1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
   [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

ok~ fixed

Hard

1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
   [attachment=0:293b6]0.jpg[/attachment:293b6]

oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Laurier wrote:

でおくれた
らんくどおめでとうございます！

Patchouli wrote:

ファーストランクおめでとう！

Verdisphena wrote:

Hey!, congrats :p