1. Easy (1,75 stars, 76 notes)
2. Haneii's Normal (3,58 stars, 126 notes)
3. Hard (4,46 stars, 163 notes)
4. Insane (4,93 stars, 215 notes)
5. Ozzy's Taiko (4,81 stars, 304 notes)

Lanttu wrote:

Sliderslide sounds very loud during the beginning, maybe add a custom silent sliderslide to the part before the break? :3
Also, more hitsounds would also sound really great before the kiai, maybe more whistles~? Do not know how to silence the sliders >.>

[Easy]
01:01:991 (2) - Add finish?
01:03:896 (2) - ^
01:04:610 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 01:08:419?
01:16:991 (3) - Add finish?
01:18:896 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:01:515 (4 end) - Add finish?
01:03:420 (4 end) - ^
01:16:753 (2 end) - ^
01:18:657 (2 end) - ^

[Insane]
01:01:515 (4 end) - ...Yeah, all same sliders in this diff too, add finish?

Sorry for a pretty useless modding, can't find anything bad about this. Great map, have a star<3

swish wrote:

modding
All Suggestion

SPOILER

[General]

1. 320kbps... unrankable
   use this? 192kbps http://puu.sh/2inz (No need change to offset)
2. delete.osb and fullsubmit
   
   [Easy]
   
3. 01:17:467 (x) - add note and clap?
4. 01:19:372 (x) - ^
   
   [Hard]
   
5. 01:00:324 (x) - add note?
6. 01:02:229 (x) - ^
7. 01:04:134 (x) - ^

good~ star

vivere wrote:

Hola :>

[Easy]:

• Approach Rate: -1 o -2, como mas te guste, ya que en 3 lo veo dificil... imo xD No, se cierran muy lento D:

00:14:134- Movelo 1 grid a la izquiera porque esta separado del 3 =P Oh shit, no le digas a nadie xD
01:29:848 (4, 5)- Recomiendo que a estas dos notas las cambies por un slider, ya que puede hacer que mayoria de los payers nuevos se equivoquen >.<. Ya lo tenia en cuenta, pero es como para acentuar esa parte.

[Hard]:

01:08:896- Pon una nota aqui sobre el slider? se ve muy bien asi... imo :> En esa parte sigue la voz no el instrumental

[Insane]:

00:50:919- Muevelo 4 grids a la derecha y 1 hacia arriba... asi queda alineado con el (1). Esta bien asi :d

Por favor, si puedes cambia el Circle Size a 4, no me gustan los círculos pequeños D: Se ve bien
_________________

Todo lo demás lo encuentro bien así que...

Star ^.~/

eldnl wrote:

00:14:134- Movelo 1 grid a la izquiera porque esta separado del 3 =P Oh shit, no le digas a nadie xD

Elly-chan wrote:

Key: Red HAS TO BE FIXED. Blue IS A SUGGESTION.

(General)
-Add Tags. = w= After, and this is orange.
-Normal? Maybe
-Distance Snap For Hard and Insane - Some fixes unless you want it to be close and/or jumpy. ?
-Remove One Of The Two Kiai's. What the ...

(Normal)
Overall Difficulty - set to 3 It's fine.
Good Patterns

(Hard)
Slider Tick Rate - Change To 1. Nop
-Distance snap? o uo ?
Good!!

(Insane)
Some Distance Snapping? o uo ?
Good!!

Star.~

1. Hay bastante diferencia de dificultad entre el Easy y el Hard. ¿Harás un Normal? (o encárgale en trabajo sucio a alguien/guest diff ;p)
2. Para los Tags podrías añadir el significado de DWB (Deadman Wonderland Band). Tsk, ya está en el Source "Deadman Wonderland"...

1. Sugerencia tonta: Slider Tick = 2?

1. 00:35:324 (4,5) - Te recomiendo usar la misma distancia que con (3,4), de 2,13x aprox.

1. 00:50:681 (2,3) - Como antes, deberías usar la misma distancia que con (1,2), y además quedaría simétrico ;p
2. Sugerencia de hitsounds: En el kiai se oyen claps en grupos de 2 siempre (ej: 0:55:562-0:55:800, 0:57:467-0:57:705, etc). Creo que estos son los que te faltarían (en los otros niveles quizá no se pueda, ya que faltan notas/sliderticks para ponerles el clap):
3. 00:59:610 (4) - Clap en el principio.
4. 01:01:515 (4) - ^
5. 01:03:420 (4) - ^
6. 01:05:324 (4) - Clap.
7. 01:12:943 (x) - Añade nota o convierte a (5) en un slider con fin aquí + Clap.
8. 01:16:753 (3) - Clap en el principio.
9. 01:18:657 (3) - ^

Download: DWB feat. Nirgilis - SHINY SHINY -TV mix- (eldnl) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

1. Good job ^^ any problems here

1. 00:15:562 (1,2) - Wrong spacing, these notes are too close to (5)
2. 00:23:658 (x) - Add note with Finish here?
3. 00:36:991 (1) - Same as 00:15:562 (1,2)
4. 01:07:943 (5) - Add Clap?
5. Funny Diff

1. woow I love this diff <3 pretty hitsound and symmetry, nothing wrong here :3

1. 00:43:658 (x) - Add note here?
2. Well made

1. Change the title of the topic in "DWB feat. Nirgilis - SHINY SHINY (TV Size)"?

1. 00:25:562 - Add a note?
2. 01:17:467 - ^
3. 01:19:372 - ^

1. 00:11:039 (4) - Well,i think this slider doesen't follow the music properly,maybe remove the repeat and add a note at 00:11:753 - ?

1. 00:50:086 - Add a note?
2. 00:55:800 (2) - Remove clap and add it at the note 3?

1. 00:56:396 - Add a note?

-kevincela- wrote:

[Haneii's Normal]

* 00:11:039 (4) - Well,i think this slider doesen't follow the music properly,maybe remove the repeat and add a note at 00:11:753 - ? Naw, I think it follows the music quite well :)

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Haneii's Normal]
I see no spinners on this difficulty?, its not required but, its better to prevent ties on scoring. Sure ^_^

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Avoid using pure white combo color together with kiai, it's blinding for some people. I do not know what colors to put here. Suggestions ?

[Insane]
00:23:419 (5,1) - I think this jump is a bit too harsh considering the peacefulness of this section of the song. Sure.
00:34:372 (6,7,8) - Misleading spacing all notes have the same spacing but the 2 last ones are half apart on the timeline. It's fine.

[Hard]
00:30:324 (4,5) - Misleading spacing, i know you're using ztrot spacing, but this is right in the middle of it you probably should use this as a new combo instead so the player doesnt hit too early. I have seen some players play it and not confuse this pattern.


Pretty nice and peaceful song~ i like it

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
ddddd-> kkd k d -> kd k ddk d kkd -> 1/2s decribes the whole diff orz
Much room for more variations x_x, though the current rhythm is fine.
01:09:372 - excess timing time, delete

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- No video? The video sucks

Easy:
- 01:25:086 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for an Easy, make it easier please. hmm It's fine for me but If other mod say this I change it.

eldnl wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 19 de junio de 2011 at 11:24:26 p.m.

Artist: DWB feat. Nirgilis
Title: SHINY SHINY (TV Size)
Source: Deadman Wonderland
Tags: OzzyOzrock Haneii
BPM: 126
Filesize: 2716kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,82 stars, 77 notes)
2. Haneii's Normal (3,52 stars, 124 notes)
3. Hard (4,52 stars, 164 notes)
4. Insane (4,94 stars, 212 notes)
5. Ozzy's Taiko (4,81 stars, 304 notes)

Download: DWB feat. Nirgilis - SHINY SHINY (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Deadman Wonderland ED
Awesome song! love it!^o^
Ready 4 Mod

1. Combo Colurs: I noticed that the first combo colour (Light Grey almost white) blends with the BG sometimes. Try making it a bit darker or choosing another colour. (Another alternative is deleting it, '3' Combo Colours should be enough)
2. Use Tick Rate: 2 for all the diffs. (This goes for [Easy] and [Norma] ('Taiko' might be an exception)

1. 00:35:800 - This break is too short, I think the warning arrows appear while you're still playing. There shouldn't be any problem since the HP Drain is low anough, try to aim for 5~10s breaks next time.
2. 00:35:324 (5,6) - I'm not sure if 2 1/2 circles suit well this diff, I think that something like this would be way better for this diff. You just need to remove 1 circle and then add a repeat to the last slider.
3. 01:29:848 (4,5) - Perhaps use a slider+ a circle instead of 2 circles? Two circles doesn't fit this diff imo.
4. I was going to suggest adding some hitsounds for the first part of the song, but I think it sounds better the way it is now. Okay, no major problems here.

1. Hi Haneii o7
2. 00:21:515 (5) - I kinda expected a NC here, Do you mind adding it?
3. 00:24:134 (1,2) - These jumps seem quite unexpected tbh and not really fitting imo. Perhaps, try something like this instead?
4. 00:31:753 (4) - A bit nazi but I'm wondering if you'd like to improve this blanket. If you do, here's a suggestion. This is the code if you want it:
   

   200,252,31753,2,0,B|164:212|192:136|256:140,2,150

5. 00:53:658 (1) - I strongly suggest to unstack this object and then move it closer to the center, this is still Normal so some players might find post-spinner circles a bit hard to hit.
6. 01:29:372 (3,4,5,6) - Since all this objects are 1/2 apart, splitting them into 2 different stacks is a bit odd and hard to follow. You should rather stack them in a single pile or unstack all of them. (Sliders are good alternative too)

1. 00:23:658 (1) - Perhaps, modify this slider a bit? It will make the jump a more friendly to players and easier to read.
2. 00:35:681 - Same as [Easy], this break is not necessary at all, it's too short. Remove it, please.
3. 01:07:705 (7) - Please don't silence this slider. That silence doesn't fit that part of the song and it's a bit disorienting, I strongly suggest to use the same volume as before. (If you really wish to keep it, then use 40~50%)

1. I didn't like the last slider speed change, I don't think it fits the song because the last part is more like a slowdown than a speed up. Perhaps remove it completely or use 1.25 instead?
2. I'm pretty sure that Ozzy likes to make his own Taiko BGs so I'll just mention it.

1. HPDrain seems a bit high for this map, perhaps -1 tick?
2. I expected bigger circles for this song. Well, it's not a big deal.
3. 00:35:681 - Same as [Easy] and [Hard], this break is completely unnecessary. Remove it, please.
4. 01:05:800 (5,6,7,8) - This part was quite hard to follow. Due to the increasing spacing of the last pattern, players will read these objects if they were 1/2 apart like the last ones. Try with a NC on (4), that should be enough.
5. 01:22:943 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream sounds a bit empty. Perhaps, add some soft-whistles on the red ticks and then increase volume gradually?

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Haneii's Normal]

* Hi Haneii o7 Hey Gonz o/
* 00:21:515 (5) - I kinda expected a NC here, Do you mind adding it? But of course
* 00:24:134 (1,2) - These jumps seem quite unexpected tbh and not really fitting imo. Perhaps, try something like this instead? Sure, and your suggestion is pretty, thanks >w<
* 00:31:753 (4) - A bit nazi but I'm wondering if you'd like to improve this blanket. If you do, here's a suggestion. Thank you sooo much, been struggling to get this right for ages >_<.
* 00:53:658 (1) - I strongly suggest to unstack this object and then move it closer to the center, this is still Normal so some players might find post-spinner circles a bit hard to hit. I knew I couldn't get away with this - I guess I felt it played better when stacked, but you're right, its a bit too much for a normal. Fixed!
* 01:29:372 (3,4,5,6) - Since all this objects are 1/2 apart, splitting them into 2 different stacks is a bit odd and hard to follow. You should rather stack them in a single pile or unstack all of them. (Sliders are good alternative too) Okay, I've unstacked them all and made a small 1/2 stream (if I can even call it that XD)

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Combo Colurs: I noticed that the first combo colour (Light Grey almost white) blends with the BG sometimes. Try making it a bit darker or choosing another colour. (Another alternative is deleting it, '3' Combo Colours should be enough) Fixed
2. Use Tick Rate: 2 for all the diffs. (This goes for [Easy] and [Norma] ('Taiko' might be an exception) Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:35:800 - This break is too short, I think the warning arrows appear while you're still playing. There shouldn't be any problem since the HP Drain is low anough, try to aim for 5~10s breaks next time. Fixed
2. 00:35:324 (5,6) - I'm not sure if 2 1/2 circles suit well this diff, I think that something like this would be way better for this diff. You just need to remove 1 circle and then add a repeat to the last slider. Fixed
3. 01:29:848 (4,5) - Perhaps use a slider+ a circle instead of 2 circles? Two circles doesn't fit this diff imo. I don't want to use sliders in that part, any other suggestion?
4. I was going to suggest adding some hitsounds for the first part of the song, but I think it sounds better the way it is now. Okay, no major problems here.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:658 (1) - Perhaps, modify this slider a bit? It will make the jump a more friendly to players and easier to read. Fixed
2. 00:35:681 - Same as [Easy], this break is not necessary at all, it's too short. Remove it, please. Fixed
3. 01:07:705 (7) - Please don't silence this slider. That silence doesn't fit that part of the song and it's a bit disorienting, I strongly suggest to use the same volume as before. (If you really wish to keep it, then use 40~50%) Fixed

[Insane]

1. HPDrain seems a bit high for this map, perhaps -1 tick? Fixed
2. I expected bigger circles for this song. Well, it's not a big deal. It's fine !
3. 00:35:681 - Same as [Easy] and [Hard], this break is completely unnecessary. Remove it, please. Fixed
4. 01:05:800 (5,6,7,8) - This part was quite hard to follow. Due to the increasing spacing of the last pattern, players will read these objects if they were 1/2 apart like the last ones. Try with a NC on (4), that should be enough. NC Added
5. 01:22:943 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream sounds a bit empty. Perhaps, add some soft-whistles on the red ticks and then increase volume gradually? Fixed

This has been modded by some MATs already so call me back when you're done and I'll re-check this.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Why does everyone think I only map super crazy.