1. Easy (1.21 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (3.02 stars, 284 notes)
3. Normal (1.66 stars, 147 notes)

Pata-Mon wrote:

扫了眼 这种图有啥可摸……

[ Abhor ] wrote:

怕他萌钦点神图，射星！

[Kamiya] wrote:

前来模图

怕他萌说的对
[Hard]
01:15:597 (3,4,5) - 没叠好
//修了

01:47:501 (3) - 嗯 想来想去这里可不可以加个finish呀;w;
//这里没有finish, 倒是 - 01:47:263 (2) - 可以考虑加一个..

02:09:406 (4,1) - 没完全的包好lwl
//懒弄了，既要DS还要对称还要包好，太麻烦..

水摸完啦~

-ClariS- wrote:

hard
02:09:644 (1) - blanket
02:12:263 (2,3,4,1) - 感觉摆的太随意了
//呃...

.....看了看真的没啥好摸的，射星跑

MatsumotoRise wrote:

Looking forward to be ranked and waiting for HIVER

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Easy]

01:15:120 和 01:17:025 一样音 音效却不同 要说不同,应该是音量

01:45:597 和 01:47:263 ^
//这...我听起来不是一样的音...

break有点长, 加转盘? 00:30:597 - 00:32:501 和 00:43:930 - 00:46:549
//转盘NG..不过加一个还行吧，我试试看

结束有点奇怪, 试试 加map那个 kira kira ,感觉还可以
//不要，下面一段不想map

[Normal]

00:53:454 (1) - 考虑换2个单点,挺不错的

SPOILER

//太轻，而且滑条中间还有一些音

01:02:978 (1) - 这开始有点太长了,塞爆很累

01:08:216 (4) - ^
01:15:120 (2) - 试试改2单点
01:26:549 (2) - 改单点
01:30:358 (2) - 改2单点
01:41:549 (2) - 改单点
01:45:596 (2) - 改2单点
//不要，考虑到难度分布，我不想让这个难度里出现两个1/2 gap的圈

...后面的自己查了...真的很累,塞爆,
/*
为什么kiai不能塞爆呢..
而且，我觉得后面肯定会有人建议我把- 01:07:978 - 之类的地方也塞上
*/
02:08:216 (2,3) - 换成折返很好,毕竟02:08:454这个加上顺很多
//可以

blanket之类的....

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:22:501 - 空了一下感觉有点奇怪,试试追加节奏

SPOILER

00:29:644 - ^
//太轻，不支持map

00:47:740 (1) - 没必要NC吧
//统一一小节一NC

00:49:406 (1) - 折返听起来很违和(大白线的锅),试试换单点+滑条 后面有好多相似的,可能你就想这么做
//嗯是故意的。人声多好嘛，不想理钢琴，像现在这样用滑条中间或者尾巴带过去算不错的了

01:17:740 (6) - 打击感比较强适合2个单点
//好

01:48:692 (1) - 位置好奇葩,不如7的直线上方
//不想解释了

01:58:216 (1,2) - 打击感很弱适合滑条

SPOILER

//不，音乐里有这么重的鼓点，为什么说打击感很弱..

02:09:406 (4,1) - blanket依旧是很随意,很多能挑的,blanket搞好图看起来很清爽啊,不要忽略这点,嘛,个人习惯

很不舒服之类↓自己查查吧

SPOILER

美丽

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

m4m from your q

easy
There is a vocal at 00:20:120 - , 00:27:740 - add some circles ?
//hmm.. i think current rhythm is better.

01:43:930 (5) - This slider is too close with 01:42:978 (4) - please move slider a bit from Y:272 to Y:276
//this is because i turned Grid Snap on.

normal
01:09:406 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I think these patterns are confused because all of these notes stack at the same place, so it's not good idea, please if it possible remake the whole.
//okay

01:13:930 (5) - Broken flow, adjust this slider slightly from X:156 Y:40 to X:160 Y:20
//changed in above mod

01:15:835 (3,4,5) - The reason same as the first suggestion
//this is common in Normal diff.

01:33:454 (1) - Use "Finish" hs instead "Whistle" hs
//whistle is for vocal.

01:47:501 (5) - Use "Finish" hs instead "Clap" hs like these sliders 01:44:882 (1,2) -
//here doesn't have finish in music.

hard
01:13:692 (5,6,7,1) - These are the worst part of this diff, I definitely sure these are unrankable pls fix by moving the end of this repeat slider 01:13:930 (7) - to X:120, if you want a pretty shape also move the end of this slider 01:13:216 (4) - to X:168
//see my user page.

01:25:835 (1) - Use Finish hs
//whether whistle or finish is okay imo.

01:28:930 (5,6,7,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:32:263 (3,4) - Make this pattern to following vocals correctly
//listen to drum.

01:32:978 (4,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:46:073 (3,4,5,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:47:978 (4,5,6,1) - ^^
01:55:596 (4,5,6,1) - ^^
01:58:930 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^^
02:05:120 (4,5,6,1) - ^^

hopefully it helps. goodluck~

Shurelia wrote:

I'm doing this for Shimotsuki
//first, thanks for you free mod!

[General]

1. source should be : "FLOWERS -Le Volume sur Automne-" . Because "FLOWERS 秋篇" is not the original title of the game.
   //okey. also add 秋篇 to tag.
   
2. here you go, a complete tags for you : Innocent Grey , yuri , the of autumn , opening , MANYO , Visual Novel , VN
   //okay
   
3. add video op pls
   //the music is not the opening ver, so..

[Easy]

1. 00:57:263 (2) - distance problem
   //fixed
   
2. 01:05:835 (5) - x:344 y:228 for a perfect distance snapping
   //fixed
   
3. 01:16:311 (2) - add finish on the repeat since you did that on the previous repeat
4. 01:31:549 (2) - same ^
5. 01:46:787 (2) - this too
   //but i think they are not same in music.
   
6. 01:33:454 (1) - here should be an end of the kiai because the intensity of the song reduced quite a bit at here. next kiai should be at 01:48:692 (1) -
   //i don't agree, the kiai is continued in my view, because both vocal and drums are similar as above.
   
7. 02:02:025 (2) - finiiish on repeat
   //same as above

[Normal]

1. 00:57:263 (3) - there should be a repeat on this slider so it'll follow the vocal much better imo. and of course you need to do something about the next object if you agree with this
   //changed a bit.
   
2. 01:17:025 (5) - finish on the head , it'll feel better
3. 01:32:263 (5) - ^^
4. same kiai suggestion like Easy diff.
5. 01:47:501 (5) - finish.exe
6. 02:02:740 (5) - ^^
7. 02:03:930 (1) - clean cymbal's sound can be heared at here therefore add finish at this cirlce
8. 02:05:835 (5) - same ^^ on the head
   //all finishes are same as above.
   
9. 02:08:454 - try to add a circle at here so the whole "soraaa" voice can be covered
   //hmm.. this is not a strong vocal imo.
   
10. 02:13:454 (4,5) - blanket

[Hard]

1. same kiai suggestion like the previous diffs
2. same finish suggestions like the previous diffs
   //same as above
   
3. 01:52:025 (6) - move a tiny bit right so it'll become straight with (5)
   //changed - 01:51:311 (4) - 's tail.

Shurelia wrote:

You can try to use this one : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1IVEaQs7xI

And cut it until 2:13 or so

El SolarBeam wrote:

star because best yuri drama of all time

jj986544591 wrote:

[hard]

00:20:597 (3) - 移下一点吧,或者可以弄个弯点
//好

00:20:597 (3) - 怎么这里空这么多，这里是有音的
//呃，哪里？如果你是说 - 00:22:263 - 后面那一段的话，那些轻飘飘的音我不想跟..

00:27:740 (2,3,4) - 不平行，差评
//算是故意的..

01:17:263 (5,6) - 间距可以小一点
//好

01:27:263 (6) - 往前移一点
//好

01:32:978 (5) - 移到x:272 y:136会好一点
//好

好图！！！
我图的链接https://osu.ppy.sh/s/512440这图还没坟