1. Crystal's Captivation (6.06 stars, 391 notes)
2. Crystal's Rain (4.45 stars, 376 notes)
3. Easy (1.66 stars, 129 notes)
4. eLy's Extra (5.57 stars, 502 notes)
5. Hard (3.43 stars, 276 notes)
6. LOUDER (6.1 stars, 557 notes)
7. Meep's Insane (4.3 stars, 391 notes)
8. Normal (2.39 stars, 215 notes)
9. Yuria's Insane (5.02 stars, 455 notes)

Easy : scanter

Rain : CLSW

Normal : scanter

Overdose (Captivation) : CLSW

Hard : scanter

Insane : _Meep_

Insane + : Yuria

Extra : eLy

Extra + (LOUDER) : scanter

Hinsvar wrote:

That's fast lmao

Vettel wrote:

thank you scanter
i like bang dream songs

eLy wrote:

DONE! SD落として5.55だったけど大丈夫かな・・？

まだ下げる必要あったら言ってください！

Extra

Luna- wrote:

Godcanter

CLSW wrote:

http://puu.sh/vnacY/5f1414e035.zip 유키나 사랑해요

Kyuare wrote:

I wish you good luck, and hope that my mod will help you.

1. Why not make the diff name in default, like Crystal's Rain. Make your Captivation to "EXPERT" diff instead?
2. 00:24:571 (3) - I hear triplet sounds. Maybe use 1/4 repeating slider, or simply a triple note?
3. 00:57:648 (3,4,5,6,1) - Its a bit hard (for rain). Maybe reduce DS.
4. 01:23:648 (3) - triple note instead?
5. 01:33:494 (3) - ^

1. 00:09:956 (3) - Make this a bit slant to the right.
2. 00:19:802 (5) - ctrl+g?
3. 00:28:417 (5) - ^
4. 00:56:879 (2) - Move it a bit farther away from 1
5. 01:07:187 (3,4,5) - more slant...
6. 01:18:879 (2) - slant to the left
7. 01:28:725 (5) - ctrl+g?
8. 01:37:340 (5) - ^

CLSW wrote:

슬틱 2는 일단 스캔터님 스탠맵셋에서도 동의하시면 하는걸로

scanter wrote:

CLSW wrote:

슬틱 2는 일단 스캔터님 스탠맵셋에서도 동의하시면 하는걸로

캐치에서 슬틱 바꾸는거 상관없으면 그대로 2로 하셔도 댐. 저도 정말 틱 2를 좋아하는데, 개인적으로 이 노래는 (스탠에서) 틱 1이 더 어울려요.

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Placehold

Neoskylove wrote:

random mod

[Easy]
00:16:417 (3,1) - 뒤에 1번이 리버스인데 3번 잔상이 완전히 사라지지 않았어요, 저같은 경우에는 볼 수 있었긴 한데 뉴비들이 플레이할때 이 리버스 읽기 상당히 힘들거라고 보입니다. ㅇㅋ 위치 옮겼어요
00:54:571 (4) - 뉴콤보 끊어주시는게 좋을수도? 넹
이지에 1/2 넘 많은데 괜찮은지 모르겠네여. 그리고 개인적으로 키아이에서는 조금 더 박자를 늘려도 될것 같다는 느낌이 듭니당 00:59:802 - 01:02:263 - 이런곳에 같은 지적이 나오면 고쳐볼께요. 1/2가 많긴 하지만 이지 난이도 캡은 2성 이하라서 좀 노말 같더라도 괜찮을 것 같다는 생각이 듭니다.

[Normal]
슬라속도 1.2밖에 안되는데 BPM때문에 체감상 빠르다는 느낌이 드네여. 원래 1.3하려다가 1.2한건데 흠..
00:11:494 - 00:13:956 - 강해보이는 음들인데 슬라이더 꼬리로 표현되니 뭔가 아쉬워요 여기는 괜찮아보여요. 나름 절충해서 찍은 곳
00:31:033 - 00:33:494 - 1/2를 넣을 필요는 없어보이네요. 그렇게 강한 파트도 아닌것같은데 근데 여기 지우면 너무 이지스럽게 바뀔 것 같아서 이대로가 좋은 듯 해요
00:49:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1/2도배가 조금 심해보이는, 굳이 뒷 박자 안 잡아도 되니깐 1/2비트 조금만 빼주세요. 가장 조용한 파트니깐요. 제 의견으로는 이 킥 사운드 파트에 어울리는 리듬은 1/2밖에 없다고 생각해요. 그렇게 못 칠만한 부분도 아니라고 생각하고. 고쳐보려고 노력했지만 서클 하나로만 표현하자니 뭔가 빈 느낌이고, 1/1로 표현하자니 힛사 쪽이 어색하네요.

[Hard]
00:09:033 - 비트 하나 추가해봐요. 좀 더 나을듯. 같은 지적 나오면 고쳐볼께요.
00:10:571 (2,3) - 다른부분 00:13:033 (2,3) - 00:15:494 (2,3) - 00:17:956 (2,3,4) - 00:20:417 (2,3) - etc... 와 비교해볼때 유일하게 점프가 없는 구간인데 일관성에 조금 어긋나지 않을까요? 1->2 사이에 있어서 ㄱㅊ아보임
00:23:802 (1) - 그냥 1/1 슬라 하나만 넣으니 많이 허전해보입니다, 00:21:340 (1,2) - 랑 비슷하게 맞춰봐요 ㅇㅋ
00:28:571 (4) - 얘가 확실히 더 강한 음이잖아요. 강한 음인걸 조금 표현해주셨으면 해요. 점프나 뉴콤이나 ㅇㅋ
00:39:417 - 강한 드럼비트 잇는것 같은데 추가해주시는게? 좀 어려워질 것 같아요
00:56:725 (2) - 뉴콤보, 굳이 안넣으셔도 됩니당 ㅇㅇ. 안 넣어져 있음.
00:58:263 - 여기 드럼비트 있어요 추가해주세요 ㅇㅋ
01:01:802 (1) - 01:03:033 (1) - 이런 강한데 조금 띄워봐요... 여기는 서클이 밀집되어 있어서 그냥 이대로 두는게 낫다고 생각합니다.
01:12:879 (1) - ^ ^
01:32:725 (1) - 게임모드에서 보면 HP바에 오버랩되는데 조금 피해주세요 넹

엑라는 패쓰.

1. 00:58:879 - 00:59:033 -Even if an object was placed in conformity to "LA LA" of the vocal , I thought that it was all right if it was this degree of difficulty .
   If sliders of 1/2 are located, I may be glad for a player!
   
   good map

1. 00:49:648 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It is a personal opinion, but I think the pattern to place a circle in the terminal of the slider not to be kind to a player.
   
2. 00:58:879 (1,1) - I think that I take such a pattern here.
   I thought that such a pattern was good to the utterance of the vocal.
   

1. 00:58:879 (2,1) - swap NC ?
   It is 00:58:879 (2) - to strong in the utterance of the vocal. I think that the one where NC is put from here is faithful to rhythm :3
   
   I can't find other problems . so sorry ;w;

• 
  最初のL O U D E R面白いのでこのままRankedして欲しいです

1. 00:50:571 (2) - ベースとギターの音でリズム作られてると思うのでNCの場所はここが適切じゃないかと思いました ﾃﾞﾃﾞｯ↓ﾍﾟｰ↑
2. 00:52:110 (7) - ^
3. 00:53:033 (2) - ^
   
4. 00:57:033 (4) - ここもリズム切り替わるの分かり易くするためにNCあると嬉しいかもです
   
5. 01:08:956 (4) - スタックするのどうでしょうか？
6. 01:28:648 (6) - ^
   
7. 01:09:033 (5) - 個人的にこの向きよりも左上に上がっていく形の方が自然な流れに見えそうだと思います
   
   IMG

   

1. 00:17:494 (1) - Ctrl+G ?
   
   It was the map which was rhythmical, and was very pleasant
   perfect map xd

1. 00:13:033 - Add circle here .. really strong beat .. and it will follow the rhythm ..
2. 00:18:879 (2) - Here i suggest for you to move the tail of this slider down a bit .. because it's really hard for the newbie to read it
3. 00:33:648 (3,4) - Fix blanket here ..just move the tail a bit downward ..
4. 00:43:187 (2,3) - How about if you make these two sliders like 00:40:725 (2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/8sPb3rU.png .. it would be nice !
5. 00:57:494 (2) - I think you should change the tail of this slider .. cause it's hard to follow one direction .. but if you change it it will make it more easier for example : http://i.imgur.com/QLInOY3.png .. like that i feel it's easier ..
6. 01:01:802 (1,2,3) - Here i feel there is some errors .. how about this ? http://i.imgur.com/gWzZBGH.png ..
7. 01:04:110 (4) - This slider it sounds really off .. how about if you make it start from here 01:04:263 - with finish sound and ends here 01:04:725 -
8. 01:12:110 - Add circle here .. really strong beat too

A s h e m u wrote:

Hi ~ From PM m4m

English : I use google Translation .


Problems were not found to me in Easy and Normal , sry ;w;


Hard

1. 00:58:879 - 00:59:033 -Even if an object was placed in conformity to "LA LA" of the vocal , I thought that it was all right if it was this degree of difficulty .
   If sliders of 1/2 are located, I may be glad for a player! agree
   
   good map

I can't find other problems . so sorry ;w;[/list]

LOUDER

1. 00:17:494 (1) - Ctrl+G ? xD
   
   It was the map which was rhythmical, and was very pleasant
   perfect map xd

Because CTB is out of a specialty, I cannot see it . sorry guys ;w;

so fun map ! good luck :3

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..


General :

* Really good Map No errors

Easy :

* I think you should low the volume on kiai section .. cause the finish sound really load and annoying .. low it to 90% like the other .. i know you want to make it more fun to play .. but tbh it covers the vocal .. I remapped almost every part. maybe it was gotten better now

1. 00:13:033 - Add circle here .. really strong beat .. and it will follow the rhythm .. changed 3/2 slider one
2. 00:18:879 (2) - Here i suggest for you to move the tail of this slider down a bit .. because it's really hard for the newbie to read it changed differently
3. 00:33:648 (3,4) - Fix blanket here ..just move the tail a bit downward .. okay
4. 00:43:187 (2,3) - How about if you make these two sliders like 00:40:725 (2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/8sPb3rU.png .. it would be nice ! changed similarly
5. 00:57:494 (2) - I think you should change the tail of this slider .. cause it's hard to follow one direction .. but if you change it it will make it more easier for example : http://i.imgur.com/QLInOY3.png .. like that i feel it's easier .. yup
6. 01:01:802 (1,2,3) - Here i feel there is some errors .. how about this ? http://i.imgur.com/gWzZBGH.png .. ^
7. 01:04:110 (4) - This slider it sounds really off .. how about if you make it start from here 01:04:263 - with finish sound and ends here 01:04:725 - remapped here
8. 01:12:110 - Add circle here .. really strong beat too ^

Normal and Hard diff are fine to me ..
Good luck on Rank this map

1. 00:25:187 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 삼각형 패턴 하나하나 회전 시켜줘서 삼각형 돌아가는 느낌을 줘도 괜찮았을 것 같아요.

1. 00:17:879 (2) - エクストラだけどこの距離は少しやばいんじゃないですか? At least, making like 00:24:648 (6,7) - 01:23:725 (6,7) - it is better in my opinions.
2. 00:55:187 - 00:56:417 -ここのNCさんたちはいらないそうです.. 代わりに 00:55:802 - 00:57:033 - ここにNCを入れてみてください。
3. 00:58:879 (3) - Can you tell me why you made the distance even bigger than the distance between 00:58:879 (3,1) - here? As you could see the following screenshot, 00:58:879 (3) - is connected as 3/4 from previous object and 00:59:033 (1) - is connected as 1/2 from previous object. According to the distance snap logic, 3/4 should has shorter distance than 1/2. Even though a vocal part is starting from 00:58:879 - here, I think there is nothing to make the distnace big that. How about reduce the distance between 00:58:725 (2,3) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 이건 그냥 제 취향이긴 한데, 01:21:494 - 01:23:956 - 01:26:417 - 이렇게 피니쉬를 자주 넣을 게 아니라 01:28:879 - 이런 곳을 위해 아껴준다면 피니쉬 소리가 더 신나지 않을까 싶어요. 피니쉬 소리가 너무 자주 나니까 살짝 거슬리는 것 같기도 하고..

1. 00:18:571 - I guess you forgot to remove finish the slider of head?

1. 00:18:571 (4) - 머리에 피니쉬 잘못 들어간 것 같아요.
2. 00:42:263 - 일관성을 위해서라면 여기에도 피니쉬가 들어갈 필요가 있을 것 같네요.

Enon wrote:

[Louder]

1. 00:25:187 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 삼각형 패턴 하나하나 회전 시켜줘서 삼각형 돌아가는 느낌을 줘도 괜찮았을 것 같아요. 이거 바꾸면 주변을 전체적으로 다 바꿔야하는데 어떻게 바꿔야할지 답이 안나오네요.. 좋은 아이디어라 고려는 해보겠습니다.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:571 (4) - 머리에 피니쉬 잘못 들어간 것 같아요.
2. 00:42:263 - 일관성을 위해서라면 여기에도 피니쉬가 들어갈 필요가 있을 것 같네요. 18초에 있는걸 뺐어여

제 실력으로는 더 잡을 게 없네요. Good Luck~

gottagof4ast wrote:

NM from my queue

General
Man, these low-res backgrounds -_- I used waifu2x ;w;

LOUDER
00:11:494 (1,2,1,2) - I think you should stray away from the 2x ds here a bit as a player doesn't follow 1/4 sliders all the way through anyway so you get a lot more time to do the jump. The way it is now makes it feel a bit cramped and you also chose different ds for gaps after 1/4 sliders here 00:12:879 (2,3) -
This is just subjective so I am only going to mention it here Dx too strange to play

00:17:340 (7) - stack with 00:17:802 (2) - and not with 00:17:956 (4) - as that just looks weird okay

00:27:494 (1) - stream starts here and not at 00:27:648 (2) - yup

00:42:571 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This jump section feels off beacause it relies on the intensity of the vocals but starts with a drumbeat on 00:42:879 (3) - without vocal, this wasn't that bad in the case of the jumpsection starting here 00:40:417 (3) - as the spacing was a lot smaller okay.
moved starting point about 2 sliders from 00:42:110 here and changed some jump patterns

00:45:340 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it doesn't feel like the song warrants this object density, yes there is a sound on every note but the notes rely on like 4 different sounds (vocals/piano/drum/weird electronic thingy) I don't think this is not good. if I change this jump, before jump is become meanless

00:47:802 (4,5,6) - owo don't like this large spacing into tiny spacing for the same gap Ctrl + Ged 00:48:263 (6) and 00:48:571 (1)

00:52:571 (1,2) - would use similar spacing like at 00:51:033 (1,2,1,2) - decreased 00:51:494 (2,3,4,5,6) here

00:59:187 (1) - no need for NC, there are no important instrumentals or vocals here I want to emphasize that before kiai

01:08:725 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about a curved stream so the flow from the jumpsection into the stream is alot smoother, and oyu can also have nicer circular flow https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/V91Hvdp.png now seems better
01:14:879 (4,5) - you have this nice circular flow from 01:13:648 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - and then you switch to this back and forth -jump, maybe keeping it circular would be better and less unexpected moved to much better to see

01:15:956 (4,5,6) - making the jump smaller by this much looks weird it was not too bad when I playing

01:21:187 (5,6,1) - flow into the slider is pretty bad as you have to make a turn once you get to the sliderhead https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/KC6zRuh.pngnow seems much good

Would have liked to mod more but have to go now
Cool map, especially liked how you represented the guitar with those 1/4's

eINess wrote:

핡짥

[notice][LOUDER]

1. 00:05:033 (5) - 좌표 살짝 위로 올려주시는게 어떨까요? 앞쪽 패턴 밸런스 생각하면 앞뒤 디스턴스 3은 좀 큰거같네요 00:05:187 (6,7,1) - 이 부분 클랩때문에 줄이면 이상해지네요
2. 00:11:802 (1) - 00:14:263 (3) - 00:21:648 (1) - 00:24:110 (1) - 헤드에 들리는 클렙이 커서 서클로 바꿔서 점프 강조하는게 음악상 더 잘 어울릴거같네요. 그러면 01:20:417 이 뒷부분도 다 바꿔야하는데.. 너무 많은 구간을 바꿔야해서 안댈듯.. 지금도 그렇게 큰 문제는 안 보이기도 하구요..
3. 00:14:879 (7) - 반대로 이쪽은 베이스 끄는 소리가 확실히 들리니 1/4로 바꿔주면 좋겠네요. 00:19:802 (10) - 이쪽패턴도 무음 구간 슬라로 처리하셨으니 맞춰서 오버랩 연타말고 스트림연타로 만들어주면 좋을듯 :thinking:
4. 00:16:725 (3,4) - 차라리 2.1.1 / 2.1.1 배치 생각해서 3 4 번 서클 오버랩 푸시는게 어떨까요? 00:17:187 (6,7,1) - 이쪽 점프랑 연결되게 고려해보겠습니다. 겹치는거 풀고 패턴을 어떻게 짤지는 당장 생각이 안나네요..
5. 01:27:187 (6) - 01:27:494 (8) - 이거 저는 플레이 안되서 모르는데 뉴콤박아주는게 더 좋지않아요? 제가 저런거 쓰고 맵텟받으면 꽤 지적이 들어오는편이라서 넹

1시간 반동안한게 이거라니... 핡... 체력이 딸린다...
잠깐 이지 ~ 하드 갭 확인했는데 뭔가 아슬아슬한거같은데 괜찮겠죠? 전 괜찮은거 같은데 흠..

A s h e m u wrote:

Yuria's Insane

1. 00:58:879 (2,1) - swap NC ?
   It is 00:58:879 (2) - to strong in the utterance of the vocal. I think that the one where NC is put from here is faithful to rhythm :3 okay
   
   I can't find other problems . so sorry ;w;

Enon wrote:

[Yuria's Insane]

1. 이건 그냥 제 취향이긴 한데, 01:21:494 - 01:23:956 - 01:26:417 - 이렇게 피니쉬를 자주 넣을 게 아니라 01:28:879 - 이런 곳을 위해 아껴준다면 피니쉬 소리가 더 신나지 않을까 싶어요. 피니쉬 소리가 너무 자주 나니까 살짝 거슬리는 것 같기도 하고.. 다른 난이도에서도 같은 타이밍에 피니쉬를 사용하고 있어서
   괜찮은거 같아요. 앞부분에도 마찬가지구요.

eINess wrote:

[갓갓's Insane]

1. 하... 매핑 너무 잘하셔서 모딩할게없네요. /me run
2. 00:39:802 (1,2,3) - 저는 요런 흐름 자체는 그렇게 추천하지는 않는데... 본인이 좋다면 뭐 제 생각엔 크게 문제는 없는거 같아용.

Yuria wrote:

@scanter 뉴콤 부분좀 대신 고쳐주세용 ;ㅅ;

eINess wrote:

[eLy's Extra]

1. 00:03:648 (1) - idk what you want follow any sound but we can certainly hear better if you make slider's head 00:03:802 - here.
2. 00:09:340 (4,5,6,7) - it seems to have used much distance compared to music.
3. you make stack in 01:08:725 (3,4,5) - KiAi part but no stack in 00:17:494 (1,2,3) - common part. it's not sence I think o_o
4. 00:56:725 (1) - add NC better(?)

A s h e m u wrote:

eLy's Extra

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  最初のL O U D E R面白いのでこのままRankedして欲しいです

1. 00:50:571 (2) - ベースとギターの音でリズム作られてると思うのでNCの場所はここが適切じゃないかと思いました ﾃﾞﾃﾞｯ↓ﾍﾟｰ↑
2. 00:52:110 (7) - ^
3. 00:53:033 (2) - ^
   00:49:648 (1,2) - ここだけNCが入っていたので上記3つにここに合わせました
   
4. 00:57:033 (4) - ここもリズム切り替わるの分かり易くするためにNCあると嬉しいかもです
   done
   
   
5. 01:08:956 (4) - スタックするのどうでしょうか？
6. 01:28:648 (6) - ^
   ん～no changeで
   
7. 01:09:033 (5) - 個人的にこの向きよりも左上に上がっていく形の方が自然な流れに見えそうだと思います
   
   IMG

   
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so fun map ! good luck :3

Enon wrote:

[eLy's Extra]

1. 00:17:879 (2) - エクストラだけどこの距離は少しやばいんじゃないですか? At least, making like 00:24:648 (6,7) - 01:23:725 (6,7) - it is better in my opinions.
   前の状態を忘れてしまったのですが少しは縮めたはず・・・？
   extraなのでこれぐらいなら大丈夫かなぁって思うのですがどうでしょう。
   一旦保留にします！
   
2. 00:55:187 - 00:56:417 -ここのNCさんたちはいらないそうです.. 代わりに 00:55:802 - 00:57:033 - ここにNCを入れてみてください。
   done
   
3. 00:58:879 (3) - Can you tell me why you made the distance even bigger than the distance between 00:58:879 (3,1) - here? As you could see the following screenshot, 00:58:879 (3) - is connected as 3/4 from previous object and 00:59:033 (1) - is connected as 1/2 from previous object. According to the distance snap logic, 3/4 should has shorter distance than 1/2. Even though a vocal part is starting from 00:58:879 - here, I think there is nothing to make the distnace big that. How about reduce the distance between 00:58:725 (2,3) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   3/4 → 1/2 を 1/2 → 3/4 に変えました、ありがとうございます。

제 실력으로는 더 잡을 게 없네요. Good Luck~

-Nitrous wrote:

sorry for replying this late xd
[General]

1. Add these to tags: Aiba Aina 相羽 あいな Akesaka Satomi 明坂 聡美 Endō Yurika 遠藤 ゆりか Kudō Haruka 工藤晴香 Sakuragawa Megu 桜川 めぐ
   Seiyuu names in romaji and Japanese counterpart oki

[Normal]

1. 00:21:648 (5,6,1) - In gameplay or with View > Stacking on, (1) is stacked instead of (6) leaving a not so pretty look. Mind fixing it? This is just me nit picking on the aesthetics. fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:42:879 (3,1) - try moving (1) down a bit to make it look like this: http://puu.sh/wchyl/d0b1a61285.jpg sure

Yeah this is all I got. But I have to say, you really like overlaps and stacking. Sorry for this short mod. it's okay xD

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Gugu

[Louder 2nd favorite LL song]

1. 00:07:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Having the stream separated by 4 little section and increasing the DS is fitting to the song though, but the backward flow between each section is quite weird imo, i think having a tiny jump there will play better while separating them properly okay
   
   :::

   
2. 00:09:956 (3,4) - imo a kickslider or unstacking them fits better, the violin is quite strong sure
3. 00:30:263 (3) - 00:31:494 (3) - 00:32:725 (3) - etc. IDK is it just me but they look very similar and quite misreading imo seems fine here. almost high level players can do this (actually I let test for enon, momoka, etc..)
4. 00:50:110 (3) - I love the combination of SV manipulating slider and blanket, although idk is it rankable to have it manipulating the SV it doesn't matter to play, so I think it is fine. if dumb rules said "please fix it", it can not be helped
5. 00:58:879 (1,1) - I think this rhythm has emphasized the wrong instrument, instead of emphasizing the vocal, the emphasis was landed on 00:59:187 (1) - , which doesn't have a clear note here, removing the note might help seems fine. I think it was emphasized good before kiai.
   nice xD

As for the m4ticket you mentioned on PM, i'll tell you when my set is ready, i just revived one of my set yup

Good luck~

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Gugu

[えり]

1. 00:03:802 (1) - "e"のスライダーアートのため加速して、00:02:879 (2) - と比べて２倍くらいに加速したね、でも、00:03:802 (1) - に強い音がないの場所に強調したから何とか合わないと思いました
   スライダーアートを崩せずにの方はx1.2がいいかな
   　
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2. 00:08:571 (1,2,3) - あまり重要なことがないけど ctrl+g
   　
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3. 00:27:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can't really explain well on this part so i'll use English instead
   The combination of obtuse angle flow + sudden DS decrease on 00:27:340 (8,1,2,3,4) - is quite strange to play, especially 00:27:648 (2,3,4) - gives a tiny pause of the cursor movement , Which when there 2 sudden fast acute angle jumps on 00:27:802 (4,5) - might become forced to play, Finally, 00:28:417 (8) - isn't even visible since the kick slider 00:28:110 (6) - have covered it entirely, giving it no time to read
   The closest pattern that i could think of is this one, but you might need to adjust the pattern later on
   
   :::

   
   提案されたモノはとは違いますが変えました
   　
4. 00:43:956 (4) - そんな突然の緩めたら1/2スライダーに見違るとおもう、00:42:879 (4) - と似るなのに。。。
   　
   changed
   　
5. 00:55:187 (2,1) - ：00:54:571 (1,2) - の1/2gapにスタックしたらここにスタックしない方がいいと思うよ～　
   
   曲調もゆっくりで判断する時間もあると思うのでこのままで。
   　
   まぐろたべたい 生の魚あまり好きじゃないです

As for the m4ticket you mentioned on PM, i'll tell you when my set is ready, i just revived one of my set

Good luck~

Kocari wrote:

Hello from modding queue

Based on my rules I'll be modding diffs you created.

[LOUDER]

00:03:956 - 00:04:033 - These tie together with 00:04:110 (2) - why is this only a single note. I can see it though, I'm pretty sure I know what the reasoning is oops
00:05:340 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Seems to monetary for the highest diff. Doesn't feel like it's impacting enough to just throw the same thing for like 2 full measures with gradual spacing, but hey if you want it that's cool seems fine here
00:07:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Kinda the same with this. The crescendo starts growing deeply at 00:08:417 (1) - yet there is no representation of that, it's just the copy and paste stream pattern. Extra spacing other things would've worked but it's just kept the same as the rest so it feels so useless. nice /o\
00:11:340 (8) - Not sure why spacing is so big here, it's not emphasizing anything strong in particular but for some reason it's just that far spaced out compared to a strong snare beat 00:11:187 (7) - It doesn't make sense because the only thing that was strong or had a change was the 1/4s right after it. reduced here
00:15:033 (1) - The node in the middle feels unnecessary http://puu.sh/wd0kD/4ba1734ad0.jpg Could've achieved the same thing with just using the last one yup
00:29:340 (1) - Can barely see the number but it is a higher difficulty so who knows lol
00:29:802 (4) - Could be a single note, keeps things different from one another, just having all 4 of these sliders back to back with each one having it's own slight sound quirk just feels awkward I've kept 1/4s between 00:28:571 and 00:39:802. now seems better to play just single one that you pointed.
00:56:725 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Haha seems something like Mythol would do lol
Not much to really say to be honest with you, just feels like the other generic mapping style with songs like this. I'm not trying to be bashful but it really does feel like things are thrown in for the purpose of making SR higher for people. As a player when I play it I feel that way. It's not bad but it's just not something that truly represents the song in a way I can look at it and be like damn this was pretty n33t. As far as I am concerned that won't matter in the ranking criteria, so GL. frankly said, I conscious higher SR when I mapped this as you said. there was no other way to make it higher. but I think it worked well with many multiple 1/4s and few nice mechanics. I don't know what will happen afterwards, but players of this map tell us with User rating whether it's good or not. thanks your nice opinion anyway.

Checked your other diffs looks clean enough for my evaluations. I can see this moving out of pending soon. Bring me back the 2013 Polished Scanter,
I've checked all your shit from then makes me feel great. thanks for looked at my shits lol