this mp3 have 320kbps,but osu could only rank 128~192kbps,you should reduce it.
I can't see why so many offset drift
00:07:429 - How about spinner end here?
00:15:200 (1,2) - all NC like this could have a swap
00:31:989 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - IDK why you do this,as my opinion this doesn't fit music at all,how about do rhythm like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888387
00:46:989 (2) - this sound is not exist as my listening,so maybe this is a overmap,remove or consider 1/4 reverse slider
00:54:069 - you need an extra redline to make here as 1/3 I think
00:55:714 (4,5) - do them like 00:55:300 (1,2) -
01:02:774 - oooops!why you put so many redline to make your map total a mess?!
01:21:737 (1) - make this blanket better
02:34:794 (3) - ^
02:44:431 (3) - ^,and this could have bigger distance to 02:44:665 (4) -
03:29:509 (1,2,3,4) - make every slider's direction to down like 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4) -
03:31:530 (1) - move to 416,180 to create same distance to 2 as 03:31:064 (1,2) -
03:35:727 (1,2,3,4,1) - ooooooooooooops!are you going to make unrank map? if not,please don't make more than one object should be click at same time,due to the https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu! ,try to make 3/4 sliders or 7/8 sliders instead and 03:36:970 (1,2,3) - fix this one like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888485
03:54:380 - spinner ends here
04:04:794 - spinner starts here(spinner's head and tail could be draged)
04:18:473 (2,3,4,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888502
04:24:070 (5) - move to 48,384
04:50:338 - 1/2 slider instead?
05:30:597 (4,1) - swap NC for readablity
05:54:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I didn't see any 1/4 big distance jump in this map's other part,so please reduce the distance.
05:27:605 - I can't see any meaning for this redline
my timing,these code could be copy into timing setup panel
And I convert a mp3 for you, https://puu.sh/xewOv/5aec50cfa4.mp3 ,this mp3's timing should be
I can't see why so many offset drift
00:07:429 - How about spinner end here?
00:15:200 (1,2) - all NC like this could have a swap
00:31:989 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - IDK why you do this,as my opinion this doesn't fit music at all,how about do rhythm like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888387
00:46:989 (2) - this sound is not exist as my listening,so maybe this is a overmap,remove or consider 1/4 reverse slider
00:54:069 - you need an extra redline to make here as 1/3 I think
00:55:714 (4,5) - do them like 00:55:300 (1,2) -
01:02:774 - oooops!why you put so many redline to make your map total a mess?!
01:21:737 (1) - make this blanket better
02:34:794 (3) - ^
02:44:431 (3) - ^,and this could have bigger distance to 02:44:665 (4) -
03:29:509 (1,2,3,4) - make every slider's direction to down like 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4) -
03:31:530 (1) - move to 416,180 to create same distance to 2 as 03:31:064 (1,2) -
03:35:727 (1,2,3,4,1) - ooooooooooooops!are you going to make unrank map? if not,please don't make more than one object should be click at same time,due to the https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu! ,try to make 3/4 sliders or 7/8 sliders instead and 03:36:970 (1,2,3) - fix this one like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888485
03:54:380 - spinner ends here
04:04:794 - spinner starts here(spinner's head and tail could be draged)
04:18:473 (2,3,4,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8888502
04:24:070 (5) - move to 48,384
04:50:338 - 1/2 slider instead?
05:30:597 (4,1) - swap NC for readablity
05:54:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I didn't see any 1/4 big distance jump in this map's other part,so please reduce the distance.
05:27:605 - I can't see any meaning for this redline
my timing,these code could be copy into timing setup panel
1208,310.880829015544,4,2,0,40,1,0
62762,310.880829015544,4,2,0,40,1,0
122451,310.880829015544,6,2,0,40,1,0
152295,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
230636,310.880829015544,6,2,0,40,1,0
290325,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
333848,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
351568,310.880829015544,5,2,0,40,1,0
And I convert a mp3 for you, https://puu.sh/xewOv/5aec50cfa4.mp3 ,this mp3's timing should be
1260,310.880829015544,4,2,0,40,1,0
62814,310.880829015544,4,2,0,40,1,0
122503,310.880829015544,6,2,0,40,1,0
152347,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
230688,310.880829015544,6,2,0,40,1,0
290377,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
333900,310.880829015544,3,2,0,40,1,0
351620,310.880829015544,5,2,0,40,1,0