怕他萌钦点神图,射星!
thanks[ Abhor ] wrote:
怕他萌钦点神图,射星!
[Kamiya] wrote:
前来模图怕他萌说的对
[Hard]
01:15:597 (3,4,5) - 没叠好
//修了
01:47:501 (3) - 嗯 想来想去这里可不可以加个finish呀;w;
//这里没有finish, 倒是 - 01:47:263 (2) - 可以考虑加一个..
02:09:406 (4,1) - 没完全的包好lwl
//懒弄了,既要DS还要对称还要包好,太麻烦..
水摸完啦~
//thanks!-ClariS- wrote:
hard
02:09:644 (1) - blanket
02:12:263 (2,3,4,1) - 感觉摆的太随意了
//呃...
.....看了看真的没啥好摸的,射星跑
^^MatsumotoRise wrote:
Looking forward to be ranked and waiting for HIVER
//thanks for mod!moonlightleaf wrote:
[Easy]
01:15:120 和 01:17:025 一样音 音效却不同 要说不同,应该是音量
01:45:597 和 01:47:263 ^
//这...我听起来不是一样的音...
break有点长, 加转盘? 00:30:597 - 00:32:501 和 00:43:930 - 00:46:549
//转盘NG..不过加一个还行吧,我试试看
结束有点奇怪, 试试 加map那个 kira kira ,感觉还可以
//不要,下面一段不想map
[Normal]
00:53:454 (1) - 考虑换2个单点,挺不错的
//太轻,而且滑条中间还有一些音
01:02:978 (1) - 这开始有点太长了,塞爆很累
01:08:216 (4) - ^
01:15:120 (2) - 试试改2单点
01:26:549 (2) - 改单点
01:30:358 (2) - 改2单点
01:41:549 (2) - 改单点
01:45:596 (2) - 改2单点
//不要,考虑到难度分布,我不想让这个难度里出现两个1/2 gap的圈
...后面的自己查了...真的很累,塞爆,
/*
为什么kiai不能塞爆呢..
而且,我觉得后面肯定会有人建议我把- 01:07:978 - 之类的地方也塞上
*/
02:08:216 (2,3) - 换成折返很好,毕竟02:08:454这个加上顺很多
//可以
blanket之类的....
[Hard]
00:22:501 - 空了一下感觉有点奇怪,试试追加节奏
00:29:644 - ^
//太轻,不支持map
00:47:740 (1) - 没必要NC吧
//统一一小节一NC
00:49:406 (1) - 折返听起来很违和(大白线的锅),试试换单点+滑条 后面有好多相似的,可能你就想这么做
//嗯是故意的。人声多好嘛,不想理钢琴,像现在这样用滑条中间或者尾巴带过去算不错的了
01:17:740 (6) - 打击感比较强适合2个单点
//好
01:48:692 (1) - 位置好奇葩,不如7的直线上方
//不想解释了
01:58:216 (1,2) - 打击感很弱适合滑条
//不,音乐里有这么重的鼓点,为什么说打击感很弱..
02:09:406 (4,1) - blanket依旧是很随意,很多能挑的,blanket搞好图看起来很清爽啊,不要忽略这点,嘛,个人习惯
很不舒服之类↓自己查查吧
美丽
//thanks for mod!wasinkingspeedq wrote:
m4m from your q
easy
There is a vocal at 00:20:120 - , 00:27:740 - add some circles ?
//hmm.. i think current rhythm is better.
01:43:930 (5) - This slider is too close with 01:42:978 (4) - please move slider a bit from Y:272 to Y:276
//this is because i turned Grid Snap on.
normal
01:09:406 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I think these patterns are confused because all of these notes stack at the same place, so it's not good idea, please if it possible remake the whole.
//okay
01:13:930 (5) - Broken flow, adjust this slider slightly from X:156 Y:40 to X:160 Y:20
//changed in above mod
01:15:835 (3,4,5) - The reason same as the first suggestion
//this is common in Normal diff.
01:33:454 (1) - Use "Finish" hs instead "Whistle" hs
//whistle is for vocal.
01:47:501 (5) - Use "Finish" hs instead "Clap" hs like these sliders 01:44:882 (1,2) -
//here doesn't have finish in music.
hard
01:13:692 (5,6,7,1) - These are the worst part of this diff, I definitely sure these are unrankable pls fix by moving the end of this repeat slider 01:13:930 (7) - to X:120, if you want a pretty shape also move the end of this slider 01:13:216 (4) - to X:168
//see my user page.
01:25:835 (1) - Use Finish hs
//whether whistle or finish is okay imo.
01:28:930 (5,6,7,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:32:263 (3,4) - Make this pattern to following vocals correctly
//listen to drum.
01:32:978 (4,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:46:073 (3,4,5,1) - The reason same as the first suggestion
01:47:978 (4,5,6,1) - ^^
01:55:596 (4,5,6,1) - ^^
01:58:930 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^^
02:05:120 (4,5,6,1) - ^^
hopefully it helps. goodluck~
//thanks for mod!Shurelia wrote:
I'm doing this for Shimotsuki
//first, thanks for you free mod!
[General]
- source should be : "FLOWERS -Le Volume sur Automne-" . Because "FLOWERS 秋篇" is not the original title of the game.
//okey. also add 秋篇 to tag.- here you go, a complete tags for you : Innocent Grey , yuri , the of autumn , opening , MANYO , Visual Novel , VN
//okay- add video op pls
//the music is not the opening ver, so..
[Easy]
- 00:57:263 (2) - distance problem
//fixed- 01:05:835 (5) - x:344 y:228 for a perfect distance snapping
//fixed- 01:16:311 (2) - add finish on the repeat since you did that on the previous repeat
- 01:31:549 (2) - same ^
- 01:46:787 (2) - this too
//but i think they are not same in music.- 01:33:454 (1) - here should be an end of the kiai because the intensity of the song reduced quite a bit at here. next kiai should be at 01:48:692 (1) -
//i don't agree, the kiai is continued in my view, because both vocal and drums are similar as above.- 02:02:025 (2) - finiiish on repeat
//same as above
[Normal]
- 00:57:263 (3) - there should be a repeat on this slider so it'll follow the vocal much better imo. and of course you need to do something about the next object if you agree with this
//changed a bit.- 01:17:025 (5) - finish on the head , it'll feel better
- 01:32:263 (5) - ^^
- same kiai suggestion like Easy diff.
- 01:47:501 (5) - finish.exe
- 02:02:740 (5) - ^^
- 02:03:930 (1) - clean cymbal's sound can be heared at here therefore add finish at this cirlce
- 02:05:835 (5) - same ^^ on the head
//all finishes are same as above.- 02:08:454 - try to add a circle at here so the whole "soraaa" voice can be covered
//hmm.. this is not a strong vocal imo.- 02:13:454 (4,5) - blanket
[Hard]
- same kiai suggestion like the previous diffs
- same finish suggestions like the previous diffs
//same as above- 01:52:025 (6) - move a tiny bit right so it'll become straight with (5)
//changed - 01:51:311 (4) - 's tail.
//thanks.Shurelia wrote:
You can try to use this one : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1IVEaQs7xI
And cut it until 2:13 or so
thanks for star!El SolarBeam wrote:
star because best yuri drama of all time
//thanks for mod!jj986544591 wrote:
[hard]
00:20:597 (3) - 移下一点吧,或者可以弄个弯点
//好
00:20:597 (3) - 怎么这里空这么多,这里是有音的
//呃,哪里?如果你是说 - 00:22:263 - 后面那一段的话,那些轻飘飘的音我不想跟..
00:27:740 (2,3,4) - 不平行,差评
//算是故意的..
01:17:263 (5,6) - 间距可以小一点
//好
01:27:263 (6) - 往前移一点
//好
01:32:978 (5) - 移到x:272 y:136会好一点
//好
好图!!!
我图的链接https://osu.ppy.sh/s/512440这图还没坟
thanks for IamKwan's metadata check! (by fourm PM)IamKwaN wrote:
下次圖臨近rank才找我吧。。1Unicode Title: 紅ノ葉
Romanised Title: Aka no Ha
Unicode Artist: 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist: Nakamura Meiko
References:
http://syncarts.jp/sp/sacd4007/
http://nakamurameiko.net/%E3%83%97%E3%8 ... %E3%83%AB/2Unicode Title: 虹の魔法
Romanised Title: Niji no Mahou
Unicode Artist: 霜月はるか
Romanised Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Source: FLOWERS - Le volume sur automne - (這跟你現在的source不同)
References:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ceKGAh0R2tk3Title: ASH TO ASH
Unicode Artist: 岡田さとる
Romanised Artist: Okada Satoru
Source: スーパーロボット大戦OG ORIGINAL GENERATIONS
References:
http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-9094
http://media.vgm.io/albums/72/6527/6527-1213053707.jpg
https://www21.atwiki.jp/gamemusicbest10 ... /1779.html (關於作曲的唯一資料)
http://www.suparobo.jp/srw_lineup/srw_o ... index.html
http://www.suparobo.jp/srw_lineup/srw_ogps/
gl
117,276,59168,6,0,B|189:258|189:258|263:275|263:275|336:255,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,167,60120,2,0,P|245:248|297:338,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,74406,6,0,P|107:91|81:13,1,165.000005035401,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,63,75120,2,0,P|24:101|18:142,1,82.5000025177003,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,129,89644,6,0,P|221:96|235:41,2,82.5000025177003,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,90359,2,0,P|290:249|276:304,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
//we discussed a lot things about mapping, and i fixed many patterns.Kencho wrote:
[Hard]Easy和Normal是貪吃蛇排列我就不多說了,大概沒什麼問題,就是Hard在美觀方面可以進步一下,我個人喜歡注重整潔的排列
- 有些地方實在不好看,我索性把代碼也給你了,刪掉物件然後把代碼加到.osu文件就好
- 00:59:168 (1,2) - 這個……好難看啊,而且又不包好,可以試試這樣
117,276,59168,6,0,B|189:258|189:258|263:275|263:275|336:255,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,167,60120,2,0,P|245:248|297:338,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:13:692 (5,6,7,1) - 這樣的也不美觀,試試這樣
96,172,74406,6,0,P|107:91|81:13,1,165.000005035401,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,63,75120,2,0,P|24:101|18:142,1,82.5000025177003,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:28:930 (5,6,7,1) - 這個和上面說的有點像,但是起碼01:29:644 (1,2) - 用同樣的滑條吧,我是覺得這樣比較好
223,129,89644,6,0,P|221:96|235:41,2,82.5000025177003,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,90359,2,0,P|290:249|276:304,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:32:978 (5,1) - 和01:13:692 (5,6,7,1) - 一樣的情況,這個自己改吧
- 02:09:406 (4,1,2) - 包好點,而且要統一樣式
- 滑條放梗的時候多用同形狀的,不要每一個都手拉這樣會顯得圖很亂的感覺,還有一些像是幾何梗的地方但一看就是手擺的也是很不好,比如01:08:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:23:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這種,你可以運用複製貼上和DS來排對稱的
thanks!Ultimate Madoka wrote:
无条件支持Flowers的图
//thanks for recheckKencho wrote:
recheck[General]
- 這種副歌比較長的歌,kiai可以利用反復開關來達到強調效果,比如這樣:
01:18:097 - 取消kiai
01:18:216 - 加上kiai
01:33:335 - 取消kiai
01:33:454 - 加上kiai
01:48:573 - 取消kiai
01:48:692 - 加上kiai
02:03:811 - 取消kiai
02:03:930 - 加上kiai
如果嫌太頻密的話,只改掉01:18:097 - 01:18:216 - 和01:48:573 - 01:48:692 - 也可以
//get- OD方面,Easy用2,Normal用4比較好,也更符合spread (ENH 2->4->6)
//这个不太想改呢...因为BPM比较低,所以OD也低一点感觉比较好[Easy]
- 02:14:406 (2) - 這個滑條尾unsnap了1ms,正確位置是02:15:359,目前是02:15:358,只要重新拉一下就可以了
//ok
thanks for IamKwan's metadata check! (by fourm PM)IamKwaN wrote:
下次圖臨近rank才找我吧。。1Unicode Title: 紅ノ葉
Romanised Title: Aka no Ha
Unicode Artist: 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist: Nakamura Meiko
References:
http://syncarts.jp/sp/sacd4007/
http://nakamurameiko.net/%E3%83%97%E3%8 ... %E3%83%AB/2Unicode Title: 虹の魔法
Romanised Title: Niji no Mahou
Unicode Artist: 霜月はるか
Romanised Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Source: FLOWERS - Le volume sur automne - (這跟你現在的source不同)
References:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ceKGAh0R2tk3Title: ASH TO ASH
Unicode Artist: 岡田さとる
Romanised Artist: Okada Satoru
Source: スーパーロボット大戦OG ORIGINAL GENERATIONS
References:
http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-9094
http://media.vgm.io/albums/72/6527/6527-1213053707.jpg
https://www21.atwiki.jp/gamemusicbest10 ... /1779.html (關於作曲的唯一資料)
http://www.suparobo.jp/srw_lineup/srw_o ... index.html
http://www.suparobo.jp/srw_lineup/srw_ogps/
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//thanks for mod!Natsu wrote:
placeholder!
General
[]Hard
- Metadata source pls!
//above- I don't understand your break, you can map it easily specially in a short song like this one, specially because you are mapping to the vocals mainly.
//um, the break part doesn't have any impressive music imo, so made a break. but if you think this is not suitable, i can map this part with some sliders.- Almost all your map is kiai, is that really necessary? explain why
//i cut the mp3 file, and paste one chorus part after another. i used kiai to express chorus part.
[]Normal
- OD is too low for a hard diff, specially with your current AR, use OD6.
//ok- 00:53:930 (3,4) - blanket can be improved, since the map is really clean, blanket should be better
//ok- 01:02:025 (4) - this a really weird rhythm, can you follow the music better? try this:
//if you said piano, the piano is 1/8 in this part, that is not easy to map. so i ignored all piano this time, mapped drums only. but if you insist on this, i can change.- 01:30:358 (2,3) - this looks really weird atm, try a blanket instead or something that looks visually better
//ok- 02:07:740 (1) - 35% volume sounds better, the current one is way too low
//ok
[]Easy
- 02:07:740 (1) - same as hard
//ok- The constant 1/2s need more AR imo, also your OD is really low, use AR 5 OD 4
//ar5 is ok, but od4 is too high for a 126 bpm normal imo.
[]
- HP 1 and OD 1 are really low, HP 2 and OD 2 is better
//hmm..... generally i prefer OD1 HP1 on easy, because it's an easy (you can check my previous mapsets). we shouldn't do anything to make easy diff hard, also to make beginners play easier.- 02:07:740 (1) - same as hard
//ok