Maxus wrote:

ini buat diff easynya

[Easy]
00:12:777 (12777|1) - LN nya agak membingungkan disini, coba pendekin jadi 1/1 di 00:13:088 - , trus disana tambah 1 note lagi di col 1 ok

00:38:114 - wa tau jacknya mau disambungin strukturnya, tapi patterningnya jadi ampir sama ama 00:39:202 (39202|0,39513|1,39824|2) - , mending 00:38:114 (38114|1,38425|1,38736|2,39047|2) - di Ctrl+H lol gw disini layering suara hi hat udh siap dicyduk ama lu trnyata lolos owo ok

00:41:534 (41534|1,41689|0) - Bikin col 1 dan col 3 biar ga gitu berat di tangan kiri ok

01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - Flownya kalo LN nya mau dibikin arah kekanan jadi kurang pas disana, coba Ctrl+H 01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - ok

01:30:187 (90187|0,90498|1,90808|0,91119|1,91430|1,91430|0) - sepertinya jangan di diff easy kwwk, coba https://puu.sh/zf0m4/dd61853610.png ok

02:00:653 (120653|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, biar jadi trill 3-2-3-2 dan sesuai dengan struktur di 02:01:275 (121275|1,121586|0,121897|1,122207|0) - ok

Udah solid kok easynya, abis apply ini, bisa wa lgsg bubble.

get out from probational mode and get ur ass back here

Kamikaze wrote:

as requested, hitsound volume crusade pending edition

you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence will change

there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat only clap sound (hence, snare) in the song, there is no kick here

pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo

00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:
applied

00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:
re-arranged

01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column there is no melody there in the specified part

I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you will turn them into jumpjack then!!

01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice re-arranged

01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV) ok!

01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo rly want to emphasize the melody here instead of inaudible sounds

01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:
rre-arranged

rest is fine by me

Fycho wrote:

just a reminder, the way you romanise 夏越祭 is incorrect, Natsukoshi Matsuri => Nagoshisai.
Therefore, romanised title: Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~

SpectorDG wrote:

no kudos

add tag : KSM for easily search K-Shoot Mania, like a SDVX

DoNotMess wrote:

Round 2!!

Arzenvald wrote:

mau yg ke 3?

Protastic101 wrote:

Hi, sorry about the lateness, but I'd like to point out a few minor things plus a concern about the spread in the mid difficulties.

[Another]
00:38:114 (38114|1,38270|1,38425|1) - This three note stack is fine for the most part, but paired with 00:38:503 (38503|0,38658|0) - on the same hand, it gets a bit straining. I'd suggest putting the 1/2 stack on the right hand to avoid this like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514277 re-arranged

01:24:202 (84202|0,84202|2,84202|3) - Might consider putting the hand at 01:24:435 - where the crash is more sustained rather than having a quick cut off and only using a jump here. It also reduces the anchors a little like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514304 . On the 1/6, it also utilizes two 1/3 minijacks on both hands as well while also making the pattern a bit easier to group visually imo since they're trills. also re-arranged


[Hyper]
00:29:254 - Here, I think since the 1/8 stops and switches to a more technical rhythm, I think it'd be nice to represent the drop in density with a drop in density in the chart. A way to do this would be to ignore the synth and just map the snares, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514328 applied


[Advanced]
Overall the pattern is fine, but the larger issue here I think is the spread from this difficulty to Hyper as you can see clearly at 01:30:187 -

A way to help bridge the gap a bit better would be to add some short two beat long 1/4 bursts like at 01:30:808 - to 01:31:430 - and 01:32:052 - to 01:32:674 - where the synth becomes a bit louder. The only issue this may create though is a spread gap that's too wide from the normal to advanced since normal uses a lot of single 1/2 bursts. also applied, dunno if it's ok tho..


Really cool chart otherwise. The LNs in the top diff are really fun to play (even if I fail on them most of the time lmao).

shionelove wrote:

i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;

some for Advanced:
01:44:591 (104591|2,104694|1) - these rhythm are not good,i know these sounds are 1/6 so you have to choose 1/3 to make easier tho.change LN is better. sounds good
01:49:850 (109850|1) - this causes weird rhythm because there is different sounds from 01:49:617 (109617|0,109694|2,109928|3) - ,no accented drums. sorry, applied

DoNotMess wrote:

shionelove wrote:

i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;

shionelove wrote:

]i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;



the part Protastic101 mentions as example of issue

Arzenvald wrote:

gw gk ngepost apa apa yak :V

Feerum wrote:

Holla. Cool map but i would like to point out some stuff that bugs me.

[Another]

00:39:979 (39979|3,40018|2,40057|1,40096|0,40290|0,40329|1,40368|2,40407|3) - So.. both sounds are actually 1/6. Why exactly do you have it mapped in 1/8? Is this now allowed? Or did really no one notice it until now?

It is clearly 1/6 and not 1/8. The kicks have each 4 hits

remaining looks okay but.. wrong snapping should be a no go

Feerum wrote:

Holla. Cool map but i would like to point out some stuff that bugs me.

[Another]

00:39:979 (39979|3,40018|2,40057|1,40096|0,40290|0,40329|1,40368|2,40407|3) - So.. both sounds are actually 1/6. Why exactly do you have it mapped in 1/8? Is this now allowed? Or did really no one notice it until now?

It is clearly 1/6 and not 1/8. The kicks have each 4 hits

remaining looks okay but.. wrong snapping should be a no go

FAMoss wrote:

Feerum wrote:

Holla. Cool map but i would like to point out some stuff that bugs me.

[Another]

00:39:979 (39979|3,40018|2,40057|1,40096|0,40290|0,40329|1,40368|2,40407|3) - So.. both sounds are actually 1/6. Why exactly do you have it mapped in 1/8? Is this now allowed? Or did really no one notice it until now?

It is clearly 1/6 and not 1/8. The kicks have each 4 hits

remaining looks okay but.. wrong snapping should be a no go

I agree with Feerum. No one had expected this before, and should be like this imo

note that i block its a kick sound
00:39:979 - 00:40:290 - is a mixture of kick and hat sounds re-arranged

and hitsound, should be reducing to 40-50 % hitnormal more like spamming hat, because the volume of sample is too high
try to hear cymbal lol, making my the ears ringing lol turn down eff volume from in game

[Another]
note:
00:55:601 - ok retard, wrong snapped. actually here 00:55:627 - with 1/6 snap seriously, no need to write retard there.. not funny and it's not even 1/6
00:56:845 - same above, must be here 00:56:871 -
00:59:254 - im still hear hat sound here the layering here is the kick as 1 and melody as 2 (highlighted is kick and unhighlighted is melody) there is no hi hat layering here

hitsound:
00:00:653 - in the beginning, no kick sound? lol i think that W ok
00:10:290 - i dont hear any cymbal sounds, except here 00:10:601 - ok
00:18:373 - 00:18:995 - no C here ? lol i guess that is clap sound and cymbal sound ok
00:20:549 - why cymbal here ? its no cymbal sound there is light sounded cymbal sound there
00:23:503 - missed sample, here 00:22:881 - you add C and 00:23:503 - no sample? ???only hi hat sound there ???
00:39:979 - 00:40:290 - :thinking: why no sample here? its not hat, imo. its kick ???? there is already W there...
00:40:446 - yep i dont hear cymbal those, actually bell sounds, same as here 00:41:689 - if you want change it, change with snare it's almost the same sound ok
01:14:954 - no cymbal sound there ok
01:19:617 - add cymbal sound here! ok
01:24:902 (84902|1,84954|2,85005|3,85057|1,85109|2,85161|0) - wait wat, no kick sample here? :thinking_hard: it's not kick, it's snare there and i was told to delete snare sample
01:31:275 - add cymbal ! ok
01:37:337 - no cymbal sound ok
01:40:135 - add cymbal sound! ok
01:41:378 - cymbal here! ok
01:44:798 - cymbal here! reeeeee cant hear any cymbal
01:51:171 - add cymbal here! ok
01:54:125 - cymbal! asw ... no cymbal here ...
01:54:746 - cymbal here.... already covered in pssh sample
01:55:057 - no C? i hear below, its C there no
02:00:187 - cymballl no cymbal

call me later, with hitsound problem lol

1. 01:02:415 - Need a note here for the melody.
2. 01:49:461 (109461|2,109461|3) - Might make one of them into a 1/2 LN as it is still part of the previous melody line.