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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 05, 2017 at 12:50:25 PM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: The Asterisk War
Source: 学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags: 2nd second season opening gakusen toshi academy city on water j-rock tv size west ground keweft
BPM: 143
Filesize: 3826kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Easy - 4Key (1.21 stars, 249 notes)
  2. 4K Hard - 4Key (2.81 stars, 701 notes)
  3. 4K Insane - 4Key (3.52 stars, 935 notes)
  4. 4K Maximum Genestella - 4Key (4.19 stars, 1124 notes)
  5. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.96 stars, 468 notes)
  6. 7K Easy - 7Key (1.25 stars, 267 notes)
  7. 7K Hard - 7Key (3.12 stars, 788 notes)
  8. 7K Insane - 7Key (3.68 stars, 1018 notes)
  9. 7K Maximum Genestella - 7Key (5.08 stars, 1332 notes)
  10. 7K Normal - 7Key (2.02 stars, 508 notes)


Download: Shiena Nishizawa - The Asterisk War
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Gakusen Toshi Asterisk
the opening theme for the second season of the anime

The Asterisk War
Shiena Nishizawa



Status: RANKED
by Mam Protastic101
by Sir Kawawa

Difficulty:


  1. 4K/7K Easy - for beginners. Various basic 1/2 notes patterns with some really easy 1/4 notes.
  2. 4K/7K Normal - for average players. More 1/2 notes and some addition of 1/4 for the percussions.
  3. 4K/7K Hard - for intermediate players. Full percussion notes are implemented in the difficulty, feels like drummer.
  4. 4K/7K Insane - for amateur players that can handle full percussion notes along with other instruments such as power guitar and synthesizers.
  5. 4K/7K Maximum Genestella - for veteran players. More dense in terms of notes and more detailed long sound of guitars and synthesizers. Better set up your strategies, get ready your weapons, and be the best Genestella. Let the ASTERISK WAR begins!

Thank you for these helpful people below!

Modders: count - 17

  1. Syadow- - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal
  2. LuckyLemon - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 7K Easy, 7K Normal
  3. Aras25 - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane with Hitsound Mod!
  4. Rivals_7 - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum, 7K Normal, 7K Hard, 7K Insane, 7K Maximum with Hitsound Mod!
  5. Dellvangel - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  6. M o M o- Modded: 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  7. -SoraGami- - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Hard, 7K Insane
  8. Seraphin - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  9. Verniy_Chan - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane With Metadata and Hitsound mod!
  10. JztCallMeRon - Modded: 7K Normal, 7K Maximum Genestella
  11. DixonBlackwing - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Maximum, 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Maximum
  12. Lenfried- - Modded: 4K Maximum, 7K Insane, 7K Maximum
  13. ArcherLove - Modded: 4K Easy, 7K Easy
  14. dudehacker - Modded: 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Hard and HITSOUNDS!
  15. stryver12 - Modded: ALL 7K Difficulties
  16. Adiopulse - Modded: ALL 4K Diffficulties
  17. Protastic101 - BN CHECK Modded: All Difficulties!
  18. Kawawa - BN CHECK Modded: All Difficulties!

Changelog:

  1. Started mapping - August 21, 2016
  2. Finished All Difficulties - August 22, 2016
  3. Added Temporary BG
  4. Added Hitsound - August 23, 2016
  5. Submitted the map to osu - August 24, 2016
  6. 1st mod applied along with self mod on 7K Normal and 7K Hard - August 25, 2016
  7. 2nd mod applied - August 25, 2016
  8. 3rd mod applied - August 25, 2016
  9. 4th mod applied - August 25, 2016
  10. 5th mod and selfmod applied - August 25, 2016
  11. 6th mod applied - August 26, 2016
  12. 7th mod applied - August 27, 2016
  13. 8th mod applied - August 27, 2016
  14. Some minor changes applied in 4K Maximum Genestella by self-mod - August 27, 2016
  15. 9th mod applied - August 28, 2016
  16. 10th mod applied - August 28, 2016
  17. 11th mod applied - August 29, 2016
  18. 12th mod applied - August 29, 2016
  19. 13th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  20. 14th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  21. 15th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  22. 16th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  23. Added new sets of hitsounds (thanks to dudehacker!) - October 26, 2016
  24. self mod applied. some major fixes applied - October 27, 2016
  25. Changed BG, Image by Keweft - October 31, 2016
  26. 17th mod applied, BEATMAP NOMINATOR Protastic101's - November 19, 2016
  27. BUBBLED! by Mam Protastic - November 21, 2016
  28. 18th mod applied, BEATMAP NOMINATOR Kawawa's - April 05, 2017
  29. Removed "2" at Source, based on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/440397 - April 05, 2017
  30. QUALIFIED! by Sir Kawawa - April 05, 2017
  31. RANKED! Thank you so much for all the people who helped! :oops:

Thank you for playing! Keep your battle on!
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mod mod
feel free to reject
[4k NM]
00:23:783 - add note
00:26:825 (26825|1,27035|2,27245|3) - maybe short note here and add note 00:27:140 -
00:27:664 - add note
00:28:713 (28713|2) - i think this note move to 00:28:818 -
00:30:497 - add note here too
00:32:070 (32070|2) - move to 00:31:965 - and add note here 00:32:175 -
00:33:329 - add note
00:28:504 - u put double here but 00:33:539 - only 1 ? add note
00:35:217 - ^
00:35:532 - add note cuz make me mindblock
00:36:161 - ^
00:37:210 - ^
00:37:839 - 00:37:944 - 00:38:049 - ^
00:38:364 - ^
00:38:888 - ^
00:39:518 - ^
00:40:567 - ^
00:41:196 - ^
00:56:825 - idk add note or empty for this ;w;
01:00:392 - add note for cymbal
01:02:070 - ^
01:13:294 (73294|0,73504|0,73713|0) - to much in col 1 spread it plz
01:17:175 - ^
01:18:853 - ^
[4K hard]
00:22:105 - add note here
00:22:734 - add note
00:27:140 - ^
00:27:664 - ^
00:28:399 - ^
maybe 00:28:713 (28713|1) - move to 00:28:609 -
00:28:818 - add note
00:31:965 - ^
00:32:175 - ^
00:33:434 - ^
maybe 00:33:748 (33748|1) - move to 00:33:853 -
00:35:217 - add note for cymbal
00:37:105 - add note
00:37:734 - ^
i think that diff can make me mindblock at the moment
Check again with other diff
maybe i'll mod again in 2nd part if not busy
Nice map Good luck xD cuu cuu
posted
blue means applied or applied in a way your suggestion helps
green comments means not applied with reasons.

Syadow- wrote:

mod mod
feel free to reject
[4k NM]

00:23:783 - add note following the guitar here

00:26:825 (26825|1,27035|2,27245|3) - maybe short note here and add note 00:27:140 - changed the LNs to short notes but I won't add note since its only following the guitar

00:27:664 - add note no additional instrument also I am avoiding LN with a note beside it in this difficulty

00:28:713 (28713|2) - i think this note move to 00:28:818 - following the guitar

00:30:497 - add note here too following the guitar

00:32:070 (32070|2) - move to 00:31:965 - and add note here 00:32:175 - same reason

00:33:329 - add note ok!

00:28:504 - u put double here but 00:33:539 - only 1 ? add note fixed
00:35:217 - ^ I let it single since its only for the synth

00:35:532 - add note cuz make me mindblock
00:36:161 - ^
00:37:210 - ^
00:37:839 - 00:37:944 - 00:38:049 - ^
00:38:364 - ^
00:38:888 - ^
00:39:518 - ^
00:40:567 - ^
00:41:196 - ^ I did add some notes but only some piano and vocal with instrument. Still thanks for pointing out!

00:56:825 - idk add note or empty for this ;w; the LN serve as the drum roll so I wont add any note on it.

01:00:392 - add note for cymbal
01:02:070 - ^ added both

01:13:294 (73294|0,73504|0,73713|0) - to much in col 1 spread it plz rearranged

01:17:175 - ^
01:18:853 - ^ added both for cymbals. thanks!

[4K hard]
00:22:105 - add note here ok

00:22:734 - add note ok

00:27:140 - ^ ok

00:27:664 - ^ following the percussion only

00:28:399 - ^ added

maybe 00:28:713 (28713|1) - move to 00:28:609 - ok

00:28:818 - add note ok

00:31:965 - ^ ok

00:32:175 - ^ ok

00:33:434 - ^ ok

maybe 00:33:748 (33748|1) - move to 00:33:853 - ok

00:35:217 - add note for cymbal ok

00:37:105 - add note synth only

00:37:734 - ^ only following synth
i think that diff can make me mindblock at the moment
Check again with other diff
maybe i'll mod again in 2nd part if not busy
Nice map Good luck xD cuu cuu


Thank you so much for that mod and a star as support! Syadow~! Much appreciated :oops:
1st Mod applied and.. UPDATED!

posted
hi, could only do the two easier 7K difficulties as I'm not good with their structure and whats normal or not :)

4K Easy
00:49:063 - why not add a ln here? unless you wasn't following the vocals and was following the other instrument

01:16:336 (76336|3,76755|0) - change this to, http://puu.sh/qN8YN.png
4K Normal
00:31:965 - add note here in 2?

00:49:063 - same as easy add the ln
4K Hard
00:35:846 (35846|2) - move to 1

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - move to 2

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - add a note in 3?

00:32:804 (32804|2) - double like previous patterns
4K Insane
01:17:175 (77175|3,77175|0,77175|1) - I don't know why but I just find this part too dense. Would be better if focused on one element such as either just the ln's or the other instruments from the start

On a side note, by just using ln's for the end part it only goes down to 4.2*
7K Easy
00:36:161 - add note here

00:47:280 (47280|3) - delete and replace with two notes, one 00:47:175 - and one 00:47:385 -
7K Normal
01:10:357 (70357|3) - maybe delete to make it more comfortable like the same pattern used here 01:02:909
(62909|0,63119|4,63224|2,63434|6,63539|4,63748|1,63748|0) -

01:08:783 - add another note here


Sorry the mod is quite short, the structure of the whole mapset is very good and, I love those HITSOUNDS!!

Anyway, good luck and I look forward to seeing this ranked :)
posted

LuckyLemon wrote:

hi, could only do the two easier 7K difficulties as I'm not good with their structure and whats normal or not :)

4K Easy
00:49:063 - why not add a ln here? unless you wasn't following the vocals and was following the other instrument there's no instrument on that part, only vocal alone

01:16:336 (76336|3,76755|0) - change this to, http://puu.sh/qN8YN.png I assume you are pertaining to the guitar but the synth's long sound is more consistent.
4K Normal
00:31:965 - add note here in 2? I am thinking of this as well since its a tom sound and has more consistency. Applied.

00:49:063 - same as easy add the ln vocal alone
4K Hard
00:35:846 (35846|2) - move to 1 moved to 2 instead so it can be same below

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - move to 2 applied

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - add a note in 3? only following synths

00:32:804 (32804|2) - double like previous patterns this is only a bass drum, not snare.
4K Insane
01:17:175 (77175|3,77175|0,77175|1) - I don't know why but I just find this part too dense. Would be better if focused on one element such as either just the ln's or the other instruments from the start It has a strong starting sound which is kinda different compared to the 1st phase of the song.

On a side note, by just using ln's for the end part it only goes down to 4.2* yep, and I am avoiding reduce of SR as it will change icon to H haha.
7K Easy
00:36:161 - add note here nice notice~ applied.

00:47:280 (47280|3) - delete and replace with two notes, one 00:47:175 - and one 00:47:385 - nice variation suggestion, applied.
7K Normal
01:10:357 (70357|3) - maybe delete to make it more comfortable like the same pattern used here 01:02:909
(62909|0,63119|4,63224|2,63434|6,63539|4,63748|1,63748|0) - I thought of this as well but it seems it really gets in way, removed

01:08:783 - add another note here great notice! thanks. added.


Sorry the mod is quite short, the structure of the whole mapset is very good and, I love those

Anyway, good luck and I look forward to seeing this ranked :)thank you so much for the support, feedback, and test play~!

Thank you so much for that mod and testplay support! LuckyLemon~ Much appreciated :oops:
2nd Mod applied and.. UPDATED!
posted
let me have the honor to bind a contract with you u.u
|1|2|3|4|

HS :
N = Normal
F = Finish
W = Whostle
C = Clap

Normal
- 00:38:364 - add?
- 01:14:343 (74343|3,74762|2) - ctrl +j? the idea is to have the "kat" drum at col.1 and 4 in this part, as for 01:14:972 (74972|0) - you can just leave it there as there is this 1/4 stream after it
- 01:15:497 - what do you think?
- 01:22:210 - adding 1 note in 4 is fine I thing, I mean, this song bpm is only 140, and also at this part, there is this "kat kat kat" sounds located here 01:22:210 - here 01:22:630 -, and here 01:23:049 -
- 00:09:308 (9308|1) - it's C here senpai
Hard
- 00:09:308 (9308|2) - add 1 note and use C here, same like 00:10:986 (10986|0,10986|1) -
- 00:10:671 (10671|0) - delete, same like 00:08:993 (8993|2) -
- 00:12:664 (12664|1) - add 1
- 00:16:126 (16126|2,16231|3) - ctrl + J? pich will not be followed, but I think it's a better flow, eh, NVM current is fine too
- 00:18:434 - add 1 here? the guitar is just so WOAAAAA
- 00:22:839 (22839|0) - delete? and 00:22:734 (22734|2) - add?
- 00:32:804 (32804|3) - 2 maybe? It's not so loud thou
- 01:08:783 (68783|3) - F here
- for this sound 01:08:678 (68678|1) - , you used C before
- 01:08:888 - missing?
- 01:09:937 - ^
Insane
- 00:17:595 (17595|2) - move to 4? to fit with 00:17:909 (17909|0) -
- 00:22:734 (22734|1,22839|3,22839|2) - same like in other diff
- 00:45:287 - at this part, for this diff and harder, how about make it like this? 321 is to easy I think, and 312 feels somewhat more compatible imo
- 01:06:371 - just a "meh" pattern variation suggestion
- 01:21:790 (81790|1) - F

mod on Insane diff is kinda short, so I guess you can count this as 2 diff maybe? nah, IDK, hope this help u.u
out of topic, but will you become BN someday arcwin-senpai? =3=

edit : don't mod ADVANCED diff on my map
posted
blue means applied or applied in different approach.
green means not applied with reason.

Aras25 wrote:

let me have the honor to bind a contract with you u.u
|1|2|3|4|

HS :
N = Normal
F = Finish
W = Whostle
C = Clap

Normal
- 00:38:364 - add? nice catch!

- 01:14:343 (74343|3,74762|2) - ctrl +j? the idea is to have the "kat" drum at col.1 and 4 in this part, as for 01:14:972 (74972|0) - you can just leave it there as there is this 1/4 stream after it very nice suggestion~

- 01:15:497 - what do you think? alright~

- 01:22:210 - adding 1 note in 4 is fine I thing, I mean, this song bpm is only 140, and also at this part, there is this "kat kat kat" sounds located here 01:22:210 - here 01:22:630 -, and here 01:23:049 - nice catch~

- 00:09:308 (9308|1) - it's C here senpai thanks for the correction! applied in all difficulties~
Hard
- 00:09:308 (9308|2) - add 1 note and use C here, same like 00:10:986 (10986|0,10986|1) - ok!

- 00:10:671 (10671|0) - delete, same like 00:08:993 (8993|2) - ok!

- 00:12:664 (12664|1) - add 1 ok!

- 00:16:126 (16126|2,16231|3) - ctrl + J? pich will not be followed, but I think it's a better flow, eh, NVM current is fine too keeping

- 00:18:434 - add 1 here? the guitar is just so WOAAAAA ikr? :3 but I will not add triples in this difficulty.

- 00:22:839 (22839|0) - delete? and 00:22:734 (22734|2) - add? ok!

- 00:32:804 (32804|3) - 2 maybe? It's not so loud thou added anyway, its a snare so yeah :v

- 01:08:783 (68783|3) - F here Thanks!

- for this sound 01:08:678 (68678|1) - , you used C before Thaanks!

- 01:08:888 - missing? this is very low volumed kick. But it seems yeah, I guess I'll note for it since it kinda feels empty with that gap. added on most difficulty.

- 01:09:937 - ^ thaanks!
Insane
- 00:17:595 (17595|2) - move to 4? to fit with 00:17:909 (17909|0) - ok!

- 00:22:734 (22734|1,22839|3,22839|2) - same like in other diff fixed!

- 00:45:287 - at this part, for this diff and harder, how about make it like this? 321 is to easy I think, and 312 feels somewhat more compatible imo ok!

- 01:06:371 - [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929949]just a "meh" pattern variation suggestion ok!
[/url]

- 01:21:790 (81790|1) - F


mod on Insane diff is kinda short, so I guess you can count this as 2 diff maybe? nah, IDK, hope this help u.u every mod is helpful =w=)b
out of topic, but will you become BN someday arcwin-senpai? =3= I do not know about that yet, but without taking BN examination, I won't be a BN and I am not interested in exams coz I am lazy to do that haha :D

edit : don't mod ADVANCED diff on my map got it~
Thank you so much for that mod! Aras25~ Much appreciated :oops:
3rd Mod applied and... UPDATED
posted
arcwin-senpai 777th post is spend to reply my mod, >//<
posted
Hi o/
M4M from your queue :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]

soft-hitwhistle is below 100ms

Fix -> http://puu.sh/qNJeo/f4016daadf.wav


[4K Max Gen]

00:09:308 (9308|2) - should be C? its a same snare like - 00:10:986 (10986|3) -

00:20:532 (20532|2) - add W to emphasize the beat?

00:21:790 (21790|3) - ^

00:28:504 (28504|2) - ^

I quite didnt understand most of the LN usage at - 00:21:790 -> - 00:33:329 - . If its follow guitar, it didnt constant with the pitch. It seems not following vocal either

00:35:532 (35532|0) - 00:36:161 (36161|0) - 00:37:210 (37210|3) - 00:37:839 (37839|3) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - 00:39:518 (39518|1) -
All of these^ Could be doubled. They have same instrument like - 00:35:846 (35846|0,35846|1) -

00:41:091 -> - 00:41:930 - The pitch change every 1/4? so maybe will be like -


00:57:245 - it seems there's another kick here?

01:00:392 (60392|0) - W?

01:08:678 (68678|2,68783|1) - it seems this should be C|W respectively instead

01:10:462 (70462|2) - W?

01:13:818 (73818|1) - ^

01:15:497 (75497|1,75602|2,75706|1) - C|C|W Respctively?

01:16:755 (76755|3,76755|0) - emm quite faint... reduce one note?

[7K Max Gen]

00:12:664 (12664|0,12664|1) - pretty sure this is louder than - 00:12:769 (12769|5,12769|3,12769|6) - . Also its the same as - 00:12:979 (12979|4,12979|3,12979|6) - so its rather inconsistent layering according to instrument here

00:14:343 (14343|0,14343|1) - 00:16:021 (16021|5,16021|6) - 00:19:378 (19378|0,19378|1) - should be three noter?

00:34:850 (34850|5) - emm what? there's no distort noise like - 00:34:955 (34955|0,35007|1,35060|2,35112|6,35164|5,35217|4) - it seems. so delete?

00:35:532 (35532|4) - 00:36:161 (36161|5) - 00:37:210 (37210|1) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - This could be double. According to the instrument you mapped (pretty much similar like in 4K)

00:46:021 (46021|6,46441|2) - oookeeyy any reason why you map this but not in 4K? Since both diff are made by you, it seems pretty inconsistent.


01:00:287 (60287|4,60392|3) - C|W respectively? (might applied to the 4K Max Gen, i think I missed it)

[4K Insane]

00:07:315 (7315|0) - make this an LN? short buildup noise tho

00:16:126 - how about

since - 00:16:231 (16231|3) - are pretty loud and seems worthy to be doubled

00:31:965 - seems there's some low snare. add?

01:14:343 (74343|0,74553|0,74762|0) - these seems unecessary, despite these - 01:14:762 (74762|3,74762|0) - having a different drum pitch from the other two noter below. so move - 01:14:762 (74762|0) - to 2

[7K Insane]

00:02:909 (2909|3,3119|3,3329|3) - dunno :/ anchoring the spacebar doesnt seem rly nice, so just move - 00:03:119 (3119|3) - to 3? (quite aesthetical too it seems)

00:03:748 - add on 3 - 00:03:853 - add on 5 or 7. Its the same like - 00:05:427 (5427|2,5532|5) -

00:16:755 (16755|1,16755|2,17070|1,17070|2,17385|2,17385|1,17699|2,17699|1,17909|1) - rip left hand lol.
I guess you can make this balanced. just a suggestion, i'm sure you can do better


00:31:965 - liitle snare. add?

[4K Hard]

00:01:651 (1651|3,2280|2) - this and other similar sound above, how about make it into a 1/2 LN? its a long guitar tho

01:15:916 (75916|2,76021|1) - emm swap? i found - 01:15:706 (75706|2,75916|2) - not rly comfy for me :>

01:23:154 (83154|3,83364|2) - maybe just my preference but it seems better handling if its swapped

[7K Hard]

00:11:406 (11406|4,11616|2) - emm 4K Hard doesnt have this tho. why is this here? i thought both 4K and 7K should be equal in term of layering, especially when both of them are in the similar diff zone ("Hard" diff, in this case)

00:13:084 (13084|4) - same^

00:18:119 (18119|2,18329|4) - ^

01:23:678 (83678|5,83783|1) - move it to 5|3 respectively? i just dont really like these - 01:23:259 (83259|5,83364|1,83469|5,83574|1,83678|5,83783|1) - lel

[4K Normal]

00:34:273 - should add one more note i guess. I heard drum

00:36:161 - 00:37:839 - 00:39:518 - why you ignoring these while - 00:41:196 (41196|0) - not? its the exact same noise

01:02:909 (62909|1,63224|2,63539|3) - seems people with quite low finger independence might have a hard time 300-ed these. I suggest to connect the LN each other sequentially

01:09:623 (69623|2,69937|1,70252|0) - ^

01:12:245 (72245|0,72560|0,72874|0,73084|0,73504|0,73713|0) -
emm sounds heavy on the left side. if possible try to spread them out

[7K Normal]
00:14:657 (14657|2,14762|5,14867|4) - I suggest moving these to 5|3|6 respectively for more comfy gameplay

00:27:245 (27245|6) - should add one more note for loud drum here. maybe at 2

Not really much i guess :/ But yey :D I'm kinda lazy to mod these days so i think my modding skill are kinda missing huehue xD
Good luck :D /
posted
Hi arcwin, M4M from your queue.

1|2|3|4
[4K Maximum Genestella]
  1. 00:03:748 - add note col 3? i still can hear the hihat sound here, map the hihat like you did at 00:05:427 - .
  2. 00:39:203 (39203|1) - move to col 1? may be with this note too 00:39:518 (39518|1) - if you intend to make it same col each other, just feel too empty at col 1.
  3. 01:14:553 (74553|3) - move to col 3? seems easier to play and more balance because of 01:14:238 (74238|3,74343|3) - .


[4K Insane]
  1. 00:07:525 - , 00:07:944 - add note? i think the piano sound is loud enough for 2 notes since this is insane diff.
  2. 00:31:965 - i still can hear the drum sound here like 00:31:546 (31546|2,31651|3,31755|0) - .
  3. 00:53:469 (53469|2) - move to 2 for balance.
  4. 00:56:406 (56406|0) - move this to col 2? so player can more focus to hit 00:56:616 (56616|0,56616|1,56720|2,56720|3,56825|0,56825|1,56930|3,56930|2,57035|1,57035|0,57140|3,57140|2) - .
  5. 01:05:217 (65217|3) - move to col 3? col 3 just feel too empty here.
  6. 01:11:930 (71930|1) - move to col 1 seems better for me because 01:11:511 (71511|3) - and 01:12:350 (72350|3) - .


[4K Hard]
  1. 00:00:811 (811|2) - extend this to 00:01:651 - ? feels unique and cool to play imo.
  2. 00:08:678 (8678|2) - move to col 4, easier for play.
  3. 00:23:469 (23469|1) - move to col 1? just feel too empty there.
  4. 00:32:070 - map the drum here? because same with 00:31:441 (31441|3,31546|0,31651|2,31755|1) - .
  5. 01:05:741 (65741|1) - move to col 1? i know this is intended but i think this part already too much.


[4K Normal]
  1. 00:33:853 (33853|1) - move to col 1? for balance and avoid same pattern with 00:33:434 (33434|1,33539|2) - .
  2. 00:36:161 - , 00:37:839 - , 00:39:518 - better to map this part imo, feels better to follow the rythm.


good luck! :)
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Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi o/
M4M from your queue :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]

soft-hitwhistle is below 100ms

Fix -> http://puu.sh/qNJeo/f4016daadf.wav Thanks alot!


[4K Max Gen]

00:09:308 (9308|2) - should be C? its a same snare like - 00:10:986 (10986|3) - oh already fixed by the other mod before this (it seems this is the later version)

00:20:532 (20532|2) - add W to emphasize the beat? I'll let the F alone

00:21:790 (21790|3) - ^

00:28:504 (28504|2) - ^

I quite didnt understand most of the LN usage at - 00:21:790 -> - 00:33:329 - . If its follow guitar, it didnt constant with the pitch. It seems not following vocal either It is the guitar, though it might be not pitch relevant pattern, I made it comfortable for the percussion notes.

00:35:532 (35532|0) - 00:36:161 (36161|0) - 00:37:210 (37210|3) - 00:37:839 (37839|3) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - 00:39:518 (39518|1) -
All of these^ Could be doubled. They have same instrument like - 00:35:846 (35846|0,35846|1) - oooh nice catch! thanks~

00:41:091 -> - 00:41:930 - The pitch change every 1/4? so maybe will be like -
I'll keep my pattern, focusing on vocal's long sound

00:57:245 - it seems there's another kick here? I don't hear any kick here, or if there's a kick, it is quite inaudible

01:00:392 (60392|0) - W?
01:08:678 (68678|2,68783|1) - it seems this should be C|W respectively instead
01:10:462 (70462|2) - W?
01:13:818 (73818|1) - ^
all of them are already fixed on the new version, though I didn't use W but F on some parts since it has cymbals.

01:15:497 (75497|1,75602|2,75706|1) - C|C|W Respctively? whoa great catch! Thanks! applied on all difficulty~

01:16:755 (76755|3,76755|0) - emm quite faint... reduce one note? already reduced in the new version

[7K Max Gen]

00:12:664 (12664|0,12664|1) - pretty sure this is louder than - 00:12:769 (12769|5,12769|3,12769|6) - . Also its the same as - 00:12:979 (12979|4,12979|3,12979|6) - so its rather inconsistent layering according to instrument here oops, seems misplaced that one. Fixed

00:14:343 (14343|0,14343|1) - 00:16:021 (16021|5,16021|6) - 00:19:378 (19378|0,19378|1) - should be three noter? all fixed, thanks!

00:34:850 (34850|5) - emm what? there's no distort noise like - 00:34:955 (34955|0,35007|1,35060|2,35112|6,35164|5,35217|4) - it seems. so delete? I've been thinking about this, but yeah it seems no at this measure line. Moved the note beside the previous note anyway.

00:35:532 (35532|4) - 00:36:161 (36161|5) - 00:37:210 (37210|1) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - This could be double. According to the instrument you mapped (pretty much similar like in 4K) thanks! rearranged some patterns as well~

00:46:021 (46021|6,46441|2) - oookeeyy any reason why you map this but not in 4K? Since both diff are made by you, it seems pretty inconsistent.
fixed by adding on 4K Maximum Genestella

01:00:287 (60287|4,60392|3) - C|W respectively? (might applied to the 4K Max Gen, i think I missed it) great catch! though the W will be F since cymbals is there. Applied on all difficulty

[4K Insane]

00:07:315 (7315|0) - make this an LN? short buildup noise tho ok!

00:16:126 - how about

since - 00:16:231 (16231|3) - are pretty loud and seems worthy to be doubled applied on a different pattern arrangement, though I didn't doubled just to give way for the double of the snare next to it.

00:31:965 - seems there's some low snare. add? damn I forgot about this, thanks

01:14:343 (74343|0,74553|0,74762|0) - these seems unecessary, despite these - 01:14:762 (74762|3,74762|0) - having a different drum pitch from the other two noter below. so move - 01:14:762 (74762|0) - to 2 alright~

[7K Insane]

00:02:909 (2909|3,3119|3,3329|3) - dunno :/ anchoring the spacebar doesnt seem rly nice, so just move - 00:03:119 (3119|3) - to 3? (quite aesthetical too it seems) ok!

00:03:748 - add on 3 - 00:03:853 - add on 5 or 7. Its the same like - 00:05:427 (5427|2,5532|5) - ok!

00:16:755 (16755|1,16755|2,17070|1,17070|2,17385|2,17385|1,17699|2,17699|1,17909|1) - rip left hand lol.
I guess you can make this balanced. just a suggestion, i'm sure you can do better
ok! but on different approach~

00:31:965 - liitle snare. add?

[4K Hard]

00:01:651 (1651|3,2280|2) - this and other similar sound above, how about make it into a 1/2 LN? its a long guitar tho won't add LN for guitar on this difficulty

01:15:916 (75916|2,76021|1) - emm swap? i found - 01:15:706 (75706|2,75916|2) - not rly comfy for me :> rearranged on a different approach.

01:23:154 (83154|3,83364|2) - maybe just my preference but it seems better handling if its swapped ok!

[7K Hard]

00:11:406 (11406|4,11616|2) - emm 4K Hard doesnt have this tho. why is this here? i thought both 4K and 7K should be equal in term of layering, especially when both of them are in the similar diff zone ("Hard" diff, in this case) added this as variation for 4K Hard so it can be higher SR. When two difficulties are exactly the same but different keys like 4K and 7K, 4K is higher on SR (tested). I want the 7Ks' harder than 4Ks'

00:13:084 (13084|4) - same^

00:18:119 (18119|2,18329|4) - ^

01:23:678 (83678|5,83783|1) - move it to 5|3 respectively? i just dont really like these - 01:23:259 (83259|5,83364|1,83469|5,83574|1,83678|5,83783|1) - lel applied your idea and rearrange the doubles after those singles.

[4K Normal]

00:34:273 - should add one more note i guess. I heard drum kinda hard to execute

00:36:161 - 00:37:839 - 00:39:518 - why you ignoring these while - 00:41:196 (41196|0) - not? its the exact same noise ok!

01:02:909 (62909|1,63224|2,63539|3) - seems people with quite low finger independence might have a hard time 300-ed these. I suggest to connect the LN each other sequentially I'll keep since its the exact length of the long sound synth

01:09:623 (69623|2,69937|1,70252|0) - ^

01:12:245 (72245|0,72560|0,72874|0,73084|0,73504|0,73713|0) -
emm sounds heavy on the left side. if possible try to spread them out moved 01:12:560 (72560|1) - to 2 instead

[7K Normal]
00:14:657 (14657|2,14762|5,14867|4) - I suggest moving these to 5|3|6 respectively for more comfy gameplay ok
00:27:245 (27245|6) - should add one more note for loud drum here. maybe at 2 applied on different approach

Not really much i guess :/ But yey :D I'm kinda lazy to mod these days so i think my modding skill are kinda missing huehue xD very helpful mod to be honest~
Good luck :D/ thanks!
Thank you so much for that mod! Rivals_7~ Much appreciated :oops:
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Dellvangel wrote:

Hi arcwin, M4M from your queue.

1|2|3|4
[4K Maximum Genestella]
  1. 00:03:748 - add note col 3? i still can hear the hihat sound here, map the hihat like you did at 00:05:427 - .oh my, nice catch!
  2. 00:39:203 (39203|1) - move to col 1? may be with this note too 00:39:518 (39518|1) - if you intend to make it same col each other, just feel too empty at col 1. alright
  3. 01:14:553 (74553|3) - move to col 3? seems easier to play and more balance because of 01:14:238 (74238|3,74343|3) - .
ok!

[4K Insane]
  1. 00:07:525 - , 00:07:944 - add note? i think the piano sound is loud enough for 2 notes since this is insane diff. I'll keep it single
  2. 00:31:965 - i still can hear the drum sound here like 00:31:546 (31546|2,31651|3,31755|0) - . fixed on previous mod
  3. 00:53:469 (53469|2) - move to 2 for balance. ok!
  4. 00:56:406 (56406|0) - move this to col 2? so player can more focus to hit 00:56:616 (56616|0,56616|1,56720|2,56720|3,56825|0,56825|1,56930|3,56930|2,57035|1,57035|0,57140|3,57140|2) - . ok!
  5. 01:05:217 (65217|3) - move to col 3? col 3 just feel too empty here. ok!
  6. 01:11:930 (71930|1) - move to col 1 seems better for me because 01:11:511 (71511|3) - and 01:12:350 (72350|3) - . ok!


[4K Hard]
  1. 00:00:811 (811|2) - extend this to 00:01:651 - ? feels unique and cool to play imo. ok!
  2. 00:08:678 (8678|2) - move to col 4, easier for play. ok!
  3. 00:23:469 (23469|1) - move to col 1? just feel too empty there. ok!
  4. 00:32:070 - map the drum here? because same with 00:31:441 (31441|3,31546|0,31651|2,31755|1) - .its only hihat and a guitar sound
  5. 01:05:741 (65741|1) - move to col 1? i know this is intended but i think this part already too much. ok!


[4K Normal]
  1. 00:33:853 (33853|1) - move to col 1? for balance and avoid same pattern with 00:33:434 (33434|1,33539|2) - . ok!
  2. 00:36:161 - , 00:37:839 - , 00:39:518 - better to map this part imo, feels better to follow the rythm. fixed already on previous mod


good luck! :)Thank you!
Thank you so much for that mod! Dellvangel~ Much appreciated :oops:
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o yea, dunno if you notice yet. But pls compress the background from PNG to JPG pls xD
it tooks 1,65mb :u
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Rivals_7 wrote:

o yea, dunno if you notice yet. But pls compress the background from PNG to JPG pls xD
it tooks 1,65mb :u
Png seems fine though, I used it on my previous ranked map @@
but this is just a temporary BG, will change soon~

Aras25 wrote:

arcwin-senpai 777th post is spend to reply my mod, >//<
Alright! >w<)b
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Hi arcwin :3/ for M4M
Columns 1,2,3,4
4K Maximum Genestella
00:04:168 (4168|3) - Extend this ln to 00:04:378 - (Is same sound here 00:04:797 (4797|3) -)
00:09:203 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOb5f/6f2e1c3fc7.jpg for this reason https://puu.sh/qObIh/1e7b0e28d2.jpg
00:10:462 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOc4j/237de46ccc.jpg same reason
00:12:560 (12560|0) - ^ move to 2
00:15:182 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcu5/a99a079a7c.jpg same reason
00:17:175 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcEr/6b3ab8e26d.jpg
^ it's just a suggestion :3
00:27:664 - You like this? https://puu.sh/qOdc4/e560ec81ac.jpg for this reason 00:27:874 - i think this need double note
00:29:762 - 00:31:441 - 00:33:119 - add a note, is same sound here 00:23:049 - 00:24:727 - 00:26:406 -
00:39:832 (39832|1) - move to 1
01:16:021 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOe5Y/c7c33d5cbf.jpg
4K Insane
00:05:741 - add a note?
00:39:518 - try this https://puu.sh/qOf3s/b6f31c1fdf.jpg same sound here 00:36:476 -

Sorry for short mod xD is nice map
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green means not applied with reason

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Hi arcwin :3/ for M4M
Columns 1,2,3,4
4K Maximum Genestella
00:04:168 (4168|3) - Extend this ln to 00:04:378 - (Is same sound here 00:04:797 (4797|3) -) it is quite different, the guitar long sound is not the same as 00:03:958 while 00:04:588 (4588|1,4797|3,5007|0) - are 1/2 guitar long sound(3958|0) -

00:09:203 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOb5f/6f2e1c3fc7.jpg for this reason https://puu.sh/qObIh/1e7b0e28d2.jpg applied on a different way, I don't really like 1|3 2|4 as it gives off feeling imo, and I think its fine to have these stacks as long it is comfortable to play. still thanks for pointing~

00:10:462 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOc4j/237de46ccc.jpg same reason keeping

00:12:560 (12560|0) - ^ move to 2 ok!

00:15:182 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcu5/a99a079a7c.jpg same reason

00:17:175 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcEr/6b3ab8e26d.jpg

^ it's just a suggestion :3 I'll keep my pattern, I dun really like 1|3 2|4 @@ its throwing me off while playing :o

00:27:664 - You like this? https://puu.sh/qOdc4/e560ec81ac.jpg for this reason 00:27:874 - i think this need double note keeping, the single note only represent a single kick sound

00:29:762 - 00:31:441 - 00:33:119 - add a note, is same sound here 00:23:049 - 00:24:727 - 00:26:406 - really nice catch! how could I forgot these. thanks!

00:39:832 (39832|1) - move to 1 seems already fine for me imo

01:16:021 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOe5Y/c7c33d5cbf.jpg oh right! thanks!
4K Insane
00:05:741 - add a note? ok!

00:39:518 - try this https://puu.sh/qOf3s/b6f31c1fdf.jpg same sound here 00:36:476 -ok!


Sorry for short mod xD is nice map thanks!
Thank you so much for that mod! [ M o m o ]~ Much appreciated :oops:
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FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU COOL SHIZZ LA!!!! \m/ 8-)
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Hi Arcwin :3/

M4M from your queue
oke here's my love mod
Column:
4K = |1|2|3|4|
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
~~~ open me ~~~
[4K Easy]
- 00:07:315 (7315|2) - why not make this LN? technically same with 00:06:685 (6685|1)

- im not sure, i feel weird playing these 1/2s 00:09:413 (9413|2,9623|1,9832|0) or maybe it is just me, but i think this one 00:09:413 (9413|2) - should be in the blue line here? 00:09:308 - because the sound is more stronger than the red line, the flow should be just like in the kiai only 1/2 apart to make it convenient, what do you think?

- 00:11:091 (11091|1) and 00:12:769 (12769|3) - same with these, should be in the blue line also? same for the other similar cases...

- 00:38:154 - add note to 1? i hear a piano sound here also here

- also here 00:40:567 - add also, i think adding these two will make this calm part more better, it makes feel the piano sound more

- 00:46:336 (46336|0) - i dont know what sound you are following in this note, i think it should be here? 00:46:231 if you follow the piano

- 01:10:776 (70776|2) - i think there should be no note here, and having here instead? 01:11:091 - should actually look this this 01:04:168 (64168|2,64378|0,64483|1) for consistency

- also add here 01:12:769 - for consistency too

- 01:18:224 (78224|1) - should be in here 01:18:119 like i said before, same with the others
[7K Easy]
almost the same on what pointed out in 4k

- 01:14:448 (74448|3) - intentionlly different snap with 4k?

- 01:20:086 (80086|6) - remove xD
[4K Normal]
- 00:07:525 (7525|2,7944|1) - ctrl + h? for pattern with 00:06:685 (6685|2,7000|0,7315|3) and pitch with 00:07:525 (7525|2,7944|1)

- 00:08:364 - add note? strong sound here

- 00:23:049 (23049|2,23259|3) - switch columns? pitch and to differ 00:23:259 (23259|3) to 00:23:469 (23469|0,23678|3,23888|0) it emphasize ore the patterns

- 00:24:727 (24727|1,24937|0) - this too switch

- 01:16:651 - missing note here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938625
[7K Normal]
- 00:07:315 (7315|2,7525|4) - ctrl + h? for pitch

- 00:19:378 - after playing too much wide patterns, this feels like came out out f nowhere, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938685 more fitting i guess

- 00:26:406 (26406|3) - moving this to 7 would be more comfortable i think

- 01:13:294 - add note here? or if you want to keep, consider removing it on 4k because it has a note here, but i think adding note would be better and making this 01:13:189 single instead because it doesnt have cymbals and sounds this like 01:11:720 so for the sake of consistency for doubles

- 01:14:762 (74762|3,74972|1) - move to left once, more balance and much easier for the 1/4 to execute
[4K Hard]
- 00:26:091 - add note here? i think it is loud enough just like 00:22:734

- 00:31:441 - add note for consistency, strong sound like 00:29:762

- 01:09:413 - add note?

- 01:13:399 - would be a lot more better if the double would be here i think and also for the consistency of the sounds like the ones in here 01:11:720 :screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938867

- 01:22:769 (82769|2,82909|3) - ctrl + g? the pitch is going on the other direction with 01:22:769 (82769|2,82909|3)
[7K Hard]
- 00:08:364 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938947 it plays more nice i think

- 00:10:462 (10462|6) - move to 6 for balance?

- 00:11:825 (11825|3,12455|5) - move to right once, for comfy pattern because i think the center is generating too much pressure specially after the 1/4 (based on my experience xD)

- 00:13:818 (13818|3) - move to 6?

- 00:18:539 (18539|3,19168|1) - move to left once, same on what i mention earlier

- 00:17:175 (17175|0) - move to 2?

- 00:15:497 (15497|0,15811|1) - switch columns?

- 00:20:217 (20217|3) - move to 2 for balance?

- 00:23:888 (23888|3) - move to 3 for pattern

- 00:27:560 (27560|3,27769|3) - move to 3? i think it is more nice in this way since col5 used a lot than col3

- 01:09:413 - add note here?

- 01:11:406 - add note, strong sound, it is also double in 4k so i guess it is fine

- 01:13:399 - doubles should be here, like on what i mention too in 4k for the consistency of the drum

- 01:15:077 - should be doubles, white line has stronger sound http://puu.sh/qOXjg.jpg
[4K Insane]
- 00:19:588 - i think this one should be double ?_?

- 00:26:091 - add note? the drum is loud enough

- 00:35:217 - add note, it is alsou double in hard diff, so i guess it is fine to make it as hard in this part

- i think the trill should start here 01:23:364

- if you accept the mod above^, 01:22:210 - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939311 ?

really neat :D
[7K Insane]
- 00:03:958 - i think this one should be double note? some guitar sounds are double

- 00:05:637 - thiss too ^

- 00:06:790 - add note here?

- 00:12:140 (12140|3) - move to 3, for more comfy pattern

- 00:19:483 (19483|1,19483|0) - move to right once for balance

- 00:30:392 - add note here

- 00:29:762 - add note, i think this should have same density with 00:23:049 ,really place good as an emphasis on the strong sound also for consistency

- 00:31:441 - here too? ^

- 01:09:727 (69727|3) - move to 3? for balance

- 01:12:979 (72979|0,73084|5,73189|1) - i think this one should be still doubles, based on your pattern in 4k

- 01:13:399 - and also the doubles should be here, just like on what i mention before on the lower diffs

- 01:15:182 - missed a note?

- 01:23:364 - doubles should technically start here... also if you did accept this one, don't forget to change it also on the genestella 4k diff :D


Wow Really cool map~ :D
i really enjoy playing this xD
Good luck Arcwin~ i hope my mod can help you~
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hi...
rusty mod of sorts, sorry...
for M4M with friend's map, but if that's not ok, just normal mod, lol
feel free to ignore all suggestions. seems like previous modders got most of it, so just a few detailed suggestions for each difficulty rather than a bunch for one.

mod started around 24 hours ago, so my mod might overlap with some other ones after that time

4k Easy
- 00:40:881 (40881|3) - it seems like this is following the vocals, but the notes before it aren't and it feels very out of the blue

rest ok. I can't mod easy well, sorry
4k Normal
- consider adjusting 00:05:951 (5951|2,6685|2) - to 2 and 00:06:266 (6266|0,6476|0) - to 4 to give better finger balance
- it really feels like 00:52:944 (52944|0) - should be moved to 2 and 00:53:049 (53049|1) - to 1 considering the previous [2][1][3][4] even though that pattern is a little hard for this sr, I think it's ok in this situation considering this map has harder patterns
- 01:13:713 (73713|0) - move this to 3 or 4 and 01:13:818 (73818|3,73818|2) - to [12] to give better hand balance considering the amount of [34] jumps before and after it
4k Hard
- 00:59:657 (59657|3,59657|2,59762|1,59867|0,59972|2,59972|3) - flip this pattern since there's more right hand heavy patterns before it
- 01:22:630 (82630|0,82630|1,82769|2,82909|3,83049|1,83049|0,83154|2,83259|0,83364|3) - to this seems like it'd make a more interesting pattern and break up the previous repetitive [12] jumps without increasing difficulty

fun
4k Insane
- 00:13:609 (13609|3,13713|1,13713|2,13818|0,13818|3,13923|2,14028|1,14028|0,14133|3,14133|2,14238|1) - is there any reason this pattern isn't this? I figure you probably wanted to avoid repetitiveness but the pattern doesn't play very repetitively in the first place and I feel like the way it is now is kind of hard to play on second thought I don't like this suggestion but I'll leave it here just in case you like it
- 00:33:539 (33539|0) - add note for emphasis like with the other hands during the ln section?
- this seems like something someone else would have mentioned but I didn't see anything so sorry if someone else did but 00:49:063 - why is there no ln here?
- 01:21:790 (81790|3,81790|1,81790|0,81895|2,82000|3,82000|1,82105|0) - this pattern creates a feeling of being a repeat of the previous ones but isn't exactly the same causing me to trip up with an expectation that it'll be the same as the previous pattern for the next pattern. consider trying this to mix it up?
4k Maximum Genestella
- 00:03:958 (3958|0) - I think this ln pattern is too hard compared to all the other noodling parts of this map imo, even the end
- 00:05:427 (5427|3,5532|1,5637|3,5637|2,5741|0,5846|1,5951|2,5951|3) - I think this should be changed to this to match how at 00:01:651 (1651|3) - and 00:02:280 (2280|3) - the lns are on the same side
Along with that, change 00:03:224 (3224|2,3329|0,3329|1,3539|3,3644|1,3644|0,3748|2,3853|3) - to this to match how 00:06:685 (6685|0) - becomes the same as the other lns in the section
- 00:54:832 (54832|2) - feels like this should be a jump
- 01:00:287 (60287|2,60392|1,60392|2) - this odd minijack here makes this annoying and uncomfortable to hit (my only cb first run). may just want to remove [3] from the quad even though I know you want to have the quad emphasis and there's lots of mini jacks in other places
- I know I'm asking a lot, but I think removing all the minijacks during the ln run at 01:17:175 (77175|1) - drastically improves the playability and fun of that part imo


GL
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green means not applied with a reason.

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Arcwin :3/

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Column:
4K = |1|2|3|4|
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
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[4K Easy]
- 00:07:315 (7315|2) - why not make this LN? technically same with 00:06:685 (6685|1) ok!

- im not sure, i feel weird playing these 1/2s 00:09:413 (9413|2,9623|1,9832|0) or maybe it is just me, but i think this one 00:09:413 (9413|2) - should be in the blue line here? 00:09:308 - because the sound is more stronger than the red line, the flow should be just like in the kiai only 1/2 apart to make it convenient, what do you think? seems I have to really go with the percussion, going to do something about it on a different way.

- 00:11:091 (11091|1) and 00:12:769 (12769|3) - same with these, should be in the blue line also? same for the other similar cases... fixing on a different way.

- 00:38:154 - add note to 1? i hear a piano sound here also here great catch!

- also here 00:40:567 - add also, i think adding these two will make this calm part more better, it makes feel the piano sound more ok!

- 00:46:336 (46336|0) - i dont know what sound you are following in this note, i think it should be here? 00:46:231 if you follow the piano ok!

- 01:10:776 (70776|2) - i think there should be no note here, and having here instead? 01:11:091 - should actually look this this 01:04:168 (64168|2,64378|0,64483|1) for consistency ok!

- also add here 01:12:769 - for consistency too ok!

- 01:18:224 (78224|1) - should be in here 01:18:119 like i said before, same with the others fixed on a different way
[7K Easy]
almost the same on what pointed out in 4k

- 01:14:448 (74448|3) - intentionlly different snap with 4k? fixed!

- 01:20:086 (80086|6) - remove xD HOLY WTF JUST HOW THAT NOTE- anyway Thanks HAHAHA epic
[4K Normal]
- 00:07:525 (7525|2,7944|1)
- ctrl + h? for pattern with 00:06:685 (6685|2,7000|0,7315|3) and pitch with 00:07:525 (7525|2,7944|1) ok!

- 00:08:364 - add note? strong sound here I'll leave it single, making the SR lower to 7K but still the same SR fok

- 00:23:049 (23049|2,23259|3) - switch columns? pitch and to differ 00:23:259 (23259|3) to 00:23:469 (23469|0,23678|3,23888|0) it emphasize ore the patterns ok!

- 00:24:727 (24727|1,24937|0) - this too switch ok!

- 01:16:651 - missing note here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938625 fixed!
[7K Normal]
- 00:07:315 (7315|2,7525|4) - ctrl + h? for pitch ok!

- 00:19:378 - after playing too much wide patterns, this feels like came out out f nowhere, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938685 more fitting i guess rearranged on different way

- 00:26:406 (26406|3) - moving this to 7 would be more comfortable i think kinda feels off

- 01:13:294 - add note here? or if you want to keep, consider removing it on 4k because it has a note here, but i think adding note would be better and making this 01:13:189 single instead because it doesnt have cymbals and sounds this like 01:11:720 so for the sake of consistency for doubles ok!

- 01:14:762 (74762|3,74972|1) - move to left once, more balance and much easier for the 1/4 to execute ok!
[4K Hard]
- 00:26:091 - add note here? i think it is loud enough just like 00:22:734 ok!

- 00:31:441 - add note for consistency, strong sound like 00:29:762 ok!

- 01:09:413 - add note? ok!

- 01:13:399 - would be a lot more better if the double would be here i think and also for the consistency of the sounds like the ones in here 01:11:720 :screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938867 ok!

- 01:22:769 (82769|2,82909|3) - ctrl + g? the pitch is going on the other direction with 01:22:769 (82769|2,82909|3)same pitch as before. keeping.
[7K Hard]
- 00:08:364 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5938947 it plays more nice i think keeping

- 00:10:462 (10462|6) - move to 6 for balance? ok!

- 00:11:825 (11825|3,12455|5) - move to right once, for comfy pattern because i think the center is generating too much pressure specially after the 1/4 (based on my experience xD) rearranged on a different way

- 00:13:818 (13818|3) - move to 6? moved before note instead to make it not too pressured on left

- 00:18:539 (18539|3,19168|1) - move to left once, same on what i mention earlier ok!

- 00:17:175 (17175|0) - move to 2? ok!

- 00:15:497 (15497|0,15811|1) - switch columns? ok!

- 00:20:217 (20217|3) - move to 2 for balance? rearranged instead

- 00:23:888 (23888|3) - move to 3 for pattern okl

- 00:27:560 (27560|3,27769|3) - move to 3? i think it is more nice in this way since col5 used a lot than col3 rearranged on different pattern!

- 01:09:413 - add note here? ok!

- 01:11:406 - add note, strong sound, it is also double in 4k so i guess it is fine ok!

- 01:13:399 - doubles should be here, like on what i mention too in 4k for the consistency of the drum ok!

- 01:15:077 - should be doubles, white line has stronger sound http://puu.sh/qOXjg.jpg ok!
[4K Insane]
- 00:19:588 - i think this one should be double ?_? I made it single to give way for snare double

- 00:26:091 - add note? the drum is loud enough ok!

- 00:35:217 - add note, it is alsou double in hard diff, so i guess it is fine to make it as hard in this part ok!

- i think the trill should start here 01:23:364 the snare sound got louder at 01:23:469 -

- if you accept the mod above^, 01:22:210 - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939311 ? though I didn't accept above, I think this pattern is proper, rearranged

really neat :Dthanks!
[7K Insane]
- 00:03:958 - i think this one should be double note? some guitar sounds are double ok!

- 00:05:637 - thiss too ^ ok!

- 00:06:790 - add note here? ok!

- 00:12:140 (12140|3) - move to 3, for more comfy pattern ok!

- 00:19:483 (19483|1,19483|0) - move to right once for balance ok!

- 00:30:392 - add note here ok!

- 00:29:762 - add note, i think this should have same density with 00:23:049 ,really place good as an emphasis on the strong sound also for consistency ok!

- 00:31:441 - here too? ^ ok!

- 01:09:727 (69727|3) - move to 3? for balance rearranged on diffferent

- 01:12:979 (72979|0,73084|5,73189|1) - i think this one should be still doubles, based on your pattern in 4k ok!

- 01:13:399 - and also the doubles should be here, just like on what i mention before on the lower diffs ok!

- 01:15:182 - missed a note? ok!

- 01:23:364 - doubles should technically start here... also if you did accept this one, don't forget to change it also on the genestella 4k diff :Dkeeping, the last four are actually the loudest @@


Wow Really cool map~ :Dthanks!
i really enjoy playing this xD oh my~
Good luck Arcwin~ i hope my mod can help you~ really helpful!
Thank you so much for that mod and that two stars! -SoraGami- ! Much appreciated :oops:
7th Mod applied and... UPDATED!
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