thanks for posting on my m4m queue, those are starting to die bc everyone is lazy xP
General
This set could probably use an advanced diff, there's quite a few unmapped sounds on normal could be done in an advanced.
00:00:000 (1) - There shouldn't really be any hitsounds in this first part
Remove the music that comes after 00:41:280 (2) -
Normal
00:00:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change this pattern so sliders start on large white ticks. It's better to prioritise downbeats.
00:04:560 (2,3) - Using 90 degree angles as a pattern is really uncommon and doesn't looke that nice.
00:11:520 (1,2,1,2,1) - This section is mainly 1/1, whereas 00:16:320 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - is identical but denser. Change this up so that both of them have pretty much the same rhythm
00:19:200 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There are a lot of unmapped sounds here that can make the timeline more interesting. To be honest, just 1/1 circles isn't fun to play. Here's what I might do
https://puu.sh/xbj7Y/7efcca0ccc.png - that takes advantage of the drum a little to give it vareity
00:24:000 (4) - There is a sound on the tail, but you're following that high pitched thing which doesn't have a sound there. Use a 1/1 slider to follow the high pitched sound better
00:31:680 (1) - This is mapped, but sounds like 00:31:200 (1) - aren't which is odd. I'd suggest to delete it as sort of a break
00:32:640 (1,3) - try and avoid overlapping stuff like this, it will look more organised that way
00:34:320 (3) - ya stuff like this where background noises are ignored to prioritise main melody is good
00:36:480 (1) - 00:37:440 (3) - again, no main melody on tail so just make 1/1
Easy
00:00:000 (1) - Rotate this slider so it doesn't overlap with 00:01:920 (3) -
00:03:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same kinda thing i mentioned in normal at 00:11:520. Timeline is really different to each other, make it so they're more similar
00:24:960 (3,4,1,2) - The sliders are too close to each other, do this
https://puu.sh/xbjuM/3bf7e9c4bf.png00:31:680 (1) - same as normal
00:37:440 (3,4) - oy oy there was no 1/2 rhythm in the entire diff, don't introduce it at the end of the song xD. It's technically not unrankable, but no one would bubble it with that. Just use a 1.5/1 slider at 00:37:440 (3) - and that should fix it.
ok, good luck