M a n a wrote:

Beelzebub song~x3 yeah~ :3

[Easy]

Nice diff~ thanks~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird. remove clap. fixed
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500) sorry, no change
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange. ok. fixed
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly fixed
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time"
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2)
   

1. Nothing QAQ

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~
Here's some of my suggestions (mods inside the spoilerbox)

SPOILER

[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider. sorry, no clap. I actually put that first, but I remove it
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807" sorry, no change. but I think that the hearing improved because I changed sound

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.) sorry, >< no change.

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~

LoliSora wrote:

M4M~
[General]

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time" sorry, no change ><
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO I think that I am necessary
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz ok! I changed a whistle into a gentle sound Please tell me if there is other good sound

[Easy]

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2) ok. change it
   

[Normal]

1. Nothing QAQ

[Hard]

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here ok. fixed
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1) sorry, no change><
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it ^
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3) ^
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic sorry, good idea but It is not preferable for only this part to change rhythm ><

[Insane]

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
   [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

ok~ fixed

Hard

1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
   [attachment=0:293b6]0.jpg[/attachment:293b6]

oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Laurier wrote:

でおくれた
らんくどおめでとうございます！

Patchouli wrote:

ファーストランクおめでとう！

Verdisphena wrote:

Hey!, congrats :p

KayeSara wrote:

Gratz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ranked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely songs XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

Faust wrote:

Your 1st ranked map.

Congratulations !

3er123 wrote:

oh i love it so much
thanks for this map