karenying wrote:

great SB
一点議建：(好吧我蛋疼
00:21:265 - 這後面一堆不淡出?
01:17:736 - ^
01:22:441 - e9.png 貌似太淡 看不清了
01:29:794 - 這雨下得真詭異...因為這雨是斜的 所以改成800*480向左移可能更好 後面也是
02:34:206 - 淡出
02:56:118 - ^

這SB太美了 看出來很有心去做 我大概做不出來

KingsAL2 wrote:

你要放finish的話一定要在別人不擦覺的情況下才放
因為這個finish特別的原固, 別人聽到就是你的失敗, 明白嗎?
finish有點令人頭痛, 大致都不錯
=] good luck star

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it was fun to testplay will mod it as well~

-The default . , x % are not needed in your folder as they will never show up in game (only the score - ones do) so you might as well delete them Fixed
-Kind of odd to hear the pass/fail sounds during the breaks but not have any images appear, might want to silence the sounds for them out too Fixed
-Seems odd to have the score-dot so close to the numbers on the left while playing leaving a big gap,try to center that more? umm..np imo..
-Seeing as you have scorebar - color - 0 etc in the folder you don't really need the basic scorebar - color there Fixed

Dis:
-I don't follow of all of your combo patterns, will point out a few of them and you can go through and see if you can make them follow the song anymore Fixed some of the patterns
-Slightly hard for the easiest difficulty, might want to try OD/AR -1 Fixed,OD-1, AR-1.
00:15:677 (1) - odd place for a new combo, I would have it at 00:17:147 (4) instead and remove the one from 00:18:030 (1) Fixed
00:20:383 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
00:21:853 (9) - new combo Fixed
00:23:912 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
00:44:206 (5,1) - would look nicer if stuff like this didn't overlap in my opinion Fixed
01:06:853 (1) - remove new combo + add new combo to 01:08:324 (8) Fixed
01:10:089 (1) - remove new combo Fixed

Kana:
00:20:383 (4,5) - seems like an odd place to have a jump here Fixed
00:28:324 (3,1,2,3) - you could have this mirror 00:30:677 (1,2,3) instead of being straight, looks better in my opinion Fixed
01:46:118 - fairly minor but I would end the kiai here at 01:45:971 instead Fixed
02:17:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kind of odd spacing here (I know it is for a pattern but still) Fixed
03:00:677 (1) - definitely getting near unrankable, I didn't know what I was looking at when I first saw this. I would try and make it more obvious that this is a slider so players do not get confused Fixed

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
approachcircle.png is over the templateskin dimmensions resize it to 128x128

This should be good for a bubble once that's taken care of

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok then
Bubbled~

Ayeen wrote:

Ayeen's mod:

SB:
You might wanna change the yellow colored SB element/lyrics. They didn't visible well Sorry but I don't think so :<

General:
why is KaguraP in source? Is that an anime or show or drama? Should give solid reason behind in for source You should know more about Miku then.
You should have at least 1 map below 3 star or at least 3. Your easiest is 3.4 which violate the rules each mapset must have at least 1 difficulty below 3 star. Agree of gdeath
The song start silence then appear so suddenly, is that supposed be the song sound like? I guess it's ok.

Dis:
00:30:089 (1) The spinner is quite short for beginner. I suggest delete to decrease the star rating
00:33:030 (1,2,3) Try to reduce this stacking notes like this in easiest difficulty
00:37:036 (1,2,3) ^
01:42:441 (3,4,5)^
01:45:383 (1) Spinner is too short for beginner. I'm suggesting start long slider from 01:44:206 to 01:46:559. Just a suggestion

Orz. I don't think that's useful :<

Kana:
01:24:500 (5,6,7) Maybe DS like the others which is same pattern? (0.5) No please.
01:25:530 (2) If you listen carefully at 25% there is no beat here.Huh?
02:19:500 (2,3,4,5,6) I think it better you do DS 0.5 like you did beforehand No please.
02:23:324 (1,2,3) Maybe make the DS same as pattern alike? (0.5) ^
02:49:206 (7,8,9) Little inconsistency spacing here ^
02:52:736 (3,4,5) i think it look better at DS 0.6 or 0.5 ^

Overall it was a great map Deserve a star Thz

KanaRin wrote:

Ayeen wrote:

Ayeen's mod:

SB:
You might wanna change the yellow colored SB element/lyrics. They didn't visible well Sorry but I don't think so :<

General:
why is KaguraP in source? Is that an anime or show or drama? Should give solid reason behind in for source You should know more about Miku then. Idk who/what is KaguraP, at least give some links to back it up rather than " you should know more about Miku", I think it more appropriate go to tags atm
You should have at least 1 map below 3 star or at least 3. Your easiest is 3.4 which violate the rules each mapset must have at least 1 difficulty below 3 star. Agree of gdeath There is song with lower BPM and can make easier difficulty than this. It not a valid excuse.
The song start silence then appear so suddenly, is that supposed be the song sound like? I guess it's ok.

Dis:
00:30:089 (1) The spinner is quite short for beginner. I suggest delete to decrease the star rating
00:33:030 (1,2,3) Try to reduce this stacking notes like this in easiest difficulty
00:37:036 (1,2,3) ^
01:42:441 (3,4,5)^
01:45:383 (1) Spinner is too short for beginner. I'm suggesting start long slider from 01:44:206 to 01:46:559. Just a suggestion

Orz. I don't think that's useful :< Up to you to change it or not

Kana:
01:24:500 (5,6,7) Maybe DS like the others which is same pattern? (0.5) No please.
01:25:530 (2) If you listen carefully at 25% there is no beat here.Huh?
02:19:500 (2,3,4,5,6) I think it better you do DS 0.5 like you did beforehand No please.
02:23:324 (1,2,3) Maybe make the DS same as pattern alike? (0.5) ^
02:49:206 (7,8,9) Little inconsistency spacing here ^
02:52:736 (3,4,5) i think it look better at DS 0.6 or 0.5 ^

Overall it was a great map Deserve a star Thz

I checked all your mod. And yes, Sorry but I don't think that's too improtant.
And Sorry for I can't give kds to you D:

Ayeen wrote:

Idk who/what is KaguraP, at least give some links to back it up rather than " you should know more about Miku", I think it more appropriate go to tags atm Ok, sorry. KaguraP is the writer of this song. Hatsune Miku; かぐらP
There is song with lower BPM and can make easier difficulty than this. It not a valid excuse. I still don't agree this. So I must map a Easy? You know it's Approved of the mapset Normal + Hard/Insane. And I just want 2diffs in this mapset.Star Rating = useful? fact? Sorry But i will still keep it.

Ayeen wrote:

Idk who/what is KaguraP, at least give some links to back it up rather than " you should know more about Miku", I think it more appropriate go to tags atm.