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M a n a
Beelzebub song~x3

[Easy]

Nice diff~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird.
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500)
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange.
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~
Topic Starter
kosiga

M a n a wrote:

Beelzebub song~x3 yeah~ :3

[Easy]

Nice diff~ thanks~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird. remove clap. fixed
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500) sorry, no change
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange. ok. fixed
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly fixed
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~
M a n a Thanks for mod and star >w<

new modder :) I'll be rooting for you. ;)
Topic Starter
kosiga
>keimntn

Thanks Star~ ☆ :oops:
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ :)
Here's some of my suggestions :D (mods inside the spoilerbox)
SPOILER
[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider.
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807"

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.)

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~ :)
Rewrite
M4M~
[General]
  1. offset 2140
    Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time"
  2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO
  3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2)
[Normal]
  1. Nothing QAQ
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
  2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
  4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it
  5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
  6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic
[Insane]
  1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing ;)
Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD :)
Topic Starter
kosiga

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ :)
Here's some of my suggestions :D (mods inside the spoilerbox)
SPOILER
[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider. sorry, no clap. I actually put that first, but I remove it >:(
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807" sorry, no change. but I think that the hearing improved because I changed sound :D

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.) sorry, >< no change.

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~ :)
Kirino Kousaka Thanks for mod~ :oops:

LoliSora wrote:

M4M~
[General]
  1. offset 2140
    Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time" sorry, no change ><
  2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO I think that I am necessary >:(
  3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz ok! I changed a whistle into a gentle sound ;) Please tell me if there is other good sound :oops:
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2) ok. change it
[Normal]
  1. Nothing QAQ
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here ok. fixed
  2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^ ^
  3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1) sorry, no change><
  4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it ^
  5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3) ^
  6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic sorry, :( good idea but It is not preferable for only this part to change rhythm ><
[Insane]
  1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing ;)
Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD :)
LoliSora Thanks for mod & Star~ ☆ :oops:
S h i o n
:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe


Normal
  1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
  2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

Hard
  1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
  2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
  3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

Insane
  1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
  2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
  3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
  4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
  5. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...
Topic Starter
kosiga

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal
  1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
  2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard
  1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
  2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
  3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane
  1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
  2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
  3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
  4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
  5. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...
S h i o n Thanks for mod & star ~ ☆ :oops:
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one
    Download: soft-sliderslide.rar

Timing

  1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

Hard

  1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Topic Starter
kosiga

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
    [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

  1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections
ok~ fixed


Hard

  1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
    [attachment=0:293b6]0.jpg[/attachment:293b6]
oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it
Breeze Thanks you for mod ~ :oops:
Breeze
OK, bubbled
Topic Starter
kosiga

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

Thank you ><

:oops: :oops:
Andrea
Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~
S h i o n
1st ranked map~

good job~
Breeze
RANKおめでとう:D
Nymph
おめでとう~ nice song!
Ranger
Congratulations!
Topic Starter
kosiga

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Thank you >< !!!

and Thank you everyone :oops: :oops:
Gamu
(o'д')ノ☆゚*。Congratu★lations。*゚☆ヽ('д'o)
terametis
1st rankおめでとうございます!!!
keimntn
Rankおめでとー

Congratulations!!★(*^-゚)⌒☆
Maya-kira
omedeto niisan!~ >w< /
tutuhaha
Congratulations!~~~~~~~~~~~
Ryafuka
1st rank gratz! ></
MiLu
おめです~(*´▽`*)
Minos2012
wow~ NICE SONG Congratulation~!
biwako
Rankedおめでとう! :)
Pastel
おめでとう! ;)
Topic Starter
kosiga
Thank you everyone ~ >x<

:oops: :oops:
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto kosiga ~ :)
Topic Starter
kosiga
Thank you Kawayi Rika :oops:
Takos
omedetou~
Sure
Congratulations :D
Topic Starter
kosiga
Thank you ~ >< !!
Suzully
おめでとー :)
Topic Starter
kosiga
ありがとうございます~ :oops:
banvi
omedeto :)
hoLysoup
Congrats! :D
Topic Starter
kosiga
thank you desu ~ :)
Laurier
でおくれた
らんくどおめでとうございます!
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