1. Easy (1.57 stars, 171 notes)
2. Hard (3.36 stars, 443 notes)
3. Insane (4.65 stars, 574 notes)
4. Normal (2.13 stars, 286 notes)

• 
  
  
  General

1. (AI Mod) Objects not snapped in Insane difficulty (01:47:428 - Slider end, 01:48:366 - Slider end)
2. Preview time are not set on Normal, Hard and Insane. But Easy difficulty has one
3. No combo colors on any diff
4. You have a lot of unsnapped timing lines (green points) such as 00:11:220 - on Insane, fix those
5. Tag: "sawa" tag is useless since you already have sawasawa
6. Consider キャラクターソングVol.4 大好きなんだ (including romanized) tag, I found the metadata for the album
   
   
   Insane
7. 00:00:908 (1,3,1,1,3,1) - These should all be same distance from their slider, basically set it so that half the circle is on top of the sliders and make all even
8. 01:20:595 (1) - move this a little to left to respect even spacing as 01:19:658 (3,4) -
9. consider moving 01:51:533 (5) - this down so that it sits on top of this 01:56:970 (4) - sliderstart for better structure
   

• 
  [General]

1. たぶんDaisuki Nandaじゃないかな？
2. Easyだけしかプレビュー設定されてません
3. コンボカラーをつけよう
4. offsetを変えたからだと思うけどオブジェクトだったり緑線がずれてるのでそれぞれのDiffでAImodを見て修正しましょう

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:11:220 (2) - 枠外に出ているのでunrankedになります
2. 00:12:533 (3) - Add clap
3. 00:14:033 (2) - 00:17:033 (2) - Easyならここまで音拾わなくてもいい気がします。静かなパートでClapが目立つので消してもいいと思います
4. 00:14:783 - 00:15:533 - 00:17:783 - 00:18:533 - 上と同じでclapが悪目立ちしてるので外してもいいと思います
5. 00:14:408 - 00:15:908 - 00:17:408 - Add finish
6. 00:18:908 (1) - 両方の頭にfinish
7. 00:32:220 - 00:32:970 - 00:33:908 - 00:36:908 (1) - 00:37:845 - Add finish
8. 00:37:845 (3) - 上がりすぎてHPバーにかぶってるので下にずらしましょう
9. 00:45:158 (4,1) - 今までの配置的にこういうのはblanketっぽい感じがする
10. 01:04:658 (2,3,4) - 音取りについて
    こうじゃないかな？ 01:05:970 - ここに強い音なってるので拾わないのもおかしいのでAdd finish
    
11. 01:16:658 (2,3,4) - ^
12. 01:18:908 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - スライダーでリバースを使うから似たような配置だったりサークルをstackしたりになってしまうのでリバース外して置きなおしてみては？
13. 01:40:658 (2) - 1/2スライダーは使わないほうがいいと思います。こういうでかい音を1/2でとるなら他も取れるみたいな事言われそうです
    たとえば01:41:595 (4) - や00:37:845 (3) - 02:07:845 (2) - 02:21:345 (2) - は 1/2リバースでもいいと思うとか言われそう(次のオブジェクトとの間隔は充分にあるので使えそうです)
14. 01:45:158 (5,2) - 1/1リバースからのstackなら大丈夫だと思うけどこれは大丈夫かな？
15. 01:48:908 - 01:53:970 - 02:00:908 (1) - 02:02:220 - 02:02:970 - Add finish
16. 02:06:908 (1,2) - 00:36:908 (1,2,3) - 音付けが違うので一緒にしませんか
17. 02:19:470 - Add finish
18. 02:20:408 (1,2) - なにも音つけてないのは寂しすぎます

• 
  [Normal]

1. 00:17:408 - ここの音拾いません？
   歌詞にあわせてるっぽいですけどでかい音を無視する必要は無いと思います
2. 00:15:345 (6,7,1) - こういうのは初心者は混乱しそうなので00:24:345 (6,7) - は1/2リバースにしませんか？
   00:24:345 (6,7,1) -00:27:345 (6,7,1) -
3. 00:44:408 (5,6,5,6) - 音取りが違うのはなぜですか？
   後者の方があってると思います
4. 01:05:595 (5) - 1/2リバースで音を拾ってもいいと思う
5. 01:17:595 (5) - ^
6. 01:38:414 - 強い音がなってるので画像のような音取りの方がいいかも
   
7. 01:45:345 (6,7,1) - kiaiに入ってるからこれはいいと思う
8. Hitsoundについてはeasyで書いたとおりをそのままコピーしてください

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:25:845 (4,1) - overlapは避けれそう
2. 00:38:783 - から00:39:533 - まで Hardなら音拾ってもいいと思う
3. 00:54:908 (4) - Add NC
   01:06:908 (1,2) - と同じように
4. 01:21:908 (1,2) - これも終点同士のoverlapは避けれそう
5. 02:17:595 (1) - 終点が枠外に出てます

• 
  [Insane]

1. 始めから00:10:095 - までoverlapのDistanceをそろえたほうがいいかもかなりバラバラだったので
2. 00:53:408 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - もしかしたら指摘されるんじゃないかな？（配置が)
   気になる箇所はあったけどたぶんどうでもいいことになりそうなのであんまりなかったです

Yasaija 714 wrote:

• 
  [Normal]

1. 01:05:595 (5) - 1/2リバースで音を拾ってもいいと思う ここはちょい保留（でも良い案）
2. 01:17:595 (5) - ^　^

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:25:845 (4,1) - overlapは避けれそう 意図的じゃー
2. 01:21:908 (1,2) - これも終点同士のoverlapは避けれそう　意図的じゃー

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:53:408 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - もしかしたら指摘されるんじゃないかな？（配置が)　そうかな...?　一旦保留で

modほしいときはいつでも呼んでー(同じ譜面以外なら)
Good luck!

Dubturt wrote:

yo


[General]
combo colours for the red and brownish red? are a bit too dark, most players use 100% bg dim so lighten it up just a bit

[Easy]
00:00:904 (1) - remove extra white node to make it similar to 00:03:904 (1) 00:06:904 (1) ok
00:44:029 (2,3) - fix blanket, its a bit diagonally off ok
02:01:654 (3,4,5) - going up and down here could be difficult for a new player for this part keep for now
"Kiai isn't snapped (AiMod) oh.. fixed!

[Normal]
00:11:779 (6,7) - might not want to stack this I want to stack 2circle. keep for now
02:15:154 (3) - tilt up a bit more ok

[Hard]
00:17:966 (3) - this overlap isn't visually nice In hard, complete stack (1/2) confuses players. keep it~

(cant find anything wrong here)


can't mod both insanes cause i cant find anything wrong
sorry for my inexperience

this is a pretty clean set

have a star aswell

Alveryn wrote:

You did not apply my general mods, also you need to uppercase "cv"
Masaki Gaillard (cv: Kiritani Hana) - Daisuki Nanda -> Masaki Gaillard (CV: Kiritani Hana) - Daisuki Nanda

kookoo11 wrote:

from my nm q

insane

• 01:22:646 (3,4) - blanket better

• 01:26:583 (1,2,3) - ^^^

• 01:29:396 (1,2,4) - ^^^^^^^^^^

uhh 3 nazi mod op op

nice eroge, i can't find any more problems lol

Nines wrote:

ヤーホーm4mですよ

"light, but critical" things xD

[Insane]

1. 00:33:521 (4,5) - this flow is very strange. consider something like these littele changed
2. 00:39:052 (2,3) - space further away from 1 to indicate the 1/8 beat delay of this duplet keep~
3. 00:41:208 (1) - blanket this slider with the circle below it
4. 00:47:958 (4) - fix blanket
5. 00:51:896 (1) - fix so that instead of the first picture, it looks like the second picture
6. 00:52:927 (5) - not sure why this is a triplet, but if you want to create your own drum beat to it, add whistle here. it sounds good.
7. 01:04:271 (3) - fix blanket
8. 01:11:021 (5) - instead of the first picture, make like the second picture
9. 01:18:427 (4,5,6,7,1) - there's a beat missing at 01:18:614 that should be mapped. keep for now~
10. 01:23:396 (1) - there's a noticeable beat half-way into this slider, so maybe map like this instead? (objects moved closer on timeline for image clarity) [img]http://puu.sh/vBUm3/d7c4f46608.jpg%20keep~[/img]
11. 01:29:396 (1) - same idea here

[Light Insane]

1. does not need any changing in my opinion

[Hard]

1. 00:18:896 (1) - blanket perhaps?
2. 00:21:896 (1) - also blanket maybe?
3. 00:26:208 (1) - kind of an ugly overlap. avoid if possible little changed
4. 00:59:771 (2) - blanket?
5. 01:07:083 (2) - fix blanket
6. 01:14:208 (1) - fix blanket
7. 01:17:958 (4) - fix blanket
8. 01:22:458 (2) - another ugly overlap. match the overlap with the other pretty ones like this and fix 01:23:021 (3) accordingly little changed

- Frontier - wrote:

nm

[General]

1. May add "cut ver" in tags. because it's a cut version~

[Easy]

• Unsnapped Timing lines

  1. 1. 00:38:775
     2. 00:39:531
     3. 01:18:906
     4. 01:36:906
• Fix this in .osu file. Change from 0.899999999999999 to 0.9
  
• 00:11:208 (2,3) - Players can misunderstand that these are spaced 1/1 beat. DS here is inconsistent too. (0.68x) Move (3) to somewhere that makes ds consistent. (hard to explain ;;) nice
• 00:42:146 (4,1) - (1) isn't blanket with (4)'s slider-tail perfectly. Change (1)'s slider
  
  nazi

  
• 00:58:646 (2,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2)'s slider-tail properly. Move (4) to x:456 y:95. it is fine
• 01:10:646 (2,4) - ^. Move (4) to x:211 y:97.
• 02:02:583 (4) - I think you could move this upward to avoid overlapping from 02:02:958 (5). Like this.
• 02:08:771 (1,2) - You might make (2) blanket with (1) if you care about this.[

Normal]

• Unsnapped Timing lines

  1. 1. 00:38:775
     2. 00:39:531
     3. 01:18:906
     4. 01:36:906
• 00:14:396 - I think you shouldn't miss this cymbal sound here. Because there is a big sound and noticeable. You may make 1/2 beat slider and a note or make something like you did on 00:17:208 (4). nice
• 01:08:208 (4) - You might ctrl+h for a better flow. keep[

Hard]

• Unsnapped Timing lines (Also in Light Insane and Insane diffs!)

  1. 1. 00:00:900
     2. 00:12:900
     3. 00:38:775
     4. 00:39:531
     5. 01:18:906
     6. 01:36:900
     7. 01:36:906
• ar 7? ar in this mapset will order like 3/5/7/9.
• 00:23:864 - There is a sound here so you should fill here. Something like [urlhttp://puu.sh/vC2nk/9dc5a3f323.jpg]this[/url] might be a great idea.
  I would like to put stream on.
  However, it can not be more than four, so it looks like this.
  
  
• 00:23:208 (1,2,3) - (2,3) aren't stack with (1)'s slider-tail perfectly. Move them to x:512 y:143 ok changed
• 00:25:833 (4,1) - Maybe avoid making these overlap. It looks weird imo.
• 00:35:021 (4) - just my opinion. but i think you could move this up. It makes more flow than before.
  
  comparison

  
• 01:26:396 - I think you should add a note here since there is a sound here.
  Sure it is. but keep for now... sorry...
  
• 01:32:396 - ^
• 01:53:208 (1,2,3) - (2,3) aren't stack with (1)'s slider-tail perfectly. Move them to x:469 y:235 ok changed
• 01:53:864 - There is a sound here so you should fill here.^ [

Light Insane]

1. You use difficulty (AR, CS blah blah) as same as Insane diff. Since it's light insane diff, I'd recommend you to reduce these. (make sure you didn't adjust these lower than hard diff! keep it between~) OK!

sorry i feel lazy now
gl~ take my star (ﾉ≧ڡ≦)ﾉ☆

BetaStar wrote:

[easy]
00:38:775 - Objectがないから、remove green line
01:05:958 (4) - add finish?
01:11:396 (3) - remove clap。Clapがあるとき、ちょっと変だと思います。。
02:02:958 (5) - sliderのテイルにremove clap

[normal]
00:11:958 (7) - stackしないでください。
00:14:208 (4,5) - これしてみてください。https://puu.sh/vBWuk/3facdfff34.jpg これはいったん保留で。
00:17:208 (4,5,6) - ＾これも。歌のcrash(finish)は強いですから。　ここもです。 finishが強いのはわかりますが、ボーカルを拾いたいので。
00:20:208 (4,5) - ＾　
00:38:775 - Objectがないから、remove green line

[hard]
00:12:896 (1) - sliderのテイルはunsnapped.　あらま
00:50:958 (3) - finish?
01:05:958 (4) - ^
01:21:896 (1,2) - overlapはきれいじゃないです　少し変更しました。
01:47:958 (3,4) - これを１Sliderで作るのがいいです　Aパートの2回目の同じ場所はこの音取りでボーカルが拾えます。なので、1回目も統一性を考えて同じ音取りにしました。　ボーカルではないですが、大きいベルの音が拾えるので問題ないと思います。
01:42:333 (1,2) - （＃１は01:41:958 (4) - の上に、＃２のテイルは01:41:583 (2) - の上に、）はどうですか　少し変更しました。
01:47:583 (2,3,4,5) - （４，５）のFlowはちょっと変です　OK
01:53:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - Light Insaneので、このように→02:07:271 (2,3) - してください。　ここは問題ないです。
02:09:708 (6,1) - remove#6、02:09:896 (1) - は 02:09:708 から始めてください

[insane]
00:23:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove #4, #5は00:24:333 (1) - の上に　保留で
00:30:521 (1) - 00:30:896にClickable(circle)を使ってください　Extraならダメですが、Insaneならいいと思います。　個人的に
00:36:802 (9) - remove　歌に、これBeatがないです　大丈夫！
02:06:802 (9) - ^　大丈夫！
00:43:271 (3,4) - remove #4, #3はSliderで使って、00:43:646 と 00:43:833 にCircleを使ってください
01:05:958 (4) - Finish?　おｋ
01:11:021 (5) - 変。。　おｋ
01:21:521 (4) - remove. 01:21:521 と 01:21:708　にCircle使ってください
01:53:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - ＾remove #4, move #5　大丈夫だとおもいます

moe moe song, good map !

good luck~

1. Hard = HP6, Light Insane = HP5.7という所が怪しいです

1. 00:35:021 (2,3) - 1/1で自然な流れ方で取りたいのは分かるけど00:31:646 (2,4) - でシンバルとってるからついでに00:35:208 - も取ってみたらどうかな？
   
2. 02:02:958 (5) - 45|87に置いてみては？02:02:583 (4) - とのoverlapが今より綺麗になります

1. 00:35:583 (5,6,7,8) - Normalだとこういうパターンは怖いので8消して7を1/1にしてみたら？これなら連続1/2から避けられるしボーカルが止まった00:36:521 - にもなんとなく役立つ（と思う)
2. 01:31:646 (2,3,4) - ここらへん三角にしてみたらどうかな？今のはちょっとずれてるので一応
3. 01:33:146 (5,6) - 多分そのまま01:32:396 (3,4) - のcircleコピペして左側によせた方がパターン的にいいかも
4. 01:37:646 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 1/2の使い方が危ないｗ真ん中に1/1の隙間あげてやってもいいかも
   
5. 02:05:583 (5,6,7,8,1) - 最初と似たやつ

1. 00:23:771 (3,4,5) - hitsoundあった方がいいと思います
2. 00:49:458 (4,5) - 同じ長めのギターが鳴ってる00:43:458 (4) - と合わせて1/1 sliderに変えてみたら?
3. 01:53:771 (3,4,5) - hitsound
4. 02:02:583 (2,3,4) - ここまで広げなくていいと思うなあ。01:59:583 (2,3,4) - みたいにx0.8 dsくらい下げてみては？02:02:958 (1,2,3,4) - へのボーカルの変化に役にたてると思います

Akitoshi wrote:

#modreqsから
General

1. Hard = HP6, Light Insane = HP5.7という所が怪しいです Hardが6だったので LightInsaneも6にしました。
   Insaneとの差はARとODでokですかね...

Easy

1. 00:35:021 (2,3) - 1/1で自然な流れ方で取りたいのは分かるけど00:31:646 (2,4) - でシンバルとってるからついでに00:35:208 - も取ってみたらどうかな？
   
2. 02:02:958 (5) - 45|87に置いてみては？02:02:583 (4) - とのoverlapが今より綺麗になります

Normal

1. 00:35:583 (5,6,7,8) - Normalだとこういうパターンは怖いので8消して7を1/1にしてみたら？これなら連続1/2から避けられるしボーカルが止まった00:36:521 - にもなんとなく役立つ（と思う)
2. 01:31:646 (2,3,4) - ここらへん三角にしてみたらどうかな？今のはちょっとずれてるので一応
3. 01:33:146 (5,6) - 多分そのまま01:32:396 (3,4) - のcircleコピペして左側によせた方がパターン的にいいかも
4. 01:37:646 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 1/2の使い方が危ないｗ真ん中に1/1の隙間あげてやってもいいかも　
   
5. 02:05:583 (5,6,7,8,1) - 最初と似たやつ

Insane

1. 00:23:771 (3,4,5) - hitsoundあった方がいいと思います
2. 00:49:458 (4,5) - 同じ長めのギターが鳴ってる00:43:458 (4) - と合わせて1/1 sliderに変えてみたら? ここは保留にさせてくださいなー
3. 01:53:771 (3,4,5) - hitsound
4. 02:02:583 (2,3,4) - ここまで広げなくていいと思うなあ。01:59:583 (2,3,4) - みたいにx0.8 dsくらい下げてみては？02:02:958 (1,2,3,4) - へのボーカルの変化に役にたてると思います　0.8ではないですが、少し狭めました。

9歳なので変な事言ってたらごめんなさい　天才児です。
goodluck~

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

[Easy]
Fix the time of placing their TP, they are not on the ticks
00:15:146 (4,1) far
00:32:583 (3,4,1,2) 3,4,1 ^, 1,2 are close
01:01:646 (2,3) slightly far
01:09:521 (4,1) far
02:05:208 (2,3) are close
00:22:646 (2,1) and 00:37:833 (3,1) make them much further apart

[Normal]
00:17:583 (5,6) are close
00:20:771 (5,6) slightly far
01:03:896 (1) slightly move up
01:08:021 (3) 1 times right
01:38:396 (5) 1 times down
01:39:521 (8,1) are close
01:39:896 (1,2,3,4) slightly far
01:45:896 (1,2) ^
01:54:896 (1,2,3) ^
01:55:646 (3,4) are close
01:56:771 (5,6) are close
02:03:896 (1,2) slightly far
02:04:833 (3,4) ^
02:15:708 (4,5) ^

text may soon be modified... kk

Akitoshi wrote:

#modreqsから
Insane

1. 00:23:771 (3,4,5) - hitsoundあった方がいいと思います　あったけど
2. 01:53:771 (3,4,5) - hitsound　kiaiなの
   

Momochikun wrote:

sry late, here's mod

hitsound modding apply on all diffs
i dont think the snare drum on the first part 00:12:896 - until 00:22:271 - is prominent since there're no snare drum sound there
meski begitu dengan alur drum pattern hs yang sekarang cukup kuat kok menurutku buat nutupin disbanding aslinya. lagipula udah tak coba calm sampleset dan kurang nendang hasilntya lol

Asuka_- wrote:

:cry:

Alveryn wrote:

You did not apply my general mods, also you need to uppercase "cv"
Masaki Gaillard (cv: Kiritani Hana) - Daisuki Nanda -> Masaki Gaillard (CV: Kiritani Hana) - Daisuki Nanda

That point adopts IamKwan's opinion.

meta

IamKwaN wrote:

Unicode Title: 大好きなんだ
Romanised Title: Daisuki Nanda
Unicode Artist: 真咲・ガイヤール（cv: 桐谷華） or 真咲・ガイヤール（cv桐谷 華）
Romanised Artist: Masaki Gaillard (cv: Kiritani Hana) or Masaki Gaillard (cv Kiritani Hana)
Source: 天色＊アイルノーツ

References:
https://youtu.be/XvclwsRqtp8?t=1m7s
https://auctions.c.yimg.jp/images.aucti ... s28489.jpg
http://www.yuzu-soft.com/ja/post/5692/% ... 83%AB.html

Please check https://youtu.be/XvclwsRqtp8?t=1m7s
There is no notation of "CV", it is written as "cv".

i'll check again your general mod

Momochikun wrote:

sry late, here's mod

hitsound modding apply on all diffs
i dont think the snare drum on the first part 00:12:896 - until 00:22:271 - is prominent since there're no snare drum sound there

[Insane]
00:10:833 (2,1) - how about swap hitsound ? i think 00:11:208 - need finish
00:18:896 (1) - finish
00:30:521 (1) - i dont think need to NC here
01:05:771 (3,4) - kinda too big spacing imo, ctrl g on (4) ? keep~ its fine ^^
01:23:396 (1) - try a 1/2 slider here to cover the snare drum on red tick
02:05:583 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think need some nc cause you did so at 01:51:896 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -

[Light Insane]
01:23:583 - clap
01:29:583 - ^

[Hard]
00:12:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - something wrong with the snapping, they're all ended on 1/8 here

[Normal]
00:12:333 (8) - would like to see this as 1/2 slider though
00:18:896 (1) - finish
00:13:646 (3,4,5,6) - 00:16:646 (3,4,5) - why not made cymbal on slider start like 00:22:646 (2,3,4) - ? this kind of pattern is hard for newbie to follow
01:03:896 (1,2) - 1/1 slider ?


too much 1/2 sliders here imo, some of the non important part can be merged as 1/1 slider, like using reverse slider for smth like 01:57:333 (6,7) -
little change.

RepL4y wrote:

hello~
easy normalは逆に悪くなりそうなのでパスで

[Insane]
00:40:833 (3) - ちょっと右にずらしたら綺麗にブランケットになると思う。それかスライダーの曲げる位置をちょっと左にする。 oki~
00:43:458 (4) - スライダーの間になってるドラムの音拾いたい。（他全部拾ってるからここだけちょっと違和感あるかも）
うわほんとや。。
00:43:458 (4) - 00:49:458 (4,5) - 音取りが違うから修正しなきゃなんですけど
00:39:896 (1) - 00:45:896 (1) - でこういうギターを1/1で取ってるので、00:49:458 (4,5) - を1/1に変えたほうが一貫性があるのかな...
でも確かに中で大きい音が鳴ってるよね... 　 5.0のinsaneだから埋めるべきなのか... 　ちょい保留で！！

01:15:146 (5) - ブランケット うい

[Hard]
00:43:458 (4) - insaneと同じで音拾いたいかも　ここはバランス的にkeep
00:59:396 (1,2,3) - スライダーと音に違和感ある。→01:12:146 (3) - 頭の音がなってないから　nice!!!!
こんな感じだったら音も綺麗に取れると思う
01:11:771 (2,3,4) - ここも同じ　yes!!!
02:20:771 (2,3,4,5,6) - 配置もっと綺麗に置けそう。（３と４が近く見えるのが気になる。）Nice!!

ranked頑張ってください！

1. 00:59:396 (3) - 01:11:396 (3) - don't understand why hss are different... Clap (with drum additions) on 2nd one i guess should be on head of slider instead of reverse tail?
2. 01:39:896 (1,2,3,4) - don't want to try https://puu.sh/vGjrP.jpg? for emphasis on 01:41:208 (3) - strong sound here
3. 02:05:208 (2,3) - not a big deal actually, but might stack them
4. 02:20:396 - snap timeline, instead of 02:20:404 -
5. 00:12:896 - 00:54:896 - useless grennlines i guess , You can delete it. You might also check other diffs for stuff like these

1. 00:00:896 - snap timeline
2. 00:01:646 (2) - shape supposed to be less curved than others?
3. 00:12:708 - imo start as combo and new part from vocals not really good idea. i suggest snap start on down beat. It's more intuitive. https://puu.sh/vGkAo.jpg
   Also it's more consistent with your usually map structure.
4. 00:34:833 (3,4) - ctrl-g for rythm. imo more fits vocals. don't foget resnap hss as well.
5. 00:59:396 (5) - additions to drum? looks like it's according to all diffs, pls recheck 00:59:396 - 00:59:771 - 01:00:146 - 01:11:396 - 01:11:771 - 01:12:146 - for HS consistency
6. 01:36:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/vGkUv.jpg or https://puu.sh/vGl0z.jpg for save your rhythm but less dense and 01:37:646 - not clickable since imo it's really weak beat

1. 00:38:775 01:18:906 01:36:900 unsnapped lines
2. 00:23:677 - honestly it's really weak beat, but 00:23:864 - this one is noticeable for sure. You set your priorities the other way. mb https://puu.sh/vGlgg.jpg ? Or https://puu.sh/vGltp.jpg for better fits music. Same stuff for higher Light Insane i guess, but with more dense stuff
3. 01:53:208 (1,2) - ^ same
4. 01:18:896 (1,2) - i suggest crl-g for rhythm, for better following instruments by following melodic sound 01:18:896 - using slider
5. 01:24:896 (1) - ^ also i'll get a bit more variation with 01:30:896 (1) - and 01:36:896 (1) - witch sounds a bit more sharp
6. 02:14:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/vGlZP.jpg or http://puu.sh/vGn3J.jpg for fits guitar better, it's solo part so i guess make sense to emphasis on it

1. 00:00:906 00:38:775 01:18:906 unsnapped lines
2. 00:28:646 (3,4,5) - make a squre?
3. 00:41:583 (2) - questinoble spacing because 00:42:333 (5) - low ds
4. 00:41:208 (1) - if You are based Ncs on guitars punches, so 00:41:958 - Hs it as well for consistency , according for other places with same souds
5. 01:04:646 (3,4,5) - mb make even triangle (with same sides)?
   

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello
NM from q

[Easy]

1. 00:59:396 (3) - 01:11:396 (3) - don't understand why hss are different... Clap (with drum additions) on 2nd one i guess should be on head of slider instead of reverse tail? ok
2. 01:39:896 (1,2,3,4) - don't want to try https://puu.sh/vGjrP.jpg? for emphasis on 01:41:208 (3) - strong sound here keep for mow
3. 02:05:208 (2,3) - not a big deal actually, but might stack them no
4. 02:20:396 - snap timeline, instead of 02:20:404 - ok
5. 00:12:896 - 00:54:896 - useless grennlines i guess , You can delete it. You might also check other diffs for stuff like these ok

[Normal]

1. 00:00:896 - snap timeline
2. 00:01:646 (2) - shape supposed to be less curved than others?
3. 00:12:708 - imo start as combo and new part from vocals not really good idea. i suggest snap start on down beat. It's more intuitive. https://puu.sh/vGkAo.jpg
   Also it's more consistent with your usually map structure. nice
4. 00:34:833 (3,4) - ctrl-g for rythm. imo more fits vocals. don't foget resnap hss as well. keep for mow
5. 00:59:396 (5) - additions to drum? looks like it's according to all diffs, pls recheck 00:59:396 - 00:59:771 - 01:00:146 - 01:11:396 - 01:11:771 - 01:12:146 - for HS consistency
6. 01:36:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/vGkUv.jpg or https://puu.sh/vGl0z.jpg for save your rhythm but less dense and 01:37:646 - not clickable since imo it's really weak beat
   i should follow 01:38:396 - for bigginer i think. keep

[Hard]

1. 00:38:775 01:18:906 01:36:900 unsnapped lines
2. 00:23:677 - honestly it's really weak beat, but 00:23:864 - this one is noticeable for sure. You set your priorities the other way. mb https://puu.sh/vGlgg.jpg ? Or https://puu.sh/vGltp.jpg for better fits music. Same stuff for higher Light Insane i guess, but with more dense stuff
3. 01:53:208 (1,2) - ^ same
4. 01:18:896 (1,2) - i suggest crl-g for rhythm, for better following instruments by following melodic sound 01:18:896 - using slider its fine
5. 01:24:896 (1) - ^ also i'll get a bit more variation with 01:30:896 (1) - and 01:36:896 (1) - witch sounds a bit more sharp its fine
6. 02:14:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/vGlZP.jpg or http://puu.sh/vGn3J.jpg for fits guitar better, it's solo part so i guess make sense to emphasis on it nice

[light Insane]

1. 00:00:906 00:38:775 01:18:906 unsnapped lines
2. 00:28:646 (3,4,5) - make a squre? i try
3. 00:41:583 (2) - questinoble spacing because 00:42:333 (5) - low ds its fine
4. 00:41:208 (1) - if You are based Ncs on guitars punches, so 00:41:958 - Hs it as well for consistency , according for other places with same souds keep its fine
5. 01:04:646 (3,4,5) - mb make even triangle (with same sides)? k

[]
That's it.
Hope You'll find smting usefull.
GL~

1. 00:42:896 (1,2,3) - Flow between these objects can be a bit more smoother like you did on similar patterns. What are you think about something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8005883 this. It should works better, because transition 00:42:896 (1,2) - here will be circular and comforable and 00:44:396 (3) - this slier will continue it well.
2. 01:38:396 (3,4) - What are you think about changing these shapes to others, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8005902 this to obtain better music fitting, because 01:38:396 - here you've a bit other kind of rythm. It will works for aesthetics aswell, because by this you'll avoid 4x the same slider, which is a bit boring.
3. 01:42:896 (1,2) - Here you've small antiflow. What are you think about CTRL+H on 01:42:896 (1) - (like you did it 01:57:896 (1,2) - here) this slider. It should works better.

1. 00:11:583 (2,3,4) - I think this spacing is a bit unlogical, because you don't emphasised the most important ryth here. You should emphasise 00:11:958 (4) - this circle by increasing spacing (Like you did it 00:37:833 (1,2,3) - here), because this rythm is the strongest here and it's need it.
2. 00:39:333 - I think you can get here nice aesthetics visual by moving 00:39:333 (4) - this circle a bit to up to make blanket with 00:39:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stream, like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8006010
3. 01:01:458 (3,4) - You should increase spacing here, because rythm is not that light like you emphasised it. You can do it easily by 01:01:458 (3) - moving this circle a bit to right, because in comparsion 01:01:083 (2,3) - this spacing seems overspaced.

1. 00:12:521 (3) - maybe delete it? sounds better
2. 00:37:833 (3) - I don't know if it is good idea, but you can try to replace this with one circle or something similar for more interesting souind

1. 00:11:771 (6,7) - replace with slider?
2. 00:30:146 (6) - sounds better without it
3. 01:48:146 (6) - ^
4. 02:00:146 (6) - ^

1. 00:00:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you can make this through more interesting patterns for eyes?
2. 00:03:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
3. 00:06:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
4. 00:46:833 (3,4,1) - a bit hard to aim for semi-newbies, I think... this little jump to slider is more suitable for kiai-time
5. 00:51:896 (1) - you can start this from a circle and then from spinner... too hearable place

Venix wrote:

Hello! From queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:42:896 (1,2,3) - Flow between these objects can be a bit more smoother like you did on similar patterns. What are you think about something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8005883 this. It should works better, because transition 00:42:896 (1,2) - here will be circular and comforable and 00:44:396 (3) - this slier will continue it well. changed
2. 01:38:396 (3,4) - What are you think about changing these shapes to others, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8005902 this to obtain better music fitting, because 01:38:396 - here you've a bit other kind of rythm. It will works for aesthetics aswell, because by this you'll avoid 4x the same slider, which is a bit boring. littele change
3. 01:42:896 (1,2) - Here you've small antiflow. What are you think about CTRL+H on 01:42:896 (1) - (like you did it 01:57:896 (1,2) - here) this slider. It should works better. keep for now.

[Insane]

1. 00:11:583 (2,3,4) - I think this spacing is a bit unlogical, because you don't emphasised the most important ryth here. You should emphasise 00:11:958 (4) - this circle by increasing spacing (Like you did it 00:37:833 (1,2,3) - here), because this rythm is the strongest here and it's need it. little change
2. 00:39:333 - I think you can get here nice aesthetics visual by moving 00:39:333 (4) - this circle a bit to up to make blanket with 00:39:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stream, like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8006010 nice
3. 01:01:458 (3,4) - You should increase spacing here, because rythm is not that light like you emphasised it. You can do it easily by 01:01:458 (3) - moving this circle a bit to right, because in comparsion 01:01:083 (2,3) - this spacing seems overspaced. okay

Ok! That's all from me, good luck~!

Morroni wrote:

Hi, a little mod how I can
[Easy]

1. 00:12:521 (3) - maybe delete it? sounds better no
2. 00:37:833 (3) - I don't know if it is good idea, but you can try to replace this with one circle or something similar for more interesting souind desuyone

[Normal]

1. 00:11:771 (6,7) - replace with slider? keep for now
2. 00:30:146 (6) - sounds better without it emphasize key sound
3. 01:48:146 (6) - ^
4. 02:00:146 (6) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:00:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you can make this through more interesting patterns for eyes? hm... remove stack?? xD
2. 00:03:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
3. 00:06:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
4. 00:46:833 (3,4,1) - a bit hard to aim for semi-newbies, I think... this little jump to slider is more suitable for kiai-time llittle changed
5. 00:51:896 (1) - you can start this from a circle and then from spinner... too hearable place no

I can't mod Light Insane and Insane because I can't find something wrong there. You can just make them more readable (DS, overlaps and so on) I'll check
Very nice work, good luck!

Lami wrote:

diff name

light insane => insane
insane => custom diff name or etc // insaneより expert難易度に近いですかも
LightInsaneを削除したので、Insaneはこのままでいきますー

normal

00:27:333 (6) - このnoteをここで00:27:146 - 運んでください

hard

00:13:271 (2,4,1) - 00:14:958 (3,5,1,2) - 、etc.... unsnap
00:38:771 (1,2) - hardでは ３/４は読むのが大変かも知りません 確かに。。　でも少し保留で。
01:00:802 (5) - 01:12:802 (5) - overmapped、特にbeatがないので、敢えてnoteを使うのはよくないと思います
01:06:896 (1,2) - このよに急なjumpは避けてください。hardのjumpは基本的には問題ないですが、全体的にjumpみたいのがないので
特別な音がないばしょうでのjumpは不自然です。
01:07:083 (2) - ・・ ここに 01:07:271 - vocalもあるし、beatもあるので、１/１sliderを１/２rhythmで返してください。
01:14:021 (5,1) - blanket
01:38:396 - 強いbeatをskipするのはなんか変な感じがします
02:07:271 (2,3,4) - DSがビジュアルてきに一致しません。ここと比べれば...（02:20:958 (3,4) - ）


light Insane

00:19:646 (3,4,5) - 、00:21:521 (5,6) - 、00:43:458 (4,5) - 、00:49:458 (4,5) - 、01:17:958 (3,4) - ... etc
rhythm自体が理解できないのではないですが、insane diffにある同じpartと比べれば、insaneより もっと きついrhythmを 使っています。
light insaneが 下位難易度という点で、rhythmを 上位難易度よりsimpleにするのも考え見るほうもいいと思います。

00:12:333 - Rhythmの Gapが 長すぎると 感じるので、１/４sliderもいいとおもいます。
00:38:208 (6) - ほかのdiffでは ただのnoteだったのに...(特にhard diffより rhythmがないです。）
01:21:896 (1,2) - make smaller ds、insaneを参考して...（２）はよわいbeat、（３）はつよいbeat、dsも beatの強さを表現すろほうが
いいと思います。

Insane

00:06:521 - hitsoundがmusicと似合わないですね
00:14:021 (5,6) - (6)にあまり強い音がないので、ここでのjumpは気まずい感じdesu
00:30:521 (8) - 、02:00:521 (1) - 一致しないnc rule。
00:39:052 (2,3) - ・00:38:771 (1,2) - dsが 小さいので、３／４は読みづらいです
このsnareみたいな 音よりは（00:52:927 (5) - ）、このdrumがある この部分が 00:53:302 - 重要と思います。
01:05:771 (3,4) - ええ、this jump is too big
01:28:646 (3) - ctrl+g
01:44:771 (3,4) - same ＾
01:20:396 - だいたい、音楽がdrumで成っているので、mappingするほうがいいとおもいます。
01:24:427 (5) - 01:30:427 (5) - overmapped

personally think, would be better if you recheck how to use your rhythm usage. gl