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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 04, 2018 at 12:23:58 AM

Artist: Maon Kurosaki
Title: Setsuna no Kajitsu
Source: グリザイアの楽園
Tags: tv size opening grisaia no rakuen -hakurei- lgv894 lasse beomsan karia davided
BPM: 163
Filesize: 18702kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beom's Extra (5.32 stars, 351 notes)
  2. DavidEd's Extra (5.3 stars, 386 notes)
  3. Easy (1.57 stars, 104 notes)
  4. Hard (3.43 stars, 287 notes)
  5. Karia's Extra (5.57 stars, 381 notes)
  6. Lasse's Extra (5.63 stars, 375 notes)
  7. LGV's Insane (4.58 stars, 330 notes)
  8. Normal (2.23 stars, 178 notes)


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From #modhelp

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I'm finishing my GD. btw wtf Lasse's Extra, Lasse_Squares?

btw should I hitsound myself?
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The square diff is a joke lol
I told lit to remove it once the spread is finished
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xd
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LGV894 wrote:

I'm finishing my GD. btw wtf Lasse's Extra, Lasse_Squares?

btw should I hitsound myself?
LOL

yeah sure u can
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uploaded karia's + fixed hitsound on his diff + few changes on my diff

and yeah, removed the square diff :v
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personal update (※hitobjects only※)
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posted
so is the spread done then or more GDs incoming?
also happy birthday LGV :v
posted
@LGV hbd man! xd
@Lasse done from now

uploaded lgv's + hitsouded beomsan's and lgv's and even some of my diffs

let's go
posted
Well,come here 4 m4m XD;
only "Perfect World "diff modded yet;
some advises
00:11:135 (8) - is there something missing before slider8??
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the DS between note2&note3 and the DS between note 3,4,5 is not the same, and they can also make a form instead of being placed randomly;
maybe a five-pointed star:
[img][http://puu.sh/rhIzK/cd4cfa7a5b.png/img];
00:19:600 (6,1,2) - The jump distance between note 6 and 1 is extremely large;
00:23:462 (2,3,1) - the end of slider 2 can be at the position of the preciously note2;
00:31:185 (4,5,6,1,2) - just as the problem 1~;
00:33:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - it maybe a little annoying, but a slight change of their placement will really make the map look better;
blanket and placement of sliders are very nice, as well as the hit-sounds;
my modding level is limited, hope those listed above will help your map better~
posted

Chocobo wrote:

Well,come here 4 m4m XD;
only "Perfect World "diff modded yet;
some advises
00:11:135 (8) - is there something missing before slider8?? i don't get it .-.
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the DS between note2&note3 and the DS between note 3,4,5 is not the same, and they can also make a form instead of being placed randomly;
maybe a five-pointed star: it's fine, but i didn't plan to make a star pattern here
[img][http://puu.sh/rhIzK/cd4cfa7a5b.png/img];
00:19:600 (6,1,2) - The jump distance between note 6 and 1 is extremely large; intensity part and a loud beat
00:23:462 (2,3,1) - the end of slider 2 can be at the position of the preciously note2; still readable
00:31:185 (4,5,6,1,2) - just as the problem 1~; still ok though
00:33:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - it maybe a little annoying, but a slight change of their placement will really make the map look better; nahh i wanna keep it
blanket and placement of sliders are very nice, as well as the hit-sounds;
my modding level is limited, hope those listed above will help your map better~
thx for mod!
posted
1 Insane 5 Extras

>2016 mapping xd
posted

Kisses wrote:

1 Insane 5 Extras

>2016 mapping xd
I was about to say that
posted
Hi come from m4m~
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502077

Easy
  • 00:43:511 (4,1) - those blanket seems a little bit weird, why not make them same shape for a better look?


Normal
  • 00:24:947 (1) - that shape isnt quite well...... imo just a straight slider would be ok
    00:44:105 (1) - remove nc and 00:44:402 (2) - add nc to follow the drum would be better imo


Hard
  • 00:31:779 (6) - this seems too near to the next 3 notes, try to move up a little bit
    00:37:868 (3) - ^
    01:14:699 (3) - ^


LGV's Insane
  • 00:28:808 (2,3) - try ctrl+g? flow is a little bit weird imo
    01:00:145 (1,2,3) - imo those straight notes isnt quite well cuz the ds change is too sudden between 00:59:848 (2,1) - and 01:00:145 (1,2) - but the music does not change a lot so that may cause a miss


Beom's Extra
  • 00:03:346 (8) - UNSNAP
    00:28:363 (5) - stack?
    00:48:561 (4) - ctrl+g may have a better flow
    00:50:937 (7) - ^
    00:56:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this part is tooooooo densy for jumps, especially 00:57:175 (1,2,3,4) - . how about scale them a bit?
    00:57:769 (1,2,3,4) - i recommand to use ctrl+g to 00:57:917 (2,3,4) - since there is a obtuse angle jump at 00:58:066 (3,4,1) - which is not a good flow imo


DavidEd's Extra
  • 01:05:937 (4) - i think rotate anti-clockwise it about 30 degrees would make 4->5 more fluent


sry cannot find problems in Karia's Extra since its really too hard to me to read it ;w;

Lasse's Extra
  • 00:49:155 (1,2) - i think 2 isnt put at there since the high sv slider 1 has a strong downward trend so i think at least 2 should be put lower then the 1
    00:51:531 (2,3) - ^
    00:54:353 (4,5) - ctrl+g?


Perfect World
  • 00:49:155 (1,2) - player would probably miss 2 here since there is a quite wavy slider, so how about make this blanket a little bit soft? like 00:51:531 (1,2) -


that's all~! some diffs are quite amazing!!
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Neanmoins wrote:

Hi come from m4m~
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502077

Easy
  • 00:43:511 (4,1) - those blanket seems a little bit weird, why not make them same shape for a better look? did sth


Normal
  • 00:24:947 (1) - that shape isnt quite well...... imo just a straight slider would be ok keep
    00:44:105 (1) - remove nc and 00:44:402 (2) - add nc to follow the drum would be better imo keep


Hard
  • 00:31:779 (6) - this seems too near to the next 3 notes, try to move up a little bit keep this one for a while cuz i wanna stick with pentagon shape
    00:37:868 (3) - ^ ^ triangle
    01:14:699 (3) - ^ ^ stacks


Perfect World
  • 00:49:155 (1,2) - player would probably miss 2 here since there is a quite wavy slider, so how about make this blanket a little bit soft? like 00:51:531 (1,2) - still fine for me


that's all~! some diffs are quite amazing!!
thx for mod!
posted
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:056 (4) - Move this slider away, or give it a new form, since it's an Easy, the pattern here is not very beautiful.
  2. 00:14:996 (3,1) - This part is chaining itself quite bad, you should rework the shape of the second slider.
  3. 00:15:442 (1,4) - Small overleap.
  4. 00:15:442 (1,2) - Blanket isn't very well done.
  5. 00:45:887 (3,1) - You should try to avoid this linear pattern, you can try to do something that use more space in the grid, to make it more fun to play.
  6. 00:47:076 (2,1) - Don't do this in an Easy diff, it's too hard to read, beginners can't read this at all.
  7. 00:50:046 (2,1) - Same here
  8. 01:03:115 (2,3) - Small overleap here.


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:614 (1) - Here, you can try to move this slider to make the perfect blanket with the scond, or you can try to move the second one, it's up to you.
  2. 00:02:800 (2) - On this slider, I would recommand you to do something mode shapeful, I mean... you can try to copy the shape of this one → 00:01:350 (2) -
  3. 00:16:185 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/riNpE/784156869a.png
  4. 00:23:759 (3) - https://puu.sh/riNqT/2b6ff6f8a9.png
  5. 00:30:293 (2) - ^
  6. 00:37:422 (2) - https://puu.sh/riNtz/d8f52618fd.png
  7. 01:09:650 (2,3) - Avoid this, this is not good in my opinion, you should rework this to fit with the next part, and to not cut the slider itself.
  8. 01:16:185 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be hard for an Normal.


Good luck for ranking :D
posted

Pachiru wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:056 (4) - Move this slider away, or give it a new form, since it's an Easy, the pattern here is not very beautiful. curved a bit, but not gonna ruin the triangle pattern
  2. 00:14:996 (3,1) - This part is chaining itself quite bad, you should rework the shape of the second slider. fixed blanket only
  3. 00:15:442 (1,4) - Small overleap. did sth
  4. 00:15:442 (1,2) - Blanket isn't very well done. already answered
  5. 00:45:887 (3,1) - You should try to avoid this linear pattern, you can try to do something that use more space in the grid, to make it more fun to play. keep
  6. 00:47:076 (2,1) - Don't do this in an Easy diff, it's too hard to read, beginners can't read this at all. oh rly? it's readable enough
  7. 00:50:046 (2,1) - Same here ^
  8. 01:03:115 (2,3) - Small overleap here. just leave it there


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:614 (1) - Here, you can try to move this slider to make the perfect blanket with the scond, or you can try to move the second one, it's up to you. keep
  2. 00:02:800 (2) - On this slider, I would recommand you to do something mode shapeful, I mean... you can try to copy the shape of this one → 00:01:350 (2) - keep
  3. 00:16:185 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/riNpE/784156869a.png fixed the red anchor a bit
  4. 00:23:759 (3) - https://puu.sh/riNqT/2b6ff6f8a9.png keep
  5. 00:30:293 (2) - ^ ^
  6. 00:37:422 (2) - https://puu.sh/riNtz/d8f52618fd.png made it up a bit
  7. 01:09:650 (2,3) - Avoid this, this is not good in my opinion, you should rework this to fit with the next part, and to not cut the slider itself. this one is fine imo
  8. 01:16:185 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be hard for an Normal. we'll see how this goes .-.


Good luck for ranking :D
thx!
posted
Hi, I saw your request on the offline #modreqs thread so I think I might just give it a go.
  • [Perfect World]
  1. 00:01:902 (5,1) - you might want to try stacking these so that the player is more aware of the bpm change. If you think that works then you can try stacking this too 00:03:157 (4,1) - .
  2. 00:47:373 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - because you start to follow the synth (that sounds like crystals) with 1 2 3 4 so I think 3 4 should have a different jump pattern otherwise the player can't differentiate which rhythm line you're following. I think decreasing the ds 3 -> 4 is good, stack (3) on (2) is quite neat.
  3. 01:09:056 (1) - there's a slight overlap, don't know if it's intentional but it doesn't look that nice to me.
  4. 01:21:234 (2) - I'm not sure about this, but the momentum from the stream is quite big and they can misread this as a 1/2, maybe space this out a bit more? Because here you have these as 1/2 01:22:274 (2,3) - while the spacing is roughly the same.
  5. 01:25:392 (7) - this note here is a bit different from the structure you've been using like here 01:18:115 (6,1) - , 00:10:392 (7,1) - and 00:15:145 (6,1) - .
    [Lasse's Extra]
  6. 00:35:046 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this but I usually expect to start clicking on the note on the sliderend first, but sometimes I can hit this too, the approach circles here are too far apart to be able to read which circle comes first. I'd like to suggest ctrl+g these, but I don't know if that makes it worse or not.
    Awesome diff!
    [Karia's Extra]
  7. 00:44:699 (2) - for some reason I always do not expect a note and jump straight to 3 after hitting 1, though I can hit 00:43:808 (5,6) - these perfectly fine. Maybe because 00:43:808 (5,6) - ends on a stronger tick so I thought 00:44:402 (1,2) - these would have a different pattern.
  8. 01:01:482 (1,2,3) - I was not able to read this properly while sightreading. It might be a good idea to 01:01:036 (2,3) - ctrl+g these 2 so the spacing is small enough for the player to read the 1/1 gap.
    [DavidEd's Extra]
  9. 01:05:343 (6,1) - Is there a specific reason why it isn't mapped as triples like 01:06:234 (5,6,7) - and 01:06:234 (5,6,7) - ?
  10. 01:08:907 (8) - I don't think there's a drum sound here so 01:08:759 (7) - this could be a 1/2 slider instead?
  11. 01:15:145 (4,5,1,2,3) - these jumps kind of ignore the 3/2 rhythm that the music is trying to emphasise so, just a suggestion? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6161651 .
  12. 01:21:234 (1) - if you're trying to follow the vocals then this should actually start on the red tick, if you're following the drums then the tick on the sliderend is actually stronger than the tick on the sliderhead so I think this slider somewhat misses the rhythm.
  13. 01:27:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The only music element present here is the vocals and it definitely doesn't follow straight 1/2s so I think you should reassess the rhythm here to follow the vocals more closely.
    [Beom's Extra]
  14. 00:18:412 - both the drums and the violin stress this tick so instead of 3/2 + 1/2 slider you might want to try 2 1/1 sliders?
  15. 00:32:373 (2,3,4) - spacing for 1/2s and 1/1s is awfully close here so maybe something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6161723 .
  16. 01:16:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - here as well, there is also vocals on the white tick so this can easily be misread. I'd make 01:16:333 (2) - this a 1/2 slider, I think it's a bit clearer.
    [LGV's Insane]
  17. 01:10:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing for this stream might be a bit too big for Insane, also a small ds change from 6 to 1 at 202bpm might also be a bit too hard for players at this skill level.

I ran out of modding stamina (i'm hungry too :c ). Sorry for not being able to point out much , most of the diffs already look great already.
Good luck!
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