ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Disable countdown. It is not used at all. Fixed
- Disable letterbox during breaks. In fact, there are no breaks. Anyway you are using SB. Fixed
- Where is Vicho's Hard diff? WIP

[Collab]
00:49:309 (4) - New combo. But I'd rather flip horizontally. It will work well in spacing. One thing that bothers you, maybe you need flip horizontally every note after this note. This jump work perfectly for me (:


[Normal]
- Remove SB code from .osu file if Normal isn't collaborated. orz Fixed
00:31:181 (1) - Start from 00:31:436, end at 00:32:968 / And add finish! Ok


[Kenezz's Easy]
Fine!


Good luck ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

Makar8000 wrote:

As requested...

[Normal]
-I think the slider velocity is too high for a normal, but it would be a lot of work to fix so I don't expect you to change :p It's fine.
-You should remove the SB from this difficulty or just make it show your name near the end. If you do this you should do it with Easy too but with Kenezz instead. Fixed
00:16:628 (X) - stack a note here and a note at 00:16:883? You could rotate the slider after and move it around so the spacing is fixed. No because the difficulty up to 3.71 @.@
01:25:820 (6) - Adjust this so it blankets the end of the previous slider better? One grid to the left should be enough. Nop

[Collab]
-Slider velocity is... Wow @_@
-Depending on the difficulty of Hard, I think another Insane might be needed to fill in the gap of difficulty between Hard and Collab. Actually not that hard, I can pass and I'm a fucking noob
00:36:543 (1) - I don't really think this spinner is fitting here... Follow the voice.
00:40:628 (1) - Same ^ ^

Star and good luck with the map

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]

SPOILER

Creo que esto es... malo? Ya le dije a Astom si podia modear el SB

[Easy]
Los sliders al empezar se ven feos, pero esta bien lol.

[Normal]
este diff

es mas moe que el SB
[Collab]
oh my god

dile a alquien que te haga un Hard ;_;
hasta preguntame a mi, solo que tenga uno este mapa ._.
Pero todo parece bien.

tsratsratsratsraastrastrstr

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Los sliders al empezar se ven feos, pero esta bien lol. haha ya se

KayeSara wrote:

As your apply on my queue~
Time for modding~All of them just a suggestion.
[General]
1.This is not a good difficulty spread, for the Collab is too hard ! Make a hard diff if possible. Yes, vicho's hard is WIP
2.Lead-in 2s No
3.Display storyboard in front of combo fire. Fixed.

Like this

[Normal]
00:31:436 (1) - This spin from 00:31:436 to 00:33:224 maybe is better Ok
00:45:224 - It's nearly time for kiai~ add a note, feel better~ No
00:33:734 - 00:45:479 Just like easy, it hardly suit for the rhythm from the beginning...you can makes it harder Nope

[Insane]
00:32:968 (2,3) - volume 100 80 60 feel a little strange, change it into 100 90 80 Right, fixed.
Anyway, that's all my suggestion
Fight~and star, good luck.

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Sb folder. esce, escen, and escena are over the maximum size of 800x600 for SB elements. Reduce them.
I can't really say 235 bpm is correct. Try 117.50. Easy sounds a lot better because you can hear claps on tick 2 and 4. Change all inherited timing section to 1x. The bpm isn't 117.5 lol the song is make with a computer, know which is the possibility that it is not a whole number?
You can really hear the downbeat and that easy is actually mapped on red ticks instead.
Bpm 117.50 Offset 543 Resnap all notes. No, If you are leading the ranked version is very bad.

Normal:
Change bpm to 117.50. (Map may break so do what I did. Move uninherited timing section AND make timing section here 00:00:543 (1), Change all timing section to 2x, then change bpm to 117.50. Map should be fine then) No.
Use tickrate 2. No, the slider are too short for this tick rate.
Note: You have to change your clap pattern hitsounds as it will be off now. The clap pattern is right, but if I change the bpm to 117,5 the claps use the red tick rate, but in 235 use the white. Then the bpm 235 is correct.
01:08:968 (1) - I would prefer if you reverse select this so it is closer to the center after a spinner. Move the next combos afterwards. It's fine.
Seems okay.

Collab:
Same as above on fixing bpm. Nope
Really don't find AR 9 real fitting. Move it to AR7. The song is too fast for AR7.
00:51:734 (6) - Move this. The slider is completely blocked by the previous slider (4) I fixed it later, thanks.

Found nothing much. BPM is the only thing really bothering me because I really don't think it's 235. Get a timing expert like Doomy or Lybydose to make sure. Also poke Vicho for your guest diff :L Big jump from normal -> collab. jeje ok

Starred.

KayeSara wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
AR+2 orz I thought that was as well, fixed
Everything looks good~

Raging Bull wrote:

Easy:
That being said. Change all timing section to 1x. not is a bigger problem but anyway~
Use tickrate 2 as it sounds better noo haha x:
AR+2. Low AR is more confusing than a medium one. ~
00:53:139 (1,2,3) - I prefer you don't stack notes on easy. i don't see the problem x:
01:10:500 (1,2) - Space this. nup

Metro wrote:

General

Easy y Normal tienen Slider Tick Rate 1 mientras que Collab tiene 2. Creo que deberías elegir uno para todas las dificultades. No me parece que cambiar el de Collab a 1 sea un problema ya que no hay cambios de Slider Velocity. Estoy de acuerdo con lo de la consistencia, pero en el collab la velocidad del slider es muy rapida, asi que el viene bien el tick rate 2. Mientras que en las otras diff no, ademas no es necesario usar el mismo tick rate.

No se nada de SB's pero noté lo mismo que OzzyOzrock mientras testeaba. Me fijé en el mapa de Nerv_Mario y pasa exactamente lo mismo al cambiar de imagen así que creo que es normal . Pedire algun SB mod

Collab

Estoy de acuerdo con Raging Bull sobre el AR. 7 es muy bajo pero creo que 8 iría mejor. Para una cancion de 235bpm creo que esta mas que bien el AR9

00:51:734 (6) - Personalmente no me gustan los sliders completamente escondidos. Hay dos similares en 00:16:884 (6) - y 00:17:139 (7) - que me gustan mucho más. Tampoco se si esconder un slider atrás de otro está permitido. Estoy consiente de esto, si algun MAT/BAT lo menciona lo cambiaré ya que no estoy completamente seguro de si puede o no ser así

Nada más. Buen mapa .

Star imaginaria (?).

Nerv_Mario wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
00:40:883 (3): Sugerencia... recomiendo cambiar el spacing de ese slider, porque para los nuevos puede ser algo confuso esa nota camuflada
Camuflada de donde? es solo un stack y realmente no es confuso para jugadores nuevos, de hecho es mas fácil ya que solo deben esperar el otro beat para dar click sin mover el puntero, anyways thanks~

SapphireGhost wrote:

This song's pitch causes me pain.

[General]
- black.png is not necessary, you can use this tutorial to get the same effect with less SB Load.
- Offset should be 32. Is not necessary.

[Normal]
00:41:649 (5) - It's odd that this is the only note under a slider in the beatmap (it can be confusing for new players) Fixed.

[Collab]
There's no need for AR9 here... It's fine.
00:30:671 (3,4,1) - (3) and (1) aren't overlapping by much, but could you move them a bit so they don't? Ok
00:33:479 (4) - HP Bar overlap is alright but it could be easily avoided here. Ok
00:51:224 (4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit confusing. I am aware of that, but no change for now.
00:56:968 (5,6,7) - Remove overlap here. Nope

Kenezz wrote:

Nerv_Mario wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
00:40:883 (3): Sugerencia... recomiendo cambiar el spacing de ese slider, porque para los nuevos puede ser algo confuso esa nota camuflada
Camuflada de donde? es solo un stack y realmente no es confuso para jugadores nuevos, de hecho es mas fácil ya que solo deben esperar el otro beat para dar click sin mover el puntero, anyways thanks~

@eldnl no se tu pero deberías esperar a la respuesta del mapper para dar kudo u.u no es que tenga algo en contra de nerv o cualquier otra persona que modee algo y no se lleve a cabo pero llegara algún momento donde algún GMT revise modpost y denegara kudosus y creeme que tener kudosus negativos es algo molesto but is just a suggestion pst

Kenezz wrote:

Nerv_Mario wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
00:40:883 (3): Sugerencia... recomiendo cambiar el spacing de ese slider, porque para los nuevos puede ser algo confuso esa nota camuflada
Camuflada de donde? es solo un stack y realmente no es confuso para jugadores nuevos, de hecho es mas fácil ya que solo deben esperar el otro beat para dar click sin mover el puntero, anyways thanks~

Nerv_Mario wrote:

No, es que diga que no esté bien la ubicación de tal nota, es que yo hice lo mismo en una parte de mi easy y me dijeron que lo cambiara, bueno en todo caso fue una sugerencia xP

1. Actually, you don't need that black.jpg on your SB folder - you could simply fade the original background to 0 (the default bg is black), and then do fades on the images you want to turn black. Just a tip here, since I don't really see a problem in here, the filesize is fine.
2. You should strongly consider mapping a [Hard], since the difficulty jump from [Normal] to the [Collab] is HUGE.
   Actually, I found [Collab] a little overmapped, but that's not the point.
3. Everything else looks good.

1. Everything looks pretty good. The only thing I didn't like was:
   
   01:26:841 (1) - Why is the volume so low here? I don't like this kind of silenced spinners, but also I don't identify it as a problem ofter.
   But this one here, I just... I don't even... No, please, do as following: rise the volume of this section to about 30%, then add another inherited soft section at the end of the spinner, rise the volume to about 80%, and add a whistle.
   Please, this needs to make some kind of sound...

1. So much copy & paste ;_; As a personal suggestion, I'd recommend not copying sooo much as it kind of reflects lazyness, even if you are not lazy xD
2. 00:05:139 (1) - You should have a finish here, to keep it consistent with the previous combo, and the music Plus, it sounds good.
3. 00:09:224 (1) - And here, too.
4. 00:13:309 (1) - ^
5. 00:24:543 (1) - And a whistle on this spinner would be a good idea, imo. It fits pretty well!
6. 01:26:841 (1) - Please, do the same as in [Easy]. Be aware that if you don't change this, I'll stalk you on irc until you do, since I really really really, can't live with it (Joke :3, but please, do it >w<)

1. 00:20:458 (4) - I'd rather see this somewhere else, where it isn't ovelapped by (2)'s combo burst. Actually, this happens to be incredibly difficult to sight-read due to the very high AR, so actually this here is almost a must.
   Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:27:607 (1) - Again, for readabiliy issues, it is best to remove this new combo, and add it to the next circle (00:27:862).
3. 00:45:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...Where are the respective claps on this combo? I was so expecting to hear them when suddenly boom!, no claps... Add them, please. It doesn't sound good without them.
4. 00:51:734 (6,7) - Don't. Let me say it again, just to emphasize:
   DON'T do this slider full stack. I'd almost say it is unrankable. It's pooting impossible to understand. Please place this somewhere it's completely visible, even more if you're gonna change the direction so drastically.
5. 00:56:968 (5) - Maybe add a new combo, since this doesn't flow so well due to the fast direction change.
6. 01:18:671 (1) - You should add a finish here, for consistency reasons. Similar to what I mentioned in [Normal].
7. 01:22:756 (1) - ^
8. 01:25:053 (1) - Claps on this and the fourth repetition should sound better. Try it!
9. 01:26:841 (1) - Same as in [Easy] and [Normal] about the volume on this spinner.

narakucrimson wrote:

Hey! Sorry for the delay... I've been really, REALLY busy these days... Actually, I shouldn't be here modding now... But oh well

[General]

1. Actually, you don't need that black.jpg on your SB folder - you could simply fade the original background to 0 (the default bg is black), and then do fades on the images you want to turn black. Just a tip here, since I don't really see a problem in here, the filesize is fine. I don't know how I can do it T~T
2. You should strongly consider mapping a [Hard], since the difficulty jump from [Normal] to the [Collab] is HUGE. Vicho is working on a hard.
   

[Normal]

1. So much copy & paste ;_; As a personal suggestion, I'd recommend not copying sooo much as it kind of reflects lazyness, even if you are not lazy xD I'm lazy yees
2. 00:05:139 (1) - You should have a finish here, to keep it consistent with the previous combo, and the music Plus, it sounds good. Ok
3. 00:09:224 (1) - And here, too. Ok
4. 00:13:309 (1) - ^ Ok
5. 00:24:543 (1) - And a whistle on this spinner would be a good idea, imo. It fits pretty well! Ok
6. 01:26:841 (1) - Please, do the same as in [Easy]. Be aware that if you don't change this, I'll stalk you on irc until you do, since I really really really, can't live with it (Joke :3, but please, do it >w<) Okay sounds good

[Collab]

1. 00:20:458 (4) - I'd rather see this somewhere else, where it isn't ovelapped by (2)'s combo burst. Actually, this happens to be incredibly difficult to sight-read due to the very high AR, so actually this here is almost a must. I disagree with this, I see a few players playing this difficulty and the only confusing part was this 00:51:734
2. 00:27:607 (1) - Again, for readabiliy issues, it is best to remove this new combo, and add it to the next circle (00:27:862). But considering the high AR this is not confusing.
3. 00:45:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...Where are the respective claps on this combo? I was so expecting to hear them when suddenly boom!, no claps... Add them, please. It doesn't sound good without them. But I follow the rhythm, in the music I don't hear claps x_x
4. 00:51:734 (6,7) - Don't. Let me say it again, just to emphasize:
   DON'T do this slider full stack. I'd almost say it is unrankable. It's pooting impossible to understand. Please place this somewhere it's completely visible, even more if you're gonna change the direction so drastically. I'm aware of that, verdisphena will change it later
5. 00:56:968 (5) - Maybe add a new combo, since this doesn't flow so well due to the fast direction change. Waiting for verdisphena...
6. 01:18:671 (1) - You should add a finish here, for consistency reasons. Similar to what I mentioned in [Normal]. Added
7. 01:22:756 (1) - ^ ^
8. 01:25:053 (1) - Claps on this and the fourth repetition should sound better. Try it! No because don't follow the music.
9. 01:26:841 (1) - Same as in [Easy] and [Normal] about the volume on this spinner. Ok

Well, that's all I guess. Good luck!

narakucrimson wrote:

00:56:968 (5) - Maybe add a new combo, since this doesn't flow so well due to the fast direction change. No


Well, that's all I guess. Good luck!

Verdisphena wrote:

narakucrimson wrote:

00:56:968 (5) - Maybe add a new combo, since this doesn't flow so well due to the fast direction change. No


Well, that's all I guess. Good luck!

Elly-chan wrote:

[Normal]
Still a lot of copy and paste? o3o
00:21:224 (2) - You don't have to do this but I just thought, new combo? Don't need a new combo here.
00:23:011 (Spinner) - Map over this spinner? I see no need for it to be here. It's fine.
00:31:436 - ^ It's fine.
00:56:202 - ^ It's fine.
Thats about it for that diff

[collab]
Overmapped imo Maybe
AR -1? I dunno It's fine for 235bpm
Can't mod this too haard

why pro mappers always ask me for a moddin' you guise should know you are too pro for elly XD
sta- wait nevermind

Edit: Short mod is short hurr~ Dont kudos if I wasn't helpful.

narakucrimson wrote:

Errr... Could you please answer why you didn't apply it next time? Even if it is about personal likes. That's all! Bye!

F,0,5139,6160,1,0.02380342 change to F,0,5139,6160,1,0

I disagree with this, I see a few players playing this difficulty and the only confusing part was this 00:51:734

ziin wrote:

[easy]
just some slider ultra nazi stuff:
00:01:309 (1) - move midpoint to the center some more, don't forget to mirror it where you copy/pasted. ~
you're missing the last kiai time. eh? o_o

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
00:40:373 (2,3) - if possible don't stack this plz? (because you didn't do so at the previous note 00:36:288 (2,3), maybe: not is a problem, i leave like this~
[attachment=0:a247a]145.png[/attachment:a247a]
00:50:075 (1,2) - maybe change 1's shape a bit (to the right), now the flow is a little strange (mainly the curve is not so well) ^
00:53:139 (1,2,3) - i'll suggest to use a repeat slider in such a diff. your choice. One Two Three (8)
01:01:309 (1,2,3) - same. plus this shape is a little ugly (too crowded) imo. ugly? pff... ^

ziin wrote:

[verdisphana]
Stuff

NatsumeRin wrote:

00:51:224 (4,5,6) - nothing wrong, just think it would be better if you use something different...plus with 00:51:990 (7) stacked with 6, the hidden effect is not perfect. Fixed
01:00:288 (1,2) - oops do they really need to be that far..? (i mean...at the very left and very right of screen?) Yes, is a jump
01:02:713 (2,3,4) - spacing is a little strange though readable, how about bring 4 down somewhere? (also next 4, it won't break your symmetry effect) I don't see nothing strange


Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. meh, kud stars could break that.

ziin wrote:

[Storyboard]
Very nice, this is what got you kudo star from me. Just a few things:
You shouldn't need an epilepsy warning if anyone tells you to use one. It is well under the limits.
You made it inside osu, which leads to very sloppy code. If you want to do more advanced storyboarding, you should learn storyboarding by scripting.
If you can't figure out how to fix the storyboard on your own, PM me, and I can probably fix it for you.
;_;

First, you can use the background image in the storyboard, then fade it out when you're not using it in order to save 1.0x storyboard load.
see more here: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=55177

You didn't fade out eseveh.jpg properly. Open the osb and change the really small decimals to "0"

F,0,5139,6160,1,0.02380342 change to F,0,5139,6160,1,0

Ok

17394 - 47777 I don't think you ever see the 2nd black.png. Get rid of this line. Regardless, if you want to make something darker, you can colorize it, or you can fade it out. If the background is faded out, the playfield will be completely black. I don't know how to make black the bg... (and I don't know how to make with code

25053 - when you start to fade in an image, move it! It looks bad to just sit there. You can edit the osu file to fix this I don't think if it is really necessary:

code

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\esc.jpg",320,240
F,0,25053,25564,0,1 copy the start time, which is 25053
F,0,25564,33224,1 This line is useless by the way
M,0,25564,33734,325,219,272,219 and paste it over 25564
F,0,33224,33734,1,0 If you don't fade this out, the next image will cover it up so it will look fine. You can safely delete this line.

I didn't bother with telling you how to fix the rest of the backgrounds, hopefully you should know how.


66415 this section here has 2 blacks, an invisible background, and fading out images. If you get rid of the invisible background and both blacks, you can just fade out the images (use ease out, or "2" in the second number for a similar fade like you have now) for the same effect and 1.0 storyboard load.

86330 escenaaa.jpg - don't stop moving in the middle of a fade.

This storyboard could have been done without ever going above 3.0 storyboard load.

Don't forget you can post in the storyboard modding queue. Beuchi-chan can probably communicate better with you than I can.
.

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya~

General
Eh.. this isn't necessary at all. just wondering why the cc.png and cd.png files aren't on the SB folder, since they're actually a part of the sb o3o anyways These images are in the main folder, it's fine.
Aand.. I suggest you to turn on the epilepsy warning (http://puu.sh/4yrP) since the first part of the sb is pretty flashy Ok

[Normal]
00:50:075 (2) - i'm not a big fan of short combos, but.. there's a biig change from the previous note to this one, so consider adding new combo Nop
01:10:756 (2) - ^ Nop
01:26:841 (1) - maybe mute the sound on the end of it like in Easy diff? Sounds better with the whistle.

[Collab]
Geez so fast.
00:49:309 (4) - new combo? Nop
01:26:841 (1) - same suggested for Normal diff. Same as normal

Also, I really suggest you to map some diff between Normal and Collab (not counting taiko one, obviously). The difference on dificulty is reeally big >_<"
That's all~

Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
_F,0,-1000,,1
_S,0,-1000,,0.625
_F,0,17394,,0
_F,0,47522,,1
_F,0,50075,,0
_F,0,65905,,1
_F,0,68458,,0
_F,0,69990,70500,1,0
_F,0,85819,,1
_F,0,88883,89905,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\eseveh.jpg",320,240
_F,0,1054,2075,1,0
_F,0,5139,6160,1,0
_F,0,9224,10245,1,0
_F,0,13309,14330,1,0
_F,0,48032,48479,1,0
_F,0,48543,48990,1,0
_F,0,49053,49564,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
_F,0,69990,70500,0,1

Astom wrote:

o/
Sugerencias :3

[.osb]
Busca y reemplaza en tu .osb lo siguiente:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
_F,0,-1000,,1
_S,0,-1000,,0.625
_F,0,17394,,0
_F,0,47522,,1
_F,0,50075,,0
_F,0,65905,,1
_F,0,68458,,0
_F,0,69990,70500,1,0
_F,0,85819,,1
_F,0,88883,89905,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\eseveh.jpg",320,240
_F,0,1054,2075,1,0
_F,0,5139,6160,1,0
_F,0,9224,10245,1,0
_F,0,13309,14330,1,0
_F,0,48032,48479,1,0
_F,0,48543,48990,1,0
_F,0,49053,49564,1,0

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Veri'd Taiko"]
00:00:543 (1,2,3,4,5) - d d k k D?
00:02:075 (10,11,12,13,14) - d kd dk, mejor asi lol
Haz eso con cada otra.. uh, phrase? Como uno sera d k ddk, y el otro d kd dk, luego otra vez d k ddk, y algo nuevo en la proxima.

00:16:373 (97) - don?
00:19:309 (116) - katu?
00:20:394 (123) - este katu, o 00:20:330 (122) - este don.

Eh, en vez de decir todo.
No d k kdd o algo asi, es malo, intenta quedar con la misma dificultad en cada seccion (no d k d k d ddk d kkd ddk d kkd ddkkddkddk)

00:29:905 (188,189,190) - These sliders suck

Lo que mas no me gusta es que tienes como, 1/1, y luego 1/4, y eso es maalo. Y luego ni lo haces bien, como que namas pones un bonche de notas en 1/1 o 1/2 and te vas agregandole 1/4 a cualquier lugar con tus ojos cerrados.

EXTRAÑO TUS MAPAS PRO ;_;

224,152,82755,1,4
224,152,82883,1,0
224,152,82947,1,0
304,144,83011,1,8
224,152,83139,1,0
304,144,83266,1,0
304,144,83330,1,0
224,152,83394,1,0
280,96,83522,1,8
224,152,83649,1,0
224,152,83777,1,8
224,152,83841,1,8
304,144,83905,1,0
224,152,84032,1,8
304,144,84160,1,0
224,152,84224,1,0
304,144,84288,1,8
224,152,84415,1,0
224,152,84543,1,8
224,152,84607,1,8
224,152,84671,1,8
288,256,84797,1,0
224,144,84925,1,0
224,152,84990,1,0
288,256,85053,1,8
288,256,85180,1,0
288,256,85244,1,0
288,256,85308,1,8
136,192,85436,1,0
136,192,85563,1,8
136,192,85691,1,8
136,192,85755,1,8
136,192,85819,1,0
136,192,85946,1,8
136,192,86074,1,0
136,192,86139,1,0
136,192,86202,1,0
136,192,86329,1,0
224,144,86458,1,8
136,192,86585,1,12
232,128,86840,1,12
256,192,86905,12,0,88883

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[i am verdi tsio!]
00:16:309 (89) - katu

01:22:756 - borra todo de aqui para adelante
- replace it with this

224,152,82755,1,4
224,152,82883,1,0
224,152,82947,1,0
304,144,83011,1,8
224,152,83139,1,0
304,144,83266,1,0
304,144,83330,1,0
224,152,83394,1,0
280,96,83522,1,8
224,152,83649,1,0
224,152,83777,1,8
224,152,83841,1,8
304,144,83905,1,0
224,152,84032,1,8
304,144,84160,1,0
224,152,84224,1,0
304,144,84288,1,8
224,152,84415,1,0
224,152,84543,1,8
224,152,84607,1,8
224,152,84671,1,8
288,256,84797,1,0
224,144,84925,1,0
224,152,84990,1,0
288,256,85053,1,8
288,256,85180,1,0
288,256,85244,1,0
288,256,85308,1,8
136,192,85436,1,0
136,192,85563,1,8
136,192,85691,1,8
136,192,85755,1,8
136,192,85819,1,0
136,192,85946,1,8
136,192,86074,1,0
136,192,86139,1,0
136,192,86202,1,0
136,192,86329,1,0
224,144,86458,1,8
136,192,86585,1,12
232,128,86840,1,12
256,192,86905,12,0,88883

then you win!

wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry for the huge delay
/me from my que

[General]
tags in taiko diff is different from others orz Fixed
lead-in = 2000 or 1500 plz It's fine...
others fine

[Normal]
00:19:181 (4) - http://puu.sh/4Qov No
00:27:351 (4) - ^ No
nice diff

[Hard]
you really need a hard diff in this map , cuz the collab is much more hard than normal

[Collab]
HD-1 plz ;_;
00:22:500 (3) - ctrl+r ? Verdisphena say no
00:51:224 (4,6) - 0.0 It's fine.
00:56:968 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/4QpK I Agree with this, but verdisphena say no again ;_;
awesome

you did a great job

SUMMERSHARK wrote:

Hola~ Holaa

Normal:
00:48:543 - Add a note Ok
Maybe try to get rid of a few spinners and put some notes in their places. You don't have to, but too many spinners could tire someone out or get bored of your map. I try but I just remove one spinner.

That's basically all i could really find that caught my attention. Awesome map. :3

1. Preview Time: Set a preview point for the Taiko-diff.
2. Skin:
   
   1. Missing Files: Since you added a custom "pause-overlay" you should also add "pause-back", "pause-retry" and "pause-continue" to avoid skin mixing.
   2. Combo Burst: The first one is way too small, if it's possible try to get a bigger pic. (If you can't find anything, let me know and I'll try to help you)

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" exceeds the max. size (800x600). Resize this file, please.
2. Lead In: The Taiko-diff uses a different one (the difference is just 4ms). Fix this, please.
3. Spread: The gap between [Normal] and [Collab] is way too big, you should map a [Hard] diff or get another guest. (In my opinion, since you're the creator of the map you should map the [Hard])

1. 00:01:309 (1) - Oh I don't encourage to do this, not at all. Rookies will expect this slider right here: 00:01:309 - the current start-point is way too unintuitive. I strongly suggest to move this 1/1 earlier. (The next sliders like this one can slide, I guess... but you should fix this one because it is at the start of the map)
2. 00:53:139 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to stack these circles, perhaps unstack them like this pattern: 01:01:309 (1,2,3) - ?
3. 01:10:500 (1,2) - I didn't expect these circles, they might cause some trouble. I suggest to either unstack them or try something like this.
4. That should be all, just a last thing: Consider disabling the Flashes from the SB for this diff, mainly because while the SB follows the rhythm the map itself is following the vocals. Thus, those flashes will be quite disorienting while playing. This is really important so think about it.

1. 00:53:905 (1) - I didn't expect this circle after that last kick slider, due to the BPM I would suggest to keep unnecessary objects to the minimum. Perhaps, remove this circle?
2. 01:03:096 (1) - Why the sudden NC? This doesn't follow the pattern you've been following so far, I suggest to remove this one.
3. 01:10:755 (2) - After that slider with several repeats the rhythmical change is quite drastic, you better place a NC here.
4. A bit harder than the usual Normals but nice.

1. 01:06:415 (1) - This spinner-end doesn't make much sense. Perhaps, shorten it until: 01:07:947 ? this way it will actually follow the drums.

1. The current AR doesn't fit the song/map imo. AR: 8 would make this map way more enjoyable and it would suit better the relaxing parts of the song.
2. 00:51:224 (4) - Due to the previous hit-burst and slider itself, the current object is really hard to see and untuitive. This might be considered as a big issue so you better fix this, perhaps move it around?
3. 01:04:373 (5) - After those 1/2 jumps, this circle is quite hard to hit accurately. First of all, you should add a NC and then increase the spacing between this and the last object a bit more.
4. 01:21:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I didn't like how the circles overlap each other making (8), (9) and (1) a bit hard to see. I suggest to tweak this pattern a bit to fix this problem, this isn't a big deal so it's up to you.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - Perhaps, move this spinner 1/2 later and then add a circle here: 01:26:841? It would suit better this difficulty level imo.
6. Overall, quite nice and fun!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Preview Time: Set a preview point for the Taiko-diff. Fixed
2. Skin:
   
   1. Missing Files: Since you added a custom "pause-overlay" you should also add "pause-back", "pause-retry" and "pause-continue" to avoid skin mixing. Is not necessary, in my ranked maps I use just pause-overlay, but I try to fix it.
   2. Combo Burst: The first one is way too small, if it's possible try to get a bigger pic. (If you can't find anything, let me know and I'll try to help you)

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" exceeds the max. size (800x600). Resize this file, please. In my folder is 622x658, I do a full-submit.
2. Lead In: The Taiko-diff uses a different one (the difference is just 4ms). Fix this, please. Ok
3. Spread: The gap between [Normal] and [Collab] is way too big, you should map a [Hard] diff or get another guest. (In my opinion, since you're the creator of the map you should map the [Hard]) Vicho's Hard is WIP

[Normal]

1. 00:53:905 (1) - I didn't expect this circle after that last kick slider, due to the BPM I would suggest to keep unnecessary objects to the minimum. Perhaps, remove this circle? This circle it's necessary ¬¬
2. 01:03:096 (1) - Why the sudden NC? This doesn't follow the pattern you've been following so far, I suggest to remove this one. Fixed, strange mistake.
3. 01:10:755 (2) - After that slider with several repeats the rhythmical change is quite drastic, you better place a NC here. Ok
4. A bit harder than the usual Normals but nice.

[Collab]

1. The current AR doesn't fit the song/map imo. AR: 8 would make this map way more enjoyable and it would suit better the relaxing parts of the song. Several have said the same thing, it's time to change it.
2. 00:51:224 (4) - Due to the previous hit-burst and slider itself, the current object is really hard to see and untuitive. This might be considered as a big issue so you better fix this, perhaps move it around? Disagree, it's totally visible. Before it was harder to read.
3. 01:04:373 (5) - After those 1/2 jumps, this circle is quite hard to hit accurately. First of all, you should add a NC and then increase the spacing between this and the last object a bit more.
4. 01:21:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I didn't like how the circles overlap each other making (8), (9) and (1) a bit hard to see. I suggest to tweak this pattern a bit to fix this problem, this isn't a big deal so it's up to you. I Love it.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - Perhaps, move this spinner 1/2 later and then add a circle here: 01:26:841? It would suit better this difficulty level imo. Ok
6. Overall, quite nice and fun!

nomnomnomnom, quite nice!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:06:415 (1) - This spinner-end doesn't make much sense. Perhaps, shorten it until: 01:07:947 ? this way it will actually follow the drums.

Okay

1. 00:01:309 (1) - Oh I don't encourage to do this, not at all. Rookies will expect this slider right here: 00:01:309 - the current start-point is way too unintuitive. I strongly suggest to move this 1/1 earlier. (The next sliders like this one can slide, I guess... but you should fix this one because it is at the start of the map) for me not is a problem, the rookie players follow the approachcircle furthermore one slider at the begin of the map is more easy, yeah I try to follow the voice therefore I leave like this~
2. 00:53:139 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to stack these circles, perhaps unstack them like this pattern: 01:01:309 (1,2,3) - ? ok, cute flow now~
3. 01:10:500 (1,2) - I didn't expect these circles, they might cause some trouble. I suggest to either unstack them or try something like this. like eeh? well unstacked, but I still think that it is not a problem~
4. That should be all, just a last thing: Consider disabling the Flashes from the SB for this diff, mainly because while the SB follows the rhythm the map itself is following the vocals. Thus, those flashes will be quite disorienting while playing. This is really important so think about it.
   I'll think about this ;3

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Vicho-kun wrote:

alfin! a ver si te gusta -w-

happy!lucky!dochy!YESYESYES!happy!lucky!dochy!NONONO!happy!lucky!dochy!YESYESYES!happy!lucky!dochy!NONONO!

Kytoxid wrote:

[Easy]

00:21:479 (1) - Sounds a bit better starting 1/1 early (ending on the same spot)? it's ok, i leave like this~
00:29:649 (1) - Move the two ticks on either side of the red tick a grid down each; the ticks become symmetrical. oh :3

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Taiko Oni has No and Ni capitalized in the source. orz Fixed :3

[Normal]

This was fine. ~

[Taiko Oni]

The burst of kiai for the fountains looks really weird on Taiko, remove that? Keep the kiai but remove the next burst.

[Collab]

There's nothing really wrong with this map, but the combination of small hitcircle size and relatively high spacing (1/2s at 235 BPM don't come close to touching) makes it hard in a not-really-fun way, in my opinion. I'd recommend raising the hitcircle size by a tick; but then it goes to below Hard in difficulty stars... I don't want to change it, is not really hard, "streams" can be done with only one key and the jumps are not too big. I can pass it and I'm a ctb player now >.<

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:23:011 (1) - start it 1/4 later? Moved 1/2 later

Collab:

-Tick rate 1? No, the sliders looks fine and feels good imo.
-CS 4? Looks a little tight for me, so no.

00:56:585 (3) - given the spacing and that it's covered up by 00:54:926 (3), this note is very hard to notice, perhaps move it up a bit?
01:05:139 (1) - this slider doesn't really play well, given the fast pace of the notes before it...perhaps do something else here?
01:19:436 (3) - unstack this? noo :c

nice map~ =w=

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600)

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1?
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it.
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6))
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it.
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish)

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart)

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Checking [Hard] now that it's added. Also, I'm going to take a quick look at the other diffs again.

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600)

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1?
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

[Normal]

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

[Vicho's Hard]

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it.
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6))
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it.
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish)

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart)

[Collab]

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out.

Mostly things that can be easily fixed, good luck!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1? nop
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

Acerca de los Flashes del inicio, tendré que verlo con eldnl ya que el deberá especificar estos en las demás dificultades excepto esta... no lo había hablado con el porque a mi parecer no es confuso aunque no sigan el ritmo de mi diff

Gonzvlo wrote:

Checking [Hard] now that it's added. Also, I'm going to take a quick look at the other diffs again.

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600) I'll fix it tomorrow

[Normal]

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this. I don't want to move this slider, is not totally hidden. The player will see the reverse-arrow before appearing Spinner-osu.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart) Ok

[Collab]

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out. I really don't want to make changes if is not necessary.

Mostly things that can be easily fixed, good luck! ~

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600) I'll fix it tomorrow Fixed

[Vicho's Hard]

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it. no
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6)) no
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it. ok
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable. fixed
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish) ok

1. 00:21:479 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left x180 y184
2. 00:33:224 (3) - I don't like the whistle here, use finish
3. 00:54:160 (1,2) - Start them with a finish
4. 01:03:351 (2) - ^

1. 00:49:053 (1) - Remove nc
2. 00:50:075 (2) - Add new combo
3. Good map

1. 00:58:245 (1) - Start with finish
2. 01:26:968 (1) - Spinner, start it at 01:27:096 and end on the white big line (01:28:883)

1. Circle Size -1 please D:
2. 01:04:373 (5) - New combo
3. 01:05:139 (1) - Remove nc
4. 01:22:373 (8) - New combo
5. 01:22:756 (1) - Remove nc
6. It's ok, but it would be better if you set circle size level 4..

Chewin wrote:

Kenezz's Easy:

1. 00:21:479 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left x180 y184 hahahaha super nazi, it's ok~~
2. 00:33:224 (3) - I don't like the whistle here, use finish lol, no, two finish sounds ugly in this part x:
3. 00:54:160 (1,2) - Start them with a finish I have a best solution~
4. 01:03:351 (2) - ^

Chewin wrote:

Normal:

1. 00:49:053 (1) - Remove nc Ok
2. 00:50:075 (2) - Add new combo Ok
3. Good map

Collab:

1. Circle Size -1 please D: NOOOO
2. 01:04:373 (5) - New combo Nope
3. 01:05:139 (1) - Remove nc Nope
4. 01:22:373 (8) - New combo No because will be inconsistent with the previous patterns
5. 01:22:756 (1) - Remove nc ^
6. It's ok, but it would be better if you set circle size level 4..

Good maps *-* And good luck with the rank

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request
Va en español no tengo ganas de hablar en ingles xD

Normal:
1/2 Beat Snap Divisor201. Esto que significa? XD
Capaz CS -1 [color=#FF0000]No, esta bien así.
00:41:649 (x): Agrega una nota con New Combo y saca el New combo en 00:41:905 Sería algo inconsistente, ademas gonz me dijo que no pusiera notas innecesarias ):

Collab:
CS -1 Como dije muchas veces antes ... NOOOOOOOOOOO!!

Vicho's Hard y Verdi's Taiko Oni: Nada

Bueno eso es todo Buena Suerte y Star

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey, en Normal creo que deberias arreglar estos spacing:
00:34:500 (1,2)--> Muy cerca
00:35:522 (2,3)--> ^^
00:37:054 (3,4)--> ^^
00:59:011 (1,2)--> Muy Lejos
00:59:904 (2,3)--> ^^
01:00:160 (3,4)--> ^^
01:00:925 (4,5)--> ^^
01:01:181 (5,6)--> ^^

Tu sabes que en Normal y Easy es mejor no tener esto problemas de espaciado
Y otra cosa es que si podes sacarle el storyboard a la diff de verdis seria mejor
Nada mas
P:S: Sin color, negrito nada mas

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
 F,0,69990,70500,0,0.9764706

SapphireGhost wrote:

I think I can live with this song's pitch.

[General]
- I was going to suggest adding a timing section at the beginning to solve the problem of notes being added before the first offset line, but as it would turn out that doesn't seem to be a problem, so yeah. Also, Jar says that it's fine now and Word of Jar is absolute. The Law
- Remove this section of the .osb, as there is no "black.jpg" in the Song Folder.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
 F,0,69990,70500,0,0.9764706

[Collab]
00:37:819 (1) - Due to a glitch, this note does not have a New Combo even though it should, so put one here manually. Fixed.
00:41:905 (1) - See above. Fixed.
00:51:224 (4,5,6) - This is one of the rare times when I agree with the person I was 3 months ago. Try something like this to avoid confusion. I don't know which is the hard part here, is completely readable now. (Before it was hard to read)
00:56:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This pattern could be more aesthetically pleasing, so here's a challenge. Re-shape (5) to make it perfectly symmetrical while avoiding overlap with the blue (1) and the orange (1). Also, remove the overlap between (6) and (7) while keeping them in a symmetrical pattern. Or just do the pattern some other way as long as you avoid ugly overlapping stuff.
01:00:288 (1,2) - The loops here aren't very well defined and I imagine someone could bother you about that so do keep that in mind. Also, the 2.84x spacing is a bit extreme here, so consider making them a bit closer together.
01:02:330 (1,2,3) - It's a bit odd how the spacing changes from 0.77x to 1.21x between notes here, so you could consider making the spacing a bit more regular. That's feels really good for me, this fit with the song.
01:03:351 (1,2,3) - Well, here we are again. ^
01:04:500 (6,7,1) - Consider rearranging this pattern so that the slider body of (1) aligns with (6) and (7).
- It just occurred to me that most of my criticisms for this difficulty are in the same general area. I looked back to make sure I wasn't asleep for the first half of the song, but there just didn't seem to be any problems there. Anyhow, this is unimportant, so moving on...


[Normal]
- Coming back to our Tick Rate dilemma, I think you could probably use 2 here, as well. One could argue that 1 is enough here, though, so I guess it's not as important this time. I think with tick rate 2 the sliders looks really tight, so I keep the tick rate 1.
00:33:734 (1) - Same thing about the note not having a new combo even though it should, so manually apply one for great justice. Fixed
00:58:245 (1) - Sadly, the same thing happened here. Fixed
01:08:968 (1) - I don't even know how this happens. Fixed

So yes, that's all. After contacting your guest mappers and fixing your stuff go ahead and contact me via forum PM and then I'll get to re-checking it eventually, in the midst of the six (and possibly seven) other people that need help. Thanks.

Lolimaster wrote:

Hi

I have a suggestion about the collab diff.

[Collab]
00:36:543-00:37:564, 00:40:628-00:41:649 - I do not think it would be necessary to add a spinner in these two parts.
Try adding a few notes, like this:

[attachment=1:bc384]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:bc384]
[attachment=0:bc384]screenshot004.jpg[/attachment:bc384]

In my opinion it would be better that way but as I'm still a beginner mapper do not know if it was right what I suggested.

I think there's nothing else that I find wrong with this map I think is okay.
I have to give it to the star map but I really enjoyed playing it.
Good luck on your map and I hope that rank this map soon. (Sorry, do not know much English so I'm using a translator ><)

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
- Using 1/2 in [Easy] difficulties is fine, but I noticed that there were only three instances in which they were used, which bothered me because it seemed inconsistent with the rest of the map. The three instances are
00:53:139 (1,2,3) - Here,
01:01:309 (1,2,3) - Here
01:10:500 (1,2) - and Here
I think that this not a problem (:

Sakura Hana wrote:

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12177
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28048
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34961
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28731
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37988
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38110
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38639
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34205
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37245
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