Nailim wrote:

1. 00:06:842 (7,2) - not overlapped as intended
2. 00:50:980 (7) - not quite the blanket to 00:51:842 (3,4,5,6,7) -
3. 00:52:359 (8) - a little off the circle its supposed to be overlapping
4. 01:24:084 (1) - i would consider flipping this so the slider flows into the next circle better ._ ., I don't think so.
5. 01:27:532 (3) - (if above applied, ctrl+g this + moving 01:27:359 (2) - seems like a good idea to stay consistent)
6. 01:50:635 (1) - this starting not no 01:49:859 (8) - but offset like a dirty overlap seems very odd.
7. 02:34:773 (1) - not quite overlapped correctly
8. 02:50:808 (5,1) - same deal as ^
9. 02:56:153 (1,2) - "stacking" these to 02:56:497 (1) - with no gap since the difference in intensity is not that high
10. 03:14:773 (2) - not quite the overlap to 03:14:428 (1) -
11. 03:37:101 (2,3) - you dont have stacking enabled in your editor, but this looks totally wrong http://i.imgur.com/jd5ej76.png
12. 03:59:859 (2,1) - same deal as ^
13. 04:18:222 (1) - you might wanna fake-stack this with 04:17:187 (2,3,4) - (manually stack them all over each other)
14. 04:42:877 (9,3) - same issue with the stacking, looks completly off http://i.imgur.com/XgFXSbA.png

dope map fam gl

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~

Luminescence

1. 00:08:566 (1,3,4,5) - overlaps like these don't really work even if this was intended. And anyways for the specifically these patterns I wouldn't overlap it at all anyways
2. 00:52:015 (5,8) - fix stack
3. 01:20:118 (7) - would work better if it was off from 01:19:601 (4) - to another direction, as in how the pattern flows (something like 90 degrees clock-wise, to somewhere around x:250y:40 perhaps) Anyways point being that would make the circle smoother
4. 01:35:463 (2,3,4) - dis looks p broken lol
5. 01:39:601 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - kinda low spacing compared to the music, feels lacking not really, there's a build up where I would increase spacing, no reason to increase it here.
6. 01:49:601 (5) - I'd recommend NCing when you do drastic direction changes on tick like this
7. 02:12:618 (6,1) - please make it line up with the straight line that is 02:12:359 (3,4,5,6) - (the DS can ofc be still the jump, also don't break the blanket while doing it)
8. 02:44:601 (2,3) - blankets like this don't look as good as they could, as you can see the sliderend of 02:44:601 (2) - kinda "cutting" towards the body of 02:44:773 (3) - ; basically the visual distance doesn't stay equal. Rotate 02:44:601 (2) - little anti-clockwise and that should do it
9. 03:36:842 (1,2,3) - another broken stack
10. 03:40:980 - same as with the earlier one
11. 03:50:980 (5) - here as well
12. I guess other than that it's mostly similar things again

Good luck!

My Angel Azusa wrote:

Mod

Please enable stacking in editor and recheck your snap. 04:42:877 (9,3,4,5,6,7) - etc you need to stack them manually. fixed
00:32:877 (4) - you might want to ctrl+G this slider since the distance for 00:32:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be consistent fixed
00:49:601 (8,1) - weird overlap imo, also fixed
00:52:359 (8,1) - nazi blanket fixed
01:22:359 (1,2,3,4) - more aesthetics maybe, this is kind of random fixed
01:36:670 (4,1) - any reason why distance suddenly becomes so huge? didn't really seem that big when I first mapped it, lowered distance a little
02:33:222 (1,2,3) - very confusing DS was confused there for a second then realised why it was confusing.
02:51:325 (1,2,3) - same here, maybe spread them a bit. fixed
03:07:187 (3,4,5,6) - probably more aesthetics as well fixed

Not bad, I guess some random jumps can be improved but that's only a minor issue. Since someone already starred it, good luck~~

Mir wrote:

Follow-up:
! - 00:00:291 - Volume level conflict here with your timing lines.
! - Make sure the following are used and if not, delete them:

1. drum-hitwhistle99.wav
2. soft-hitclap11.wav
3. soft-hitfinish10.wav

but I already did

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- 00:02:015 (2,3) - May be too high spacing for intro since the song is fairly low intensity here, and considering 00:00:291 (1,2,3) - and 00:07:532 (2,3) - it's a bit high. Placed 00:02:015 (2) - underneath 00:01:670 (1) - and did a ctrl g for 00:02:187 (3) - this should help fix spacing issue.
- 00:03:911 (6) - I wouldn't overmap an intro, circle works fine here // 00:06:670 (6) - 00:09:428 (6) - and similar cases
- 00:13:566 (6) - Using a circle here instead of the kick would help differentiate the snare on 00:13:739 (7) - or vice-versia (circle on snare, 1/4 slider on kick) //00:21:842 (6,7) - Similar cases.. but patterning will suffer When it comes to the ones with the patterns, I rather keep it the way it is. It emphasizes the melody rather than the drums.
- 00:16:497 (7,8,1) - Spacing seems a bit high here still lowered spacing on 00:16:497 (7,8) - and ctrl g 00:16:842 (1) -
- 00:19:946 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also related to intensity - flow here is pretty harsh and a sharp angle into linear stream requires a lot of cursor control I personally don't think the song calls for changed up the stream a little, it has a much wider angle but should be more playable
- 00:20:980 (1,3,4,5) - These are pretty close visually, maybe spread out slightly? // 01:29:428 (5,1) -
- 00:22:704 (2,8,9) - Triangle? http://i.imgur.com/mHm7jf2.png
- 00:44:946 (3,4,5,6,7) - An explanation on why this 5 active + 2 passive 1/4 is used and sometimes only 00:42:187 (3,4,5,6,7) - is used would be appreciated~ Well, probably so that this section doesn't feel very repetitive. Adding variety to make it more fun to play as long as it follows the music, though, I don't know why I mapped 00:44:946 (3,4,5,6,7) - with 5 stacked notes and nothing else similar to it, so I changed it to a triple and a circle placed on 00:45:463 (8) - slider end, also ctrl g the same slider.
- 01:03:739 (1) - Slider ticks around here start getting inaudible, maybe raise the volume of this section slightly so they're safely audible? increased volume by 10
- 01:40:635 (5,1) - I still feel like this lacks a massive amount of potential emphasis.. // 03:42:015 (5,1) - Spaced out 5 and 1 so that they don't stack, this should probably fix it.
- 01:51:670 (1,2,3,4) - 01:57:187 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent NCing. fixed
- 01:52:877 (3,1,2) - What about this? http://i.imgur.com/drO5IUe.jpg bruh, how did I not see that.
- 01:54:084 (1) - 01:59:601 (1,2) - Shouldn't these be treated the same? yep, my bad, fixed.
- 01:59:601 (1,2,1,1,3) - Overlaps could be cleaned up a bit fixed
- 02:20:291 (4,5,1) - Visual distance could be more even // 02:40:980 (3,4,1) - Should be close to even if not exactly.
- 02:22:532 (2,3,1) - I managed to do it http://i.imgur.com/XF8sz5H.png :3c took me a while but I got it
- 02:35:808 (4) - Hmm, what about making these circles instead so they differ from 02:36:325 (2) - which have kicks on them? Made the change, had to adjust placement of circles as some aren't suited to where kicks were.
- 03:19:946 (4) - Two circles? 03:18:911 (1,2,3) - Sounds like it's following vocals so
- 03:29:946 (1,2) - http://i.imgur.com/oJXFXuB.png
- 03:33:739 (6,1) - 1/10 blanket
- 04:08:049 (2) - What about making this only a circle because there isn't a wub on it, just a drum. It's also spaced the same as 04:07:187 (1,1) - and I misread it for 1/1 when it isn't 1/1 despite the NC because of the slider being 1/8. I associated it with the wubs and since one happens at 04:08:222 - I got confused alright made the change, I thought it would be more fun to have it this way but I can see how it causes confusion.
- 04:24:601 (1,2,3,1) - Nazi but this DS is inconsistent between every note
- 04:42:187 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing differs noticeably from 04:39:428 (3,4,5,6,7) - but why? o.o // 04:44:946 (3,4,5,6,7) - 04:47:704 (3,4,5,6,7) - (check the consistency of your stream spacing basically, you use .8x, .7x and .6x and it's noticeable) made all streams .7
- 04:58:911 (3,4,5,6) - Could be a neater square: http://i.imgur.com/8SHtyZ9.png
- 05:05:808 (3,4) - These have lower pitch ding sounds on them but 05:05:463 (2) - has a higher sound yet they all feel the same . Wouldn't 05:05:463 (2) be a good candidate for circles now that I think about it? Made 2 into 2 circle and 2 sliders right after.

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Lasse wrote:

seems like mir already did most of the work here 👀

you should add "and" to tags
also "alpha" for album name and "unitone" => http://unitone.fm/alpha/

anime
00:02:015 (2,3) - doesn't fit your overall visuals/ovelap usage in this part, so it looks really out of place, any other arrangement should be better. sth like https://lasse.s-ul.eu/vgrB38yi.jpg would be a simple solution. make sure to rearrange following objects a bit too if you change this fixed
00:00:291 - to 00:11:325 - why does this part use kick samples on snares? you did it right when the part repeats on 04:58:222 (1) - lol my bad, fixed

00:10:291 (2) - on spots like this, where you have sampleset=drum and add whistles, you should probably set additions=soft so you don't get random drum whistles (unless that is intended)
same happens on a lot of spots later, if it's not intended why not just replace soft-hitwhistle and drum-hitwhistle both with the default soft whistle for a simple fix and more consistent hitsounding even if people use skins with custom hs fixed, I didn't think it would be much of an issue when I mapped forgetting that I don't use default skin all whistles sound the same.

00:32:359 (2,3) - feels quite undermapped for such distinct drums and with melody on 00:32:532 - I think something like https://lasse.s-ul.eu/wLsoAo4F.jpg could work Yup
00:33:222 (1) - https://lasse.s-ul.eu/L4CdQSeQ.jpg might want to remove a repeat from this buzz slider best represents the sounds, but I guess I'll replace with a triple.
01:14:773 - how about ending the first spinner here and starting a new one like 1/8 after it? would fit well with what vocals do there https://lasse.s-ul.eu/lxOyZ3UO.jpg yup
01:17:532 - part could also use snares and kicks since they still play with low volume. currently seems a bit too empty hitsound wise alright,
added them in
01:36:842 (1) - what happened to this poor wave // 01:50:635 (1) - etc. could really have them look a bit less broken Fixed it, I think.

01:51:670 (1,2,3,4) - 01:54:428 (1,2,3,4) - sounds are different, but sound pattern+rhythm seems tgo be the same, so consistent rhythm would make sense.
think either all kicksliders or something like https://lasse.s-ul.eu/pUmiXPGV.jpg to emphasize the alternating wub-drum pattern. or if you want more variety keep the first one and just change 01:54:601 (2) - to circle I think it works better when they're all kick sliders so I went with the second suggestion.

02:01:670 (1,1) - snapping?? if you want to keep current shapes you will need ~1.7x sv Fixed, how did I not see this.
02:04:084 (1) - something like https://lasse.s-ul.eu/oQcnkkTB.jpg would look cleaner here
03:18:222 (1,2,3,4) - why no gradual volume decrease instead :c my bad, added.

03:20:118 (5,1) - seems quite overspaced in comparison to the whole part lowered space.
03:50:635 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why is this so much harder than 01:49:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ? same buildup oh shi, the first one was remapped, I didn't realize stream was more spaced. Fixed.
04:01:670 - forgot to toggle off kiai here like on 02:00:291 - yup, did that before I started applying mods actually
04:07:187 (1,1,1) - mute sliderends cause 1/8 hitsounds rhythm doesn't fit here. actually, same for 02:05:118 (1) - 02:10:635 (1) - 04:08:868 - last one wasn't supposed to be 1/8 so increase to 1.3x so it ends on blue tick.
04:07:877 (1,2) - how about something like https://lasse.s-ul.eu/uqJjRu4p.jpg ? I think that makes it more clear and doesn't use that sudden huge wide angle thing mmm, I guess it does make it more clear, applied.
04:08:566 (1) - 1/8 extension makes this quite inconsistent with your other rhythms, even the exact same thing at 03:57:532 (1,1) - is mapped with 1/4 corrected it earlier.
04:24:601 (1,2,3) - these could be lower volume (~50) would make a nice contrast Added.
04:57:187 (2,3) - same as before yup
04:58:049 (1) - ^ yup
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Akitoshi wrote:

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