Asaka - Open your eyes

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Kalibe
Doormat
wake up link

edit: reference to the new zelda game, Breath of the Wild, since the first words when you start the game are literally "open your eyes"
Topic Starter
Karen
hmmm?
EncoreW
女装W H E N

[General]

AudioLeadIn->2000到3000

bg右下角那几个字能不能p掉啊

[Expert]

00:00:260 (1) - 这个转盘应该插几个绿线,因为有一个比较明显的音量从小到大的过程

00:18:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - 虽然是个对称的不过我觉得还是要摆成正五边形

00:21:837 (5) - 00:25:529 (1) - 感觉这个串摆成这样好看点 https://puu.sh/uIP0I/79e1e36965.png

00:38:913 (1) - 00:46:298 (1) - 01:03:144 (1) - 这个whistle听着是真的吵,还是从头到尾的那种音效

00:53:106 (6,7) - stack

00:59:221 (1,2,3) - 感觉flow不是非常顺,感觉可以这样 https://puu.sh/uIPg2/c8f906e581.png

01:18:837 (6,1,2) - flow有点直,01:19:067 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这样子感觉在六七年前的老图里面见的比较多。。

感觉这种图可以抄一波pkk或者0108

[Meg's Extra]

00:00:144 (1) - the same as expert diff, needs some more green line to reflect volume change

00:04:528 (4,4) - i think this two hitsound should be the same, and they are too loud

00:15:374 (5,9,13) - nc

00:16:297 (13,14,15,16) - ds, 1.11-1.16-1.05 looks bad for obsession

00:59:913 (5,8,11,13) - nc, 01:03:144 (14) - nc if necessary

01:22:066 (7,8) - it can separate from this stream, because a new vocal start, so this two note use a different specing looking nice

01:34:297 (1) - you freaking genius this is my knee

[Hard]

00:00:259 (1) - 和主难度一样需要绿线

00:32:913 (7) - 这音效太几把响了

00:38:913 (1) - 00:46:297 (1) - 挖槽这音效听着真的跟猫抓墙一样难受能不能换掉啊

01:01:067 (1) - 拆成两个

01:19:528 (1) - 一个finish的音效怎么用成clap

01:34:297 (1) - 这段感觉还是主跟vocal 好一点。。 https://puu.sh/uIQSD/5b1757d695.png

[Normal]

00:00:259 (1) - 绿线

这么多年过去了你怎么还在做几把呀
strickluke
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9

anime is a sin

nice map though
Kashima

strickluke wrote:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9

anime is a sin

nice map though
6 7-8 9
i think it is "six sev-eight nine".
Mombei
Hi, from #modreqs :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:144 (3,4) - It is generally agreed that overlapping an hitcircle with a sliderbody can be confusing and aesthetically unpleasing, especially in lower difficulties, so I suggest you flip 4 horizontally and blanket it with 3, like this
  2. 00:54:605 (4) - Hitclap sounds out of place, keep the hitfinish
  3. 01:06:144 (2) - Hitclap missing
  4. 01:19:528 (1) - Switch hitfinish for an hitclap


Solid diff

[Normal]
  1. According to the ranking criteria, you should Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. This diff has plenty of overlaps (00:03:836 (1,2) - 00:05:682 (4,5) - 00:07:528 (1,2) - 00:09:374 (4,5,6) - 00:10:528 (6,1) - 00:12:605 (3,4) - 00:14:451 (6,1) - 00:16:297 (2,1) - 00:17:682 (2,3,1) - 00:19:528 (2,3) - 00:20:220 (3,4) - 00:23:220 (2,3) - 00:23:913 (3,4) - 00:24:605 (4,5) - 00:25:759 (6,1) - 00:26:913 (2,3) - 00:27:605 (3,4) - 00:30:605 (2,3) - 00:31:297 (3,4) - 00:31:990 (4,5) - 00:36:144 (6,7,1) - 00:43:528 (4,5,1) - 00:49:067 (2,3) - 00:50:913 (5,1) - 00:52:759 (2,3) - 00:54:605 (4,1) - 00:58:759 (6,1) - 01:05:682 (2,3,4) - 01:07:528 (5,6,1) - 01:09:374 (2,3,4) - 01:11:682 (6,1) - 01:13:067 (2,3,4) - 01:14:913 (5,6,1) - 01:16:759 (2,3,4) - 01:18:374 (5,6,7) - 01:19:528 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:374 (5,6,7,8) - 01:25:990 (4,5,1) - 01:27:836 (2,3,4) - 01:29:682 (5,6,1) - 01:31:528 (2,3,1) - 01:33:144 (2,3) - 01:34:067 (4,1) - 01:34:759 (2,3,4,5) - 01:36:605 (6,7,8,1) - ). Resnap everything with a higher Distance Snap.


I can't say anything else about this diff that wouldn't change because of the resnapping, so it would be pointless.

[Hard]
  1. 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - You may not want to emphasize through spacing a sound that is, in fact, not important.
  2. 00:23:682 (4) - This is an important sound you might want to emphasize through spacing instead
  3. 00:37:067 (1) - This looks just.. just even it out like this
  4. Look for similiar inconsistencies across the difficulty. Now that you understood what an error looks like, you should be able to fix the rest of the diff without the need for me to point out each instance. We're trying to make you better along with the map.


Nice diff, liked hitsounds

[Kinomi's Insane]
  1. Uh... okay, so, uhm.. there's a little too much 1/4 filler which is completely uncalled for. This map is overmapped and overdone without a justification by the song's intensity. The person who mapped this probably has some sort of experience with the editor but there is a complete lack of understanding of the mapping theory here, so i'll have to point out all mistakes.
  2. The following notes don't exist; 00:04:759 (5) (should be like this) - 00:06:028 (2) - 00:06:605 (4) - 00:06:951 (6) (should only have a note on 00:07:067 ) - 00:07:874 (2) - 00:08:452 (4) (but there should be a note on the red tick where the slider tail currently is) - 00:08:797 (5) - 00:11:567 (3) (while there should be one @ 00:12:028 ) - 00:12:490 (6)
  3. 00:08:682 (4,5,1) - This is terrible rhythm structure. You should either follow the background snares and make it like this Or emphasize all vocals and only use hitcircles. The way it currently is just makes no sense and doesn't have any reasoning to back it up
  4. 00:13:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is no change in intensity whatsoever, what is this difficulty spike? Normalize spacing. Also, I'm sure there's a way better rhythm choice than hitcircles here, especially considering there aren't even vocals on all beats.
  5. 00:14:913 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The jump between 00:16:067 (3,4) is unjustified. Plus, this is supposed to be an Insane, not an Expert. Make more complex patterns, but do please restrain yourself with random jumps for added SR
  6. 00:18:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah, I'm not doing this. SV changes are used inconsistently and without any sort of introduction to let the players know what's going on, and there are cross screen jumps all over the place. Normalize SV and fix this mess
  7. 00:35:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These are all the extact same sound, why is there a jump between 2 and 3?
  8. 00:36:605 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - This is not how you emphasize through spacing. 1 is not on a snare. 1's sound is not more important than all other sounds. And the jump from one doesn't make any sense. If you really want to put jumps here, try to emphasize the drums on 00:35:682 (2,4,6,7,1) (Which was already loosely done for 00:36:144 (4) with that jump, but i'm sure it's unintentional)
  9. 00:43:067 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Poor spacing escalation. No intensity change, no difficulty spike.


Need I actually say more? The map repeats the same mistakes throughout the second half. Overmapped and overdone (mostly overdone, the overmapping stops after the second half). I trust you can understand basic pattern recognition to aid yourself.

[Meg's Extra]
  1. This, instead, is a wonderful map. Here 1/4 filler makes sense and the map is built around it. I'd like to say "You are not Hanzer", but it doesn't really apply here. I believe the map plays fine, so i'll just point out some aethetic improvements that could be done.
  2. 00:12:374 (7,8,9,1) - The flow here goes up and down into the next slider, except for 9 > 1. You should try an arrangement that doesn't change the way the cursor moves drastically, but just enhances the amount of movement. This is a rough example. It sucks, but the general idea is that you keep the movement the same but enhance the amount of movement from 9 > 1 instead of changing the direction entirely
  3. 00:14:220 (7,8,9) - same
  4. 01:07:759 (7,8,9) - This could just use an aesthetic overhaul, it flows fine but it doesn't look good. I suggest this arrangement.
  5. 01:13:297 (7,8,9) - This, on the other hand, looks good but doesn't flow well. The arrangement is fine, just space them further apart so 9 > 1 doesn't feel so jarring.
  6. Apply these same suggestions wherever you may see fit



Very very very neat map, definitely fun to play and a wonderful display of mapping mastery

[Expert]
  1. 00:10:529 (1,2,3) - You're right trying to emphasize these notes, but the previous 3>1 plays awkwardly. You should try something that follows circular flow, like this (You may rearrange the patterns to look more complementary as you see fit)
  2. 00:18:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this into a perfect pentagon with the Create Polygon function
  3. 00:18:952 (2,3,4,1) - 2>3 is fine for emphasis, but 4>1 shouldn't have the same emphasis, since 1 doesn't have a snare. Just move 1 a bit closer to 4
  4. 00:23:106 (4,1) - 00:26:798 (4,1) - same
  5. 00:40:760 (1,2,3,4) - You may space hitcircles with snares further apart for emphasis so that you map doesn't end up feeling monotonous
  6. 00:59:221 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd nerf this a bit since even though the intensity is changing in the background, you aren't really following that rhythm (you're following vocals)
  7. 01:06:144 (3) - Missing hitclap
  8. 01:19:067 (1,2,1,2) - Concept is ok, execution is not. Stack leniency makes this horrible to play, try rearranging it like this. Any variation of that should be fine, just don't make those 1/4 spaced jumps overlap for the love of God
  9. 01:25:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The first 1 to 4 should be 2 points of the hexagon you're drawing, and the second one could use some polishing. The end product should look like this


This was was actually pretty ok, well done.




This will be all. I hope I was of help. Cheers :)
Doormat
Kinomi
挖出来坟掉
Topic Starter
Karen

Kinomi wrote:

挖出来坟掉
好 挖
Kashima
Expert

00:03:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 梗不一致..?
00:08:913 (4) - 感觉用2个单点比较好 00:09:837 (2,3) - 这里用滑条
00:16:298 (1,2) - wa 不对称
00:30:606 (3,4,5) - 这22之间间距不一样..有意的还是..?
00:38:913 (1) - 这长哨音很怪
00:38:913 (1,2,3) - emmmm https://puu.sh/wqyAU/2a768d5bef.png
00:49:413 (5,6) - 和上面差不多的问题^
00:53:106 (6,7) - 没叠好 关掉堆叠很明显
01:37:298 (1,2,3) - ^

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Meg's extra
00:23:451 (6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8403014 that shape
01:21:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can map something more interesting than a 1/4 stream,since there is no other stream like this in your diff.

wow,my type :)

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Kinomi's insane

00:08:913 (7,1) - 这里用折返带过不合适 跟Vocal比较好 这对称也有点强行梗的感觉
00:10:297 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - 强行跳的感觉..这里值得下跳的音只有00:10:528 (3,4,5,1) - 可以考虑作为一组来摆梗
.....

摸不动 跳的很奇怪 也许该改成extra diff...

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Doormat's Light insane

nothing to mod.

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done
tutuhaha
统一关一下widescreen support好了_(:зゝ∠)_
[Easy]
这个diff的绿线都不在线上啊.....
00:00:144 (1) - 我个人会觉得这个spinner从这里开始然后00:02:451结束比较好,毕竟easy_(:зゝ∠)_
00:32:913 (4) - +个whistle?
00:38:913 (3) - 00:46:297 (3) - 这俩slider的结尾下点明显的音效我觉得会比较好
00:50:913 (4) - 这个直接拉到长白线结尾比较好
01:06:144 (2) - clap?
01:37:297 (3) - 尾巴上加个whistle?
音效的话要是加了其他diff也记得加上,恩_(:зゝ∠)_

[Normal]
00:08:682 (3) - 往下移一点儿
00:32:451 (5) - 结尾的音效太弱了...

[Doormat's Light Insane]
01:34:065 (4) - unsnap

[Kinomi's Insane]
烤老板的这个diff没hitsound '-'

[Expert]
01:04:760 (1) - kiai木有对齐时间轴

高难度个人风格都十分强烈...不敢瞎几把摸
加油了!
Meg
karen didn't tell me got some mods
:cry::cry::cry::cry:
Topic Starter
Karen

Meg wrote:

karen didn't tell me got some mods
:cry::cry::cry::cry:
i'll tell you to reply to mods when i'm not lazy to rank this :(
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Karen

Speechless wrote:

[General]

AudioLeadIn->2000到3000 不需要

bg右下角那几个字能不能p掉啊 不能

[Expert]

00:00:260 (1) - 这个转盘应该插几个绿线,因为有一个比较明显的音量从小到大的过程 最后都静音了 中间插线不好

00:18:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - 虽然是个对称的不过我觉得还是要摆成正五边形 00:18:490 (4,1) - 这里要跳

00:21:837 (5) - 00:25:529 (1) - 感觉这个串摆成这样好看点 https://puu.sh/uIP0I/79e1e36965.png 00:22:183 (8,1) - 这里要跳

00:38:913 (1) - 00:46:298 (1) - 01:03:144 (1) - 这个whistle听着是真的吵,还是从头到尾的那种音效

00:53:106 (6,7) - stack

00:59:221 (1,2,3) - 感觉flow不是非常顺,感觉可以这样 https://puu.sh/uIPg2/c8f906e581.png 不喜欢叠,00:59:221 (1,2,3,4) - 这一整个是对称

01:18:837 (6,1,2) - flow有点直,01:19:067 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这样子感觉在六七年前的老图里面见的比较多。。 明明是自己独创的jb

感觉这种图可以抄一波pkk或者0108



[Hard]

00:00:259 (1) - 和主难度一样需要绿线 ^

00:32:913 (7) - 这音效太几把响了

00:38:913 (1) - 00:46:297 (1) - 挖槽这音效听着真的跟猫抓墙一样难受能不能换掉啊 不能

01:01:067 (1) - 拆成两个 能一个为什么要两个

01:19:528 (1) - 一个finish的音效怎么用成clap

01:34:297 (1) - 这段感觉还是主跟vocal 好一点。。 https://puu.sh/uIQSD/5b1757d695.png 这里跟vocal后面难放了01:35:451 (5,6,7) -

[Normal]

00:00:259 (1) - 绿线

这么多年过去了你怎么还在做几把呀

Mombei wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:144 (3,4) - It is generally agreed that overlapping an hitcircle with a sliderbody can be confusing and aesthetically unpleasing, especially in lower difficulties, so I suggest you flip 4 horizontally and blanket it with 3, like this
  2. 00:54:605 (4) - Hitclap sounds out of place, keep the hitfinish why finish? no such sound in the music
  3. 01:19:528 (1) - Switch hitfinish for an hitclap


Solid diff

[Normal]
  1. According to the ranking criteria, you should Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. This diff has plenty of overlaps (00:03:836 (1,2) - 00:05:682 (4,5) - 00:07:528 (1,2) - 00:09:374 (4,5,6) - 00:10:528 (6,1) - 00:12:605 (3,4) - 00:14:451 (6,1) - 00:16:297 (2,1) - 00:17:682 (2,3,1) - 00:19:528 (2,3) - 00:20:220 (3,4) - 00:23:220 (2,3) - 00:23:913 (3,4) - 00:24:605 (4,5) - 00:25:759 (6,1) - 00:26:913 (2,3) - 00:27:605 (3,4) - 00:30:605 (2,3) - 00:31:297 (3,4) - 00:31:990 (4,5) - 00:36:144 (6,7,1) - 00:43:528 (4,5,1) - 00:49:067 (2,3) - 00:50:913 (5,1) - 00:52:759 (2,3) - 00:54:605 (4,1) - 00:58:759 (6,1) - 01:05:682 (2,3,4) - 01:07:528 (5,6,1) - 01:09:374 (2,3,4) - 01:11:682 (6,1) - 01:13:067 (2,3,4) - 01:14:913 (5,6,1) - 01:16:759 (2,3,4) - 01:18:374 (5,6,7) - 01:19:528 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:374 (5,6,7,8) - 01:25:990 (4,5,1) - 01:27:836 (2,3,4) - 01:29:682 (5,6,1) - 01:31:528 (2,3,1) - 01:33:144 (2,3) - 01:34:067 (4,1) - 01:34:759 (2,3,4,5) - 01:36:605 (6,7,8,1) - ). Resnap everything with a higher Distance Snap.
    overlaps are even fine in Easy diffs


I can't say anything else about this diff that wouldn't change because of the resnapping, so it would be pointless.

[Hard]
  1. 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - You may not want to emphasize through spacing a sound that is, in fact, not important. it's i m p o r t a n t
  2. 00:23:682 (4) - This is an important sound you might want to emphasize through spacing instead i don't emphasize drums otherwise i'd have to make every 2|4 note a jump
  3. 00:37:067 (1) - This looks just.. just even it out like this it's my aes
  4. Look for similiar inconsistencies across the difficulty. Now that you understood what an error looks like, you should be able to fix the rest of the diff without the need for me to point out each instance. We're trying to make you better along with the map.


Nice diff, liked hitsounds

[Expert]
  1. 00:10:529 (1,2,3) - You're right trying to emphasize these notes, but the previous 3>1 plays awkwardly. You should try something that follows circular flow, like this (You may rearrange the patterns to look more complementary as you see fit) these are for vocals i guess? 3+3
  2. 00:18:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this into a perfect pentagon with the Create Polygon function i want to make 00:18:490 (4,1) - this a jump
  3. 00:18:952 (2,3,4,1) - 2>3 is fine for emphasis, but 4>1 shouldn't have the same emphasis, since 1 doesn't have a snare. Just move 1 a bit closer to 4
  4. 00:23:106 (4,1) - 00:26:798 (4,1) - same
  5. 00:40:760 (1,2,3,4) - You may space hitcircles with snares further apart for emphasis so that you map doesn't end up feeling monotonous i like mapping calm parts with simple patterns, it makes the map more interesting and not feel like jumps everywhere
  6. 00:59:221 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd nerf this a bit since even though the intensity is changing in the background, you aren't really following that rhythm (you're following vocals) it's an intense part before the kiai i think it's ok
  7. 01:06:144 (3) - Missing hitclap
  8. 01:19:067 (1,2,1,2) - Concept is ok, execution is not. Stack leniency makes this horrible to play, try rearranging it like this. Any variation of that should be fine, just don't make those 1/4 spaced jumps overlap for the love of God your suggestion looks too hard, the pattern isn't hard as you think
  9. 01:25:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The first 1 to 4 should be 2 points of the hexagon you're drawing, and the second one could use some polishing. The end product should look like this why should i draw a circle?


This was was actually pretty ok, well done.




This will be all. I hope I was of help. Cheers :)

Kashima wrote:

Expert

00:03:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 梗不一致..? 节奏一致就没事
00:08:913 (4) - 感觉用2个单点比较好 00:09:837 (2,3) - 这里用滑条 单点就不能跟00:08:683 (3) - 这个分开了
00:16:298 (1,2) - wa 不对称 开stacking
00:30:606 (3,4,5) - 这22之间间距不一样..有意的还是..?
00:38:913 (1) - 这长哨音很怪 还好吧
00:38:913 (1,2,3) - emmmm https://puu.sh/wqyAU/2a768d5bef.png
00:49:413 (5,6) - 和上面差不多的问题^
00:53:106 (6,7) - 没叠好 关掉堆叠很明显
01:37:298 (1,2,3) - ^


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done

tutuhaha wrote:

统一关一下widescreen support好了_(:зゝ∠)_
[Easy]
这个diff的绿线都不在线上啊.....
00:00:144 (1) - 我个人会觉得这个spinner从这里开始然后00:02:451结束比较好,毕竟easy_(:зゝ∠)_ 转盘后面物件要隔4白线所以
00:32:913 (4) - +个whistle? 没那个啥特殊音不加了
00:38:913 (3) - 00:46:297 (3) - 这俩slider的结尾下点明显的音效我觉得会比较好
00:50:913 (4) - 这个直接拉到长白线结尾比较好 想跟00:49:067 (2) - 这个一样
01:06:144 (2) - clap?
01:37:297 (3) - 尾巴上加个whistle? 最后渐出了就算了吧
音效的话要是加了其他diff也记得加上,恩_(:зゝ∠)_

[Normal]
00:08:682 (3) - 往下移一点儿 嗯?没必要啊
00:32:451 (5) - 结尾的音效太弱了... 有hitnormal还好吧...

Thanks for mods!
Naitoshi
hai hai
I mod your mapset Karen

[General]
boof
01:37:990 - this song is unrankable, she skipped eight.

[Extreme]
00:47:221 (2) - I suppose this is supposed to complement the aesthetics of the slider? You should move this 2px upward :>
00:47:221 (2,4) - also, you put finishes on these sounds before, but this is more of a transition moment, so I'm not sure if intentional or not.
00:52:644 (4,5) - I see it was part of a 120degree pattern, but not equilateral. It doesn't matter much, but if you wanted to make it that way you can move 4 to 144,155 and 5 to 236,156. If you do that 00:53:682 (1) - will have to be moved to keep the stack and 00:54:144 (2) - will have to be moved to compensate for the spacing change ofc.
01:03:374 - 01:03:605 - 01:03:836 - 01:04:067 - uh, idk what you were going for with these volume changes, but that's not how you change the volume mid-slider. As they are now, they will affect the ticks only. If you want to change the whistle on the slider you have to alternate samplesets
This will give it a fade out sound if that's what you wanted on it.
01:36:837 (5,6,1,2) - I noticed that previously you emphasized the count-up vocals with sliders and then changed the rhythm as the drums built up. This suggestion may be a bit mainstream and naitoshistupid, but maybe you could keep that idea and see what kind of interesting things you could do with the combinations of the rhythms given that there is a drum build-up: ofc, the combination of the ideas is 1/4 slider spam starting with 01:36:606 (4) - lol
01:37:990 (1) - you should make the head a drum sampleset for a more "impacto" (I feel a soft-normal ending at the end is kinda bleh. This applies to the diffs that inherit these sounds too ofc.

[Meg's Extra]
01:02:913 (13,14) - I think you should really nc somewhere here lol
01:19:528 - normal addition claps stand out a looot, I recommend lowering the volume of this part at least by 20% until you get back to 01:26:913 - They are a bit jarring @-@
01:37:644 (1) - I'm 90% sure she never says 8, but this idea is awesome lmao.

[Kinomi's Insane]
This is definitely the hardest difficulty. Intresting high-spacing style
It's my preference, but you should change hp to 6 qq
00:16:759 (1,1) - the high-spacing is interesting, but this seems jarring. To me it seems like it is just baaaarely too far upwards to feel good to hit. Maybe move to 115,78 ?
00:26:913 (1) - ctrl g? I like both versions of it, but I feel that it would have a more natural play if the head was on the other side. and I think the set up for sliders pointing in the same direction is cooler 00:26:913 (1,2) - lol 00:30:836 (2,3) -
00:31:644 (1) - bzz I just miss things after this. The difference of intensity (spacing and slider velocity) is too great to have such a low spacing from a repeat to a circle into another fast slider. It just feels so awkward. Plus, the song is building up, I don't think you should be losing cursor momentum for the sake of a three circle line thing, so maybe move it to stack it with the head of 00:30:605 (1) - ? (379,235)
01:03:144 (2,3) - I think the slider head isn't really mapped to anything. Maybe put in just a long slider instead? You can make it similar to how these two are placed 01:01:990 (1,2) -
01:03:894 (1) - ai mod says this is illegal... and this is illegal lol (spinner isn't long enough, and you may not have much space anyway)
01:14:797 - I don't see why you'd skip this sound when it was mapped previously consistently
01:16:644 - you map it here though. It is a different rhythm though
01:37:990 - you should probably turn kiai off here so ai mod won't complain about it
KAREN, KINOMI, SOMEONE HITSOUND THIS DIFF DAMMIT


[Doormat's Light]
01:34:065 (4) - ai mod says this is an ugly duckling :<

[Normal]
00:40:067 - the repeat here makes for kind of a dull rhythm. I guess the suggestion is to do anything you can to further emphasize the white ticks 00:39:836 - 00:40:297 - with a different rhythm like or or It's just kind of a "big" moment and I feel can be better emphasized with something a bit more interactive. 00:47:220 (4) - would apply here too.
01:21:374 (5) - broke ds zd
Mir
hi /me collects another ticket

[General]
od things for meg and your extra maybe make meg's 7.5? or yours 8.5?
lower ar could work for normal?

rest okay

metadata link somewhere would be good for future reference

[Kinomi's Insane]
Kiai requires and end point. 01:38:336 - or 01:37:990 - will do.

- 00:04:644 (4,5) - Not too much a fan of this rhythm, might be better to ctrl+g so you get the vocals all clickable.
- 00:05:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite high density here for the intro? Maybe remove some 1/4 since it's super quiet already.. like 00:07:413 (9) - or something.
- 00:08:913 (7) - End of this is really strong and might play nicer clickable. Try making slider + circle?
- 00:11:220 (1) - Feels lacking in terms of emphasis. Could be spaced more obviously like this maybe?
- 00:13:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What are these following exactly? There's quite obvious 1/1 emphasis but these jumps don't really show that or even follow it rhythmically. The vocals on 00:14:220 (6,7,8) - that come in get no emphasis at all since you didn't map the previous 5 circles with more sliders. It all feels the same and the song isn't doing that. :?
- 00:22:182 (1,2) - Swap NC? // 00:31:297 (4,1) -
- 00:33:836 (2,3,4) - Stack view :(http://i.imgur.com/UCy4gAg.png can you fix overlap?
- 00:56:220 (1,2,3) - I don't think these are all symmetrical so maybe adjust it?
- 01:00:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems a bit excessive spacing-wise, maybe something like this would be less diff-spikey?
- 01:03:894 (1) - Too fast, not enough time to actually realize there's a spinner there. Would recommend removing it especially since you started it on a yellow tick :l
- 01:05:220 (2,3,4) - Spaced 3 here but not 01:07:067 (2,3,4) - why exactly? To me the song sounds pretty similar so I would think you'd space the 3 here too.
- 01:14:220 (2,3,4) - What happened to the rhythm of 01:12:605 (2,3,4,5) - ? There's still the da da dadaaaa sound or something here :? and with 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's different again..
- 01:19:067 (3,4) - Could be an actual stream because there's more 1/4 drums here than 01:18:605 (1,2) - and it would be cool to differentiate them.

A lot of inconsistencies in rhythm to be fixed and looked at, especially in the kiais. The visuals are also kinda meh like 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - for example I can't really see a pattern here it just looks like random sliders. Rhythms sometimes feel very weird to play like 01:06:605 (1) - skips a beat on 01:06:836 - but 01:08:451 (1) - doesn't then 01:15:836 (1) - does and it's really confusing to what you're trying to follow. 01:16:759 (4,5) - As well skips a really loud vocal on 01:16:990 - :/

As for 01:24:605 (4,5) - you skip 01:24:836 - when you could have just done this to keep consistency with following drums/vocals.

Overall this diff needs some more work before it can be pushed to rank imo.

[Meg's Extra]
- 01:02:913 (13) - NC? xD

The kiai rhythm confuses me because I'm not really sure what you're going for with things like 01:08:682 (2,3,4,5,6) - which have the same musical rhythm as 01:06:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet are mapped completely differently? 01:09:605 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - 01:21:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also don't hear this much 1/4 in the song, in fact the song is fairly devoid of 1/4 in this part. 01:23:682 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seems to just ignore the song because there's vocals going on but they're not emphasized through either spacing, rhythm, or flow. If you wanted to emphasize vocals something should be done with 01:24:144 (5) - and 01:24:836 (8) - but nothing really is done and just 1/4 sliders are slapped over all the sounds.

- 01:37:644 (1) - Also there's no 8 in the lyrics, that's -ven from se-ven so :?

[Extreme]
- 00:16:297 (1) - This has the same quad that 00:15:375 (1,2,3,4) - has so maybe use a reverse slider to represent it if you want to keep vocals in focus?
- 00:18:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is a weird pentagon.. did you run out of space? If you moved it down you could make it more star-shaped.

I think the rest is okay.

Good luck!
Meg

Naitoshi wrote:

[Meg's Extra]
01:02:913 (13,14) - I think you should really nc somewhere here lol
:arrow:ok
01:19:528 - normal addition claps stand out a looot, I recommend lowering the volume of this part at least by 20% until you get back to 01:26:913 - They are a bit jarring @-@
:arrow:i agree that is loud, but this part should be emphasized so no problem imo
01:37:644 (1) - I'm 90% sure she never says 8, but this idea is awesome lmao.
:arrow:i can hear "eight", actually it's written in official lyrics.

Mir wrote:

hi /me collects another ticket

[General]

[Meg's Extra]
- 01:02:913 (13) - NC? xD
:arrow:ok

The kiai rhythm confuses me because I'm not really sure what you're going for with things like 01:08:682 (2,3,4,5,6) - which have the same musical rhythm as 01:06:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet are mapped completely differently? 01:09:605 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - 01:21:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also don't hear this much 1/4 in the song, in fact the song is fairly devoid of 1/4 in this part. 01:23:682 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seems to just ignore the song because there's vocals going on but they're not emphasized through either spacing, rhythm, or flow. If you wanted to emphasize vocals something should be done with 01:24:144 (5) - and 01:24:836 (8) - but nothing really is done and just 1/4 sliders are slapped over all the sounds.
:arrow:in this map, I wanted to express the song with various patterns. "same rhythms but different patterns"? it doesn't matter. i can't understand the reason why consistency is important so much. and at least, i made consistency 01:08:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:16:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:30:836 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - on same beats. no changed the pointing out. but i changed 01:24:374 - here.

- 01:37:644 (1) - Also there's no 8 in the lyrics, that's -ven from se-ven so :?
:arrow:there is "eight" in official lyrics. Don't you feel weird that countdown without "eight"?
LYRICS HERE


ty naitoshi and mir
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Kinomi
[Kinomi's Insane]
This is definitely the hardest difficulty. Intresting high-spacing style
It's my preference, but you should change hp to 6 qq
00:16:759 (1,1) - the high-spacing is interesting, but this seems jarring. To me it seems like it is just baaaarely too far upwards to feel good to hit. Maybe move to 115,78 ?
00:26:913 (1) - ctrl g? I like both versions of it, but I feel that it would have a more natural play if the head was on the other side. and I think the set up for sliders pointing in the same direction is cooler 00:26:913 (1,2) - lol 00:30:836 (2,3) -
00:31:644 (1) - bzz I just miss things after this. The difference of intensity (spacing and slider velocity) is too great to have such a low spacing from a repeat to a circle into another fast slider. It just feels so awkward. Plus, the song is building up, I don't think you should be losing cursor momentum for the sake of a three circle line thing, so maybe move it to stack it with the head of 00:30:605 (1) - ? (379,235)
01:03:144 (2,3) - I think the slider head isn't really mapped to anything. Maybe put in just a long slider instead? You can make it similar to how these two are placed 01:01:990 (1,2) -
01:03:894 (1) - ai mod says this is illegal... and this is illegal lol (spinner isn't long enough, and you may not have much space anyway)
01:14:797 - I don't see why you'd skip this sound when it was mapped previously consistently
01:16:644 - you map it here though. It is a different rhythm though
01:37:990 - you should probably turn kiai off here so ai mod won't complain about it
KAREN, KINOMI, SOMEONE HITSOUND THIS DIFF DAMMIT

all fixed
[Kinomi's Insane]
Kiai requires and end point. 01:38:336 - or 01:37:990 - will do. OK

- 00:04:644 (4,5) - Not too much a fan of this rhythm, might be better to ctrl+g so you get the vocals all clickable. changed
- 00:05:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite high density here for the intro? Maybe remove some 1/4 since it's super quiet already.. like 00:07:413 (9) - or something. changed
- 00:08:913 (7) - End of this is really strong and might play nicer clickable. Try making slider + circle? changed
- 00:11:220 (1) - Feels lacking in terms of emphasis. Could be spaced more obviously like this maybe? changed
- 00:13:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What are these following exactly? There's quite obvious 1/1 emphasis but these jumps don't really show that or even follow it rhythmically. The vocals on 00:14:220 (6,7,8) - that come in get no emphasis at all since you didn't map the previous 5 circles with more sliders. It all feels the same and the song isn't doing that. :?changed, i wanted to make it easy to play, now i find that its not necessary to do that.
- 00:22:182 (1,2) - Swap NC? // 00:31:297 (4,1) - ok
- 00:33:836 (2,3,4) - Stack view :(http://i.imgur.com/UCy4gAg.png can you fix overlap? k
- 00:56:220 (1,2,3) - I don't think these are all symmetrical so maybe adjust it? symmetrical pattern with different flow, i think its ok, actually there are different ways to present one part of music, we need not to do every thing (patterns, spacing , flow, rhythm, etc..) to show the differences, just use one or two ways in map is fine.
- 01:00:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems a bit excessive spacing-wise, maybe something like this would be less diff-spikey? ok
- 01:03:894 (1) - Too fast, not enough time to actually realize there's a spinner there. Would recommend removing it especially since you started it on a yellow tick :l deleted
- 01:05:220 (2,3,4) - Spaced 3 here but not 01:07:067 (2,3,4) - why exactly? To me the song sounds pretty similar so I would think you'd space the 3 here too. changed
- 01:14:220 (2,3,4) - What happened to the rhythm of 01:12:605 (2,3,4,5) - ? There's still the da da dadaaaa sound or something here :? and with 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's different again.. changed
- 01:19:067 (3,4) - Could be an actual stream because there's more 1/4 drums here than 01:18:605 (1,2) - and it would be cool to differentiate them. keep it, personally i don't like stream

A lot of inconsistencies in rhythm to be fixed and looked at, especially in the kiais. The visuals are also kinda meh like 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - for example I can't really see a pattern here it just looks like random sliders. Rhythms sometimes feel very weird to play like 01:06:605 (1) - skips a beat on 01:06:836 - but 01:08:451 (1) - doesn't then 01:15:836 (1) - does and it's really confusing to what you're trying to follow. 01:16:759 (4,5) - As well skips a really loud vocal on 01:16:990 - :/

As for 01:24:605 (4,5) - you skip 01:24:836 - when you could have just done this to keep consistency with following drums/vocals.

i just want to emphasize drums, so i just need simplest flow at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you have any ideas to make it more interesting i'm happy to see that.


i never forced following any vocal, and its unnecessary, people can easily ignore vocal when playing. So we can just use the change of the flow or the sliderspeed to show them.
and, it's impossible to follow all things in a song, sometimes we have to give up something to make the map not filled with notes and same patterns, hope you can understand.

thanks for mod
other mods had been checked and fixed by karen.
i will add some hitsounds later
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