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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 27, 2017 at 12:59:16 AM

Artist: Nekomata Master
Title: Scars of FAUNA
Source: jubeat saucer fulfill
Tags: beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL jubeat plus (Android) saucer fulfill pack 6 pop'n music ラピストリア REFLEC BEAT groovin'!! Upper Naoyuki Sato WORLD/ELECTRONICA Groove Coaster EX maimai ORANGE
BPM: 165
Filesize: 8324kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Amaryllis - 7Key (5.38 stars, 1975 notes)
  2. Another - 7Key (4.09 stars, 1441 notes)
  3. Beginner - 7Key (1.41 stars, 357 notes)
  4. Hyper - 7Key (3.1 stars, 1023 notes)
  5. Normal - 7Key (2.01 stars, 615 notes)


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heyo. i'm interested on making a GD for the extra diff so maybe if allowed i'd like to take it ^^
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AncuL wrote:

heyo. i'm interested on making a GD for the extra diff so maybe if allowed i'd like to take it ^^


hi there~ i am happy to hear that :)
However i am planning to make it by my own, i am really sorry but thank you for your offer! :(
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hii CS from m4m :*
first 7k mod :)
free to reject


column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Hyper
00:01:234 (1234|0,2325|0) move to col 5 because not same pitch
i think ctr+j 00:02:719 (2719|6,2780|4) and 00:04:901 (4901|0,4962|2)
00:03:416 (3416|6,4507|6) move to col 3
00:07:780 (7780|4) i think mo to col 2 00:08:871 (8871|2) to col 6
00:07:325 (7325|2) to col 1 00:07:507 (7507|4) col 7
00:18:416 (18416|4) move to col 4 is better
00:22:598 add note at col 5 00:22:689 add note at col 3
i think add LN in col 4 from 00:25:689 to 00:26:052 - col 6 from 00:26:052 to 00:26:416 - col 5 from 00:26:416 to 00:26:780 - col 4 from 00:26:780 to 00:27:143
if u accept, 00:26:052 (26052|0,26416|1,26780|4) - delete 00:25:689 (25689|1,26052|2,26416|3) - move 1 col to left 00:26:871 (26871|5) - move to col 1 00:26:962 (26962|3) - move to col 3
00:39:143 (39143|1,39143|3,39416|1,39416|3,39507|4,39507|6,39689|1,39689|3,39871|3,39871|1,39871|6) maybe ctrl+H ??
i think add LN from 00:44:234 to 00:45:689
01:50:780 (110780|5,110871|6) - maybe ctrl+j ?

that's all,i hope this helping :)

GL :):)
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Nekomata 'w' 'w'
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atian540 wrote:

hii CS from m4m :*
first 7k mod :)
free to reject


column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Hyper
00:01:234 (1234|0,2325|0) move to col 5 because not same pitch i think they have the same instrumental base rather than pitch, that why i place them on the same column to represent it
i think ctr+j 00:02:719 (2719|6,2780|4) and 00:04:901 (4901|0,4962|2) the current one play better for me, i guess i will keep it :o
00:03:416 (3416|6,4507|6) move to col 3 like before explained
00:07:780 (7780|4) i think mo to col 2 00:08:871 (8871|2) to col 6 ^
00:07:325 (7325|2) to col 1 00:07:507 (7507|4) col 7 ^
00:18:416 (18416|4) move to col 4 is better ok
00:22:598 add note at col 5 00:22:689 add note at col 3 intention not to add note for these sound for easy purpose
i think add LN in col 4 from 00:25:689 to 00:26:052 - col 6 from 00:26:052 to 00:26:416 - col 5 from 00:26:416 to 00:26:780 - col 4 from 00:26:780 to 00:27:143 will consider this one
if u accept, 00:26:052 (26052|0,26416|1,26780|4) - delete 00:25:689 (25689|1,26052|2,26416|3) - move 1 col to left 00:26:871 (26871|5) - move to col 1 00:26:962 (26962|3) - move to col 3 ^ actually it would be cool if you can give me a screenshot from your suggestion :)
00:39:143 (39143|1,39143|3,39416|1,39416|3,39507|4,39507|6,39689|1,39689|3,39871|3,39871|1,39871|6) maybe ctrl+H ??
i think add LN from 00:44:234 to 00:45:68i maybe not , will ignore the sound
01:50:780 (110780|5,110871|6) - maybe ctrl+j ? hmm, current one play better for me here so i think not

that's all,i hope this helping :)

GL :):)


thanks ! :)


ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Nekomata 'w' 'w'

'w'w' thank you!
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hii... this you M4M :)

Hyper
00:44:234 - maybe you can fill more note until 00:44:598 - (or make it LN)
00:53:689 - yoou should put note at here
Another
00:57:507 - you should fill it with stair until 00:57:689 - (i follow the flute)
00:54:689 - until 01:02:416 - its heard monoton, follow ^
00:22:598 - 00:22:780 - ^
Extra
00:22:598 (22598|5,22598|6,22689|3,22689|4) - change the pattern, its weird
00:25:507 -until 00:25:689 - try to make little stair (flute sound)
00:29:325 - put 1 more note
00:54:416 - until 00:56:962 - monoton, make a little mix
01:00:598 - 01:02:052 - same ^
01:20:962 - until 01:21:143 - try to make little stair


good luck :)
posted
> 7K set
my god
posted
yoyoyoyo M4M req.

note, as said, i do not play 7K, so i will focus on problems i can notice, rather than patterns.

1|2|3|4|5|6|7 (if needed)

no kiai..?

Beginner
00:05:325 - guess you could add one for the cymbal on top of what you're charting

01:12:962 (72962|4,73507|4) - i don't expect this being comfortable for new players.

01:23:871 (83871|5,84416|5) - eh maybe its fine but i'll mention this one as well incase

01:54:416 (114416|2,114689|2,114962|2,115143|2,115507|0,115780|0,116052|0,116234|0,116598|6,116871|6,117143|6,117325|6) - these are weird. maybe a pattern that shows the new 1/2 would be more suited
Normal
01:19:325 (79325|4,79416|2,79507|0) - for the only 1/4 in the diff, maybe make it easier to play, rather than having it spread out by 2 columns inbetween. pfft up to you whether thats fine in a NM 7k diff
Hyper
00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|6,2780|4) - and then 00:06:962 (6962|2,7022|4,7083|2,7143|4) - ?????? shouldnt they be the same?

00:11:325 - rip the 1/6

00:13:507 - again, you're problem emphasising the drums so it should be fine, but maybe you'll want to implement it
Another
00:13:507 - 1/6 dead

00:11:325 - ^^

00:15:689 - ^^

00:45:325 (45325|3) - you could in theory start this here 00:44:598

01:50:598 - add the 1/6 maybe??? dunno bc of the 1/4 there
Extra
eh couldn't see anything


sorry for the shit mod

best of luck o/
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OwenF04 wrote:

yoyoyoyo M4M req.

note, as said, i do not play 7K, so i will focus on problems i can notice, rather than patterns.

1|2|3|4|5|6|7 (if needed)

no kiai..?

Beginner
00:05:325 - guess you could add one for the cymbal on top of what you're charting unlike 00:09:689 - which consist of kick + cymbal, so i will keep it as single at there

01:12:962 (72962|4,73507|4) - i don't expect this being comfortable for new players. rearranged here

01:23:871 (83871|5,84416|5) - eh maybe its fine but i'll mention this one as well incase i think it is nice, but will consider it again

01:54:416 (114416|2,114689|2,114962|2,115143|2,115507|0,115780|0,116052|0,116234|0,116598|6,116871|6,117143|6,117325|6) - these are weird. maybe a pattern that shows the new 1/2 would be more suited these belong to the same intrumental, i would like to make them into the same column here
Normal
01:19:325 (79325|4,79416|2,79507|0) - for the only 1/4 in the diff, maybe make it easier to play, rather than having it spread out by 2 columns inbetween. pfft up to you whether thats fine in a NM 7k diff i don't really have much choice of pattern here since the sound are 1/4 obviously and making them 1/2 looks odd, but i think it is fine to have a short 1/4 for NM diff
Hyper
00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|6,2780|4) - and then 00:06:962 (6962|2,7022|4,7083|2,7143|4) - ?????? shouldnt they be the same? it can be the same but i wanted to variate the pattern here instead of the same

00:11:325 - rip the 1/6 i know it is 1/6 sound here but i intend to ignore it for this part

00:13:507 - again, you're problem emphasising the drums so it should be fine, but maybe you'll want to implement it ^
Another
00:13:507 - 1/6 dead same like hyper, is my intention not to catch any 1/6 sound here

00:11:325 - ^^

00:15:689 - ^^

00:45:325 (45325|3) - you could in theory start this here 00:44:598 i wanted to give player a break after the stream part, so maybe not

01:50:598 - add the 1/6 maybe??? dunno bc of the 1/4 there hmm nope, will catch the 1/4 sound here instead
Extra
eh couldn't see anything


sorry for the shit mod

best of luck o/


thanks! :)
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ahhhhhh i can't i want this go for ranked

the mod based on both playability after testplay and more into technical, couldn't find much because your charting style is simply done well, love it xP

columns :
1 / 2/ 3/ S/ 5/ 6/ 7
(S = 4th column = spacebar note)

[Extra]
consider reducing the OD rate due the LN usage

00:04:234 (4234|6,4507|6,4780|6,4840|4,4901|6,4962|4) - switch the column? 7 to 5 & 5 to 7 to differentiate the pr from 00:03:143 (3143|6,3416|6,3689|6,3871|6) - ?

00:07:325 (7325|0,7325|2,7416|1,7507|0,7962|1,7962|3,8052|2,8143|1) - feels left hand biased, well balance it to right?

00:09:234 (9234|2) - i'd move to 5 to at least reduce the strain from the previous part i mention

00:31:416 (31416|1) - this awkward to play, consider to move to 3, both playability and PR will be more consistent with other jack parts

00:35:871 (35871|3,35871|6,35962|4,36052|3) - the anchor rather awkward to play, both in left and right hand.. i'd suggest this pattern :
https://puu.sh/xmhuU/9c22e28678.png

00:44:416 (44416|2,44537|2) - for most right-handed players this 1/6 will be very tricky to play, move to 6 so both hand plays it?

00:52:962 (52962|4,53143|4,53325|4,53507|4,53689|4) - can't see why anchors are this long, i'll jack this 00:53:325 (53325|6,53325|4,53598|6,53598|5,53871|6,53871|5) - 3/4 and break the anchor to fit the pr and plays more comfortably

01:12:871 (72871|4,72962|6) - 1/8 pretty sure

01:22:780 (82780|3,82780|4) - make the odd by moving this 1 column to right, and adjust the LN length like this : https://puu.sh/xmhDi/aefb344ffd.png
01:31:507 (91507|1,91507|2,91507|0,91749|2,91810|1,91871|0) - ^ just reversed

01:53:325 (113325|0,113507|0,113689|0,113871|0,114052|0,114234|0,114416|0,114598|0,114780|0) - couldn't find anything to follow this anchor imo, either way this part is the climax part where i keep failed smh

01:25:325 (85325|2,85325|3,85325|6,85325|0,85507|1,85507|4,85507|3,85689|6,85689|5,85689|2,85689|4) - i'd ctrl + H or making the triple stairs goes downward from right to left to follow the pr

[Another]
somehow big gap between Another and Extra, lets see

00:20:234 (20234|5,20416|4) - 00:23:507 (23507|5,23689|4) - 00:26:780 (26780|6) - 00:26:871 (26871|1,26962|2,27052|3,27143|4) - 00:28:962 (28962|5,29143|4) - i'd say even the defense is to make a different LN pattern from Extra, these notes should be LN according to the synth sound to fit the PR.. would plays nicely tho

01:25:325 (85325|0,85325|2,85325|6,85507|4,85507|1,85689|6,85689|3,85689|2,85871|4,85871|5) - same as extra, might also want to see in easier diffs too

also, i couldn't find anything except the note density where some 1/4 are intentionally missed are quiet a bit, too forgiving, it makes a closer gap between Hyper and Another, more than Another to Extra.. aside of that easier diffs are.. i could simply say they are pretty much clean and perfect

please rank this, good luck >w<)/
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Arzenvald wrote:

ahhhhhh i can't i want this go for ranked

the mod based on both playability after testplay and more into technical, couldn't find much because your charting style is simply done well, love it xP thanks! xd

columns :
1 / 2/ 3/ S/ 5/ 6/ 7
(S = 4th column = spacebar note)

[Extra]
consider reducing the OD rate due the LN usage ok i changed to 8.6

00:04:234 (4234|6,4507|6,4780|6,4840|4,4901|6,4962|4) - switch the column? 7 to 5 & 5 to 7 to differentiate the pr from 00:03:143 (3143|6,3416|6,3689|6,3871|6) - ? agree, will fix for all diff too

00:07:325 (7325|0,7325|2,7416|1,7507|0,7962|1,7962|3,8052|2,8143|1) - feels left hand biased, well balance it to right? it is intended to do so as you can see i catch the secondary sound like 00:07:507 (7507|6,7507|4,7780|4,7780|6,8052|4,8052|6,8234|4,8234|6) -

00:09:234 (9234|2) - i'd move to 5 to at least reduce the strain from the previous part i mention sure

00:31:416 (31416|1) - this awkward to play, consider to move to 3, both playability and PR will be more consistent with other jack parts fixed

00:35:871 (35871|3,35871|6,35962|4,36052|3) - the anchor rather awkward to play, both in left and right hand.. i'd suggest this pattern :
https://puu.sh/xmhuU/9c22e28678.png nice! fixed according to your suggestion

00:44:416 (44416|2,44537|2) - for most right-handed players this 1/6 will be very tricky to play, move to 6 so both hand plays it? kinda but i intend to make 1/6 trill, i guess it still possible to hit them perfectly low bpm. would consider again

00:52:962 (52962|4,53143|4,53325|4,53507|4,53689|4) - can't see why anchors are this long, i'll jack this 00:53:325 haha, rearranged a bit (53325|6,53325|4,53598|6,53598|5,53871|6,53871|5) - 3/4 and break the anchor to fit the pr and plays more comfortably will consider this too

01:12:871 (72871|4,72962|6) - 1/8 pretty sure ye, fixed. will fix for all diff too

01:22:780 (82780|3,82780|4) - make the odd by moving this 1 column to right, and adjust the LN length like this : https://puu.sh/xmhDi/aefb344ffd.png
01:31:507 (91507|1,91507|2,91507|0,91749|2,91810|1,91871|0) - ^ just reversed changed the LN length as you suggested but i wanted to give a gap here for as you can see like 01:22:052 (82052|2,82052|0,82234|3,82234|1,82416|2,82416|4,82598|5,82598|3,82780|6,82780|4) -

01:53:325 (113325|0,113507|0,113689|0,113871|0,114052|0,114234|0,114416|0,114598|0,114780|0) - couldn't find anything to follow this anchor imo, either way this part is the climax part where i keep failed smh ayy, let me see what i could do

01:25:325 (85325|2,85325|3,85325|6,85325|0,85507|1,85507|4,85507|3,85689|6,85689|5,85689|2,85689|4) - i'd ctrl + H or making the triple stairs goes downward from right to left to follow the pr nice

[Another]
somehow big gap between Another and Extra, lets see yea i guess, i plan to raise it till 4+ let me see first

00:20:234 (20234|5,20416|4) - 00:23:507 (23507|5,23689|4) - 00:26:780 (26780|6) - 00:26:871 (26871|1,26962|2,27052|3,27143|4) - 00:28:962 (28962|5,29143|4) - i'd say even the defense is to make a different LN pattern from Extra, these notes should be LN according to the synth sound to fit the PR.. would plays nicely tho okay, changed these

01:25:325 (85325|0,85325|2,85325|6,85507|4,85507|1,85689|6,85689|3,85689|2,85871|4,85871|5) - same as extra, might also want to see in easier diffs too

also, i couldn't find anything except the note density where some 1/4 are intentionally missed are quiet a bit, too forgiving, it makes a closer gap between Hyper and Another, more than Another to Extra.. aside of that easier diffs are.. i could simply say they are pretty much clean and perfect CTRL+H here for PR then

please rank this, good luck >w<)/
thanks usagi >w< and star too '@'
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[code]01:00 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366215 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Extra]]
01:00 Critical_Star: 'x'
01:01 Critical_Star: maybe thinking of a custom for extra
01:01 Kawawa: EZ NM was pretty good.
01:01 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366216 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Hyper]]
01:01 Critical_Star: thanks!
01:01 Kawawa: I will see from hard, you unsure something?
01:02 Critical_Star: sure thing
01:02 Critical_Star: will give my concern if i found any'
01:02 Kawawa: sure~
01:03 Kawawa: 00:18:234 - 00:18:325 - I think you can add a rhythm(that background inst for 00:18:416 (18416|6) - )
01:03 Kawawa: and It can be helpful the less gap with another.
01:04 Critical_Star: nice, i added at 5 and 6
01:05 Critical_Star: 00:17:143 - i add a note a 4 to keep the 1/2 flow here
01:05 Kawawa: suree
01:07 Critical_Star: 00:44:234 - think i would do 4 note here, for the final impact
01:08 Kawawa: 01:10:962 (70962|6,71022|5,71083|4,71143|1,71143|3,71325|5,71325|4,71507|1,71598|2,71689|3,71780|2,71871|1,71871|0,71871|6) -
01:08 Kawawa: the note spread is related with this part 01:15:143 (75143|6,75507|5,75507|3,75689|2,75871|4,75871|6,76234|6,76234|0,76234|1) -
01:08 Kawawa: I think.
01:09 Kawawa: beacuse note density graph are too unregular by this structure.
01:09 Critical_Star: hmm
01:09 Kawawa: I mean you can add a drum 01:15:598 - here too and 1/6th too 01:15:689 - to 01:15:871 -
01:09 Kawawa: or nerf the previous part a bit.
01:10 Critical_Star: got it
01:10 Kawawa: I prefer to nerf.
01:11 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/yq13m/ba8b5fa6da.jpg because the rhythm has a gap much between normal and hyper.
01:11 Critical_Star: do something like another?
01:11 Critical_Star: oh yea
01:11 Kawawa: normal used the 1/1th rhythm
01:11 Kawawa: but hyper suddenly got 1/4th rhythm
01:12 Kawawa: and being 1/6th.
01:13 Kawawa: 01:28:507 (88507|0,88780|0,88962|0) - add "w" hitsound? since It related with kick.
01:13 Kawawa: should be all the difficulties too if you done
01:15 Kawawa: 01:40:598 (100598|5) - move to 3? for feeling, seprated from 2times kick(w) and clap(c) https://puu.sh/yq19L/5ab296c02b.jpg
01:21 Critical_Star: 'w'
01:21 Kawawa: 'w'
01:21 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/yq1nH/10fb8fa2a4.jpg
01:22 Kawawa: 01:40:598 (100598|5) - move to 3? for feeling, seprated from 2times kick(w) and clap(c) https://puu.sh/yq19L/5ab296c02b.jpg
01:22 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/yq1pA/ca3d230bae.jpg
01:23 Kawawa: oh
01:23 Critical_Star: ok
01:23 Kawawa: I did not get that message
01:23 Kawawa: haha
01:23 Critical_Star: haha
01:23 Critical_Star: rip my net
01:24 Kawawa: let me see how you changed
01:24 Kawawa: there
01:24 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/yq1ts/9a6fd14af9.png
01:25 Critical_Star: 01:15:143 -
01:25 Kawawa: okay
01:26 Kawawa: 01:10:780 -
01:26 Kawawa: here is?
01:26 Critical_Star: hmm
01:26 Critical_Star: okay i do the same one
01:27 Kawawa: alright
01:27 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/yq1wQ/65b54a399d.png
01:27 Kawawa: another then.
01:27 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366216 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Hyper]]
01:28 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366213 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Another]]
01:28 Critical_Star: oh wait , i wanted to ask a little thing in hyper 'x'
01:28 Kawawa: okay
01:28 Critical_Star: 01:22:962 (82962|1,83022|2,83083|3,83143|4) - if i CTRL+G here is better?
01:29 Critical_Star: 01:55:143 (115143|0,115234|1,115325|2,115416|4) - 1/4 here better or 1/6?
01:31 Kawawa: 01:22:962 (82962|1,83022|2,83083|3,83143|4) -
01:31 Kawawa: yup
01:32 Kawawa: hmmm
01:32 Kawawa: 1/4th is better
01:32 Kawawa: at least it's poly rhythm
01:33 Critical_Star: okay
01:34 Critical_Star: ok i guess that all for hyper
01:34 Kawawa: sure
01:34 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366213 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Another]]
01:35 Kawawa: 00:44:537 - you should end the rhythm here 1/6th
01:38 Critical_Star: my bad fixed
01:38 Kawawa: 01:19:325 - ~ 01:19:507 -
01:38 Kawawa: I notice it is 1/6th.
01:39 Kawawa: you should fixed all the difficulties
01:39 Kawawa: NM can be a LN instead of 1/6th notes
01:40 Critical_Star: didnt notice that, got it
01:41 Kawawa: 01:28:598 - should not be 2note here, and should be 2note 01:28:507 -
01:42 Kawawa: the kick time line is 01:28:234 - 01:28:507 - 01:28:780 -
01:42 Kawawa: like hyper.
01:42 Kawawa: and should be "w" hitsounded as kick.
01:42 Kawawa: 01:29:143 - "w" too
01:43 Critical_Star: "w"
01:44 Critical_Star: hmm for this one i intend to use double note for 1/2 snare here
01:44 Kawawa: oh I see
01:44 Kawawa: alrighty then
01:45 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366215 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Extra]]
01:45 Critical_Star: 01:31:689 (91689|3,91689|1,91749|4,91810|5,91871|2,91871|0,91871|6,92052|5,92052|3,92234|1,92234|4,92234|0,92416|2,92416|3) - i CTRL+G here like hyper to give another variation flow
01:46 Critical_Star: i mean H
01:46 Kawawa: sure
01:48 Critical_Star: another ok for now
01:48 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366215 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Extra]]
01:49 Kawawa: 00:44:962 (44962|4) - I did not feel anything to start here 00:44:962 -
01:49 Kawawa: are you sure? o.o
01:49 Critical_Star: oh yea i was mean to ask about 00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|0,2780|2) - , i wonder it is hard to acc it
01:49 Kawawa: on another?
01:49 Critical_Star: hmm
01:49 Kawawa: 00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|0,2780|2) - it's fine.
01:49 Critical_Star: 00:44:598 - original was from this one
01:50 Critical_Star: but here the sound are getting louder so i tho it is nice to do it
01:50 Critical_Star: 00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|0,2780|2) - oki
01:50 Kawawa: 00:02:598 (2598|0,2658|2,2719|0,2780|2) - 00:04:780 (4780|4,4840|2,4901|4,4962|2) -
01:50 Kawawa: but this short LNs are annyoing
01:50 Kawawa: I mean hardest difficulty patterns
01:50 Critical_Star: haha ya i mean there
01:51 Critical_Star: normal note?
01:51 Kawawa: hmm
01:51 Kawawa: but I think fine
01:51 Critical_Star: i think i would use normal note
01:51 Kawawa: up to you
01:52 Critical_Star: short one are pretty much annoying yea
01:52 Kawawa: 00:44:962 (44962|4) - the LNs also up to you
01:52 Kawawa: but I would use it from here 00:45:325 -
01:53 Kawawa: 00:55:507 - missed "w" sound?
01:53 Critical_Star: alright seems better there
01:53 Kawawa: 00:57:325 - 00:57:689 - 00:58:052 - too
01:54 Critical_Star: ah yes
01:54 Kawawa: you need to check that till 01:03:143 -
01:54 Critical_Star: ah
01:54 Kawawa: since some sections are looks missed
01:54 Critical_Star: i think i did not update the hs here
01:54 Critical_Star: yep
01:54 Critical_Star: will recheck it
01:55 Kawawa: 01:19:325 - also fixed 1/6th right?
01:56 Kawawa: I don't recommend 1/6th all double note here, so let me say in case
01:56 Critical_Star: yup i fixed that
01:57 Kawawa: 01:28:234 - also fixed the hitsound here too?
01:57 Kawawa: 01:28:234 - w 01:28:507 - w 01:28:780 - w
01:57 Kawawa: 01:29:143 - w
01:57 Kawawa: 01:28:598 (88598|4) - not w
01:58 Critical_Star: fixed like another
01:58 Kawawa: 01:22:780 (82780|4,82780|6,83022|4,83083|5,83143|6) -
01:58 Kawawa: uhmm It's a bit annoying
01:58 Kawawa: o.o
01:58 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/yq2yq/3dfd068399.jpg
01:58 Kawawa: what do you think?
01:59 Kawawa: 01:31:507 (91507|1,91507|2,91507|0,91689|3,91749|2,91810|1,91871|0) - almost same idea with that
02:00 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/yq2Bs/57f7a847d7.png can i consider this pattern?, actually i wanted to change that part too
02:00 Critical_Star: what do you think
02:01 Kawawa: it's godo
02:01 Kawawa: good
02:01 Kawawa: I will not touch anymore
02:01 Kawawa: what you unsure?
02:01 Kawawa: o.o
02:03 Critical_Star: hmm
02:03 Critical_Star: 01:46:780 - stream pattern from 01:55:507 - , is it comfortable to play?
02:04 Kawawa: yeah for me
02:05 Critical_Star: 01:55:507 - this one hmm, would it be better to make a sv?
02:05 Kawawa: 01:54:325 -
02:05 Kawawa: what do you think? https://puu.sh/yq2Mx/70857a90b3.jpg
02:07 Critical_Star: seems neater
02:07 Critical_Star: good
02:07 Critical_Star: 'w'
02:08 Kawawa: 'w'
02:08 Critical_Star: i like your stream pattern at flower
02:08 Critical_Star: 'w' really cool and neat
02:08 Kawawa: 'w'
02:09 Critical_Star: 'w'
02:09 Kawawa: so no more?
02:10 Critical_Star: 01:56:416 - if add 1/6 here is good?
02:10 Critical_Star: or blank better
02:10 Kawawa: hmmm
02:11 Kawawa: 1/4th jack also avaliable
02:11 Kawawa: as col 4 double.
02:11 Kawawa: anyway up to you to add 1/6th or 1/4th or blank
02:11 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/yq2Zs/63607d915e.png this one?
02:11 Kawawa: yeah
02:12 Critical_Star: alritee
02:12 Kawawa: no more? o.o
02:13 Critical_Star: yea should be ok now
02:13 Critical_Star: let me update
02:16 Kawawa: alright
02:18 Critical_Star: readjusted OD and HP rate
02:20 Kawawa: okay!
02:21 Critical_Star: 'w'
02:21 Kawawa: okay are you ready?
02:21 Kawawa: i will bubble now
02:21 Kawawa: qualify is maybe FC
02:21 Kawawa: I can ask it to him
02:22 Critical_Star: yes
02:22 Kawawa: and he also wants to do it
02:22 Kawawa: guess
02:22 Critical_Star: ah but he just helped one of my 4K map just now haha
02:22 Kawawa: recently?
02:22 Kawawa: o.o
02:22 Critical_Star: yea
02:22 Critical_Star: if he do
02:22 Critical_Star: i will repay him twice
02:23 Critical_Star: 'c'
02:23 Kawawa: uh, btw I did not check metadata and in folder
02:23 Kawawa: I just noticed now
02:23 Kawawa: lol
02:23 Kawawa: are you sure everything is fine? o.o
02:24 Kawawa: or we need to search for it?
02:24 Critical_Star: lol
02:24 Critical_Star: wait ah
02:24 Critical_Star: the official website under maintance now
02:25 Critical_Star: cant see neko webs
02:25 Kawawa: rip
02:25 Critical_Star: i get from there meta
02:25 Critical_Star: in folder , i use my ranked map hs set
02:25 Critical_Star: should be ok
02:25 Critical_Star: png 1900x1117
02:25 Critical_Star: lol
02:25 Critical_Star: acceptable?'
02:26 Critical_Star: https://remywiki.com/Scars_of_FAUNA tag i refer here
02:26 Kawawa: no one care bg size
02:26 Kawawa: recently
02:26 Kawawa: so think it's acceptable
02:27 Kawawa: hmm
02:27 Kawawa: jubeat plus / jubeat plus (Android) saucer fulfill pack 6 pop'n music ラピストリア REFLEC BEAT groovin'!! Upper
02:27 Kawawa: It also should be put in tags?
02:27 Kawawa: source "jubeat saucer fulfill"
02:28 Kawawa: First Music Game Appearance is always calculated as main source, isn't?
02:30 Critical_Star: yea
02:30 Critical_Star: ok
02:30 Critical_Star: oh
02:30 Critical_Star: cant take the other one?
02:30 Critical_Star: i mean the source
02:30 Critical_Star: because i use beatmania diff naming
02:31 Kawawa: it's okay diff naming
02:31 Kawawa: even if you're use other source.
02:32 Kawawa: I thought it is bms naming
02:32 Kawawa: haha
02:32 Kawawa: hmmm
02:32 Kawawa: maybe both are avaliable?
02:32 Kawawa: but i'm not sure.
02:33 Critical_Star: jubeat saucer fulfill
02:33 Critical_Star: first appearance
02:34 Critical_Star: i guess should use this
02:34 Critical_Star: as sourcve
02:34 Kawawa: yeah
02:35 Critical_Star: so the jubeat tag will not put in since already source is jubeat
02:35 Kawawa: yup
02:39 Critical_Star: beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK VOL.2 album < can use as tag?
02:39 Kawawa: uhhm
02:39 Kawawa: up to you,
02:39 Kawawa: but I think no need
02:40 Critical_Star: alright
02:40 Kawawa: beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL jubeat plus / jubeat plus (Android) saucer fulfill pack 6 pop'n music ラピストリア REFLEC BEAT groovin'!! Upper Naoyuki Sato WORLD/ELECTRONICA
02:40 Critical_Star: i guess i will just keep my current tag
02:40 Kawawa: It's enough?
02:40 Critical_Star: jubeat tag have to add? 'x'
02:41 Critical_Star: beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL jubeat plus (Android) saucer fulfill pack 6 pop'n music ラピストリア REFLEC BEAT groovin'!! Upper Naoyuki Sato WORLD/ELECTRONICA
02:41 Critical_Star: this ^ ?
02:41 Kawawa: source : BMS
02:41 Kawawa: but tag bms of fighter blablah
02:41 Kawawa: but tag : Bms of Fighter blablah
02:41 Kawawa: it's same case..
02:41 Kawawa: so can be acceptable
02:41 Critical_Star: oki
02:42 Kawawa: oh
02:42 Kawawa: yeah
02:42 Kawawa: jubeat plus that overlapped sentense should be removed.
02:42 Kawawa: so yours is right
02:43 Kawawa: beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL jubeat plus (Android) saucer fulfill pack 6 pop'n music ラピストリア REFLEC BEAT groovin'!! Upper Naoyuki Sato WORLD/ELECTRONICA
02:43 Critical_Star: got it/code]

Alrighty! good to me! :)
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OHH HYPE
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IS THIS A JOJO REFERENCE?
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dem cagli fans

hi CS 'w'

[Beginner]
00:26:780 (26780|4) - would be unique if you can turn this to LN for the rising sound there.
00:35:143 (35143|3,35507|1) - although in the aesthetic this might looked better, but pitch wise you need to reverse the LN there.
00:54:052 - Should be double note? the snare is strong enough for that.
01:03:143 (63143|1) - It'd be more fitting if you move this to col 1, aalthough you seem to form a stair, but the lack of note in col 1 felt really noticeable here, moreover, 1-7 double suit the cymbal sound transition to other section
01:07:871 (67871|2,68234|1) - Make it col 2-6? it will follow PR more accurately like you did at 01:03:507 - , and it won't destroy overall structure.
01:11:143 - how about something like https://puu.sh/yt7iy/f13d6e5641.png ? it flows more naturally towards the left side.
01:13:689 (73689|4,73871|6) - The straight stair flow doesn't sync well with the flute imo, Switch column them will give more impact with the instrument.
01:19:507 (79507|1,79871|2,80234|3) - it would be cool to turn these to long notes to emphasize that the pattern already going to the kiai section. it's more or less the same concept you did at 01:45:689 -
01:26:052 (86052|4,94780|5) - These 2 places are actually fit to have the LN due to not be collisioned with other note directly
01:26:598 (86598|5,86962|5) - Try the jack at col 7? since you emptied col 7 for quite long here.

[Normal]
00:26:780 (26780|4) - Will be cool if you extend the LN till 00:27:143 - , i know the instrument you wanna follow, but the sound already been distorted and unclear being mixed too much, the rising sound is the most outstanding here.
00:35:507 (35507|2) - try move to col 1 to be jacked with 00:35:871 (35871|0) - ? since you use the jack concept at 00:34:780 (34780|4,35143|4,35143|6,35507|6) -
01:02:780 (62780|2) - This note should be in col 1, since the kick isn't the same anymmore as the structure you made at 01:01:871 (61871|2,62052|2,62416|2) - , it will shown the jack progression more adequately.
01:06:416 (66416|6,67143|4) - move these to col 6 and col 7? this way it will form the 1/1 jack at 01:07:143 - , similar with what you did at 01:15:871 (75871|6,76234|6) -
01:09:689 (69689|6) - move to col 6 will make the structure better since you will mirror the jack at 01:10:780 (70780|1,71143|1) -
01:24:234 - 01:32:962 - It felt awkward that you left the drum empty here, you might wanna make a "break" for your pattern, but this felt like an odd spot to do so, since you ignore the louder sound and the overall kiai structure is basically a more dense non stop pattern. hyper diff too x.x
01:46:416 (106416|1) - move to col 1 with the same reason as 00:35:507 (35507|2) -

[Hyper]
00:25:689 - This should be double imo, although you may think it's weaker instrument sound compared to the latter 2 double note, but it kinda felt lack of impact somehow, my suggestion is http://puu.sh/yt9BH/37398fbd5f.png
00:49:780 - 00:49:962 - kinda awkward you left out the 1/4 here, considering you try to map many 1/4 in this section.
00:53:871 (53871|5) - move to col 7 will make the aesthetic better here :D
00:54:416 - here is 2 notes + 1 LN, but at 00:58:780 - is 3 notes + 1 LN x.x"
01:02:689 - 1/4 here will make a nice touch since although it's 1/8, the 1/4 still quite emphasized with the song itself.
01:03:143 - if you intend make this 4 note chord, maybe in normal diff you can make it 3 note chord? not sure if it's intentional or not.
01:10:416 (70416|6) - move to col 5? so you will form stair that connect 01:09:689 (69689|6,70052|5,70598|2,70689|1,70780|0) -
01:10:962 - 01:15:689 - would be cool to map the 1/6 since in other section you usually don't ignore it.

[Another]
00:26:962 - kinda an awkward one that this one is double note somehow since the one at 00:27:052 - is single note.
00:57:598 - 00:57:962 - For me this section kinda a bit bland if you too focused on the drum, i think you can map 1/4 and 1/6 in these place since this part is quite "special" on its own to be given twist
01:15:962 - A bit awkward you map full 1/4 but in extra diff it's empty, it seems only this place you did that.
01:29:143 (89143|2,89234|3) - Switch column here? the mini trill is a bit awkward since you don't really bracketing around here.
01:50:598 (110598|2,110689|3,110780|2) - the twist kinda anti-flow to follow here, try make 01:50:689 (110689|3,110780|2) - col 2 and col 4?
01:54:052 (114052|5) - move to col 1? the transition from double 5-7 to 5-6-7 triple kinda too tricky especially the pattern revolving right hand here is really complex.

[Extra]
00:07:052 (7052|5,7098|1) - 1/6?
00:17:143 (17143|6) - move to col 6 to give a moment rest after the triple jack before.
00:26:598 - 00:26:689 - try make it more complex by adding note at col 3 and col 4? it won't be too hard since the pattern is still a straight stair shield pattern, i can still combo it xd
00:38:052 (38052|0,38234|0,38416|0,38598|0,38780|0) - the 5 consecutive jack is kinda awkward since there isn't any instrument to emphasize these.
00:53:507 (53507|1,53598|0,53598|2,53689|1) - This is kinda excessive i think x.x , it makes it really complex and out of place imo, how about make 00:53:507 (53507|1,53598|2,53689|1) - 2-3-2?
00:57:871 - I kinda think a fun way to make this more fun to play, how about https://puu.sh/ytaAE/c90c4233a1.jpg (well it's a suggestion, but i just think full LN the flute is really nice here)
01:02:355 (62355|3,62416|3) - well, you know.. =w="
01:28:234 - Well, Just a suggestion, but i think the aesthetic is better here http://puu.sh/ytaIi/25b12fac62.png
01:46:416 (106416|0,106507|1) - Switch column for better aesthetic too here :D
01:56:416 (116416|3,116507|3) - The jack kinda awkward x.x

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10 GW Daggers left
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: nekomata > dj taka
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: extra i havent fixed aiyo
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: ikr
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: bpm?
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: 3/4 fixed
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: only snap
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: oh ok
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: well anyway
2017-11-24 22:50 Critical_Star: just sure feel free to point out those error
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: i will move one by one first, minor mod i guess
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:689 (9689|5,10416|5,10780|2,11507|5) - this section, music go like this
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: your pattern is fine
2017-11-24 22:50 Critical_Star: which diff>?
2017-11-24 22:51 Kuo Kyoka: but it's weird to have 00:10:416 (10416|5,10780|2,11507|5,11871|2) - while it changed on 00:11:871 (11871|2) -
2017-11-24 22:51 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366214 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Beginner]]
2017-11-24 22:52 Critical_Star: 00:11:871 - ah i get your point, i will reverse the note here
2017-11-24 22:52 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 22:53 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:871 (49871|5) - how about move to 7th for a little bit balance
2017-11-24 22:53 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:143 (67143|0) - i would suggest to change to long note here till double white
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: i just wanted to say that lol'
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: ya i changed
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:143 (67143|0) - missing double notes 01:14:052 (74052|2,74052|0) -
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahaha
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: i mean missing double notes according to*
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: stop reading my mind
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: hmm
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: but la
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: got LN
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: maybe no double there
2017-11-24 22:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:11:871 - on here isnt it?
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: 01:15:871 (75871|4) - then here i make LN
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: ya
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: beginner i think just single for all that LN secton part
2017-11-24 22:56 Kuo Kyoka: ah i mean on here 01:11:871 - lost a note if follow 2 notes like on 01:14:052 (74052|2,74052|0) -
2017-11-24 22:56 Critical_Star: 01:19:507 (79507|1,79871|2,80234|3) - i moved to right by 1 to make a stair
2017-11-24 22:56 Kuo Kyoka: yeah thats nice too
2017-11-24 22:56 Critical_Star: alright then
2017-11-24 22:57 Critical_Star: addedd
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:780 - this part kinda confuse on the right
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: but i think it's fine
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:57:325 (117325|0) - move to 4th for something special?
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: if u notice it was the similar chorus like the beginning
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: but i just intend to make a little different variation here
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: sure
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: moved to 4
2017-11-24 23:00 Kuo Kyoka: yeah it's almost the same
2017-11-24 23:01 Kuo Kyoka: but i mean the right patterns https://puu.sh/ysGPG/2660868457.png the left one is kinda neat so yeah
2017-11-24 23:02 Critical_Star: have u realize there is no note on col 1
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: of course
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: hahahaha
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: but i dont think it would be that big problem
2017-11-24 23:03 Critical_Star: somehow rearranged a bit to make right neater
2017-11-24 23:03 Critical_Star: ok i keep :hue
2017-11-24 23:03 Kuo Kyoka: i have a suggestion
2017-11-24 23:04 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysGVC/30407f4688.png looks dumb haha
2017-11-24 23:04 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:416 - but my suggestion is still follow 1/1 flow on here
2017-11-24 23:05 Kuo Kyoka: it's kinda confuse the part when 01:55:507 - 1/4 is more easy to recorgnizes
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: can also
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: not bad
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: 01:54:416 - http://puu.sh/ysH2h/594a61130a.png
2017-11-24 23:07 Kuo Kyoka: let's noma
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: i changed here btw
2017-11-24 23:07 Kuo Kyoka: oh i see
2017-11-24 23:08 Critical_Star: but no suptix
2017-11-24 23:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:416 - i think still best do 1/1 here?
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: but this one kinda confuse here https://puu.sh/ysH4W/8bca9bb8f8.png cuz it's different pattern https://puu.sh/ysH5b/663518ae09.png
2017-11-24 23:09 Critical_Star: okay
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: well ok noma
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366217 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Normal]]
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:02:780 (2780|0) - move to 3rd for pitch change?
2017-11-24 23:10 Critical_Star: changed again last one
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:10 Critical_Star: got diff?
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: where?
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: tho i will follow the det det sound
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: 00:02:780 -
2017-11-24 23:11 Kuo Kyoka: idk, i just follow your topdiff haha
2017-11-24 23:11 Kuo Kyoka: but switching isnt so bad
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: 00:17:325 - http://puu.sh/ysH9r/ee276b2983.png i changed pattern here
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: how about a LN here?
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: 00:02:598 - sorry wrong channel
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: dafuq i copy timeline to lobby channel
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: drunk cs
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: hmm i dont know
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: maybe pure normal notes is good for this part
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:325 - but add a note here?
2017-11-24 23:13 Critical_Star: i make LN there
2017-11-24 23:13 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:325 (9325|4) - move to 1st? feels like pitch change
2017-11-24 23:14 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHe1/769bbf5ca2.png for all that part i make like this ad
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:17:325 - but la, this pattern here is good ald imo
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: lololol
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-24 23:14 Critical_Star: noo special key are annoying
2017-11-24 23:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:29:325 - add a note for kick sound
2017-11-24 23:15 Critical_Star: 00:26:052 (26052|2,26416|3,26780|4) - if i make it to 1/2 LN , do you think is good?
2017-11-24 23:15 Critical_Star: added to 6
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysHhq/5717096c62.png
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: yeah how about
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: 1/1 is better imo
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHjo/8278d6cbb5.png like this can?
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: i feel 1/2 are nice too
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: also to diff the sound from previous LN
2017-11-24 23:17 Kuo Kyoka: its ok but idk what sounds could fit it
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 00:25:689 - like this one is 1/2
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 00:25:689 - like this one is 1/1
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: same timing la
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: actually i typo
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 1/2 > 1/1
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: nah it's the same sound but on 00:26:052 - got more bell or piano synth idk
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: but it would be fine too
2017-11-24 23:19 Critical_Star: extra is a mix of 1/2 and 1/1 LN
2017-11-24 23:19 Kuo Kyoka: burn LN
2017-11-24 23:19 Kuo Kyoka: LN = enmity
2017-11-24 23:20 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:052 - mive to 1st for balance a bit
2017-11-24 23:20 Critical_Star: i make 1-3.5 instead
2017-11-24 23:20 Critical_Star: enmity for kids
2017-11-24 23:21 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:416 - https://puu.sh/ysHs0/935eddf6da.png how about this l
2017-11-24 23:21 Critical_Star: 00:54:234 - added a note here
2017-11-24 23:21 Kuo Kyoka: ok also
2017-11-24 23:22 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 23:23 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:689 - is it too hard to add kick here?
2017-11-24 23:23 Critical_Star: 01:10:962 - 01:11:325 - i add a note here for the sync
2017-11-24 23:24 Critical_Star: hmm for normal i guess i will ignore that
2017-11-24 23:24 Kuo Kyoka: it's better to make long note here instead 01:11:507 (71507|2) - for the sync
2017-11-24 23:25 Kuo Kyoka: 01:15:143 - missing a note here
2017-11-24 23:26 Critical_Star: added
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:067 - on here hmm, suggestion something similar with easy haha
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: wait puush retarded
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612595
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: yeah puush retarded
2017-11-24 23:27 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHD1/9218dcf9af.jpg ikr
2017-11-24 23:28 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 23:28 Kuo Kyoka: 01:40:052 (100052|3) - i think move to 6 is easier to catch
2017-11-24 23:28 Critical_Star: fix according to yours
2017-11-24 23:29 Critical_Star: no
2017-11-24 23:29 Critical_Star: okay
2017-11-24 23:30 Critical_Star: 01:55:143 - i change them into LN
2017-11-24 23:31 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHLd/227e589992.png 01:54:689 - my last part changes
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - how about change something in here
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: oh way
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: im drunk haha
2017-11-24 23:33 Critical_Star: u surely know where i would like to change haha
2017-11-24 23:33 Kuo Kyoka: *reading your mind*
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:56:598 (116598|5,116871|5,117143|5,117325|5) - but hmm
2017-11-24 23:34 Critical_Star: ket
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: how about move to 5th for the reflection of the last 13?
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: repel 150k+ dmg
2017-11-24 23:35 Critical_Star: 01:56:598 (116598|3,117325|3) - i would represent them special col for crash
2017-11-24 23:35 Critical_Star: yea bojio me play
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366216 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Hyper]]
2017-11-24 23:37 Kuo Kyoka: 00:13:871 - remove?
2017-11-24 23:37 Kuo Kyoka: feels like it stopped here
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: can
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: i will remove in another
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: but extra i represent them as snare
2017-11-24 23:38 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-24 23:38 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:143 - well i know there have 1/4 here
2017-11-24 23:39 Kuo Kyoka: but if you follow the flute sound, 1/6 is more correct as you did on 00:46:598 -
2017-11-24 23:39 Critical_Star: 00:46:598 (46598|3,46689|2,46780|1) - pretty sure are 1/4
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: la i mean 00:47:143 (47143|3,47234|4,47325|5) -
2017-11-24 23:40 Critical_Star: 00:47:143 (47143|3,47234|4,47325|5) - yes i am kinda aware of this one
2017-11-24 23:40 Critical_Star: but can i keep 1/4 as simple purpose?
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: just i mention that one is flute sound too
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: i dont really know
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: 1/4 got snap
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: but since you are following flute?
2017-11-24 23:41 Critical_Star: it sound more 1/4 to me
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: blame composer
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: up to you tho
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:416 - would just suggest to add a long long note here
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:56:598 - till
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: 00:58:780 - on here till01:00:962 -
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: but just imo
2017-11-24 23:42 Critical_Star: so is at col 4 for sure
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: yea
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: but its up to you
2017-11-24 23:42 Critical_Star: 00:58:780 - here sb la
2017-11-24 23:43 Kuo Kyoka: 6th
2017-11-24 23:43 Kuo Kyoka: 6th bestplace cuz you used this pattern
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: but 6 hold + 57 = killer
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: enjoy
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:780 (86780|3,87507|3) - and this is hmm, kinda unneccessary, would be the best just to keep notes for synth sounds
2017-11-24 23:44 Critical_Star: guess i will repeat here like previous
2017-11-24 23:45 Critical_Star: dafuq what after u mod then i suddenly have many thing comes in my mind to change
2017-11-24 23:45 Kuo Kyoka: welcome to my world
2017-11-24 23:45 Kuo Kyoka: where i give rekt to other
2017-11-24 23:45 Critical_Star: u must be wendy
2017-11-24 23:46 Critical_Star: removed that
2017-11-24 23:46 Critical_Star: 01:35:689 - added another note here
2017-11-24 23:47 Kuo Kyoka: ala why more notes
2017-11-24 23:47 Critical_Star: 01:28:052 (88052|2,88052|4) -
2017-11-24 23:47 Critical_Star: need mc chicken 2 set
2017-11-24 23:48 Critical_Star: 01:36:598 - till 01:38:052 - i feel this pattern are sb
2017-11-24 23:48 Kuo Kyoka: 01:52:962 - this part 1/2 is fine like 01:48:598 -
2017-11-24 23:48 Kuo Kyoka: mahira is shit
2017-11-24 23:49 Critical_Star: the sound are getting intense there
2017-11-24 23:49 Critical_Star: so i would give little more in 1/4
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysIkK/db54b56d29.png
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: idk
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: but this looks sb also
2017-11-24 23:50 Critical_Star: la about the same lol
2017-11-24 23:51 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysImR/4c34ea2385.png for now i do like this
2017-11-24 23:51 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysInc/4bdc7d5a22.png or
2017-11-24 23:51 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysInI/c5a8eb43ad.png this wtf la
2017-11-24 23:51 Critical_Star: eh not bad
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: ;ahh
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: ok i take your suggestion
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: this wtf la < this one
2017-11-24 23:52 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysIqG/c398171819.png or this too
2017-11-24 23:53 Kuo Kyoka: that 1/4 kinda sb
2017-11-24 23:53 Kuo Kyoka: take louder notes is more easier to adjustment i think
2017-11-24 23:53 Critical_Star: good idea
2017-11-24 23:53 Critical_Star: fixed
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: ah you are mcd
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: :ahh
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: 01:41:689 - btw do you think is better to start 1/4 here
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: nah 1/4 here is better
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: that one too small
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: or my earphone is retarded
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:42:052 - but i prefer a stair on here more
2017-11-24 23:55 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysIwz/66e4cb3ecf.png like this then
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: ya
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: 01:53:052 (113052|5,113234|5) - remove?
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: 01:53:052 (113052|5,113234|5) - same as this part
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: 01:44:416 moved to 6
2017-11-24 23:56 01:48:598 - * la wrong timing
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: 01:44:416 - moved to 6
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: that one i ad explain la
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: i do 1/4 for the density at last part
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: ok same pitch same column can also
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: oh la
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: im drunk haha
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366213 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Another]]
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: 01:51:143 - after this sound a litle bit more noma
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: so yea
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: sorry le take a lot of your time
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: nah it's ok
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: im actually boring gbf now
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: actually that not a bad thing
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: no pot to spent of course
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: but need to change a bit, like l432 :kemon:
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: 80 pots left
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: send help
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: if not enough to get 2 flb is okay just dont spent it
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:10:052 - missing note
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: no la
2017-11-24 23:59 Kuo Kyoka: i didnt tend to get 2flb
2017-11-24 23:59 Kuo Kyoka: but g o l d b a r
2017-11-24 23:59 Critical_Star: added at 6
2017-11-24 23:59 Critical_Star: but u still spam NM hoping for gold bar :clap
2017-11-25 00:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:16:962 - suggestion
2017-11-25 00:00 Kuo Kyoka: puush retarded again
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612832
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:598 (26598|1,26689|2,26780|3,26871|4) - i think would be the best to move to left 1 column
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: that stair is neato-desu :ahhhL
2017-11-25 00:02 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:871 (26871|1,26871|3) - but this sb
2017-11-25 00:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:325 (31325|2,31416|1) - switch this for the pitch
2017-11-25 00:03 Critical_Star: 00:31:052 (31052|1,31143|2,31325|2,31416|1) - ermm
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:143 - can add note on here for the harp sound
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: oh that part i would just suggest this but up to you tho
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: ah puush siht
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612858
2017-11-25 00:03 Critical_Star: ok added
2017-11-25 00:04 Critical_Star: 00:31:234 - add here?
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: not yet changed hs to S:C1
2017-11-25 00:04 Critical_Star: kinda soft here
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: yah that part up to you
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: got harp
2017-11-25 00:05 Kuo Kyoka: but remove is fine
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: forgot to change
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: will fix for all
2017-11-25 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:507 (53507|3) - this one kinda off
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:689 (53689|2,53749|1,53810|0,53871|3) - for flute, 67 for kick 00:53:507 (53507|1) - hihat 00:53:325 (53325|0) - flute i guess
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: oh nvm it's flute too
2017-11-25 00:07 Critical_Star: flute double here
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-25 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 00:56:962 - missing one
2017-11-25 00:08 Critical_Star: added
2017-11-25 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:143 (63143|2) - move to 2 more balance imo
2017-11-25 00:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:06:234 - missing one
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: 01:06:234 - added something here
2017-11-25 00:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:416 - missing too
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: 01:12:416 -
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: u hambagar
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahaha
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: jinxewd
2017-11-25 00:10 Critical_Star: 01:22:962 (82962|1,82962|3,83022|4,83083|5,83143|0,83143|6,83143|2) - i CTRL+H here
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:234 - one note is kinda soft
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: oh ctrlh looks nice
2017-11-25 00:10 Critical_Star: is KICKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK HA BAGHARRR
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: 01:22:780 (82780|6,82780|4,83143|6,83143|4) - this is kick too
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: lets the bass kick
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: :smirk:
2017-11-25 00:11 Critical_Star: :KEMON
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:507 - i think better 3 notes here for kick?
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: 01:31:507 -
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: added a note
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: yes i am first
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: but that is actually a good pattern
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: pfffff
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: wait and see
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: wawa mention this too
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: 01:32:962 -
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: but to make the stream more simple but i think i will catch double for snare only
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: a d d a n o t e
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: no man
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: 01:33:143 (93143|0,93143|2,93325|3,93325|1,93507|2,93507|4) - i want to differentiate the sound from
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: so single la
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: s u c c y o u r n o t e
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-25 00:14 Critical_Star: :smug:
2017-11-25 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:36:962 - https://puu.sh/ysJ3t/3b087ef8ef.png idk what i did on here honestly
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: eh that was a random pattern lol
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: that pattern feel better for you?
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: nah
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: lol
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: but that 13 57 on 1/2 :ahhh:
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: ok i still keep mine since it is easier for me
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: but i think change to a better way to understand it
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: like where is snare where is kick
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: 01:37:143 (97143|2,97143|0,97234|6,97234|4,97416|5,97416|6,97507|2,97507|1) -
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: about that i do
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: i think is good
2017-11-25 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - eh
2017-11-25 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: this is 1/6
2017-11-25 00:19 Kuo Kyoka: forgot to mention on hyper too
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: oh this one
2017-11-25 00:19 Kuo Kyoka: extra pattern is more clear imo
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: idk leh
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: but i feel 1/4 are easier here
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: ya i know
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: just for easy purpose
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: NM120 isnt easy la
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: but imo would be better to change to correct snap
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: 1/6 is easy to do this
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysJcM/e32e0aca82.png
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: am i right ladies
2017-11-25 00:20 Critical_Star: just adding more trigger will make the raid harder
2017-11-25 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: blizzard
2017-11-25 00:26 Critical_Star: walao
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - pffff
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366215 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Extra]]
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: this extra 1/6
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: T R I G G E R E D
2017-11-25 00:30 Critical_Star: alalalalalaa
2017-11-25 00:30 Kuo Kyoka: WELCOME TO EXTRA DIFF
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:052 (7052|5,7098|1) - where in the beginning already rekt you high sky
2017-11-25 00:31 Critical_Star: actually i am thinking of a custom name but no idea
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: want custom name
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: i think gonna dig something
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: and discord u say you are loli
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: sleep is for weak
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: eh really
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: faster finish haha
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: pfff
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: im 6 years old
2017-11-25 00:33 Kuo Kyoka: 00:08:477 (8477|3,8477|5,8537|2) - 1/8 pffff
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: just post for now and i will mention i will update when qualify check
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: i fix ad laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
2017-11-25 00:33 Kuo Kyoka: i like to triggers my man
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: just didnt give u update extra just now when i realize
2017-11-25 00:34 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:052 (26052|2,26416|4) - better to change it like 00:26:780 (26780|6,26780|5) - ?
2017-11-25 00:35 Critical_Star: 00:26:052 (26052|1,26052|2,26416|3,26416|4) - isnt this are the same?
2017-11-25 00:35 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:780 (26780|5,26780|6) - yah i mean make it the same with this one?
2017-11-25 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:143 - add a note for harp
2017-11-25 00:36 Critical_Star: oh u mean cut the LN
2017-11-25 00:36 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: yeah
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: haha extra too many notes
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: im confuse ald
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:143 - like why no note here
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: hehe
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: added'
2017-11-25 00:38 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:962 - missing too
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:39 Critical_Star: 00:53:052 (53052|2) - i remove this one
2017-11-25 00:39 Critical_Star: catch the sync here
2017-11-25 00:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:57:507 (57507|0,57507|6,57598|1,57598|5,57689|4,57689|2,57871|4,57871|2,57962|1,57962|5,58052|0,58052|6) - well, kinda may get note about why it isn't 1/6 here cuz it looks clear like that
2017-11-25 00:39 Kuo Kyoka: 01:02:234 - this is 1/6
2017-11-25 00:40 Critical_Star: not good to play?
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: 01:02:598 - this is 1/8
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: it;s fine to play
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: but i mean community might just catch that spot and say why it isn't 1/6
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: because it's too clearly you're following flute now but 1/4 instead 1/6
2017-11-25 00:41 Critical_Star: i see
2017-11-25 00:41 Critical_Star: i will fix it
2017-11-25 00:41 Kuo Kyoka: 01:06:234 - should 2 notes like last part
2017-11-25 00:41 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:416 - same too
2017-11-25 00:42 Kuo Kyoka: missing a note too
2017-11-25 00:42 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:780 - would actually better if it's a LN too
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:234 (86234|3,86234|4,86507|4,86507|2) - hmm both are hihat
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:325 (86325|5) - but on here is kick, maybe need to adjust the layout
2017-11-25 00:43 Critical_Star: i think i would leave a blank at 01:24:780 - to give a break before new phases
2017-11-25 00:43 Critical_Star: so i didnt do LN
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:325 - oh
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: this part solo LN
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: kinda like it
2017-11-25 00:44 Critical_Star: ermm, since the LN section i just do simple layering like double for hithat here
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:20:598 - would better if it's same on here too
2017-11-25 00:45 Critical_Star: because i purposely do 2 phase of diff pattern
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: oh lol
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: got it then
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: 01:40:598 - missing
2017-11-25 00:46 Kuo Kyoka: 01:45:871 (105871|6,105871|5,105871|0) - suppose to be on ? 01:45:962 -
2017-11-25 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:50:598 - hmm well i think 1/6 might do the snap better
2017-11-25 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:689 - add a note for kick?
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: la ok
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: only left that
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: snare + kick triple for this red
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: haha idk where to point more
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: sorry taking you along for long
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: 01:50:689 (110689|1,110689|4,110780|6,110780|0,110780|3,110871|2,110871|5,110962|0,110962|4,111052|6,111052|2,111143|5,111143|0,111143|4,111143|1,111143|3) -
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: here is 1/6?
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: no i should thank you
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: nice point 01:50:598 - 1/6
2017-11-25 00:49 Critical_Star: all ah?
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: 01:50:780 - i think just 1/4 here
2017-11-25 00:49 Critical_Star: or maybe i just keep for 1/4 stream
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: but 1/6 snap there may need to change
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: blame the composer
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: lmfao
2017-11-25 00:50 Critical_Star: ya
2017-11-25 00:50 Critical_Star: i think 1/4 all here better
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: but need to be conflict
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: between difficulties
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: all the diff are 1/4 here
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow gonna recheck later
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: yeah 1/4 too
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: but idk la
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: ket
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: ok catch you in discord
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: im gonna get rekt haha
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: alright then
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: hahahaha
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: do u want the update
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2017-11-25 00:52 Kuo Kyoka: see later


On easy I miss this one sorry, 01:50:780 (110780|2) - move to 7 is better for hand moving
01:56:598 (116598|6,116871|6) - how about move to 6th for mirror patterns

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[Beginner]
00:26:780 (26780|4) - would be unique if you can turn this to LN for the rising sound there.
00:35:143 (35143|3,35507|1) - although in the aesthetic this might looked better, but pitch wise you need to reverse the LN there. true but i think the current looks better haha, i would keep it
00:54:052 - Should be double note? the snare is strong enough for that. somehow i changed the pattern here, i catch the flute here instead
01:03:143 (63143|1) - It'd be more fitting if you move this to col 1, aalthough you seem to form a stair, but the lack of note in col 1 felt really noticeable here, moreover, 1-7 double suit the cymbal sound transition to other section
01:07:871 (67871|2,68234|1) - Make it col 2-6? it will follow PR more accurately like you did at 01:03:507 - , and it won't destroy overall structure.
01:11:143 - how about something like https://puu.sh/yt7iy/f13d6e5641.png ? it flows more naturally towards the left side. hmm good point but somehow i prefer the current layout here ;w;
01:13:689 (73689|4,73871|6) - The straight stair flow doesn't sync well with the flute imo, Switch column them will give more impact with the instrument.
01:19:507 (79507|1,79871|2,80234|3) - it would be cool to turn these to long notes to emphasize that the pattern already going to the kiai section. it's more or less the same concept you did at 01:45:689 -
01:26:052 (86052|4,94780|5) - These 2 places are actually fit to have the LN due to not be collisioned with other note directly
01:26:598 (86598|5,86962|5) - Try the jack at col 7? since you emptied col 7 for quite long here. it feels on 6 for me

[Normal]
00:26:780 (26780|4) - Will be cool if you extend the LN till 00:27:143 - , i know the instrument you wanna follow, but the sound already been distorted and unclear being mixed too much, the rising sound is the most outstanding here.
00:35:507 (35507|2) - try move to col 1 to be jacked with 00:35:871 (35871|0) - ? since you use the jack concept at 00:34:780 (34780|4,35143|4,35143|6,35507|6) -
01:02:780 (62780|2) - This note should be in col 1, since the kick isn't the same anymmore as the structure you made at 01:01:871 (61871|2,62052|2,62416|2) - , it will shown the jack progression more adequately. but here is col 2, i think is already different from the col 3 jack kick
01:06:416 (66416|6,67143|4) - move these to col 6 and col 7? this way it will form the 1/1 jack at 01:07:143 - , similar with what you did at 01:15:871 (75871|6,76234|6) -
01:09:689 (69689|6) - move to col 6 will make the structure better since you will mirror the jack at 01:10:780 (70780|1,71143|1) -
01:24:234 - 01:32:962 - It felt awkward that you left the drum empty here, you might wanna make a "break" for your pattern, but this felt like an odd spot to do so, since you ignore the louder sound and the overall kiai structure is basically a more dense non stop pattern. hyper diff too x.x i understand your concern about this part but i intend to give a break to differentiate the flute after the LN at 01:33:143 (93143|4,93325|3,93507|2) - , i used to have a note here as kick but when i testplayed it is just like non stop 1/2 pattern that does not catch the flute effectively here :<
01:46:416 (106416|1) - move to col 1 with the same reason as 00:35:507 (35507|2) -

[Hyper]
00:25:689 - This should be double imo, although you may think it's weaker instrument sound compared to the latter 2 double note, but it kinda felt lack of impact somehow, my suggestion is http://puu.sh/yt9BH/37398fbd5f.png rearranged here
00:49:780 - 00:49:962 - kinda awkward you left out the 1/4 here, considering you try to map many 1/4 in this section. to make it easier for hyper, i only catch 1/4 flute for this part
00:53:871 (53871|5) - move to col 7 will make the aesthetic better here :D
00:54:416 - here is 2 notes + 1 LN, but at 00:58:780 - is 3 notes + 1 LN x.x" hmm, but i guess is fine to have another note for that crash part haha
01:02:689 - 1/4 here will make a nice touch since although it's 1/8, the 1/4 still quite emphasized with the song itself. cool but i just try to ignore any 1/4 here if possible since i am still focusing on 1/2 sound here
01:03:143 - if you intend make this 4 note chord, maybe in normal diff you can make it 3 note chord? not sure if it's intentional or not. reduced a note here
01:10:416 (70416|6) - move to col 5? so you will form stair that connect 01:09:689 (69689|6,70052|5,70598|2,70689|1,70780|0) -
01:10:962 - 01:15:689 - would be cool to map the 1/6 since in other section you usually don't ignore it. ya some i do catch based on i think it is nice but for here i think i could give a break of 1/6 instead. i feel better for hyper diff in this way. example this one 01:19:325 (79325|4,79386|3,79446|2) -
since there isnt any snare or kick for me to catch but only pure 1/6 sound then i could do :)


[Another]
00:26:962 - kinda an awkward one that this one is double note somehow since the one at 00:27:052 - is single note.
00:57:598 - 00:57:962 - For me this section kinda a bit bland if you too focused on the drum, i think you can map 1/4 and 1/6 in these place since this part is quite "special" on its own to be given twist
01:15:962 - A bit awkward you map full 1/4 but in extra diff it's empty, it seems only this place you did that.
01:29:143 (89143|2,89234|3) - Switch column here? the mini trill is a bit awkward since you don't really bracketing around here.
01:50:598 (110598|2,110689|3,110780|2) - the twist kinda anti-flow to follow here, try make 01:50:689 (110689|3,110780|2) - col 2 and col 4?
01:54:052 (114052|5) - move to col 1? the transition from double 5-7 to 5-6-7 triple kinda too tricky especially the pattern revolving right hand here is really complex.

[Extra]
00:07:052 (7052|5,7098|1) - 1/6?
00:17:143 (17143|6) - move to col 6 to give a moment rest after the triple jack before.
00:26:598 - 00:26:689 - try make it more complex by adding note at col 3 and col 4? it won't be too hard since the pattern is still a straight stair shield pattern, i can still combo it xd
00:38:052 (38052|0,38234|0,38416|0,38598|0,38780|0) - the 5 consecutive jack is kinda awkward since there isn't any instrument to emphasize these.
00:53:507 (53507|1,53598|0,53598|2,53689|1) - This is kinda excessive i think x.x , it makes it really complex and out of place imo, how about make 00:53:507 (53507|1,53598|2,53689|1) - 2-3-2?
00:57:871 - I kinda think a fun way to make this more fun to play, how about https://puu.sh/ytaAE/c90c4233a1.jpg (well it's a suggestion, but i just think full LN the flute is really nice here) rearranged here but i kinda think short 1/6 LN are pretty annoying haha, so i would keep 1/6 as normal note
01:02:355 (62355|3,62416|3) - well, you know.. =w="
01:28:234 - Well, Just a suggestion, but i think the aesthetic is better here http://puu.sh/ytaIi/25b12fac62.png
01:46:416 (106416|0,106507|1) - Switch column for better aesthetic too here :D
01:56:416 (116416|3,116507|3) - The jack kinda awkward x.x hmm but i feel it was good to represent the same pitch here

Call me back :D
:) many thanks for your mod , refixed some part based on your advice

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2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: nekomata > dj taka
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: extra i havent fixed aiyo
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: ikr
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: bpm?
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: 3/4 fixed
2017-11-24 22:49 Critical_Star: only snap
2017-11-24 22:49 Kuo Kyoka: oh ok
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: well anyway
2017-11-24 22:50 Critical_Star: just sure feel free to point out those error
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: i will move one by one first, minor mod i guess
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:689 (9689|5,10416|5,10780|2,11507|5) - this section, music go like this
2017-11-24 22:50 Kuo Kyoka: your pattern is fine
2017-11-24 22:50 Critical_Star: which diff>?
2017-11-24 22:51 Kuo Kyoka: but it's weird to have 00:10:416 (10416|5,10780|2,11507|5,11871|2) - while it changed on 00:11:871 (11871|2) -
2017-11-24 22:51 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366214 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Beginner]]
2017-11-24 22:52 Critical_Star: 00:11:871 - ah i get your point, i will reverse the note here
2017-11-24 22:52 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 22:53 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:871 (49871|5) - how about move to 7th for a little bit balance
2017-11-24 22:53 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:143 (67143|0) - i would suggest to change to long note here till double white
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: i just wanted to say that lol'
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: ya i changed
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:143 (67143|0) - missing double notes 01:14:052 (74052|2,74052|0) -
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahaha
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: i mean missing double notes according to*
2017-11-24 22:54 Critical_Star: stop reading my mind
2017-11-24 22:54 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: hmm
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: but la
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: got LN
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: maybe no double there
2017-11-24 22:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:11:871 - on here isnt it?
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: 01:15:871 (75871|4) - then here i make LN
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: ya
2017-11-24 22:55 Critical_Star: beginner i think just single for all that LN secton part
2017-11-24 22:56 Kuo Kyoka: ah i mean on here 01:11:871 - lost a note if follow 2 notes like on 01:14:052 (74052|2,74052|0) -
2017-11-24 22:56 Critical_Star: 01:19:507 (79507|1,79871|2,80234|3) - i moved to right by 1 to make a stair
2017-11-24 22:56 Kuo Kyoka: yeah thats nice too
2017-11-24 22:56 Critical_Star: alright then
2017-11-24 22:57 Critical_Star: addedd
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:780 - this part kinda confuse on the right
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: but i think it's fine
2017-11-24 22:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:57:325 (117325|0) - move to 4th for something special?
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: if u notice it was the similar chorus like the beginning
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: but i just intend to make a little different variation here
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: sure
2017-11-24 23:00 Critical_Star: moved to 4
2017-11-24 23:00 Kuo Kyoka: yeah it's almost the same
2017-11-24 23:01 Kuo Kyoka: but i mean the right patterns https://puu.sh/ysGPG/2660868457.png the left one is kinda neat so yeah
2017-11-24 23:02 Critical_Star: have u realize there is no note on col 1
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: of course
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: hahahaha
2017-11-24 23:02 Kuo Kyoka: but i dont think it would be that big problem
2017-11-24 23:03 Critical_Star: somehow rearranged a bit to make right neater
2017-11-24 23:03 Critical_Star: ok i keep :hue
2017-11-24 23:03 Kuo Kyoka: i have a suggestion
2017-11-24 23:04 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysGVC/30407f4688.png looks dumb haha
2017-11-24 23:04 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:416 - but my suggestion is still follow 1/1 flow on here
2017-11-24 23:05 Kuo Kyoka: it's kinda confuse the part when 01:55:507 - 1/4 is more easy to recorgnizes
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: can also
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: not bad
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: 01:54:416 - http://puu.sh/ysH2h/594a61130a.png
2017-11-24 23:07 Kuo Kyoka: let's noma
2017-11-24 23:07 Critical_Star: i changed here btw
2017-11-24 23:07 Kuo Kyoka: oh i see
2017-11-24 23:08 Critical_Star: but no suptix
2017-11-24 23:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:416 - i think still best do 1/1 here?
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: but this one kinda confuse here https://puu.sh/ysH4W/8bca9bb8f8.png cuz it's different pattern https://puu.sh/ysH5b/663518ae09.png
2017-11-24 23:09 Critical_Star: okay
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: well ok noma
2017-11-24 23:09 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366217 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Normal]]
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:02:780 (2780|0) - move to 3rd for pitch change?
2017-11-24 23:10 Critical_Star: changed again last one
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:10 Critical_Star: got diff?
2017-11-24 23:10 Kuo Kyoka: where?
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: tho i will follow the det det sound
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: 00:02:780 -
2017-11-24 23:11 Kuo Kyoka: idk, i just follow your topdiff haha
2017-11-24 23:11 Kuo Kyoka: but switching isnt so bad
2017-11-24 23:11 Critical_Star: 00:17:325 - http://puu.sh/ysH9r/ee276b2983.png i changed pattern here
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: how about a LN here?
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: 00:02:598 - sorry wrong channel
2017-11-24 23:12 Critical_Star: dafuq i copy timeline to lobby channel
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 23:12 Kuo Kyoka: drunk cs
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: hmm i dont know
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: maybe pure normal notes is good for this part
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:325 - but add a note here?
2017-11-24 23:13 Critical_Star: i make LN there
2017-11-24 23:13 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 23:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:09:325 (9325|4) - move to 1st? feels like pitch change
2017-11-24 23:14 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHe1/769bbf5ca2.png for all that part i make like this ad
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:17:325 - but la, this pattern here is good ald imo
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: lololol
2017-11-24 23:14 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-24 23:14 Critical_Star: noo special key are annoying
2017-11-24 23:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:29:325 - add a note for kick sound
2017-11-24 23:15 Critical_Star: 00:26:052 (26052|2,26416|3,26780|4) - if i make it to 1/2 LN , do you think is good?
2017-11-24 23:15 Critical_Star: added to 6
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysHhq/5717096c62.png
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: yeah how about
2017-11-24 23:16 Kuo Kyoka: 1/1 is better imo
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHjo/8278d6cbb5.png like this can?
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: i feel 1/2 are nice too
2017-11-24 23:17 Critical_Star: also to diff the sound from previous LN
2017-11-24 23:17 Kuo Kyoka: its ok but idk what sounds could fit it
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 00:25:689 - like this one is 1/2
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 00:25:689 - like this one is 1/1
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: same timing la
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: actually i typo
2017-11-24 23:18 Critical_Star: 1/2 > 1/1
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: nah it's the same sound but on 00:26:052 - got more bell or piano synth idk
2017-11-24 23:18 Kuo Kyoka: but it would be fine too
2017-11-24 23:19 Critical_Star: extra is a mix of 1/2 and 1/1 LN
2017-11-24 23:19 Kuo Kyoka: burn LN
2017-11-24 23:19 Kuo Kyoka: LN = enmity
2017-11-24 23:20 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:052 - mive to 1st for balance a bit
2017-11-24 23:20 Critical_Star: i make 1-3.5 instead
2017-11-24 23:20 Critical_Star: enmity for kids
2017-11-24 23:21 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:416 - https://puu.sh/ysHs0/935eddf6da.png how about this l
2017-11-24 23:21 Critical_Star: 00:54:234 - added a note here
2017-11-24 23:21 Kuo Kyoka: ok also
2017-11-24 23:22 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-24 23:23 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:689 - is it too hard to add kick here?
2017-11-24 23:23 Critical_Star: 01:10:962 - 01:11:325 - i add a note here for the sync
2017-11-24 23:24 Critical_Star: hmm for normal i guess i will ignore that
2017-11-24 23:24 Kuo Kyoka: it's better to make long note here instead 01:11:507 (71507|2) - for the sync
2017-11-24 23:25 Kuo Kyoka: 01:15:143 - missing a note here
2017-11-24 23:26 Critical_Star: added
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:067 - on here hmm, suggestion something similar with easy haha
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: wait puush retarded
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612595
2017-11-24 23:27 Kuo Kyoka: yeah puush retarded
2017-11-24 23:27 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHD1/9218dcf9af.jpg ikr
2017-11-24 23:28 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahahaha
2017-11-24 23:28 Kuo Kyoka: 01:40:052 (100052|3) - i think move to 6 is easier to catch
2017-11-24 23:28 Critical_Star: fix according to yours
2017-11-24 23:29 Critical_Star: no
2017-11-24 23:29 Critical_Star: okay
2017-11-24 23:30 Critical_Star: 01:55:143 - i change them into LN
2017-11-24 23:31 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysHLd/227e589992.png 01:54:689 - my last part changes
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - how about change something in here
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: oh way
2017-11-24 23:32 Kuo Kyoka: im drunk haha
2017-11-24 23:33 Critical_Star: u surely know where i would like to change haha
2017-11-24 23:33 Kuo Kyoka: *reading your mind*
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:56:598 (116598|5,116871|5,117143|5,117325|5) - but hmm
2017-11-24 23:34 Critical_Star: ket
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: how about move to 5th for the reflection of the last 13?
2017-11-24 23:34 Kuo Kyoka: repel 150k+ dmg
2017-11-24 23:35 Critical_Star: 01:56:598 (116598|3,117325|3) - i would represent them special col for crash
2017-11-24 23:35 Critical_Star: yea bojio me play
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-24 23:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366216 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Hyper]]
2017-11-24 23:37 Kuo Kyoka: 00:13:871 - remove?
2017-11-24 23:37 Kuo Kyoka: feels like it stopped here
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: can
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: i will remove in another
2017-11-24 23:38 Critical_Star: but extra i represent them as snare
2017-11-24 23:38 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-24 23:38 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:143 - well i know there have 1/4 here
2017-11-24 23:39 Kuo Kyoka: but if you follow the flute sound, 1/6 is more correct as you did on 00:46:598 -
2017-11-24 23:39 Critical_Star: 00:46:598 (46598|3,46689|2,46780|1) - pretty sure are 1/4
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: la i mean 00:47:143 (47143|3,47234|4,47325|5) -
2017-11-24 23:40 Critical_Star: 00:47:143 (47143|3,47234|4,47325|5) - yes i am kinda aware of this one
2017-11-24 23:40 Critical_Star: but can i keep 1/4 as simple purpose?
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: just i mention that one is flute sound too
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: i dont really know
2017-11-24 23:40 Kuo Kyoka: 1/4 got snap
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: but since you are following flute?
2017-11-24 23:41 Critical_Star: it sound more 1/4 to me
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: blame composer
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: up to you tho
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:416 - would just suggest to add a long long note here
2017-11-24 23:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:56:598 - till
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: 00:58:780 - on here till01:00:962 -
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: but just imo
2017-11-24 23:42 Critical_Star: so is at col 4 for sure
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: yea
2017-11-24 23:42 Kuo Kyoka: but its up to you
2017-11-24 23:42 Critical_Star: 00:58:780 - here sb la
2017-11-24 23:43 Kuo Kyoka: 6th
2017-11-24 23:43 Kuo Kyoka: 6th bestplace cuz you used this pattern
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: but 6 hold + 57 = killer
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: enjoy
2017-11-24 23:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:780 (86780|3,87507|3) - and this is hmm, kinda unneccessary, would be the best just to keep notes for synth sounds
2017-11-24 23:44 Critical_Star: guess i will repeat here like previous
2017-11-24 23:45 Critical_Star: dafuq what after u mod then i suddenly have many thing comes in my mind to change
2017-11-24 23:45 Kuo Kyoka: welcome to my world
2017-11-24 23:45 Kuo Kyoka: where i give rekt to other
2017-11-24 23:45 Critical_Star: u must be wendy
2017-11-24 23:46 Critical_Star: removed that
2017-11-24 23:46 Critical_Star: 01:35:689 - added another note here
2017-11-24 23:47 Kuo Kyoka: ala why more notes
2017-11-24 23:47 Critical_Star: 01:28:052 (88052|2,88052|4) -
2017-11-24 23:47 Critical_Star: need mc chicken 2 set
2017-11-24 23:48 Critical_Star: 01:36:598 - till 01:38:052 - i feel this pattern are sb
2017-11-24 23:48 Kuo Kyoka: 01:52:962 - this part 1/2 is fine like 01:48:598 -
2017-11-24 23:48 Kuo Kyoka: mahira is shit
2017-11-24 23:49 Critical_Star: the sound are getting intense there
2017-11-24 23:49 Critical_Star: so i would give little more in 1/4
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysIkK/db54b56d29.png
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: idk
2017-11-24 23:49 Kuo Kyoka: but this looks sb also
2017-11-24 23:50 Critical_Star: la about the same lol
2017-11-24 23:51 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysImR/4c34ea2385.png for now i do like this
2017-11-24 23:51 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysInc/4bdc7d5a22.png or
2017-11-24 23:51 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysInI/c5a8eb43ad.png this wtf la
2017-11-24 23:51 Critical_Star: eh not bad
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: ;ahh
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: ok i take your suggestion
2017-11-24 23:52 Critical_Star: this wtf la < this one
2017-11-24 23:52 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysIqG/c398171819.png or this too
2017-11-24 23:53 Kuo Kyoka: that 1/4 kinda sb
2017-11-24 23:53 Kuo Kyoka: take louder notes is more easier to adjustment i think
2017-11-24 23:53 Critical_Star: good idea
2017-11-24 23:53 Critical_Star: fixed
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: ah you are mcd
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: :ahh
2017-11-24 23:54 Critical_Star: 01:41:689 - btw do you think is better to start 1/4 here
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: nah 1/4 here is better
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: that one too small
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: or my earphone is retarded
2017-11-24 23:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:42:052 - but i prefer a stair on here more
2017-11-24 23:55 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/ysIwz/66e4cb3ecf.png like this then
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: ya
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: 01:53:052 (113052|5,113234|5) - remove?
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: 01:53:052 (113052|5,113234|5) - same as this part
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: 01:44:416 moved to 6
2017-11-24 23:56 01:48:598 - * la wrong timing
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: 01:44:416 - moved to 6
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: that one i ad explain la
2017-11-24 23:56 Critical_Star: i do 1/4 for the density at last part
2017-11-24 23:56 Kuo Kyoka: ok same pitch same column can also
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: oh la
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: im drunk haha
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366213 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Another]]
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: 01:51:143 - after this sound a litle bit more noma
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: so yea
2017-11-24 23:57 Critical_Star: sorry le take a lot of your time
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: nah it's ok
2017-11-24 23:57 Kuo Kyoka: im actually boring gbf now
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: actually that not a bad thing
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: no pot to spent of course
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: but need to change a bit, like l432 :kemon:
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: 80 pots left
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: send help
2017-11-24 23:58 Critical_Star: if not enough to get 2 flb is okay just dont spent it
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: 00:10:052 - missing note
2017-11-24 23:58 Kuo Kyoka: no la
2017-11-24 23:59 Kuo Kyoka: i didnt tend to get 2flb
2017-11-24 23:59 Kuo Kyoka: but g o l d b a r
2017-11-24 23:59 Critical_Star: added at 6
2017-11-24 23:59 Critical_Star: but u still spam NM hoping for gold bar :clap
2017-11-25 00:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:16:962 - suggestion
2017-11-25 00:00 Kuo Kyoka: puush retarded again
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612832
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:598 (26598|1,26689|2,26780|3,26871|4) - i think would be the best to move to left 1 column
2017-11-25 00:01 Kuo Kyoka: that stair is neato-desu :ahhhL
2017-11-25 00:02 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:871 (26871|1,26871|3) - but this sb
2017-11-25 00:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:325 (31325|2,31416|1) - switch this for the pitch
2017-11-25 00:03 Critical_Star: 00:31:052 (31052|1,31143|2,31325|2,31416|1) - ermm
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:143 - can add note on here for the harp sound
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: oh that part i would just suggest this but up to you tho
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: ah puush siht
2017-11-25 00:03 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612858
2017-11-25 00:03 Critical_Star: ok added
2017-11-25 00:04 Critical_Star: 00:31:234 - add here?
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: not yet changed hs to S:C1
2017-11-25 00:04 Critical_Star: kinda soft here
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: yah that part up to you
2017-11-25 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: got harp
2017-11-25 00:05 Kuo Kyoka: but remove is fine
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: forgot to change
2017-11-25 00:05 Critical_Star: will fix for all
2017-11-25 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:507 (53507|3) - this one kinda off
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:689 (53689|2,53749|1,53810|0,53871|3) - for flute, 67 for kick 00:53:507 (53507|1) - hihat 00:53:325 (53325|0) - flute i guess
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: oh nvm it's flute too
2017-11-25 00:07 Critical_Star: flute double here
2017-11-25 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2017-11-25 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 00:56:962 - missing one
2017-11-25 00:08 Critical_Star: added
2017-11-25 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:143 (63143|2) - move to 2 more balance imo
2017-11-25 00:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:06:234 - missing one
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: 01:06:234 - added something here
2017-11-25 00:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:12:416 - missing too
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: 01:12:416 -
2017-11-25 00:09 Critical_Star: u hambagar
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahaha
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: jinxewd
2017-11-25 00:10 Critical_Star: 01:22:962 (82962|1,82962|3,83022|4,83083|5,83143|0,83143|6,83143|2) - i CTRL+H here
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:234 - one note is kinda soft
2017-11-25 00:10 Kuo Kyoka: oh ctrlh looks nice
2017-11-25 00:10 Critical_Star: is KICKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK HA BAGHARRR
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: 01:22:780 (82780|6,82780|4,83143|6,83143|4) - this is kick too
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: lets the bass kick
2017-11-25 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: :smirk:
2017-11-25 00:11 Critical_Star: :KEMON
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:507 - i think better 3 notes here for kick?
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: 01:31:507 -
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: added a note
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: yes i am first
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: but that is actually a good pattern
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: pfffff
2017-11-25 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: wait and see
2017-11-25 00:12 Critical_Star: wawa mention this too
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: 01:32:962 -
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: but to make the stream more simple but i think i will catch double for snare only
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: a d d a n o t e
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: no man
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: 01:33:143 (93143|0,93143|2,93325|3,93325|1,93507|2,93507|4) - i want to differentiate the sound from
2017-11-25 00:13 Critical_Star: so single la
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: s u c c y o u r n o t e
2017-11-25 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: ok then
2017-11-25 00:14 Critical_Star: :smug:
2017-11-25 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:36:962 - https://puu.sh/ysJ3t/3b087ef8ef.png idk what i did on here honestly
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: eh that was a random pattern lol
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: that pattern feel better for you?
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: nah
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: lol
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: but that 13 57 on 1/2 :ahhh:
2017-11-25 00:17 Critical_Star: ok i still keep mine since it is easier for me
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: but i think change to a better way to understand it
2017-11-25 00:17 Kuo Kyoka: like where is snare where is kick
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: 01:37:143 (97143|2,97143|0,97234|6,97234|4,97416|5,97416|6,97507|2,97507|1) -
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: about that i do
2017-11-25 00:18 Critical_Star: i think is good
2017-11-25 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - eh
2017-11-25 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: this is 1/6
2017-11-25 00:19 Kuo Kyoka: forgot to mention on hyper too
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: oh this one
2017-11-25 00:19 Kuo Kyoka: extra pattern is more clear imo
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: idk leh
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: but i feel 1/4 are easier here
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: ya i know
2017-11-25 00:19 Critical_Star: just for easy purpose
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: NM120 isnt easy la
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: but imo would be better to change to correct snap
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: 1/6 is easy to do this
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: https://puu.sh/ysJcM/e32e0aca82.png
2017-11-25 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: am i right ladies
2017-11-25 00:20 Critical_Star: just adding more trigger will make the raid harder
2017-11-25 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: blizzard
2017-11-25 00:26 Critical_Star: walao
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: 01:55:143 - pffff
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366215 Nekomata Master - Scars of FAUNA [Extra]]
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: this extra 1/6
2017-11-25 00:29 Kuo Kyoka: T R I G G E R E D
2017-11-25 00:30 Critical_Star: alalalalalaa
2017-11-25 00:30 Kuo Kyoka: WELCOME TO EXTRA DIFF
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:052 (7052|5,7098|1) - where in the beginning already rekt you high sky
2017-11-25 00:31 Critical_Star: actually i am thinking of a custom name but no idea
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: want custom name
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2017-11-25 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: i think gonna dig something
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: and discord u say you are loli
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: sleep is for weak
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: eh really
2017-11-25 00:32 Critical_Star: faster finish haha
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: pfff
2017-11-25 00:32 Kuo Kyoka: im 6 years old
2017-11-25 00:33 Kuo Kyoka: 00:08:477 (8477|3,8477|5,8537|2) - 1/8 pffff
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: just post for now and i will mention i will update when qualify check
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: i fix ad laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
2017-11-25 00:33 Kuo Kyoka: i like to triggers my man
2017-11-25 00:33 Critical_Star: just didnt give u update extra just now when i realize
2017-11-25 00:34 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:052 (26052|2,26416|4) - better to change it like 00:26:780 (26780|6,26780|5) - ?
2017-11-25 00:35 Critical_Star: 00:26:052 (26052|1,26052|2,26416|3,26416|4) - isnt this are the same?
2017-11-25 00:35 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:780 (26780|5,26780|6) - yah i mean make it the same with this one?
2017-11-25 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:143 - add a note for harp
2017-11-25 00:36 Critical_Star: oh u mean cut the LN
2017-11-25 00:36 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: yeah
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: haha extra too many notes
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: im confuse ald
2017-11-25 00:37 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:143 - like why no note here
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: hehe
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: added'
2017-11-25 00:38 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:962 - missing too
2017-11-25 00:38 Critical_Star: ok
2017-11-25 00:39 Critical_Star: 00:53:052 (53052|2) - i remove this one
2017-11-25 00:39 Critical_Star: catch the sync here
2017-11-25 00:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:57:507 (57507|0,57507|6,57598|1,57598|5,57689|4,57689|2,57871|4,57871|2,57962|1,57962|5,58052|0,58052|6) - well, kinda may get note about why it isn't 1/6 here cuz it looks clear like that
2017-11-25 00:39 Kuo Kyoka: 01:02:234 - this is 1/6
2017-11-25 00:40 Critical_Star: not good to play?
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: 01:02:598 - this is 1/8
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: it;s fine to play
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: but i mean community might just catch that spot and say why it isn't 1/6
2017-11-25 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: because it's too clearly you're following flute now but 1/4 instead 1/6
2017-11-25 00:41 Critical_Star: i see
2017-11-25 00:41 Critical_Star: i will fix it
2017-11-25 00:41 Kuo Kyoka: 01:06:234 - should 2 notes like last part
2017-11-25 00:41 Kuo Kyoka: 01:08:416 - same too
2017-11-25 00:42 Kuo Kyoka: missing a note too
2017-11-25 00:42 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:780 - would actually better if it's a LN too
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:234 (86234|3,86234|4,86507|4,86507|2) - hmm both are hihat
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: 01:26:325 (86325|5) - but on here is kick, maybe need to adjust the layout
2017-11-25 00:43 Critical_Star: i think i would leave a blank at 01:24:780 - to give a break before new phases
2017-11-25 00:43 Critical_Star: so i didnt do LN
2017-11-25 00:43 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:325 - oh
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: this part solo LN
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: kinda like it
2017-11-25 00:44 Critical_Star: ermm, since the LN section i just do simple layering like double for hithat here
2017-11-25 00:44 Kuo Kyoka: 01:20:598 - would better if it's same on here too
2017-11-25 00:45 Critical_Star: because i purposely do 2 phase of diff pattern
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: oh lol
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: got it then
2017-11-25 00:45 Kuo Kyoka: 01:40:598 - missing
2017-11-25 00:46 Kuo Kyoka: 01:45:871 (105871|6,105871|5,105871|0) - suppose to be on ? 01:45:962 -
2017-11-25 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:50:598 - hmm well i think 1/6 might do the snap better
2017-11-25 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:54:689 - add a note for kick?
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: la ok
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: only left that
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: snare + kick triple for this red
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: haha idk where to point more
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: sorry taking you along for long
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: 01:50:689 (110689|1,110689|4,110780|6,110780|0,110780|3,110871|2,110871|5,110962|0,110962|4,111052|6,111052|2,111143|5,111143|0,111143|4,111143|1,111143|3) -
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: here is 1/6?
2017-11-25 00:48 Critical_Star: no i should thank you
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2017-11-25 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: nice point 01:50:598 - 1/6
2017-11-25 00:49 Critical_Star: all ah?
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: 01:50:780 - i think just 1/4 here
2017-11-25 00:49 Critical_Star: or maybe i just keep for 1/4 stream
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: but 1/6 snap there may need to change
2017-11-25 00:49 Kuo Kyoka: blame the composer
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: lmfao
2017-11-25 00:50 Critical_Star: ya
2017-11-25 00:50 Critical_Star: i think 1/4 all here better
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: but need to be conflict
2017-11-25 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: between difficulties
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: all the diff are 1/4 here
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow gonna recheck later
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: yeah 1/4 too
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: but idk la
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: ket
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: ok catch you in discord
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: im gonna get rekt haha
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: alright then
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: hahahaha
2017-11-25 00:51 Critical_Star: do u want the update
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-11-25 00:51 Kuo Kyoka: maybe tomorrow
2017-11-25 00:52 Kuo Kyoka: see later


On easy I miss this one sorry, 01:50:780 (110780|2) - move to 7 is better for hand moving
01:56:598 (116598|6,116871|6) - how about move to 6th for mirror patterns

Tags: Groove Coaster EX maimai ORANGE
Don't forget to change name as we discussed "Amaryllis"


all fixed le
posted
Quick recheck before qualify phase, i will just focus on generals stuffs overall then

[Beginner]
00:53:143 - i think you should add a note on 4th here due to the reason you're follow instrument here, the next part is quite confusing between flutes and kicks because the kicks is kinda loudy here. adding a note here will lead the a better measure
01:01:871 (61871|1) - would be better to move to 6th because a jump on here is kinda hard for beginners imo
01:08:598 (68598|4) - move to 4th for balance

[Standard]
00:34:780 (34780|1) - move to 3rd? cuz pink is ugly
01:03:143 (63143|2) - since you changed the patterns on here, why not move to 4th for balance too
01:46:416 (106416|0) - why not 2nd for the long notes reflects
01:54:052 (114052|2) - change F to C instead

[Hyper]
00:35:507 (35507|5,35507|6) - how about switiching this one for a place to add a note on 00:35:871 - for that instrument
01:15:871 (75871|4) - miss C
01:12:598 - 01:14:780 - maybe this one too since you added on 01:16:962 -
01:22:962 (82962|4) - remove W, add here instead 01:23:143 (83143|1) -
01:28:234 (88234|3) - remove W
01:55:507 (115507|3) - remove C, 01:54:416 (114416|6) - no F here so remove it

[Another]
00:26:598 - unamused
00:39:598 (39598|2) - remove C, no snare
00:44:234 - add a C to continue the rhythm
01:02:689 (62689|3) - add C
01:04:052 (64052|3) - remove C
01:10:962 (70962|3,71143|6) - switch hitsound
01:15:689 (75689|5,75871|4) - switch hitsound, and remove W 01:15:871 (75871|0) -

[De- Amaryllis]
OD 8.6? not 8.5?
00:06:871 (6871|4) - move to 4th to make confuse between 1/4 and 1/6 on the next notes
00:26:598 (26598|2,26689|3,26780|4) - i dont think these are necessary, since you made it double on 00:26:780 - due to the drum in the bg anyway
00:31:234 - note on Another, how about here
00:30:780 - suggestion https://puu.sh/ytk9Q/f85e21610a.png
00:41:871 - would suggest to add 1/6 here since you did it on 00:37:507 -
01:02:598 - still 1/8
01:07:507 (67507|6,67507|2) - remove one F
01:15:598 (75598|1,75689|2) - random C?
01:20:780 (80780|1) - I would move to 3rd to prevent 3 1/2 jacks
01:29:507 (89507|2,89507|0,90598|5,90598|6) - 01:29:507 (89507|2,89507|0) - ends on 01:29:871 - or 01:30:598 (90598|5,90598|6) - ends on 01:30:871 - (or maybe as same as 01:33:871 - and im drunk)
01:34:780 - suggestion https://puu.sh/ytkkg/0b70f6feaa.png

Well only those, generals are fine
tldr: no unrankable issues, except 01:02:598 - is better in 1/8

Syukuri apa yang ada means Good luck!
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