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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 Oktober 2017 at 18:55:41

Artist: Camellia
Title: Algorithm (Hitech Psy Self-remix)
Tags: Exit Tunes Guest Tracks Summary & VIPs CTCD-0015 Paradox kradness かめるかめりあ cametek kamelcamellia M3-39
BPM: 147
Filesize: 10847kb
Play Time: 06:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Paradox - 4Key (5,79 stars, 5221 notes)


Download: Camellia - Algorithm (Hitech Psy Self-remix)
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not imitation of PLANET//SHAPER I swear

If you don't like SV, try this
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Mod
00:28:436 (28436|1,28538|2) - kalo ngikut vocal bukannya di 00:28:487 - sama sini 00:28:589 - 1/8
00:30:069 (30069|1) - remove kalo misalnya ikut vocal
00:33:334 (33334|1,33436|0) - kalo ikut vocal harusnya di 1/8 garis kuning depan
00:39:865 - ada suara disini, ga add note?
00:41:498 (41498|1,41600|2) - 1/8 garis kuning depan kalo ikut vocal
00:53:334 - tambah 1 LN lagi di col 2 yg sepanjang sebelahnya buat balance
01:04:355 (64355|2,64355|1,64355|3) - kalo misalnya mau pattern lebih enak, panjangin jadi https://puu.sh/vXOeu.png lalu add note di 01:05:375 - 01:05:477 - 01:05:579 - col 234
(pilihan aja sih) 01:18:743 - add note col 3 sama ini 01:18:794 - add note col 2
01:25:171 (85171|2,85273|2,85375|1) - tuker tempat buat hand balance
01:57:620 - add 1 LN lagi di col 3, konsistensi
kalo ikut vocal 03:32:722 (212722|1) - diperpanjang sampai garis merah berikutnya 03:32:926 (212926|2) - delete
03:39:253 (219253|1) - sama ^
03:59:865 (239865|3) - pindah ke col 1 & 03:59:457 - tambah 1 LN col 4 sepanjang sebelahnya
05:11:702 (311702|3,311702|0,311702|2,311702|1) - mending 2 note aja [soalnya ga keras itu suaranya]
05:13:334 (313334|3,313334|2,313334|0,313334|1) - sama ^
06:13:947 (373947|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar kesannya ga stack sama & suara ga sama kyk 06:13:538 (373538|2,373538|1,373743|1,373743|2) -

Another Lie wrote:

Mending kalo map ini, gw saranin req mod ke Evening [itupun kalo lu berani :v]
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Thx modnya, checknya ntar lagi packing buat pulkam. Inipun buka lewat hp, dp kds on its way

Another Lie wrote:

Mending kalo map ini, gw saranin req mod ke Evening [itupun kalo lu berani :v]


Zen lagi inactive, ini mau nyoba req mod klo gak kecyduk ikutan patternnya planet shaper dan nyoba svnya juga :(
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Ryzen wrote:

Mod
00:28:436 (28436|1,28538|2) - kalo ngikut vocal bukannya di 00:28:487 - sama sini 00:28:589 - 1/8 fixed, tipe kuping instrument doang jadi gak merhatiin vokal, khusus 00:28:589 - gak denger 1/8nya
00:30:069 (30069|1) - remove kalo misalnya ikut vocal gw gak merhatiin lirik vokalnya atau apa, klo emang ini cuma 1 suku kata, yg jelas di 00:30:069 (30069|1,30171|3) - ada 2 suara jadi aku kasih note semua
00:33:334 (33334|1,33436|0) - kalo ikut vocal harusnya di 1/8 garis kuning depan fixed
00:39:865 - ada suara disini, ga add note? ga ngikut suara piano atau apalah itu, udah kebanyakan suara(sori klo ini nonsense), yg ln cuma ngikut chord bassnya aja
00:41:498 (41498|1,41600|2) - 1/8 garis kuning depan kalo ikut vocal fixed
00:53:334 - tambah 1 LN lagi di col 2 yg sepanjang sebelahnya buat balance klo menurutku tipe stair sebelumnya itu stair ke kiri(43214321), ln-nya secara gak langsung ngelanjutin stair ke kirinya(harusnya kolom 4 doang) tapi karena ada beat aku tambah ln lagi col 3 dan menurutku tetep balance karena col 3 sama 4 itu masih sesama tangan kanan, justru klo aku tambahin di col 2 gak balance karena tangan kiri harus ngerubah arah stair(mencet 2-1-2)
01:04:355 (64355|2,64355|1,64355|3) - kalo misalnya mau pattern lebih enak, panjangin jadi https://puu.sh/vXOeu.png lalu add note di 01:05:375 - 01:05:477 - 01:05:579 - col 234 fixed panjangin ln, add note? sementara reject dulu karena sv belum fixed, add note disitu bakal susah timingnya buat orang main. Mungkin klo sv udah bener baru ditambahin
(pilihan aja sih) 01:18:743 - add note col 3 sama ini 01:18:794 - add note col 2 idenya kaya yg atas, which i like. Tapi untuk suara ini kayaknya gak tepat
01:25:171 (85171|2,85273|2,85375|1) - tuker tempat buat hand balance gatau ini pengaruhnya apa, i guess jack terakhirnya jatuh ke tangan kanan semua, selama konsep minijacknya sama then why not?
01:57:620 - add 1 LN lagi di col 3, konsistensi mapper mabok, kayanya notenya ilang tapi gak nyadar
kalo ikut vocal 03:32:722 (212722|1) - diperpanjang sampai garis merah berikutnya 03:32:926 (212926|2) - delete ikut nada, nada ganti ln juga pindah (kaya piano)
03:39:253 (219253|1) - sama ^ ini maksudnya sama yg mana? but i got the idea, gaada kick jadi gaperlu quad, fixed
03:59:865 (239865|3) - pindah ke col 1 & 03:59:457 - tambah 1 LN col 4 sepanjang sebelahnya modded by Mat, said: its hard to play when you put a note after 3 ln, and then you put another triples
05:11:702 (311702|3,311702|0,311702|2,311702|1) - mending 2 note aja [soalnya ga keras itu suaranya] agree, lagi" kuping error. Col 1 sama 4 deleted
05:13:334 (313334|3,313334|2,313334|0,313334|1) - sama ^ fixed, tapi dijadiin 1 note
06:13:947 (373947|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar kesannya ga stack sama & suara ga sama kyk 06:13:538 (373538|2,373538|1,373743|1,373743|2) - 06:13:947 (373947|0,374151|1) - both changed, for the sake of variation dan biar gak stack juga
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oscy owo
[Cyphisonia]
  1. 03:30:069 - dari part sini mending di ikutin tutut tutut nya aja deh daripada layering vocal, trs sv/bpm change in, jd mulai dari sini 03:39:253 - udh bisa di stream in dan transisinya lebih nyaman aja imo dan keknya lebih unyuk jg deh. btw ini asli mager bgt nge cek map maraton awkkw sowwy yaaa
  2. 03:43:232 (223232|1,223334|2,223436|0,223538|3,223641|0,223743|2,223845|1,223947|3,223947|2,223947|0,224049|1,224151|3,224253|0) - dkk salah snap. harusnya di 1/12 example from 03:43:334 - http://puu.sh/w0Q3K/ac775a3dfc.png btw itu placingnya asal2an, u can change it. dan seterusnya dengerin lg pakek 25% ja
  3. sbnrnya sih yak, kalo mw di rank, macam2 o2jam seperti 00:55:579 (55579|3,55681|2,55783|1) - dsb dsb itu unrank-able loh. soalnya itu ghost. gada suara pemisah apapun disitu, kecuali ln nya itu msh bisa lah karena transisi yg nge-fade. cmn yha itu yha...
  4. sv nya gud lha buat pemula ini udh keren bgt, cmn di sini 01:25:579 - itu jatohnya kecepetan gitu lho mudeng gk(?) kalo gamudeng ywd skip aja sbnrnya aku gbs sv jd aku bingung explainnya kek gmn akwkw
  5. dah yhaa bingung liatnya jg wkwk


gdluck osci 'w')b ditunggu almond crispy nya wkwk
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Leonita wrote:


oscy owo yule ewe
[Cyphisonia]
  1. 03:30:069 - dari part sini mending di ikutin tutut tutut nya aja deh daripada layering vocal, trs sv/bpm change in, jd mulai dari sini 03:39:253 - udh bisa di stream in dan transisinya lebih nyaman aja imo dan keknya lebih unyuk jg deh.done btw ini asli mager bgt nge cek map maraton awkkw sowwy yaaa >:((
  2. 03:43:232 (223232|1,223334|2,223436|0,223538|3,223641|0,223743|2,223845|1,223947|3,223947|2,223947|0,224049|1,224151|3,224253|0) - dkk salah snap. harusnya di 1/12 example from 03:43:334 - http://puu.sh/w0Q3K/ac775a3dfc.png btw itu placingnya asal2an, u can change it. dan seterusnya dengerin lg pakek 25% ja done
  3. sbnrnya sih yak, kalo mw di rank, macam2 o2jam seperti 00:55:579 (55579|3,55681|2,55783|1) - dsb dsb itu unrank-able loh. soalnya itu ghost. gada suara pemisah apapun disitu, kecuali ln nya itu msh bisa lah karena transisi yg nge-fade. cmn yha itu yha... lel ini idenya a(nude)r lie, biar feel fade outnya lebih dapet aja, tapi kayanya juga udah cukup diwakilin lnnya
  4. sv nya gud lha buat pemula ini udh keren bgt, cmn di sini 01:25:579 - itu jatohnya kecepetan gitu lho mudeng gk(?) kalo gamudeng ywd skip aja sbnrnya aku gbs sv jd aku bingung explainnya kek gmn akwkw masi butuh sugesti svnya, klo kecepetan kayanya mah engga soalnya overall udah sv changesnya 1 (jarak antar note abis dikasi sv = sebelum dikasi) kecuali yg bagian ln pengennya lebih lambat tapi takutnya jadi unsightreadable
  5. dah yhaa bingung liatnya jg wkwk nawn?


gdluck osci 'w')b ditunggu almond crispy nya wkwk send nudes dolo wkwkwk
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<3
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Thx for kudoshoot :>
Btw svnya masih ancuL :<
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i see that you sent me in osu pm. but i'm closed my modding queue , but i saw your map in 2part
01:29:559 (89559|0,89661|0,89763|0,89865|0,90069|0,90171|0,90273|0) - re-place
02:31:089 - i changed this part in that time continue to 02:34:559 in this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8217238


sorry for my mod and my mod hope useful
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Oh wow, you actually responded it, i am really lucky OwO
Gonna check it asap

4hri wrote:

sorry for my mod and my mod hope useful

Nah, every mod is useful here :D
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4hri wrote:

i see that you sent me in osu pm. but i'm closed my modding queue , but i saw your map in 2part
01:29:559 (89559|0,89661|0,89763|0,89865|0,90069|0,90171|0,90273|0) - re-place i understand how bad it is but idk if i can make it better so, kinda fixed it now
02:31:089 - i changed this part in that time continue to 02:34:559 in this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8217238 i used that quads for strong kicks with cymbals only, but that doubles can be applied so, kinda fixed it too

anyway, thanks for the mod
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Hi hi hi hi
Sry late M4M but here we go xD
I can't really mod hard dump map but I'll try my best :)
0|1|2|3
The only diff
00:27:620 (27620|1) – Move to 0 to fit the vocal
00:29:253 (29253|1) – Move to 3
01:15:273 (75273|1,75477|2,75681|1,75783|2,75885|1,75987|2,76089|1) - ctrl + h
01:30:987 - Missing note

Welp, failed horribly but hope this help and gl for ranking
also kudo 4 u because i like this map :)
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m4m
1|2|3|4

Here's a better BG
moderino
Too much focus on the vocals in the intro. They're so sporadic and theres some nice music in the background that would be much better to map along to

01:30:528 (90528|2,90528|3,90630|3,90630|2,90732|2,90732|3,90834|3,90834|2) - Remove all of these. They're actually ghost notes and its a lot better with the jack anyway
Lots of ghosts notes in this jumpstream section, heres an example 01:42:008 (102008|0) -

That's legitimately it. I watched through the rest of the map and I cant see anything. if I was a bit better at this game I might've been able to provide pattern suggestions but unfortunately I struggle to do 4 stars :shrug:

It looks like a good map though, GL!
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[B A D] wrote:

Hi hi hi hi
Sry late M4M but here we go xD
I can't really mod hard dump map but I'll try my best :)
0|1|2|3
The only diff
00:27:620 (27620|1) – Move to 0 to fit the vocal applied later because someone actually tells me to not focus to the vocal too much since good music bg, havent decided yet
00:29:253 (29253|1) – Move to 3 ^
01:15:273 (75273|1,75477|2,75681|1,75783|2,75885|1,75987|2,76089|1) - ctrl + h nope, i like this one because if you look carefully you'll see its makes you move your right and left hand alternately
01:30:987 - Missing note fixed

Welp, failed horribly but hope this help and gl for ranking
also kudo 4 u because i like this map :)
wow O.o thanks for the star, youre the man :D

Litharrale wrote:

m4m
1|2|3|4

Here's a better BG
moderino
Too much focus on the vocals in the intro. They're so sporadic and theres some nice music in the background that would be much better to map along to havent got the pattern idea yet, gonna selfmod this later

01:30:528 (90528|2,90528|3,90630|3,90630|2,90732|2,90732|3,90834|3,90834|2) - Remove all of these. They're actually ghost notes and its a lot better with the jack anyway i understand, but removing this gonna remove a lot of fun playing these too, and i kinda muting them already, do you have any suggestion?
Lots of ghosts notes in this jumpstream section, heres an example 01:42:008 (102008|0) - finally someone checked my jack T.T gonna selfmod this later

That's legitimately it. I watched through the rest of the map and I cant see anything. if I was a bit better at this game I might've been able to provide pattern suggestions but unfortunately I struggle to do 4 stars :shrug: me too :(

It looks like a good map though, GL!
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M4M req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
This map is a bit hard for me to mod so sorry if my mod is going to be short
Cyphisonia
00:32:926 - why did you place that LN there? I think it would be better if you followed vocals at 00:33:130
00:35:375 (35375|4) - starts at 00:35:273
01:22:722 - make it triple note chord
01:25:987 - I think that pattern is better mapped with 1/4 or 1/6
01:30:528 - that doubles dont follow the rhytm. I would suggest to make them like this
01:31:396 - imo you should change all of the doubles at that place with 1 note chord because there are no strong sounds that supports them
01:55:375 - you missed a lot of sounds here. make the pattern look something like this
02:24:559 - stairs work better click
03:29:865 - as said before stairs work better

My mod stops here
Good Luck! :D
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imtdb1 wrote:

M4M req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
This map is a bit hard for me to mod so sorry if my mod is going to be short everything helps
Cyphisonia
00:32:926 - why did you place that LN there? I think it would be better if you followed vocals at 00:33:130 its the bass on the background, its changes chord so i shift the ln
00:35:375 (35375|4) - starts at 00:35:273 shifted
01:22:722 - make it triple note chord quad is ok but either triples
01:25:987 - I think that pattern is better mapped with 1/4 or 1/6 1/8 on 147 bpm is ok
01:30:528 - that doubles dont follow the rhytm. I would suggest to make them like this will think later, about those ghost notes
01:31:396 - imo you should change all of the doubles at that place with 1 note chord because there are no strong sounds that supports them the sound is getting louder so i put doubles after singles
01:55:375 - you missed a lot of sounds here. make the pattern look something like this actually they are rest time for earlier jack(before selfmod due to many ghost notes), but i already nerfed it so i guess i will selfmod again but with my own pattern
02:24:559 - stairs work better click 147bpm short trill isnt too hard, so its ok
03:29:865 - as said before stairs work better ^

My mod stops here
Good Luck! :D


anyway, thanks for the mods, that was helpful :)
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rip, now it went down to 5,99 SR
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general pattern first. SVs will be handled later

00:33:130 (33130|3) - i saw this particularly follow vocal but its somehow empty at - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 - which is completely contradicted with most of your layering intention in this intro. tldr add a note at - - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 -

00:51:294 (51294|0,51294|1,51498|2,51498|1) - eh kinda dont get why is this chorded somehow. there's no particular strong noise here

01:22:722 (82722|0,82824|0,82926|1,83028|1,83130|0,83232|0) - imo this is kinda tricky to be executed properly since they are rather heavy on the left, would recommend to spread the jacking between hands

01:29:100 (89100|0,89151|1,89202|2,89253|3,89253|0,89304|1,89355|2,89355|3,89406|0,89457|1,89457|2,89508|3,89559|1,89559|0,89610|2,89661|3,89661|0,89712|1,89763|2,89763|3,89814|0,89865|1,89865|3) - so you were all this one way jumpstream here (to right side), decided to change direction here - 01:29:916 (89916|2,89967|0,89967|1) - but later goes the same way once again - 01:30:018 (90018|2,90069|0,90069|3,90120|1,90171|2,90171|3) - . imo would be a better idea and probably more aesthetically if you change 01:30:018(90018|2,90069|3,90069|0,90120|1,90171|3,90171|2,90222|1,90273|0,90273|2,90324|3,90375|0,90375|1,90426|2,90477|1,90477|0) - into opposite direction.

01:30:885 (90885|0,90885|1) - so this is what i've thinking so for this

you somehow ignoring this same particular noise at - 01:31:192. also with this, its more balanced arent they?

01:32:620 (92620|2,92620|1) - (*)i assume you trying to imitate PLANET//SHAPER semi-dump mapping styles but this is no where justified to be doubled judging from its noise. I thought this would be better with a Single note

01:40:579 (100579|2) - double. i assume this is a kick? since you were emphasizing weak noises synth with doubles, so why making it a single note for a strong kick noise?

01:45:477 (105477|0,105477|3) - same argument as (*)

02:22:518 (142518|2) - this should be doubled rather than - 02:22:416 (142416|2,142416|3) - this one. you doubling all the synth before and this is just inconsistent

02:40:069 (160069|2) - 02:53:130 (173130|1) - pretty sure you forgot to double

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for this 1st kiai i rather confused about the jack layering here. its start like this - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - . then it changes - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - but then its back but in another measure - 02:40:171 (160171|0,160273|0) - If you want to make all your jack layering consistent across the diff, starting with - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - then the next that should be jacked are - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - 02:39:763 (159763|2,159865|1) - 02:40:579 (160579|1,160681|2) - 02:41:396 (161396|1,161498|1) (this one true anyway) - 02:43:028 (163028|3,163130|0) - and etc. you got the idea here

same could be said for 2nd kiai
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02:57:416 (177416|0,177416|3,177416|1) - hows this

the first measure filled with double jacking and the the rest of the measure filled with ascending double which is pretty cool concept to implement

02:58:947 (178947|3,178947|1,178947|0,178947|2) - kinda same for this but up to you

03:50:273 (230273|1,230273|0) - kinda wondering why is this the only kick that arent triple here

04:11:651 (251651|3,251702|3) - ugh no. this thing translates to 294 BPM jacks which is nowhere near possible to get this at 300g at all

04:16:192 (256192|1) - not LN-ing this?

04:29:457 (269457|3,269457|2,269559|3,269661|2,269865|3,269865|2,269967|3,270069|2) - somewhat ewto me. move - 04:29:661 (269661|2) - to 2 for balance

04:32:314 (272314|1,272314|2,272416|2) - move right. already had this - 04:32:722 (272722|2,272722|1,272824|2) - making a col 4 rather empty for quite some time

04:36:600 (276600|1,276600|2,276702|1) - move left. col 1 is empty

04:49:712 (289712|0,289737|1,289763|2,289788|3,289814|0,289839|1,289865|2,289891|3,289916|0,289942|1,289967|2,289993|3,290018|0,290044|1) - oh celestia not this one.
there's little to none of this notes poses an interposing beats which is make them unjustified to be snapped at 1/16. using the usual jumpstream works more better


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about kiai 4 and 5, my complaint is the same, make sure you apply them properly
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05:11:498 (311498|3) - why is this single? refer - 05:13:130 (313130|3,313130|0) -

05:22:926 - where's the double? i see you do it here - 05:24:967 (324967|1,324967|0) - but not there?

05:27:314 (327314|0,327314|3,327620|2,327620|1,327620|0) - I feel like you missing some note around here

05:35:987 - the doubleee

06:03:487 (363487|1,363538|1) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Yo!
from Modding Qu'eue' Team | Mania Only :)

M4M Request [will reply your MOD on my map when i'm done here]

here you go!

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the only diff in here
  1. 00:01:090 - sampe 00:26:804 - what? Blank?
  2. 00:50:120 (50120|0,50171|1,50222|3,50273|2,50324|0,50375|1,50426|2,50477|1,50528|2,50579|3,50630|0,50681|1,50732|2,50783|3,50834|1,50885|2,50936|0,50987|1,51038|3,51089|2,51141|0,51192|1,51243|2,51294|0,51294|1,51345|2,51396|3,51447|0,51498|2,51498|1,51549|3,51600|0,51651|1) - this stairs is kinda weird..., maybe : https://puu.sh/wclGo/bfdad80545.jpg and https://puu.sh/wclHf/b9832d1da7.jpg that will help


ok that's it for now i will continue when i had time, i'm sorry that my mod was cut in here

i already mark where i left off so don't worry XD


waiting this to be ranked, Camellia is Love, Camellia is Life XD

Good Luck!
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