might have, or if you dont understand something
I'll keep those for note placement, i'm trying my best to make the pattern based on pitch.. also these are already through many mods ;-; sorry hwww
Caput Mortuum

MrAntagonizer wrote:

Eraser's Normal
00:09:592 (9592|1) - Maybe add a jack on the white tick after this sound. There's a full measure between the two notes so it should be okay as far as density is concerned(?) (maybe)
^ perhaps moving this note to |1| instead of |2|? The sound here is sharp so a column jump like that may complement it well
I only map the main melody
00:40:559 (40559|1) - Same as first mod
00:48:463 (48463|2,48624|0) - Maybe utilize the same pattern direction as when this sound was last mapped? 00:17:495 (17495|1,17656|2) - (with different column placement of course)
Thanks for the request and good luck with your map!
sorry for late reply, been busy with exams
thanks!

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Topic Starter
Poii
updated!
Ortlinde
whoa.
it's beautiful.
So, because it's kind of music box song, i'll mainly focused on pitch relevancy here
Feel free to reject this. it's already good i think.
[1|2|3|4]

Easy
  1. 00:06:527 (6527|3) - i suggest move this into column 2 so they don't jack with 00:06:527 (6527|3) -
  2. 00:17:495 (17495|2) - the keysound is a bit off here. Change into F5 instead
  3. 00:18:463 (18463|2) - maybe move this into column 2 to avoid layering?
  4. 00:48:463 (48463|1) - F5 too

Eraser's Normal
  1. 00:00:076 (76|0,1043|1,1366|0) - maybe swap the columns here to follow with the pitch
  2. 00:20:076 (20076|1,20398|2) - might as well ctrl+g this (works well in pitch relevancy)
  3. 00:20:721 (20721|1,20721|0,21366|2,21366|0,22011|3,22011|1,22495|1,22495|2,22817|0,22817|2,23140|0,23140|1) - i think the pattern is too weighted on the left hand. Maybe put 00:23:140 (23140|0) - on column 4
  4. 00:51:688 - same as above
  5. 00:56:850 - same stuff

Muu's Hard
  1. 00:02:979 (2979|3,2979|1,3301|0,3301|2) - make into 12 34 to follow the pitch maybe?
  2. 01:01:160 (61160|0) - make it into LN like 00:24:914 (24914|3) -

i'd like to see this on ranked
good luck
eyes


Setup: I don't see reason for last timing point, could you please explain or, if it's a mistake, delete it
I guess you should ask BN or QAT about double hitsounds on mania diffs, I had some cases with it and BNs told me it's better to not use double hitsounds (sorry if it was discussed before).

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

Muu's Hard

I think OD HP 7,8 is too high for 1,86* , there are some LNs that players will lost accuracy on

00:16:527 (16527|3,16688|3,16850|2) - last note can be shifted to left hand to make pattern more comfortable, I guess previous points can be changed too (00:04:269 (4269|2,4430|2,4592|3) - 00:14:592 (14592|0,14753|0,14914|1) ) but you can keep them as for pitch relevance. Exactly this one ( 00:16:850 - ) can be shifted because it's not really pitch related

00:25:882 (25882|2,26043|2,26205|2,26366|2,26527|2) - would be better if you do not so sudden thing, whole map is pretty calm and you are placing five 1/4 notes on one column, I guess many players will miss here and rage :p
you can use something like this https://puu.sh/yEKsJ/02c481e29e.png , it will be representing the music as well and not so uncomfortable

about this pattern 00:28:463 - pitch here is gradually increasing and I can see your pattern is going to emphasize it but last LN is breaking the PR 00:30:721 (30721|0) . First 3 LNs are going to right side (represents PR) and last one is on the first column, what looks like pitch suddenly fell down (I'm saying about https://puu.sh/yEKBv/f3d20857b8.png)
My suggestion is to make 1/2 LNs go 1>2>3>4. Like this: https://puu.sh/yEKG4/7718b67e02.png

00:32:334 (32334|2,32495|1,32656|0,32817|1,32979|2) - stair-shaped pattern is not really suitable for it, better keep using pattern like this 00:42:656


Eraser's Normal

00:04:269 (4269|3,4430|3,4914|3,5237|2) - inaccuratly PR, 00:05:237 (5237|2) - is higher pitch than 00:04:269 (4269|3,4430|3,4914|3) , https://puu.sh/yEKQh/71f9107342.png would be much more suitable

00:06:850 (6850|2,7172|1) - CTRL+H, pitch is going up here. Also it makes that more balanced

00:08:140 (8140|0,8785|0,9592|1) - maybe swap columns, last one seems to be lower pitch than first two

00:10:398 - pitch is going up here and you can make it a linear stair, why'd you make it broken pattern?

I don't want to mention out many about PR, it looks like you are trying to make it PRed but it's awfully broken in many places, you randomly swap high/low pitch sides and it looks not PRed properly. Sure if you will be following PR 100% accurately, it will be repetitive and boring, my suggestion is to consistenly mirror pitch side (maybe every 1/1 tick or less often).


Easy

This difficulty is poor in terms of snap variety
00:04:269 (4269|3) - gives you feeling of incompletness, because music pattern is not still finished, try to move it to 00:04:430 , it will represent music

00:09:753 (9753|0) - you are following the main sound (idk how to call it), not the background sound, move it to 00:09:592 , it will be more consistent

00:17:495 (17495|2,18463|2,19269|2) - you are overwhelming it

00:31:043 - oh really it's just copy of first half... it looks boring, I'd recommend you to rearrange this kiai because it's literally copying. You might want to add some new extra notes that weren't mapped in first half.

^don't forget to apply that for the second half of map as well

Topic Starter
Poii

eyes wrote:



Setup: I don't see reason for last timing point, could you please explain or, if it's a mistake, delete it its not a mistake, i just copying it from taiko diff, but yeh del it
I guess you should ask BN or QAT about double hitsounds on mania diffs, I had some cases with it and BNs told me it's better to not use double hitsounds (sorry if it was discussed before). double HS ?

Easy

This difficulty is poor in terms of snap variety
00:04:269 (4269|3) - gives you feeling of incompletness, because music pattern is not still finished, try to move it to 00:04:430 , it will represent music

00:09:753 (9753|0) - you are following the main sound (idk how to call it), not the background sound, move it to 00:09:592 , it will be more consistent

00:17:495 (17495|2,18463|2,19269|2) - you are overwhelming it

00:31:043 - oh really it's just copy of first half... it looks boring, I'd recommend you to rearrange this kiai because it's literally copying. You might want to add some new extra notes that weren't mapped in first half.

^don't forget to apply that for the second half of map as well

All fixed ty eyes
Caput Mortuum

eyes wrote:

Eraser's Normal

00:04:269 (4269|3,4430|3,4914|3,5237|2) - inaccuratly PR, 00:05:237 (5237|2) - is higher pitch than 00:04:269 (4269|3,4430|3,4914|3) , https://puu.sh/yEKQh/71f9107342.png would be much more suitable
00:06:850 (6850|2,7172|1) - CTRL+H, pitch is going up here. Also it makes that more balanced
original was 4321 1234 then I changed it to 1321 4234 and I got bad feedback from various sources regarding "plagiarism". I'll think of another pattern then

00:08:140 (8140|0,8785|0,9592|1) - maybe swap columns, last one seems to be lower pitch than first two

00:10:398 - pitch is going up here and you can make it a linear stair, why'd you make it broken pattern?

I don't want to mention out many about PR, it looks like you are trying to make it PRed but it's awfully broken in many places, you randomly swap high/low pitch sides and it looks not PRed properly. Sure if you will be following PR 100% accurately, it will be repetitive and boring, my suggestion is to consistenly mirror pitch side (maybe every 1/1 tick or less often).
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Topic Starter
Poii

Ortlinde wrote:

whoa.
it's beautiful.
So, because it's kind of music box song, i'll mainly focused on pitch relevancy here
Feel free to reject this. it's already good i think.
[1|2|3|4]

Easy
  1. 00:06:527 (6527|3) - i suggest move this into column 2 so they don't jack with 00:06:527 (6527|3) - im not sure about that, since it fit with the flow, demn i dunno how to call it
  2. 00:17:495 (17495|2) - the keysound is a bit off here. Change into F5 instead
  3. 00:18:463 (18463|2) - maybe move this into column 2 to avoid layering?
  4. 00:48:463 (48463|1) - F5 too fixed all


i'd like to see this on ranked
good luck
Updated
Muu-chan

eyes wrote:



Setup: I don't see reason for last timing point, could you please explain or, if it's a mistake, delete it
I guess you should ask BN or QAT about double hitsounds on mania diffs, I had some cases with it and BNs told me it's better to not use double hitsounds (sorry if it was discussed before).

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

Muu's Hard

I think OD HP 7,8 is too high for 1,86* , there are some LNs that players will lost accuracy on Decreased to 7.5

00:16:527 (16527|3,16688|3,16850|2) - last note can be shifted to left hand to make pattern more comfortable, I guess previous points can be changed too (00:04:269 (4269|2,4430|2,4592|3) - 00:14:592 (14592|0,14753|0,14914|1) ) but you can keep them as for pitch relevance. Exactly this one ( 00:16:850 - ) can be shifted because it's not really pitch related i would love to keep them. Beside the pitch, i also considering the.. what is it called.. "Hand filled (?)" and try to put notes on blank space to fill it.

00:25:882 (25882|2,26043|2,26205|2,26366|2,26527|2) - would be better if you do not so sudden thing, whole map is pretty calm and you are placing five 1/4 notes on one column, I guess many players will miss here and rage :p
you can use something like this https://puu.sh/yEKsJ/02c481e29e.png , it will be representing the music as well and not so uncomfortable I would keep this too, so they could learn how to pass this lol. In case they play piano, they will remember this :D

about this pattern 00:28:463 - pitch here is gradually increasing and I can see your pattern is going to emphasize it but last LN is breaking the PR 00:30:721 (30721|0) . First 3 LNs are going to right side (represents PR) and last one is on the first column, what looks like pitch suddenly fell down (I'm saying about https://puu.sh/yEKBv/f3d20857b8.png)
My suggestion is to make 1/2 LNs go 1>2>3>4. Like this: https://puu.sh/yEKG4/7718b67e02.png Yes i think so, i replaced it :) thank you

00:32:334 (32334|2,32495|1,32656|0,32817|1,32979|2) - stair-shaped pattern is not really suitable for it, better keep using pattern like this 00:42:656 Yeea xd replaced~
Sorry was on final exam, Update here http://puu.sh/yKLsj/2f0b019c6e.rar
Topic Starter
Poii
updated, btw are you guys forgot that we have mod from ortlinde ? xD
Caput Mortuum
oki doki

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Topic Starter
Poii
updated
Envory
Ok from Nekopoi Poii req to re-mod



|1|2|3|4|



Easy
00:31:043 (31043|0,31366|1,31688|2,32011|3,32334|2,33301|1) - buat ini jangan stair deh kalo part kiai... > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10014390 (should be better)
00:48:946 - tambahin 1 note biar konsistem seperti sebelumnya (rekomen bgt)
00:59:766 (59766|1,60096|3) - jadiin ln aja itu suara hold


Penghapus's susah
00:01:366 - bikin kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10014432
00:05:237 (5237|0) - ini tambah 1 lagi ga masalah deh
00:10:398 (10398|2) - ini juga ^
00:15:559 (15559|0) - sama ^
00:31:043 (31043|3) - ini buat opening kiai koq 1?? kasi 2 biar enaq
00:32:495 (32495|2,32817|2) - sepi amat kiainya bang? kyk diatas la
00:36:205 (36205|2) - ini juga tambah 1


Muu's Hard
00:01:850 (1850|2) - ini pindah ke kolom 4 aja biar spread lah
00:17:979 (17979|3) - kick keras gini cuma 1? jadiin 2 aja pls


Ok itu aja thx
gudlak for ranked~
Topic Starter
Poii
thanks envory

and sorry, i decided to remove mania diff bcs muu wont reply the mod and i already have some conversation with eraser about his diff, he said okay about removing his diff from this set

thanks guys for your effort
Caput Mortuum
Sorry for the unnecessary drama, guys. Looking back to it, I was just overdramatizing things. I hope all parties involved are willing to forgive me. And to Poii, good luck with your current mapset.

also if u pity me pls rank my deconstruction star
Jonarwhal
owo
Aurele
owo

brb in 24 hours
Topic Starter
Poii
Thanks Jonas and You Gabe :3c
Joe Castle
I can wait to see this qualified owo
Aurele
rebubbled!

irc
22:38 Poii: gabe
22:38 Gabe: hi!!
22:38 Gabe: yes
22:38 Gabe: let's do this
22:38 Poii: :3c
22:42 Poii: do i have to buff kantan ?
22:45 Gabe: kinda need your opinion on that one
22:45 Gabe: I personally think it needs some more notes
22:45 Gabe: 00:02:979 - 00:03:301 - I've added two dons here
22:45 Gabe: do you think it would fit?
22:46 Poii: thats not hard for kantan, i think they are fit
22:46 Poii: i'll tell the GDr
22:47 Gabe: okay
22:48 Gabe: that means, it would need dons on 00:13:301 - and 00:13:624 - too
22:48 Poii: yeah sure
22:49 Gabe: what about adding a don to 00:23:140 (24) - as well?
22:49 Gabe: It makes a clear distinction from two parts
22:51 Poii: are you in hurry ? gimme 10 min, im on the way to home
22:51 Gabe: oh
22:51 Gabe: no worries
22:52 Poii: ok brb :3c
23:07 Poii: imback
23:13 Poii: just kantan or you find another problems ?
23:19 Gabe: im just checking something quick
23:20 Poii: i added somenotes in kantan, and it looks better for me
23:34 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388309 R3 Music Box - Sugar Song to Bitter Step [Oni]]
23:34 Gabe: 00:25:881 (46) -
23:34 Gabe: https://gabe.s-ul.eu/AA1PIZCd
23:34 Gabe: what about this?
23:35 Gabe: or if you want to keep it easier; https://gabe.s-ul.eu/xt9K4BTP
23:36 Poii: 00:26:205 - add smth there, make it easier but hard enough
23:37 Gabe: looks ok
23:37 *Poii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1476864 R3 Music Box - Sugar Song to Bitter Step [Dapu's Kantan]]
23:37 Poii: i added 00:03:301 -
23:38 Gabe: great
23:38 Poii: every that sound
23:38 Poii: should i add it too in kai ?
23:39 Gabe: 00:03:301 - make it a don
23:39 Poii: yeah its done
23:40 Poii: don
23:40 Poii: muzu ?
23:41 Gabe: its good
23:42 Gabe: u can update
23:44 Poii: updated
23:47 Poii: should i add unicode title as well ?
23:47 Gabe: uh oh, yes
23:48 Gabe: 00:59:437 (29) - this note should be on 00:59:272 -
23:49 Poii: ok moved
23:50 Poii: can i update it now ?
23:50 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388309 R3 Music Box - Sugar Song to Bitter Step [Oni]]
23:50 Gabe: 00:26:527 - change for a kat
23:51 Poii: it have simillar sound like the 47
23:52 Gabe: the issue is that 00:26:526 (48,49) - have different sounds
23:52 Gabe: and they have the same note
23:52 Gabe: implying they are the same sound, right%?
23:53 Poii: 00:26:526 (48,49,50,51) - change to dk kd
23:54 Gabe: perfect!
23:54 Gabe: (y)
23:55 Poii: :3c
23:56 Poii: http://prntscr.com/im61uk i dunno, but i added the unicode
23:57 Gabe: where does it come from
23:57 Poii: kwan
23:58 Poii: the other r3 map have the unicode tittle
23:59 Gabe: oh okayy
23:59 Poii: and this cover song https://osu.ppy.sh/s/606276 too
00:00 Poii: can i update it ?
00:00 Gabe: yup
00:02 Poii: done
Jonarwhal
qual'd
Topic Starter
Poii
much love
Uta
congrats!
Surono
tadaa
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