OzzyOzrock wrote:

[i am verdi tsio!]
00:16:309 (89) - katu

01:22:756 - borra todo de aqui para adelante
- replace it with this

224,152,82755,1,4
224,152,82883,1,0
224,152,82947,1,0
304,144,83011,1,8
224,152,83139,1,0
304,144,83266,1,0
304,144,83330,1,0
224,152,83394,1,0
280,96,83522,1,8
224,152,83649,1,0
224,152,83777,1,8
224,152,83841,1,8
304,144,83905,1,0
224,152,84032,1,8
304,144,84160,1,0
224,152,84224,1,0
304,144,84288,1,8
224,152,84415,1,0
224,152,84543,1,8
224,152,84607,1,8
224,152,84671,1,8
288,256,84797,1,0
224,144,84925,1,0
224,152,84990,1,0
288,256,85053,1,8
288,256,85180,1,0
288,256,85244,1,0
288,256,85308,1,8
136,192,85436,1,0
136,192,85563,1,8
136,192,85691,1,8
136,192,85755,1,8
136,192,85819,1,0
136,192,85946,1,8
136,192,86074,1,0
136,192,86139,1,0
136,192,86202,1,0
136,192,86329,1,0
224,144,86458,1,8
136,192,86585,1,12
232,128,86840,1,12
256,192,86905,12,0,88883

then you win!

wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry for the huge delay
/me from my que

[General]
tags in taiko diff is different from others orz Fixed
lead-in = 2000 or 1500 plz It's fine...
others fine

[Normal]
00:19:181 (4) - http://puu.sh/4Qov No
00:27:351 (4) - ^ No
nice diff

[Hard]
you really need a hard diff in this map , cuz the collab is much more hard than normal

[Collab]
HD-1 plz ;_;
00:22:500 (3) - ctrl+r ? Verdisphena say no
00:51:224 (4,6) - 0.0 It's fine.
00:56:968 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/4QpK I Agree with this, but verdisphena say no again ;_;
awesome

you did a great job

SUMMERSHARK wrote:

Hola~ Holaa

Normal:
00:48:543 - Add a note Ok
Maybe try to get rid of a few spinners and put some notes in their places. You don't have to, but too many spinners could tire someone out or get bored of your map. I try but I just remove one spinner.

That's basically all i could really find that caught my attention. Awesome map. :3

1. Preview Time: Set a preview point for the Taiko-diff.
2. Skin:
   
   1. Missing Files: Since you added a custom "pause-overlay" you should also add "pause-back", "pause-retry" and "pause-continue" to avoid skin mixing.
   2. Combo Burst: The first one is way too small, if it's possible try to get a bigger pic. (If you can't find anything, let me know and I'll try to help you)

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" exceeds the max. size (800x600). Resize this file, please.
2. Lead In: The Taiko-diff uses a different one (the difference is just 4ms). Fix this, please.
3. Spread: The gap between [Normal] and [Collab] is way too big, you should map a [Hard] diff or get another guest. (In my opinion, since you're the creator of the map you should map the [Hard])

1. 00:01:309 (1) - Oh I don't encourage to do this, not at all. Rookies will expect this slider right here: 00:01:309 - the current start-point is way too unintuitive. I strongly suggest to move this 1/1 earlier. (The next sliders like this one can slide, I guess... but you should fix this one because it is at the start of the map)
2. 00:53:139 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to stack these circles, perhaps unstack them like this pattern: 01:01:309 (1,2,3) - ?
3. 01:10:500 (1,2) - I didn't expect these circles, they might cause some trouble. I suggest to either unstack them or try something like this.
4. That should be all, just a last thing: Consider disabling the Flashes from the SB for this diff, mainly because while the SB follows the rhythm the map itself is following the vocals. Thus, those flashes will be quite disorienting while playing. This is really important so think about it.

1. 00:53:905 (1) - I didn't expect this circle after that last kick slider, due to the BPM I would suggest to keep unnecessary objects to the minimum. Perhaps, remove this circle?
2. 01:03:096 (1) - Why the sudden NC? This doesn't follow the pattern you've been following so far, I suggest to remove this one.
3. 01:10:755 (2) - After that slider with several repeats the rhythmical change is quite drastic, you better place a NC here.
4. A bit harder than the usual Normals but nice.

1. 01:06:415 (1) - This spinner-end doesn't make much sense. Perhaps, shorten it until: 01:07:947 ? this way it will actually follow the drums.

1. The current AR doesn't fit the song/map imo. AR: 8 would make this map way more enjoyable and it would suit better the relaxing parts of the song.
2. 00:51:224 (4) - Due to the previous hit-burst and slider itself, the current object is really hard to see and untuitive. This might be considered as a big issue so you better fix this, perhaps move it around?
3. 01:04:373 (5) - After those 1/2 jumps, this circle is quite hard to hit accurately. First of all, you should add a NC and then increase the spacing between this and the last object a bit more.
4. 01:21:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I didn't like how the circles overlap each other making (8), (9) and (1) a bit hard to see. I suggest to tweak this pattern a bit to fix this problem, this isn't a big deal so it's up to you.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - Perhaps, move this spinner 1/2 later and then add a circle here: 01:26:841? It would suit better this difficulty level imo.
6. Overall, quite nice and fun!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Preview Time: Set a preview point for the Taiko-diff. Fixed
2. Skin:
   
   1. Missing Files: Since you added a custom "pause-overlay" you should also add "pause-back", "pause-retry" and "pause-continue" to avoid skin mixing. Is not necessary, in my ranked maps I use just pause-overlay, but I try to fix it.
   2. Combo Burst: The first one is way too small, if it's possible try to get a bigger pic. (If you can't find anything, let me know and I'll try to help you)

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" exceeds the max. size (800x600). Resize this file, please. In my folder is 622x658, I do a full-submit.
2. Lead In: The Taiko-diff uses a different one (the difference is just 4ms). Fix this, please. Ok
3. Spread: The gap between [Normal] and [Collab] is way too big, you should map a [Hard] diff or get another guest. (In my opinion, since you're the creator of the map you should map the [Hard]) Vicho's Hard is WIP

[Normal]

1. 00:53:905 (1) - I didn't expect this circle after that last kick slider, due to the BPM I would suggest to keep unnecessary objects to the minimum. Perhaps, remove this circle? This circle it's necessary ¬¬
2. 01:03:096 (1) - Why the sudden NC? This doesn't follow the pattern you've been following so far, I suggest to remove this one. Fixed, strange mistake.
3. 01:10:755 (2) - After that slider with several repeats the rhythmical change is quite drastic, you better place a NC here. Ok
4. A bit harder than the usual Normals but nice.

[Collab]

1. The current AR doesn't fit the song/map imo. AR: 8 would make this map way more enjoyable and it would suit better the relaxing parts of the song. Several have said the same thing, it's time to change it.
2. 00:51:224 (4) - Due to the previous hit-burst and slider itself, the current object is really hard to see and untuitive. This might be considered as a big issue so you better fix this, perhaps move it around? Disagree, it's totally visible. Before it was harder to read.
3. 01:04:373 (5) - After those 1/2 jumps, this circle is quite hard to hit accurately. First of all, you should add a NC and then increase the spacing between this and the last object a bit more.
4. 01:21:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I didn't like how the circles overlap each other making (8), (9) and (1) a bit hard to see. I suggest to tweak this pattern a bit to fix this problem, this isn't a big deal so it's up to you. I Love it.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - Perhaps, move this spinner 1/2 later and then add a circle here: 01:26:841? It would suit better this difficulty level imo. Ok
6. Overall, quite nice and fun!

nomnomnomnom, quite nice!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:06:415 (1) - This spinner-end doesn't make much sense. Perhaps, shorten it until: 01:07:947 ? this way it will actually follow the drums.

Okay

1. 00:01:309 (1) - Oh I don't encourage to do this, not at all. Rookies will expect this slider right here: 00:01:309 - the current start-point is way too unintuitive. I strongly suggest to move this 1/1 earlier. (The next sliders like this one can slide, I guess... but you should fix this one because it is at the start of the map) for me not is a problem, the rookie players follow the approachcircle furthermore one slider at the begin of the map is more easy, yeah I try to follow the voice therefore I leave like this~
2. 00:53:139 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to stack these circles, perhaps unstack them like this pattern: 01:01:309 (1,2,3) - ? ok, cute flow now~
3. 01:10:500 (1,2) - I didn't expect these circles, they might cause some trouble. I suggest to either unstack them or try something like this. like eeh? well unstacked, but I still think that it is not a problem~
4. That should be all, just a last thing: Consider disabling the Flashes from the SB for this diff, mainly because while the SB follows the rhythm the map itself is following the vocals. Thus, those flashes will be quite disorienting while playing. This is really important so think about it.
   I'll think about this ;3

SPOILER

Vicho-kun wrote:

alfin! a ver si te gusta -w-

happy!lucky!dochy!YESYESYES!happy!lucky!dochy!NONONO!happy!lucky!dochy!YESYESYES!happy!lucky!dochy!NONONO!

Kytoxid wrote:

[Easy]

00:21:479 (1) - Sounds a bit better starting 1/1 early (ending on the same spot)? it's ok, i leave like this~
00:29:649 (1) - Move the two ticks on either side of the red tick a grid down each; the ticks become symmetrical. oh :3

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Taiko Oni has No and Ni capitalized in the source. orz Fixed :3

[Normal]

This was fine. ~

[Taiko Oni]

The burst of kiai for the fountains looks really weird on Taiko, remove that? Keep the kiai but remove the next burst.

[Collab]

There's nothing really wrong with this map, but the combination of small hitcircle size and relatively high spacing (1/2s at 235 BPM don't come close to touching) makes it hard in a not-really-fun way, in my opinion. I'd recommend raising the hitcircle size by a tick; but then it goes to below Hard in difficulty stars... I don't want to change it, is not really hard, "streams" can be done with only one key and the jumps are not too big. I can pass it and I'm a ctb player now >.<

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:23:011 (1) - start it 1/4 later? Moved 1/2 later

Collab:

-Tick rate 1? No, the sliders looks fine and feels good imo.
-CS 4? Looks a little tight for me, so no.

00:56:585 (3) - given the spacing and that it's covered up by 00:54:926 (3), this note is very hard to notice, perhaps move it up a bit?
01:05:139 (1) - this slider doesn't really play well, given the fast pace of the notes before it...perhaps do something else here?
01:19:436 (3) - unstack this? noo :c

nice map~ =w=

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600)

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1?
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it.
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6))
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it.
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish)

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart)

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Checking [Hard] now that it's added. Also, I'm going to take a quick look at the other diffs again.

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600)

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1?
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

[Normal]

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

[Vicho's Hard]

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it.
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6))
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it.
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable.
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish)

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart)

[Collab]

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out.

Mostly things that can be easily fixed, good luck!

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. Hm you should spice this up a bit more. Perhaps, AR & OD +1? nop
2. The flashes at the beginning are not following the same rhythm as the map. I strongly suggest to disable those flashes, that part will be quite disorienting for rookies.

Acerca de los Flashes del inicio, tendré que verlo con eldnl ya que el deberá especificar estos en las demás dificultades excepto esta... no lo había hablado con el porque a mi parecer no es confuso aunque no sigan el ritmo de mi diff

Gonzvlo wrote:

Checking [Hard] now that it's added. Also, I'm going to take a quick look at the other diffs again.

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600) I'll fix it tomorrow

[Normal]

1. 01:08:968 (1) - Just noticed that more than half of the repeat-arrow is covered by "Spinner-osu", try moving this around to avoid stuff like this. I don't want to move this slider, is not totally hidden. The player will see the reverse-arrow before appearing Spinner-osu.
2. Nothing else worth pointing out!

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:26:905 (1) - I'm not sure about this spinner being "1/4" apart from the last object with the current BPM. You should consider moving this 1/4 later. (Thus, it's 1/2 apart) Ok

[Collab]

1. Other than re-marking the suggestions from my previous post, nothing else worth point out. I really don't want to make changes if is not necessary.

Mostly things that can be easily fixed, good luck! ~

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Storyboard: "esce.jpg" still exceeds the size limit. (800x600) I'll fix it tomorrow Fixed

[Vicho's Hard]

1. 00:20:202 (4,5,6,7) - This part felt a bit weird... I would suggest to remove (6), it sounds and plays better, try it. no
2. 00:28:628 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack all these circles when there's such a specific rhythm going on. Basically, the stack doesn't make much sense, consider unstacking them. (Also, just like the other pattern, I suggest to remove (6)) no
3. 00:49:309 (1,2) - This "Let's Go!" might be a good place to add a jump, it would also re-mark the Kiai/Chorus, try it. ok
4. 00:56:585 (3) - Whoops, (3)'s 2nd arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, thus this slider is currently unrankable. fixed
5. 01:26:841 (1) - I felt that something was missing here... I suggest to move this slider "1/2" or "1/4" later and then add a Circle here (+Finish) ok

1. 00:21:479 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left x180 y184
2. 00:33:224 (3) - I don't like the whistle here, use finish
3. 00:54:160 (1,2) - Start them with a finish
4. 01:03:351 (2) - ^

1. 00:49:053 (1) - Remove nc
2. 00:50:075 (2) - Add new combo
3. Good map

1. 00:58:245 (1) - Start with finish
2. 01:26:968 (1) - Spinner, start it at 01:27:096 and end on the white big line (01:28:883)

1. Circle Size -1 please D:
2. 01:04:373 (5) - New combo
3. 01:05:139 (1) - Remove nc
4. 01:22:373 (8) - New combo
5. 01:22:756 (1) - Remove nc
6. It's ok, but it would be better if you set circle size level 4..

Chewin wrote:

Kenezz's Easy:

1. 00:21:479 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left x180 y184 hahahaha super nazi, it's ok~~
2. 00:33:224 (3) - I don't like the whistle here, use finish lol, no, two finish sounds ugly in this part x:
3. 00:54:160 (1,2) - Start them with a finish I have a best solution~
4. 01:03:351 (2) - ^

Chewin wrote:

Normal:

1. 00:49:053 (1) - Remove nc Ok
2. 00:50:075 (2) - Add new combo Ok
3. Good map

Collab:

1. Circle Size -1 please D: NOOOO
2. 01:04:373 (5) - New combo Nope
3. 01:05:139 (1) - Remove nc Nope
4. 01:22:373 (8) - New combo No because will be inconsistent with the previous patterns
5. 01:22:756 (1) - Remove nc ^
6. It's ok, but it would be better if you set circle size level 4..

Good maps *-* And good luck with the rank

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request
Va en español no tengo ganas de hablar en ingles xD

Normal:
1/2 Beat Snap Divisor201. Esto que significa? XD
Capaz CS -1 [color=#FF0000]No, esta bien así.
00:41:649 (x): Agrega una nota con New Combo y saca el New combo en 00:41:905 Sería algo inconsistente, ademas gonz me dijo que no pusiera notas innecesarias ):

Collab:
CS -1 Como dije muchas veces antes ... NOOOOOOOOOOO!!

Vicho's Hard y Verdi's Taiko Oni: Nada

Bueno eso es todo Buena Suerte y Star

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey, en Normal creo que deberias arreglar estos spacing:
00:34:500 (1,2)--> Muy cerca
00:35:522 (2,3)--> ^^
00:37:054 (3,4)--> ^^
00:59:011 (1,2)--> Muy Lejos
00:59:904 (2,3)--> ^^
01:00:160 (3,4)--> ^^
01:00:925 (4,5)--> ^^
01:01:181 (5,6)--> ^^

Tu sabes que en Normal y Easy es mejor no tener esto problemas de espaciado
Y otra cosa es que si podes sacarle el storyboard a la diff de verdis seria mejor
Nada mas
P:S: Sin color, negrito nada mas

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
 F,0,69990,70500,0,0.9764706

SapphireGhost wrote:

I think I can live with this song's pitch.

[General]
- I was going to suggest adding a timing section at the beginning to solve the problem of notes being added before the first offset line, but as it would turn out that doesn't seem to be a problem, so yeah. Also, Jar says that it's fine now and Word of Jar is absolute. The Law
- Remove this section of the .osb, as there is no "black.jpg" in the Song Folder.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
 F,0,69990,70500,0,0.9764706

[Collab]
00:37:819 (1) - Due to a glitch, this note does not have a New Combo even though it should, so put one here manually. Fixed.
00:41:905 (1) - See above. Fixed.
00:51:224 (4,5,6) - This is one of the rare times when I agree with the person I was 3 months ago. Try something like this to avoid confusion. I don't know which is the hard part here, is completely readable now. (Before it was hard to read)
00:56:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This pattern could be more aesthetically pleasing, so here's a challenge. Re-shape (5) to make it perfectly symmetrical while avoiding overlap with the blue (1) and the orange (1). Also, remove the overlap between (6) and (7) while keeping them in a symmetrical pattern. Or just do the pattern some other way as long as you avoid ugly overlapping stuff.
01:00:288 (1,2) - The loops here aren't very well defined and I imagine someone could bother you about that so do keep that in mind. Also, the 2.84x spacing is a bit extreme here, so consider making them a bit closer together.
01:02:330 (1,2,3) - It's a bit odd how the spacing changes from 0.77x to 1.21x between notes here, so you could consider making the spacing a bit more regular. That's feels really good for me, this fit with the song.
01:03:351 (1,2,3) - Well, here we are again. ^
01:04:500 (6,7,1) - Consider rearranging this pattern so that the slider body of (1) aligns with (6) and (7).
- It just occurred to me that most of my criticisms for this difficulty are in the same general area. I looked back to make sure I wasn't asleep for the first half of the song, but there just didn't seem to be any problems there. Anyhow, this is unimportant, so moving on...


[Normal]
- Coming back to our Tick Rate dilemma, I think you could probably use 2 here, as well. One could argue that 1 is enough here, though, so I guess it's not as important this time. I think with tick rate 2 the sliders looks really tight, so I keep the tick rate 1.
00:33:734 (1) - Same thing about the note not having a new combo even though it should, so manually apply one for great justice. Fixed
00:58:245 (1) - Sadly, the same thing happened here. Fixed
01:08:968 (1) - I don't even know how this happens. Fixed

So yes, that's all. After contacting your guest mappers and fixing your stuff go ahead and contact me via forum PM and then I'll get to re-checking it eventually, in the midst of the six (and possibly seven) other people that need help. Thanks.

Lolimaster wrote:

Hi

I have a suggestion about the collab diff.

[Collab]
00:36:543-00:37:564, 00:40:628-00:41:649 - I do not think it would be necessary to add a spinner in these two parts.
Try adding a few notes, like this:

[attachment=1:bc384]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:bc384]
[attachment=0:bc384]screenshot004.jpg[/attachment:bc384]

In my opinion it would be better that way but as I'm still a beginner mapper do not know if it was right what I suggested.

I think there's nothing else that I find wrong with this map I think is okay.
I have to give it to the star map but I really enjoyed playing it.
Good luck on your map and I hope that rank this map soon. (Sorry, do not know much English so I'm using a translator ><)

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Kenezz's Easy]
- Using 1/2 in [Easy] difficulties is fine, but I noticed that there were only three instances in which they were used, which bothered me because it seemed inconsistent with the rest of the map. The three instances are
00:53:139 (1,2,3) - Here,
01:01:309 (1,2,3) - Here
01:10:500 (1,2) - and Here
I think that this not a problem (:

Sakura Hana wrote:

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

I think you cant have an artist name that long, just saying.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12177
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28048
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34961
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28731
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37988
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38110
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38639
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34205
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37245
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33641
.. .. ..
.. .. ..

SPOILER

Mafiamaster wrote:

pause-overlay.png is a little big.
If you can, mind lowering the file size? .jpg maybe?

LOUIS I LOVE YOUUUUU BITCH

Louis Cyphre wrote:

LOUIS I LOVE YOUUUUU BITCH

Louis Cyphre wrote:

LOUIS I LOVE YOUUUUU BITCH

wcx19911123 wrote:

I think Collab should use AR9 ;_;