Hi as the deal we made few days ago :3
[General]
• You wanna have the countdown for this map? I see it turned on
• Might wanna use JPEG file for smaller beatmap size. Here you go
[Despondency]
• Ok I think there're a few spot you mapped kinda overdone. For example 00:00:304 (3,4) - has no specific sound on the sliderend, but you still used a 1/4 slider instead of a circle. Idk if you're trying to increase the density of the map or not but lemme tell you it's not quite a good idea, at least for the soft intro like this
• Some more examples to help you understand more of what I'm trying to say:
• 00:12:047 (8,9) - stacking
• 00:13:503 (9,10) - Flow is quite harsh as 00:13:161 (6,7,8,9) - doubles are kinda hard already, so you should place 10 somewhere easier to tap, like what you did on 00:12:132 (9,10) - maybe
• 00:16:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really wanna see the buildup you can make here. Well simply my suggestion is to lower the spacing of the first 8 circles, that might be the easiest way to do
• 00:20:533 (1) - I would end this on 00:21:733 - because it's a more audible sound. I think the spinner represents the vocal am I right? So ending it on where the vocal ends would be a better idea
• 00:22:933 (7,8) - pattern should be like http://puu.sh/wPMoH/eab33916fd.jpg to follow the rhythm better? If you apply this make sure you check all the triples after this because I found a lot of unmapped triples tho (ofc just the section before the kiai part)
• 01:23:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing I said before, but this time you make these smaller spacing instead? :d I think buff the last 8 or nerf the first 8 would be a better solution
• 01:27:904 (1,1,2) - Awkward flow, as you're pointing the long slider straightly to (2) instead of (1), so it's pretty confusing to me. Yes some can pass this easily but it's still uncomfy to me
• 01:49:504 (3) - not a fan of this kind of slider, just saying xd
• 02:12:133 (2) - Might wanna move this to somewhere X292 Y20 for better flow?
• 02:28:590 (1,2) - why is these circle's spacing suddenly enormous?
• 04:10:418 (1) - is the whistle on the sliderbody intentional?
• 04:32:018 (1,2) - Same problem I talked about lately, these pitch are not even higher than others, but 04:32:361 (1,2) - instead. So why is the spacing?
Ok, some suggestion might be applied more than just the one I spot, so it's better to check the map out again for a few times. Good luck boi owo
[General]
• You wanna have the countdown for this map? I see it turned on
• Might wanna use JPEG file for smaller beatmap size. Here you go
[Despondency]
• Ok I think there're a few spot you mapped kinda overdone. For example 00:00:304 (3,4) - has no specific sound on the sliderend, but you still used a 1/4 slider instead of a circle. Idk if you're trying to increase the density of the map or not but lemme tell you it's not quite a good idea, at least for the soft intro like this
• Some more examples to help you understand more of what I'm trying to say:
- 00:00:904 (7,8) - should be 1/4 slider to express the vocal better than 5 notes, eventho it's a bit harder to tap
00:01:675 (3,4) - circles
00:01:161 (1) - could be like this http://puu.sh/wPLYe/d2878714e9.jpg
00:02:533 (9,10) - And for these there's an option for you where you could just make 10 a circle while keeping 9 as 1/4 slider, to emphasize the drum but also not overdone the pattern
00:07:675 (7,8,9) - well yeah, I like this pattern
• 00:12:047 (8,9) - stacking
• 00:13:503 (9,10) - Flow is quite harsh as 00:13:161 (6,7,8,9) - doubles are kinda hard already, so you should place 10 somewhere easier to tap, like what you did on 00:12:132 (9,10) - maybe
• 00:16:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really wanna see the buildup you can make here. Well simply my suggestion is to lower the spacing of the first 8 circles, that might be the easiest way to do
• 00:20:533 (1) - I would end this on 00:21:733 - because it's a more audible sound. I think the spinner represents the vocal am I right? So ending it on where the vocal ends would be a better idea
• 00:22:933 (7,8) - pattern should be like http://puu.sh/wPMoH/eab33916fd.jpg to follow the rhythm better? If you apply this make sure you check all the triples after this because I found a lot of unmapped triples tho (ofc just the section before the kiai part)
• 01:23:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing I said before, but this time you make these smaller spacing instead? :d I think buff the last 8 or nerf the first 8 would be a better solution
• 01:27:904 (1,1,2) - Awkward flow, as you're pointing the long slider straightly to (2) instead of (1), so it's pretty confusing to me. Yes some can pass this easily but it's still uncomfy to me
• 01:49:504 (3) - not a fan of this kind of slider, just saying xd
• 02:12:133 (2) - Might wanna move this to somewhere X292 Y20 for better flow?
• 02:28:590 (1,2) - why is these circle's spacing suddenly enormous?
• 04:10:418 (1) - is the whistle on the sliderbody intentional?
• 04:32:018 (1,2) - Same problem I talked about lately, these pitch are not even higher than others, but 04:32:361 (1,2) - instead. So why is the spacing?
Ok, some suggestion might be applied more than just the one I spot, so it's better to check the map out again for a few times. Good luck boi owo