sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi - Reason of being · forum

CookieBite

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-07-16T03:38:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年3月4日 at 13:33:37

Artist: sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi
Title: Reason of being
Source: BMS
Tags: Pokémon Pokemon Nintendo NDS Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Darkness Time Sky PMD ポケモン不思議のダンジョン空の探検隊時の探検隊闇の探検隊とざくろ Tozakuro Portable Memories March -BMS Edition- Optie しろやぎとざくろ Gear Pikachu Chimchar Primal Dialga Final Boss Battle Theme Fight to The Finish Remix Arrange けっせん！ディアルガ！ A_r_M_i_N Kenterz Shiroi Hiroshi SyraxAxoJaxco KittyAdventure
BPM: 190
Filesize: 20152kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:

ADVANCED (2.61 stars, 292 notes)
BEGINNER (1.7 stars, 157 notes)
Cookie M i N's EXTREME (5.35 stars, 628 notes)
FINAL DESTINATION (5.8 stars, 693 notes)
Kenterz's ANOTHER (4.71 stars, 513 notes)
ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER (3.56 stars, 314 notes)
STANDARD (2.32 stars, 206 notes)

Download: sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi - Reason of being
Download: sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi - Reason of being (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ㅤ
ㅤWARNING: SPOILER AHEADㅤ

(Arrangement of Dialga's Fight to the Finish! from Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time / Darkness / Sky)

UNUSUAL SLIDER VELOCITY CHANGES IN THE EXTRA DIFFS

REMOVE .osb IN THE BEATMAP FOLDER IF YOU WANT TO DISABLE MY ROAR OF TIME!!

Difficulties

BEGINNER by me

STANDARD by me

ADVANCED by me

HYPER by Shiroi Hiroshi*, SyraxAxoJaxco and KittyAdventure*

ANOTHER by Kenterz*

EXTREME by A r M i N* and me

FINAL DESTINATION by me

*Since they decided not to reply mods so I will help them handle all the mods. (aka CookieBite edit xdd)

ezek | Hobbes2
-

Special thanks to:
all gders & modders
Monstrata, ezek, Hobbes2
Coppertine, Ongaku, dsco, and Arutsuki for timing check
Shad0w1and for encoding the video
Kenterz for letting me adding his difficulty into this mapset
[A L P H A] for participated in the mapset before

Mania mapset by Kuo Kyoka, i have taken the tags and the diffname in the mapset

Artist | BG

"sak" or "sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi"?

http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=13&event=107

why are the name of the difficulties capitalized? (spoiler alert)

The answer is simple: While in-game, the word of (Primal) Dialga is capitalized, just matching what in-game is stylized.

thanks to (modders)

HappyRocket88
HabiHolic
leo16834
Neoskylove
BlakeBestWaifu
makisokk
bite you death
TheKingHenry
-Nishiki-
[-Crissaegrim-]
newton-
Ethan
ShiiTsuin
Reynolduh
July - San
DeRandom Otaku
Monstrata
ReFaller
ailv
Takekii
-Unlimit-
Emilia
Rokkea
Hobbes2
ezek
CrystilonZ
Bonsai

do yourself a favor and play this game and finish it (one of the underrated gem out there)

Last edited by CookieBite 2018-07-03T10:22:20+00:00, edited 159 times in total.

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-07-16T05:48:07+00:00

Can I taken Insane or Hyper diff? (If hyper, i want try collab with my friend)

SyraxAxoJaxco

190 posts

Joined March 2014

SyraxAxoJaxco 2017-07-16T08:56:04+00:00

Kitty, aku aja yang ambil Hypernya, boleh gak?? *puppyeyes

May I fill the Hyper slot, Cookie? :3

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-07-16T11:13:14+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
Can I taken Insane or Hyper diff? (If hyper, i want try collab with my friend)

SyraxAxoJaxco wrote:
Kitty, aku aja yang ambil Hypernya, boleh gak?? *puppyeyes

May I fill the Hyper slot, Cookie? :3

sure

Hikomori

840 posts

Joined November 2015

Hikomori 2017-07-17T15:14:15+00:00

di cks ,,, ,

audinor

audinor 2017-07-17T18:31:52+00:00

wow rad

Hikomori

840 posts

Joined November 2015

Hikomori 2017-08-11T12:24:19+00:00

my 1st part

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75793
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Reason of being
TitleUnicode:Reason of being
Artist:sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi
ArtistUnicode:sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi
Creator:CookieBite
Version:Nature's EXTREME
Source:BMS
Tags:Pokémon Pokemon Nintendo NDS Mystery Dungeon Explorers of the Darkness Time Sky ポケモン不思議のダンジョン 空の探検隊 時の探検隊 闇の探検隊 PMD とざくろ Tozakuro Portable Memories March -BMS Edition- Optie しろやぎとざくろ Pikachu Chimchar Primal Dialga Final Boss Battle Theme Fight to The Finish Remix Arrange けっせん！ディアルガ！Time Gear
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.1
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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i would edit this with my other parts when they are finished

BoatKrab

740 posts

Joined September 2012

BoatKrab 2017-08-17T15:32:16+00:00

Kitty asks me for testplay on Hyper diff
Catch! https://puu.sh/xcs6l/0fe32efab3.osr

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-08-20T13:27:52+00:00

Thank you, BoatKrab! :3

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2017-10-15T02:54:52+00:00

SP FOR SP! XD

2017-10-14 21:16 CookieBite: hello
2017-10-14 21:16 HappyRocket88: Hai!
2017-10-14 21:17 CookieBite: could you check my map?
2017-10-14 21:19 HappyRocket88: D:
2017-10-14 21:19 HappyRocket88: Is it there any issue you'd like to have an opinion?
2017-10-14 21:20 CookieBite: hmm
2017-10-14 21:20 CookieBite: just wanna know opinion of the map
2017-10-14 21:21 CookieBite: like the structure
2017-10-14 21:21 HappyRocket88: o.o
2017-10-14 21:22 CookieBite: actually any opinion is fine
2017-10-14 21:22 HappyRocket88: XD!
2017-10-14 21:22 HappyRocket88: Because the structure varies from each diff
2017-10-14 21:22 CookieBite: dx!
2017-10-14 21:22 HappyRocket88: so that would be a mod instead 
2017-10-14 21:22 CookieBite: oh
2017-10-14 21:22 CookieBite: hmm
2017-10-14 21:23 CookieBite: overall?
2017-10-14 21:23 CookieBite: that would be complex isn't it
2017-10-14 21:24 HappyRocket88: Yeee ;w;
2017-10-14 21:24 CookieBite: hmm
2017-10-14 21:24 CookieBite: maybe just talk what you think it's good or not
2017-10-14 21:24 HappyRocket88: Any diff in specific?
2017-10-14 21:24 CookieBite: guess thats simple
2017-10-14 21:25 CookieBite: just any any you like
2017-10-14 21:25 CookieBite: *pick
2017-10-14 21:25 HappyRocket88: Okey! \w/
2017-10-14 21:26 CookieBite: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1377402 sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi - Reason of being]
2017-10-14 21:30 HappyRocket88: Did you get timing confirmation?
2017-10-14 21:31 CookieBite: i did like 2 timing check
2017-10-14 21:31 CookieBite: *requested
2017-10-14 21:32 HappyRocket88: and how did it go?
2017-10-14 21:34 HappyRocket88: was it accurate or xd
2017-10-14 21:34 CookieBite: it was already done and it checked like the section 00:29:110 - to 00:36:638 -
2017-10-14 21:34 CookieBite: they help to do the timing anyway
2017-10-14 21:34 CookieBite: xd
2017-10-14 21:34 HappyRocket88: Okey. 
2017-10-14 21:34 HappyRocket88: Beginner diff seems ok.
2017-10-14 21:35 CookieBite: oh yea
2017-10-14 21:35 CookieBite: one question
2017-10-14 21:35 HappyRocket88: I'm afraid people would be so picky due to the amount of overlaps and stacks
2017-10-14 21:35 CookieBite: do you think the ds ok here? 02:00:321 (1,2,3) -
2017-10-14 21:36 HappyRocket88: For me it's acceptable 
2017-10-14 21:37 CookieBite: alright
2017-10-14 21:37 HappyRocket88: However taking from experiencie, beginners are likely to miss 
2017-10-14 21:37 HappyRocket88: due to the sudden change of BPM
2017-10-14 21:37 CookieBite: hmm
2017-10-14 21:37 HappyRocket88: I'd space them more 
2017-10-14 21:37 CookieBite: any better way to do so?
2017-10-14 21:37 CookieBite: ok
2017-10-14 21:39 HappyRocket88: 02:02:018 (3) - and reduce the distance here
2017-10-14 21:39 HappyRocket88: aaaa this part is so tricky XD 
2017-10-14 21:39 HappyRocket88: is it really necessary to be mapped?
2017-10-14 21:39 CookieBite: i want to
2017-10-14 21:39 CookieBite: xd
2017-10-14 21:40 HappyRocket88: Standard diff covers that part very well
2017-10-14 21:41 CookieBite: ok
2017-10-14 21:41 CookieBite: if i just ends at 01:54:321 - i feel like it doesn't have a proper ending
2017-10-14 21:41 CookieBite: so i mapped that part as well
2017-10-14 21:41 HappyRocket88: Nice!
2017-10-14 21:42 HappyRocket88: 00:24:639 (2,1) - ay this looks clutter
2017-10-14 21:42 HappyRocket88: 00:24:639 (2,2) - stack if possible
2017-10-14 21:43 HappyRocket88: 00:13:903 - why this sections uses a different NC pattern from the others?
2017-10-14 21:43 HappyRocket88: 00:31:004 (4) - NC!
2017-10-14 21:45 CookieBite: the first two revamped the part
2017-10-14 21:45 HappyRocket88: 01:12:638 (1,1,1) - due to the hitburts covering the combo, i think it would be better if 1 and 2 were placed apart
2017-10-14 21:46 CookieBite: third: i think that it's less intense than the following part so i did change the nc pattern
2017-10-14 21:46 CookieBite: 4: nced
2017-10-14 21:46 HappyRocket88: 01:18:321 (3) - NC 
2017-10-14 21:47 CookieBite: 5: applied
2017-10-14 21:47 CookieBite: nced
2017-10-14 21:48 HappyRocket88: The structure is actually fine
2017-10-14 21:48 HappyRocket88: just some patterns looking way too overlapped xd
2017-10-14 21:48 HappyRocket88: getting a blanket mod would be helpful!
2017-10-14 21:50 HappyRocket88: nice song
2017-10-14 21:50 CookieBite: ok xd
2017-10-14 21:50 CookieBite: yea ofc it's a nice song d
2017-10-14 21:50 HappyRocket88: idk what happens at the end that pikachu starts crying 
2017-10-14 21:51 HappyRocket88: ToT
2017-10-14 21:51 CookieBite: if only people played mystery dungeon explorers
2017-10-14 21:51 CookieBite: they will understand d
2017-10-14 21:52 HappyRocket88: XD
2017-10-14 21:52 HappyRocket88: Good luck with the map! 
2017-10-14 21:52 HappyRocket88: You have my star /o/
2017-10-14 21:53 CookieBite: alright thank you!
2017-10-14 21:53 HappyRocket88: Is this mini chat
2017-10-14 21:53 HappyRocket88: needed for sp or
2017-10-14 21:53 CookieBite: as you like

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2017-10-15T05:50:26+00:00

Hello!

[FINAL DESTINATION]

00:01:904 (3) - This shape is be dislocated. i think better this.

SPOILER

00:04:746 (4) - need for this note move. i think.. 448:220?
00:08:219 (3) - same for first shape problem. 00:01:904 (3) - This.
00:11:061 (4) - same 00:04:746 (4) -this.
00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider. your think?

SPOILER

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

00:31:478 (5,6) - better for this 1/1 slider.

[Kenterz's ANOTHER]

00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider.
00:36:953 (2) - 00:38:532 (1,2) - 01:39:479 (2) - this overlap is very very harder patten for imo..

that all GL! annother diff is fine!

leo16834

471 posts

Joined August 2011

leo16834 2017-10-15T09:37:47+00:00

水伊貝前來支援了xd 摸一下

能知道這款神奇寶貝不可思議迷宮是是最好的一件事情了~

BEGINNER

00:21:166 (5,2) - 這兩個要不要疊在一起呢?
00:51:164 (4,4) - 這個也要不要疊一起呢? 不過如果有改的話這個00:53:059 (4,2) - 可能也要動一下

STANDARD

01:57:163 (3) - 這裡給我的感覺好像變成點應該會比較好
01:58:110 (1) - 比照BEGINNER的滑條音效這個移動的滑條聲音比較大聲耶有什麼特殊的緣故嗎?

ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER

01:34:742 - How about add a circle on here? I think it should be click that 01:34:742 - has heavy voice

高難度我看了一下我不太想破壞原本的感覺所以我覺得不要摸好了
我覺得做的真的很好xd 每次都是來學習的~

很抱歉這次我真的摸不出甚麼來

順便給一顆星好了

VS Primal Dialga

Affirmation

2,548 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-10-16T08:10:42+00:00

Q

[Standard]
00:35:725 (5,1) - could you avoid overlap? You changed offset, so DS was inconsistent in here.

[Final]
00:17:376 (6,1) - I suggest using Just 1/2 sliders, since you didn't try 3/4 well and this has too big DS, so playing can be hard.
01:10:427 (1,2,3) - Could you increase DS little bit? Comparing with 01:08:533 (1,2,3,4) - , DS looks similar, so players can read it as 1/4.

well, Good map., GL

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-16T10:33:37+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hello!

[FINAL DESTINATION]

00:01:904 (3) - This shape is be dislocated. i think better this. // applied
SPOILER

00:04:746 (4) - need for this note move. i think.. 448:220? // i don't want square d
00:08:219 (3) - same for first shape problem. 00:01:904 (3) - This. // applied
00:11:061 (4) - same 00:04:746 (4) -this. // same with what i mentioned before
00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider. your think? // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider
SPOILER

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

00:31:478 (5,6) - better for this 1/1 slider. // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider

[Kenterz's ANOTHER]

00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider. // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider
00:36:953 (2) - 00:38:532 (1,2) - 01:39:479 (2) - this overlap is very very harder patten for imo.. // will consider about it in the future maybe

that all GL! annother diff is fine!

thanks for modding!

leo16834 wrote:
水伊貝前來支援了xd 摸一下

能知道這款神奇寶貝不可思議迷宮是是最好的一件事情了~

BEGINNER

00:21:166 (5,2) - 這兩個要不要疊在一起呢? // 好
00:51:164 (4,4) - 這個也要不要疊一起呢? 不過如果有改的話這個00:53:059 (4,2) - 可能也要動一下 // 好

STANDARD

01:57:163 (3) - 這裡給我的感覺好像變成點應該會比較好 // 好
01:58:110 (1) - 比照BEGINNER的滑條音效這個移動的滑條聲音比較大聲耶有什麼特殊的緣故嗎? // 沒有啊???

高難度我看了一下我不太想破壞原本的感覺所以我覺得不要摸好了
我覺得做的真的很好xd 每次都是來學習的~

很抱歉這次我真的摸不出甚麼來

順便給一顆星好了

VS Primal Dialga

感謝摸圖!

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Standard]
00:35:725 (5,1) - could you avoid overlap? You changed offset, so DS was inconsistent in here. // applied

[Final]
00:17:376 (6,1) - I suggest using Just 1/2 sliders, since you didn't try 3/4 well and this has too big DS, so playing can be hard. // revamped
01:10:427 (1,2,3) - Could you increase DS little bit? Comparing with 01:08:533 (1,2,3,4) - , DS looks similar, so players can read it as 1/4. // hope nc can help d

well, Good map., GL

thanks for modding!

BlakeIsMyWaifu

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BlakeIsMyWaifu 2017-10-16T11:04:13+00:00

From my modding Q

BEGINNER

Beginners are normally below an easy but yours is a normal? Weird
00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Do you need to spam NC?
01:01:269 (4,5) - Sliders should overlap like this on lower difficulys because it makes it hard for new players to read
01:14:532 (1) - Ctrl + H
01:23:374 (3,1) - Another maybe confusing overlap
01:54:321 (1) - That is way too confusing right before the circle it is a big mush

Sorry for only modding the one difficulty, didn't have know what to say about the others. Good luck with mapset!

CookieBite

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-16T11:38:52+00:00

BlakeBestWaifu wrote:
From my modding Q

BEGINNER
Beginners are normally below an easy but yours is a normal? Weird // for the map spread it is the easiest diff no problem here
00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Do you need to spam NC? // every section is new
01:01:269 (4,5) - Sliders should overlap like this on lower difficulys because it makes it hard for new players to read // you mean shouldn't overlap? applied anyway
01:14:532 (1) - Ctrl + H // why?
01:23:374 (3,1) - Another maybe confusing overlap // not really it's clear enough
01:54:321 (1) - That is way too confusing right before the circle it is a big mush // i dont think so

Sorry for only modding the one difficulty, didn't have know what to say about the others. Good luck with mapset!

thanks for modding!

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-10-17T21:10:35+00:00

Hello from my que

[BEGINNER]

00:13:588 (1,1) - In my opinion this is a very unexpected moment, it is better to remove it 00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1) - ?
00:13:903 (1) - remove nc
00:24:639 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:25:271 (1,2,3,1) - To make the same even diamond as here? 00:21:481 (1,2,3,1) -
01:02:216 (5) - end slider here 01:02:690 -
01:23:374 (3,1) - i think better avoid overlap in Easy
01:42:005 (5,2) - ^
01:51:479 (4,2) - ^

[STANDARD]

00:13:903 (1) - nc?
00:35:073 (2) - This note here is very poor in rhythm, it is not felt when playing! can try so?
00:50:848 (1) - hmm try this?

[ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER]

01:01:901 (2) - fix blanket
01:19:268 (1,2,3) - It is very strange that in kiai before that you used a circular flow, and here you decided not to do it, but after that the pattern starts to do it again
looks good for me

[Kenterz's ANOTHER]

00:06:325 (1,1,1) - you can blaket it?
00:20:850 (1) - can nc here, have new sound
00:27:639 (4,5) - I think it's better to map so. You have already done this pattern, and in my opinion it's better to have a flow of 3 to 4
00:28:113 (1) - nc?
00:28:666 (1,2) - little fix blanket
00:38:532 (1,2,3) - I do not think that this is the best pattern, it is very strange for the game! Can try so?
00:46:111 (1,2) - blanket it?
00:49:269 (2,3) - copypast? 00:48:795 (5,1) -
00:50:059 (2,3) - try blanket?
01:42:321 (5) - nc?

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

00:32:899 (1,2) - Same music, why did you decide to make a stack? 00:29:110 (1,2) -
00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - Because they are stack, it's very difficult to read this moment! better to do unstack
00:51:164 (2,3) - It is better to make a small space here, because there is not much sound, and to express this sound 00:51:480 (4) - more strongly! you can try to do so

[FINAL DESTINATION]

in my opinion ar 9.6 and od 8,5 better
00:05:062 - hmm you can pute here 1 more note
00:11:377 - ^
00:34:915 (2,4) - Stack? And it seems, as if the stream begins where 2, and I intensively put the cursor on 2
01:10:427 (1,1,1,1) - Something like this
02:02:859 (1) - hmm put note x217 y173?

okay good mappset
Please next time write who what part did, so it's easier to address the mapper

bite you death

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bite you death 2017-10-18T06:57:19+00:00

hello, from my queue

final destination

why ar 9 od 8? this is 6 stars and fast, make it atleast .5 higher on both
00:01:904 (3) - could be tweaked to blanket 00:00:957 (2) - like so, same at 00:08:219 (3) -
00:03:799 (1,2,3,4) - remake this with the polygon creator tool? same at 00:10:114 (1,2,3,4) -
00:14:376 (3) -, 00:16:271 (3) -, 00:18:166 (3) - and 00:20:060 (3) - nc like in extra?
00:16:587 (4) - shoudl be spaced less imo
00:32:583 (1,2) - swap nc
00:21:481 (1) - could space like 00:36:638 (1) -
00:42:244 (12,1) - pretty big compared to the spacing you usually use at the end of streams, at 01:31:505 (6,1) - its fine cause everything is more spaced here
00:40:349 (12,3) - blanket better :^)
00:45:480 (3) - nc to introduce different snap with this stream?
00:59:374 (1) - this should be less spaced, like 00:29:110 (1) -
00:59:374 (1) - add finish on head?
01:06:560 (5,6) - slow part and then a 1/4 jump like this?
01:12:323 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds distorted, can make it look like that too
01:44:295 - i dont think there's a sound here

good diff

cookiemin extra
00:35:725 (8) - silence tail, sounds bad
00:35:725 (8) - nc
00:37:585 (5) - nc
00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read, also 00:44:138 (4,1) - is hard to reach. flip the slider stream maybe?
00:44:295 (1) - wrong snap lmao
01:02:216 (1,4) - inconsistent nc
01:26:532 (4,5) - 4 should be spaced more than 5 to emphasise the sound better, could change to something like so
01:37:505 (2,3) - no need to space these 2, stack is just fine

quick look through beginner, map looks good, but ncs seem kinda scattered, double check them to make sure they're consistent

overall solid mapset, dont have time for any other diffs rn, might check later (probably not)

gl!

im still a newbie modder, kinda, so sorry if this didnt help much

CookieBite

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-18T13:41:52+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Hello from my que

[BEGINNER]
00:13:588 (1,1) - In my opinion this is a very unexpected moment, it is better to remove it 00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1) - ? // it's the beginning i can't remove it (for me i want to map the beginning of the song)
00:13:903 (1) - remove nc // it's the beginning of a new section so no
00:24:639 (2,1) - fix blanket // sure
00:25:271 (1,2,3,1) - To make the same even diamond as here? 00:21:481 (1,2,3,1) - // that way new players may get confused, i want to make them clear
01:02:216 (5) - end slider here 01:02:690 - // end at white tick
01:23:374 (3,1) - i think better avoid overlap in Easy
01:42:005 (5,2) - ^
01:51:479 (4,2) - ^

// These overlap aren't really hard to read i think
[STANDARD]
00:13:903 (1) - nc? you mean remove nc? new section so no apply
00:35:073 (2) - This note here is very poor in rhythm, it is not felt when playing! can tryso? // applied
00:50:848 (1) - hmm try this? // why? it plays much smoother/comfortable when using reserve slider
[Kenterz's ANOTHER]
00:06:325 (1,1,1) - you can blaket it? // sure
00:20:850 (1) - can nc here, have new sound // applied
00:27:639 (4,5) - I think it's better to map so. You have already done this pattern, and in my opinion it's better to have a flow of 3 to 4 // revamped
00:28:113 (1) - nc? // applied
00:28:666 (1,2) - little fix blanket // sure (tho no one cares)
00:38:532 (1,2,3) - I do not think that this is the best pattern, it is very strange for the game! Can try so? // applied
00:46:111 (1,2) - blanket it? // applied
00:49:269 (2,3) - copypast? 00:48:795 (5,1) - // i don't want repetitive patterns
00:50:059 (2,3) - try blanket? // applied
01:42:321 (5) - nc? // applied
[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]
00:32:899 (1,2) - Same music, why did you decide to make a stack? 00:29:110 (1,2) - // unstacked
00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - Because they are stack, it's very difficult to read this moment! better to do unstack // applied
[FINAL DESTINATION]
in my opinion ar 9.6 and od 8,5 better // ar 9.6 is too high so i adjust it to 9.1 and the od had been set to 8.5
00:05:062 - hmm you can pute here 1 more note // applied
00:11:377 - ^ // applied
00:34:915 (2,4) - Stack? And it seems, as if the stream begins where 2, and I intensively put the cursor on 2 // applied
01:10:427 (1,1,1,1) - Something like this // revamped
02:02:859 (1) - hmm put note x217 y173? // i prefer center
okay good mappset
Please next time write who what part did, so it's easier to address the mapper // may do that some time

thanks for modding!

bite you death wrote:
hello, from my queue

final destination
why ar 9 od 8? this is 6 stars and fast, make it atleast .5 higher on both // adjusted in previous mod
00:01:904 (3) - could be tweaked to blanket 00:00:957 (2) - like so, same at 00:08:219 (3) - // tried
00:03:799 (1,2,3,4) - remake this with the polygon creator tool? same at 00:10:114 (1,2,3,4) - // i prefer stars (i made it using polygon tool but i did some circle swap thing)
00:14:376 (3) -, 00:16:271 (3) -, 00:18:166 (3) - and 00:20:060 (3) - nc like in extra? // applied
00:16:587 (4) - shoudl be spaced less imo // adjusted
00:32:583 (1,2) - swap nc // applied
00:21:481 (1) - could space like 00:36:638 (1) - // applied
00:42:244 (12,1) - pretty big compared to the spacing you usually use at the end of streams, at 01:31:505 (6,1) - its fine cause everything is more spaced here // adjusted
00:40:349 (12,3) - blanket better :^) // applied
00:45:480 (3) - nc to introduce different snap with this stream? // applied
00:59:374 (1) - this should be less spaced, like 00:29:110 (1) - // applied
00:59:374 (1) - add finish on head? // applied
01:06:560 (5,6) - slow part and then a 1/4 jump like this? // revamped
01:12:323 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds distorted, can make it look like that too // what that
01:44:295 - i dont think there's a sound here // there is

good diff

cookiemin extra
00:37:585 (5) - nc // applied
00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read, also 00:44:138 (4,1) - is hard to reach. flip the slider stream maybe? // revamped
00:44:295 (1) - wrong snap lmao // help armin fixed d
01:02:216 (1,4) - inconsistent nc // fixed
01:37:505 (2,3) - no need to space these 2, stack is just fine // applied

quick look through beginner, map looks good, but ncs seem kinda scattered, double check them to make sure they're consistent

overall solid mapset, dont have time for any other diffs rn, might check later (probably not)

gl!
im still a newbie modder, kinda, so sorry if this didnt help much

thanks for modding!

bite you death

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bite you death 2017-10-19T01:35:28+00:00

01:06:322 - to 01:06:638 - is 1/3 btw

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2017-10-19T09:55:40+00:00

bite you death wrote:
01:06:322 - to 01:06:638 - is 1/3 btw // fixed

TheKingHenry

1,665 posts

Joined October 2014

TheKingHenry 2017-10-20T07:43:09+00:00

Hello mod from my queue~

BEGINNER

00:00:010 (1) - this shape could be little smoother? Kinda similarly 00:25:271 (1) - (and probably many others too, just take note yourself. As in probably all diffs) as in how the curves look almost sharp as if there is clear turning point in the curve instead of it being the same all the way through
00:12:009 (1,1) - I think it'd make more sense to have 00:13:588 (1) - in the same combo as 00:12:009 (1) - as in not NCd, since that'd make it more clear it's not the one that begins the stuff but rather leading to it
01:12:638 (1,1) - kinda similarly I don't think there's need to NC both of these, seems like unnecessary NC spam (your usual NCing seems like every other measures too so all the more logical to do that here as well)

STANDARD

00:12:009 (1,1) - same case as in the last diff
01:12:638 (2) - NC this instead of the current one. And remove NC from 01:13:627 (1) - ?
01:46:426 (3,1) - just caught my eye, it'd be better in case of blanket that the visual distance stays the same throughout the slider. You see how in this case the head of 01:46:742 (1) - draws clearly closer to 01:46:426 (3) - than the rest of the blanket?

ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER

I think the kiai times are conflicting? I don't really know the actual "recommendations" but I don't think it's really deadly though when talking about GDs. Just mentioning in case you'd want for them to be the same.
01:06:322 (4,5) - wrong rhythms, the first beat is 1/3 and the 2nd is 1/2
01:44:216 (2) - this is 1/2 too

Kenterz's ANOTHER

00:39:480 (1,2) - the 1/4 is more like structured as groups of 4. This doesn't really work, feels weird. Same with 00:43:269 (1,2) - (and all these ones if there's more I presume). If you want to keep the current rhythms, do it with 4+2 or smth instead of 3+3
01:41:532 (3,1,2,3,4) - I think it'd be better to go for blanketing stream or smth like that instead of this stacking one since the distance is too short for them to stack properly. It looks somewhat messy
01:45:163 (2,3,4) - compare to 01:46:426 (3,4,5,6) - I think there should be more difference in spacing. Like, the 1/3 is group of 3 so it "should" make sense, but considering there was already somewhat irregular stuff like 00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it'd be better to make it clear with spacing too. Especially since it's like the only 1/3 with circles like this

Cookie M i N's EXTREME

AiMod complaining about stack leniency. While it's not problem in and of itself, keep in mind you can create unrankable patterns with wrong stack leniencies.
00:20:534 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty clearly emphasised as 3 groups of 4 instead. NC according to it?
01:30:637 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - true enough 2 groups this time, but I think it'd make more sense to remove NC from 01:30:795 (1,1) - and add one to 01:31:110 (5) - instead for the proper emphasis.

FINAL DESTINATION

That same stack leniency thingy. Though didn't really seem problematic in the last diff.
01:08:533 (1,2,3,4) - you should keep these higher spacing since you've used 1/6 before. If you want this section to be calmer, use kickslider then. Similarly 01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:29:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not bad idea with the spacing, but similarly here as well. What makes it even more problematic here is that the low spacing is combined with groups of 6. Well, all in all I guess these could work the way they are if player figures out there are only specific sections with 1/6. But you can't really presume that happens
01:34:899 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - not really smooth curve here? 01:38:768 (8,9,10,11) - on the other hand looks intentional (well, both of them probably are but the first one doesn't really seem like it). For that matter, I don't see why you'd switch between having the last 4 change direction and not.

Well, mostly some slight stuff on structure like NC. The song gave me really nostalgic feeling for some reason hm
Good luck!

Akasha-

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Akasha- 2017-10-20T07:49:55+00:00

B-but "FINAL DESTINATION"

seems about tags too.
Standard was the way for me to name "Normal" difficulty, Normal is the original name of Normal difficulty in BMS, actually no Extreme in BMS ...

well nvm, just passing by, good luck with your map anyway!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-20T13:25:02+00:00

TheKingHenry wrote:
Hello mod from my queue~
BEGINNER
00:00:010 (1) - this shape could be little smoother? Kinda similarly 00:25:271 (1) - (and probably many others too, just take note yourself. As in probably all diffs) as in how the curves look almost sharp as if there is clear turning point in the curve instead of it being the same all the way through // revamped some of the sliders
00:12:009 (1,1) - I think it'd make more sense to have 00:13:588 (1) - in the same combo as 00:12:009 (1) - as in not NCd, since that'd make it more clear it's not the one that begins the stuff but rather leading to it // applied
01:12:638 (1,1) - kinda similarly I don't think there's need to NC both of these, seems like unnecessary NC spam (your usual NCing seems like every other measures too so all the more logical to do that here as well) // for this part i try to present like time stopping/ticking, using new combos is a way to do so
STANDARD
00:12:009 (1,1) - same case as in the last diff // sure
01:12:638 (2) - NC this instead of the current one. And remove NC from 01:13:627 (1) - ? // switch nc instead
01:46:426 (3,1) - just caught my eye, it'd be better in case of blanket that the visual distance stays the same throughout the slider. You see how in this case the head of 01:46:742 (1) - draws clearly closer to 01:46:426 (3) - than the rest of the blanket? // not sure about that, seems fine for me
Kenterz's ANOTHER
00:39:480 (1,2) - the 1/4 is more like structured as groups of 4. This doesn't really work, feels weird. Same with 00:43:269 (1,2) - (and all these ones if there's more I presume). If you want to keep the current rhythms, do it with 4+2 or smth instead of 3+3 // revamped with 4+2
01:41:532 (3,1,2,3,4) - I think it'd be better to go for blanketing stream or smth like that instead of this stacking one since the distance is too short for them to stack properly. It looks somewhat messy // blanketed
01:45:163 (2,3,4) - compare to 01:46:426 (3,4,5,6) - I think there should be more difference in spacing. Like, the 1/3 is group of 3 so it "should" make sense, but considering there was already somewhat irregular stuff like 00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it'd be better to make it clear with spacing too. Especially since it's like the only 1/3 with circles like this // adjusted spacing
Cookie M i N's EXTREME
AiMod complaining about stack leniency. While it's not problem in and of itself, keep in mind you can create unrankable patterns with wrong stack leniencies.
00:20:534 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty clearly emphasised as 3 groups of 4 instead. NC according to it?
01:30:637 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - true enough 2 groups this time, but I think it'd make more sense to remove NC from 01:30:795 (1,1) - and add one to 01:31:110 (5) - instead for the proper emphasis.
FINAL DESTINATION
That same stack leniency thingy. Though didn't really seem problematic in the last diff. // it's alright
01:08:533 (1,2,3,4) - you should keep these higher spacing since you've used 1/6 before. If you want this section to be calmer, use kickslider then. Similarly 01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - // the first one you pointed out had changed to kickslider but the second one didn't as i think that the player should already understand that they pass through the part which sounds messy (the part feature 1/6) which means that it's played in a normal way (1/4)
01:29:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not bad idea with the spacing, but similarly here as well. What makes it even more problematic here is that the low spacing is combined with groups of 6. Well, all in all I guess these could work the way they are if player figures out there are only specific sections with 1/6. But you can't really presume that happens // One reason is that the spacing in the 1/6 part is totally different in compare to this part. As you can see, the spacing of 1/6 part is shorter than 1/4, this can be told that it's a different rhythm. Another reason I believe is that this is where the part where player get used to the 1/4 patterns. After 1/6 parts, there are several parts where it is clearly not using 1/6, this can tell it is a different pattern or not
01:34:899 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - not really smooth curve here? 01:38:768 (8,9,10,11) - on the other hand looks intentional (well, both of them probably are but the first one doesn't really seem like it). For that matter, I don't see why you'd switch between having the last 4 change direction and not. // revamped
Well, mostly some slight stuff on structure like NC. The song gave me really nostalgic feeling for some reason hm
Good luck!

thanks for modding!

(from now on, i'll use gray color on the point if the suggestions are not give to my parts (for collab ofc))

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
B-but "FINAL DESTINATION" seems about tags too.
Standard was the way for me to name "Normal" difficulty, Normal is the original name of Normal difficulty in BMS, actually no Extreme in BMS ...

well nvm, just passing by, good luck with your map anyway!

everyone has their own way to name things, i prefer this way

Akasha-

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Akasha- 2017-10-20T13:28:17+00:00

So you're not gonna admit it :thinking: Okay, moving on!

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2017-10-20T13:32:03+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
So you're not gonna admit it :thinking: Okay, moving on!

i know that the extreme in BMS is "Black Another", but i dislike the name so i just use names in my own way.
Also, i think using the name "Standard" feels more special than "Normal" lol

(actually the difficulty naming system was inspired by this)

there is one line that i don't understand lol

B-but "FINAL DESTINATION" seems about tags too.

Akasha-

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Akasha- 2017-10-20T13:34:43+00:00

heh, as your pleased
Don't say it like you know nothing

Only checking the description of the file you used + the file from my map I can see you used some contents in there without asking anything.

Moving on.

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2017-10-20T13:53:49+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
heh, as your pleased
Don't say it like you know nothing Only checking the description of the file you used + the file from my map I can see you used some contents in there without asking anything.

Moving on.

i didn't say i know nothing what
the top difficulty name is inspired by your mapset since i don't have much idea of a difficulty name
also the tags are like taken from yours since most of your tags are pretty much on point

alright seriously thats all i have done
the naming spread thing really just come from that mapset
it's up to you whether you believe it or not

voynich

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voynich 2017-10-21T06:39:53+00:00

final destination

good map.
00:03:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'd let the slider end of 00:01:904 (3) go to 00:03:799 (1).
01:06:322 (1,1,1) - spread these out a bit more?
00:01:904 (3) - maybe use another slider shape. this one looks messy.

not much cause this looks polished.

i lost my kudosu for this map on another map i modded whoops

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-21T06:43:32+00:00

-Nishiki- wrote:
final destination
good map.
00:03:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'd let the slider end of 00:01:904 (3) go to 00:03:799 (1). // want to emphasize 00:03:799 -
01:06:322 (1,1,1) - spread these out a bit more? // decided to replace this with 1/3 reverse slider
00:01:904 (3) - maybe use another slider shape. this one looks messy. // i dont think so

not much cause this looks polished.

i lost my kudosu for this map on another map i modded whoops

thanks for modding!

Crissa

850 posts

Joined December 2014

Crissa 2017-10-21T08:14:08+00:00

Hey, from Q, short mod

00:12:009 - consider a volume change here

FINAL DESTINATION

00:16:745 (1,2,3,4) - distance here isn't very representative with the pitch sound, also distance 00:18:639 (1,2,3,4) - here is higher but melody is lower, you could switch them maybe
00:21:166 (1,2,3,4,1) - could be nice to have some distance variation

01:30:637 (1) - maybe add that little jump here too

01:34:110 (5) - you could put more 3/4 sliders into this sections, you use them just 2 times and can be missread easily imo

Cookie M I N's EXTREME

00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - could be great to have smoother visual flow here

00:46:427 (4) - maybe 2 circles, there are 2 strong claps here

00:52:111 (1,2) - try switching them, sound better that way imo

Kenterz's ANOTHER

00:33:846 (3) - i think a curved shape would fit better here, it's too out of place visually imo

00:44:690 (3,4,5) - sound here is just too weak to deserve a triple, representing red and white ticks would fit better

00:46:743 (4,1) - try switching those, red tick is pretty weak

00:48:795 (5,1,2,3) - you could move (2) a bit closer to (3) so it's more consistent visually

00:55:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider making these straight, it doesn't look that good with that little curvy shape

01:07:585 (3,1) - same as above, you could have equal distance for these

01:44:216 (2,3,4) - distance is too low imo, they are just 1/2

ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER

00:18:955 (2,1) - consider overlapping these a bit more, it looks odd
00:37:269 (3,1) - ^

01:02:059 (2,3,4,1) - stacking 2 on 3 and 4 on 1 would fit this section better imo

01:12:638 (1,1) - i think these deserve a lower SV

01:29:610 (4,1,2) - try to make them more consistent, add a double or delete first one

this diff has a lot of different slider shapes, they seem to be quite random sometimes
i.e: 00:21:955 (2) - 01:20:216 (1) - 01:26:847 (1) - 01:30:163 (2) -

I suck at low diffs, top diffs looks pretty good

Good Luck~

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-21T09:39:24+00:00

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
Hey, from Q, short mod

00:12:009 - consider a volume change here // nice catch

FINAL DESTINATION
00:16:745 (1,2,3,4) - distance here isn't very representative with the pitch sound, also distance 00:18:639 (1,2,3,4) - here is higher but melody is lower, you could switch them maybe
00:21:166 (1,2,3,4,1) - could be nice to have some distance variation

// revamped all

01:30:637 (1) - maybe add that little jump here too // sure

01:34:110 (5) - you could put more 3/4 sliders into this sections, you use them just 2 times and can be missread easily imo // most of them are having a red line supported so if i do so i'd skip them

Cookie M I N's EXTREME
00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - could be great to have smoother visual flow here // it doesn't sound right, the song is having a twist to a more badass/serious section, having smoother flow just doesn't seems right

00:46:427 (4) - maybe 2 circles, there are 2 strong claps here

00:52:111 (1,2) - try switching them, sound better that way imo

Kenterz's ANOTHER
00:33:846 (3) - i think a curved shape would fit better here, it's too out of place visually imo // changed to a curve one

00:44:690 (3,4,5) - sound here is just too weak to deserve a triple, representing red and white ticks would fit better // removed blue tick circle

00:46:743 (4,1) - try switching those, red tick is pretty weak // ok

00:48:795 (5,1,2,3) - you could move (2) a bit closer to (3) so it's more consistent visually // ok

00:55:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider making these straight, it doesn't look that good with that little curvy shape // sure

01:07:585 (3,1) - same as above, you could have equal distance for these // applied

01:44:216 (2,3,4) - distance is too low imo, they are just 1/2 // revamped

I suck at low diffs, top diffs looks pretty good

Good Luck~

thanks for modding!

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-10-21T14:11:51+00:00

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER
00:18:955 (2,1) - consider overlapping these a bit more, it looks odd
00:37:269 (3,1) - ^. I don't see any problem and I think Sryax is great to make it easier first

01:02:059 (2,3,4,1) - stacking 2 on 3 and 4 on 1 would fit this section better imo. Nope, i'm already try and it's bad flow & overlap for me

01:12:638 (1,1) - i think these deserve a lower SV. It's already lower SV

01:29:610 (4,1,2) - try to make them more consistent, add a double or delete first one. Since Hyper diff and we agree to not make it more harder, so we decided to ignore this one

this diff has a lot of different slider shapes, they seem to be quite random sometimes
i.e: 00:21:955 (2) - 01:20:216 (1) - 01:26:847 (1) - 01:30:163 (2) - I think Sryax want to make different slider shapes, but for me it's normal

Good Luck~

Thank you for mod, but sorry no change
@Fixed all from previous mod, thank you!

Update!

ShiroyraxAdventure

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Diancis

Diancis 2017-10-21T16:32:55+00:00

I should say the 3.67* Hard diff is just perfect!
I love Pokemon and dungeon,and the map just expressed all that I want to see!
If I had a Kudosu I would shoot it immediately!
Hope it be ranked!Good Luck!

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-10-21T16:41:45+00:00

Diancis wrote:
I should say the 3.67* Hard diff is just perfect!
I love Pokemon and dungeon,and the map just expressed all that I want to see!
If I had a Kudosu I would shoot it immediately!
Hope it be ranked!Good Luck!

Actually it's 3.66 but thank you :3

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-22T00:17:35+00:00

Diancis wrote:
I should say the 3.67* Hard diff is just perfect!
I love Pokemon and dungeon,and the map just expressed all that I want to see!
If I had a Kudosu I would shoot it immediately!
Hope it be ranked!Good Luck!

favourite is a way to show how much you love the map d

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-10-22T05:45:27+00:00

q

ive always thought palkia > dialga but thats just me idk

[beginner]

00:36:638 (1) - this is a more unique sound than 00:34:758 (1) - , i'd prefer if this wasnt just a copypaste of that slider so players could more easily see that uniqueness. maybe a red anchor would work?
00:51:164 (4) - 2 circles would work nicely here to differentiate this from stuff like 00:48:006 (1,2) -
01:21:163 (2,3) etc - these should really be changed to something like 01:24:953 (2,3) - instead, i feel that the latter represents the music more

[standard]

00:13:903 - this entire section uses exclusively clockwise flow, consider changing up flow within the section a bit more, as this might cause unnecessary mouse drift or similar to newer players
00:50:848 (1) - i really feel like that sound on the reverse arrow is important enough to warrant clickability
01:12:322 (5) - red anchor since the sound is wubby?

[shiroyraxadventure's hyper]

00:01:904 (2) etc - those bell things on the end of the sliderends warrant clickability imo
00:43:901 (2,1) etc - maybe stack sliderend of 2 on head of 1 to follow that 1/4 gap concept in the earlier section?
00:59:374 - im not sure players of this level will comprehend a 0.5x sv change that's this sudden. maybe gradually lower sv so players can ease into the .5x thing
01:16:268 (4,1) - players of this level won't expect a jump this big since it's the only one in the entire map and the map hovers around more or less the same ds per object, so this might be misread as 1/1
01:26:847 (1,2) - blanketing these would be cool idk

[kenterz' another]

00:14:376 (3) - flipping horizontally and repositioning would make flow much smoother
00:23:850 (2) // 00:27:797 (5) - ctrlg? would make circular flow more apparent like it was in the other kickslider-slider pairs
00:44:690 (3,4) - should be spaced imo, 4 doesnt feel emphasized enough for its intensity
00:48:795 (5) - shouldnt nc be here and not 1 for consistency with 00:45:006 (1) -
00:51:164 (2) - weird slidershape here would work, the beep sound is very different from the other sounds in this section yet it looks the same as the other sliders in this section
00:51:795 (1) - same as above, crumpling the slider could work

[cookie m i n's extra]

00:51:795 (1) - i'd prefer a sharp sv change or something here. this slider feels too plain for the sound it represents
01:12:322 (1,2,3,4,1) - space these out more, builds tension and also fits with how the sounds here are way louder than the others in this section
01:36:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) etc - where did the streambends go :c

[final destination]

00:28:745 (1,2,3,4) - lower spacing to mimic the way the pitch goes way lower suddenly?
01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe make this accelerate so that the ultra low sv on the end slider becomes way more unexpected and seems way more emphasized - i think it deserves more emphasis
01:30:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - streamjump where (consistency pls)

good luck!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-22T06:55:17+00:00

newton- wrote:
q

ive always thought palkia > dialga but thats just me idk

[beginner]
00:36:638 (1) - this is a more unique sound than 00:34:758 (1) - , i'd prefer if this wasnt just a copypaste of that slider so players could more easily see that uniqueness. maybe a red anchor would work? // changed as straight slider
00:51:164 (4) - 2 circles would work nicely here to differentiate this from stuff like 00:48:006 (1,2) - // too many circles may add too much pressure for new players
01:21:163 (2,3) etc - these should really be changed to something like 01:24:953 (2,3) - instead, i feel that the latter represents the music more // adding more varies are a good thing
[standard]
00:13:903 - this entire section uses exclusively clockwise flow, consider changing up flow within the section a bit more, as this might cause unnecessary mouse drift or similar to newer players // i want to create something similar to how gears work
00:50:848 (1) - i really feel like that sound on the reverse arrow is important enough to warrant clickability // replaced with circle
01:12:322 (5) - red anchor since the sound is wubby? // applied
[kenterz' another]
00:14:376 (3) - flipping horizontally and repositioning would make flow much smoother // ok
00:23:850 (2) // 00:27:797 (5) - ctrlg? would make circular flow more apparent like it was in the other kickslider-slider pairs // ok
00:44:690 (3,4) - should be spaced imo, 4 doesnt feel emphasized enough for its intensity // spaced
00:48:795 (5) - shouldnt nc be here and not 1 for consistency with 00:45:006 (1) - // redid nc
00:51:164 (2) - weird slidershape here would work, the beep sound is very different from the other sounds in this section yet it looks the same as the other sliders in this section // ok
00:51:795 (1) - same as above, crumpling the slider could work // sure
[cookie m i n's extra]
00:51:795 (1) - i'd prefer a sharp sv change or something here. this slider feels too plain for the sound it represents
01:12:322 (1,2,3,4,1) - space these out more, builds tension and also fits with how the sounds here are way louder than the others in this section // sure
01:36:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) etc - where did the streambends go :c // fixed i guess
[final destination]
00:28:745 (1,2,3,4) - lower spacing to mimic the way the pitch goes way lower suddenly? // the pitch of the drum didn't go lower
01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe make this accelerate so that the ultra low sv on the end slider becomes way more unexpected and seems way more emphasized - i think it deserves more emphasis // sure
01:30:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - streamjump where (consistency pls) // the drums in this section sounds much brighter than the previous one so it make sense if the spacing is larger
good luck!

thanks for modding!

SyraxAxoJaxco

190 posts

Joined March 2014

SyraxAxoJaxco 2017-10-22T11:27:21+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Hello from my que Thanks for accepting the request~

[ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER]
01:19:268 (1,2,3) - It is very strange that in kiai before that you used a circular flow, and here you decided not to do it, but after that the pattern starts to do it again
Variation issue. :v Anyway, it's still consistent, right? Then I believe it's okay.
looks good for me We thank you~
okay good mappset Did you put that 'pp' intentionally? XD

TheKingHenry wrote:
Hello mod from my queue~ Hi there~
ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER
I think the kiai times are conflicting? I don't really know the actual "recommendations" but I don't think it's really deadly though when talking about GDs. Just mentioning in case you'd want for them to be the same.
Um, actually, I even think the kiais on the hard GD do more justice for being 'climatic' there so I guess it's not a problem. XD Anyway, it's not an unrankable issue, right?

newton- wrote:
q

ive always thought palkia > dialga but thats just me idk Which do you choose: Bigger space, or more time? :v

[shiroyraxadventure's hyper]
00:01:904 (2) etc - those bell things on the end of the sliderends warrant clickability imo
Um, I want to make the beginning feels calm so if I do that, I'll just add more frustration to the players to perfect-hit that bell sound with only a single note...
01:16:268 (4,1) - players of this level won't expect a jump this big since it's the only one in the entire map and the map hovers around more or less the same ds per object, so this might be misread as 1/1
Um, Kitty? Your response will be...?
01:26:847 (1,2) - blanketing these would be cool idk
*perfectionist mode kicked in. Thank you for that!
good luck! :3

ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER

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12,188,100426,1,10,0:0:0:0:
52,276,100584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,292,100663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,56,103900,6,0,B|436:68|408:56|408:56|376:40|344:64,1,105,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,104216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,156,104374,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,252,105795,6,0,L|292:204,3,35,10|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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236,180,109584,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,123016,12,0,126648,0:0:0:0:

Ethan

226 posts

Joined September 2015

Ethan 2017-10-22T15:10:52+00:00

hi from the queue

[beginner]
there really isn't anything wrong with this that i found besides one thing
01:50:532 (3,4) - maybe you could find a way to make these two blanket? i think that would look nice

[standard]
01:46:742 (1) - this is REALLY picky, but if you move the second point to x241 y72 and the third to x292 y112 i think that would be the best blanket you could get

[shiroyax]
01:13:627 (1) - moving the first red tick to x292 y170 would make the first two red ticks spaced out evenly

rest of the diffs had no problems really

you don't need to give me kds since this was a pretty short mod lol

gl with rank!

Shii

374 posts

Joined October 2016

Shii 2017-10-24T10:26:59+00:00

o/
Let's get straight into this;

FINAL DESTINATION

Going right of the bat to say that there are plenty of overlaps, and i can't really tell if they're mostly intentional, or unintentional :/
Having played all but one of your ranked maps, i get the impression that you know what you're doing and why, so most of these points will just be me pointing out aesthetic "issues" and/or alternatives.
00:20:060 (1) - Overlaps with 00:19:507 (9) a bit.
00:20:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This entire stream has inconsistent spacing between each set of 4. I can tell it's done intentionally, just not a fan of it since the stream then doesn't have consistent movement through each circle (since you have slightly larger spacing after every 4th circle).
00:21:955 (3,4) - Overlaps with 00:22:666 (2,3) .
00:22:113 (5) - Hasn't fully faced out when 00:22:903 (4,5) are both fully faded in, looks more like a messy overlap that an intentional choice.
00:27:166 (1) - Overlaps galore!
00:39:007 (4,6) - Don't follow the curve of 00:39:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) perfectly
00:44:532 (2,3,4,5) - Not a huge fan of this pattern visually.
00:50:532 (6) - Overlaps with 00:49:374 (3,4,5,6,7) , though they have faded out before you hit 00:50:532 (6) -
00:51:006 (1) - Overlaps with 00:50:138 (2,3) at least partially.
00:51:006 (1,1,1,1,1) - The angles of these seem a bit random and inconsistent
00:52:585 (4) - Potential overlap with 00:53:322 (6,7) .
Not really much i can complain about, since it's pretty fun to play (a good song as well), and looks pretty nice for the most part. I'd maybe like to see some visual improvements, but that's because I'm an aesthetic-whore.

I'm afraid there's not much more i can do for ya >.<
Good luck getting this ranked buddy!

coke bottle

271 posts

Joined May 2017

coke bottle 2017-10-24T11:18:29+00:00

yo skrub here 1st mod after nearly 1 month no mod so nothing that gud lul

standard
01:26:847 (4) - maybe make this slider go down so the body does not overlap with 01:26:216 (2) - ? may look nicer lmao
i also like how u the video gear spinning as flow owo noice
also the video for some reason at some point remided me of calamity fortune and some shiat

hyper
there are some bell sounds that are clickable imo. read from previous mod that people would be frustrated cause is one note so maybe somethign like this https://imgur.com/lW5JTqN so instead of one note there is some leniency for that bell sound
00:13:588 (4) - NC? new sound

another
why suddenly so low spacing for this stream 01:42:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - owo music did not change rite i think
i dont see the use of 1/3 snap for 01:45:163 (2,3,4) - . i dont understand the point in these. maybe explain further or mistake?
01:53:374 (5) - NC???????????

thats it cuz i cant mod shit 5 star and above

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-24T11:58:22+00:00

Ethan wrote:
hi from the queue

[beginner]
there really isn't anything wrong with this that i found besides one thing
01:50:532 (3,4) - maybe you could find a way to make these two blanket? i think that would look nice // sure

[standard]
01:46:742 (1) - this is REALLY picky, but if you move the second point to x241 y72 and the third to x292 y112 i think that would be the best blanket you could get // applied

rest of the diffs had no problems really

you don't need to give me kds since this was a pretty short mod lol

gl with rank!

thanks for modding!

ShiiTsuin wrote:
o/
Let's get straight into this;

FINAL DESTINATION
Going right of the bat to say that there are plenty of overlaps, and i can't really tell if they're mostly intentional, or unintentional :/
Having played all but one of your ranked maps, i get the impression that you know what you're doing and why, so most of these points will just be me pointing out aesthetic "issues" and/or alternatives.
00:20:060 (1) - Overlaps with 00:19:507 (9) a bit.
00:20:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This entire stream has inconsistent spacing between each set of 4. I can tell it's done intentionally, just not a fan of it since the stream then doesn't have consistent movement through each circle (since you have slightly larger spacing after every 4th circle). // revamped stream
00:21:955 (3,4) - Overlaps with 00:22:666 (2,3) .
00:22:113 (5) - Hasn't fully faced out when 00:22:903 (4,5) are both fully faded in, looks more like a messy overlap that an intentional choice.
00:27:166 (1) - Overlaps galore!
00:39:007 (4,6) - Don't follow the curve of 00:39:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) perfectly
00:44:532 (2,3,4,5) - Not a huge fan of this pattern visually.
00:50:532 (6) - Overlaps with 00:49:374 (3,4,5,6,7) , though they have faded out before you hit 00:50:532 (6) -
00:51:006 (1) - Overlaps with 00:50:138 (2,3) at least partially.
00:51:006 (1,1,1,1,1) - The angles of these seem a bit random and inconsistent
00:52:585 (4) - Potential overlap with 00:53:322 (6,7) .
Not really much i can complain about, since it's pretty fun to play (a good song as well), and looks pretty nice for the most part. I'd maybe like to see some visual improvements, but that's because I'm an aesthetic-whore.

// most of the overlap had been fixed, but didn't fix that in the part where featured 1/6 since that part sounds pretty messy so i feel like mapping in a more messy way is fine

I'm afraid there's not much more i can do for ya >.<
Good luck getting this ranked buddy!

thanks for modding!

Reynolduh wrote:
yo skrub here 1st mod after nearly 1 month no mod so nothing that gud lul

standard
01:26:847 (4) - maybe make this slider go down so the body does not overlap with 01:26:216 (2) - ? may look nicer lmao // revamped slider
i also like how u the video gear spinning as flow owo noice
also the video for some reason at some point remided me of calamity fortune and some shiat

another
why suddenly so low spacing for this stream 01:42:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - owo music did not change rite i think // i think that the electric sound doesn't sound loud in compare to the others, also it can emphasize the drums better
i dont see the use of 1/3 snap for 01:45:163 (2,3,4) - . i dont understand the point in these. maybe explain further or mistake? // replaced with reserve slider
01:53:374 (5) - NC??????????? // ok

thats it cuz i cant mod shit 5 star and above

thanks for modding!

-

Also, since A r m i n decided not to handle the mods so here i come:

makisokk wrote:
Hello from my que

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

00:51:164 (2,3) - It is better to make a small space here, because there is not much sound, and to express this sound 00:51:480 (4) - more strongly! you can try to do so // it's already short enough i believe

bite you death wrote:
hello, from my queue

cookiemin extra
00:35:725 (8) - silence tail, sounds bad // not sure what you mean, if it's about the volume it's fixed
00:35:725 (8) - nc // ok
01:02:216 (1,4) - inconsistent nc // fixed
01:26:532 (4,5) - 4 should be spaced more than 5 to emphasise the sound better, could change to something like so // adjusted

TheKingHenry wrote:
Cookie M i N's EXTREME
AiMod complaining about stack leniency. While it's not problem in and of itself, keep in mind you can create unrankable patterns with wrong stack leniencies.
00:20:534 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty clearly emphasised as 3 groups of 4 instead. NC according to it?
01:30:637 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - true enough 2 groups this time, but I think it'd make more sense to remove NC from 01:30:795 (1,1) - and add one to 01:31:110 (5) - instead for the proper emphasis. // sure

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
Hey, from Q, short mod

Cookie M I N's EXTREME
00:46:427 (4) - maybe 2 circles, there are 2 strong claps here // replaced

00:52:111 (1,2) - try switching them, sound better that way imo // sure

newton- wrote:
q

[cookie m i n's extra]
00:51:795 (1) - i'd prefer a sharp sv change or something here. this slider feels too plain for the sound it represents // ok

thanks for modding!!

July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-10-26T00:04:35+00:00

Hii!
From my queue!

Okay let's see here..

BEGINNER

01:13:627 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Whistle", maybe sounds better)

01:19:268 (3) - (Put this here 01:18:321 - )

01:18:321 (1) - (This here 01:19:268 - )

01:18:953 (2) - (And this here 01:19:900 - )

For me it looks better this way...

STANDARD

01:13:627 (1) - (add Hitsound "Whistle", Maybe Sounds Better)

That's all!

Great Map Dude!

Good Luck!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-10-26T11:16:37+00:00

July - San wrote:
Hii!
From my queue!

Okay let's see here..

BEGINNER

01:13:627 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Whistle", maybe sounds better) // doesn't sound that high pitch imo

01:19:268 (3) - (Put this here 01:18:321 - )

01:18:321 (1) - (This here 01:19:268 - )

01:18:953 (2) - (And this here 01:19:900 - )

For me it looks better this way...

// try to add more varieties to the song, repeat the same pattern seems boring here

STANDARD

01:13:627 (1) - (add Hitsound "Whistle", Maybe Sounds Better) // doesn't sound that high pitch imo

That's all!

Great Map Dude! Good Luck!

thanks for modding!

DeRandom Otaku

2,142 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-11-09T11:22:52+00:00

[FINAL DESTINATION]

00:36:242 (4,1) - this is like one of the largest stream jump in the whole difficulty and the song isn't even loud at the moment, its pretty calm so nerfing the spacing will feel more natural
00:39:953 (7,1) - ee stack and 00:40:348 (12,3) - avoid the overlap. not sure why you went for messy structure here
00:48:795 (1,2,3,4) - Literally the only 1/6 circle stream in the whole difficulty, can be really unexpected therefor its more suitable to have a slider here as
well
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I highly disagree with your rhythm here ,it sounds just random to me. You are probably following the hihats in the background which are extremely faint while there are those electronic ish (?) sounds playing on these beats as well which are much more louder and have far greater impact. The sounds i am pointing out isn't at beats like 00:58:901 - 00:59:138 - etc while you mapped these beats with the same stuff which is really bad for emphasis as well. Why would you go for faint as hell sounds over those strong sounds zz
01:08:532 (1) - 1/6 because 1/4 sounds pretty slow. other sliders like this are 1/6 as well for example 01:07:586 (3) - 01:09:481 (3) -

[EXTREME]

00:25:034 (6) - overmapped. Shouldn't this be at 00:24:718 - instead of being at 00:25:034 - lol
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as in highest difficulty. in case of this difficulty the rhythm is even worse because sliders like 00:58:901 (4) - is emphasizing the sound on 00:58:901 - which is just bAd since its supposed to emphasize 00:58:980 - this sound.( Check the another difficulty, the same spot of the song has a flawless rhythm for it)
01:10:427 (1) - You don't need this nc
01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The song's intensity is really low here, the big spacing sounds really overdone compared to how you handled spacing in the rest of the song. Well yea the spacing is literally twice is big as top difficulty
01:28:426 (4) - Since you made all the melody sounds click able on the kiai, it would be more consistent to have 01:28:584 - clickable as well instead of leaving it on a slider end
01:44:216 (2,3) - They both support sounds that are alot and alot different from each other, yet they are mapped in same way ,even the slider shape is similar. would be cooler if 01:44:216 (2) - is changed to circles because there are drums going on in the song
01:45:163 (2,3,4) - This is too much for the difficulty right now. Its called extreme yea but its just hard as hell to expect a pattern like this. just go with a repeat on 01:45:163 (2) - seriously. having similar visual spacing on 01:45:374 (3,4,5) - while the rhythm is 1/3 first and 1/4 later on is just gonna be really confusing since you didn't even try to 'indicate' the players about such upcoming pattern. Even the top difficulty didn't go this savage

[ANOTHER]

00:37:111 (3,4,1) - Spacing should be higher for 00:37:585 (1) - instead of 00:37:269 (4) - because of the sound on 00:37:585 - is much stronger
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Finally a proper rhythm here
01:06:401 (6) - This is supposed to be 1/3
01:12:322 (3) - The static sounds on this slider are pretty strong. far stronger than what you have on 01:11:374 (3) - so why not change 01:12:322 (3) - this to circle for best emphasis
01:25:742 (6,1) - i highly suggest you to not stack 01:25:900 (1) - under 6 and the reason for that is the sound on 01:25:900 - is pretty emphasized so having some extra spacing for emphasis would be better but instead you just stack it and give it no spacing emphasize

[STANDARD]

00:41:059 (3,3) - song is exactly the same so try changing 00:41:059 (3) - to a 1/2 slider as well
00:51:480 (3) - here you can actually use a circle on 00:51:480 - and then a 1/2 slider at 00:51:795 - because the sound on 00:51:795 - a lot more intense then 00:51:480 - so not having 00:51:795 - clickable is kinda bad for emphasis too. i suggested 1/2 slider for 00:51:795 - because the sound is held and is pretty strong
01:53:374 (1,2,3) - The drums here are going crazy and having this part executed in the same way 01:52:426 (1,2,3) - is quite bad for emphasis. Theres a huge contrast between both parts in song but not in map. Atleast what you could do is use bent slider shapes for 01:53:374 (1,2,3) - and if you want to give it even more emphasis then it would be best to have 2 circles instead of 01:54:005 (3) -

Good luck.

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-11-09T13:06:14+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[FINAL DESTINATION]
00:36:242 (4,1) - this is like one of the largest stream jump in the whole difficulty and the song isn't even loud at the moment, its pretty calm so nerfing the spacing will feel more natural // nerfed
00:39:953 (7,1) - ee stack and 00:40:348 (12,3) - avoid the overlap. not sure why you went for messy structure here // applied
00:48:795 (1,2,3,4) - Literally the only 1/6 circle stream in the whole difficulty, can be really unexpected therefor its more suitable to have a slider here as // applied
well
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I highly disagree with your rhythm here ,it sounds just random to me. You are probably following the hihats in the background which are extremely faint while there are those electronic ish (?) sounds playing on these beats as well which are much more louder and have far greater impact. The sounds i am pointing out isn't at beats like 00:58:901 - 00:59:138 - etc while you mapped these beats with the same stuff which is really bad for emphasis as well. Why would you go for faint as hell sounds over those strong sounds zz // revamped
01:08:532 (1) - 1/6 because 1/4 sounds pretty slow. other sliders like this are 1/6 as well for example 01:07:586 (3) - 01:09:481 (3) - // applied
[EXTREME]
00:25:034 (6) - overmapped. Shouldn't this be at 00:24:718 - instead of being at 00:25:034 - lol // removed the circle instead
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as in highest difficulty. in case of this difficulty the rhythm is even worse because sliders like 00:58:901 (4) - is emphasizing the sound on 00:58:901 - which is just bAd since its supposed to emphasize 00:58:980 - this sound.( Check the another difficulty, the same spot of the song has a flawless rhythm for it) // revamped
01:10:427 (1) - You don't need this nc // removed nc
01:14:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The song's intensity is really low here, the big spacing sounds really overdone compared to how you handled spacing in the rest of the song. Well yea the spacing is literally twice is big as top difficulty // lowered the ds
01:28:426 (4) - Since you made all the melody sounds click able on the kiai, it would be more consistent to have 01:28:584 - clickable as well instead of leaving it on a slider end // applied
01:44:216 (2,3) - They both support sounds that are alot and alot different from each other, yet they are mapped in same way ,even the slider shape is similar. would be cooler if 01:44:216 (2) - is changed to circles because there are drums going on in the song // changed
01:45:163 (2,3,4) - This is too much for the difficulty right now. Its called extreme yea but its just hard as hell to expect a pattern like this. just go with a repeat on 01:45:163 (2) - seriously. having similar visual spacing on 01:45:374 (3,4,5) - while the rhythm is 1/3 first and 1/4 later on is just gonna be really confusing since you didn't even try to 'indicate' the players about such upcoming pattern. Even the top difficulty didn't go this savage // applied
[ANOTHER]
00:37:111 (3,4,1) - Spacing should be higher for 00:37:585 (1) - instead of 00:37:269 (4) - because of the sound on 00:37:585 - is much stronger // applied
00:58:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Finally a proper rhythm here
01:06:401 (6) - This is supposed to be 1/3 // fixed
01:12:322 (3) - The static sounds on this slider are pretty strong. far stronger than what you have on 01:11:374 (3) - so why not change 01:12:322 (3) - this to circle for best emphasis // applied
01:25:742 (6,1) - i highly suggest you to not stack 01:25:900 (1) - under 6 and the reason for that is the sound on 01:25:900 - is pretty emphasized so having some extra spacing for emphasis would be better but instead you just stack it and give it no spacing emphasize // unstacked
[STANDARD]
00:41:059 (3,3) - song is exactly the same so try changing 00:41:059 (3) - to a 1/2 slider as well // i do want to give the player a break
00:51:480 (3) - here you can actually use a circle on 00:51:480 - and then a 1/2 slider at 00:51:795 - because the sound on 00:51:795 - a lot more intense then 00:51:480 - so not having 00:51:795 - clickable is kinda bad for emphasis too. i suggested 1/2 slider for 00:51:795 - because the sound is held and is pretty strong // nice try but 1/2 feels like the end of the slider doesn't hit with the point where the buzz sound finishes, feels uncomfortable
01:53:374 (1,2,3) - The drums here are going crazy and having this part executed in the same way 01:52:426 (1,2,3) - is quite bad for emphasis. Theres a huge contrast between both parts in song but not in map. Atleast what you could do is use bent slider shapes for 01:53:374 (1,2,3) - and if you want to give it even more emphasis then it would be best to have 2 circles instead of 01:54:005 (3) - // applied
Good luck.

thanks for modding!

Kondou-Shinichi

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Kondou-Shinichi 2017-11-11T01:21:26+00:00

love this song
mod soon

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-11-19T08:36:04+00:00

FINAL DESTINATION

00:22:429 (1,2,3) - Imo rhythms like this sound better as triplets. The way ou do it right now it doesn't give any emphasis on the red tick which imo is quite important to the melody. This applies to other parts too.
00:47:216 (2,3) - Pretty big jump for something that isn't really strong. Remember that when you're using repeats like this the jump feels a lot sharper than when you do regular jumps since players will be holding down the repeat slider harder.
01:29:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo 1/4 repeats would fit better since it just feels really overmapped when i click here compared to the next section.

Ehh, not much to say, but that's cuz i'm just not a fan of the visuals and your choice of patterns and visual spacing. Not really something that's moddable.

COokie M i N's EXTREME

00:50:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not going to map those sounds?

Kenterz's ANOTHER

00:56:216 (7,8,1) - Is there some other way you can arrange this? This just looks really cluttered xP.
01:27:479 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack just because the pitch changes. feels better if there is some movement,

ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER

Who? Confusing diff name tbh...
00:18:955 (2,2) - Can you avoid the overlap?
00:25:271 (1,2) - These types of blanket patterns just look so ugly visually cuz of the area around the head of slider 2...

STANDARD

Fine?

BEGINNER

Fine?

[]

One problem I have with lower diffs is that your BEGINNER could use some 1/2 rhythms. The STANDARD diff is quite dense and feels more like an "Advanced" while the BEGINNER is clearly an "Easy" if you can see what I mean. See if you can improve the rhythm by making beginner a bit denser, or breaking down some of the really long 1/2 rhythm chains in STANDARD.

I don't really agree with some of the visuals and flows on the highest diff but either way I feel the lower diffs, while fine, need some rhythm fine-tuning. You can call me back for a quick recheck on the spread / highest diff in the future. But it won't be a guaranteed nomination unless I think the map has improved since here. Starred for now since this has potential.

CookieBite

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2017-11-19T09:23:46+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
FINAL DESTINATION

00:22:429 (1,2,3) - Imo rhythms like this sound better as triplets. The way ou do it right now it doesn't give any emphasis on the red tick which imo is quite important to the melody. This applies to other parts too. // fixed all
00:47:216 (2,3) - Pretty big jump for something that isn't really strong. Remember that when you're using repeats like this the jump feels a lot sharper than when you do regular jumps since players will be holding down the repeat slider harder. // ds reduced
01:29:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo 1/4 repeats would fit better since it just feels really overmapped when i click here compared to the next section. // applied

Ehh, not much to say, but that's cuz i'm just not a fan of the visuals and your choice of patterns and visual spacing. Not really something that's moddable.

COokie M i N's EXTREME

00:50:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not going to map those sounds? // mapped to be more complex

Kenterz's ANOTHER

00:56:216 (7,8,1) - Is there some other way you can arrange this? This just looks really cluttered xP. // rearranged
01:27:479 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack just because the pitch changes. feels better if there is some movement, // unstacked

[]

One problem I have with lower diffs is that your BEGINNER could use some 1/2 rhythms. The STANDARD diff is quite dense and feels more like an "Advanced" while the BEGINNER is clearly an "Easy" if you can see what I mean. See if you can improve the rhythm by making beginner a bit denser, or breaking down some of the really long 1/2 rhythm chains in STANDARD. // I did some nerfing on the standard difficulty and made some denser changes for beginner (basically I made the kiai part to have more 1/1 lol)

I don't really agree with some of the visuals and flows on the highest diff but either way I feel the lower diffs, while fine, need some rhythm fine-tuning. You can call me back for a quick recheck on the spread / highest diff in the future. But it won't be a guaranteed nomination unless I think the map has improved since here. Starred for now since this has potential.

thanks for the check!

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