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23:58 *Real is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1556685 M2U & NICODE - Myosotis (feat. Guriri & Lucy) [Ayyri's Muzukashii]]
23:58 *Ayyri is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1556685 M2U & NICODE - Myosotis (feat. Guriri & Lucy) [Ayyri's Muzukashii]]
23:58 Ayyri: o:
23:58 Real: 00:03:010 - i think d d k could be nice to emphasize the piano note on 00:03:760 -
23:59 Ayyri: 00:03:385 - high vocal tho
23:59 Ayyri: 00:03:760 - having this as a k would deemphasize 00:04:510 -
00:00 Real: i think the vocal is higher pitched on 00:03:760 - though
00:00 Real: and that note later would have the same emphasis as 00:03:760 - i guess
00:00 Real: since you're leaving a break before it
00:01 Ayyri: imo 00:03:760 - is lower pitched because the vocal continues
00:01 Ayyri: at the same pace
00:01 Ayyri: and goes down at 00:04:135 -
00:01 Real: fair
00:02 Real: 00:21:572 (8,9,10) - really think kkk fits that weird instrument better here
00:02 Real: also plays a tad better i gues
00:03 Ayyri: oke
00:03 Ayyri: the strings
00:03 Ayyri: also fits with the kick, i suppose
00:03 Ayyri: @ 00:21:760 -
00:04 Real: 00:27:385 (31,32,33) - i guess i get why there's a triple here but i think it's really faint in the music
00:04 Real: and it doesn't stand out as well as the doubles you hve
00:05 Ayyri: you mean the piano?
00:05 Real: yes
00:06 Ayyri: i'll just move it to 00:28:978 - then
00:06 Ayyri: so the density is consistent
00:06 Ayyri: and isn't like
00:06 Ayyri: going down at the very end
00:07 Ayyri: which feels off
00:08 Real: good
00:10 Real: 00:43:322 (36) - note feels a bit unnecessary, the finisher would have more emphasis if you deleted that note
00:12 Ayyri: i think the finisher would stick out like a sore thumb if it was all by itself
00:12 Ayyri: considering it would have a 1/1 break right before it
00:12 Ayyri: then a 2/1 break right after it
00:13 Ayyri: which is kinda.. lackluster
00:15 Real: fair
00:16 Real: 00:49:885 (60) - could delete this to be consistent with the start of the kiai, would also add another break which could be nice
00:17 Ayyri: idm either way
00:18 Ayyri: but the reason there's a note there
00:18 Ayyri: is difficulty progression
00:18 Ayyri: + so it's not exactly the same as the first time
00:18 Ayyri: which
00:18 Ayyri: as you did say
00:18 Ayyri: could also be taken as inconsistent
00:18 Real: i think difficulty progression is already kinda shown in the fact that the second kiai is more dense
00:18 Ayyri: fair
00:19 Real: 01:06:385 - could delete this note, this kiai is much denser and a break would be welcome. also, it'd make the buildup start alongside the vocals which is a pretty nice touch imo
00:20 Ayyri: imo
00:20 Ayyri: generally speaking
00:20 Ayyri: doing that feels weird
00:20 Ayyri: having a break at the start
00:20 Ayyri: i'd rather have one at the end
00:20 Ayyri: but i don't mind as much in this case
00:21 Real: i agree with that but i think here it fits much better to have it at the start
00:21 Ayyri: ye
00:22 Real: 01:10:885 - 01:11:072 - would be nice to ctrl+g them, would make the whole pattern play much better and fits the strings' pitch much better
00:24 Ayyri: oke
00:27 Real: 01:20:635 (10) - what about having d here for that wub sound? it'd fit kinda well considering the pitch of the melody is also going down imoi
00:28 Ayyri: 01:20:635 - d k d
00:28 Ayyri: bc 01:20:822 - & 01:21:010 - are not the same pitch
00:29 Ayyri: also contrasts better w/ 01:21:385 -
00:29 Real: fair
00:29 Real: how about d on 01:20:260 - then? i still think the decreasing pitch should be emphasized somehow
00:30 Ayyri: tbh they sound the same pitch to me
00:30 Ayyri: but
00:30 Ayyri: if you use a different line of reasoning, it makes more sense
00:30 Ayyri: 01:19:885 - kick
00:30 Ayyri: 01:20:260 - not a kick
00:30 Ayyri: :3
00:31 Real: !
00:31 Ayyri: !!
00:32 Real: 01:21:760 (16) - d could be nice here, this sounds much lower than the growl before it imo
00:33 Real: and if you apply that, changing 01:21:947 (17,18) - to kk would play and feel a lot better imo
00:33 Real: since the next double is on lower pitched wubs
00:33 Ayyri: ya i already did that
00:33 Ayyri: d dd dd
00:33 Ayyri: would be
00:33 Ayyri: uncomfy
00:34 Real: 01:22:885 (23,24,25) - it sounds like the pitch is higher on 24 than on 23 and 25 to me, maybe dkd?
00:36 Real: d k d
00:37 Ayyri: idm either way
00:37 Ayyri: so sure
00:37 Ayyri: xd
00:39 Real: 01:26:260 (37) - d just like previously
00:39 Real: 01:32:260 (63) - and here as well
00:41 Real: 01:34:885 (76,77,78) - aaaaaaaand d k d here
00:42 Ayyri: ok bb
00:42 Real: 01:50:072 (137,138,139) - kkk here would fit the instruments' pitches going up much better, and play more comfortably
00:42 Ayyri: oke b
00:48 *Real is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1555656 M2U & NICODE - Myosotis (feat. Guriri & Lucy) [Ayyri's Oni]]
00:48 Real: 00:14:635 (30) - i think d here fits better considering the higher pitch only really stands out on the next note
00:49 Ayyri: but my finisher
00:50 Real: wot finisher
00:51 Ayyri: oh i'm retarded
00:51 Ayyri: i didn't see that you switched
00:51 Ayyri: bc i was looking at discord
00:51 Ayyri: LOL
00:51 Ayyri: ya i can do wot you said
00:51 Ayyri: np
00:51 Real: ggggggg
00:53 Real: 00:22:322 (76,77,78) - i think kdk fits the pitch better here, and also how the piano is playing the same note as 00:22:135 (75) - on 86
00:53 Real: 76*
00:54 Ayyri: ok
00:54 Ayyri: now i can say
00:54 Ayyri: but my finisher
00:55 Real: pft
00:59 Ayyri: did you post anything before i died
00:59 Real: nop
01:00 Ayyri: aaa
01:06 Ayyri: ok we good now
01:06 Real: yay
01:07 Real: 00:29:447 - might wanna add a note here to fit the melody, you already have a break right after so it should be ifne
01:08 Ayyri: what was the last point
01:08 Ayyri: about the piano
01:08 Ayyri: tho
01:08 Real: what
01:09 Ayyri: the one before that one
01:09 Ayyri: before death
01:09 Real: iwanted you to have kdk on 00:22:322 (76,77,78) -
01:09 Real: but yuh finisher
01:09 Ayyri: i could also make it 1/6
01:09 Ayyri: :thonk
01:10 Real: muH SPREAD
01:11 Ayyri: it's
01:11 Ayyri: ok
01:11 Ayyri: it top diff.
01:12 Real: 00:56:353 (257) - i think that note is kinda unnecessary tbh, there's nothing in the song that really justifies a 5plet
01:12 Real: ,
01:13 Ayyri: held vocal w
01:13 Real: 00:56:072 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261) - OK WHY ISNT THIS A 9 NOTE STREAM THEN
01:13 Real: :rage:
01:14 Ayyri: but muh spread
01:14 Real: ok i stop modding
01:14 Ayyri: WTF
01:14 Real: 01:09:572 (325,326) - k k here would fit the strings pitch better imo
01:15 Ayyri: ok b
01:15 Real: 01:28:697 (439) - finisher would b Nice imo
01:16 Ayyri: sure
01:16 Real: i would say 01:40:697 (523) - same here but it's in a pretty dense chain so idk
01:17 Ayyri: i do it
01:17 Ayyri: !
01:17 Real: wow!
01:17 Real: that's it for meeee
01:19 Ayyri: oke
01:19 Ayyri: !!
23:58 *Ayyri is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1556685 M2U & NICODE - Myosotis (feat. Guriri & Lucy) [Ayyri's Muzukashii]]
23:58 Ayyri: o:
23:58 Real: 00:03:010 - i think d d k could be nice to emphasize the piano note on 00:03:760 -
23:59 Ayyri: 00:03:385 - high vocal tho
23:59 Ayyri: 00:03:760 - having this as a k would deemphasize 00:04:510 -
00:00 Real: i think the vocal is higher pitched on 00:03:760 - though
00:00 Real: and that note later would have the same emphasis as 00:03:760 - i guess
00:00 Real: since you're leaving a break before it
00:01 Ayyri: imo 00:03:760 - is lower pitched because the vocal continues
00:01 Ayyri: at the same pace
00:01 Ayyri: and goes down at 00:04:135 -
00:01 Real: fair
00:02 Real: 00:21:572 (8,9,10) - really think kkk fits that weird instrument better here
00:02 Real: also plays a tad better i gues
00:03 Ayyri: oke
00:03 Ayyri: the strings
00:03 Ayyri: also fits with the kick, i suppose
00:03 Ayyri: @ 00:21:760 -
00:04 Real: 00:27:385 (31,32,33) - i guess i get why there's a triple here but i think it's really faint in the music
00:04 Real: and it doesn't stand out as well as the doubles you hve
00:05 Ayyri: you mean the piano?
00:05 Real: yes
00:06 Ayyri: i'll just move it to 00:28:978 - then
00:06 Ayyri: so the density is consistent
00:06 Ayyri: and isn't like
00:06 Ayyri: going down at the very end
00:07 Ayyri: which feels off
00:08 Real: good
00:10 Real: 00:43:322 (36) - note feels a bit unnecessary, the finisher would have more emphasis if you deleted that note
00:12 Ayyri: i think the finisher would stick out like a sore thumb if it was all by itself
00:12 Ayyri: considering it would have a 1/1 break right before it
00:12 Ayyri: then a 2/1 break right after it
00:13 Ayyri: which is kinda.. lackluster
00:15 Real: fair
00:16 Real: 00:49:885 (60) - could delete this to be consistent with the start of the kiai, would also add another break which could be nice
00:17 Ayyri: idm either way
00:18 Ayyri: but the reason there's a note there
00:18 Ayyri: is difficulty progression
00:18 Ayyri: + so it's not exactly the same as the first time
00:18 Ayyri: which
00:18 Ayyri: as you did say
00:18 Ayyri: could also be taken as inconsistent
00:18 Real: i think difficulty progression is already kinda shown in the fact that the second kiai is more dense
00:18 Ayyri: fair
00:19 Real: 01:06:385 - could delete this note, this kiai is much denser and a break would be welcome. also, it'd make the buildup start alongside the vocals which is a pretty nice touch imo
00:20 Ayyri: imo
00:20 Ayyri: generally speaking
00:20 Ayyri: doing that feels weird
00:20 Ayyri: having a break at the start
00:20 Ayyri: i'd rather have one at the end
00:20 Ayyri: but i don't mind as much in this case
00:21 Real: i agree with that but i think here it fits much better to have it at the start
00:21 Ayyri: ye
00:22 Real: 01:10:885 - 01:11:072 - would be nice to ctrl+g them, would make the whole pattern play much better and fits the strings' pitch much better
00:24 Ayyri: oke
00:27 Real: 01:20:635 (10) - what about having d here for that wub sound? it'd fit kinda well considering the pitch of the melody is also going down imoi
00:28 Ayyri: 01:20:635 - d k d
00:28 Ayyri: bc 01:20:822 - & 01:21:010 - are not the same pitch
00:29 Ayyri: also contrasts better w/ 01:21:385 -
00:29 Real: fair
00:29 Real: how about d on 01:20:260 - then? i still think the decreasing pitch should be emphasized somehow
00:30 Ayyri: tbh they sound the same pitch to me
00:30 Ayyri: but
00:30 Ayyri: if you use a different line of reasoning, it makes more sense
00:30 Ayyri: 01:19:885 - kick
00:30 Ayyri: 01:20:260 - not a kick
00:30 Ayyri: :3
00:31 Real: !
00:31 Ayyri: !!
00:32 Real: 01:21:760 (16) - d could be nice here, this sounds much lower than the growl before it imo
00:33 Real: and if you apply that, changing 01:21:947 (17,18) - to kk would play and feel a lot better imo
00:33 Real: since the next double is on lower pitched wubs
00:33 Ayyri: ya i already did that
00:33 Ayyri: d dd dd
00:33 Ayyri: would be
00:33 Ayyri: uncomfy
00:34 Real: 01:22:885 (23,24,25) - it sounds like the pitch is higher on 24 than on 23 and 25 to me, maybe dkd?
00:36 Real: d k d
00:37 Ayyri: idm either way
00:37 Ayyri: so sure
00:37 Ayyri: xd
00:39 Real: 01:26:260 (37) - d just like previously
00:39 Real: 01:32:260 (63) - and here as well
00:41 Real: 01:34:885 (76,77,78) - aaaaaaaand d k d here
00:42 Ayyri: ok bb
00:42 Real: 01:50:072 (137,138,139) - kkk here would fit the instruments' pitches going up much better, and play more comfortably
00:42 Ayyri: oke b
00:48 *Real is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1555656 M2U & NICODE - Myosotis (feat. Guriri & Lucy) [Ayyri's Oni]]
00:48 Real: 00:14:635 (30) - i think d here fits better considering the higher pitch only really stands out on the next note
00:49 Ayyri: but my finisher
00:50 Real: wot finisher
00:51 Ayyri: oh i'm retarded
00:51 Ayyri: i didn't see that you switched
00:51 Ayyri: bc i was looking at discord
00:51 Ayyri: LOL
00:51 Ayyri: ya i can do wot you said
00:51 Ayyri: np
00:51 Real: ggggggg
00:53 Real: 00:22:322 (76,77,78) - i think kdk fits the pitch better here, and also how the piano is playing the same note as 00:22:135 (75) - on 86
00:53 Real: 76*
00:54 Ayyri: ok
00:54 Ayyri: now i can say
00:54 Ayyri: but my finisher
00:55 Real: pft
00:59 Ayyri: did you post anything before i died
00:59 Real: nop
01:00 Ayyri: aaa
01:06 Ayyri: ok we good now
01:06 Real: yay
01:07 Real: 00:29:447 - might wanna add a note here to fit the melody, you already have a break right after so it should be ifne
01:08 Ayyri: what was the last point
01:08 Ayyri: about the piano
01:08 Ayyri: tho
01:08 Real: what
01:09 Ayyri: the one before that one
01:09 Ayyri: before death
01:09 Real: iwanted you to have kdk on 00:22:322 (76,77,78) -
01:09 Real: but yuh finisher
01:09 Ayyri: i could also make it 1/6
01:09 Ayyri: :thonk
01:10 Real: muH SPREAD
01:11 Ayyri: it's
01:11 Ayyri: ok
01:11 Ayyri: it top diff.
01:12 Real: 00:56:353 (257) - i think that note is kinda unnecessary tbh, there's nothing in the song that really justifies a 5plet
01:12 Real: ,
01:13 Ayyri: held vocal w
01:13 Real: 00:56:072 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261) - OK WHY ISNT THIS A 9 NOTE STREAM THEN
01:13 Real: :rage:
01:14 Ayyri: but muh spread
01:14 Real: ok i stop modding
01:14 Ayyri: WTF
01:14 Real: 01:09:572 (325,326) - k k here would fit the strings pitch better imo
01:15 Ayyri: ok b
01:15 Real: 01:28:697 (439) - finisher would b Nice imo
01:16 Ayyri: sure
01:16 Real: i would say 01:40:697 (523) - same here but it's in a pretty dense chain so idk
01:17 Ayyri: i do it
01:17 Ayyri: !
01:17 Real: wow!
01:17 Real: that's it for meeee
01:19 Ayyri: oke
01:19 Ayyri: !!