Maon Kurosaki - Setsuna no Kajitsu · forum

lit120

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lit120 2016-09-09T18:45:36+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 04, 2018 at 12:23:58 AM

Artist: Maon Kurosaki
Title: Setsuna no Kajitsu
Source: グリザイアの楽園
Tags: tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
BPM: 163
Filesize: 18702kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Beom's Extra (5.32 stars, 351 notes)
DavidEd's Extra (5.3 stars, 386 notes)
Easy (1.57 stars, 104 notes)
Hard (3.43 stars, 287 notes)
Karia's Extra (5.57 stars, 381 notes)
Lasse's Extra (5.63 stars, 375 notes)
LGV's Insane (4.58 stars, 330 notes)
Normal (2.23 stars, 178 notes)

Download: Maon Kurosaki - Setsuna no Kajitsu
Download: Maon Kurosaki - Setsuna no Kajitsu (no video)
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Last edited by lit120 2018-03-03T17:24:43+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2016-09-12T05:59:17+00:00

From #modhelp

LGV894

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LGV894 2016-09-16T11:29:05+00:00

I'm finishing my GD. btw wtf Lasse's Extra, Lasse_Squares?

btw should I hitsound myself?

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-09-16T11:42:59+00:00

The square diff is a joke lol
I told lit to remove it once the spread is finished

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2016-09-16T17:31:10+00:00

xd

lit120

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lit120 2016-09-17T11:29:23+00:00

LGV894 wrote:
I'm finishing my GD. btw wtf Lasse's Extra, Lasse_Squares?

btw should I hitsound myself?

LOL

yeah sure u can

lit120

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lit120 2016-09-20T06:23:22+00:00

uploaded karia's + fixed hitsound on his diff + few changes on my diff

and yeah, removed the square diff :v

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2016-09-20T07:58:38+00:00

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so many extras

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LGV894 2016-09-20T12:01:32+00:00

Happy Birthday To Me

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Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-09-20T12:05:07+00:00

so is the spread done then or more GDs incoming?
also happy birthday LGV :v

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-20T12:49:53+00:00

@LGV hbd man! xd
@Lasse done from now

uploaded lgv's + hitsouded beomsan's and lgv's and even some of my diffs

let's go

Chocobo

104 posts

Joined June 2013

Chocobo 2016-09-20T13:52:06+00:00

Well,come here 4 m4m XD;
only "Perfect World "diff modded yet;

some advises

00:11:135 (8) - is there something missing before slider8??
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the DS between note2&note3 and the DS between note 3,4,5 is not the same, and they can also make a form instead of being placed randomly;
maybe a five-pointed star:
[img][http://puu.sh/rhIzK/cd4cfa7a5b.png/img];
00:19:600 (6,1,2) - The jump distance between note 6 and 1 is extremely large;
00:23:462 (2,3,1) - the end of slider 2 can be at the position of the preciously note2;
00:31:185 (4,5,6,1,2) - just as the problem 1~;
00:33:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - it maybe a little annoying, but a slight change of their placement will really make the map look better;
blanket and placement of sliders are very nice, as well as the hit-sounds;
my modding level is limited, hope those listed above will help your map better~

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-20T14:00:05+00:00

Chocobo wrote:
Well,come here 4 m4m XD;
only "Perfect World "diff modded yet;
some advises
00:11:135 (8) - is there something missing before slider8?? i don't get it .-.
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the DS between note2&note3 and the DS between note 3,4,5 is not the same, and they can also make a form instead of being placed randomly;
maybe a five-pointed star: it's fine, but i didn't plan to make a star pattern here
[img][http://puu.sh/rhIzK/cd4cfa7a5b.png/img];
00:19:600 (6,1,2) - The jump distance between note 6 and 1 is extremely large; intensity part and a loud beat
00:23:462 (2,3,1) - the end of slider 2 can be at the position of the preciously note2; still readable
00:31:185 (4,5,6,1,2) - just as the problem 1~; still ok though
00:33:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - it maybe a little annoying, but a slight change of their placement will really make the map look better; nahh i wanna keep it
blanket and placement of sliders are very nice, as well as the hit-sounds;
my modding level is limited, hope those listed above will help your map better~

thx for mod!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-09-20T14:19:27+00:00

1 Insane 5 Extras

>2016 mapping xd

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-09-20T14:38:15+00:00

Kisses wrote:
1 Insane 5 Extras

>2016 mapping xd

I was about to say that

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,116 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2016-09-20T14:48:29+00:00

Hi come from m4m~
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502077

Easy

00:43:511 (4,1) - those blanket seems a little bit weird, why not make them same shape for a better look?

Normal

00:24:947 (1) - that shape isnt quite well...... imo just a straight slider would be ok
00:44:105 (1) - remove nc and 00:44:402 (2) - add nc to follow the drum would be better imo

Hard

00:31:779 (6) - this seems too near to the next 3 notes, try to move up a little bit
00:37:868 (3) - ^
01:14:699 (3) - ^

LGV's Insane

00:28:808 (2,3) - try ctrl+g? flow is a little bit weird imo
01:00:145 (1,2,3) - imo those straight notes isnt quite well cuz the ds change is too sudden between 00:59:848 (2,1) - and 01:00:145 (1,2) - but the music does not change a lot so that may cause a miss

Beom's Extra

00:03:346 (8) - UNSNAP
00:28:363 (5) - stack?
00:48:561 (4) - ctrl+g may have a better flow
00:50:937 (7) - ^
00:56:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this part is tooooooo densy for jumps, especially 00:57:175 (1,2,3,4) - . how about scale them a bit?
00:57:769 (1,2,3,4) - i recommand to use ctrl+g to 00:57:917 (2,3,4) - since there is a obtuse angle jump at 00:58:066 (3,4,1) - which is not a good flow imo

DavidEd's Extra

01:05:937 (4) - i think rotate anti-clockwise it about 30 degrees would make 4->5 more fluent

sry cannot find problems in Karia's Extra since its really too hard to me to read it ;w;

Lasse's Extra

00:49:155 (1,2) - i think 2 isnt put at there since the high sv slider 1 has a strong downward trend so i think at least 2 should be put lower then the 1
00:51:531 (2,3) - ^
00:54:353 (4,5) - ctrl+g?

Perfect World

00:49:155 (1,2) - player would probably miss 2 here since there is a quite wavy slider, so how about make this blanket a little bit soft? like 00:51:531 (1,2) -

that's all~! some diffs are quite amazing!!

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-20T15:05:08+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
Hi come from m4m~
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502077

Easy
00:43:511 (4,1) - those blanket seems a little bit weird, why not make them same shape for a better look? did sth
Normal
00:24:947 (1) - that shape isnt quite well...... imo just a straight slider would be ok keep
00:44:105 (1) - remove nc and 00:44:402 (2) - add nc to follow the drum would be better imo keep
Hard
00:31:779 (6) - this seems too near to the next 3 notes, try to move up a little bit keep this one for a while cuz i wanna stick with pentagon shape
00:37:868 (3) - ^ ^ triangle
01:14:699 (3) - ^ ^ stacks
Perfect World
00:49:155 (1,2) - player would probably miss 2 here since there is a quite wavy slider, so how about make this blanket a little bit soft? like 00:51:531 (1,2) - still fine for me
that's all~! some diffs are quite amazing!!

thx for mod!

Pachiru

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2016-09-21T11:26:44+00:00

[Easy]

00:09:056 (4) - Move this slider away, or give it a new form, since it's an Easy, the pattern here is not very beautiful.
00:14:996 (3,1) - This part is chaining itself quite bad, you should rework the shape of the second slider.
00:15:442 (1,4) - Small overleap.
00:15:442 (1,2) - Blanket isn't very well done.
00:45:887 (3,1) - You should try to avoid this linear pattern, you can try to do something that use more space in the grid, to make it more fun to play.
00:47:076 (2,1) - Don't do this in an Easy diff, it's too hard to read, beginners can't read this at all.
00:50:046 (2,1) - Same here
01:03:115 (2,3) - Small overleap here.

[Normal]

00:00:614 (1) - Here, you can try to move this slider to make the perfect blanket with the scond, or you can try to move the second one, it's up to you.
00:02:800 (2) - On this slider, I would recommand you to do something mode shapeful, I mean... you can try to copy the shape of this one → 00:01:350 (2) -
00:16:185 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/riNpE/784156869a.png
00:23:759 (3) - https://puu.sh/riNqT/2b6ff6f8a9.png
00:30:293 (2) - ^
00:37:422 (2) - https://puu.sh/riNtz/d8f52618fd.png
01:09:650 (2,3) - Avoid this, this is not good in my opinion, you should rework this to fit with the next part, and to not cut the slider itself.
01:16:185 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be hard for an Normal.

Good luck for ranking

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-21T15:31:07+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
[Easy]
00:09:056 (4) - Move this slider away, or give it a new form, since it's an Easy, the pattern here is not very beautiful. curved a bit, but not gonna ruin the triangle pattern
00:14:996 (3,1) - This part is chaining itself quite bad, you should rework the shape of the second slider. fixed blanket only
00:15:442 (1,4) - Small overleap. did sth
00:15:442 (1,2) - Blanket isn't very well done. already answered
00:45:887 (3,1) - You should try to avoid this linear pattern, you can try to do something that use more space in the grid, to make it more fun to play. keep
00:47:076 (2,1) - Don't do this in an Easy diff, it's too hard to read, beginners can't read this at all. oh rly? it's readable enough
00:50:046 (2,1) - Same here ^
01:03:115 (2,3) - Small overleap here. just leave it there
[Normal]
00:00:614 (1) - Here, you can try to move this slider to make the perfect blanket with the scond, or you can try to move the second one, it's up to you. keep
00:02:800 (2) - On this slider, I would recommand you to do something mode shapeful, I mean... you can try to copy the shape of this one → 00:01:350 (2) - keep
00:16:185 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/riNpE/784156869a.png fixed the red anchor a bit
00:23:759 (3) - https://puu.sh/riNqT/2b6ff6f8a9.png keep
00:30:293 (2) - ^ ^
00:37:422 (2) - https://puu.sh/riNtz/d8f52618fd.png made it up a bit
01:09:650 (2,3) - Avoid this, this is not good in my opinion, you should rework this to fit with the next part, and to not cut the slider itself. this one is fine imo
01:16:185 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be hard for an Normal. we'll see how this goes .-.
Good luck for ranking

thx!

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2016-09-23T19:27:49+00:00

Hi, I saw your request on the offline #modreqs thread so I think I might just give it a go.

[Perfect World]

00:01:902 (5,1) - you might want to try stacking these so that the player is more aware of the bpm change. If you think that works then you can try stacking this too 00:03:157 (4,1) - .
00:47:373 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - because you start to follow the synth (that sounds like crystals) with 1 2 3 4 so I think 3 4 should have a different jump pattern otherwise the player can't differentiate which rhythm line you're following. I think decreasing the ds 3 -> 4 is good, stack (3) on (2) is quite neat.
01:09:056 (1) - there's a slight overlap, don't know if it's intentional but it doesn't look that nice to me.
01:21:234 (2) - I'm not sure about this, but the momentum from the stream is quite big and they can misread this as a 1/2, maybe space this out a bit more? Because here you have these as 1/2 01:22:274 (2,3) - while the spacing is roughly the same.
01:25:392 (7) - this note here is a bit different from the structure you've been using like here 01:18:115 (6,1) - , 00:10:392 (7,1) - and 00:15:145 (6,1) - .
[Lasse's Extra]
00:35:046 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this but I usually expect to start clicking on the note on the sliderend first, but sometimes I can hit this too, the approach circles here are too far apart to be able to read which circle comes first. I'd like to suggest ctrl+g these, but I don't know if that makes it worse or not.
Awesome diff!
[Karia's Extra]
00:44:699 (2) - for some reason I always do not expect a note and jump straight to 3 after hitting 1, though I can hit 00:43:808 (5,6) - these perfectly fine. Maybe because 00:43:808 (5,6) - ends on a stronger tick so I thought 00:44:402 (1,2) - these would have a different pattern.
01:01:482 (1,2,3) - I was not able to read this properly while sightreading. It might be a good idea to 01:01:036 (2,3) - ctrl+g these 2 so the spacing is small enough for the player to read the 1/1 gap.
[DavidEd's Extra]
01:05:343 (6,1) - Is there a specific reason why it isn't mapped as triples like 01:06:234 (5,6,7) - and 01:06:234 (5,6,7) - ?
01:08:907 (8) - I don't think there's a drum sound here so 01:08:759 (7) - this could be a 1/2 slider instead?
01:15:145 (4,5,1,2,3) - these jumps kind of ignore the 3/2 rhythm that the music is trying to emphasise so, just a suggestion? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6161651 .
01:21:234 (1) - if you're trying to follow the vocals then this should actually start on the red tick, if you're following the drums then the tick on the sliderend is actually stronger than the tick on the sliderhead so I think this slider somewhat misses the rhythm.
01:27:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The only music element present here is the vocals and it definitely doesn't follow straight 1/2s so I think you should reassess the rhythm here to follow the vocals more closely.
[Beom's Extra]
00:18:412 - both the drums and the violin stress this tick so instead of 3/2 + 1/2 slider you might want to try 2 1/1 sliders?
00:32:373 (2,3,4) - spacing for 1/2s and 1/1s is awfully close here so maybe something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6161723 .
01:16:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - here as well, there is also vocals on the white tick so this can easily be misread. I'd make 01:16:333 (2) - this a 1/2 slider, I think it's a bit clearer.
[LGV's Insane]
01:10:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing for this stream might be a bit too big for Insane, also a small ds change from 6 to 1 at 202bpm might also be a bit too hard for players at this skill level.

I ran out of modding stamina (i'm hungry too :c ). Sorry for not being able to point out much , most of the diffs already look great already.
Good luck!

LGV894

355 posts

Joined May 2013

LGV894 2016-09-24T00:59:19+00:00

B-but... Insane is fun to map..

LGV894

355 posts

Joined May 2013

LGV894 2016-09-24T01:22:23+00:00

LGV's Insane

00:28:808 (2,3) - try ctrl+g? flow is a little bit weird imo sure. now the whole map is playing backwards
01:00:145 (1,2,3) - imo those straight notes isnt quite well cuz the ds change is too sudden between 00:59:848 (2,1) - and 01:00:145 (1,2) - but the music does not change a lot so that may cause a miss Sure. Nerfed by sr0.666

k ty

1/5 mods

kkupdate

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-09-24T04:05:36+00:00

hi from my m4m queue

Easy

00:42:026 (2,3) - Suggestion because the current look triggers me :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164607
00:55:986 (1) - I feel like this spinner is too long and will tire a lot of people out at this difficulty, try shortening it?
01:19:600 (3) - minor blanket fix, needs to be a bit more curvier
01:28:066 (1) - Remove whistle from head?
I like this diff in both structure and rhythm

Normal

00:10:244 (2) - I think this would play and look better :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164535
00:12:620 (4) - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164538 adding a change in direction flows nicely on to the downbeat slider
00:29:551 (6) - Did you forget to add a hitsound? whistle would bee nice
00:46:927 (2) - add whistles on head and tail
00:47:670 (3) - I get that you're trying to follow a background sound but this doesn't really flow well with the current rhythm and feels really forced and in a way awkward. I recommend changing this to a circle. Also add whistle
01:10:838 (4,1) - patterns like these really lack structure imho. You can make it look nicer by making the sliders parallel or something, atm they just look randomly placed

Hard

00:12:620 (3) - blanket?
00:17:967 (1,2) - how about making this the same shape like you did for 00:18:858 (3,4) ?
00:31:927 (7,8,9) - If you enable stacking you'll see that the DS is a bit mess up in gameplay https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164637
00:38:016 (4,5,1) - same as above ^
00:48:709 (7) - There isn't an actual drum beat here (if you listen really carefully) so how about not having this clickable? clicking 5 circles is tiring at 200 bpm and there technically isn't a beat on the note. Turn 00:48:561 (6) into a slider instead?
00:50:640 (5) - fix blanket?
00:55:095 (2) - suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164659 I feel like having 00:55:392 clickable would be good since you're following the vocals
01:06:383 (3,4,5) - same about stacking
01:10:541 (2) - another blanket :p
01:21:234 - are you sure you want to skip out on this drum beat?

Insane

00:40:838 (1) - Is this NC a mistake? Not really needed imo
01:00:145 (1) - spacing seems a bit high imo :/ maybe shift it up a bit? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164685
01:06:383 (2,3,4,5,1) - imho it would just look and play better to use equal spacing and not have an increased DS between 01:06:605 (5) and 01:06:680 (1)
Recommend to increase HS volume of kiai time to 70% . I feel like it should be louder
01:26:284 (4) - This beat isn't exactly the strongest in the song yet the spacing is so high Oo orz
I really liked the structure of this diff a whole lot, well done

Beom

00:14:848 (3) - taking out the curve would look better imo as none of the other sliders in the pattern are curved. I get that you're going for a mini blanket but the slider is so small that it doesn't really do it that well
01:01:630 (2,1) - spacing doesnt reflect the current rhythm when sight reading imo
01:29:105 (1) - why does this beat have less spacing than both 01:28:809 (2) and 01:28:957 (3) ? the decreased spacing doesn't capture the feel of the beat especially since they're all back and forth jumps so it's more noticeable

DavidEd

00:12:472 (3,4,5) - The blanket is of if you enable stacking https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164759
00:23:610 (5) - should be moved to the left a bit if you want it directly in the middle of the circles to form the line.
before

after
00:29:551 - I would reduce the volume of this timing point to 40% so the hitsounds aren't too overpowering
00:55:541 (3,4) - these drum hitsounds seem out of place :/
01:27:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why do these jumps have somewhat equal spacing to 01:28:363 (2,3,4,5,6,1) ? It doesn't really make sense to me and does capture the strengths of the beats whilst playing ><

Karia

01:15:442 (1) - ctrl +g? The reverse direction feels better when playing imo
01:16:927 (4) - same as above

Lasse

01:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Does this really feel good to play? a pentagon followed by a harsh jump from top to bottom? I'm not good enough to pass diff so idk but patterns like these tend to more frustrating to play.
01:28:660 (1) - I don't think this is fair at all putting something that looks like a kickslider that you know will throw people off. I get there's the argument 'a diff doesn't need to be FC able first time to be rankable' but it just feels so incredibly forced

[] I can't mod your highest diff sorry >< I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Last edited by _handholding 2016-09-24T11:16:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mraihani

208 posts

Joined November 2014

mraihani 2016-09-24T09:39:13+00:00

(x,y)

the easy's sr is more than 1.5, but i have no solution to reduce it yet, so i'll skip this first

[normal]
00:09:798 add circle at (x,y)=(122,328)
01:14:996 (4) - i prefer this shape tbh

image

to obtain: (five slider points required)
points (x,y)
white (302,109)
white (340,118)
red (368,139)
white (407,128)
white (455,129)

no kudosu

anyway get ranked soon

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-09-24T10:14:33+00:00

replies

Neanmoins wrote:
Lasse's Extra
00:49:155 (1,2) - i think 2 isnt put at there since the high sv slider 1 has a strong downward trend so i think at least 2 should be put lower then the 1
00:51:531 (2,3) - ^ Movement on the slider works well to lead into 2 and the 1/4 stack on head is common pattern in this map
00:54:353 (4,5) - ctrl+g? doesn't make any sense, current movement and spacing fit better

LMT1996 wrote:
[Lasse's Extra]
[*]00:35:046 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this but I usually expect to start clicking on the note on the sliderend first, but sometimes I can hit this too, the approach circles here are too far apart to be able to read which circle comes first. I'd like to suggest ctrl+g these, but I don't know if that makes it worse or not. It's okay to read from what I saw testplayers do here and even if it wouldn't be, it's fine lol

Kisses wrote:
Lasse
01:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Does this really feel good to play? a pentagon followed by a harsh jump from top to bottom? I'm not good enough to pass diff so idk but patterns like these tend to more frustrating to play. It's really nice to play, the angle pretty acute, so the spacing change plays fine
01:28:660 (1) - I don't think this is fair at all putting something that looks like a kickslider that you know will throw people off. I get there's the argument 'a diff doesn't need to be FC able first time to be rankable' but it just feels so incredibly forced due to it only being 1/2 long and low SV it's pretty much impossible to break on that, worst I've seen so far are 100s. more people break on the square lol

thanks!

did some changes on my own + changed hitsounding for some small parts where I needed normal whistles
http://puu.sh/rm3Db/415d43da98.zip

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-24T11:09:20+00:00

Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General

💧Remove Widescreen Support di LGV's Insane & Karia's Extra

LGV's Insane

✨How about OD 7,5 or to 7,8 and HP 5,6 or to 5,8 ?

✨00:07:868 (3) - Slightly not-stacked
00:46:185 (4) - ^

✨00:40:838 (1) - Remove NC. You didn't do this anywhere else

✨00:51:977 (2,3) - Ctrl+G them is nicely played

✨01:13:066 (1) - Remove NC ?

✨01:15:887 (2) - NC

Oke nice

Beom's Extra

✨00:29:551 (5) - NC as SV change ? (like them 00:48:858 (1,1) - )
00:31:927 (3) - ^

✨00:38:610 (3) - NC ?
01:16:630 (3) - ^

✨00:44:105 (1,2) - Swap NC

✨01:11:729 (3) - How about position x288y248 ?

Oke nice

Perfect World

✨00:44:105 (1,2) - Swap NC ?, biar 00:44:402 (2,3,4) - jadi kombo 123, plus biar sama kayak 01:00:590 (7,1) -

Cuma itu

Oke that's all from me, sorry if it's only 3 diffs and too simple >M< . Good luck

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-24T17:48:35+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
Hi, I saw your request on the offline #modreqs thread so I think I might just give it a go.
[Perfect World]
00:01:902 (5,1) - you might want to try stacking these so that the player is more aware of the bpm change. If you think that works then you can try stacking this too 00:03:157 (4,1) - . that note still into 162 bpm for 00:02:086 (1) - with feelings of its rhythm
00:47:373 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - because you start to follow the synth (that sounds like crystals) with 1 2 3 4 so I think 3 4 should have a different jump pattern otherwise the player can't differentiate which rhythm line you're following. I think decreasing the ds 3 -> 4 is good, stack (3) on (2) is quite neat. didn't want to stack it
01:09:056 (1) - there's a slight overlap, don't know if it's intentional but it doesn't look that nice to me. that's ok
01:21:234 (2) - I'm not sure about this, but the momentum from the stream is quite big and they can misread this as a 1/2, maybe space this out a bit more? Because here you have these as 1/2 01:22:274 (2,3) - while the spacing is roughly the same. they better have a good reading on this then
01:25:392 (7) - this note here is a bit different from the structure you've been using like here 01:18:115 (6,1) - , 00:10:392 (7,1) - and 00:15:145 (6,1) - . it doesn't have to be the same though. the one that you pointed out was totally different timing

I ran out of modding stamina (i'm hungry too :c ). Sorry for not being able to point out much , most of the diffs already look great already.
Good luck!

Kisses wrote:
hi from my m4m queue

Easy
00:42:026 (2,3) - Suggestion because the current look triggers me :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164607 why not?
00:55:986 (1) - I feel like this spinner is too long and will tire a lot of people out at this difficulty, try shortening it? hmm gonna have to keep this for a while though
01:19:600 (3) - minor blanket fix, needs to be a bit more curvier did the thing
01:28:066 (1) - Remove whistle from head? there's a beat there
I like this diff in both structure and rhythm \o/
Normal
00:10:244 (2) - I think this would play and look better :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164535 mehh i'll just kep this one instead :p
00:12:620 (4) - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164538 adding a change in direction flows nicely on to the downbeat slider well ok
00:29:551 (6) - Did you forget to add a hitsound? whistle would bee nice it's just a piano note there
00:46:927 (2) - add whistles on head and tail there's no beat for whistle there for both of them .-.
00:47:670 (3) - I get that you're trying to follow a background sound but this doesn't really flow well with the current rhythm and feels really forced and in a way awkward. I recommend changing this to a circle. Also add whistle ohh that's right
01:10:838 (4,1) - patterns like these really lack structure imho. You can make it look nicer by making the sliders parallel or something, atm they just look randomly placed any suggestions? .-.
Hard
00:12:620 (3) - blanket? did it
00:17:967 (1,2) - how about making this the same shape like you did for 00:18:858 (3,4) ? keep
00:31:927 (7,8,9) - If you enable stacking you'll see that the DS is a bit mess up in gameplay https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164637 it is, but how? .-.
00:38:016 (4,5,1) - same as above ^ ^
00:48:709 (7) - There isn't an actual drum beat here (if you listen really carefully) so how about not having this clickable? clicking 5 circles is tiring at 200 bpm and there technically isn't a beat on the note. Turn 00:48:561 (6) into a slider instead? keep
00:50:640 (5) - fix blanket? done
00:55:095 (2) - suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164659 I feel like having 00:55:392 clickable would be good since you're following the vocals keep
01:06:383 (3,4,5) - same about stacking same thing .-.
01:10:541 (2) - another blanket :p did the thing
01:21:234 - are you sure you want to skip out on this drum beat? i'm sure about it
[] I can't mod your highest diff sorry >< I hope this mod was useful, GL!

mraihani wrote:
(x,y)

the easy's sr is more than 1.5, but i have no solution to reduce it yet, so i'll skip this first

[normal]
00:09:798 add circle at (x,y)=(122,328) that'll make things harder
01:14:996 (4) - i prefer this shape tbh i'll think about that later
image
to obtain: (five slider points required)
points (x,y)
white (302,109)
white (340,118)
red (368,139)
white (407,128)
white (455,129)
i don't get them
no kudosu

anyway get ranked soon

O-Moei wrote:
Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General
💧Remove Widescreen Support di LGV's Insane & Karia's Extra done

Perfect World
✨00:44:105 (1,2) - Swap NC ?, biar 00:44:402 (2,3,4) - jadi kombo 123, plus biar sama kayak 01:00:590 (7,1) - did it

Cuma itu

Oke that's all from me, sorry if it's only 3 diffs and too simple >M< . Good luck

thx for mods guys! will do the m4m soon, cuz it looks like sth came up about the god damn tests -_-

updated lasse's and lgv's (except from O-Moei's)

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-09-24T19:34:54+00:00

~~holy shit~~
I can modify from monday
thanks in advance for mods

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-09-25T11:59:49+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
[Karia's Extra]
00:44:699 (2) - for some reason I always do not expect a note and jump straight to 3 after hitting 1, though I can hit 00:43:808 (5,6) - these perfectly fine. Maybe because 00:43:808 (5,6) - ends on a stronger tick so I thought 00:44:402 (1,2) - these would have a different pattern. Same pattern is best for SV
01:01:482 (1,2,3) - I was not able to read this properly while sightreading. It might be a good idea to 01:01:036 (2,3) - ctrl+g these 2 so the spacing is small enough for the player to read the 1/1 gap. no, 01:01:185 (3,1) - this spacing is same as 01:00:590 (2,1) - here. Because they have same spacing, it would be simply a matter of the players' playablity if there was reading miss.

Kisses wrote:
Karia
01:15:442 (1) - ctrl +g? The reverse direction feels better when playing imo ~~applied 01:14:996 (1) - here instead~~It was a bit weird flow lol
01:16:927 (4) - same as above it's better with current direction imo

Thanks for moddings!

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Title:Setsuna no Kajitsu
TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Maon Kurosaki
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:lit120
Version:Karia's Extra
Source:グリザイアの楽園 - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA -
Tags:tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
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Last edited by lolia 2016-10-12T15:39:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

LGV894

355 posts

Joined May 2013

LGV894 2016-09-25T13:18:30+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Insane

00:40:838 (1) - Is this NC a mistake? Not really needed imo Sorry. Was separating patterns and observing how they look like.
01:00:145 (1) - spacing seems a bit high imo :/ maybe shift it up a bit? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164685 I don't understand the screenshot... Applied mod, anyways.
01:06:383 (2,3,4,5,1) - imho it would just look and play better to use equal spacing and not have an increased DS between 01:06:605 (5) and 01:06:680 (1)Sure.
Recommend to increase HS volume of kiai time to 70% . I feel like it should be louder Sure.
01:26:284 (4) - This beat isn't exactly the strongest in the song yet the spacing is so high Oo orz Preparation for next pattern.
I really liked the structure of this diff a whole lot, well done Thanks! Kiai part sucked, tho.

O-Moei wrote:
✨How about OD 7,5 or to 7,8 and HP 5,6 or to 5,8 ? What? Why?

✨00:07:868 (3) - Slightly not-stacked Okay...
00:46:185 (4) - ^ Y-yeah...

✨00:40:838 (1) - Remove NC. You didn't do this anywhere else ^^

✨00:51:977 (2,3) - Ctrl+G them is nicely played Too much backward / reject flow. If I Ctrl+J I, there'd be too much overlap.

✨01:13:066 (1) - Remove NC ? Yah, sorry.

✨01:15:887 (2) - NC Okay, dad.

Oke nice Who's the proud daddy?

3/5 mods

kk update

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 61853
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TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Maon Kurosaki
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:lit120
Version:LGV's Insane
Source:グリザイアの楽園 - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA -
Tags:tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
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Last edited by LGV894 2016-10-29T09:48:45+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-09-26T07:46:31+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
Beom's Extra
00:03:346 (8) - UNSNAP wtfffffffffff
00:28:363 (5) - stack?
00:48:561 (4) - ctrl+g may have a better flow
00:50:937 (7) - ^
00:56:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this part is tooooooo densy for jumps, especially 00:57:175 (1,2,3,4) - . how about scale them a bit?
00:57:769 (1,2,3,4) - i recommand to use ctrl+g to 00:57:917 (2,3,4) - since there is a obtuse angle jump at 00:58:066 (3,4,1) - which is not a good flow imo
that's all~! some diffs are quite amazing!!

LMT1996 wrote:
[Beom's Extra]
00:18:412 - both the drums and the violin stress this tick so instead of 3/2 + 1/2 slider you might want to try 2 1/1 sliders? I'll think about it since I like current one but your suggestion also good point
00:32:373 (2,3,4) - spacing for 1/2s and 1/1s is awfully close here so maybe something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6161723. It'll be confuse to players. more spacing so it doesn't look like an 1/2
01:16:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - here as well, there is also vocals on the white tick so this can easily be misread. I'd make 01:16:333 (2) - this a 1/2 slider, I think it's a bit clearer. put NC for reading
I ran out of modding stamina (i'm hungry too :c ). Sorry for not being able to point out much , most of the diffs already look great already.
Good luck!

Kisses wrote:
hi from my m4m queue
Beom
00:14:848 (3) - taking out the curve would look better imo as none of the other sliders in the pattern are curved. I get that you're going for a mini blanket but the slider is so small that it doesn't really do it that well
01:01:630 (2,1) - spacing doesnt reflect the current rhythm when sight reading imo I think It's fine. Idk what is a problem seriously lol
01:29:105 (1) - why does this beat have less spacing than both 01:28:809 (2) and 01:28:957 (3) ? the decreased spacing doesn't capture the feel of the beat especially since they're all back and forth jumps so it's more noticeable
[] I can't mod your highest diff sorry >< I hope this mod was useful, GL!

O-Moei wrote:
Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

Beom's Extra
✨00:29:551 (5) - NC as SV change ? (like them 00:48:858 (1,1) - )
00:31:927 (3) - ^

✨00:38:610 (3) - NC ?
01:16:630 (3) - ^

✨00:44:105 (1,2) - Swap NC

✨01:11:729 (3) - How about position x288y248 ? it's fine to me. no change sorry :3

Oke nice

Oke that's all from me, sorry if it's only 3 diffs and too simple >M< . Good luck

no comment = fixed
thanks for mods

diffu

osu file format v14

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lit120

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lit120 2016-09-26T09:47:42+00:00

updated beom's

LGV894

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LGV894 2016-09-28T02:45:16+00:00

Please don't kill mapset

lit120

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lit120 2016-09-28T12:33:27+00:00

LGV894 wrote:
Please don't kill mapset

i need to hunt the queues later, since i'm kinda not in a mood + busy with stuff

lit120

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lit120 2016-10-07T18:32:05+00:00

forgot to update karia's and lgv's LOL, sorry xd (did it just now)

Rieri

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Rieri 2016-10-07T18:48:56+00:00

Hello~ M4M

Easy

00:02:443 (2) - I get that you are trying to tell that the bpm has changed but it's barely noticeable in terms of the slider velocity, I'd rather not NC this
00:04:862 (3) - I'm not sure if I would NC this, but I do see the slider getting faster here so idk
00:08:462 (1) - I'd move this to 00:08:610 - cuz there's actually a loud sound there
00:22:719 (1) - Curve this the other way so it flows better to the next slider
Feels like there's a less use of 1/1 sliders and circles in the kiai part compared to the other parts, makes it less interesting

Normal

00:09:947 (1,2) - this may trigger people to click when the sound starts at 00:09:798 - maybe add a circle there because there is a sound
well done

Hard

00:02:800 (3,4) - not sure why you would ignore the sound on the red ticks
00:16:333 (3,2) - stack pls
01:28:660 (3,4) - it seems there's a lack of emphasis on the finishes, maybe add a little jump here so you can at least emphasize one of the strongest parts of the song

LGV

00:17:224 (3) - Not so sure about the playability here I'd try to make this flow better
00:40:838 (1) - why NC? inconsistent with 00:43:214 (2) -
00:53:016 (1) - Inconsistent NC compared to 00:48:264 (4,5,6,7) - 00:50:640 (3,4,5,6) -
01:00:590 (1) - Really not sure why the NC is here seems unnecessary to me
01:12:917 (2) - The spacing here is just waaaaaaaaaay too big considering the fact that this is not something that should be emphasized
01:19:600 (1) - There's a finish here and the distance from the previous note is 1.2x does this make sense at all xd
01:28:511 (1,2,3) - Seems too big for an insane diff, don't you think? after all, it has the same intensity of 01:28:066 (1,2,3) - so it should be similar to the size of the first 3 notes

범산

00:14:996 (4) - 자아아.. 저같았으면 이런데는 강조하는 부분이라고 생각하고 점프 넣었을텐데..
00:16:779 (1) - 이런 소리는 노래에 전혀 없는데에..
00:31:927 (1) - 노래랑 좀 안맞는 패턴이다 싶어서 이거 ctrl-g 시켜주시고 00:32:224 (1) - 이걸 (136, 280) 근처에다가 놓는데 어떨까요
00:51:828 (1) - 이걸 (488,320) 근처에다가 두면 흐름 좋아질거같은뎅
01:27:472 (2) - 읽기가 되게힘드네욬ㅋ 조금 위로 올려주신다면 ㄳㄳ...

I said i would do 6 but i couldnt really mod the rest T.T just mod 5 difficulties from my mapset instead thx

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2016-10-07T18:51:30+00:00

no fix thank
I might check on monday

lit120

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lit120 2016-10-07T19:13:45+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ M4M

Easy
00:02:443 (2) - I get that you are trying to tell that the bpm has changed but it's barely noticeable in terms of the slider velocity, I'd rather not NC this this is rly necessary for a BPM change like this
00:04:862 (3) - I'm not sure if I would NC this, but I do see the slider getting faster here so idk ^
00:08:462 (1) - I'd move this to 00:08:610 - cuz there's actually a loud sound there keep
00:22:719 (1) - Curve this the other way so it flows better to the next slider nah, it flows better
Feels like there's a less use of 1/1 sliders and circles in the kiai part compared to the other parts, makes it less interesting it depends on its vocal and its beat .-.

Normal
00:09:947 (1,2) - this may trigger people to click when the sound starts at 00:09:798 - maybe add a circle there because there is a sound nah, they just have to follow the drum beat there
well done

Hard
00:02:800 (3,4) - not sure why you would ignore the sound on the red ticks why not?
00:16:333 (3,2) - stack pls did a thing
01:28:660 (3,4) - it seems there's a lack of emphasis on the finishes, maybe add a little jump here so you can at least emphasize one of the strongest parts of the song did u notice that this diff is full of DS and that's the main objective on this diff that i mapped with DS only?

I said i would do 6 but i couldnt really mod the rest T.T just mod 5 difficulties from my mapset instead thx

thx!

Kaitjuh

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Kaitjuh 2016-10-07T20:16:22+00:00

M4M from your queue o/

p

General

00:06:086 - Make the timing/inherited points here have the same volume. This happens across several diffs, so pointing it out here.
Beom's Extra not using the video file.
normal-sliderslide23.wav is an unused hitsound.
soft-hitfinish2.wav is a hitsound with a possible >5ms delay

Easy

Nothing noteworthy except maybe change the position of 01:25:095 (3) - since the flow here is questionable compared to the rest of the diff. Maybe place it around x:270 y:347

Normal

00:09:798 - Maybe place a circle here, since the wait time here might be slightly awkward for players. By placing a circle for instance on 00:09:947 (1) - 's sliderhead. The wait time would be equal between 00:07:274 (3,4,1) - for example.
00:29:848 (1) - Ctrl+H for better flow.
00:36:977 (1) - Ctrl+J

Hard

00:31:779 (6,7) - 00:37:868 (3,4) - 01:06:383 (3,4,5,1) - the overlap caused by the triple doesn't look very nice. Maybe try a different pattern or place the triple a little further away. or set Stack Leniency to 0 lolol. There's probably no real reason to change this since it plays fine though, but since these are the only patterns that overlap awkwardly it kinda sticks out.
01:09:798 (2,3,1) - slight uneven spacing here

LGV's Insane

spacing inconsistency between 00:22:719 (1,2,3) - 00:24:204 (2,3,4) - , but they're the same sound and are the same passive-active beat pattern, so should have the same amount of emphasis spacing.
00:32:967 (3,4,1) - This is an awkward pattern imo. 00:33:115 (4,1) - This has no reason to have less spacing than 00:32:967 (3,4) - . If anything it should even have a higher spacing because of the vocal and strong beat sound.
00:33:709 (2,3,4) - same here kinda, the least strong beat gets more spacing. This occurs multiple times so only pointing out this one.
01:26:135 (3,4) - Maybe nerf this jump a little. The note (4) itself is not a very strong beat so it seems a bit off to me.

Beom's Extra

00:09:501 (1) - NC here seems unnecessary since it just plays like a normal beat and musically the note should not be apart from the last combo.
00:31:927 (1) - same story here, all the sliders are 0.75x so the NC doesn't really add anything. I mean you could argue that you NC when the music stops for a second, but then you should NC 00:22:422 (4) - and 00:44:105 (1) - as well.

DavidEd's Extra

01:01:779 (6) - Overmapped imo since it's not mapped on anything
01:27:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't fully understand why this is a heavy jump section. There's no music, only the vocals which these jumps don't represent so it just seems overdone.

Karia's Extra

00:02:086 (1) - Since you stacked the 1/1 here 00:04:862 (1) - maybe stack this one as well.
Not much to point out, since extra's are my weaker points. Interesting diff though~

Lasse's Extra

Why skip the beat 00:02:978 - when you mapped the same kinda beat earlier and after that?

Perfect World

Nope

Also, since my mod wasn't that large you can take it easy on my map lol.
or at least mod the Extra idk, do what you feel like doing xD

Good Luck o/

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-10-07T20:26:43+00:00

skipped cause it seems way less important than other beats here, so I chose to undermap. think the rhythm it makes works quite well with the most important beats of the melody

Rieri

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Rieri 2016-10-07T21:17:58+00:00

NOOOOOOOOO U RESET MY 2 KUDOSU WTFFFFFF

lit120

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lit120 2016-10-08T03:42:29+00:00

Kaitjuh wrote:
M4M from your queue o/

p
General
00:06:086 - Make the timing/inherited points here have the same volume. This happens across several diffs, so pointing it out here. meh, they have their own volume setting on their own way in GDs
Beom's Extra not using the video file. fixed
normal-sliderslide23.wav is an unused hitsound. ask lasse about this .-.
soft-hitfinish2.wav is a hitsound with a possible >5ms delay did it
Easy
Nothing noteworthy except maybe change the position of 01:25:095 (3) - since the flow here is questionable compared to the rest of the diff. Maybe place it around x:270 y:347 flow's fine
Normal
00:09:798 - Maybe place a circle here, since the wait time here might be slightly awkward for players. By placing a circle for instance on 00:09:947 (1) - 's sliderhead. The wait time would be equal between 00:07:274 (3,4,1) - for example. this one's enough
00:29:848 (1) - Ctrl+H for better flow. nah
00:36:977 (1) - Ctrl+J no
Hard
00:31:779 (6,7) - 00:37:868 (3,4) - 01:06:383 (3,4,5,1) - the overlap caused by the triple doesn't look very nice. Maybe try a different pattern or place the triple a little further away. or set Stack Leniency to 0 lolol. There's probably no real reason to change this since it plays fine though, but since these are the only patterns that overlap awkwardly it kinda sticks out. i wanna see how this go for a while...
01:09:798 (2,3,1) - slight uneven spacing here had to move 01:09:947 (3) - as a stack
Perfect World
Nope

Also, since my mod wasn't that large you can take it easy on my map lol.
or at least mod the Extra idk, do what you feel like doing xD

Good Luck o/

thx!

Lami

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Lami 2016-10-09T14:51:50+00:00

/me dead

Easy

00:00:614 (1,1) - what's this double NC @_@

LGV

00:36:977 (1) - ctrl+G

Beomsan

00:00:614 (1) - bpm이 조금씩 계속 바뀌어나가는데다가 전반적으로 느리고 조용하기까지한 부분을 only 노트보다는
차라리 슬라쪽이 플레이에도 훨씬 낫고 리듬선택도 더 낫다고 생각합니다
00:10:541 (5) - 노트를 넣기에는 좀 음이 많이 약한듯한..
더 강한 파트는 슬라꼬리로 끝내버리고 약한부분을 노트로 만드는는건 리듬선택이 조금 애매하지 않나...
00:17:967 (1,2,1,2) - 플레이어에게 더 가깝게 다가오는 소리는 드럼보다는 멜로디라 그런지
슬라가 좀 노래와는 조금 이질적으로 느껴지네요
01:26:729 (1,2) - 리딩이 너무 애매한데
애매한건 그냥 깔끔하게 하시는게 좋으면 좋았지 나빠지지는 않을듯한;;....

DavidEd

00:28:808 (2,3) - i expect blanket in here xd
00:59:402 (1) - since they have pretty strong beat than previous,
little weird that they have same slow sv, like previous.

karia

뭔가 데케님맵에서 봣었던 슬라트릭이 여기저기...

lasse

00:40:095 (4,2) - minor stack
00:42:472 (4) - 2 circle better as strong beat, like 00:39:947 (3,4,5) -

Extra

00:25:986 (4) - if you use 2 circle, would be nicer as vocal
01:00:145 (4,5,6) - i'd like to increase jump here, as it's pretty strong part before kiai.
01:21:977 (1,1) - i kinda think NC too many here.

lit120

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lit120 2016-10-09T18:20:06+00:00

Lami wrote:
/me dead

Easy

00:00:614 (1,1) - what's this double NC @_@ bpm change thingy, duhh

Extra

00:25:986 (4) - if you use 2 circle, would be nicer as vocal meh
01:00:145 (4,5,6) - i'd like to increase jump here, as it's pretty strong part before kiai. did a thing
01:21:977 (1,1) - i kinda think NC too many here. looks fine

thx!

@Karia try to ctrl g 01:15:442 (1) - . would be really playable and less trickier to play here

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2016-10-10T07:25:52+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
범산
00:14:996 (4) - 자아아.. 저같았으면 이런데는 강조하는 부분이라고 생각하고 점프 넣었을텐데.. 1/4간격 킥슬라이더가 이 정도면 점프라고 할 만도 한듯??
00:16:779 (1) - 이런 소리는 노래에 전혀 없는데에.. 귀를 파시오
00:31:927 (1) - 노래랑 좀 안맞는 패턴이다 싶어서 이거 ctrl-g 시켜주시고 00:32:224 (1) - 이걸 (136, 280) 근처에다가 놓는데 어떨까요 안맞다고 해야할지 뭔지는 모르겠는데 어느정도는 공감하는 부분 생각해보겠음~~
00:51:828 (1) - 이걸 (488,320) 근처에다가 두면 흐름 좋아질거같은뎅 그 자리는 오버랩 너무 심하게 되기도 하고 별로 문제도 없어보임
01:27:472 (2) - 읽기가 되게힘드네욬ㅋ 조금 위로 올려주신다면 ㄳㄳ...뭔가 바꾸기는 싫어서 일단 뉴콤해놨음 보고 수정하는거로

Lami wrote:
Beomsan

00:00:614 (1) - bpm이 조금씩 계속 바뀌어나가는데다가 전반적으로 느리고 조용하기까지한 부분을 only 노트보다는
차라리 슬라쪽이 플레이에도 훨씬 낫고 리듬선택도 더 낫다고 생각합니다 지당하다고 할 수 있는 말씀이십니다만 별 다른 논리는 없이 그대로 가겠습니다.
00:10:541 (5) - 노트를 넣기에는 좀 음이 많이 약한듯한..
더 강한 파트는 슬라꼬리로 끝내버리고 약한부분을 노트로 만드는는건 리듬선택이 조금 애매하지 않나...
00:17:967 (1,2,1,2) - 플레이어에게 더 가깝게 다가오는 소리는 드럼보다는 멜로디라 그런지
슬라가 좀 노래와는 조금 이질적으로 느껴지네요 그런 점 감안하더라도 이게 맘에 들더라고요.
01:26:729 (1,2) - 리딩이 너무 애매한데
애매한건 그냥 깔끔하게 하시는게 좋으면 좋았지 나빠지지는 않을듯한;;....

@Kaitjuh all fixed

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Maon Kurosaki
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:lit120
Version:Beom's Extra
Source:グリザイアの楽園 - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA -
Tags:tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
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thanks for mods~

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-10-10T17:01:48+00:00

updated beom's

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-10-12T15:38:03+00:00

@Kaitjuh : I don't want to stack 00:02:086 (1,2) - this cuz (2) is circle, not slider like 00:05:168 (2) - this.
Thanks for modding!

@lit120 : Could you ctrl + g on 01:14:996 (1) - this instead? Thanks

LGV894

355 posts

Joined May 2013

LGV894 2016-10-15T05:32:44+00:00

LGV

00:17:224 (3) - Not so sure about the playability here I'd try to make this flow better Not sure what's wrong with it. It's just a simple "X" flow pattern.
00:40:838 (1) - why NC? inconsistent with 00:43:214 (2) - Pretty sure I removed that before...
00:53:016 (1) - Inconsistent NC compared to 00:48:264 (4,5,6,7) - 00:50:640 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would ruin readability... but.... fine.
01:00:590 (1) - Really not sure why the NC is here seems unnecessary to me Lol that was a mistake
01:12:917 (2) - The spacing here is just waaaaaaaaaay too big considering the fact that this is not something that should be emphasized It wasn't that bad, considering the object before it was a slider end...
01:19:600 (1) - There's a finish here and the distance from the previous note is 1.2x does this make sense at all xd WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA lol
01:28:511 (1,2,3) - Seems too big for an insane diff, don't you think? after all, it has the same intensity of 01:28:066 (1,2,3) - so it should be similar to the size of the first 3 notes Yah.

Lami wrote:
LGV

00:36:977 (1) - ctrl+G Where's the fun in that? I mapped it that way for ~emphasis.

Kaitjuh wrote:
LGV's Insane

spacing inconsistency between 00:22:719 (1,2,3) - 00:24:204 (2,3,4) - , but they're the same sound and are the same passive-active beat pattern, so should have the same amount of emphasis spacing. Ok, dad. I just mapped (2,3,4) that way to avoid overlap.
00:32:967 (3,4,1) - This is an awkward pattern imo. 00:33:115 (4,1) - This has no reason to have less spacing than 00:32:967 (3,4) - . If anything it should even have a higher spacing because of the vocal and strong beat sound. Yes, dad. Originally thought that the unconventional flow change would give enough emphasis.
00:33:709 (2,3,4) - same here kinda, the least strong beat gets more spacing. This occurs multiple times so only pointing out this one.
01:26:135 (3,4) - Maybe nerf this jump a little. The note (4) itself is not a very strong beat so it seems a bit off to me.

6/5 mods

update

osu file format v14

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Title:Setsuna no Kajitsu
TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Maon Kurosaki
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:lit120
Version:LGV's Insane
Source:グリザイアの楽園 - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA -
Tags:tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
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Jabba

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hey, m4m

easy
00:03:851 (2,1) - this blanket looks a bit off
00:11:432 (2,3) - so does this
00:17:967 (1) - I'd move this a bit higher for the better flow
00:22:719 (1) - curving it down like this would work much better imo
00:43:511 (4) - not a fan of such patterns but I guess it's acceptable since 00:44:402 - is emphasized much more than 00:44:105 -
01:14:996 (3,1,2) - uhh is it just me or it's broken a bit
01:28:066 (1) - wouldn't it be more logical to put the first anchor point at 01:28:511 - when the music has a strong beat? smth like this (or you can do the same thing and put the anchor point at 01:28:660 - depends on what you want to emphasize more, I prefer the former)
nice

normal
OD4 to fit the spread better (2-4-6)
00:09:798 - y u no map this
00:10:689 (1) - I'd curve this a bit more for teh flow
00:23:313 (2,3) - uuhhhh something like this looks much better IMO
00:24:947 (1,2,3,4,5) - this follows the music perfectly but I feel like it's more dense than the rest of this part which is not really that good but w/e
00:36:977 (1,2) - same as 00:23:313 (2,3) -
00:47:670 (3) - doesn't really fit in there, an 1/1 slider starting at 00:47:521 - would be better cause you won't miss a vocal and at the same time would have an object at 00:47:818 - which is a drum hit
00:49:897 (3,4) - kinda same as above, (4) being an 1/2 slider sounds really meh (and 00:50:343 - is stronger than 00:50:194 - so having it as a sliderend when there's a possibility to not do that doesn't help) so I'd suggest changing (3) to a 1/1 slider and putting a circle at 00:50:343 -
01:09:650 (2,3) - mentioned this already
01:10:838 (4) - this sounds out of place yet again, the only place where such a slider could fit in this part is 01:10:392 - but you already mapped it. smth like this is better
01:14:254 (2,3) - same as 00:49:897 (3,4) -
01:28:066 (1,2) - idk I'd do something like this instead

hard
00:00:614 (1,2,3) - the distance between those three objects looks uneven, mind fixing that?
00:10:392 (3,2) - I'd make those two parallel, looks better imo
00:19:303 (4) - moving this a bit to the right would help the flow
00:24:650 (3,4) - those aren't making a perfect triangle with 00:23:462 (2) - , fix plx
00:31:779 (6,7,8,9) - rip stacks idk move the stack a bit further from (6) cause this looks sad
00:37:868 (3,4,5,1,2) - same
00:39:650 (2,3,4) - uneven distance yet again
00:42:323 (3,1) - those two should blanket each other pls
01:06:383 (3,4,5,1) - ^^^
01:11:878 (2,3) - the transition between those two is weird somehow, idk maybe it's because of the blanket
01:14:699 (3,4,5,1) - y'know
fun diff

lgv
00:01:902 (4) - any reason for a jump this big? the sound on this one is pretty much weak
00:07:125 (4) - ^
00:08:313 (4) - you got the idea
00:11:284 (3) - why is it a slider? you basically ignore 00:11:432 - with this and if you want to follow that noise in the background (I think you understand what I mean) 00:11:432 is still stronger
00:16:185 (3,4,5) - y u make the distance between those equal? cause they're not similar lol
00:17:076 (2,3) - I get the idea behind those but can you make (2) a bit more spaced from (1)? cause having such low spacing on a strong beat is literally triggering me
00:23:462 (2,3) - ok I don't get this, why do you space (2) more than (3)? cause (3) is stronger as it's a clap and it also has a new vocal line on it. this applies to the whole section - I have no idea why would you do that
00:26:284 (1) - mind curving it a bit more and making (2) the same so it'd flow nicer?
00:28:363 (4) - again, why is it spaced the same as (2) and (3)?
00:32:967 (3) - ok this one's spacing can be justified as 'it's having a new vocal line' but anyway 3x DS is an overkill
00:36:680 (3) - ctrl-g this. would help the flow a bit, increase the emphasis on this object and reduce the jump between this and (1) a bit - now it's a bit too much
00:39:798 (2) - uuuuhhhh why, this has almost no sound at all
00:39:947 (3) - and then you do 1.2x DS on both a vocal line and a beat.
00:42:175 (2) - ^^
00:44:848 (2) - you got the idea, mentioned this already
00:49:600 (2) - and for some reason you don't use that gigantic DS here, this is much better!
00:53:462 (7) - please no
00:58:957 (1,2,3) - idk this is fine but I'd rather make 2-3-4 a triangle since they're all vocals
01:00:442 (2,3) - aaand those two could use bigger DS since they're more emphasized in the music
01:05:491 (5) - y u no NC?
01:05:788 (7) - y u the same spacing pls
01:10:838 (4) - this has almost no sound but you still space it
01:11:358 (6,1) - this transition looks bad but I'll let it pass lol
01:11:729 (2) - this could use a bit more spacing
01:13:066 (1) - same, no idea why didn't you space it more
01:13:511 (2) - uh. IMO this vocal is much stronger than 01:13:660 (3) - and thus should have more spacing
01:14:699 (5) - y'know

beom
00:02:800 (5,6,7,8) - I get this kind of pattern but why'd you do that if you always space them in groups of 4 or 2?
00:11:432 (3,4,5) - uh I already mentioned this in the previous diff. first of all, why won't you space (3)? and then, why do you have the same spacing between those? I can get it if it was a hard diff or lower, where having the same DS is pretty much fine, but you're mapping an insane and have the same DS between different beats. that's no good
00:12:472 (2,3,4,5) - idk if you're following that noise in the background, why won't you space (2) out cause it has the same sound and (5) doesn't; if you're following the beats and decide to not space (2) that much, why does (5) have such low spacing?
00:16:630 (4,1) - I don't get those, (1) is clearly overmapped and the NCs are switched ((4) is much stronger than (1) and you've NCd such things correctly before)
00:27:472 (1) - I remember how you told me in your mod for my Setsuna that I can create good slidershapes using only basic sliders and then you use those by yourself. хDDD oh and yes the flow between this one and (2) is meh, mind changing it somehow?
00:32:521 (3) - ok I like big spacing on claps but this is a bit overkill
00:36:680 (3) - using two circles instead of a slider would put more emphasis on vocals, it'd fit better I think
00:37:571 (3) - rotating it like that would improve the flow
00:38:016 (4,1) - uuuuhh make this one bigger please! (1) and (2) are both strong notes but for some reason (1) has such low spacing
00:41:729 (1,3) - those two are not parallel enough, fix pls
00:42:769 (1,2) - uhhhh
00:46:927 (2,3) - I'd rotate those two to improve the flow but it's fine already I guess
00:47:224 (4,5,6) - meh, same spacing :< (5) and (6) could use higher spacing cause they're vocals y'know
00:47:521 (6,1) - swap NCs
00:50:343 (3) - nice pattern y'got there but this particular note needs more emphasis :>
00:52:719 (4) - pretty much same
01:07:125 (2,3,4,5) - you've been following the vocals until now (or at least I suppose you've been cause that's the most logical explanation for your object placement) and then you're overmapping everything. in the next part, which is basically the same, you go back to the vocals.
01:10:838 (4) - I've mentioned this in the previous diff that this object shouldn't have such high spacing cause it's almost silent

david
00:01:902 (5) - y u do this, it's not a strong beat nor a strong vocal so putting a 2.5x DS jump there when you've used 1.2x before is just meh
00:04:525 (5) - and if we're talking about changing the spacing, e.g. this one can be spaced a bit more, but w/e - it's fine as it is
00:19:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 'o' is for 'overmapping', plsno
00:23:610 (5) - y u no space this, it's both a clap and a new vocal line
00:29:551 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^^ meh
00:55:986 (1,2,3) - for this whole part - why won't you map this? it's a buildup, one of the strongest parts of the song and you just spam 1/1 sliders. at least throw in some circles!
01:04:006 (5,6) - I don't really think that (6) deserves higher spacing than (5) since (5) is a stronger vocal
01:08:759 (7) - space this more pls, both a strong vocal and a clap
01:09:947 (5) - ^
01:10:838 (4) - mentioned it two times already, why is it spaced like that if it's almost silent?
01:13:363 (4) - moving it to smth like 478 202 would both improve the flow a bit and emphasize (4) and (5) more
01:18:561 (1) - I'd end this a bit earlier and put a circle on 01:20:937 -
01:27:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - PLEASE NO. this is hella overmapped, at least use sliders and not circles there, cause right now it's literally mapped to nothing
nice diff overall

karia
I'd bump the OD to smth like 8.5, 8.2 feels a bit low for a 5.6* map
00:02:264 - I can understand why don't you map 00:05:015 - but this has a clear sound
00:15:887 (2,3) - this is actually misleading cause you only used such things for 3/4 + circle type of patterns before, spacing (3) out would fix this
00:56:432 (3) - this one needs more spacing huh, it's a strong beat
00:56:581 (4,5,6) - don't use this kind of a flow plx, cause that's the only place in this section where you do that and it doesn't really fit. also I'd suggest to split (6,7) using the same reasoning
01:07:274 (3) - splitting this into two circles is better IMO, it's not really the same as (1) and (2) so I don't see much reason for it to be a slider but I get your idea
01:20:343 (5,6,7,8) - meh, boring stack. you can do smth better than this! even back-and-forths would fit more
01:21:977 - uh why didn't you map this? it's a strong beat and not mapping it kinda ruins the NC structure cause the new section starts here
nice! enjoyed this one

lasse
applies to the whole diff: ugh, those sliders. I know that you use those in literally every map but I still don't get it - why'd you use such sliders in tv size jump maps LOL
OD 8.2 is kinda low for a 5.8* map
00:01:718 (4,5) - I can see the reasoning behind this one but it'd be much more logical to map 00:02:264 - then which you didn't (though you did it on 00:03:335 (4,1) - )
00:06:086 (1,2,3,4) - I have no idea why those have decreasing spacing tbh, mind explaining it? cause as for me it'd be better to keep increasing the DS
00:08:462 (7) - spacing this out would be a good idea cause a new section starts here. otherwise it's pretty much hard to read
00:28:066 (4,5) - those are the same yet you have much bigger distance between 4 and 5 rather than 3 and 4, fix pls
01:04:006 (5,6) - why is (6) spaced more? (5) is both a strong beat and a strong vocal and (6) is just a strong vocal
01:07:274 (3) - same as karia's diff, I think that splitting those into two would be better cause this slider differs from the previous two
01:13:511 (5,6) - ^^
01:16:482 (1) - when testplaying this was pretty much hard to hit cause the most convenient way to go after (2) would be in the direction of 01:16:630 (2,3,4) - and having (1) covered by a slider doesn't help at all. so I'd do something like this instead
01:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - PLEASE NO I'M TRIGGERED this is like the most retarded thing you could ever do in that place. you probably want to do this cause all of those notes are somehow similar so they should form some kind of a polygon shape - nope, doesn't work. first of all, it plays bad, second, they're not that similar, something like back-and-forth motion like you did before the kiai would be much better.
01:28:066 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok I'm triggered again. first of all, 1-2-3-4 being a square doesn't make any sense for me - if in the previous case I could've said that they're somehow similar to each other, those four beats are completely different - there's zero reason to arrange them like that. then, this 1/2 slider - using it is perfectly fine cause 01:28:808 - is somehow weaker than the other beats, but why the low SV? completely unsightreadable, looks like 1/4 or even 1/8. also what is this hitsound LOL

perfect world
OD 8.5 is sure too low, 9 or even smth like 9.2 would work better
00:28:660 (1,2,3) - why the low spacing? those three beats are more emphasized in the music than the previous three
01:01:482 (1,2) - this plays weird as hell cause you have to go back to where (2) was and I personally was expecting (1) to be under (3)
01:10:838 (4) - mentioned this, idk, three times - there's no reason to space this one that much cause it's almost silent
neat diff, can't find much there or maybe i'm just tired already orz

good luck~

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