00:13:222 (3,4,5,6,7,8) and 00:21:497 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like these should start on 5, removing the first two notes and sliding it back to where 3 is. The snare hit ends up feeling really weak landing on the last of 3 identical sliders. The same could be said for most of the sliders in the same positions throughout the whole section, but for some reason those feel better to me.
This probably isn't the most important thing considering the entire first part of the song is mapped similarly, but I thought it was odd to play.
Even something like changing the hit sounds might help.
02:01:670 (1) - When playing that I felt like the slider should follow the same path as the stream before it. moving it (and 02:01:928 (1)) to fit it at the end felt much nicer to play to me.
01:53:308 (1) -
01:58:825 (2) - Both of these feel out of place, I'd remove them. Extending the previous sliders to replace them would be an option if the sound playing didn't end so abruptly and fit perfect. That sound ending when it does is why the circles feel out of place anyway, there's near silence where you placed them.
The same goes for every other circle that does the same thing, including ones like 02:06:066 (2) and 02:09:859 (1). All feel really off to me.
02:37:877 (2) - Just barely doesn't overlap the previous 6. Looks pretty unintentional.
01:31:670 (2) - The same thing happened earlier, but it was a stack under a slider. Manually moving 1 and 2 one pixel right and down lined them up properly.
02:10:980 (1) - I don't like the look of this slider. I like the play, it fits well, but the way it overlaps the previous one looks really strange due to the stack. if it can be moved without affecting the area much I'd do that.
Compare that to 02:02:704 (1,3) from earlier, which line up almost perfectly and play a bit better because they're spaced farther apart. (these two are like one pixel off I think, by the way, rotating one slightly would be awesome but no one else will notice )
02:08:566 (1,1,2,1,1,2,3) - Nothing wrong here at all, I just wanted to say I really like it. Looks and feels great.
02:01:497 (10,1) - I just realized that these two barely miss each other as well and now that's bothering me. Doesn't need fixed, but man I want it too be.
02:11:325 (1,1) - AHH, another one! I'm starting a list of all notes I see that don't overlap how I think they should at the bottom now, done mentioning it.
03:08:566 (3,3) - These two are at a sliders end, but 03:11:325 (3,3) are placed along the sliders path away from the end. This repeats itself. I don't think it needs changing, I just thought it felt odd having those circles immediately under the slider end.
04:14:084 (1) - Basically the same as a very similar one in the previous chorus, I feel like it should flow with the stream better instead of the sharp angle it's at right now.
Playing it didn't feel too bad, but I think it could've been better.
04:24:601 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream feels too large for the section it's in. I could see it being a lower spacing, since the song gets much quieter here before the next section picks back up. Even starting with small spacing and getting larger gradually would feel much better. Could also work as 3 short sliders like you've used in the past.
After playing through that stream once more it doesn't feel as bad as I thought it did, but it was still a little faster than I felt it should've been.
Overlaps I think should be fixed, I actually didn't find many more so putting them at the end might have been a waste:
02:52:532 (1) - 1
04:18:222 (1) - This one isn't as bad but it's pretty damn close.
I didn't notice anything else I thought was weird or off. I enjoyed playing it and I'll definitely be keeping it around as practice
This probably isn't the most important thing considering the entire first part of the song is mapped similarly, but I thought it was odd to play.
Even something like changing the hit sounds might help.
02:01:670 (1) - When playing that I felt like the slider should follow the same path as the stream before it. moving it (and 02:01:928 (1)) to fit it at the end felt much nicer to play to me.
01:53:308 (1) -
01:58:825 (2) - Both of these feel out of place, I'd remove them. Extending the previous sliders to replace them would be an option if the sound playing didn't end so abruptly and fit perfect. That sound ending when it does is why the circles feel out of place anyway, there's near silence where you placed them.
The same goes for every other circle that does the same thing, including ones like 02:06:066 (2) and 02:09:859 (1). All feel really off to me.
02:37:877 (2) - Just barely doesn't overlap the previous 6. Looks pretty unintentional.
01:31:670 (2) - The same thing happened earlier, but it was a stack under a slider. Manually moving 1 and 2 one pixel right and down lined them up properly.
02:10:980 (1) - I don't like the look of this slider. I like the play, it fits well, but the way it overlaps the previous one looks really strange due to the stack. if it can be moved without affecting the area much I'd do that.
Compare that to 02:02:704 (1,3) from earlier, which line up almost perfectly and play a bit better because they're spaced farther apart. (these two are like one pixel off I think, by the way, rotating one slightly would be awesome but no one else will notice )
02:08:566 (1,1,2,1,1,2,3) - Nothing wrong here at all, I just wanted to say I really like it. Looks and feels great.
02:01:497 (10,1) - I just realized that these two barely miss each other as well and now that's bothering me. Doesn't need fixed, but man I want it too be.
02:11:325 (1,1) - AHH, another one! I'm starting a list of all notes I see that don't overlap how I think they should at the bottom now, done mentioning it.
03:08:566 (3,3) - These two are at a sliders end, but 03:11:325 (3,3) are placed along the sliders path away from the end. This repeats itself. I don't think it needs changing, I just thought it felt odd having those circles immediately under the slider end.
04:14:084 (1) - Basically the same as a very similar one in the previous chorus, I feel like it should flow with the stream better instead of the sharp angle it's at right now.
Playing it didn't feel too bad, but I think it could've been better.
04:24:601 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream feels too large for the section it's in. I could see it being a lower spacing, since the song gets much quieter here before the next section picks back up. Even starting with small spacing and getting larger gradually would feel much better. Could also work as 3 short sliders like you've used in the past.
After playing through that stream once more it doesn't feel as bad as I thought it did, but it was still a little faster than I felt it should've been.
Overlaps I think should be fixed, I actually didn't find many more so putting them at the end might have been a waste:
02:52:532 (1) - 1
04:18:222 (1) - This one isn't as bad but it's pretty damn close.
I didn't notice anything else I thought was weird or off. I enjoyed playing it and I'll definitely be keeping it around as practice