Tenshi-nyan wrote:

ohai.

General
What is the 0 byte soft-hitnormal.wav for? Silencing the beats in any way is unrankable. remove it
Your hitsound volume manipulation sucks. At times, I can't hear the hitsounds at all, and then sometimes they're too loud. I regret it. but I can hear all sounds

Insane
00:30:712 (1,2) - those jumps feel unnatural, therefore I suggest to use normal spacing instead. change it

Hard
01:10:870 (3) - repeat arrow is partially covered by a hitburst. change it

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

p3n wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

I will do (some of) it

[Easy]
Hitsounds (here and for all other diffs):
00:17:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - whistle is REALLY loud...annoys me maybe turn down the whistle volume a bit (use ~75% max and for the crescendo 75%->60%->45%->30%) ok. fixed (all diff)
01:10:633 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^same ok. fixed(all diff)

Object Placement:
01:03:074 (2) - move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:03:547 http://puu.sh/869a to support the downbeat with this turn (like you did this @00:25:279 (1) before) fixed
01:05:909 (1) - ^same: move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:06:381 http://puu.sh/8692 fixed

[Normal]
Maybe you can un-stack some notes as it is easier for beginners to read unstacked notes: easiest to read: 00:38:980 (2,3,4); easy to read: 00:31:421 (1,2,3), hard to read: 00:14:885 (2,3,4) 00:14:885(2,3,4) only fixed
00:08:507 (3) - definetely dont' stack this, correct timing is very hard to read without the beat going in the song change. remove circle. and slider end 00:08:507

[Hard]
The beginning is really strange and feels out of beat (mostly because beatplacement of 00:04:019 (2) is just wrong)
Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/86ca nice idea. ok .change it
At least fix 00:04:019 (2) and move it to 00:03:783 or 00:03:547
00:44:649 (X) - do NOT leave out this downbeat (just stack a circle or something) ok. add circle

[Insane]
Not bad. Some strange jumps that don't really fit but nothing gamebreaking. If you like how this map flows, just keep it as it is I say.



If you can fix the hitsounds and polish this mapset a bit it will be pretty good. The weird crescendos and the annoyingly loud whistles during KIAI should be fixed though. Use the hitsounds to support what is actually in the song and keep it simple would be my suggestion here.

keep it up and good luck

aston wrote:

[Easy]
- 00:26:696 (2) - Previous 1.62x, confusing for beginning players. what? I think Previous 0.81x
- 00:39:925 (1) - move down 2 fixed
- 00:41:815 (2) - move up 2, little nicer distance snapping ^
- 01:21:027 (1,2,3) - move 2 to left < ^
- 01:23:389 (1,2) - move 2 to left < to match ^ ^

[Normal]
- 00:23:862 (4) - move left 1 <
- 00:30:476 (3) - move left 1 <
- 00:36:145 (1) - move down 1 v
- 00:38:980 (2,3) - left 1 <
- 00:39:452 (4) - left 1 < up 1 ^

all fixed

[Hard]
- Nothing

[Insane]
- 00:16:303 (5,6,7,8) - I found this to be the most confusing part of the whole map, 5 (pause) 678 triplet. It's by preference, but as an insane player, I say you could've done something creative instead of a pause part. ok. remake it

Star for good map o/

wmfchris wrote:

I wonder what's the difference between normal and this custom soft hitsound ._. I got a wrong custom hitsound. I correct all my maps

[Insane]
00:24:334 (1) - we can add whistle here to emphasize the gradually decreasing sound effect ok. fixed
00:45:594 (1) - [Nazi] up 1 grid lv4 fixed

[Hard]
00:15:594 (2,3) - right 1 grid lv4 sorry, no change. because different from 00:16:775 (5,6)
00:18:665 (4) - whistle here to keep the "x whistle whistle whistle" flow ok. fixed
00:29:295 (2,3) - spacing of (1,2) is wrong, (2) left 2 grids lv4, (3)left 1 grid ^
01:11:815 (5) - right 2 grids to maintain spacing ^

For normal and easy, I suppose the previous mods has finished the spacing mod while the sounding and arrangement sounds good.

Impressive sounding : D

SakiK wrote:

hi-

mod初心者なので全て提案で気に入ったのがあれば使ってくださいー
[Easy]
00:12:996 (3) - easyであまりスタックは使わないほうがいいと思います fixed~
00:35:673 (4) - ＾ ^
01:08:271 (1) - 終点にclap？ no clap ><
[normal]
01:02:130 (5) - clap追加 fixed
01:06:854 (2) - 提案です　http://puu.sh/8ov6 キックスライダーはちょっと難しくなってしまいますので変更無しで><
[insane]
00:52:681 (7) - 少し音が急に下がりすぎて驚きます　一応わざとなんですが、10%ボリューム上げました。その後のボリュームも調整しました。
01:02:130 (5) - スライダーの始点にclap ごめんなさい、no change
01:17:248 (2) - clap追加　^

下手modですみませんー；；がんばってください！

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing.

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 yes. i do mod.

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing. fixed

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
00:19:610 (4) - NC fixed
01:12:996 (5) - remove whistle at the end no change

[nomal]
00:31:893 (3) - add clap at the end no change
01:23:626 (1) - remove NC? ^

[hard]
00:29:767 (4,5) - looks not good I don't think so. no change
01:17:011 (4) - clap instead of whistle change it

[insane]
00:38:507 (2) - clap at the beginning no change
00:45:594 (1) - touch HP Bar change it
01:02:130 (5) - clap no change
01:23:389 (1) - looks not good i don't think so

M a n a wrote:

Beelzebub song~x3 yeah~ :3

[Easy]

Nice diff~ thanks~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird. remove clap. fixed
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500) sorry, no change
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange. ok. fixed
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly fixed
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time"
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2)
   

1. Nothing QAQ

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~
Here's some of my suggestions (mods inside the spoilerbox)

SPOILER

[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider. sorry, no clap. I actually put that first, but I remove it
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807" sorry, no change. but I think that the hearing improved because I changed sound

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.) sorry, >< no change.

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~

LoliSora wrote:

M4M~
[General]

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time" sorry, no change ><
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO I think that I am necessary
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz ok! I changed a whistle into a gentle sound Please tell me if there is other good sound

[Easy]

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2) ok. change it
   

[Normal]

1. Nothing QAQ

[Hard]

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here ok. fixed
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1) sorry, no change><
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it ^
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3) ^
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic sorry, good idea but It is not preferable for only this part to change rhythm ><

[Insane]

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
   [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

ok~ fixed

Hard

1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
   [attachment=0:293b6]0.jpg[/attachment:293b6]

oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Laurier wrote:

でおくれた
らんくどおめでとうございます！

Patchouli wrote:

ファーストランクおめでとう！

Verdisphena wrote:

Hey!, congrats :p

KayeSara wrote:

Gratz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ranked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely songs XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

Faust wrote:

Your 1st ranked map.

Congratulations !

3er123 wrote:

oh i love it so much
thanks for this map