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- 01:24:947 (4) - This is
barely offscreen on 800x600 resolution xd
- You must check in the "Epilepsy Warning" option
- You didn't add NC on 00:03:010 (3) - so I could take that you didn't want to sepparate it into two combos, but you did it later on 00:06:010 (1) - even thought the difference on the way it sounds was really similar to the transition between 00:02:260 (2,3) - . So I'd suggest you either to add NC on 00:03:010 (3) - or remove NC on 00:06:010 (1) - both would work in my opinion
- Just as a detail, you could stack 00:12:010 (1) - 's sliderend to 00:10:510 (3) - 's sliderend
jesus this is not visible at all, cant bother xd- Seems pretty much like you missed to NC here 00:15:760 (5) - (You did it previously on 00:15:010 (1) - so I guess you should do it later on too)
- This is not an issue or something like that, but why to add a grey anchor on 00:21:010 (1) - ? I've seen this in a lot of maps, but never this straight lmao
I think the mouse sometimes put an anchor randomly lul, but removed it - 00:23:635 (3,4,5,6,1) - This would make more sense if it was curved as the previous stream was 00:22:697 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - (Well, not "sense" but it's fine to have it as a detail)
Uh quints are consistently straight because they look bad if they're curved on this spacing imo. Much more prefer this design. - 00:25:322 (4) - Maybe doing Ctrl+G here would feel better while playing, you'd still get the emphasis on 00:25:510 (1) - because the spacing will be similar (it wouldn't even change that much)
Circular/linear movement was my intention here, sharp movement isn't in lines with the idea of the map since I usually use things like this on moderate spacing. - This is not relevant nor important, but moving this 00:40:510 (1) - a bit to the left would make it's overlap with 00:40:135 (6) - seem way better
- 00:47:635 (2,3,1) - I think the flow here is too linear, there's barely no emphasis on 00:48:010 (1) - since there isn't any change of flow, actually, the spacing is even less than the previous 00:47:635 (2,3) -
The emphasis is forced slowdown of the cursor. The reason for such linear and peaceful movement is because this part of the song seems the most flowy consistent with 00:58:885 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the vocals are clearly accentuated in the song here without any weird things happening. - 00:49:322 (4) - I just thought about a different positioning for this, stacking it into 00:48:385 (3) -
wouldn't look that bad in my opinion (It would also fit with 00:49:510 (1) - 's shape)
the movement it suggests seems terrible and I see no need to change that in the first place?- 00:56:166 (4,1) - This is way overspaced, you used a similar spacing than your previous 1/2 patterns (000:44:072 (3,1) - This is the most closer one)
It's still a hihat to snare jump +on this bpm doesn't feel overspaced and plays easily. Any lower and the emphasis on the snare will be null.
- I came to think that this 00:58:135 (2) - would emphasize better if it was a 3/4 slider (Just in case that I said that in a wrong way, I meant that it would fit better if it ends here 00:58:416 - ), but to do it you'd have to move a whole pattern so I doubt you'd apply something like this
The vocals don't feel so heavy for a 3/4 to be warranted here tbh, compare it to 01:03:010 (1,2,1,2) - for example- Just a small detail, but what about stacking 01:03:760 (1) - 's sliderend to 01:02:822 (3) - 's sliderhead?
can't bother, it won't do anything.- Oh, also, there's a clap on this slider (01:04:135 (2) - ). Was it intended? It doesn't really seem like fitting
- 01:11:635 (5) - You used kicksliders a lot to represent this kind of small sounds so why not to add one here too?
because the contrast between the speedup and flowy section that's about to come after this drum buildup will be null if these were 1/4 sliders too.- 01:15:010 (5) - You should add NC here, it gets pretty much different here than the previous parts.
- 01:24:291 (1) - This is also a stupid detail, but what about stacking this instead of overlapping it? I actually tried it and you'd emphasize the small pause on the song a bit better imo
you know that by starting a sentence with "this is also a stupid suggestion" won't help get the suggestion applied.
Anyways I don't see it doing anything important its either do dis or do dis both work equally well.- 01:25:135 - Why are you avoiding this? You kinda mapped it here on 01:19:135 - so it's a bit weird to avoid it afterwards
- Even thought it's a kiai, 01:26:541 (3,1) - This is pretty much overspaced, at least add more spacing between 01:26:447 (2,3) - so it gets closer to the slider, or at least so you have a feeling of moving the cursor instead of a "stop" lol (god it's so hard to explain myself, if u didn't get what I meant just dm me)
Check reply to bubblun.- 01:28:322 (2) - Wait this isn't stacked lol
- This: 01:32:072 (2) - , Is the same than 01:32:447 (2,3) - This. If we agree then you should use a kickslider on both, or well, you could keep your variation but it doesn't seem right for me
Both are viable variations in which the drums get less emphasis and the snare gets full emphasis tbh.- 01:33:010 (2) - Also not stacked?
- I was hearing this 50% just to be sure but there seems to be a sound on 01:34:228 - so why don't you change 01:34:135 (5) -
into a kickslider? (I also added a greenline changing the SV to 0,75x so the slider didn't seem too long and fast)
It took you 50% speed and constant rechecks to determine that there's a sound there, that means players will never notice that so the stop in rhythm will make that feeling more powerful.- 01:39:947 (2,3) - You used 1,27x spacing here and 01:40:135 (3,4,1) - 1x here, Why not use the same on all of them? They didn't feel different at all
Idk 1.27x makes the pattern a bit more separated. - 02:02:822 (4,1,4,1) - You added NC here because the "tsch" on the background, right? Then why didn't you add it 01:59:260 (5) - here too?
At first I thought you just NC'ed on 02:02:260 (1) - because the vocals, so it was fine, but there isn't any vocal after that that would lead to an NC, the only thing was the "tsch" and you pretty much didn't add NC to that sound before, so it wouldn't make sense to have it afterwards
Because the NCed notes lead into new sound grouping while in this nonNCed case it stays the same.- 02:04:510 - For this stream I think you should just keep the NC on the vocals, since it's kinda hard to differentiate the piano while playing, so it would seem like randomly separated in the eyes of the one who's playing, so keeping the NC's following the voice isn't that bad
It will only make one note unNCed which will make the streams just be inconsistent, I separated by piano too.- 02:13:510 - Random MaridiuS pops up on the screen LMAO (oh yeah I had to delete the SB to mod this cuz too laggy, so Idk if there's something on there, but it seems like a random maridius, i really laughed at this xD)
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