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Camellia - Algorithm (Hitech Psy Self-remix) [OsuMania]

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Oscyy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 Oktober 2017 at 18:55:41

Artist: Camellia
Title: Algorithm (Hitech Psy Self-remix)
Tags: Exit Tunes Guest Tracks Summary & VIPs CTCD-0015 Paradox kradness かめるかめりあ cametek kamelcamellia M3-39
BPM: 147
Filesize: 10847kb
Play Time: 06:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Paradox - 4Key (5,79 stars, 5221 notes)
Download: Camellia - Algorithm (Hitech Psy Self-remix)
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not imitation of PLANET//SHAPER I swear

If you don't like SV, try this
Another Lie
Ryzen_old_1
Mod
00:28:436 (28436|1,28538|2) - kalo ngikut vocal bukannya di 00:28:487 - sama sini 00:28:589 - 1/8
00:30:069 (30069|1) - remove kalo misalnya ikut vocal
00:33:334 (33334|1,33436|0) - kalo ikut vocal harusnya di 1/8 garis kuning depan
00:39:865 - ada suara disini, ga add note?
00:41:498 (41498|1,41600|2) - 1/8 garis kuning depan kalo ikut vocal
00:53:334 - tambah 1 LN lagi di col 2 yg sepanjang sebelahnya buat balance
01:04:355 (64355|2,64355|1,64355|3) - kalo misalnya mau pattern lebih enak, panjangin jadi https://puu.sh/vXOeu.png lalu add note di 01:05:375 - 01:05:477 - 01:05:579 - col 234
(pilihan aja sih) 01:18:743 - add note col 3 sama ini 01:18:794 - add note col 2
01:25:171 (85171|2,85273|2,85375|1) - tuker tempat buat hand balance
01:57:620 - add 1 LN lagi di col 3, konsistensi
kalo ikut vocal 03:32:722 (212722|1) - diperpanjang sampai garis merah berikutnya 03:32:926 (212926|2) - delete
03:39:253 (219253|1) - sama ^
03:59:865 (239865|3) - pindah ke col 1 & 03:59:457 - tambah 1 LN col 4 sepanjang sebelahnya
05:11:702 (311702|3,311702|0,311702|2,311702|1) - mending 2 note aja [soalnya ga keras itu suaranya]
05:13:334 (313334|3,313334|2,313334|0,313334|1) - sama ^
06:13:947 (373947|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar kesannya ga stack sama & suara ga sama kyk 06:13:538 (373538|2,373538|1,373743|1,373743|2) -

Another Lie wrote:

Mending kalo map ini, gw saranin req mod ke Evening [itupun kalo lu berani :v]
Topic Starter
Oscyy
Thx modnya, checknya ntar lagi packing buat pulkam. Inipun buka lewat hp, dp kds on its way

Another Lie wrote:

Mending kalo map ini, gw saranin req mod ke Evening [itupun kalo lu berani :v]
Zen lagi inactive, ini mau nyoba req mod klo gak kecyduk ikutan patternnya planet shaper dan nyoba svnya juga :(
Topic Starter
Oscyy

Ryzen wrote:

Mod
00:28:436 (28436|1,28538|2) - kalo ngikut vocal bukannya di 00:28:487 - sama sini 00:28:589 - 1/8 fixed, tipe kuping instrument doang jadi gak merhatiin vokal, khusus 00:28:589 - gak denger 1/8nya
00:30:069 (30069|1) - remove kalo misalnya ikut vocal gw gak merhatiin lirik vokalnya atau apa, klo emang ini cuma 1 suku kata, yg jelas di 00:30:069 (30069|1,30171|3) - ada 2 suara jadi aku kasih note semua
00:33:334 (33334|1,33436|0) - kalo ikut vocal harusnya di 1/8 garis kuning depan fixed
00:39:865 - ada suara disini, ga add note? ga ngikut suara piano atau apalah itu, udah kebanyakan suara(sori klo ini nonsense), yg ln cuma ngikut chord bassnya aja
00:41:498 (41498|1,41600|2) - 1/8 garis kuning depan kalo ikut vocal fixed
00:53:334 - tambah 1 LN lagi di col 2 yg sepanjang sebelahnya buat balance klo menurutku tipe stair sebelumnya itu stair ke kiri(43214321), ln-nya secara gak langsung ngelanjutin stair ke kirinya(harusnya kolom 4 doang) tapi karena ada beat aku tambah ln lagi col 3 dan menurutku tetep balance karena col 3 sama 4 itu masih sesama tangan kanan, justru klo aku tambahin di col 2 gak balance karena tangan kiri harus ngerubah arah stair(mencet 2-1-2)
01:04:355 (64355|2,64355|1,64355|3) - kalo misalnya mau pattern lebih enak, panjangin jadi https://puu.sh/vXOeu.png lalu add note di 01:05:375 - 01:05:477 - 01:05:579 - col 234 fixed panjangin ln, add note? sementara reject dulu karena sv belum fixed, add note disitu bakal susah timingnya buat orang main. Mungkin klo sv udah bener baru ditambahin
(pilihan aja sih) 01:18:743 - add note col 3 sama ini 01:18:794 - add note col 2 idenya kaya yg atas, which i like. Tapi untuk suara ini kayaknya gak tepat
01:25:171 (85171|2,85273|2,85375|1) - tuker tempat buat hand balance gatau ini pengaruhnya apa, i guess jack terakhirnya jatuh ke tangan kanan semua, selama konsep minijacknya sama then why not?
01:57:620 - add 1 LN lagi di col 3, konsistensi mapper mabok, kayanya notenya ilang tapi gak nyadar
kalo ikut vocal 03:32:722 (212722|1) - diperpanjang sampai garis merah berikutnya 03:32:926 (212926|2) - delete ikut nada, nada ganti ln juga pindah (kaya piano)
03:39:253 (219253|1) - sama ^ ini maksudnya sama yg mana? but i got the idea, gaada kick jadi gaperlu quad, fixed
03:59:865 (239865|3) - pindah ke col 1 & 03:59:457 - tambah 1 LN col 4 sepanjang sebelahnya modded by Mat, said: its hard to play when you put a note after 3 ln, and then you put another triples
05:11:702 (311702|3,311702|0,311702|2,311702|1) - mending 2 note aja [soalnya ga keras itu suaranya] agree, lagi" kuping error. Col 1 sama 4 deleted
05:13:334 (313334|3,313334|2,313334|0,313334|1) - sama ^ fixed, tapi dijadiin 1 note
06:13:947 (373947|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar kesannya ga stack sama & suara ga sama kyk 06:13:538 (373538|2,373538|1,373743|1,373743|2) - 06:13:947 (373947|0,374151|1) - both changed, for the sake of variation dan biar gak stack juga
Leonita

oscy owo
[Cyphisonia]
  1. 03:30:069 - dari part sini mending di ikutin tutut tutut nya aja deh daripada layering vocal, trs sv/bpm change in, jd mulai dari sini 03:39:253 - udh bisa di stream in dan transisinya lebih nyaman aja imo dan keknya lebih unyuk jg deh. btw ini asli mager bgt nge cek map maraton awkkw sowwy yaaa
  2. 03:43:232 (223232|1,223334|2,223436|0,223538|3,223641|0,223743|2,223845|1,223947|3,223947|2,223947|0,224049|1,224151|3,224253|0) - dkk salah snap. harusnya di 1/12 example from 03:43:334 - http://puu.sh/w0Q3K/ac775a3dfc.png btw itu placingnya asal2an, u can change it. dan seterusnya dengerin lg pakek 25% ja
  3. sbnrnya sih yak, kalo mw di rank, macam2 o2jam seperti 00:55:579 (55579|3,55681|2,55783|1) - dsb dsb itu unrank-able loh. soalnya itu ghost. gada suara pemisah apapun disitu, kecuali ln nya itu msh bisa lah karena transisi yg nge-fade. cmn yha itu yha...
  4. sv nya gud lha buat pemula ini udh keren bgt, cmn di sini 01:25:579 - itu jatohnya kecepetan gitu lho mudeng gk(?) kalo gamudeng ywd skip aja sbnrnya aku gbs sv jd aku bingung explainnya kek gmn akwkw
  5. dah yhaa bingung liatnya jg wkwk
gdluck osci 'w')b ditunggu almond crispy nya wkwk
Topic Starter
Oscyy

Leonita wrote:


oscy owo yule ewe
[Cyphisonia]
  1. 03:30:069 - dari part sini mending di ikutin tutut tutut nya aja deh daripada layering vocal, trs sv/bpm change in, jd mulai dari sini 03:39:253 - udh bisa di stream in dan transisinya lebih nyaman aja imo dan keknya lebih unyuk jg deh.done btw ini asli mager bgt nge cek map maraton awkkw sowwy yaaa >:((
  2. 03:43:232 (223232|1,223334|2,223436|0,223538|3,223641|0,223743|2,223845|1,223947|3,223947|2,223947|0,224049|1,224151|3,224253|0) - dkk salah snap. harusnya di 1/12 example from 03:43:334 - http://puu.sh/w0Q3K/ac775a3dfc.png btw itu placingnya asal2an, u can change it. dan seterusnya dengerin lg pakek 25% ja done
  3. sbnrnya sih yak, kalo mw di rank, macam2 o2jam seperti 00:55:579 (55579|3,55681|2,55783|1) - dsb dsb itu unrank-able loh. soalnya itu ghost. gada suara pemisah apapun disitu, kecuali ln nya itu msh bisa lah karena transisi yg nge-fade. cmn yha itu yha... lel ini idenya a(nude)r lie, biar feel fade outnya lebih dapet aja, tapi kayanya juga udah cukup diwakilin lnnya
  4. sv nya gud lha buat pemula ini udh keren bgt, cmn di sini 01:25:579 - itu jatohnya kecepetan gitu lho mudeng gk(?) kalo gamudeng ywd skip aja sbnrnya aku gbs sv jd aku bingung explainnya kek gmn akwkw masi butuh sugesti svnya, klo kecepetan kayanya mah engga soalnya overall udah sv changesnya 1 (jarak antar note abis dikasi sv = sebelum dikasi) kecuali yg bagian ln pengennya lebih lambat tapi takutnya jadi unsightreadable
  5. dah yhaa bingung liatnya jg wkwk nawn?


gdluck osci 'w')b ditunggu almond crispy nya wkwk send nudes dolo wkwkwk
AncuL


<3
Topic Starter
Oscyy
Thx for kudoshoot :>
Btw svnya masih ancuL :<
4hri
i see that you sent me in osu pm. but i'm closed my modding queue , but i saw your map in 2part
01:29:559 (89559|0,89661|0,89763|0,89865|0,90069|0,90171|0,90273|0) - re-place
02:31:089 - i changed this part in that time continue to 02:34:559 in this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8217238


sorry for my mod and my mod hope useful
Topic Starter
Oscyy
Oh wow, you actually responded it, i am really lucky OwO
Gonna check it asap

4hri wrote:

sorry for my mod and my mod hope useful
Nah, every mod is useful here :D
Topic Starter
Oscyy

4hri wrote:

i see that you sent me in osu pm. but i'm closed my modding queue , but i saw your map in 2part
01:29:559 (89559|0,89661|0,89763|0,89865|0,90069|0,90171|0,90273|0) - re-place i understand how bad it is but idk if i can make it better so, kinda fixed it now
02:31:089 - i changed this part in that time continue to 02:34:559 in this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8217238 i used that quads for strong kicks with cymbals only, but that doubles can be applied so, kinda fixed it too
anyway, thanks for the mod
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hi hi hi hi
Sry late M4M but here we go xD
I can't really mod hard dump map but I'll try my best :)
0|1|2|3
The only diff
00:27:620 (27620|1) – Move to 0 to fit the vocal
00:29:253 (29253|1) – Move to 3
01:15:273 (75273|1,75477|2,75681|1,75783|2,75885|1,75987|2,76089|1) - ctrl + h
01:30:987 - Missing note
Welp, failed horribly but hope this help and gl for ranking
also kudo 4 u because i like this map :)
Litharrale
m4m
1|2|3|4

Here's a better BG

moderino
Too much focus on the vocals in the intro. They're so sporadic and theres some nice music in the background that would be much better to map along to

01:30:528 (90528|2,90528|3,90630|3,90630|2,90732|2,90732|3,90834|3,90834|2) - Remove all of these. They're actually ghost notes and its a lot better with the jack anyway
Lots of ghosts notes in this jumpstream section, heres an example 01:42:008 (102008|0) -

That's legitimately it. I watched through the rest of the map and I cant see anything. if I was a bit better at this game I might've been able to provide pattern suggestions but unfortunately I struggle to do 4 stars :shrug:

It looks like a good map though, GL!
Topic Starter
Oscyy

[B A D] wrote:

Hi hi hi hi
Sry late M4M but here we go xD
I can't really mod hard dump map but I'll try my best :)
0|1|2|3
The only diff
00:27:620 (27620|1) – Move to 0 to fit the vocal applied later because someone actually tells me to not focus to the vocal too much since good music bg, havent decided yet
00:29:253 (29253|1) – Move to 3 ^
01:15:273 (75273|1,75477|2,75681|1,75783|2,75885|1,75987|2,76089|1) - ctrl + h nope, i like this one because if you look carefully you'll see its makes you move your right and left hand alternately
01:30:987 - Missing note fixed
Welp, failed horribly but hope this help and gl for ranking
also kudo 4 u because i like this map :)
wow O.o thanks for the star, youre the man :D

Litharrale wrote:

m4m
1|2|3|4

Here's a better BG

moderino
Too much focus on the vocals in the intro. They're so sporadic and theres some nice music in the background that would be much better to map along to havent got the pattern idea yet, gonna selfmod this later

01:30:528 (90528|2,90528|3,90630|3,90630|2,90732|2,90732|3,90834|3,90834|2) - Remove all of these. They're actually ghost notes and its a lot better with the jack anyway i understand, but removing this gonna remove a lot of fun playing these too, and i kinda muting them already, do you have any suggestion?
Lots of ghosts notes in this jumpstream section, heres an example 01:42:008 (102008|0) - finally someone checked my jack T.T gonna selfmod this later

That's legitimately it. I watched through the rest of the map and I cant see anything. if I was a bit better at this game I might've been able to provide pattern suggestions but unfortunately I struggle to do 4 stars :shrug: me too :(

It looks like a good map though, GL!
Umo-
M4M req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
This map is a bit hard for me to mod so sorry if my mod is going to be short
Cyphisonia
00:32:926 - why did you place that LN there? I think it would be better if you followed vocals at 00:33:130
00:35:375 (35375|4) - starts at 00:35:273
01:22:722 - make it triple note chord
01:25:987 - I think that pattern is better mapped with 1/4 or 1/6
01:30:528 - that doubles dont follow the rhytm. I would suggest to make them like this
01:31:396 - imo you should change all of the doubles at that place with 1 note chord because there are no strong sounds that supports them
01:55:375 - you missed a lot of sounds here. make the pattern look something like this
02:24:559 - stairs work better click
03:29:865 - as said before stairs work better
My mod stops here
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Oscyy

imtdb1 wrote:

M4M req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
This map is a bit hard for me to mod so sorry if my mod is going to be short everything helps
Cyphisonia
00:32:926 - why did you place that LN there? I think it would be better if you followed vocals at 00:33:130 its the bass on the background, its changes chord so i shift the ln
00:35:375 (35375|4) - starts at 00:35:273 shifted
01:22:722 - make it triple note chord quad is ok but either triples
01:25:987 - I think that pattern is better mapped with 1/4 or 1/6 1/8 on 147 bpm is ok
01:30:528 - that doubles dont follow the rhytm. I would suggest to make them like this will think later, about those ghost notes
01:31:396 - imo you should change all of the doubles at that place with 1 note chord because there are no strong sounds that supports them the sound is getting louder so i put doubles after singles
01:55:375 - you missed a lot of sounds here. make the pattern look something like this actually they are rest time for earlier jack(before selfmod due to many ghost notes), but i already nerfed it so i guess i will selfmod again but with my own pattern
02:24:559 - stairs work better click 147bpm short trill isnt too hard, so its ok
03:29:865 - as said before stairs work better ^
My mod stops here
Good Luck! :D
anyway, thanks for the mods, that was helpful :)
Topic Starter
Oscyy
rip, now it went down to 5,99 SR
Rivals_7
general pattern first. SVs will be handled later

00:33:130 (33130|3) - i saw this particularly follow vocal but its somehow empty at - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 - which is completely contradicted with most of your layering intention in this intro. tldr add a note at - - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 -

00:51:294 (51294|0,51294|1,51498|2,51498|1) - eh kinda dont get why is this chorded somehow. there's no particular strong noise here

01:22:722 (82722|0,82824|0,82926|1,83028|1,83130|0,83232|0) - imo this is kinda tricky to be executed properly since they are rather heavy on the left, would recommend to spread the jacking between hands

01:29:100 (89100|0,89151|1,89202|2,89253|3,89253|0,89304|1,89355|2,89355|3,89406|0,89457|1,89457|2,89508|3,89559|1,89559|0,89610|2,89661|3,89661|0,89712|1,89763|2,89763|3,89814|0,89865|1,89865|3) - so you were all this one way jumpstream here (to right side), decided to change direction here - 01:29:916 (89916|2,89967|0,89967|1) - but later goes the same way once again - 01:30:018 (90018|2,90069|0,90069|3,90120|1,90171|2,90171|3) - . imo would be a better idea and probably more aesthetically if you change 01:30:018(90018|2,90069|3,90069|0,90120|1,90171|3,90171|2,90222|1,90273|0,90273|2,90324|3,90375|0,90375|1,90426|2,90477|1,90477|0) - into opposite direction.

01:30:885 (90885|0,90885|1) - so this is what i've thinking so for this

you somehow ignoring this same particular noise at - 01:31:192. also with this, its more balanced arent they?

01:32:620 (92620|2,92620|1) - (*)i assume you trying to imitate PLANET//SHAPER semi-dump mapping styles but this is no where justified to be doubled judging from its noise. I thought this would be better with a Single note

01:40:579 (100579|2) - double. i assume this is a kick? since you were emphasizing weak noises synth with doubles, so why making it a single note for a strong kick noise?

01:45:477 (105477|0,105477|3) - same argument as (*)

02:22:518 (142518|2) - this should be doubled rather than - 02:22:416 (142416|2,142416|3) - this one. you doubling all the synth before and this is just inconsistent

02:40:069 (160069|2) - 02:53:130 (173130|1) - pretty sure you forgot to double

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for this 1st kiai i rather confused about the jack layering here. its start like this - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - . then it changes - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - but then its back but in another measure - 02:40:171 (160171|0,160273|0) - If you want to make all your jack layering consistent across the diff, starting with - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - then the next that should be jacked are - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - 02:39:763 (159763|2,159865|1) - 02:40:579 (160579|1,160681|2) - 02:41:396 (161396|1,161498|1) (this one true anyway) - 02:43:028 (163028|3,163130|0) - and etc. you got the idea here

same could be said for 2nd kiai
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02:57:416 (177416|0,177416|3,177416|1) - hows this

the first measure filled with double jacking and the the rest of the measure filled with ascending double which is pretty cool concept to implement

02:58:947 (178947|3,178947|1,178947|0,178947|2) - kinda same for this but up to you

03:50:273 (230273|1,230273|0) - kinda wondering why is this the only kick that arent triple here

04:11:651 (251651|3,251702|3) - ugh no. this thing translates to 294 BPM jacks which is nowhere near possible to get this at 300g at all

04:16:192 (256192|1) - not LN-ing this?

04:29:457 (269457|3,269457|2,269559|3,269661|2,269865|3,269865|2,269967|3,270069|2) - somewhat ewto me. move - 04:29:661 (269661|2) - to 2 for balance

04:32:314 (272314|1,272314|2,272416|2) - move right. already had this - 04:32:722 (272722|2,272722|1,272824|2) - making a col 4 rather empty for quite some time

04:36:600 (276600|1,276600|2,276702|1) - move left. col 1 is empty

04:49:712 (289712|0,289737|1,289763|2,289788|3,289814|0,289839|1,289865|2,289891|3,289916|0,289942|1,289967|2,289993|3,290018|0,290044|1) - oh celestia not this one.
there's little to none of this notes poses an interposing beats which is make them unjustified to be snapped at 1/16. using the usual jumpstream works more better


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about kiai 4 and 5, my complaint is the same, make sure you apply them properly
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05:11:498 (311498|3) - why is this single? refer - 05:13:130 (313130|3,313130|0) -

05:22:926 - where's the double? i see you do it here - 05:24:967 (324967|1,324967|0) - but not there?

05:27:314 (327314|0,327314|3,327620|2,327620|1,327620|0) - I feel like you missing some note around here

05:35:987 - the doubleee

06:03:487 (363487|1,363538|1) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
[ Ari Knight ]
Yo!
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M4M Request [will reply your MOD on my map when i'm done here]

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

the only diff in here
  1. 00:01:090 - sampe 00:26:804 - what? Blank?
  2. 00:50:120 (50120|0,50171|1,50222|3,50273|2,50324|0,50375|1,50426|2,50477|1,50528|2,50579|3,50630|0,50681|1,50732|2,50783|3,50834|1,50885|2,50936|0,50987|1,51038|3,51089|2,51141|0,51192|1,51243|2,51294|0,51294|1,51345|2,51396|3,51447|0,51498|2,51498|1,51549|3,51600|0,51651|1) - this stairs is kinda weird..., maybe : https://puu.sh/wclGo/bfdad80545.jpg and https://puu.sh/wclHf/b9832d1da7.jpg that will help

ok that's it for now i will continue when i had time, i'm sorry that my mod was cut in here

i already mark where i left off so don't worry XD


waiting this to be ranked, Camellia is Love, Camellia is Life XD

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Oscyy
finally BN mod :D
anyway, please use box, this is way too long without box ._.

mod

Rivals_7 wrote:

general pattern first. SVs will be handled later

00:33:130 (33130|3) - i saw this particularly follow vocal but its somehow empty at - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 - which is completely contradicted with most of your layering intention in this intro. tldr add a note at - - 00:33:334 - and - 00:33:436 - trying to follow piano (or whatever it called that sounds like tung-tung), coincidentally, that sound particularly follow vocal

00:51:294 (51294|0,51294|1,51498|2,51498|1) - eh kinda dont get why is this chorded somehow. there's no particular strong noise here idk either, i've made that part before i had a headset and forgot to selfmod that part, i guess because it become louder, fixed anyway

01:22:722 (82722|0,82824|0,82926|1,83028|1,83130|0,83232|0) - imo this is kinda tricky to be executed properly since they are rather heavy on the left, would recommend to spread the jacking between hands fixed, now jacks changes into left-right-left-right minijacks

01:29:100 (89100|0,89151|1,89202|2,89253|3,89253|0,89304|1,89355|2,89355|3,89406|0,89457|1,89457|2,89508|3,89559|1,89559|0,89610|2,89661|3,89661|0,89712|1,89763|2,89763|3,89814|0,89865|1,89865|3) - so you were all this one way jumpstream here (to right side), decided to change direction here - 01:29:916 (89916|2,89967|0,89967|1) - but later goes the same way once again - 01:30:018 (90018|2,90069|0,90069|3,90120|1,90171|2,90171|3) - . imo would be a better idea and probably more aesthetically if you change 01:30:018(90018|2,90069|3,90069|0,90120|1,90171|3,90171|2,90222|1,90273|0,90273|2,90324|3,90375|0,90375|1,90426|2,90477|1,90477|0) - into opposite direction. got the idea, decided to change direction here 01:29:865 since the jumpstream only lasts 3 beats

01:30:885 (90885|0,90885|1) - so this is what i've thinking so for this

you somehow ignoring this same particular noise at - 01:31:192. also with this, its more balanced arent they? at first i dont follow the sound that you mean, i follow the louder one on the beginning, but since it adds hand balance i shifted it and probably will add some bump sv

01:32:620 (92620|2,92620|1) - (*)i assume you trying to imitate PLANET//SHAPER semi-dump mapping styles but this is no where justified to be doubled judging from its noise. I thought this would be better with a Single note well to be honest I am REALLY struggling on this part since i found out that most of them are ghosts, but if i delete all of those it become boring, so yeah will apply this later

01:40:579 (100579|2) - double. i assume this is a kick? since you were emphasizing weak noises synth with doubles, so why making it a single note for a strong kick noise? actually i didnt catch that sound before, noone has mod the jack

01:45:477 (105477|0,105477|3) - same argument as (*) misheard

02:22:518 (142518|2) - this should be doubled rather than - 02:22:416 (142416|2,142416|3) - this one. you doubling all the synth before and this is just inconsistent idk why i did that

02:40:069 (160069|2) - 02:53:130 (173130|1) - pretty sure you forgot to double where did they go

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for this 1st kiai i rather confused about the jack layering here. its start like this - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - . then it changes - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - but then its back but in another measure - 02:40:171 (160171|0,160273|0) - If you want to make all your jack layering consistent across the diff, starting with - 02:38:130 (158130|3,158232|3) - then the next that should be jacked are - 02:38:947 (158947|3,159049|2) - 02:39:763 (159763|2,159865|1) - 02:40:579 (160579|1,160681|2) - 02:41:396 (161396|1,161498|1) (this one true anyway) - 02:43:028 (163028|3,163130|0) - and etc. you got the idea here shifted the whole kiai, still not sure if this ok but i believe it provides hand balance and consistency

same could be said for 2nd kiai ^
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02:57:416 (177416|0,177416|3,177416|1) - hows this

the first measure filled with double jacking and the the rest of the measure filled with ascending double which is pretty cool concept to implementdone, kinda flipped it ._.

02:58:947 (178947|3,178947|1,178947|0,178947|2) - kinda same for this but up to you shifted 1 note for double jacking, keep the rest

03:50:273 (230273|1,230273|0) - kinda wondering why is this the only kick that arent triple here misheard, i thought it kinda softer

04:11:651 (251651|3,251702|3) - ugh no. this thing translates to 294 BPM jacks which is nowhere near possible to get this at 300g at all ugh trying to differ which is snare and kick, change into all double

04:16:192 (256192|1) - not LN-ing this? kinda got the idea, nope, delete this 04:15:579 (255579|3) - instead

04:29:457 (269457|3,269457|2,269559|3,269661|2,269865|3,269865|2,269967|3,270069|2) - somewhat ewto me. move - 04:29:661 (269661|2) - to 2 for balance move the other part as well

04:32:314 (272314|1,272314|2,272416|2) - move right. already had this - 04:32:722 (272722|2,272722|1,272824|2) - making a col 4 rather empty for quite some time ^

04:36:600 (276600|1,276600|2,276702|1) - move left. col 1 is empty ^

04:49:712 (289712|0,289737|1,289763|2,289788|3,289814|0,289839|1,289865|2,289891|3,289916|0,289942|1,289967|2,289993|3,290018|0,290044|1) - oh celestia not this one.
there's little to none of this notes poses an interposing beats which is make them unjustified to be snapped at 1/16. using the usual jumpstream works more better
this is just some egoist mania veteran who deserved for more star rating for ranked lol, fixed it. And what is celestia btw

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about kiai 4 and 5, my complaint is the same, make sure you apply them properly ok
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05:11:498 (311498|3) - why is this single? refer - 05:13:130 (313130|3,313130|0) - changed to double

05:22:926 - where's the double? i see you do it here - 05:24:967 (324967|1,324967|0) - but not there? different case, double for pew sound and havent give anything for hithat, will try the double too

05:27:314 (327314|0,327314|3,327620|2,327620|1,327620|0) - I feel like you missing some note around here misheard whole beat, delete 05:27:314 (327314|3,327314|0) - , add note from 05:27:416 - with 1/6 snapping

05:35:987 - the doubleee ugh

06:03:487 (363487|1,363538|1) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lol

anyway, thanks for long mod. That was REALLY helpful :)
Topic Starter
Oscyy
guys, please, use box :(

Ari Knight wrote:

Yo!
from Modding Qu'eue' Team | Mania Only :)

M4M Request [will reply your MOD on my map when i'm done here]

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

the only diff in here
  1. 00:01:090 - sampe 00:26:804 - what? Blank? yep, choose to not map anything there :3
  2. 00:50:120 (50120|0,50171|1,50222|3,50273|2,50324|0,50375|1,50426|2,50477|1,50528|2,50579|3,50630|0,50681|1,50732|2,50783|3,50834|1,50885|2,50936|0,50987|1,51038|3,51089|2,51141|0,51192|1,51243|2,51294|0,51294|1,51345|2,51396|3,51447|0,51498|2,51498|1,51549|3,51600|0,51651|1) - this stairs is kinda weird..., maybe : https://puu.sh/wclGo/bfdad80545.jpg and https://puu.sh/wclHf/b9832d1da7.jpg that will help
modded already by bn lol, you're on the right time, i choose first one

ok that's it for now i will continue when i had time, i'm sorry that my mod was cut in here actually i think you should remod because i think the map is updated just now ._. but nvm everything changed by bn check

i already mark where i left off so don't worry XD


waiting this to be ranked, Camellia is Love, Camellia is Life XD INDEED LOL

Good Luck!
[ Ari Knight ]

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

guys, please, use box :(

Ari Knight wrote:

Yo!
from Modding Qu'eue' Team | Mania Only :)

M4M Request [will reply your MOD on my map when i'm done here]

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

the only diff in here
  1. 00:01:090 - sampe 00:26:804 - what? Blank? yep, choose to not map anything there :3
  2. 00:50:120 (50120|0,50171|1,50222|3,50273|2,50324|0,50375|1,50426|2,50477|1,50528|2,50579|3,50630|0,50681|1,50732|2,50783|3,50834|1,50885|2,50936|0,50987|1,51038|3,51089|2,51141|0,51192|1,51243|2,51294|0,51294|1,51345|2,51396|3,51447|0,51498|2,51498|1,51549|3,51600|0,51651|1) - this stairs is kinda weird..., maybe : https://puu.sh/wclGo/bfdad80545.jpg and https://puu.sh/wclHf/b9832d1da7.jpg that will help
modded already by bn lol, you're on the right time, i choose first one

ok that's it for now i will continue when i had time, i'm sorry that my mod was cut in here actually i think you should remod because i think the map is updated just now ._. but nvm everything changed by bn check

i already mark where i left off so don't worry XD


waiting this to be ranked, Camellia is Love, Camellia is Life XD INDEED LOL

Good Luck!
well, i'm already using box but the pict wasn't related, so i place it out of the box XD

oh forgot to mention, actually you no need to give this kudos because the mod wasn't complete
so on my next mod, no kudos okay XD
Topic Starter
Oscyy

Ari Knight wrote:

well, i'm already using box but the pict wasn't related, so i place it out of the box XD

oh forgot to mention, actually you no need to give this kudos because the mod wasn't complete
so on my next mod, no kudos okay XD
no prob, there is no difference either
Eedow
AiMod find a wrong note,please check it
Topic Starter
Oscyy

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

AiMod find a wrong note,please check it
Checked, idk what happened there, it looks like normal note in the editor, fixed now. Will update together with hitsound, some are missing after i fix the dump pattern
_VianK_
m4m req. via fb

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01:06:396 (66396|3) - yang ini jadiin ln aja kek 1
01:12:518 (72518|0,73334|0,74559|3,74967|0,77824|3,78232|0) - tambahain satu note bagian sini soalnya disini ane dengar emphasisnya lumayan gede...
01:13:743 (73743|0) - add not di sini, ane saranin di col 1 aja vroh :V
01:30:885 (90885|1,90885|3,90885|2,90885|0) - disini seharusnya cukup 3 note....
01:32:518 (92518|2,92518|3,92518|0) - add 1 note lagi
02:31:294 (151294|2,151294|0,151294|1,151294|3) - cukup 3 note
02:25:069 (145069|3) - dari sini sampe sini 02:31:089 (151089|3) - w kurang liat konsistensinya solanya mau ini ngkiutin suara yang di butain Ln kayak 02:31:089 (151089|3) - ada yang suara begitu yang nggak di buatin Ln jadi saran ane mending dari awal kalo mau ngambil Ln nya ambil semua dong, kalo mo diabaikan abaikan semua lah....
dari 02:31:702 (151702|3) - sampe 02:34:151 (154151|3) - itu 3 note ngapain mz? kalo saran ane mending patternnya kyk https://puu.sh/weOcY/fe6737d3e7.jpg itu yang ane block sengaja ane buat begitu buat ngikuti suara kayak bebek bebeknya apalah itu :3
02:34:559 (154559|2,154559|3) - add 1 note lagi disini
04:20:681 (260681|1,260681|0,261089|1,261089|0,261498|1,261498|0) - variasiin napa
05:28:028 (328028|3,328436|3) - pindahin yang ini ke col. yang lain asalkan sama, soalnya nadanya beda dengan 05:27:824 (327824|3,328232|3) -
05:44:049 (344049|3) - sampe 05:48:334 (348334|3) - mungkin bisa di rearrange soalnya banayak ane denger emphasisnya kecil tapi 3 note trus add satu note di 05:45:171 (345171|3) - dan di 05:46:804 (346804|0) - itu buat suara kik nya
add 1 note lagi di 05:48:436 (348436|2) - dan di 05:50:477 (350477|2) - disini emphasisnya mayan gede
05:50:477 (350477|2,357008|3,357008|0,357008|2) - hilangin salah satu
06:02:722 (362722|0) - add satu noye di 2
dari sini 06:15:783 (375783|3,384559|1) - ampe 06:36:600 (396600|2) - note yang di garis merahnya jadiin 2, tapi garis merah yang disengajaiin kosong itu gpp soalnya ane nggak dengar suara disitu

mungkin cuman itu dari saya....mod baliknya di tunggu yah ;)

BG nya w CURRY yah?
_VianK_
yang itu note di col. 3 di add ulang itu buat ngatasin ai mod nya
Topic Starter
Oscyy

Ridho 2307 wrote:

BG nya w CURRY yah?
Curry aja itu dikasih sama anuder lie

Ridho 2307 wrote:

yang itu note di col. 3 di add ulang itu buat ngatasin ai mod nya
Kemarin udah dibenerin, belum diupload updateannya
Topic Starter
Oscyy

Ridho 2307 wrote:

m4m req. via fb

1234

01:06:396 (66396|3) - yang ini jadiin ln aja kek 1 1 aja udah cukup sih
01:12:518 (72518|0,73334|0,74559|3,74967|0,77824|3,78232|0) - tambahain satu note bagian sini soalnya disini ane dengar emphasisnya lumayan gede... udah diatur yg gede dimasukin ke col 1 sama 4, yg kecil ke 2 3
01:13:743 (73743|0) - add not di sini, ane saranin di col 1 aja vroh :V uhm, keknya gw tau kenapa. Tapi notenya lebih ngikutin ke suara bass(?) atau tenor gw gatau namanya
01:30:885 (90885|1,90885|3,90885|2,90885|0) - disini seharusnya cukup 3 note.... idk keknya klo 4 justru nambah hand balance
01:32:518 (92518|2,92518|3,92518|0) - add 1 note lagi sementara gw biarin 3 dulu soalnya suara yg sama di part ini aku kasih 3 juga
02:31:294 (151294|2,151294|0,151294|1,151294|3) - cukup 3 note strong kick with cymbal deserve a quad
02:25:069 (145069|3) - dari sini sampe sini 02:31:089 (151089|3) - w kurang liat konsistensinya solanya mau ini ngkiutin suara yang di butain Ln kayak 02:31:089 (151089|3) - ada yang suara begitu yang nggak di buatin Ln jadi saran ane mending dari awal kalo mau ngambil Ln nya ambil semua dong, kalo mo diabaikan abaikan semua lah.... gw gak paham maksudnya, ini yg dibikinin ln buat suara pew yg lebih jelas daripada suara bg, klo dibilang konsistensi kurang tolong kasih tau contoh yg harusnya pake ln
dari 02:31:702 (151702|3) - sampe 02:34:151 (154151|3) - itu 3 note ngapain mz? kalo saran ane mending patternnya kyk https://puu.sh/weOcY/fe6737d3e7.jpg itu yang ane block sengaja ane buat begitu buat ngikuti suara kayak bebek bebeknya apalah itu :3 gw juga gatau lel, itu 3 note setiap garis putih kecuali yg strong kic gw kasih 4. Kenapa 3? buat hand balance i guess, tapi belum merhatiin sampe suara bebeknya, mungkin ntar bakal diatur lagi
02:34:559 (154559|2,154559|3) - add 1 note lagi disini ok, tapi note that col 1 sekarang jadi 3 note jack
04:20:681 (260681|1,260681|0,261089|1,261089|0,261498|1,261498|0) - variasiin napa idk klo variasi penting disini tapi menurutku ena aja klo tangan kanan pegang ln dan tangan kiri tinggal ngikutin clapnya :v gampang lah ntar klo emang harus variasi
05:28:028 (328028|3,328436|3) - pindahin yang ini ke col. yang lain asalkan sama, soalnya nadanya beda dengan 05:27:824 (327824|3,328232|3) - sama ah ._.
05:44:049 (344049|3) - sampe 05:48:334 (348334|3) - mungkin bisa di rearrange soalnya banayak ane denger emphasisnya kecil tapi 3 note mungkin nanti dipikirin lagi, sempet kepikiran yg 3 note dikurangin jadi 2trus add satu note di 05:45:171 (345171|3) - dan di 05:46:804 (346804|0) - itu buat suara kik nya uke
add 1 note lagi di 05:48:436 (348436|2) - dan di 05:50:477 (350477|2) - disini emphasisnya mayan gede applied buat yg terakhir doang, yg pertama gak perlu buat hand balance soalnya disitu sv agak tricky
05:50:477 (350477|2,357008|3,357008|0,357008|2) - hilangin salah satu ugh, 2 note buat kick sama yg satu di 3nya buat nglengkapin trill
06:02:722 (362722|0) - add satu noye di 2 uke
dari sini 06:15:783 (375783|3,384559|1) - ampe 06:36:600 (396600|2) - note yang di garis merahnya jadiin 2, tapi garis merah yang disengajaiin kosong itu gpp soalnya ane nggak dengar suara disituwhy, suaranya sama kaya yg di biru

mungkin cuman itu dari saya....mod baliknya di tunggu yah ;)

BG nya w CURRY yah?
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