Himekaido Hatate wrote:

始めまして:3　はじめまして>w<

Modding始めます

Easy-

特に問題はありません！いいPatternです’w’)b ありがとです ’w’)b

Normal-

00:13:460 (1) - Rotateを使って（Ctrl+Shift+R)Anti-Clockwise３にしてください 角ばってたので作り直しました。
00:14:877 (2) - ＾ ^
00:27:633 (7) - ＾ ^
01:07:555 (3) - NC fixed

Hard-

Grid Level 4なのですこしSpacingの問題を心配しましたが問題ありませんでした！いいですね:D
ほかにPatternにも問題ありません 　

Insane-

00:03:539 (4) - Spacing問題ーDistance Spacingを1.7と設定して直すと良くなります fixed
00:15:350 (1,2,3,4) - すこし変に見えますもっと一定なPatternに直すのがいいと思います fixed その後も少し修正しました
00:38:499 (2) - 00:38:027 (1) ＜－－このノートをコピーするのがいいと思います（Ctrl+C,Ctrl＋V) fixed


全体的にいいMapですね！:3
星！

• 
  Easy
  fine
  
  SPOILER

  but Circle 2 like
  ,
  and you now is like
  
  Circle 2 is still rankable, but you cannot change it in edit, it can only be changed in .osu
  
  Normal

1. 00:56:925(1,2,3) set like
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Hard
2. 00:14:169(4,5,6) it is a little difficult for me to hit, set like
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:704(5,1,2) the jump (2,3) is just a little strange, so I think it is better to jump like
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Insane
   fine

cmn_891127 wrote:

• 
  Easy
  fine
  
  SPOILER

  but Circle 2 like
  [attachment=0:51a3f]5.jpg[/attachment:51a3f],
  and you now is like
  [attachment=1:51a3f]4.jpg[/attachment:51a3f]
  Circle 2 is still rankable, but you cannot change it in edit, it can only be changed in .osu I understand. ok. circle2 change it!!
  
  Normal

1. 00:56:925(1,2,3) set like this DS1.3x?? I tailor it for 1.2x and remake it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Hard
2. 00:14:169(4,5,6) it is a little difficult for me to hit, set like change it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:704(5,1,2) the jump (2,3) is just a little strange, so I think it is better to jump like nice idea change it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Insane
   fine

I really like this song~
Good luck!!!

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding ur song because of ur request

Easy:
00:02:122(1) - replace this for a straight slider and end it at 00:03:066
00:04:011(2) - same as above but end it at 00:04:956 the next suggestions r where the notes r gonna be placed if u follow these 2 suggestions
00:05:901(1) - x:368 y:220
00:07:791(2) - x:320 y:96
00:09:681(1) - Stack it on the beginning of (2) at 00:07:791
00:11:570(2) - x:76 y:288
00:12:988(3) - x:364 y:204
00:13:406(1) - x:400 y:116
00:14:877(2) - same spot as (3)
00:16:295(3,1) - x:404 y:292
00:17:292(2) - x:390 y:192(all suggestions from 00:02:122-00:17:292 r together)
00:53:145(3) - 2 grids down fixed

00:02:122~00:17:292 sorry, no change but thank you very much for thinking about an idea

Normal:
00:02:122-00:04:011 - same as easy but this time make it a curve slider sorry, no change
00:26:925(5) - NC fixed
00:56:925(1,2,3) - try to make it like this I want to make so it, too. but it becomes the spacing error
01:18:893(1,2,3) - Aline them all to the end of the slider at 01:18:421 ok. change it


Hard:
No problems here

Insane:
00:34:247(5) - NC fixed
00:49:602(8) - ^ ^

This is the best i can do. Star and GL

1. Offset : 2130 (+8ms from current)
2. Tick rate 2 is sound much better. You can listen hi-hat sound at every red tick.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Offset : 2130 (+8ms from current) ok. change it
2. Tick rate 2 is sound much better. You can listen hi-hat sound at every red tick. ok Tick rate 2 change

[Insane]
01:17:476 (3) - Add finish to reverse arrow fixed
01:20:547 (1,4) - Put whistle instead of finish 4 only fixed (1 keep finish)
01:21:492 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle fixed
01:23:381 (1) - Add finish to end of slider fixed


[Hard]
01:17:712 (1) - Add finish fixed
01:21:492 (1) - ^ ^


[Normal]
00:13:460 (1,2) - Their shape can be improved. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169259 fixed (It is really difficult to make a beautiful slider )
00:27:633 (3) - ^ ^


[Easy]
00:22:909 (1) - This spinner is really loud. Try audio volume 60. ok. but slider end point volume 90%
00:25:271 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo Was it strange? recovered now?


I like this song. yeah. me too Good luck

regenz wrote:

Mod form Thai mapper team.
こばんは　こしがさん。 こんばんは
これは私のモッド。
それじゃ始めましょう。

General
- Can resize belze1440_900c to 800x600 for space save. name is belze1440_900. but size is 1024x768
set audio lead In 1004 > 1000 (edit in .osu file) fixed
Insane
00:39:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is confuse newcombo at 4 , 7 'll fix. ok. change it
00:39:452 (5,6) - space space1.0x fixed
00:50:555 (3) - use 1/2 return slider instead. ok. change it
00:52:681 (7) - volume 90 %+ whistle at start of slider(head of slider) volume 70% . and add whistle
01:02:130 (5) - clap head sorry, no change
01:16:775 why stop clap afther this ? it sound good. no clap
01:25:161 (1) - start here 01:25:161 what? If 01:25:279 wrong sorry, no change.

hard
+ 1AR ? your note have alot of cluster. sorry, no change XD
00:18:665 (4) - whistle at head like insane ? sorry, no change.
00:20:555 (4) - ^ added
01:02:838 (1) - change to 1/2 return slider ok. change it
01:03:547 (2) - change to 3 circles ok. change it
01:20:082 add circle note instead of slider ok. change it
01:20:318 ^ change it. and add note 01:20:555
Normal
00:36:145 (1) - remove clap fixed
00:36:618 (2) - add clap fixed
01:07:563 (3,4,5) - delete and make 01:06:854 (2) - return instead. ok. change it
01:15:594 add circle sorry,no change
Easy
00:32:130 why stop clap after this it's sound good. yeah. no clap
00:48:429 add note sorry, no change
01:23:862 (2) - have at least 1 full beat ( 1 white line ) before spinner is good for easy diff. sorry, no change

Plz vote me if my mod useful http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&start=30&st=0&sk=t&sd=a yeah.

終わりました
頑張ってください。
Ps. ごめん、私の日本語は良くない。　 うまいです

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

ohai.

General
What is the 0 byte soft-hitnormal.wav for? Silencing the beats in any way is unrankable. remove it
Your hitsound volume manipulation sucks. At times, I can't hear the hitsounds at all, and then sometimes they're too loud. I regret it. but I can hear all sounds

Insane
00:30:712 (1,2) - those jumps feel unnatural, therefore I suggest to use normal spacing instead. change it

Hard
01:10:870 (3) - repeat arrow is partially covered by a hitburst. change it

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

p3n wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

I will do (some of) it

[Easy]
Hitsounds (here and for all other diffs):
00:17:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - whistle is REALLY loud...annoys me maybe turn down the whistle volume a bit (use ~75% max and for the crescendo 75%->60%->45%->30%) ok. fixed (all diff)
01:10:633 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^same ok. fixed(all diff)

Object Placement:
01:03:074 (2) - move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:03:547 http://puu.sh/869a to support the downbeat with this turn (like you did this @00:25:279 (1) before) fixed
01:05:909 (1) - ^same: move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:06:381 http://puu.sh/8692 fixed

[Normal]
Maybe you can un-stack some notes as it is easier for beginners to read unstacked notes: easiest to read: 00:38:980 (2,3,4); easy to read: 00:31:421 (1,2,3), hard to read: 00:14:885 (2,3,4) 00:14:885(2,3,4) only fixed
00:08:507 (3) - definetely dont' stack this, correct timing is very hard to read without the beat going in the song change. remove circle. and slider end 00:08:507

[Hard]
The beginning is really strange and feels out of beat (mostly because beatplacement of 00:04:019 (2) is just wrong)
Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/86ca nice idea. ok .change it
At least fix 00:04:019 (2) and move it to 00:03:783 or 00:03:547
00:44:649 (X) - do NOT leave out this downbeat (just stack a circle or something) ok. add circle

[Insane]
Not bad. Some strange jumps that don't really fit but nothing gamebreaking. If you like how this map flows, just keep it as it is I say.



If you can fix the hitsounds and polish this mapset a bit it will be pretty good. The weird crescendos and the annoyingly loud whistles during KIAI should be fixed though. Use the hitsounds to support what is actually in the song and keep it simple would be my suggestion here.

keep it up and good luck

aston wrote:

[Easy]
- 00:26:696 (2) - Previous 1.62x, confusing for beginning players. what? I think Previous 0.81x
- 00:39:925 (1) - move down 2 fixed
- 00:41:815 (2) - move up 2, little nicer distance snapping ^
- 01:21:027 (1,2,3) - move 2 to left < ^
- 01:23:389 (1,2) - move 2 to left < to match ^ ^

[Normal]
- 00:23:862 (4) - move left 1 <
- 00:30:476 (3) - move left 1 <
- 00:36:145 (1) - move down 1 v
- 00:38:980 (2,3) - left 1 <
- 00:39:452 (4) - left 1 < up 1 ^

all fixed

[Hard]
- Nothing

[Insane]
- 00:16:303 (5,6,7,8) - I found this to be the most confusing part of the whole map, 5 (pause) 678 triplet. It's by preference, but as an insane player, I say you could've done something creative instead of a pause part. ok. remake it

Star for good map o/

wmfchris wrote:

I wonder what's the difference between normal and this custom soft hitsound ._. I got a wrong custom hitsound. I correct all my maps

[Insane]
00:24:334 (1) - we can add whistle here to emphasize the gradually decreasing sound effect ok. fixed
00:45:594 (1) - [Nazi] up 1 grid lv4 fixed

[Hard]
00:15:594 (2,3) - right 1 grid lv4 sorry, no change. because different from 00:16:775 (5,6)
00:18:665 (4) - whistle here to keep the "x whistle whistle whistle" flow ok. fixed
00:29:295 (2,3) - spacing of (1,2) is wrong, (2) left 2 grids lv4, (3)left 1 grid ^
01:11:815 (5) - right 2 grids to maintain spacing ^

For normal and easy, I suppose the previous mods has finished the spacing mod while the sounding and arrangement sounds good.

Impressive sounding : D

SakiK wrote:

hi-

mod初心者なので全て提案で気に入ったのがあれば使ってくださいー
[Easy]
00:12:996 (3) - easyであまりスタックは使わないほうがいいと思います fixed~
00:35:673 (4) - ＾ ^
01:08:271 (1) - 終点にclap？ no clap ><
[normal]
01:02:130 (5) - clap追加 fixed
01:06:854 (2) - 提案です　http://puu.sh/8ov6 キックスライダーはちょっと難しくなってしまいますので変更無しで><
[insane]
00:52:681 (7) - 少し音が急に下がりすぎて驚きます　一応わざとなんですが、10%ボリューム上げました。その後のボリュームも調整しました。
01:02:130 (5) - スライダーの始点にclap ごめんなさい、no change
01:17:248 (2) - clap追加　^

下手modですみませんー；；がんばってください！

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing.

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 yes. i do mod.

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing. fixed

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
00:19:610 (4) - NC fixed
01:12:996 (5) - remove whistle at the end no change

[nomal]
00:31:893 (3) - add clap at the end no change
01:23:626 (1) - remove NC? ^

[hard]
00:29:767 (4,5) - looks not good I don't think so. no change
01:17:011 (4) - clap instead of whistle change it

[insane]
00:38:507 (2) - clap at the beginning no change
00:45:594 (1) - touch HP Bar change it
01:02:130 (5) - clap no change
01:23:389 (1) - looks not good i don't think so

M a n a wrote:

Beelzebub song~x3 yeah~ :3

[Easy]

Nice diff~ thanks~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird. remove clap. fixed
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500) sorry, no change
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange. ok. fixed
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly fixed
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time"
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2)
   

1. Nothing QAQ

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~
Here's some of my suggestions (mods inside the spoilerbox)

SPOILER

[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider. sorry, no clap. I actually put that first, but I remove it
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807" sorry, no change. but I think that the hearing improved because I changed sound

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.) sorry, >< no change.

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~

LoliSora wrote:

M4M~
[General]

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time" sorry, no change ><
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO I think that I am necessary
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz ok! I changed a whistle into a gentle sound Please tell me if there is other good sound

[Easy]

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2) ok. change it
   

[Normal]

1. Nothing QAQ

[Hard]

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here ok. fixed
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1) sorry, no change><
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it ^
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3) ^
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic sorry, good idea but It is not preferable for only this part to change rhythm ><

[Insane]

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
   [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

ok~ fixed

Hard

1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
   [attachment=0:293b6]0.jpg[/attachment:293b6]

oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Laurier wrote:

でおくれた
らんくどおめでとうございます！

Patchouli wrote:

ファーストランクおめでとう！

Verdisphena wrote:

Hey!, congrats :p

KayeSara wrote:

Gratz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ranked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely songs XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

Faust wrote:

Your 1st ranked map.

Congratulations !

3er123 wrote:

oh i love it so much
thanks for this map