1. Dis (3.4 stars, 270 notes)
2. Kana (4.75 stars, 513 notes)

Joshua Lost wrote:

Fight ~ o(>ω・)

sherrie__fay wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?w71as9136addr4b



↑↑↑
ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
finiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisheddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLY QAQQQQQQQQQ
[放声大哭]
终于做完了……
我一度觉得自己再也没耐心做下去……
哭了
哭了!!!

sherrie__fay wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?w71as9136addr4b



↑↑↑
ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
finiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisheddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLY QAQQQQQQQQQ
[放声大哭]
终于做完了……
我一度觉得自己再也没耐心做下去……
哭了
哭了!!!

1. Add "sherrie__fay" into tags as he/she created SB for this map.
2. Note: skinners usually dont deserve it but SBers do.
3. If you could add the skin about hit0/50/100/300, It'd going to be perfect. But now the little flaw still existing.

1. 01:44:206 (1) - Reverse once more?
2. 01:45:383 (1) - Turn vloume up, almost hardly know there is finish(C2) set here.

1. 03:00:677 (1) - Changed a pattern different from yours. Might be better and more suitable to the rhythm.(Add finish(C1) on the start of slider and finish(C2) on the end of it. Yea, get the hitsound finished as well meantime.)
2. As for the reasome why I wanna change the pattern you put. Because 03:01:265 (1,2,3) - The 3 notes bother me a bit, because of no clear drum on the 03:01:559 especially the 2nd one sucks it like an empty vessel.
3. 03:57:147 (1) - Remove finish(C1) and add finish(C2) instead.
4. Those stuff I pointed out in this diff were changed by myself, attached pls find osu. file and take a look if you need them.

gdeath wrote:

[Gereral]:

1. Add "sherrie__fay" into tags as he/she created SB for this map.
2. Note: skinners usually dont deserve it but SBers do.
3. If you could add the skin about hit0/50/100/300, It'd going to be perfect. But now the little flaw still existing.

[Dis]:

1. 01:44:206 (1) - Reverse once more?
2. 01:45:383 (1) - Turn vloume up, almost hardly know there is finish(C2) set here.

[Kana]:

1. 03:00:677 (1) - Changed a pattern different from yours. Might be better and more suitable to the rhythm.(Add finish(C1) on the start of slider and finish(C2) on the end of it. Yea, get the hitsound finished as well meantime.)
2. As for the reasome why I wanna change the pattern you put. Because 03:01:265 (1,2,3) - The 3 notes bother me a bit, because of no clear drum on the 03:01:559 especially the 2nd one sucks it like an empty vessel.
3. 03:57:147 (1) - Remove finish(C1) and add finish(C2) instead.
4. Those stuff I pointed out in this diff were changed by myself, attached pls find osu. file and take a look if you need them.

Well, I have to say all of you did an extraordinary work. The SB / hitsounds / pattern are all beyond my imagination. I'd shoot all my kuds to the awesome map if I had some left.
My favourite one already for sure.

/me shoots a star.

1. 00:33:030 (3,4,5) - is this lowest difficulty? if yes so, the beginners are confused by this narrow spacing imo.
2. 01:44:206 (1) - 1 more return? oops...gdeath already told
3. 02:10:089 (5) - hidden by (3). it's too difficult to read for the beginners imo.

• 
  Haha there are too many green lines, therefore your hitsound is amazing! XD

1. 00:14:500 (5) - new combo?
2. 00:37:147 (4) - how about this symmetry formation?
   
   if yes, here is the code.
   

   68,268,37147,2,0,B|24:256|4:216|4:164|24:116|88:112,1,200,6|2

3. 00:40:677 (1) - add finish at start of slider?
4. 01:26:559 (9,1) - add new combo at (9), and remove new combo at (1)? this is same combo pattern as 02:41:853 (1,2).
5. 01:33:324 (6) - new combo?
6. 02:11:853 (6) - ^

Suzully wrote:

Hi KanaRinnnnnnnnn ><

[Dis]

1. 00:33:030 (3,4,5) - is this lowest difficulty? if yes so, the beginners are confused by this narrow spacing imo. Fixed
2. 01:44:206 (1) - 1 more return? oops...gdeath already told Fixed
3. 02:10:089 (5) - hidden by (3). it's too difficult to read for the beginners imo. Fixed

[Kana]

• 
  Haha there are too many green lines, therefore your hitsound is amazing! XD >w</

1. 00:14:500 (5) - new combo? Fixed
2. 00:37:147 (4) - how about this symmetry formation? Fixed
   [attachment=0:34b81]screenshot111.jpg[/attachment:34b81]
   if yes, here is the code.
   

   68,268,37147,2,0,B|24:256|4:216|4:164|24:116|88:112,1,200,6|2

3. 00:40:677 (1) - add finish at start of slider? Fixed
4. 01:26:559 (9,1) - add new combo at (9), and remove new combo at (1)? this is same combo pattern as 02:41:853 (1,2). No here,Sry=w=
5. 01:33:324 (6) - new combo? Fixed
6. 02:11:853 (6) - ^ Fixed

Always awesome mapset! XD
Furthermore very nice hitsound and SB.
I could only a few minor things Thanks XD
加油~

karenying wrote:

great SB
一点議建：(好吧我蛋疼
00:21:265 - 這後面一堆不淡出?
01:17:736 - ^
01:22:441 - e9.png 貌似太淡 看不清了
01:29:794 - 這雨下得真詭異...因為這雨是斜的 所以改成800*480向左移可能更好 後面也是
02:34:206 - 淡出
02:56:118 - ^

這SB太美了 看出來很有心去做 我大概做不出來

KingsAL2 wrote:

你要放finish的話一定要在別人不擦覺的情況下才放
因為這個finish特別的原固, 別人聽到就是你的失敗, 明白嗎?
finish有點令人頭痛, 大致都不錯
=] good luck star

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it was fun to testplay will mod it as well~

-The default . , x % are not needed in your folder as they will never show up in game (only the score - ones do) so you might as well delete them Fixed
-Kind of odd to hear the pass/fail sounds during the breaks but not have any images appear, might want to silence the sounds for them out too Fixed
-Seems odd to have the score-dot so close to the numbers on the left while playing leaving a big gap,try to center that more? umm..np imo..
-Seeing as you have scorebar - color - 0 etc in the folder you don't really need the basic scorebar - color there Fixed

Dis:
-I don't follow of all of your combo patterns, will point out a few of them and you can go through and see if you can make them follow the song anymore Fixed some of the patterns
-Slightly hard for the easiest difficulty, might want to try OD/AR -1 Fixed,OD-1, AR-1.
00:15:677 (1) - odd place for a new combo, I would have it at 00:17:147 (4) instead and remove the one from 00:18:030 (1) Fixed
00:20:383 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
00:21:853 (9) - new combo Fixed
00:23:912 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
00:44:206 (5,1) - would look nicer if stuff like this didn't overlap in my opinion Fixed
01:06:853 (1) - remove new combo + add new combo to 01:08:324 (8) Fixed
01:10:089 (1) - remove new combo Fixed

Kana:
00:20:383 (4,5) - seems like an odd place to have a jump here Fixed
00:28:324 (3,1,2,3) - you could have this mirror 00:30:677 (1,2,3) instead of being straight, looks better in my opinion Fixed
01:46:118 - fairly minor but I would end the kiai here at 01:45:971 instead Fixed
02:17:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kind of odd spacing here (I know it is for a pattern but still) Fixed
03:00:677 (1) - definitely getting near unrankable, I didn't know what I was looking at when I first saw this. I would try and make it more obvious that this is a slider so players do not get confused Fixed